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Adultery The Devil king

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Dosto mai Rohan aaj ek kahani likhane ka koshish kar rha hu. Mai koi lekhak to nahi hu isliye agar koi galti hoti hai iske liye mai aap sabhi logo se mafi chahunga


UPDATE 1

Har roj ki trah aaj bhi mai dukan se kaam karke wapas aa rha tha ki kachare ke dher par ek navjaat bachhe ki rone ki awaj suni. Uski awaj sunkar jab mai uske pass gya to dekha ki ek bachhi ko kisi ne kude ke dher par chhod kar chala gaya hai. Maine ek baar idhar udhar najar mari lekin mujhe ass pass koi bhi najar nahi aa rha tha to mai use apni god me utha liya or chup karane laga lekin vah bachhi to roye hi jaa rahi thi to mai use lekar apne sath anathashrma ki traf chal diya kunki mai bhi vahi par rahata hu kunki mera bhi koi nahi hai is duniya me . Mai yhi sab sochate hue ki jab bachho ko palana hi nahi hota hai to vah log bachho ko janm hi kyu dete hai or janm dene ke baad phir isi trah kisi kude ke dher par chhod dete hai.
Main aap logo ko apne baare me kuchh bata deta hu mera naam Rohan hai haa kunki iske baad jo sirname aata hai vah to hai hi nhi kunki ham lawarish jo hai jis trah aaj mujhe yah bachhi mili thik usi trah aaj se 10 shal pahle hi mujhe bhi ek kude ke dher se hamri anathashrma ke malkin Radha maa ne paya tha isi trah hamre anathashrma me karib 100 ke ass pass bache honge jinke khane pine or padhne ki sara kharcha anathashrma se uthaya jata hai lekin apne kharche ke liye kuchh ladke idhar aas pass ke dukano par chhota mota kaam kar lete hai jisase ham apni jaroorate puri karte hai. Aaj bhi mai isi trah raat ke 8 bje dukan bnd hone ke baad apne anathashrma lout raha tha tabhi yah bachhi mujhe mili jise lekar mai Radha maa ke pass aa gya jo ki apne cebin me baithi hui kuchh kaam kar rahi thi mere hatho me chhoti bachhi ko rota hua dekh kar mere pass ayi or boli
Radha maa : Rohan yah koun hai or kanha se lekar aa rahe ho.
Mai : maa ( ji haa dosto ham sare bachhe inhe maa kahkr hi bulate hai) yah mujhe kude ke dher par mili jis trah se mai apko mila tha is naate yah meri bahan hui lekin mai ise kafi der se shant karane ki koshish kar raha hu lekin yah chup hi nahi ho rahi hai.
R maa : achha chal thik hai laa mai dekhati hu kyu ro rahi hai ho sakta hai ise bhukh lagi ho laa mai ise dhoodh pila deti hu.
Itna bol kar R maa ne bachhi ko mujhase le liya or kebin se bahar chali gayi or unke sath mai bhi chala gya lekin vanah par janha par mai rahata tha. Jab mai vanha par gya to dekha ki lagbhag sabhi bachhe vanha par aa gaye the. Ab hamara koi or to tha nahi or bahar ke log bhi ham sabko hin najaro se hi dekhate the isliye jo rishata tha hamara apas me bahut hi achha tha ham sab me Naina Didi jo ki sabse sajhadaar thi vah mere pass ayi or boli
Naina didi : kyu re chhote suni hu ki ek bachhi ko lekar aya hai Kanha par mil gayi vah tujhe.
Unke pichhe sabhi mujhe dekh rahe the to maine unhe sab kuchh bata diya to vah boli
Naina didi : iska matlab ek or bachhi aa gayi ham logo ke bich is duniya ke tano ko sunane ke liye.
Itna bol kar vah bahar jaane lagi to mai bola
Mai : are Didi is trah kanha par jaa rahi hai.
Naina didi : kanha jaungi maa ke pass jaa rhi hu bachhi ko dekhane ke liye.
Unki baat ko sunkar kuchh unke sath chale gaye or kuchh bach gaye to ham apas me khelane lage. Is trah hi ham logo ka roj ka kaam hota tha subah uth kar anathashrma ke pass kuchh jamin thi jisme sabji ki kheti karwati thi maa usme hariya kaka ki madad karte or phir taiyaar hokar school jate or sham ko dukaan par . Aise hi karte hue karib char saal bit gaye or aaj Nainaa di ka ashrma me last din tha R Maa ke baad agar mere sabse karib koi tha to vah Naina di hi thi haa yah alag baat thi ki in bite char salo me hamri gudiya ne apni natkhat harkto ki vajah se sabki ladli ban gayi thi R maa or Naina di ki to usme jaan basti thi or mera to vah sab kuchh thi use har roj chocolate la kar dena or uski sabhi jaroorato ka khyal mai khud rkhata tha iske liye mai jo bhi bahar se kaam karke paise lata tha vah sab mai iske upar kharch kar deta tha. Idhar Naina di Radha maa se baat kar rahi thi or mai apne bishtar par baitha ro raha tha kunki ek vahi thi jo ki mujhe sabse jyada pyari thi lekin unke balig hone ke baad anathashrma me rahan muskil tha to vah hostel me apne liye kamara dekh liya tha or aaj vahi par sift ho rahi thi jisme maa ne unki sahayta ki thi. Mai batha hua tha ki tabhi mere kandhe par kisi ne hath rakha to mai samne dekha to paya ki samne Naina di khadi h to mai unhe dekh kar khud ko rok nahi paya or unke gale lag kar rone laga to vah mujhe shant karati hui boli
N didi : chhotu tu to ek bahaur ladka hai is trah ro kyu rha h mai kahi dur nahi jaa rahi hu pass me hi rahungi or roj tujhse or gudiya se milane ke liye aati to rahungi hi tu is trah rota kyu hai. Maine maa se baate kar liya hai jab mai job karne lagungi to tujhe or gudiya ko apne pass bula lungi phir ham sab sath rahenge samjha.
Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh nahi bola sirf haa me gardan hila diya. Idhar gudiya mujhe is trah rote hue dekh kar khud bhi rone lagi tab didi use jakr shant karayi. Phir vah chali gyi. Mere samne to khud ko majboot dikha rahi thi lekin baad me khud ko rone se nahi rook payi. Unke jaane ke baad ab meri duniya meri kitabe or gudiya tak hi simit rah gayi. Aise hi kuchh shal or nikal gaye or aaj mera 10th ka result nikla tha jisme maine pure state me top kiya tha kunki bachapn se mai padhane me kafi tej tha government school me padhane ke baad bhi maine top kiya tha jiski vajah se aaj pure school me samman diya gaya. Janha mai is vajah se bahut khus tha or jald se jald mai yah khabr Naina di or maa ko sunane ke liye betab tha or usse bhi jyada apni gudiya se milane ke liye lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki jo din mere liye ek traf khushiya lekar aya hai vahi din meri jindgi ka sabse bura din bhi sabit hoga
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UPDATE 2

Mai school se aaj jald se jald anathashram pahucha or jab mai vanha par pahucha to har roj ki trah aaj bhi meri gudiya mera intjaar kar rahi thi lekin aaj uski ankho me vah khushi or chamak nahi dikhai de rahi thi jo har rooj mujhe dekh kar aa jaya karti thi or to aaj uski ankhe puri trah se ro kar laal ho gayi thi aisa lag raha tha mano vah bahut der se ro rahi ho or uski ankho me ek bund bhi anshu ke aa jaye to mere liye yah mout se kam nahi hai to uske samne ghutno ke bal baith kar bola

Mai : kya baat hai gudiya kisi ne tujhe kuchh bola kya. Tu naam bata mujhe mai abhi uski khabar leta hu.
Gudiya meri baat sunkar kuchh boli nahi bas mere gale lag kar roti rahi to mai use shant karate hue bola

Mai : are meri gudiya tu pahle shant ho jaa iske baad bata kya hua hai kyu ro rahi hai tu.

Gudiya : Bhaiya mai apko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.

Mai : yah tu kya bol rahi hai tu mujhe chhod kar kyu jayegi kisne bola tujhe aisa chal mai dekhata hu kisi ne tere se mjak kiya hoga.
Mai usko lekar andar jaane laga jnha par sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the to sabse pahle maine sabko mithai diya jo ki mai ate wakt raste me le liya tha lekin janha sab subah mere school jate wakt itne kush the vahi is wakt sabhi ke chaharo par chinta dikhai de rahi thi lekin mai is baat par dhyan naa dete hue Radha maa ke kebin ki traf chal diya kunki is wakt vah vahi par thi lekin jab mai anadr gya to dekha ki vanha par do log baithe hue hai maine jakr sabse pahle R maa ke panv chhue or unhe apne result ke baare me bataya to vah bahut khus hui or boli
R maa : beta teri vajah se mai bahut khus hu tune mera sar garv se uncha kar diya.

Iske baad maine unko mithai diya jise unhone sabse pahle mujhe khilaya or iske baad maine samne baithe dono log ko jisme ek admi or ek orat thi un dono log ke paonv ko chhua or phir unhe mithai diya.
Tab R maa un logo se boli

R maa : mai iski hi baat kar rahi thi kunki aap logo ki ichha ko bina iske manjoori ke mai bhi kuchh nahi kar sakti kunki jab tak yah use nahi bolega tab tak vah aap logo ke sath nahi jaa sakti hai. Yah sach hai ki vah bachhi is ashram me rahti jaroor hai lekin uski padhai se lakar usski chhoti se chhoti jaroorato ka bhar yahi uthata hai.
Maine jab suna to Gudiya ke rone ka or baki logo ke chahare par jo dukh ke bhav the use samjhane me mujhe jara bhi der nahi lagi lekin phir bhi mai R maa se bola

Mai : maa aap yah kya bol rahi hai mai kuchh samjha nahi.
Tab Radha maa ki jagah vah lady boli

Lady : beta mai tumhe batati hu ham log yanha par ek bachha god lene ke liye aye hue the or hame ek bachhi bahut hi pyari lagi isliye ham use god lena chahate hai lekin yah maidam bol rahi hai ki bina tumhare iajajt ke nahi de sakti hai.

Mai jab yah suna to mujhe aisa laga kisi ne meri jindgi hi mujhase maang li ho mere chahare par abhi janha kuchh der pahale hi jamaane bhar ki khushi thi ab uspe utna hi dukh or taklif jhalakne laga mai turant hi vanha se nikal kar bahar aa gya. Mere bahar jane ke baad Radha maa boli

R maa : dekhiye mai jyada kuchh bol to nahi sakti hu kunki ham sab jante hai ki vah usase kitna pyaar karta hai. Umar me jyada bada to nahi hai lekin ek pita ki trah uski har jaroorato ka pura khyal rakhata hai aise me usse yah bolana ki vah use aap logo ko sounp de yah kitna muskil hai yah aap dono achhi trah samjh sakte hai.

Itna bol kar vah vanha se uth kar mere pass aa gyi janha par mai gudiya ko apne pass bitha kar khana khila raha tha kunki hariya kaka ne bataya ki usne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha to mai use khila raha tha or vah mujhe kafi der tak yu hi ham logo ko is trah dekhate rahne ke baad Radha maa boli

R Maa : Beta Rohan mai tumse kuchh baat karna chahti hu.

Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh bola nahi kunki mai janta tha ki vah kya bolana chahti hai lekin unke kai baar bolane ke baad mai Gudiya ko hariya kaka ke sath bahar bhej diya or phir bola

Mai : maa mai janata hu aap kya bolana chahti hai lekin yah baat to aap bhi achhi tarh se janti hai ki uske bina mera koi vajood nahi hai.

R maa : mai sab janti hu beta lekin mai jo bhi bol rahi hu vah Gudiya ke bhalai ke liye hi bol rahi hu. Vah log kafi amir hai or unki koi santaan nahi hai jiski vajah se vah log Gudiya ko god lena chahte hai kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hamari Gudiya ek achhi jindgi jiye.

Mai : maa aap hi batao mai kya karu. Uske bina jine ka to maine kabhi kalpan bhi nahi kiya hai or aap bol rahi hai ki mai use khud se dur kar du or agar maine kisi trah se khud ko samjha kar use bhej bhi du is baat ki kya gayrety hai ki vah log uska achhe se khayal rakhenge kal ko jab unka khud ka bachha hoga to vah log gudiya par dhyaan hi nahi denge.

Abhi meri baat sunkar maa kuchh bolati usase pahle hi vah lady ham logo ke pass ayi or boli

Lady : beta is baat ki tum bilkul chinta mat karo kunki hamri koi santaan kabhi nahi ho sakti hai isliye hi to ham tumahri gudiya ko apni beti banana chahte hai or is baat ka mai tumko yakin dilati hu ki gudiya ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hone dungi bas vah bachhi mere god me dal do beta mai tumhara yah ehshaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.

Yah sab bolate hue unki ankho me anshu aa gaye jise mai pochhate hue bola

Mai : aunty ji ham apko is baat ki iajajt de to denge lekin apko mujhe yah wada karna hoga ki aap meri gudiya ka khayal rakhengi.

Yah bol kar main vanha se uth kar jaane laga phir rook kar R maa se bola

Mai : maa mai abhi jaa raha hu aap Gudiya ko in logo ke sath bhej dijiyega.

R Maa : beta kam se kam ek baar usase mil to le.

Mai : nahi maa aap bhi janti ho ki mai sab kuchh bardasht kar sakta hu lekin gudiya ke ankho me anshu nahi dekh sakta hu or agar mai ruka to kamjoor pad jaunga phir ho sakta hai mai use nahi jaane du.
 

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Dosto mai Rohan aaj ek kahani likhane ka koshish kar rha hu. Mai koi lekhak to nahi hu isliye agar koi galti hoti hai iske liye mai aap sabhi logo se mafi chahunga


UPDATE 1

Har roj ki trah aaj bhi mai dukan se kaam karke wapas aa rha tha ki kachare ke dher par ek navjaat bachhe ki rone ki awaj suni. Uski awaj sunkar jab mai uske pass gya to dekha ki ek bachhi ko kisi ne kude ke dher par chhod kar chala gaya hai. Maine ek baar idhar udhar najar mari lekin mujhe ass pass koi bhi najar nahi aa rha tha to mai use apni god me utha liya or chup karane laga lekin vah bachhi to roye hi jaa rahi thi to mai use lekar apne sath anathashrma ki traf chal diya kunki mai bhi vahi par rahata hu kunki mera bhi koi nahi hai is duniya me . Mai yhi sab sochate hue ki jab bachho ko palana hi nahi hota hai to vah log bachho ko janm hi kyu dete hai or janm dene ke baad phir isi trah kisi kude ke dher par chhod dete hai.
Main aap logo ko apne baare me kuchh bata deta hu mera naam Rohan hai haa kunki iske baad jo sirname aata hai vah to hai hi nhi kunki ham lawarish jo hai jis trah aaj mujhe yah bachhi mili thik usi trah aaj se 10 shal pahle hi mujhe bhi ek kude ke dher se hamri anathashrma ke malkin Radha maa ne paya tha isi trah hamre anathashrma me karib 100 ke ass pass bache honge jinke khane pine or padhne ki sara kharcha anathashrma se uthaya jata hai lekin apne kharche ke liye kuchh ladke idhar aas pass ke dukano par chhota mota kaam kar lete hai jisase ham apni jaroorate puri karte hai. Aaj bhi mai isi trah raat ke 8 bje dukan bnd hone ke baad apne anathashrma lout raha tha tabhi yah bachhi mujhe mili jise lekar mai Radha maa ke pass aa gya jo ki apne cebin me baithi hui kuchh kaam kar rahi thi mere hatho me chhoti bachhi ko rota hua dekh kar mere pass ayi or boli
Radha maa : Rohan yah koun hai or kanha se lekar aa rahe ho.
Mai : maa ( ji haa dosto ham sare bachhe inhe maa kahkr hi bulate hai) yah mujhe kude ke dher par mili jis trah se mai apko mila tha is naate yah meri bahan hui lekin mai ise kafi der se shant karane ki koshish kar raha hu lekin yah chup hi nahi ho rahi hai.
R maa : achha chal thik hai laa mai dekhati hu kyu ro rahi hai ho sakta hai ise bhukh lagi ho laa mai ise dhoodh pila deti hu.
Itna bol kar R maa ne bachhi ko mujhase le liya or kebin se bahar chali gayi or unke sath mai bhi chala gya lekin vanah par janha par mai rahata tha. Jab mai vanha par gya to dekha ki lagbhag sabhi bachhe vanha par aa gaye the. Ab hamara koi or to tha nahi or bahar ke log bhi ham sabko hin najaro se hi dekhate the isliye jo rishata tha hamara apas me bahut hi achha tha ham sab me Naina Didi jo ki sabse sajhadaar thi vah mere pass ayi or boli
Naina didi : kyu re chhote suni hu ki ek bachhi ko lekar aya hai Kanha par mil gayi vah tujhe.
Unke pichhe sabhi mujhe dekh rahe the to maine unhe sab kuchh bata diya to vah boli
Naina didi : iska matlab ek or bachhi aa gayi ham logo ke bich is duniya ke tano ko sunane ke liye.
Itna bol kar vah bahar jaane lagi to mai bola
Mai : are Didi is trah kanha par jaa rahi hai.
Naina didi : kanha jaungi maa ke pass jaa rhi hu bachhi ko dekhane ke liye.
Unki baat ko sunkar kuchh unke sath chale gaye or kuchh bach gaye to ham apas me khelane lage. Is trah hi ham logo ka roj ka kaam hota tha subah uth kar anathashrma ke pass kuchh jamin thi jisme sabji ki kheti karwati thi maa usme hariya kaka ki madad karte or phir taiyaar hokar school jate or sham ko dukaan par . Aise hi karte hue karib char saal bit gaye or aaj Nainaa di ka ashrma me last din tha R Maa ke baad agar mere sabse karib koi tha to vah Naina di hi thi haa yah alag baat thi ki in bite char salo me hamri gudiya ne apni natkhat harkto ki vajah se sabki ladli ban gayi thi R maa or Naina di ki to usme jaan basti thi or mera to vah sab kuchh thi use har roj chocolate la kar dena or uski sabhi jaroorato ka khyal mai khud rkhata tha iske liye mai jo bhi bahar se kaam karke paise lata tha vah sab mai iske upar kharch kar deta tha. Idhar Naina di Radha maa se baat kar rahi thi or mai apne bishtar par baitha ro raha tha kunki ek vahi thi jo ki mujhe sabse jyada pyari thi lekin unke balig hone ke baad anathashrma me rahan muskil tha to vah hostel me apne liye kamara dekh liya tha or aaj vahi par sift ho rahi thi jisme maa ne unki sahayta ki thi. Mai batha hua tha ki tabhi mere kandhe par kisi ne hath rakha to mai samne dekha to paya ki samne Naina di khadi h to mai unhe dekh kar khud ko rok nahi paya or unke gale lag kar rone laga to vah mujhe shant karati hui boli
N didi : chhotu tu to ek bahaur ladka hai is trah ro kyu rha h mai kahi dur nahi jaa rahi hu pass me hi rahungi or roj tujhse or gudiya se milane ke liye aati to rahungi hi tu is trah rota kyu hai. Maine maa se baate kar liya hai jab mai job karne lagungi to tujhe or gudiya ko apne pass bula lungi phir ham sab sath rahenge samjha.
Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh nahi bola sirf haa me gardan hila diya. Idhar gudiya mujhe is trah rote hue dekh kar khud bhi rone lagi tab didi use jakr shant karayi. Phir vah chali gyi. Mere samne to khud ko majboot dikha rahi thi lekin baad me khud ko rone se nahi rook payi. Unke jaane ke baad ab meri duniya meri kitabe or gudiya tak hi simit rah gayi. Aise hi kuchh shal or nikal gaye or aaj mera 10th ka result nikla tha jisme maine pure state me top kiya tha kunki bachapn se mai padhane me kafi tej tha government school me padhane ke baad bhi maine top kiya tha jiski vajah se aaj pure school me samman diya gaya. Janha mai is vajah se bahut khus tha or jald se jald mai yah khabr Naina di or maa ko sunane ke liye betab tha or usse bhi jyada apni gudiya se milane ke liye lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki jo din mere liye ek traf khushiya lekar aya hai vahi din meri jindgi ka sabse bura din bhi sabit hoga
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Very nice start
 

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UPDATE 2

Mai school se aaj jald se jald anathashram pahucha or jab mai vanha par pahucha to har roj ki trah aaj bhi meri gudiya mera intjaar kar rahi thi lekin aaj uski ankho me vah khushi or chamak nahi dikhai de rahi thi jo har rooj mujhe dekh kar aa jaya karti thi or to aaj uski ankhe puri trah se ro kar laal ho gayi thi aisa lag raha tha mano vah bahut der se ro rahi ho or uski ankho me ek bund bhi anshu ke aa jaye to mere liye yah mout se kam nahi hai to uske samne ghutno ke bal baith kar bola

Mai : kya baat hai gudiya kisi ne tujhe kuchh bola kya. Tu naam bata mujhe mai abhi uski khabar leta hu.
Gudiya meri baat sunkar kuchh boli nahi bas mere gale lag kar roti rahi to mai use shant karate hue bola

Mai : are meri gudiya tu pahle shant ho jaa iske baad bata kya hua hai kyu ro rahi hai tu.

Gudiya : Bhaiya mai apko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.

Mai : yah tu kya bol rahi hai tu mujhe chhod kar kyu jayegi kisne bola tujhe aisa chal mai dekhata hu kisi ne tere se mjak kiya hoga.
Mai usko lekar andar jaane laga jnha par sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the to sabse pahle maine sabko mithai diya jo ki mai ate wakt raste me le liya tha lekin janha sab subah mere school jate wakt itne kush the vahi is wakt sabhi ke chaharo par chinta dikhai de rahi thi lekin mai is baat par dhyan naa dete hue Radha maa ke kebin ki traf chal diya kunki is wakt vah vahi par thi lekin jab mai anadr gya to dekha ki vanha par do log baithe hue hai maine jakr sabse pahle R maa ke panv chhue or unhe apne result ke baare me bataya to vah bahut khus hui or boli
R maa : beta teri vajah se mai bahut khus hu tune mera sar garv se uncha kar diya.

Iske baad maine unko mithai diya jise unhone sabse pahle mujhe khilaya or iske baad maine samne baithe dono log ko jisme ek admi or ek orat thi un dono log ke paonv ko chhua or phir unhe mithai diya.
Tab R maa un logo se boli

R maa : mai iski hi baat kar rahi thi kunki aap logo ki ichha ko bina iske manjoori ke mai bhi kuchh nahi kar sakti kunki jab tak yah use nahi bolega tab tak vah aap logo ke sath nahi jaa sakti hai. Yah sach hai ki vah bachhi is ashram me rahti jaroor hai lekin uski padhai se lakar usski chhoti se chhoti jaroorato ka bhar yahi uthata hai.
Maine jab suna to Gudiya ke rone ka or baki logo ke chahare par jo dukh ke bhav the use samjhane me mujhe jara bhi der nahi lagi lekin phir bhi mai R maa se bola

Mai : maa aap yah kya bol rahi hai mai kuchh samjha nahi.
Tab Radha maa ki jagah vah lady boli

Lady : beta mai tumhe batati hu ham log yanha par ek bachha god lene ke liye aye hue the or hame ek bachhi bahut hi pyari lagi isliye ham use god lena chahate hai lekin yah maidam bol rahi hai ki bina tumhare iajajt ke nahi de sakti hai.

Mai jab yah suna to mujhe aisa laga kisi ne meri jindgi hi mujhase maang li ho mere chahare par abhi janha kuchh der pahale hi jamaane bhar ki khushi thi ab uspe utna hi dukh or taklif jhalakne laga mai turant hi vanha se nikal kar bahar aa gya. Mere bahar jane ke baad Radha maa boli

R maa : dekhiye mai jyada kuchh bol to nahi sakti hu kunki ham sab jante hai ki vah usase kitna pyaar karta hai. Umar me jyada bada to nahi hai lekin ek pita ki trah uski har jaroorato ka pura khyal rakhata hai aise me usse yah bolana ki vah use aap logo ko sounp de yah kitna muskil hai yah aap dono achhi trah samjh sakte hai.

Itna bol kar vah vanha se uth kar mere pass aa gyi janha par mai gudiya ko apne pass bitha kar khana khila raha tha kunki hariya kaka ne bataya ki usne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha to mai use khila raha tha or vah mujhe kafi der tak yu hi ham logo ko is trah dekhate rahne ke baad Radha maa boli

R Maa : Beta Rohan mai tumse kuchh baat karna chahti hu.

Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh bola nahi kunki mai janta tha ki vah kya bolana chahti hai lekin unke kai baar bolane ke baad mai Gudiya ko hariya kaka ke sath bahar bhej diya or phir bola

Mai : maa mai janata hu aap kya bolana chahti hai lekin yah baat to aap bhi achhi tarh se janti hai ki uske bina mera koi vajood nahi hai.

R maa : mai sab janti hu beta lekin mai jo bhi bol rahi hu vah Gudiya ke bhalai ke liye hi bol rahi hu. Vah log kafi amir hai or unki koi santaan nahi hai jiski vajah se vah log Gudiya ko god lena chahte hai kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hamari Gudiya ek achhi jindgi jiye.

Mai : maa aap hi batao mai kya karu. Uske bina jine ka to maine kabhi kalpan bhi nahi kiya hai or aap bol rahi hai ki mai use khud se dur kar du or agar maine kisi trah se khud ko samjha kar use bhej bhi du is baat ki kya gayrety hai ki vah log uska achhe se khayal rakhenge kal ko jab unka khud ka bachha hoga to vah log gudiya par dhyaan hi nahi denge.

Abhi meri baat sunkar maa kuchh bolati usase pahle hi vah lady ham logo ke pass ayi or boli

Lady : beta is baat ki tum bilkul chinta mat karo kunki hamri koi santaan kabhi nahi ho sakti hai isliye hi to ham tumahri gudiya ko apni beti banana chahte hai or is baat ka mai tumko yakin dilati hu ki gudiya ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hone dungi bas vah bachhi mere god me dal do beta mai tumhara yah ehshaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.

Yah sab bolate hue unki ankho me anshu aa gaye jise mai pochhate hue bola

Mai : aunty ji ham apko is baat ki iajajt de to denge lekin apko mujhe yah wada karna hoga ki aap meri gudiya ka khayal rakhengi.

Yah bol kar main vanha se uth kar jaane laga phir rook kar R maa se bola

Mai : maa mai abhi jaa raha hu aap Gudiya ko in logo ke sath bhej dijiyega.

R Maa : beta kam se kam ek baar usase mil to le.

Mai : nahi maa aap bhi janti ho ki mai sab kuchh bardasht kar sakta hu lekin gudiya ke ankho me anshu nahi dekh sakta hu or agar mai ruka to kamjoor pad jaunga phir ho sakta hai mai use nahi jaane du.
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Mai school se aaj jald se jald anathashram pahucha or jab mai vanha par pahucha to har roj ki trah aaj bhi meri gudiya mera intjaar kar rahi thi lekin aaj uski ankho me vah khushi or chamak nahi dikhai de rahi thi jo har rooj mujhe dekh kar aa jaya karti thi or to aaj uski ankhe puri trah se ro kar laal ho gayi thi aisa lag raha tha mano vah bahut der se ro rahi ho or uski ankho me ek bund bhi anshu ke aa jaye to mere liye yah mout se kam nahi hai to uske samne ghutno ke bal baith kar bola

Mai : kya baat hai gudiya kisi ne tujhe kuchh bola kya. Tu naam bata mujhe mai abhi uski khabar leta hu.
Gudiya meri baat sunkar kuchh boli nahi bas mere gale lag kar roti rahi to mai use shant karate hue bola

Mai : are meri gudiya tu pahle shant ho jaa iske baad bata kya hua hai kyu ro rahi hai tu.

Gudiya : Bhaiya mai apko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.

Mai : yah tu kya bol rahi hai tu mujhe chhod kar kyu jayegi kisne bola tujhe aisa chal mai dekhata hu kisi ne tere se mjak kiya hoga.
Mai usko lekar andar jaane laga jnha par sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the to sabse pahle maine sabko mithai diya jo ki mai ate wakt raste me le liya tha lekin janha sab subah mere school jate wakt itne kush the vahi is wakt sabhi ke chaharo par chinta dikhai de rahi thi lekin mai is baat par dhyan naa dete hue Radha maa ke kebin ki traf chal diya kunki is wakt vah vahi par thi lekin jab mai anadr gya to dekha ki vanha par do log baithe hue hai maine jakr sabse pahle R maa ke panv chhue or unhe apne result ke baare me bataya to vah bahut khus hui or boli
R maa : beta teri vajah se mai bahut khus hu tune mera sar garv se uncha kar diya.

Iske baad maine unko mithai diya jise unhone sabse pahle mujhe khilaya or iske baad maine samne baithe dono log ko jisme ek admi or ek orat thi un dono log ke paonv ko chhua or phir unhe mithai diya.
Tab R maa un logo se boli

R maa : mai iski hi baat kar rahi thi kunki aap logo ki ichha ko bina iske manjoori ke mai bhi kuchh nahi kar sakti kunki jab tak yah use nahi bolega tab tak vah aap logo ke sath nahi jaa sakti hai. Yah sach hai ki vah bachhi is ashram me rahti jaroor hai lekin uski padhai se lakar usski chhoti se chhoti jaroorato ka bhar yahi uthata hai.
Maine jab suna to Gudiya ke rone ka or baki logo ke chahare par jo dukh ke bhav the use samjhane me mujhe jara bhi der nahi lagi lekin phir bhi mai R maa se bola

Mai : maa aap yah kya bol rahi hai mai kuchh samjha nahi.
Tab Radha maa ki jagah vah lady boli

Lady : beta mai tumhe batati hu ham log yanha par ek bachha god lene ke liye aye hue the or hame ek bachhi bahut hi pyari lagi isliye ham use god lena chahate hai lekin yah maidam bol rahi hai ki bina tumhare iajajt ke nahi de sakti hai.

Mai jab yah suna to mujhe aisa laga kisi ne meri jindgi hi mujhase maang li ho mere chahare par abhi janha kuchh der pahale hi jamaane bhar ki khushi thi ab uspe utna hi dukh or taklif jhalakne laga mai turant hi vanha se nikal kar bahar aa gya. Mere bahar jane ke baad Radha maa boli

R maa : dekhiye mai jyada kuchh bol to nahi sakti hu kunki ham sab jante hai ki vah usase kitna pyaar karta hai. Umar me jyada bada to nahi hai lekin ek pita ki trah uski har jaroorato ka pura khyal rakhata hai aise me usse yah bolana ki vah use aap logo ko sounp de yah kitna muskil hai yah aap dono achhi trah samjh sakte hai.

Itna bol kar vah vanha se uth kar mere pass aa gyi janha par mai gudiya ko apne pass bitha kar khana khila raha tha kunki hariya kaka ne bataya ki usne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha to mai use khila raha tha or vah mujhe kafi der tak yu hi ham logo ko is trah dekhate rahne ke baad Radha maa boli

R Maa : Beta Rohan mai tumse kuchh baat karna chahti hu.

Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh bola nahi kunki mai janta tha ki vah kya bolana chahti hai lekin unke kai baar bolane ke baad mai Gudiya ko hariya kaka ke sath bahar bhej diya or phir bola

Mai : maa mai janata hu aap kya bolana chahti hai lekin yah baat to aap bhi achhi tarh se janti hai ki uske bina mera koi vajood nahi hai.

R maa : mai sab janti hu beta lekin mai jo bhi bol rahi hu vah Gudiya ke bhalai ke liye hi bol rahi hu. Vah log kafi amir hai or unki koi santaan nahi hai jiski vajah se vah log Gudiya ko god lena chahte hai kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hamari Gudiya ek achhi jindgi jiye.

Mai : maa aap hi batao mai kya karu. Uske bina jine ka to maine kabhi kalpan bhi nahi kiya hai or aap bol rahi hai ki mai use khud se dur kar du or agar maine kisi trah se khud ko samjha kar use bhej bhi du is baat ki kya gayrety hai ki vah log uska achhe se khayal rakhenge kal ko jab unka khud ka bachha hoga to vah log gudiya par dhyaan hi nahi denge.

Abhi meri baat sunkar maa kuchh bolati usase pahle hi vah lady ham logo ke pass ayi or boli

Lady : beta is baat ki tum bilkul chinta mat karo kunki hamri koi santaan kabhi nahi ho sakti hai isliye hi to ham tumahri gudiya ko apni beti banana chahte hai or is baat ka mai tumko yakin dilati hu ki gudiya ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hone dungi bas vah bachhi mere god me dal do beta mai tumhara yah ehshaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.

Yah sab bolate hue unki ankho me anshu aa gaye jise mai pochhate hue bola

Mai : aunty ji ham apko is baat ki iajajt de to denge lekin apko mujhe yah wada karna hoga ki aap meri gudiya ka khayal rakhengi.

Yah bol kar main vanha se uth kar jaane laga phir rook kar R maa se bola

Mai : maa mai abhi jaa raha hu aap Gudiya ko in logo ke sath bhej dijiyega.

R Maa : beta kam se kam ek baar usase mil to le.

Mai : nahi maa aap bhi janti ho ki mai sab kuchh bardasht kar sakta hu lekin gudiya ke ankho me anshu nahi dekh sakta hu or agar mai ruka to kamjoor pad jaunga phir ho sakta hai mai use nahi jaane du.
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