Adultery The Devil king

[nilu12]

Emotional update bhai

 

[Rahamiprbha]

Mai itna bol kar vanha se bahar chala gaya. Mai vanha se aa to gaya lekin mera dil aaj bahut tadap raha tha mai use jaate hue ek baar dekhna chahta tha isliye aaj mai apne kaam par bhi nahi gya. ab vanha par bol diya tha jiski vajah se mai vanha se dur ek aisi jagah par aakar khada ho gya janha se mai gudiya ko bilkul saaf dekh sakta tha kunki hariya kaka use lekar bahar hi ghuma rahe the. Phir kuchh der baad hariya kaka use lekar andar chale gaye jnha par R maa us lady ka Gudiya se parichay karate hue boli

R MAA : gudiya isne milo yah aaj se tumhari maa hai or aaj ke baad tum inke sath hi rrahogi.

Ab gudiya yah sab kuchh pahale bhi kai baar dekh chuki thi kunki jo bhi bachhe yanha se jaate the vah kabhi lout kar nahi aate the isliye Gudiya rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa mai bhaiya ko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi pls aap mujhe mat bhejo mai unke begair nahi rah sakti hu.

R Maa : beti yah tumhare Bhaiya ne hi bola isliye ham tumhe bhej rahe hai. Vah bhi chahta hai ki tum inke sath hi jao.

Unki baat sunkar gudiya chilaate hue boli

Gudiya : nahi maa aap jhooth bol rahi hai mere bhaiya ne mujhse wada kiya tha ki vah mujhe khud se door nahi karenge phir vah aisa kaise bol sakte hai. Mai abhi jakar uanse puchhati hu.

Itna bolkar gudiya pure ashram me mujhe khoja jab mai use nahi mila to vah mujhe khojate hue dukan par bhi gayi janha par mai kaam kiya karata hu lekin jab use mai vanha par bhi nhi mila to vah rote hue phir wapas aa gayi or rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa bhaiya kanha hai maine unhe sab jagah khoja par vah mujhe kahi nahi mile aap batao vah kanha mai unse baat karna chahti hu.

Ab jab koi mere baare me janta hota to koi batata naa. Mai isliye hi kisi ko nahi bata kar aaya tha kunki mai janta tha agar kisi ko bhi mere baare me pata hoga to vah Gudiya ke rone ki vajah se mere pass lekar aa jayega. Idhar kafi der tak intjaar karne ke baad jab mai vapas nahi aya to R maa Gudiya se boli

R maa : beti abhi tum inke sath jao jab vah ayega to ham log tumse milane ke liye jaroor ayenge.

R Maa ki baat sunkar Gudiya ne jo bola use sunkar sabki aankhe nam ho gayi

Gudiya : nahi maa unse bol dijiyega ki aaj ke baad unki Gudiya unke liye mar chuki hai ab aaj ke baad mai kabhi bhi unki sakl tak nahi dekhungi. Vah yahi chahte hai naa ki mai unse dur chali jau to mai unse itna dur chali jaungi ki phir kabhi wapas lout kar nahi aungi.

Itna bol kar vah rote hue andar chali gayi or kuchh der baad vah apna ek baig lekar aa gyi jisme uske kitab the or kuchh kapde. Iske baad vah us lady se boli

Gudiya : chaliye aunty ji ab hame yanha se chalana chahiye kunki ab yanha par koi mera nahi hai.

ITna bol kar vah unki layi hui gadi me baith gayi or uske sath vah admi bhi chala gya lekin vah lady R maa se boli

Lady: maidam abhi vah naraj hai isliye vah aisa bol rahi hai. Jab uska gussa thanda hoga tab mai use aap sabse milane ke liye jaroor lekar aungi.

Unki baat sunkar R maa boli

R Maa : kash aapki baat sach ho lekin jitna ham use jante hai vah bahut jiddi hai or ek baar jo usne than liya phir uske faishale ko badalna itna asan nhi hota hai or Rohan ke naa milane ki vajah se uske ball man par jo prbhav pada hai use dur karna itna saral nahi hoga or haa apse meri ek vinti hai ki use koi takleef naa ho mana ki vah meri beti nahi hai lekin jab vah hamko mili thi tab vah matr kuchh hi din ki isliye ham sabki jaan hai or Rohan ki to jine ka makshad ban gyi thi. Ab iske jaane ke baad use sambhalana ham logo ke liye kafi muskil hone wala hai.

Aise hi kuchh der baat karne ke baad vah lady R maa se vida lekar Gudiya ke sath chali gayi or uske jaane ke baad mujhase raha nahi gya to mai usko dekhane ke liye ek last ashafal koshish ki us gadi ka pichh karne ki lekin mai doud kar kitna pichha karta akhir me nirash hokar lout aya or akr apne bishtar par baith gaya jnha par abhi kuchh der pahle hi mai Gudiya ke sath baitha hua khana kha rha tha. Is wakt mujhe uski bahut yaad aa rahi thi or isliye mai kafi der tak yu hi uske kapde ko apni banh me jakde hue rota raha or rote rote mai kab behosh ho gya yah mujhe khud pata nahi chala.

Idhar vah log Gudiya ko lekar apne sath Delhi jaane ki taiyaari karne lage

Ab Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai unka intro de deta hu

JJagdish sharma (gudiya ke pita) Delhi ke jaane mane businessman umr karib 35 shal hai or ek accident me inke guptang par chot lagne ki vajah se yah kabhi baap nahi ban sakte hai isliye inhone gudiya ko god lene ka faishla kiya hai

Mahak sharma ( gudiya ki maa). Umr 30 shal. Vaise to yah apne pati ke sath Delhi me hi rahti hai par inka mayaka yahi par hai or inhone jagdish se love marriage kiya hai. Isme inke pure parivaar ne sath diya kunki dono parivaaro ka pahle se kafi achhe sambndh the.

Kailaash sharma ( jagdish ke pita) inke hi raay pr in logo ne gudiya ko god liya hai kunki yah pahle bhi gudiya se uske anathashram me mil chuke hai jab vah vanha donetion dene ke liye gaye hue the.

Kavita sharma (mahak ki bahn or gudiya ki real mother) umr 38 shal inki shadi ek school teacher se hui hai jise ladkiya pasnd nahi hai kunki vah unhe bojh manta hai.

Kavita ke baki parivaar or Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai jab unka role ayega to intro dunga

 

[urc4me]

Rasprad kahani. Intejar hai agle update ka.

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Dosto mai Rohan aaj ek kahani likhane ka koshish kar rha hu. Mai koi lekhak to nahi hu isliye agar koi galti hoti hai iske liye mai aap sabhi logo se mafi chahunga


UPDATE 1

Har roj ki trah aaj bhi mai dukan se kaam karke wapas aa rha tha ki kachare ke dher par ek navjaat bachhe ki rone ki awaj suni. Uski awaj sunkar jab mai uske pass gya to dekha ki ek bachhi ko kisi ne kude ke dher par chhod kar chala gaya hai. Maine ek baar idhar udhar najar mari lekin mujhe ass pass koi bhi najar nahi aa rha tha to mai use apni god me utha liya or chup karane laga lekin vah bachhi to roye hi jaa rahi thi to mai use lekar apne sath anathashrma ki traf chal diya kunki mai bhi vahi par rahata hu kunki mera bhi koi nahi hai is duniya me . Mai yhi sab sochate hue ki jab bachho ko palana hi nahi hota hai to vah log bachho ko janm hi kyu dete hai or janm dene ke baad phir isi trah kisi kude ke dher par chhod dete hai.
Main aap logo ko apne baare me kuchh bata deta hu mera naam Rohan hai haa kunki iske baad jo sirname aata hai vah to hai hi nhi kunki ham lawarish jo hai jis trah aaj mujhe yah bachhi mili thik usi trah aaj se 10 shal pahle hi mujhe bhi ek kude ke dher se hamri anathashrma ke malkin Radha maa ne paya tha isi trah hamre anathashrma me karib 100 ke ass pass bache honge jinke khane pine or padhne ki sara kharcha anathashrma se uthaya jata hai lekin apne kharche ke liye kuchh ladke idhar aas pass ke dukano par chhota mota kaam kar lete hai jisase ham apni jaroorate puri karte hai. Aaj bhi mai isi trah raat ke 8 bje dukan bnd hone ke baad apne anathashrma lout raha tha tabhi yah bachhi mujhe mili jise lekar mai Radha maa ke pass aa gya jo ki apne cebin me baithi hui kuchh kaam kar rahi thi mere hatho me chhoti bachhi ko rota hua dekh kar mere pass ayi or boli
Radha maa : Rohan yah koun hai or kanha se lekar aa rahe ho.
Mai : maa ( ji haa dosto ham sare bachhe inhe maa kahkr hi bulate hai) yah mujhe kude ke dher par mili jis trah se mai apko mila tha is naate yah meri bahan hui lekin mai ise kafi der se shant karane ki koshish kar raha hu lekin yah chup hi nahi ho rahi hai.
R maa : achha chal thik hai laa mai dekhati hu kyu ro rahi hai ho sakta hai ise bhukh lagi ho laa mai ise dhoodh pila deti hu.
Itna bol kar R maa ne bachhi ko mujhase le liya or kebin se bahar chali gayi or unke sath mai bhi chala gya lekin vanah par janha par mai rahata tha. Jab mai vanha par gya to dekha ki lagbhag sabhi bachhe vanha par aa gaye the. Ab hamara koi or to tha nahi or bahar ke log bhi ham sabko hin najaro se hi dekhate the isliye jo rishata tha hamara apas me bahut hi achha tha ham sab me Naina Didi jo ki sabse sajhadaar thi vah mere pass ayi or boli
Naina didi : kyu re chhote suni hu ki ek bachhi ko lekar aya hai Kanha par mil gayi vah tujhe.
Unke pichhe sabhi mujhe dekh rahe the to maine unhe sab kuchh bata diya to vah boli
Naina didi : iska matlab ek or bachhi aa gayi ham logo ke bich is duniya ke tano ko sunane ke liye.
Itna bol kar vah bahar jaane lagi to mai bola
Mai : are Didi is trah kanha par jaa rahi hai.
Naina didi : kanha jaungi maa ke pass jaa rhi hu bachhi ko dekhane ke liye.
Unki baat ko sunkar kuchh unke sath chale gaye or kuchh bach gaye to ham apas me khelane lage. Is trah hi ham logo ka roj ka kaam hota tha subah uth kar anathashrma ke pass kuchh jamin thi jisme sabji ki kheti karwati thi maa usme hariya kaka ki madad karte or phir taiyaar hokar school jate or sham ko dukaan par . Aise hi karte hue karib char saal bit gaye or aaj Nainaa di ka ashrma me last din tha R Maa ke baad agar mere sabse karib koi tha to vah Naina di hi thi haa yah alag baat thi ki in bite char salo me hamri gudiya ne apni natkhat harkto ki vajah se sabki ladli ban gayi thi R maa or Naina di ki to usme jaan basti thi or mera to vah sab kuchh thi use har roj chocolate la kar dena or uski sabhi jaroorato ka khyal mai khud rkhata tha iske liye mai jo bhi bahar se kaam karke paise lata tha vah sab mai iske upar kharch kar deta tha. Idhar Naina di Radha maa se baat kar rahi thi or mai apne bishtar par baitha ro raha tha kunki ek vahi thi jo ki mujhe sabse jyada pyari thi lekin unke balig hone ke baad anathashrma me rahan muskil tha to vah hostel me apne liye kamara dekh liya tha or aaj vahi par sift ho rahi thi jisme maa ne unki sahayta ki thi. Mai batha hua tha ki tabhi mere kandhe par kisi ne hath rakha to mai samne dekha to paya ki samne Naina di khadi h to mai unhe dekh kar khud ko rok nahi paya or unke gale lag kar rone laga to vah mujhe shant karati hui boli
N didi : chhotu tu to ek bahaur ladka hai is trah ro kyu rha h mai kahi dur nahi jaa rahi hu pass me hi rahungi or roj tujhse or gudiya se milane ke liye aati to rahungi hi tu is trah rota kyu hai. Maine maa se baate kar liya hai jab mai job karne lagungi to tujhe or gudiya ko apne pass bula lungi phir ham sab sath rahenge samjha.
Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh nahi bola sirf haa me gardan hila diya. Idhar gudiya mujhe is trah rote hue dekh kar khud bhi rone lagi tab didi use jakr shant karayi. Phir vah chali gyi. Mere samne to khud ko majboot dikha rahi thi lekin baad me khud ko rone se nahi rook payi. Unke jaane ke baad ab meri duniya meri kitabe or gudiya tak hi simit rah gayi. Aise hi kuchh shal or nikal gaye or aaj mera 10th ka result nikla tha jisme maine pure state me top kiya tha kunki bachapn se mai padhane me kafi tej tha government school me padhane ke baad bhi maine top kiya tha jiski vajah se aaj pure school me samman diya gaya. Janha mai is vajah se bahut khus tha or jald se jald mai yah khabr Naina di or maa ko sunane ke liye betab tha or usse bhi jyada apni gudiya se milane ke liye lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki jo din mere liye ek traf khushiya lekar aya hai vahi din meri jindgi ka sabse bura din bhi sabit hoga

congrats for new story and very nice update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 2

Mai school se aaj jald se jald anathashram pahucha or jab mai vanha par pahucha to har roj ki trah aaj bhi meri gudiya mera intjaar kar rahi thi lekin aaj uski ankho me vah khushi or chamak nahi dikhai de rahi thi jo har rooj mujhe dekh kar aa jaya karti thi or to aaj uski ankhe puri trah se ro kar laal ho gayi thi aisa lag raha tha mano vah bahut der se ro rahi ho or uski ankho me ek bund bhi anshu ke aa jaye to mere liye yah mout se kam nahi hai to uske samne ghutno ke bal baith kar bola

Mai : kya baat hai gudiya kisi ne tujhe kuchh bola kya. Tu naam bata mujhe mai abhi uski khabar leta hu.
Gudiya meri baat sunkar kuchh boli nahi bas mere gale lag kar roti rahi to mai use shant karate hue bola

Mai : are meri gudiya tu pahle shant ho jaa iske baad bata kya hua hai kyu ro rahi hai tu.

Gudiya : Bhaiya mai apko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.

Mai : yah tu kya bol rahi hai tu mujhe chhod kar kyu jayegi kisne bola tujhe aisa chal mai dekhata hu kisi ne tere se mjak kiya hoga.
Mai usko lekar andar jaane laga jnha par sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the to sabse pahle maine sabko mithai diya jo ki mai ate wakt raste me le liya tha lekin janha sab subah mere school jate wakt itne kush the vahi is wakt sabhi ke chaharo par chinta dikhai de rahi thi lekin mai is baat par dhyan naa dete hue Radha maa ke kebin ki traf chal diya kunki is wakt vah vahi par thi lekin jab mai anadr gya to dekha ki vanha par do log baithe hue hai maine jakr sabse pahle R maa ke panv chhue or unhe apne result ke baare me bataya to vah bahut khus hui or boli
R maa : beta teri vajah se mai bahut khus hu tune mera sar garv se uncha kar diya.

Iske baad maine unko mithai diya jise unhone sabse pahle mujhe khilaya or iske baad maine samne baithe dono log ko jisme ek admi or ek orat thi un dono log ke paonv ko chhua or phir unhe mithai diya.
Tab R maa un logo se boli

R maa : mai iski hi baat kar rahi thi kunki aap logo ki ichha ko bina iske manjoori ke mai bhi kuchh nahi kar sakti kunki jab tak yah use nahi bolega tab tak vah aap logo ke sath nahi jaa sakti hai. Yah sach hai ki vah bachhi is ashram me rahti jaroor hai lekin uski padhai se lakar usski chhoti se chhoti jaroorato ka bhar yahi uthata hai.
Maine jab suna to Gudiya ke rone ka or baki logo ke chahare par jo dukh ke bhav the use samjhane me mujhe jara bhi der nahi lagi lekin phir bhi mai R maa se bola

Mai : maa aap yah kya bol rahi hai mai kuchh samjha nahi.
Tab Radha maa ki jagah vah lady boli

Lady : beta mai tumhe batati hu ham log yanha par ek bachha god lene ke liye aye hue the or hame ek bachhi bahut hi pyari lagi isliye ham use god lena chahate hai lekin yah maidam bol rahi hai ki bina tumhare iajajt ke nahi de sakti hai.

Mai jab yah suna to mujhe aisa laga kisi ne meri jindgi hi mujhase maang li ho mere chahare par abhi janha kuchh der pahale hi jamaane bhar ki khushi thi ab uspe utna hi dukh or taklif jhalakne laga mai turant hi vanha se nikal kar bahar aa gya. Mere bahar jane ke baad Radha maa boli

R maa : dekhiye mai jyada kuchh bol to nahi sakti hu kunki ham sab jante hai ki vah usase kitna pyaar karta hai. Umar me jyada bada to nahi hai lekin ek pita ki trah uski har jaroorato ka pura khyal rakhata hai aise me usse yah bolana ki vah use aap logo ko sounp de yah kitna muskil hai yah aap dono achhi trah samjh sakte hai.

Itna bol kar vah vanha se uth kar mere pass aa gyi janha par mai gudiya ko apne pass bitha kar khana khila raha tha kunki hariya kaka ne bataya ki usne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha to mai use khila raha tha or vah mujhe kafi der tak yu hi ham logo ko is trah dekhate rahne ke baad Radha maa boli

R Maa : Beta Rohan mai tumse kuchh baat karna chahti hu.

Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh bola nahi kunki mai janta tha ki vah kya bolana chahti hai lekin unke kai baar bolane ke baad mai Gudiya ko hariya kaka ke sath bahar bhej diya or phir bola

Mai : maa mai janata hu aap kya bolana chahti hai lekin yah baat to aap bhi achhi tarh se janti hai ki uske bina mera koi vajood nahi hai.

R maa : mai sab janti hu beta lekin mai jo bhi bol rahi hu vah Gudiya ke bhalai ke liye hi bol rahi hu. Vah log kafi amir hai or unki koi santaan nahi hai jiski vajah se vah log Gudiya ko god lena chahte hai kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hamari Gudiya ek achhi jindgi jiye.

Mai : maa aap hi batao mai kya karu. Uske bina jine ka to maine kabhi kalpan bhi nahi kiya hai or aap bol rahi hai ki mai use khud se dur kar du or agar maine kisi trah se khud ko samjha kar use bhej bhi du is baat ki kya gayrety hai ki vah log uska achhe se khayal rakhenge kal ko jab unka khud ka bachha hoga to vah log gudiya par dhyaan hi nahi denge.

Abhi meri baat sunkar maa kuchh bolati usase pahle hi vah lady ham logo ke pass ayi or boli

Lady : beta is baat ki tum bilkul chinta mat karo kunki hamri koi santaan kabhi nahi ho sakti hai isliye hi to ham tumahri gudiya ko apni beti banana chahte hai or is baat ka mai tumko yakin dilati hu ki gudiya ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hone dungi bas vah bachhi mere god me dal do beta mai tumhara yah ehshaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.

Yah sab bolate hue unki ankho me anshu aa gaye jise mai pochhate hue bola

Mai : aunty ji ham apko is baat ki iajajt de to denge lekin apko mujhe yah wada karna hoga ki aap meri gudiya ka khayal rakhengi.

Yah bol kar main vanha se uth kar jaane laga phir rook kar R maa se bola

Mai : maa mai abhi jaa raha hu aap Gudiya ko in logo ke sath bhej dijiyega.

R Maa : beta kam se kam ek baar usase mil to le.

Mai : nahi maa aap bhi janti ho ki mai sab kuchh bardasht kar sakta hu lekin gudiya ke ankho me anshu nahi dekh sakta hu or agar mai ruka to kamjoor pad jaunga phir ho sakta hai mai use nahi jaane du.

nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Mai itna bol kar vanha se bahar chala gaya. Mai vanha se aa to gaya lekin mera dil aaj bahut tadap raha tha mai use jaate hue ek baar dekhna chahta tha isliye aaj mai apne kaam par bhi nahi gya. ab vanha par bol diya tha jiski vajah se mai vanha se dur ek aisi jagah par aakar khada ho gya janha se mai gudiya ko bilkul saaf dekh sakta tha kunki hariya kaka use lekar bahar hi ghuma rahe the. Phir kuchh der baad hariya kaka use lekar andar chale gaye jnha par R maa us lady ka Gudiya se parichay karate hue boli

R MAA : gudiya isne milo yah aaj se tumhari maa hai or aaj ke baad tum inke sath hi rrahogi.

Ab gudiya yah sab kuchh pahale bhi kai baar dekh chuki thi kunki jo bhi bachhe yanha se jaate the vah kabhi lout kar nahi aate the isliye Gudiya rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa mai bhaiya ko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi pls aap mujhe mat bhejo mai unke begair nahi rah sakti hu.

R Maa : beti yah tumhare Bhaiya ne hi bola isliye ham tumhe bhej rahe hai. Vah bhi chahta hai ki tum inke sath hi jao.

Unki baat sunkar gudiya chilaate hue boli

Gudiya : nahi maa aap jhooth bol rahi hai mere bhaiya ne mujhse wada kiya tha ki vah mujhe khud se door nahi karenge phir vah aisa kaise bol sakte hai. Mai abhi jakar uanse puchhati hu.

Itna bolkar gudiya pure ashram me mujhe khoja jab mai use nahi mila to vah mujhe khojate hue dukan par bhi gayi janha par mai kaam kiya karata hu lekin jab use mai vanha par bhi nhi mila to vah rote hue phir wapas aa gayi or rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa bhaiya kanha hai maine unhe sab jagah khoja par vah mujhe kahi nahi mile aap batao vah kanha mai unse baat karna chahti hu.

Ab jab koi mere baare me janta hota to koi batata naa. Mai isliye hi kisi ko nahi bata kar aaya tha kunki mai janta tha agar kisi ko bhi mere baare me pata hoga to vah Gudiya ke rone ki vajah se mere pass lekar aa jayega. Idhar kafi der tak intjaar karne ke baad jab mai vapas nahi aya to R maa Gudiya se boli

R maa : beti abhi tum inke sath jao jab vah ayega to ham log tumse milane ke liye jaroor ayenge.

R Maa ki baat sunkar Gudiya ne jo bola use sunkar sabki aankhe nam ho gayi

Gudiya : nahi maa unse bol dijiyega ki aaj ke baad unki Gudiya unke liye mar chuki hai ab aaj ke baad mai kabhi bhi unki sakl tak nahi dekhungi. Vah yahi chahte hai naa ki mai unse dur chali jau to mai unse itna dur chali jaungi ki phir kabhi wapas lout kar nahi aungi.

Itna bol kar vah rote hue andar chali gayi or kuchh der baad vah apna ek baig lekar aa gyi jisme uske kitab the or kuchh kapde. Iske baad vah us lady se boli

Gudiya : chaliye aunty ji ab hame yanha se chalana chahiye kunki ab yanha par koi mera nahi hai.

ITna bol kar vah unki layi hui gadi me baith gayi or uske sath vah admi bhi chala gya lekin vah lady R maa se boli

Lady: maidam abhi vah naraj hai isliye vah aisa bol rahi hai. Jab uska gussa thanda hoga tab mai use aap sabse milane ke liye jaroor lekar aungi.

Unki baat sunkar R maa boli

R Maa : kash aapki baat sach ho lekin jitna ham use jante hai vah bahut jiddi hai or ek baar jo usne than liya phir uske faishale ko badalna itna asan nhi hota hai or Rohan ke naa milane ki vajah se uske ball man par jo prbhav pada hai use dur karna itna saral nahi hoga or haa apse meri ek vinti hai ki use koi takleef naa ho mana ki vah meri beti nahi hai lekin jab vah hamko mili thi tab vah matr kuchh hi din ki isliye ham sabki jaan hai or Rohan ki to jine ka makshad ban gyi thi. Ab iske jaane ke baad use sambhalana ham logo ke liye kafi muskil hone wala hai.

Aise hi kuchh der baat karne ke baad vah lady R maa se vida lekar Gudiya ke sath chali gayi or uske jaane ke baad mujhase raha nahi gya to mai usko dekhane ke liye ek last ashafal koshish ki us gadi ka pichh karne ki lekin mai doud kar kitna pichha karta akhir me nirash hokar lout aya or akr apne bishtar par baith gaya jnha par abhi kuchh der pahle hi mai Gudiya ke sath baitha hua khana kha rha tha. Is wakt mujhe uski bahut yaad aa rahi thi or isliye mai kafi der tak yu hi uske kapde ko apni banh me jakde hue rota raha or rote rote mai kab behosh ho gya yah mujhe khud pata nahi chala.

Idhar vah log Gudiya ko lekar apne sath Delhi jaane ki taiyaari karne lage

Ab Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai unka intro de deta hu

JJagdish sharma (gudiya ke pita) Delhi ke jaane mane businessman umr karib 35 shal hai or ek accident me inke guptang par chot lagne ki vajah se yah kabhi baap nahi ban sakte hai isliye inhone gudiya ko god lene ka faishla kiya hai

Mahak sharma ( gudiya ki maa). Umr 30 shal. Vaise to yah apne pati ke sath Delhi me hi rahti hai par inka mayaka yahi par hai or inhone jagdish se love marriage kiya hai. Isme inke pure parivaar ne sath diya kunki dono parivaaro ka pahle se kafi achhe sambndh the.

Kailaash sharma ( jagdish ke pita) inke hi raay pr in logo ne gudiya ko god liya hai kunki yah pahle bhi gudiya se uske anathashram me mil chuke hai jab vah vanha donetion dene ke liye gaye hue the.

Kavita sharma (mahak ki bahn or gudiya ki real mother) umr 38 shal inki shadi ek school teacher se hui hai jise ladkiya pasnd nahi hai kunki vah unhe bojh manta hai.

Kavita ke baki parivaar or Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai jab unka role ayega to intro dunga

very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

 

[Rahamiprbha]

very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

nice update bhai

congrats for new story and very nice update

Rasprad kahani. Intejar hai agle update ka.

Thanks dosto kahani ko pasnd karne ke liye

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE 2

Mai school se aaj jald se jald anathashram pahucha or jab mai vanha par pahucha to har roj ki trah aaj bhi meri gudiya mera intjaar kar rahi thi lekin aaj uski ankho me vah khushi or chamak nahi dikhai de rahi thi jo har rooj mujhe dekh kar aa jaya karti thi or to aaj uski ankhe puri trah se ro kar laal ho gayi thi aisa lag raha tha mano vah bahut der se ro rahi ho or uski ankho me ek bund bhi anshu ke aa jaye to mere liye yah mout se kam nahi hai to uske samne ghutno ke bal baith kar bola

Mai : kya baat hai gudiya kisi ne tujhe kuchh bola kya. Tu naam bata mujhe mai abhi uski khabar leta hu.
Gudiya meri baat sunkar kuchh boli nahi bas mere gale lag kar roti rahi to mai use shant karate hue bola

Mai : are meri gudiya tu pahle shant ho jaa iske baad bata kya hua hai kyu ro rahi hai tu.

Gudiya : Bhaiya mai apko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye.

Mai : yah tu kya bol rahi hai tu mujhe chhod kar kyu jayegi kisne bola tujhe aisa chal mai dekhata hu kisi ne tere se mjak kiya hoga.
Mai usko lekar andar jaane laga jnha par sabhi mujhe hi dekh rahe the to sabse pahle maine sabko mithai diya jo ki mai ate wakt raste me le liya tha lekin janha sab subah mere school jate wakt itne kush the vahi is wakt sabhi ke chaharo par chinta dikhai de rahi thi lekin mai is baat par dhyan naa dete hue Radha maa ke kebin ki traf chal diya kunki is wakt vah vahi par thi lekin jab mai anadr gya to dekha ki vanha par do log baithe hue hai maine jakr sabse pahle R maa ke panv chhue or unhe apne result ke baare me bataya to vah bahut khus hui or boli
R maa : beta teri vajah se mai bahut khus hu tune mera sar garv se uncha kar diya.

Iske baad maine unko mithai diya jise unhone sabse pahle mujhe khilaya or iske baad maine samne baithe dono log ko jisme ek admi or ek orat thi un dono log ke paonv ko chhua or phir unhe mithai diya.
Tab R maa un logo se boli

R maa : mai iski hi baat kar rahi thi kunki aap logo ki ichha ko bina iske manjoori ke mai bhi kuchh nahi kar sakti kunki jab tak yah use nahi bolega tab tak vah aap logo ke sath nahi jaa sakti hai. Yah sach hai ki vah bachhi is ashram me rahti jaroor hai lekin uski padhai se lakar usski chhoti se chhoti jaroorato ka bhar yahi uthata hai.
Maine jab suna to Gudiya ke rone ka or baki logo ke chahare par jo dukh ke bhav the use samjhane me mujhe jara bhi der nahi lagi lekin phir bhi mai R maa se bola

Mai : maa aap yah kya bol rahi hai mai kuchh samjha nahi.
Tab Radha maa ki jagah vah lady boli

Lady : beta mai tumhe batati hu ham log yanha par ek bachha god lene ke liye aye hue the or hame ek bachhi bahut hi pyari lagi isliye ham use god lena chahate hai lekin yah maidam bol rahi hai ki bina tumhare iajajt ke nahi de sakti hai.

Mai jab yah suna to mujhe aisa laga kisi ne meri jindgi hi mujhase maang li ho mere chahare par abhi janha kuchh der pahale hi jamaane bhar ki khushi thi ab uspe utna hi dukh or taklif jhalakne laga mai turant hi vanha se nikal kar bahar aa gya. Mere bahar jane ke baad Radha maa boli

R maa : dekhiye mai jyada kuchh bol to nahi sakti hu kunki ham sab jante hai ki vah usase kitna pyaar karta hai. Umar me jyada bada to nahi hai lekin ek pita ki trah uski har jaroorato ka pura khyal rakhata hai aise me usse yah bolana ki vah use aap logo ko sounp de yah kitna muskil hai yah aap dono achhi trah samjh sakte hai.

Itna bol kar vah vanha se uth kar mere pass aa gyi janha par mai gudiya ko apne pass bitha kar khana khila raha tha kunki hariya kaka ne bataya ki usne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya tha to mai use khila raha tha or vah mujhe kafi der tak yu hi ham logo ko is trah dekhate rahne ke baad Radha maa boli

R Maa : Beta Rohan mai tumse kuchh baat karna chahti hu.

Mai unki baat sunkar kuchh bola nahi kunki mai janta tha ki vah kya bolana chahti hai lekin unke kai baar bolane ke baad mai Gudiya ko hariya kaka ke sath bahar bhej diya or phir bola

Mai : maa mai janata hu aap kya bolana chahti hai lekin yah baat to aap bhi achhi tarh se janti hai ki uske bina mera koi vajood nahi hai.

R maa : mai sab janti hu beta lekin mai jo bhi bol rahi hu vah Gudiya ke bhalai ke liye hi bol rahi hu. Vah log kafi amir hai or unki koi santaan nahi hai jiski vajah se vah log Gudiya ko god lena chahte hai kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hamari Gudiya ek achhi jindgi jiye.

Mai : maa aap hi batao mai kya karu. Uske bina jine ka to maine kabhi kalpan bhi nahi kiya hai or aap bol rahi hai ki mai use khud se dur kar du or agar maine kisi trah se khud ko samjha kar use bhej bhi du is baat ki kya gayrety hai ki vah log uska achhe se khayal rakhenge kal ko jab unka khud ka bachha hoga to vah log gudiya par dhyaan hi nahi denge.

Abhi meri baat sunkar maa kuchh bolati usase pahle hi vah lady ham logo ke pass ayi or boli

Lady : beta is baat ki tum bilkul chinta mat karo kunki hamri koi santaan kabhi nahi ho sakti hai isliye hi to ham tumahri gudiya ko apni beti banana chahte hai or is baat ka mai tumko yakin dilati hu ki gudiya ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hone dungi bas vah bachhi mere god me dal do beta mai tumhara yah ehshaan kabhi nahi bhulungi.

Yah sab bolate hue unki ankho me anshu aa gaye jise mai pochhate hue bola

Mai : aunty ji ham apko is baat ki iajajt de to denge lekin apko mujhe yah wada karna hoga ki aap meri gudiya ka khayal rakhengi.

Yah bol kar main vanha se uth kar jaane laga phir rook kar R maa se bola

Mai : maa mai abhi jaa raha hu aap Gudiya ko in logo ke sath bhej dijiyega.

R Maa : beta kam se kam ek baar usase mil to le.

Mai : nahi maa aap bhi janti ho ki mai sab kuchh bardasht kar sakta hu lekin gudiya ke ankho me anshu nahi dekh sakta hu or agar mai ruka to kamjoor pad jaunga phir ho sakta hai mai use nahi jaane du.

Nice update

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Mai itna bol kar vanha se bahar chala gaya. Mai vanha se aa to gaya lekin mera dil aaj bahut tadap raha tha mai use jaate hue ek baar dekhna chahta tha isliye aaj mai apne kaam par bhi nahi gya. ab vanha par bol diya tha jiski vajah se mai vanha se dur ek aisi jagah par aakar khada ho gya janha se mai gudiya ko bilkul saaf dekh sakta tha kunki hariya kaka use lekar bahar hi ghuma rahe the. Phir kuchh der baad hariya kaka use lekar andar chale gaye jnha par R maa us lady ka Gudiya se parichay karate hue boli

R MAA : gudiya isne milo yah aaj se tumhari maa hai or aaj ke baad tum inke sath hi rrahogi.

Ab gudiya yah sab kuchh pahale bhi kai baar dekh chuki thi kunki jo bhi bachhe yanha se jaate the vah kabhi lout kar nahi aate the isliye Gudiya rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa mai bhaiya ko chhod kar kahi nahi jaungi pls aap mujhe mat bhejo mai unke begair nahi rah sakti hu.

R Maa : beti yah tumhare Bhaiya ne hi bola isliye ham tumhe bhej rahe hai. Vah bhi chahta hai ki tum inke sath hi jao.

Unki baat sunkar gudiya chilaate hue boli

Gudiya : nahi maa aap jhooth bol rahi hai mere bhaiya ne mujhse wada kiya tha ki vah mujhe khud se door nahi karenge phir vah aisa kaise bol sakte hai. Mai abhi jakar uanse puchhati hu.

Itna bolkar gudiya pure ashram me mujhe khoja jab mai use nahi mila to vah mujhe khojate hue dukan par bhi gayi janha par mai kaam kiya karata hu lekin jab use mai vanha par bhi nhi mila to vah rote hue phir wapas aa gayi or rote hue R maa se boli

Gudiya : maa bhaiya kanha hai maine unhe sab jagah khoja par vah mujhe kahi nahi mile aap batao vah kanha mai unse baat karna chahti hu.

Ab jab koi mere baare me janta hota to koi batata naa. Mai isliye hi kisi ko nahi bata kar aaya tha kunki mai janta tha agar kisi ko bhi mere baare me pata hoga to vah Gudiya ke rone ki vajah se mere pass lekar aa jayega. Idhar kafi der tak intjaar karne ke baad jab mai vapas nahi aya to R maa Gudiya se boli

R maa : beti abhi tum inke sath jao jab vah ayega to ham log tumse milane ke liye jaroor ayenge.

R Maa ki baat sunkar Gudiya ne jo bola use sunkar sabki aankhe nam ho gayi

Gudiya : nahi maa unse bol dijiyega ki aaj ke baad unki Gudiya unke liye mar chuki hai ab aaj ke baad mai kabhi bhi unki sakl tak nahi dekhungi. Vah yahi chahte hai naa ki mai unse dur chali jau to mai unse itna dur chali jaungi ki phir kabhi wapas lout kar nahi aungi.

Itna bol kar vah rote hue andar chali gayi or kuchh der baad vah apna ek baig lekar aa gyi jisme uske kitab the or kuchh kapde. Iske baad vah us lady se boli

Gudiya : chaliye aunty ji ab hame yanha se chalana chahiye kunki ab yanha par koi mera nahi hai.

ITna bol kar vah unki layi hui gadi me baith gayi or uske sath vah admi bhi chala gya lekin vah lady R maa se boli

Lady: maidam abhi vah naraj hai isliye vah aisa bol rahi hai. Jab uska gussa thanda hoga tab mai use aap sabse milane ke liye jaroor lekar aungi.

Unki baat sunkar R maa boli

R Maa : kash aapki baat sach ho lekin jitna ham use jante hai vah bahut jiddi hai or ek baar jo usne than liya phir uske faishale ko badalna itna asan nhi hota hai or Rohan ke naa milane ki vajah se uske ball man par jo prbhav pada hai use dur karna itna saral nahi hoga or haa apse meri ek vinti hai ki use koi takleef naa ho mana ki vah meri beti nahi hai lekin jab vah hamko mili thi tab vah matr kuchh hi din ki isliye ham sabki jaan hai or Rohan ki to jine ka makshad ban gyi thi. Ab iske jaane ke baad use sambhalana ham logo ke liye kafi muskil hone wala hai.

Aise hi kuchh der baat karne ke baad vah lady R maa se vida lekar Gudiya ke sath chali gayi or uske jaane ke baad mujhase raha nahi gya to mai usko dekhane ke liye ek last ashafal koshish ki us gadi ka pichh karne ki lekin mai doud kar kitna pichha karta akhir me nirash hokar lout aya or akr apne bishtar par baith gaya jnha par abhi kuchh der pahle hi mai Gudiya ke sath baitha hua khana kha rha tha. Is wakt mujhe uski bahut yaad aa rahi thi or isliye mai kafi der tak yu hi uske kapde ko apni banh me jakde hue rota raha or rote rote mai kab behosh ho gya yah mujhe khud pata nahi chala.

Idhar vah log Gudiya ko lekar apne sath Delhi jaane ki taiyaari karne lage

Ab Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai unka intro de deta hu

JJagdish sharma (gudiya ke pita) Delhi ke jaane mane businessman umr karib 35 shal hai or ek accident me inke guptang par chot lagne ki vajah se yah kabhi baap nahi ban sakte hai isliye inhone gudiya ko god lene ka faishla kiya hai

Mahak sharma ( gudiya ki maa). Umr 30 shal. Vaise to yah apne pati ke sath Delhi me hi rahti hai par inka mayaka yahi par hai or inhone jagdish se love marriage kiya hai. Isme inke pure parivaar ne sath diya kunki dono parivaaro ka pahle se kafi achhe sambndh the.

Kailaash sharma ( jagdish ke pita) inke hi raay pr in logo ne gudiya ko god liya hai kunki yah pahle bhi gudiya se uske anathashram me mil chuke hai jab vah vanha donetion dene ke liye gaye hue the.

Kavita sharma (mahak ki bahn or gudiya ki real mother) umr 38 shal inki shadi ek school teacher se hui hai jise ladkiya pasnd nahi hai kunki vah unhe bojh manta hai.

Kavita ke baki parivaar or Gudiya jinke sath gayi hai jab unka role ayega to intro dunga

Superb update

 

[Naik]

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