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अभितक आपको यह कहानी कैसी लग रही है?

  • बहुत अच्छा

    Votes: 40 87.0%
  • अच्छा

    Votes: 3 6.5%
  • कुछ खास नही

    Votes: 2 4.3%
  • बिल्कुल भी अच्छी नहीं है।

    Votes: 1 2.2%

  • Total voters
    46
  • Poll closed .

Lucky babu

Member
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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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location :- mumabai switi aur mamta didi ki college me

switi didi apne dosto ke sath canteen me baithi hui thi….



switi didi aur mamata didi ke friends :-


  1. meena srivastav-
  2. sveta khanna
  3. anjali tiwari-
  4. vikrant malhotra-
  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
  • chandani tivai- anjali ke mammi
  • payal tiwari- anjali ki chhoti bahan…...anjali in se bahut pyra karti hai
  • abhinav tivari- anjali ke bade bhaiya abhi sadi nahi hui hai
anjali delhi ke hi rahne vali hai.

ekata kjapoor - ye hai suresh ji yani mere papa ke best friend ki beti yebhi delhi se hi hai

  • chandan kapoor- ekata ke papa
  • laxmi kapoor- ekata kei mammi
  • rajat kapoor- bade bhaiya
  • sahil kapoor-chote bhaiya
  • chandani kapoor- chhoti bahan


dosto ye hai jo is kahani ke regular corrector hai baki ke dost bhi kahani me present rahenge lekin unaka rol mahatvapurn nahi hai baki agar hoga to unka intro kahani me hi mil jayegi.aur inke pariwar walo ke bhi


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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..


Snadar updated bhai 😚😚😚
 

jitutripathi00

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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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location :- mumabai switi aur mamta didi ki college me

switi didi apne dosto ke sath canteen me baithi hui thi….



switi didi aur mamata didi ke friends :-


  1. meena srivastav-
  2. sveta khanna
  3. anjali tiwari-
  4. vikrant malhotra-
  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
  • chandani tivai- anjali ke mammi
  • payal tiwari- anjali ki chhoti bahan…...anjali in se bahut pyra karti hai
  • abhinav tivari- anjali ke bade bhaiya abhi sadi nahi hui hai
anjali delhi ke hi rahne vali hai.

ekata kjapoor - ye hai suresh ji yani mere papa ke best friend ki beti yebhi delhi se hi hai

  • chandan kapoor- ekata ke papa
  • laxmi kapoor- ekata kei mammi
  • rajat kapoor- bade bhaiya
  • sahil kapoor-chote bhaiya
  • chandani kapoor- chhoti bahan


dosto ye hai jo is kahani ke regular corrector hai baki ke dost bhi kahani me present rahenge lekin unaka rol mahatvapurn nahi hai baki agar hoga to unka intro kahani me hi mil jayegi.aur inke pariwar walo ke bhi


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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..
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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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location :- mumabai switi aur mamta didi ki college me

switi didi apne dosto ke sath canteen me baithi hui thi….



switi didi aur mamata didi ke friends :-


  1. meena srivastav-
  2. sveta khanna
  3. anjali tiwari-
  4. vikrant malhotra-
  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
  • chandani tivai- anjali ke mammi
  • payal tiwari- anjali ki chhoti bahan…...anjali in se bahut pyra karti hai
  • abhinav tivari- anjali ke bade bhaiya abhi sadi nahi hui hai
anjali delhi ke hi rahne vali hai.

ekata kjapoor - ye hai suresh ji yani mere papa ke best friend ki beti yebhi delhi se hi hai

  • chandan kapoor- ekata ke papa
  • laxmi kapoor- ekata kei mammi
  • rajat kapoor- bade bhaiya
  • sahil kapoor-chote bhaiya
  • chandani kapoor- chhoti bahan


dosto ye hai jo is kahani ke regular corrector hai baki ke dost bhi kahani me present rahenge lekin unaka rol mahatvapurn nahi hai baki agar hoga to unka intro kahani me hi mil jayegi.aur inke pariwar walo ke bhi


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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..
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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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location :- mumabai switi aur mamta didi ki college me

switi didi apne dosto ke sath canteen me baithi hui thi….



switi didi aur mamata didi ke friends :-


  1. meena srivastav-
  2. sveta khanna
  3. anjali tiwari-
  4. vikrant malhotra-
  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
  • chandani tivai- anjali ke mammi
  • payal tiwari- anjali ki chhoti bahan…...anjali in se bahut pyra karti hai
  • abhinav tivari- anjali ke bade bhaiya abhi sadi nahi hui hai
anjali delhi ke hi rahne vali hai.

ekata kjapoor - ye hai suresh ji yani mere papa ke best friend ki beti yebhi delhi se hi hai

  • chandan kapoor- ekata ke papa
  • laxmi kapoor- ekata kei mammi
  • rajat kapoor- bade bhaiya
  • sahil kapoor-chote bhaiya
  • chandani kapoor- chhoti bahan


dosto ye hai jo is kahani ke regular corrector hai baki ke dost bhi kahani me present rahenge lekin unaka rol mahatvapurn nahi hai baki agar hoga to unka intro kahani me hi mil jayegi.aur inke pariwar walo ke bhi


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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..
Bahut badhiya update hai bhai
 

RStar99

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Kahani aab tak:-

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..

Abb aage:-

Location - p. Bangal sunadarvan


Haveli se nikali vah kalli jyoti udati hui chali ja rahi thi…….jyoti ki disha bangal rajy ke side tha aur jyoti tivr gati se us taraf badhe ja rahi thi…..

Vah kali jyoti sundar van me pahuch jati hai aur sundar van me ek jagah par jakar dharti ke andar sammahit ho jati hai aur van me bhukamp sa aa jata hai……….aur jis jagah par vah jyoti akar takari thi vaha ki mitti dekhate hi dekhate sukha jati hai aur vaha par darar fat jata hai…………

Us darar me se sass lene ki aawaj aane lagti hai….jaise koi apni sass rokne ke baad lambi lambi sase leta hai i..

aakash me kalee badal chhane lagte hai tej havaye bijaliya kadakne lagti hai…… phir achanak sab kuchh pahle ke jaisi ho jaati haii……..

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jab ham log (didi, ma, papa aur mai) jangal ke raste se hote huye satation ki or ja rahe the ki tabhi hamare aage ek pagal sa dikhane wala sadhu type aadami hamare gadi ke aage rasta roke hue khada tha…….. driver ne bahut horn diya lekin jaise use kuchh sunai hi nahi de raha tha vah hat hi nahi raha tha../.. tabhi papa gadi se bahar nikal kar use hatane keliye jaate hai to vah kahta hai……….

pagal aadami--- tu marne wala hai….ha..ha...tu aaj marega vah tujhe aur tere bete ko marne ke liye marak totaka (dosto tona aur jaadu ke bare me jayada kuchh pata nahi hai) kar rahi hai tujhe dhokhe se bulaa rahi hai tu na ja usake pass…..nahi to tu bachhe ga nahi …….

papa yah sunakr thoda darr gaye the lekin phir bole- kya bake jaa rahe ho hato rashate se hame jaane me deri ho rahi hai……

pagal adami- tu chinta na kar aaj usaki pahli shakti jagrit ho gayi hai…...par aabhi vah kamjor hai ……..


papa ke to kuchh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha unhe kya samh to hame bhi nahi aaraha tha….

vah pagal itana bolkar raste se hat gya aur jangal ki or chala gya gay papa gadi ke andar aaye to maa ne puchha- kya bol raha tha suresh vah pagal aadami……..

papa- are kuchh nahi vah bol raha tha ki ….papa ne sab bata diya ……. ye kya bol gya hame to kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya ki usane kya bola…….

Phir ham log chal diye……

Jangal me aadhe raste par hi the ki driver ne achanak hi brek maar diya ham sabhi aage ki or jhuk gaye………….

Mai are kya huaa drivar uncle ye achanak aapane brek kyo maar diye…….

Driver- sahab aage to rasta hi nahi hai phir ham aage kaise jayenge…..

Papa-kya matlab hai tumhara ki aage rasta nahi hai………

Driver-- mai shi kah raha hu dekhiye aage kahi se bhi rasta nahi hai…………

Sab log gadi se bahar nikale to sach me rasta nahi taha aage jane ke liye……..

Mamata didi---lekin jab mai gav aai thi to ham log isi raste se aaye the phir ye achanak rasta kaha gaya……..

Mammi- suresh maine bola tha tumhe ki ham jangal ke raste se nahi jayenge……. Lekin tum sab meri baat sune hi nahi…...ab aise bhi late hoga aur vaise bhi late hota lekin vah rasta safe tha lekin nahi hame aaj hi pahchana hai………

Papa-sudha ab mujhe kya pata tha ki yaha se achanak rasta hi gayab ho jayega………

Abhi sabhi baat hi kar rahe the ki baha ek tej prakash fail gya aur sabhi ke ankhe band ho gayi……….

Vah tej parkash us dhuye se aaraha tha kyoki jo safed wala bhag tha vah bahut tej chamak raha tha…………..vah do rangiy dhuaa aakar shiva ke andar sama gayi jisase shiva ko bahut tej dard hone laga vah chilla uth……

M………….aaaaaaaaaa

Ma ne jab meri aawaj suni to jhat se apani aakhe kol kar mujhe dekha ne lagi………
Lekin baha mai nahi tha………

Shiva...shiva kaha gaya.. Ma ne mujhe dhudhate hue puchh

Papa aur mamata didi charo traf tarf mujhe dekha ne lage lekin mai baha nahi tha…..aur ye mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mai kaha gya hu baha se kyoki jab mujhe tej dadr utha to mai vahi chillate hue behosh ho gaya…….

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location- delhi ka jangal

aurat ( kutil muskan dete hue)- kya puja ke liye bali ka intejaam ho gaya hai…….
un me se ek sakhas kahata hai……...ji ……..taiyar hai…

vah upasthit sare log us aurat ko ek jhopadi me leke jaate hai…………..jhopdi ke andar charo or tantra vidya ki chije aur usse sambandhit vastu banayi gayi aur rakhi gayi thi……….niche ek putala ke charo or chaar nimbu rakhe gaye the jin par lal sindur laga hua tha………………….

jhopdi ke andar ka nazara dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha ki yaha par kisi prakarya ke jaadu tona ya badi totake ka anjam diya jaane wala hai…………..

tabhi vah aurat apane hath me ek mans katane wala chaku uatha leti hai…...aur…...muskurate hue bali ke paas jaati hai……...phir vah aurat……...usi chaku se us bali ke sharir par “shiva tivari” likh deti hai…………

vah bali chaku ke nook apane dil par dekhate hi chhatpatane lagta hai……….vaha upasthit log aakar us bali ke haath pair pakad lete hai…………..

vah aurat apane muh se kuchh mantr padhati hai aur jor se chillate hue us bali ke gardan jor se dabane lagti hai…………..baki ke sharir se sara khun nikalkar pass rakhe us gudiya ke charo or chipakane lagata hai…...aur us gudiya se ek ataynt kala dhuaa nikalne lagata hai aut vah dhuaa us disha ki or ud jaata hai jis disha me shiva tha aur jakar shiva se usi vakt takarata hai jis vakt us haveli se nikala dhuaa ka gola shiva me pravesh karne wala hota hai…………….
aur shiva ko ek tej jhataka lagata hai jisase usaki chikh nikal jati hai---------

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location:- delhi me ek unknown haveli ke ek kamre me

delhi ke ek aalishan haveli ke ek kamre me ek ladki jiski umr lagbhag 18-19 saal thi…………..
ladki ke hath me ek piyano tha jispar vah ek bahut hi khubsurat si dhun baja rahi thi………..
usaki ungaliya lagatar sangit ke madur dhun chhed rahe the……..uaske chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jo uaske sunadrta me chhar chaand laga rahi thi………..
jis room me vah thi vah room charo taraf se classic interior se saja hua tha……..

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koibhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vahi neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)


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