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Lagta hai rone wala shakhas bhi abhimanyu se pyar karta hoga pahli baat and dusri ye ki abhi to samaira se shayad sachchi chaht rakhta h lekin vo riya ke sath milkar uska bas use karna chah rahe hai jiska usko bahut dukh hua jab usne inki baat suni
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Lagta hai rone wala shakhas bhi abhimanyu se pyar karta hoga pahli baat and dusri ye ki abhi to samaira se shayad sachchi chaht rakhta h lekin vo riya ke sath milkar uska bas use karna chah rahe hai jiska usko bahut dukh hua jab usne inki baat suni
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UPDATE 12
Previous scene:
Ham wha se dophare nikal gye rest karke phirse apna journey ke liye. Isbar mai Samaira ko apne sath hi bethaya hua tha , palavi, Alisha aur Riya piche bethi thi.
Tabhi Alisha ne toka "Riya tu aage kab chali gyi aur Palavi di piche kab ayi. " sabka dhyan mere aur samaira pe gya..........
Continue:
Samaira ki to jaan ataki ja rhi thi ki kya jawab de. Riya ko Samaira ki halat pe mja aa rha tha. Tabhi Palavi ne bola "Are Alisha mae aage bethu ya Samaira ek hi baat h." Samaira ki jaan me jaan ayi aur meri taraf halka sa look diya jese meri wajah se wo aaj phasti, mene halki si smile kar di to usne muh ghuma liya.
Phir Viraj ne hame chalne ka ishara kiya to ham chal pde apni raftaar se. Ham kuch dur drive karte hue pahadi elake me aagye the charo taraf chatane aur pahad aur jungle hi the.
Kareeb adhe ghante ke drive ke baad ham sunsan jungle ke andar kache raste se jaane lage.
Sakshi halka dar rhi thi "yaar ye Abhimanu kha hame is jungle me leke ja rha h kahi jungli janwar hue to. "
Ahana "ye to aur andar hi chalte ja rha kahi hame marwa na de"
Viraj"kya di aap log itna dar kyu reh ho mai hu na sath me aur wese bhi wo yha bachpan se rha use jada pta hoga yha ke bare me. "
Kirti "Ya di Viraj is right. Just chill and enjoy. This is getting quite adventurous now. "
Ahana "ye tere adventure ke chakar me hmara akhri adventure na ho jae. "
Kirti "kya di aap bhi bacho jesa dar rhi ho, essi jagah to America me bhi nhi tha, mujhe to bda mja aa rha h. "
Essa hi kuch hal meri car me bhi tha lekin yha sirf palavi aur Samaira dar rhi thi. Riya aur Alisha to aramse maje le rhi thi.
Palavi"Abhimanu aur kitni dur h kahi sham nhi ho jae " darte hue unhone bola.
Abhimanu "nhi jada dur nhi h bas pahuch gye "Samaira to dar ke mare mera ek hath pakad li kisa ka dhyan uspar nhi gya. Mujhe to darte hue aur bhi pyari lag rhi thi.
Phir Maine Viraj ko gadi side me lgane ke liye bola kyuki esse aage gaadi nhi ja sakti thi.
Hame yha se padal hi aage jana padega.
Palavi "yha kyu rok diya "
Abhimanu "Gaadi esse aage nhi ja sakti h hame aage paidal hi chalna hoga"
Viraj "lekin ye jungle me khatra nhi hoga bina gaadi ke"
Abhimanu "ye jungle mera ghar h esse koi khatra nhi,lekin sab ek sath rehna koi edhar udhar nhi jaega"
Ahana "chalo jaldi esse pehle ki sham ho jae "
Mai unke sath chalte hue 15min ek khubsurat nazare ke pas pahuch gya jise dekh sab bohot khush hue.
Alisha "wow kitna sundar h ess jungle ke andar etan accha nazara"
Ahana "sach kha tune mujhe to ab dar bhi nhi lag rha wo dekh kitna saaf pani h"
Riya to bhaag ke wha jane lagi to mene use pakad liya.
Abhimanu "jaada andar mat jana aur bhegna bhi mat aur sambhal ke"mene uske aankho me dekhte hue chinta jatayi to usne. muskurake ha me gardan hila di. Mene uska haath chor diya to wo Samaira ko leke haati hui us jharne ke pas jake pani se khelne lagi. Waha kuch machliya bhi thi. Yahi khasiyat bhi thi Rampur ki yha andar bohot se sundar jagah h jo duniya ke najaro ko bhi fail karde. Iss jungle me iss jagah ko dhak ke iski raksha ki warna agar kisiki nazar ispe pad gyi to ise tourist place bnane lag jaenge.
Abhimanu "Aap log khadi kyu ho aap sab bhi ja ke masti karo"
Viraj "ha di aap log jao mai aur Abhimanu yhi pe h"
Phir wo log sab jaake wha masti karne lagte h ik dusre pe chite pdane wagera wagera.
Viraj mere sath ek jagah pe beth gya aur mujhe lga jese wo mujhse kuch kehna chahta ho, to mene hi baat suru ki "kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho"
Viraj "tum dekh rhe ho meri behna kitna enjoy kar rhi h ye sab bohot bholi h inhe nhi pta tum kaun ho"mai sochne lga ye kya bol rha h.
Mai bola "kya bol rhe ho? "
Viraj "mereko sab pta h mere samne acting mat kar"
Abhimanu "vahi to mai puch rha hu kya pta h tereko"
Viraj "tum vahi ho jo bachpan me hame gundo se bchae the aur tumhara naam Abhimanu Thakur h" mai ye sunke shock ho gya ki ise kese pta chal gya.
Viraj "yhi soch rhe ho na mujhe kese pta chala to mujhe papa ne btaya air fikr mat kro mae kisi ko nhi bataunga"
Abhimanu "thanks par chote chacha ko bhi ye baat pta h aur unhone tumhe bhi baat bta di kyu? "
Viraj "dekho aage jake ye saab hmara hi hoga aur Daadi hame tayar kar rhi h us dusman se ladne ke liye jo bahar se vaar kar rha h. "
Viraj ne apna hath meri taraf aage badhaya "ham dono milkar ye ladai ladenge"mene bhi apna haath uske haath me rakh diya aur hamlog ekbar gale mile. Fir Viraj bhi wha chala gya aur usne mujhe bhi bulaya par mai whi baitha rha sochte hue ki maa kitna aage ka soch ke bathi h.
Dharam Singh apne office me beth ke kuch files check karte hue sign kar rhe the tabhi unka secretary (Ramesh) daudte hue andar aya.
Ramesh hafte hue bolne lga "sir bahar kuch log abhi aae the aur wo.... " biche me hi Dharam ne use tokte hue kha "Ramesh pehle saans lelo phir bolo kya hua"
Ramesh "Sir wo kuch gunde office ke bahar aa gye h aur bol rhe ki aapse milna h"
Dharam "kon h ye log aur mujhse kyu milna chahte h"
Ramesh "sir wo log bol rhe the ki wo Mla Dinesh Rawat ke admi h aur wo apse apne boss ka message dena chahte h. "
Dharam apni kursi se khade hogae aur edhar udhar ghumte hue sochne lage "ye kon Mla yha aagya jise mae nhi janta aur isne apne admiyo ko mere pas kyu bheja h." kuch der sochke unhone Ramesh se bola "use jake bolo ki sirf ek banda andar aa sakta h aur us bande ke pas agar hathiyar ho to jma kar lena. "
Ramesh "thik h sir abhi leke aata hu use. "
Phir Ramesh un Dinesh Rawat ke admiyo ke pass chala jata h aur unme se ek andar aane ke liye bolta h. To un admiyo ka leader uske sath andar chala jata h.Ramesh guards se uske pas jo gun thi wo rakhwa leta h aur ache se check karke Dharam ke office ke taraf le jata h.
Wo Dharam ke office me enter karta h aur sath hi do guards wahi khade ho jate h jo Dharam ke the.
Dharam ek nazar us admi pe dalta h aur phir us bethne ka ishara karta h.Wo admi bhi bina kisi khauf ke Dharam ke samne beth gya.
Dharam "kha tumhe yha aate hue dar nhi lga mai chahu to tumhe aur tumhare admiyo ko yu khatam kar sakta hu. "
Admi hasne lga aur bola "sir mae Dinesh sahab ka khas admi hu aur unke sath rehte rehte thodi politics to mujhe bhi aa gyi h mujhe marne ka matlab Sidhe Dinesh Rawat se dushmani mol lena jo aap nahi chahenge kyu"
Dharam "dimag to tumhara tez h lekin mae kisi se darta nhi hu tumhe maar bhi du tabhi mera koi kuch nhi bigad sakta. "
Admi " Are sir ham ladna kha chahte h mla sahab to bas ek meeting chahte h apke sath kal subah 10 bje unke farmhouse pe"
Dharam "tum mere pas aae ho to tumhe mere hisab se meeting fix karni hogi kal 11 bje hotel Royal palace bol dena apna boss ko mujhe late admi pasand nhi h. "
Admi "itne tevar acche nhi sir kabhi kabhi mehanga pad jata h. " kehte hue wo wha se admiyo ko leke mla ke ghar nikal jata h.
Ek farmhouse pe jaha charo taraf guards the whi ek 40 saal ka admi sharab ki chuski le rha tha. Sharab pine ki wajah se ye 40 ke hone ke bawajood 60 ka lagta sar pe pake baal badi badi muche aur bearf aur south ka villian hi lagta tha.
Ye yha ka naya Mla tha aur underworld se iska rishta tha. Drugs ,lut pat ,sextortion ,murder, gang wars,vasuli karna har tarah ke bure kaam me iska haath tha. Jawan ladkiyo ka shaukeen tha aur har raat ise nayi ladki chahie hota h. Iski ek beti h jiska naam Trisha aur ye bhi apne baap ki tarah ghamandi h. Apne baap ke paiso ka tevar ispe puri tarah chadha hua aur abhi ******** college me second year me h. Dinesh apni beti se bohot pyaar karta h aur uski har zidd puri karta h. Iski sirf ek kamjori yhi h.
Trisha Rawat
Dinesh Rawat apne sharab pine me dube hue tha tabhi uska wo admi andar aata h aur uske per chuta h aur wapas apni jagah pe khada ho jata h.
Dinesh use dekhta h bolta h"kichak tere se mujhe puchne ki jarawat hi nhi tu kaam pura karke hi aya hoga"
Kichak "sir aapka kaam ho aur me na karu esa ho sakta h,lekin sala bade tevar wala admi tha meeting ke liye apni jagah usne batayi, wo to apne marne ke liye mna kiya tha warna btata use. "
Dinesh uski baat sunke muskurata h aur ek peg bnake use deta h" wo koi chota mota buisnessman nhi jo tum dra dhamka ke manwa lo usne tumhe chor diya yhi achi baat h. " kichak ye sucke chauk gya matlab wo janta tha ki Dharam singh use mar sakta h phir bhi use bheja.
"Are chauko mat ha wo tumhe mar sakta tha lekin tum use acche se baat kiye hoge isi liye chor diya tumhe aur mujhe tumpe pura bharosa tha. "
Kichak" sir sab apka hi to diya hua h ye jaan bhi chali jae to koi gum nhi. "
Dinesh "wese tumhare admiyo ka pta chala ya nhi kisne mara unhe sala do din se koi nayi ladki nhi mil rhi "
Kichak"pta nhi sir kisne mara unhe kisko apni jaan pyari nhi jo apse panga lene chala h"
Dinesh "dhundo use apna izzat apne haath me hota h ,jisne bhi ye kiya h use bheech chaudahe pe mar ke latkaenge "
Wo dono kuch der baat karte h phir khichak apne ghar chla jata h aur Dinesh sharab pete hue ek nai ladki ko phul se kali bnane chla jata h.
Edhar sab masti kar rhe the pani se khelte hue thoda bhing gye the. Shaam bhi hogai thi mai bhi wha aagya tha achanak hi mere upar pani dal diya Riya ne majak me.
Abhimanu "kya kiya Riya mene pehle hi bola tha dusre kapde nhi ab khud bhi bhing gye ho aur mujhe bhi bhinga diya aur ab shaam ho rhi h to thaand bhi ab badhe gi. "
Riya "sorry mene to ye socha hi nhi" usne itni pyaar se bola mae to kuch bol hi nhi paya.
Maine viraj se bola "abhi hame chalna chahie lekin agar is halat me gye to thand aur lag jae gyi. "
Viraj "sahi bol rhe ho par ab kya kar sakte h. "
Abhimanu "yha mai aag jla ta hu thodi der aag me bethenge to sab sukh jaenge"
Alisha "par yha aag kese jalaenge hame camp karna nhi aata. "
Sabhi uski ha me ha milate h.
Mai socha mujhe hi sab karna hoga "viraj tum kuch lakdiya dhund ke lao mae aag jalane ka intezam karta hu"
Viraj lakdiya lene jungle me chala gya aur maine apni thirt utar kar kuch ache pathar aur sukhi ghaas jise aag jaldi pakde dhunde lga. sabhi ladkiyo ka dhyaan mere upar hi tha.
Samaira aur Riya mujhe dekh ke aapas me kuch ishare karne lagi. Palavi Alisha Ahana aur Kirti bhi gaur se meri body ko dekh rhi thi.
Jese hi nazar mene unki taraf ki wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Phir Viraj lakdiya leke aa gya aur mene aag bhi jla li ab kese jalai wo nhi batane wala man vs wild thodi chal rha h?
Phir ham beth ke bate karne lage mene kuch fishes pakad ke laya tha jise ham pka ke kha rhe the.
Mausam bohot acha tha aur halki thand me aag jla ke fish khane me bohot mja aa rha tha. Haram log aag ke charo taraf ghera bna ke bethe hue the. Palavi mere samne bethi thi usne mujhe dekhte hue bola "tum ye sab kese kar lete ho aur us time bhi tumne bola tha ki ye jungle tumhara ghar h. "
Maine uski baat sunkar apni purani yaado me chala gya jab ye saab America chal gyi thi aur maine maa se zidd karke fighting sikhne ki maang ki thi............
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Excellent update.??.bhaiUPDATE 12Previous scene:
Ham wha se dophare nikal gye rest karke phirse apna journey ke liye. Isbar mai Samaira ko apne sath hi bethaya hua tha , palavi, Alisha aur Riya piche bethi thi.
Tabhi Alisha ne toka "Riya tu aage kab chali gyi aur Palavi di piche kab ayi. " sabka dhyan mere aur samaira pe gya..........
Continue:
Samaira ki to jaan ataki ja rhi thi ki kya jawab de. Riya ko Samaira ki halat pe mja aa rha tha. Tabhi Palavi ne bola "Are Alisha mae aage bethu ya Samaira ek hi baat h." Samaira ki jaan me jaan ayi aur meri taraf halka sa look diya jese meri wajah se wo aaj phasti, mene halki si smile kar di to usne muh ghuma liya.
Phir Viraj ne hame chalne ka ishara kiya to ham chal pde apni raftaar se. Ham kuch dur drive karte hue pahadi elake me aagye the charo taraf chatane aur pahad aur jungle hi the.
Kareeb adhe ghante ke drive ke baad ham sunsan jungle ke andar kache raste se jaane lage.
Sakshi halka dar rhi thi "yaar ye Abhimanu kha hame is jungle me leke ja rha h kahi jungli janwar hue to. "
Ahana "ye to aur andar hi chalte ja rha kahi hame marwa na de"
Viraj"kya di aap log itna dar kyu reh ho mai hu na sath me aur wese bhi wo yha bachpan se rha use jada pta hoga yha ke bare me. "
Kirti "Ya di Viraj is right. Just chill and enjoy. This is getting quite adventurous now. "
Ahana "ye tere adventure ke chakar me hmara akhri adventure na ho jae. "
Kirti "kya di aap bhi bacho jesa dar rhi ho, essi jagah to America me bhi nhi tha, mujhe to bda mja aa rha h. "
Essa hi kuch hal meri car me bhi tha lekin yha sirf palavi aur Samaira dar rhi thi. Riya aur Alisha to aramse maje le rhi thi.
Palavi"Abhimanu aur kitni dur h kahi sham nhi ho jae " darte hue unhone bola.
Abhimanu "nhi jada dur nhi h bas pahuch gye "Samaira to dar ke mare mera ek hath pakad li kisa ka dhyan uspar nhi gya. Mujhe to darte hue aur bhi pyari lag rhi thi.
Phir Maine Viraj ko gadi side me lgane ke liye bola kyuki esse aage gaadi nhi ja sakti thi.
Hame yha se padal hi aage jana padega.
Palavi "yha kyu rok diya "
Abhimanu "Gaadi esse aage nhi ja sakti h hame aage paidal hi chalna hoga"
Viraj "lekin ye jungle me khatra nhi hoga bina gaadi ke"
Abhimanu "ye jungle mera ghar h esse koi khatra nhi,lekin sab ek sath rehna koi edhar udhar nhi jaega"
Ahana "chalo jaldi esse pehle ki sham ho jae "
Mai unke sath chalte hue 15min ek khubsurat nazare ke pas pahuch gya jise dekh sab bohot khush hue.
Alisha "wow kitna sundar h ess jungle ke andar etan accha nazara"
Ahana "sach kha tune mujhe to ab dar bhi nhi lag rha wo dekh kitna saaf pani h"
Riya to bhaag ke wha jane lagi to mene use pakad liya.
Abhimanu "jaada andar mat jana aur bhegna bhi mat aur sambhal ke"mene uske aankho me dekhte hue chinta jatayi to usne. muskurake ha me gardan hila di. Mene uska haath chor diya to wo Samaira ko leke haati hui us jharne ke pas jake pani se khelne lagi. Waha kuch machliya bhi thi. Yahi khasiyat bhi thi Rampur ki yha andar bohot se sundar jagah h jo duniya ke najaro ko bhi fail karde. Iss jungle me iss jagah ko dhak ke iski raksha ki warna agar kisiki nazar ispe pad gyi to ise tourist place bnane lag jaenge.
Abhimanu "Aap log khadi kyu ho aap sab bhi ja ke masti karo"
Viraj "ha di aap log jao mai aur Abhimanu yhi pe h"
Phir wo log sab jaake wha masti karne lagte h ik dusre pe chite pdane wagera wagera.
Viraj mere sath ek jagah pe beth gya aur mujhe lga jese wo mujhse kuch kehna chahta ho, to mene hi baat suru ki "kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho"
Viraj "tum dekh rhe ho meri behna kitna enjoy kar rhi h ye sab bohot bholi h inhe nhi pta tum kaun ho"mai sochne lga ye kya bol rha h.
Mai bola "kya bol rhe ho? "
Viraj "mereko sab pta h mere samne acting mat kar"
Abhimanu "vahi to mai puch rha hu kya pta h tereko"
Viraj "tum vahi ho jo bachpan me hame gundo se bchae the aur tumhara naam Abhimanu Thakur h" mai ye sunke shock ho gya ki ise kese pta chal gya.
Viraj "yhi soch rhe ho na mujhe kese pta chala to mujhe papa ne btaya air fikr mat kro mae kisi ko nhi bataunga"
Abhimanu "thanks par chote chacha ko bhi ye baat pta h aur unhone tumhe bhi baat bta di kyu? "
Viraj "dekho aage jake ye saab hmara hi hoga aur Daadi hame tayar kar rhi h us dusman se ladne ke liye jo bahar se vaar kar rha h. "
Viraj ne apna hath meri taraf aage badhaya "ham dono milkar ye ladai ladenge"mene bhi apna haath uske haath me rakh diya aur hamlog ekbar gale mile. Fir Viraj bhi wha chala gya aur usne mujhe bhi bulaya par mai whi baitha rha sochte hue ki maa kitna aage ka soch ke bathi h.
Dharam Singh apne office me beth ke kuch files check karte hue sign kar rhe the tabhi unka secretary (Ramesh) daudte hue andar aya.
Ramesh hafte hue bolne lga "sir bahar kuch log abhi aae the aur wo.... " biche me hi Dharam ne use tokte hue kha "Ramesh pehle saans lelo phir bolo kya hua"
Ramesh "Sir wo kuch gunde office ke bahar aa gye h aur bol rhe ki aapse milna h"
Dharam "kon h ye log aur mujhse kyu milna chahte h"
Ramesh "sir wo log bol rhe the ki wo Mla Dinesh Rawat ke admi h aur wo apse apne boss ka message dena chahte h. "
Dharam apni kursi se khade hogae aur edhar udhar ghumte hue sochne lage "ye kon Mla yha aagya jise mae nhi janta aur isne apne admiyo ko mere pas kyu bheja h." kuch der sochke unhone Ramesh se bola "use jake bolo ki sirf ek banda andar aa sakta h aur us bande ke pas agar hathiyar ho to jma kar lena. "
Ramesh "thik h sir abhi leke aata hu use. "
Phir Ramesh un Dinesh Rawat ke admiyo ke pass chala jata h aur unme se ek andar aane ke liye bolta h. To un admiyo ka leader uske sath andar chala jata h.Ramesh guards se uske pas jo gun thi wo rakhwa leta h aur ache se check karke Dharam ke office ke taraf le jata h.
Wo Dharam ke office me enter karta h aur sath hi do guards wahi khade ho jate h jo Dharam ke the.
Dharam ek nazar us admi pe dalta h aur phir us bethne ka ishara karta h.Wo admi bhi bina kisi khauf ke Dharam ke samne beth gya.
Dharam "kha tumhe yha aate hue dar nhi lga mai chahu to tumhe aur tumhare admiyo ko yu khatam kar sakta hu. "
Admi hasne lga aur bola "sir mae Dinesh sahab ka khas admi hu aur unke sath rehte rehte thodi politics to mujhe bhi aa gyi h mujhe marne ka matlab Sidhe Dinesh Rawat se dushmani mol lena jo aap nahi chahenge kyu"
Dharam "dimag to tumhara tez h lekin mae kisi se darta nhi hu tumhe maar bhi du tabhi mera koi kuch nhi bigad sakta. "
Admi " Are sir ham ladna kha chahte h mla sahab to bas ek meeting chahte h apke sath kal subah 10 bje unke farmhouse pe"
Dharam "tum mere pas aae ho to tumhe mere hisab se meeting fix karni hogi kal 11 bje hotel Royal palace bol dena apna boss ko mujhe late admi pasand nhi h. "
Admi "itne tevar acche nhi sir kabhi kabhi mehanga pad jata h. " kehte hue wo wha se admiyo ko leke mla ke ghar nikal jata h.
Ek farmhouse pe jaha charo taraf guards the whi ek 40 saal ka admi sharab ki chuski le rha tha. Sharab pine ki wajah se ye 40 ke hone ke bawajood 60 ka lagta sar pe pake baal badi badi muche aur bearf aur south ka villian hi lagta tha.
Ye yha ka naya Mla tha aur underworld se iska rishta tha. Drugs ,lut pat ,sextortion ,murder, gang wars,vasuli karna har tarah ke bure kaam me iska haath tha. Jawan ladkiyo ka shaukeen tha aur har raat ise nayi ladki chahie hota h. Iski ek beti h jiska naam Trisha aur ye bhi apne baap ki tarah ghamandi h. Apne baap ke paiso ka tevar ispe puri tarah chadha hua aur abhi ******** college me second year me h. Dinesh apni beti se bohot pyaar karta h aur uski har zidd puri karta h. Iski sirf ek kamjori yhi h.
Trisha Rawat
Dinesh Rawat apne sharab pine me dube hue tha tabhi uska wo admi andar aata h aur uske per chuta h aur wapas apni jagah pe khada ho jata h.
Dinesh use dekhta h bolta h"kichak tere se mujhe puchne ki jarawat hi nhi tu kaam pura karke hi aya hoga"
Kichak "sir aapka kaam ho aur me na karu esa ho sakta h,lekin sala bade tevar wala admi tha meeting ke liye apni jagah usne batayi, wo to apne marne ke liye mna kiya tha warna btata use. "
Dinesh uski baat sunke muskurata h aur ek peg bnake use deta h" wo koi chota mota buisnessman nhi jo tum dra dhamka ke manwa lo usne tumhe chor diya yhi achi baat h. " kichak ye sucke chauk gya matlab wo janta tha ki Dharam singh use mar sakta h phir bhi use bheja.
"Are chauko mat ha wo tumhe mar sakta tha lekin tum use acche se baat kiye hoge isi liye chor diya tumhe aur mujhe tumpe pura bharosa tha. "
Kichak" sir sab apka hi to diya hua h ye jaan bhi chali jae to koi gum nhi. "
Dinesh "wese tumhare admiyo ka pta chala ya nhi kisne mara unhe sala do din se koi nayi ladki nhi mil rhi "
Kichak"pta nhi sir kisne mara unhe kisko apni jaan pyari nhi jo apse panga lene chala h"
Dinesh "dhundo use apna izzat apne haath me hota h ,jisne bhi ye kiya h use bheech chaudahe pe mar ke latkaenge "
Wo dono kuch der baat karte h phir khichak apne ghar chla jata h aur Dinesh sharab pete hue ek nai ladki ko phul se kali bnane chla jata h.
Edhar sab masti kar rhe the pani se khelte hue thoda bhing gye the. Shaam bhi hogai thi mai bhi wha aagya tha achanak hi mere upar pani dal diya Riya ne majak me.
Abhimanu "kya kiya Riya mene pehle hi bola tha dusre kapde nhi ab khud bhi bhing gye ho aur mujhe bhi bhinga diya aur ab shaam ho rhi h to thaand bhi ab badhe gi. "
Riya "sorry mene to ye socha hi nhi" usne itni pyaar se bola mae to kuch bol hi nhi paya.
Maine viraj se bola "abhi hame chalna chahie lekin agar is halat me gye to thand aur lag jae gyi. "
Viraj "sahi bol rhe ho par ab kya kar sakte h. "
Abhimanu "yha mai aag jla ta hu thodi der aag me bethenge to sab sukh jaenge"
Alisha "par yha aag kese jalaenge hame camp karna nhi aata. "
Sabhi uski ha me ha milate h.
Mai socha mujhe hi sab karna hoga "viraj tum kuch lakdiya dhund ke lao mae aag jalane ka intezam karta hu"
Viraj lakdiya lene jungle me chala gya aur maine apni thirt utar kar kuch ache pathar aur sukhi ghaas jise aag jaldi pakde dhunde lga. sabhi ladkiyo ka dhyaan mere upar hi tha.
Samaira aur Riya mujhe dekh ke aapas me kuch ishare karne lagi. Palavi Alisha Ahana aur Kirti bhi gaur se meri body ko dekh rhi thi.
Jese hi nazar mene unki taraf ki wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Phir Viraj lakdiya leke aa gya aur mene aag bhi jla li ab kese jalai wo nhi batane wala man vs wild thodi chal rha h?
Phir ham beth ke bate karne lage mene kuch fishes pakad ke laya tha jise ham pka ke kha rhe the.
Mausam bohot acha tha aur halki thand me aag jla ke fish khane me bohot mja aa rha tha. Haram log aag ke charo taraf ghera bna ke bethe hue the. Palavi mere samne bethi thi usne mujhe dekhte hue bola "tum ye sab kese kar lete ho aur us time bhi tumne bola tha ki ye jungle tumhara ghar h. "
Maine uski baat sunkar apni purani yaado me chala gya jab ye saab America chal gyi thi aur maine maa se zidd karke fighting sikhne ki maang ki thi............
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UPDATE 12Previous scene:
Ham wha se dophare nikal gye rest karke phirse apna journey ke liye. Isbar mai Samaira ko apne sath hi bethaya hua tha , palavi, Alisha aur Riya piche bethi thi.
Tabhi Alisha ne toka "Riya tu aage kab chali gyi aur Palavi di piche kab ayi. " sabka dhyan mere aur samaira pe gya..........
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Samaira ki to jaan ataki ja rhi thi ki kya jawab de. Riya ko Samaira ki halat pe mja aa rha tha. Tabhi Palavi ne bola "Are Alisha mae aage bethu ya Samaira ek hi baat h." Samaira ki jaan me jaan ayi aur meri taraf halka sa look diya jese meri wajah se wo aaj phasti, mene halki si smile kar di to usne muh ghuma liya.
Phir Viraj ne hame chalne ka ishara kiya to ham chal pde apni raftaar se. Ham kuch dur drive karte hue pahadi elake me aagye the charo taraf chatane aur pahad aur jungle hi the.
Kareeb adhe ghante ke drive ke baad ham sunsan jungle ke andar kache raste se jaane lage.
Sakshi halka dar rhi thi "yaar ye Abhimanu kha hame is jungle me leke ja rha h kahi jungli janwar hue to. "
Ahana "ye to aur andar hi chalte ja rha kahi hame marwa na de"
Viraj"kya di aap log itna dar kyu reh ho mai hu na sath me aur wese bhi wo yha bachpan se rha use jada pta hoga yha ke bare me. "
Kirti "Ya di Viraj is right. Just chill and enjoy. This is getting quite adventurous now. "
Ahana "ye tere adventure ke chakar me hmara akhri adventure na ho jae. "
Kirti "kya di aap bhi bacho jesa dar rhi ho, essi jagah to America me bhi nhi tha, mujhe to bda mja aa rha h. "
Essa hi kuch hal meri car me bhi tha lekin yha sirf palavi aur Samaira dar rhi thi. Riya aur Alisha to aramse maje le rhi thi.
Palavi"Abhimanu aur kitni dur h kahi sham nhi ho jae " darte hue unhone bola.
Abhimanu "nhi jada dur nhi h bas pahuch gye "Samaira to dar ke mare mera ek hath pakad li kisa ka dhyan uspar nhi gya. Mujhe to darte hue aur bhi pyari lag rhi thi.
Phir Maine Viraj ko gadi side me lgane ke liye bola kyuki esse aage gaadi nhi ja sakti thi.
Hame yha se padal hi aage jana padega.
Palavi "yha kyu rok diya "
Abhimanu "Gaadi esse aage nhi ja sakti h hame aage paidal hi chalna hoga"
Viraj "lekin ye jungle me khatra nhi hoga bina gaadi ke"
Abhimanu "ye jungle mera ghar h esse koi khatra nhi,lekin sab ek sath rehna koi edhar udhar nhi jaega"
Ahana "chalo jaldi esse pehle ki sham ho jae "
Mai unke sath chalte hue 15min ek khubsurat nazare ke pas pahuch gya jise dekh sab bohot khush hue.
Alisha "wow kitna sundar h ess jungle ke andar etan accha nazara"
Ahana "sach kha tune mujhe to ab dar bhi nhi lag rha wo dekh kitna saaf pani h"
Riya to bhaag ke wha jane lagi to mene use pakad liya.
Abhimanu "jaada andar mat jana aur bhegna bhi mat aur sambhal ke"mene uske aankho me dekhte hue chinta jatayi to usne. muskurake ha me gardan hila di. Mene uska haath chor diya to wo Samaira ko leke haati hui us jharne ke pas jake pani se khelne lagi. Waha kuch machliya bhi thi. Yahi khasiyat bhi thi Rampur ki yha andar bohot se sundar jagah h jo duniya ke najaro ko bhi fail karde. Iss jungle me iss jagah ko dhak ke iski raksha ki warna agar kisiki nazar ispe pad gyi to ise tourist place bnane lag jaenge.
Abhimanu "Aap log khadi kyu ho aap sab bhi ja ke masti karo"
Viraj "ha di aap log jao mai aur Abhimanu yhi pe h"
Phir wo log sab jaake wha masti karne lagte h ik dusre pe chite pdane wagera wagera.
Viraj mere sath ek jagah pe beth gya aur mujhe lga jese wo mujhse kuch kehna chahta ho, to mene hi baat suru ki "kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho"
Viraj "tum dekh rhe ho meri behna kitna enjoy kar rhi h ye sab bohot bholi h inhe nhi pta tum kaun ho"mai sochne lga ye kya bol rha h.
Mai bola "kya bol rhe ho? "
Viraj "mereko sab pta h mere samne acting mat kar"
Abhimanu "vahi to mai puch rha hu kya pta h tereko"
Viraj "tum vahi ho jo bachpan me hame gundo se bchae the aur tumhara naam Abhimanu Thakur h" mai ye sunke shock ho gya ki ise kese pta chal gya.
Viraj "yhi soch rhe ho na mujhe kese pta chala to mujhe papa ne btaya air fikr mat kro mae kisi ko nhi bataunga"
Abhimanu "thanks par chote chacha ko bhi ye baat pta h aur unhone tumhe bhi baat bta di kyu? "
Viraj "dekho aage jake ye saab hmara hi hoga aur Daadi hame tayar kar rhi h us dusman se ladne ke liye jo bahar se vaar kar rha h. "
Viraj ne apna hath meri taraf aage badhaya "ham dono milkar ye ladai ladenge"mene bhi apna haath uske haath me rakh diya aur hamlog ekbar gale mile. Fir Viraj bhi wha chala gya aur usne mujhe bhi bulaya par mai whi baitha rha sochte hue ki maa kitna aage ka soch ke bathi h.
Dharam Singh apne office me beth ke kuch files check karte hue sign kar rhe the tabhi unka secretary (Ramesh) daudte hue andar aya.
Ramesh hafte hue bolne lga "sir bahar kuch log abhi aae the aur wo.... " biche me hi Dharam ne use tokte hue kha "Ramesh pehle saans lelo phir bolo kya hua"
Ramesh "Sir wo kuch gunde office ke bahar aa gye h aur bol rhe ki aapse milna h"
Dharam "kon h ye log aur mujhse kyu milna chahte h"
Ramesh "sir wo log bol rhe the ki wo Mla Dinesh Rawat ke admi h aur wo apse apne boss ka message dena chahte h. "
Dharam apni kursi se khade hogae aur edhar udhar ghumte hue sochne lage "ye kon Mla yha aagya jise mae nhi janta aur isne apne admiyo ko mere pas kyu bheja h." kuch der sochke unhone Ramesh se bola "use jake bolo ki sirf ek banda andar aa sakta h aur us bande ke pas agar hathiyar ho to jma kar lena. "
Ramesh "thik h sir abhi leke aata hu use. "
Phir Ramesh un Dinesh Rawat ke admiyo ke pass chala jata h aur unme se ek andar aane ke liye bolta h. To un admiyo ka leader uske sath andar chala jata h.Ramesh guards se uske pas jo gun thi wo rakhwa leta h aur ache se check karke Dharam ke office ke taraf le jata h.
Wo Dharam ke office me enter karta h aur sath hi do guards wahi khade ho jate h jo Dharam ke the.
Dharam ek nazar us admi pe dalta h aur phir us bethne ka ishara karta h.Wo admi bhi bina kisi khauf ke Dharam ke samne beth gya.
Dharam "kha tumhe yha aate hue dar nhi lga mai chahu to tumhe aur tumhare admiyo ko yu khatam kar sakta hu. "
Admi hasne lga aur bola "sir mae Dinesh sahab ka khas admi hu aur unke sath rehte rehte thodi politics to mujhe bhi aa gyi h mujhe marne ka matlab Sidhe Dinesh Rawat se dushmani mol lena jo aap nahi chahenge kyu"
Dharam "dimag to tumhara tez h lekin mae kisi se darta nhi hu tumhe maar bhi du tabhi mera koi kuch nhi bigad sakta. "
Admi " Are sir ham ladna kha chahte h mla sahab to bas ek meeting chahte h apke sath kal subah 10 bje unke farmhouse pe"
Dharam "tum mere pas aae ho to tumhe mere hisab se meeting fix karni hogi kal 11 bje hotel Royal palace bol dena apna boss ko mujhe late admi pasand nhi h. "
Admi "itne tevar acche nhi sir kabhi kabhi mehanga pad jata h. " kehte hue wo wha se admiyo ko leke mla ke ghar nikal jata h.
Ek farmhouse pe jaha charo taraf guards the whi ek 40 saal ka admi sharab ki chuski le rha tha. Sharab pine ki wajah se ye 40 ke hone ke bawajood 60 ka lagta sar pe pake baal badi badi muche aur bearf aur south ka villian hi lagta tha.
Ye yha ka naya Mla tha aur underworld se iska rishta tha. Drugs ,lut pat ,sextortion ,murder, gang wars,vasuli karna har tarah ke bure kaam me iska haath tha. Jawan ladkiyo ka shaukeen tha aur har raat ise nayi ladki chahie hota h. Iski ek beti h jiska naam Trisha aur ye bhi apne baap ki tarah ghamandi h. Apne baap ke paiso ka tevar ispe puri tarah chadha hua aur abhi ******** college me second year me h. Dinesh apni beti se bohot pyaar karta h aur uski har zidd puri karta h. Iski sirf ek kamjori yhi h.
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Dinesh Rawat apne sharab pine me dube hue tha tabhi uska wo admi andar aata h aur uske per chuta h aur wapas apni jagah pe khada ho jata h.
Dinesh use dekhta h bolta h"kichak tere se mujhe puchne ki jarawat hi nhi tu kaam pura karke hi aya hoga"
Kichak "sir aapka kaam ho aur me na karu esa ho sakta h,lekin sala bade tevar wala admi tha meeting ke liye apni jagah usne batayi, wo to apne marne ke liye mna kiya tha warna btata use. "
Dinesh uski baat sunke muskurata h aur ek peg bnake use deta h" wo koi chota mota buisnessman nhi jo tum dra dhamka ke manwa lo usne tumhe chor diya yhi achi baat h. " kichak ye sucke chauk gya matlab wo janta tha ki Dharam singh use mar sakta h phir bhi use bheja.
"Are chauko mat ha wo tumhe mar sakta tha lekin tum use acche se baat kiye hoge isi liye chor diya tumhe aur mujhe tumpe pura bharosa tha. "
Kichak" sir sab apka hi to diya hua h ye jaan bhi chali jae to koi gum nhi. "
Dinesh "wese tumhare admiyo ka pta chala ya nhi kisne mara unhe sala do din se koi nayi ladki nhi mil rhi "
Kichak"pta nhi sir kisne mara unhe kisko apni jaan pyari nhi jo apse panga lene chala h"
Dinesh "dhundo use apna izzat apne haath me hota h ,jisne bhi ye kiya h use bheech chaudahe pe mar ke latkaenge "
Wo dono kuch der baat karte h phir khichak apne ghar chla jata h aur Dinesh sharab pete hue ek nai ladki ko phul se kali bnane chla jata h.
Edhar sab masti kar rhe the pani se khelte hue thoda bhing gye the. Shaam bhi hogai thi mai bhi wha aagya tha achanak hi mere upar pani dal diya Riya ne majak me.
Abhimanu "kya kiya Riya mene pehle hi bola tha dusre kapde nhi ab khud bhi bhing gye ho aur mujhe bhi bhinga diya aur ab shaam ho rhi h to thaand bhi ab badhe gi. "
Riya "sorry mene to ye socha hi nhi" usne itni pyaar se bola mae to kuch bol hi nhi paya.
Maine viraj se bola "abhi hame chalna chahie lekin agar is halat me gye to thand aur lag jae gyi. "
Viraj "sahi bol rhe ho par ab kya kar sakte h. "
Abhimanu "yha mai aag jla ta hu thodi der aag me bethenge to sab sukh jaenge"
Alisha "par yha aag kese jalaenge hame camp karna nhi aata. "
Sabhi uski ha me ha milate h.
Mai socha mujhe hi sab karna hoga "viraj tum kuch lakdiya dhund ke lao mae aag jalane ka intezam karta hu"
Viraj lakdiya lene jungle me chala gya aur maine apni thirt utar kar kuch ache pathar aur sukhi ghaas jise aag jaldi pakde dhunde lga. sabhi ladkiyo ka dhyaan mere upar hi tha.
Samaira aur Riya mujhe dekh ke aapas me kuch ishare karne lagi. Palavi Alisha Ahana aur Kirti bhi gaur se meri body ko dekh rhi thi.
Jese hi nazar mene unki taraf ki wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Phir Viraj lakdiya leke aa gya aur mene aag bhi jla li ab kese jalai wo nhi batane wala man vs wild thodi chal rha h?
Phir ham beth ke bate karne lage mene kuch fishes pakad ke laya tha jise ham pka ke kha rhe the.
Mausam bohot acha tha aur halki thand me aag jla ke fish khane me bohot mja aa rha tha. Haram log aag ke charo taraf ghera bna ke bethe hue the. Palavi mere samne bethi thi usne mujhe dekhte hue bola "tum ye sab kese kar lete ho aur us time bhi tumne bola tha ki ye jungle tumhara ghar h. "
Maine uski baat sunkar apni purani yaado me chala gya jab ye saab America chal gyi thi aur maine maa se zidd karke fighting sikhne ki maang ki thi............
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Nice update bhaiUPDATE 11Maine maa ka ashirvad liya aur apne room me aake fresh hua. Udhar saari behne aur Viraj taayar ho rhe the akhir unhe bahar ghumne ko mila.
"Yaar riya tune dadi ko kese mnaya" ye Ahana thi jo Riya se tayar hote hue baat kar rhi thi.
"Didi aap aam khao guthliya mat gino" muh se chidhate hue Riya ne jawab diya.
Ye sunte hi sari behne hasne lagi aur Ahana ne muh bna liya.
Tabhi Samaira Ahana ko gale lagate boli "are didi iska matlb h aap bas maje kro baaki ham sambhal lenge. "
Palavi bich me tokte hue "wo sab to thik h lekin hame ghumae ga kon"
Sakshi "ha di ham to ye bhul hi gae ki hame ghumae ga kon."
Riya "arre di maine bola aap log chill kijiye sab pehle set h. Hame Abhimanu ghumane le jae ga. "
Samaira ye sunte hi ekdam se Riya ka muh dekhne lagi to Riya ne use aankh mar diya.
Kirti to ye sunte hi dar lagne lga kahi Abhimanu sabko wha ye na bta de ki kal raat terace pe wo kya kar rhi thi.
Kirti "yaar wo kyu hame ghumae ga ham manage kar lenge wese bhi wo dadi ke kaam karta h"
Riya muh bnate hue " nhi di kal usne mujhe challenge kiya tha to aaj use esa ghumangi ki phir mujhse panga na le paega"
Sakshi "ab tukhe samjhana to bekar h hame kya ham to enjoy karna h. "
Phir wo log esse hi batte karte hue tayar hojate h.Mai bhi tayar hokr niche pahuch jata hu jha dono chachi sayad dharam sir aur param sir ko nasta karwa ke office ke liye bhej rhi thi aur ab wo dono ja chuke the.Wo jab piche murkr dekha to mae stairs se niche utar rha tha. Wo dono mukhe dekh ke khi kho se gayi mae lag hi essa rha tha.
Mae chal ke unke taraf aya to unhe hosh aya. Sunidhi chachi ne mujhe ek kala tika lgaya aur mujhe gale lga kr boli" bohot acha dikh rha kisiki nazar na lage tujhe"
"Acha mae jra bacho ko dekh ke ayi kha reh gye wo. Ab kya dhup me ghumenge" bolte hue wo unhe bulane chali gyi.
Edhar kusum chachi abhi bhi mujhe hi dekh rhi thi. Maine unke samne chutki bjayi toh wo hosh me ayi.
"Kha kho gyi thi aap?" mai sofe pe bethte hue bola.Wo bhi mere bagal me bethte hue boli "tu to aaj bahot handsome dikh rha h" ye baat unhone thodi shatani muskurahat dete hue boli.
Mai man me sochne lga sala apne per par kulhadi mar di puch kar yha se nikal na pade ga. Ye merko phir uksa rhi h.
Tabhi sab tayar hoke niche aa rhe mene dekha sabse aage palavi thi aur uski suit pehna jiska gla thoda deep tha aur wo suit tight thi. Uske uske boobs ekdam kase hue the aur uske seene ke pas wo gehri khai jo ja rhi thi wo maan ko ashant kar rhi thi.
Uske piche hi Sakshi aa rhi thi jisne ek tight jeans aur top pehna hua tha. Us jeans me uske gaand ekdam gol aakar bna rhe the.
Phir aati h Ahana jisne bhi suit hi pehna tha aur agar boobs ki baat ki jae to Palavi ke baad esi ka number aata h. Ab Alisha uske sath to kya kyamat macha rhi thu ek top aur niche skirt wo to sabko piche chode ja rhi thi. Phir hmari dono pariya Riya usne bhi tshirt aur jeans pehna aur bohot hot lag rhi thi. Aur sabse akhri me sirf meri nilli billi Samaira har ek kadam uska jese slow motion me chal rha ho.
Sab ab niche aa chuke the aur sabhi ki nazre mujhi pe thi wo apni aankhe sek rhi thi. Fir Viraj bhi aa gya to hum nikal gye bahar maine ek gaadi li aur Viraj ne ek. Maa hame dekhne ayi thi jate waqt boli "Dhyaan se jana sab aur Riya aur tum sab sun lo Abhimanu ki baat manna. "
"Are Dadi chill acha avb chalo jaldi hame late ho rha h" maine bhi gaadi bhaga di aur mere piche Viraj bhi aa rha tha. Mere sath bagal me Palavi bethi thi aur piche Alisha, Samaira aur Riya. Viraj ke sath Ahana Kirti Sakshi the.
Ye apne me baat kar rhi thi to palavi ne mujhe toka" Abhimanu tum yha kab se ho" maine uske sawal sunke use ek baar dekha aur Alisha, Samaira aur riya bhi mujhe dekhne lagi jese wo bhi janna chahti ho.
"Tum ye puch rhi ho?" maine ulta usi se sawal kar diya. Jispe wo mukhr ghurne lagi to mai bola "bachpan se yhi hu yhi padha yhi khela aur apke daadi ke sath rha"
"Tum bachpan se hi hmare ghar rhe ho,tabhi tumhe dekh kr esa lagta jese pehlse tumhe jante ho. "
Riya bhi ye sunke jese kuch bolne ko hoi par ruk gyi.To Alisha ne bola "kya hua Riya kuch bolna " riya muh bnake "nhi di wo mae kuch soch rhi thi"
"Are hmari gudiya sochti bhi h hame to pta hi nhi tha" sabhi hasne lagte h.
"Wese abhi ham kha ja rhe h? "ye Samaira ne mujhse pucha.
Maine sesse se uski taraf dekha aur bola "wo to suprise h wha pahuch ke hi pta chalega. Kuch dur esse hi drive karte aur baate karte hue ham pahuch gae ek jagah jha samne ka nazara dekhne layak tha. Ye ek mahal jese tha jese Raja mahraja ka hota h.
Sabke bas muh khule reh gae ess nazare ko dekh kar ye tha hi etna sundar vishal bhavya.
Sakshi "Abe esa mehal ess jagah pe" .
Palavi "Yaar ye to kisi Raja ka lagta h"
Viraj"yha ke bare me mene padha tha iska Malik koi Thakur h pura naam nhi diya tha. "
Kirti "Kya wo yha akele rehta hoga"
Alisha "kyu tereko use saadi karni h kya hehehe..... "
Sabhi pet pakad ke hasne lagte h.
"Tum sabko yhi khade hoke dekhna h ya andar bhi chalna h. " meri baat sunke sab mujhe dekhne lage.
Samaira "ham andar ja sakte h? "
Abhimanu "ha ye tumsabka hi h to puchna kise"
Sab ek sath "kya? "
Abhimanu" Ye aplog ki daadi ka h kisi thakur ka nhi Viraj bhai. Aapne jis mehal ke bare me padha h vo dusra h" meri baat sunke sab khusi ke mare uchal pade .
Ham sab andar aae sare servants daud kar hmara swagat karna lage. Chalte waqt mere side me Saira thi jise mera hath bar bar takra rha tha. Phir mene socha jo hoga dekha jae ga aur uska hath pakad ke use le jane lga. Wo mujhe bas dekhe ja rhi thi. Mene ek bar uske ankh me dekha to wo halka sharma gyi. Kisi ka dhyaan hmare taraf nhi gya lekin piche se Riya ne dekh liya aur muskurate hue hame hi dekh rhi thi.Baki sab to khoe hue the is Jagah ko dekhne me. Andar se bhi kaafi sundar tha.
Ham log fir kuch der ghumte rhe aur kyuki ye thodi dur tha to ham thode der yha pe hi lunch kiya.Aur thoda rest karne lage kyuki hame aaj yhi rukna tha. Isliye ham yha pe rest karke aage ghumne janeka socha.
Ham sab apne Rooms me the. Mai thoda bahar nikal ke ghum rha tha to mukhe samne Samaira dikh rhi jo jispe wo dhup ki kirne gir rhi thi aur uska wo chamakta chehra, nashili ankhen aur gulabi hooth me mae jaise kho sa gya.
Mai aage uske pas badh ke gya aur usne bhiehsus kiya ki koi h aur wo palat ke dekhi aur jab hmari aankhen takrai to ham ek dusre me khi chuke the.
Maine use apni aankhen hatai aur bola "tum yha kya kar rhi ho?"
Samaira bhi mere sath khade hogai aur boli"iss nazare ko chod kar mae kya karu"
Abhimanu "ye khubsurat to he par tumse kam. "
Sakshi ye sunke andar se muskurai par bahari gussa dikhate hue boli "tum mujhpe line mar rhe ho, aur us time mera hath bhi pakda tha"
Mai uski baat pe muskurate hue jawab diya "mene tumhare pe kab line mara mae to iss mehal ki sehzadi ko pta rha tha. "
"Mister mae tumhari is gustakhi ke liye tumhara gla katwa sakti hu " bolte hue wo hasne lagi.
Abhimanu "mae tumhe ek cheez dikhana chahta hu chalo mere sath."
Mai uska hath pakad ke mehal ke ek side leke aya.
Mai Samaira ko ek jheel ke pas laya jo bohot hi sundar tha aur ise yha ke Raja ne banwaya tha.
Samaira "wow... Ye kitna sundar h tumne pehle ham sabko kyu nhi dikhaya"
Abhimanu "Yha sab nhi aa sakte yha raja apni sabse pyari rani ke sath aata tha. "
Samaira to ek pal ke liye sharma gyi lekin dusre hi pal jhute gusse se boli "yha tumhari dal nhi galne wali ye sab se tum shezadi ko pta loge bade aye. " Mai muakurata hua use apne oor khich ke use seene se lgaya aur us ki saase yez hone lagi.
Tabhi pta nhi kha se wha Riya tapak padi aur hame pakad liya "Oho to yha ki shehzadi ka romance chal rha h aur mera kya"
Mai muskura kar samaira ki ankh me dekha aur phir dusre taraf chala gya.
Mere jaate hi Riya boli "yar mere ko ye esse attitude kyu dikhata h"
Samaira "kamini tu thoda baad me nhi aa sakti kina mja aa rha tha"
Riya" ha ab to tujhe ye hi pyaara lag rha h maine tujhe pyaar ka ABCD sikhaya aur tu mujhe bhul gyi. Hmm.."
"Arre mere pyari sakhi tu mujhse ruthe gi mene to tere bare me bhi soch ke rakha h chal ab naraz hogai to fir kya kar sakte h. "
Riya ekdum se khush hogai "kya sach me tune mere bare me socha h. "
Samaira"aur nhi to kya bachpan se hamne koi cheez baati h jo ab baatenge wo ham dono ka h,mil baat ke kahenge hehehehe...... "
Koi tha jo ye baate sun rha tab se jabse Abhimanu aur Samaira baate kar rhe the. Uske aaankh se ek boond ansuu gire aur wo jaldi se wha se nikal gyi. Par Abhimanu ne us shakhs ko dekh liya tha jab wo Samaira se baate kar rha tha. Akhir ye kon h kya ye sab ko bta dega Abhimanu aur Samaira ke bare me aur iske Ansoo kyu nikle..........
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Ham wha se dophare nikal gye rest karke phirse apna journey ke liye. Isbar mai Samaira ko apne sath hi bethaya hua tha , palavi, Alisha aur Riya piche bethi thi.
Tabhi Alisha ne toka "Riya tu aage kab chali gyi aur Palavi di piche kab ayi. " sabka dhyan mere aur samaira pe gya..........
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Ham wha se dophare nikal gye rest karke phirse apna journey ke liye. Isbar mai Samaira ko apne sath hi bethaya hua tha , palavi, Alisha aur Riya piche bethi thi.
Tabhi Alisha ne toka "Riya tu aage kab chali gyi aur Palavi di piche kab ayi. " sabka dhyan mere aur samaira pe gya..........
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Samaira ki to jaan ataki ja rhi thi ki kya jawab de. Riya ko Samaira ki halat pe mja aa rha tha. Tabhi Palavi ne bola "Are Alisha mae aage bethu ya Samaira ek hi baat h." Samaira ki jaan me jaan ayi aur meri taraf halka sa look diya jese meri wajah se wo aaj phasti, mene halki si smile kar di to usne muh ghuma liya.
Phir Viraj ne hame chalne ka ishara kiya to ham chal pde apni raftaar se. Ham kuch dur drive karte hue pahadi elake me aagye the charo taraf chatane aur pahad aur jungle hi the.
Kareeb adhe ghante ke drive ke baad ham sunsan jungle ke andar kache raste se jaane lage.
Sakshi halka dar rhi thi "yaar ye Abhimanu kha hame is jungle me leke ja rha h kahi jungli janwar hue to. "
Ahana "ye to aur andar hi chalte ja rha kahi hame marwa na de"
Viraj"kya di aap log itna dar kyu reh ho mai hu na sath me aur wese bhi wo yha bachpan se rha use jada pta hoga yha ke bare me. "
Kirti "Ya di Viraj is right. Just chill and enjoy. This is getting quite adventurous now. "
Ahana "ye tere adventure ke chakar me hmara akhri adventure na ho jae. "
Kirti "kya di aap bhi bacho jesa dar rhi ho, essi jagah to America me bhi nhi tha, mujhe to bda mja aa rha h. "
Essa hi kuch hal meri car me bhi tha lekin yha sirf palavi aur Samaira dar rhi thi. Riya aur Alisha to aramse maje le rhi thi.
Palavi"Abhimanu aur kitni dur h kahi sham nhi ho jae " darte hue unhone bola.
Abhimanu "nhi jada dur nhi h bas pahuch gye "Samaira to dar ke mare mera ek hath pakad li kisa ka dhyan uspar nhi gya. Mujhe to darte hue aur bhi pyari lag rhi thi.
Phir Maine Viraj ko gadi side me lgane ke liye bola kyuki esse aage gaadi nhi ja sakti thi.
Hame yha se padal hi aage jana padega.
Palavi "yha kyu rok diya "
Abhimanu "Gaadi esse aage nhi ja sakti h hame aage paidal hi chalna hoga"
Viraj "lekin ye jungle me khatra nhi hoga bina gaadi ke"
Abhimanu "ye jungle mera ghar h esse koi khatra nhi,lekin sab ek sath rehna koi edhar udhar nhi jaega"
Ahana "chalo jaldi esse pehle ki sham ho jae "
Mai unke sath chalte hue 15min ek khubsurat nazare ke pas pahuch gya jise dekh sab bohot khush hue.
Alisha "wow kitna sundar h ess jungle ke andar etan accha nazara"
Ahana "sach kha tune mujhe to ab dar bhi nhi lag rha wo dekh kitna saaf pani h"
Riya to bhaag ke wha jane lagi to mene use pakad liya.
Abhimanu "jaada andar mat jana aur bhegna bhi mat aur sambhal ke"mene uske aankho me dekhte hue chinta jatayi to usne. muskurake ha me gardan hila di. Mene uska haath chor diya to wo Samaira ko leke haati hui us jharne ke pas jake pani se khelne lagi. Waha kuch machliya bhi thi. Yahi khasiyat bhi thi Rampur ki yha andar bohot se sundar jagah h jo duniya ke najaro ko bhi fail karde. Iss jungle me iss jagah ko dhak ke iski raksha ki warna agar kisiki nazar ispe pad gyi to ise tourist place bnane lag jaenge.
Abhimanu "Aap log khadi kyu ho aap sab bhi ja ke masti karo"
Viraj "ha di aap log jao mai aur Abhimanu yhi pe h"
Phir wo log sab jaake wha masti karne lagte h ik dusre pe chite pdane wagera wagera.
Viraj mere sath ek jagah pe beth gya aur mujhe lga jese wo mujhse kuch kehna chahta ho, to mene hi baat suru ki "kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho"
Viraj "tum dekh rhe ho meri behna kitna enjoy kar rhi h ye sab bohot bholi h inhe nhi pta tum kaun ho"mai sochne lga ye kya bol rha h.
Mai bola "kya bol rhe ho? "
Viraj "mereko sab pta h mere samne acting mat kar"
Abhimanu "vahi to mai puch rha hu kya pta h tereko"
Viraj "tum vahi ho jo bachpan me hame gundo se bchae the aur tumhara naam Abhimanu Thakur h" mai ye sunke shock ho gya ki ise kese pta chal gya.
Viraj "yhi soch rhe ho na mujhe kese pta chala to mujhe papa ne btaya air fikr mat kro mae kisi ko nhi bataunga"
Abhimanu "thanks par chote chacha ko bhi ye baat pta h aur unhone tumhe bhi baat bta di kyu? "
Viraj "dekho aage jake ye saab hmara hi hoga aur Daadi hame tayar kar rhi h us dusman se ladne ke liye jo bahar se vaar kar rha h. "
Viraj ne apna hath meri taraf aage badhaya "ham dono milkar ye ladai ladenge"mene bhi apna haath uske haath me rakh diya aur hamlog ekbar gale mile. Fir Viraj bhi wha chala gya aur usne mujhe bhi bulaya par mai whi baitha rha sochte hue ki maa kitna aage ka soch ke bathi h.
Dharam Singh apne office me beth ke kuch files check karte hue sign kar rhe the tabhi unka secretary (Ramesh) daudte hue andar aya.
Ramesh hafte hue bolne lga "sir bahar kuch log abhi aae the aur wo.... " biche me hi Dharam ne use tokte hue kha "Ramesh pehle saans lelo phir bolo kya hua"
Ramesh "Sir wo kuch gunde office ke bahar aa gye h aur bol rhe ki aapse milna h"
Dharam "kon h ye log aur mujhse kyu milna chahte h"
Ramesh "sir wo log bol rhe the ki wo Mla Dinesh Rawat ke admi h aur wo apse apne boss ka message dena chahte h. "
Dharam apni kursi se khade hogae aur edhar udhar ghumte hue sochne lage "ye kon Mla yha aagya jise mae nhi janta aur isne apne admiyo ko mere pas kyu bheja h." kuch der sochke unhone Ramesh se bola "use jake bolo ki sirf ek banda andar aa sakta h aur us bande ke pas agar hathiyar ho to jma kar lena. "
Ramesh "thik h sir abhi leke aata hu use. "
Phir Ramesh un Dinesh Rawat ke admiyo ke pass chala jata h aur unme se ek andar aane ke liye bolta h. To un admiyo ka leader uske sath andar chala jata h.Ramesh guards se uske pas jo gun thi wo rakhwa leta h aur ache se check karke Dharam ke office ke taraf le jata h.
Wo Dharam ke office me enter karta h aur sath hi do guards wahi khade ho jate h jo Dharam ke the.
Dharam ek nazar us admi pe dalta h aur phir us bethne ka ishara karta h.Wo admi bhi bina kisi khauf ke Dharam ke samne beth gya.
Dharam "kha tumhe yha aate hue dar nhi lga mai chahu to tumhe aur tumhare admiyo ko yu khatam kar sakta hu. "
Admi hasne lga aur bola "sir mae Dinesh sahab ka khas admi hu aur unke sath rehte rehte thodi politics to mujhe bhi aa gyi h mujhe marne ka matlab Sidhe Dinesh Rawat se dushmani mol lena jo aap nahi chahenge kyu"
Dharam "dimag to tumhara tez h lekin mae kisi se darta nhi hu tumhe maar bhi du tabhi mera koi kuch nhi bigad sakta. "
Admi " Are sir ham ladna kha chahte h mla sahab to bas ek meeting chahte h apke sath kal subah 10 bje unke farmhouse pe"
Dharam "tum mere pas aae ho to tumhe mere hisab se meeting fix karni hogi kal 11 bje hotel Royal palace bol dena apna boss ko mujhe late admi pasand nhi h. "
Admi "itne tevar acche nhi sir kabhi kabhi mehanga pad jata h. " kehte hue wo wha se admiyo ko leke mla ke ghar nikal jata h.
Ek farmhouse pe jaha charo taraf guards the whi ek 40 saal ka admi sharab ki chuski le rha tha. Sharab pine ki wajah se ye 40 ke hone ke bawajood 60 ka lagta sar pe pake baal badi badi muche aur bearf aur south ka villian hi lagta tha.
Ye yha ka naya Mla tha aur underworld se iska rishta tha. Drugs ,lut pat ,sextortion ,murder, gang wars,vasuli karna har tarah ke bure kaam me iska haath tha. Jawan ladkiyo ka shaukeen tha aur har raat ise nayi ladki chahie hota h. Iski ek beti h jiska naam Trisha aur ye bhi apne baap ki tarah ghamandi h. Apne baap ke paiso ka tevar ispe puri tarah chadha hua aur abhi ******** college me second year me h. Dinesh apni beti se bohot pyaar karta h aur uski har zidd puri karta h. Iski sirf ek kamjori yhi h.
Trisha Rawat
Dinesh Rawat apne sharab pine me dube hue tha tabhi uska wo admi andar aata h aur uske per chuta h aur wapas apni jagah pe khada ho jata h.
Dinesh use dekhta h bolta h"kichak tere se mujhe puchne ki jarawat hi nhi tu kaam pura karke hi aya hoga"
Kichak "sir aapka kaam ho aur me na karu esa ho sakta h,lekin sala bade tevar wala admi tha meeting ke liye apni jagah usne batayi, wo to apne marne ke liye mna kiya tha warna btata use. "
Dinesh uski baat sunke muskurata h aur ek peg bnake use deta h" wo koi chota mota buisnessman nhi jo tum dra dhamka ke manwa lo usne tumhe chor diya yhi achi baat h. " kichak ye sucke chauk gya matlab wo janta tha ki Dharam singh use mar sakta h phir bhi use bheja.
"Are chauko mat ha wo tumhe mar sakta tha lekin tum use acche se baat kiye hoge isi liye chor diya tumhe aur mujhe tumpe pura bharosa tha. "
Kichak" sir sab apka hi to diya hua h ye jaan bhi chali jae to koi gum nhi. "
Dinesh "wese tumhare admiyo ka pta chala ya nhi kisne mara unhe sala do din se koi nayi ladki nhi mil rhi "
Kichak"pta nhi sir kisne mara unhe kisko apni jaan pyari nhi jo apse panga lene chala h"
Dinesh "dhundo use apna izzat apne haath me hota h ,jisne bhi ye kiya h use bheech chaudahe pe mar ke latkaenge "
Wo dono kuch der baat karte h phir khichak apne ghar chla jata h aur Dinesh sharab pete hue ek nai ladki ko phul se kali bnane chla jata h.
Edhar sab masti kar rhe the pani se khelte hue thoda bhing gye the. Shaam bhi hogai thi mai bhi wha aagya tha achanak hi mere upar pani dal diya Riya ne majak me.
Abhimanu "kya kiya Riya mene pehle hi bola tha dusre kapde nhi ab khud bhi bhing gye ho aur mujhe bhi bhinga diya aur ab shaam ho rhi h to thaand bhi ab badhe gi. "
Riya "sorry mene to ye socha hi nhi" usne itni pyaar se bola mae to kuch bol hi nhi paya.
Maine viraj se bola "abhi hame chalna chahie lekin agar is halat me gye to thand aur lag jae gyi. "
Viraj "sahi bol rhe ho par ab kya kar sakte h. "
Abhimanu "yha mai aag jla ta hu thodi der aag me bethenge to sab sukh jaenge"
Alisha "par yha aag kese jalaenge hame camp karna nhi aata. "
Sabhi uski ha me ha milate h.
Mai socha mujhe hi sab karna hoga "viraj tum kuch lakdiya dhund ke lao mae aag jalane ka intezam karta hu"
Viraj lakdiya lene jungle me chala gya aur maine apni thirt utar kar kuch ache pathar aur sukhi ghaas jise aag jaldi pakde dhunde lga. sabhi ladkiyo ka dhyaan mere upar hi tha.
Samaira aur Riya mujhe dekh ke aapas me kuch ishare karne lagi. Palavi Alisha Ahana aur Kirti bhi gaur se meri body ko dekh rhi thi.
Jese hi nazar mene unki taraf ki wo idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Phir Viraj lakdiya leke aa gya aur mene aag bhi jla li ab kese jalai wo nhi batane wala man vs wild thodi chal rha h?
Phir ham beth ke bate karne lage mene kuch fishes pakad ke laya tha jise ham pka ke kha rhe the.
Mausam bohot acha tha aur halki thand me aag jla ke fish khane me bohot mja aa rha tha. Haram log aag ke charo taraf ghera bna ke bethe hue the. Palavi mere samne bethi thi usne mujhe dekhte hue bola "tum ye sab kese kar lete ho aur us time bhi tumne bola tha ki ye jungle tumhara ghar h. "
Maine uski baat sunkar apni purani yaado me chala gya jab ye saab America chal gyi thi aur maine maa se zidd karke fighting sikhne ki maang ki thi............