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Fantasy The devil watch

Kasa sex apko jyada pasand h ?

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  • Master slave sex

    Votes: 85 39.0%
  • Hardcore

    Votes: 88 40.4%
  • Bondage

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Gys ma kai dino sa xforum ki stories read krta hu meri favourite stories mainly incest, sci-fi and fantasy hi hoti h jinhe ma read krta hu.
Mana kai stories padhi h jinma hero ko supernatural powers milti h or muje vo bhot achhi lgti h.
Ma ek bhot hi imaginative insan hu
So mene bhi socha ki aj ek story ma bhi likhu.
Ma ek naya writer hu to ho skta h apko mere story pasand na aye par padhna jarur or batana ki kya sudhar ho skta h.
Jin logo sci-fi, fantasy, supernatural power,group sex, kinky ,bondage sex pasand h ya story unlogo ka liya h.
Lekin ma ise adultery bilkul nahi krugasirf hero ki sex dikhaunga kyuki mere hisab sa Jo log cukold ya apna ghar ki aurto ko kisi or ka sath sex krnwate h wo namrd hote h or hamara hero sachha mard hoga.
Characters ka introduction aj rat 8 bje tak ayega or phla update kal. ya story lambi jyegi thoda sabr rkhna
Ma ise teen ya do parts ma likhuga

To shuru krta hu

THE DEVIL WATCH

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by shlok the devil

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INDEX

Character introduction

UPDATES
Part 1 - Landon saga
(Completed)

Part 2- Incest saga
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Bhai next update kab tak aaye ga
Actually bhai ab ma clear kr deta hu ki ma koi function ma nhi hu actually mere ek relative ko nashe ki lat lag gyi thi to unhe rehab center ma dalne ka liya edhar udhar dhakke kha rha tha abtak kabhi koi chiz mangte the kabhi koi document but ab ma free hu Tuesday ko de dunga
Mene to adha update likh bhi Diya tha but pata nhi jab site open kri to sab gayab mene draft ma save bhi kiya tha jab bhi
 
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Actually bhai ab ma clear kr deta hu ki ma koi function ma nhi hu actually mere ek relative ko nashe ki lat lag gyi thi to unhe rehab center ma dalne ka liya edhar udhar dhakke kha rha tha abtak kabhi koi chiz mangte the kabhi koi document but ab ma free hu Tuesday ko de dunga
Mene to adha update likh bhi Diya tha but pata nhi jab site open kri to sab gayab mene draft ma save bhi kiya tha jab bhi

Behtar hoga ke story aap apne computer ya Google Drive mein save karle kyon ki forum mein draft nahin rehte
 

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Guys vase to update Monday ko ana wali thi par ap logo ka liya jaldi da rha hu



Update2: Entry Of Devil Watch

Location: up state

Satyanand ji or unka pura parivar khana khane ka liya Betha tha tabhi uski sare potiya dining table par ati h
Tabhi Suman or Shreya apna dada ko peecha sa aka hug krti h

Sheraya : daadaji...

Dada: meri gudiya kase ho

Suman: dada Jia pko pata h kal hamara college join ho rha h

Dada ji : pati h meri gudiya jane kab tum sab itni badi ho gai

Megha: dada ji ab apki tabiyat kaise h

Santosh : bilkul thik nahi h beta ya apni tabiyat ka bilkul dhyan nhi de rhe

Megha : dada ji ya bhot galat baat h

Tabhi vinay full suit buit ma bhar ata h
Ghar ka malik ek tarah sa vinay hi tha kyuki shlok ka chacha to apahiz tha
Or us ka tau kheti badi jameen ka kaam dekhta tha 'xenon' ka malik vinay hi tha

Vinay : megha bilkul thik kh rhe h pitaji apko apni tabiyat ka khyal rkhna chaiya

Dada: beta ab to jane ki umar a gyi h

Dadi : bilkul sahi kh rhe h ye bas mrna sa phla apne shlok ko ek bar dekh le

Vase to shlok Shalini ka adopted tha fir bhi Santosh use apna pota manti thi or satyanand bhi use Jan sa jyada pyar krta tha .
Shalini ab tak mar chuki thi or vinay dusri shadi kr chuka tha shweta sa.
Shlok ka nam sunkar shweta chid gyi

Vinay : maa mene bola h na ki us manhoos ka naam is ghar ma koi nhi lega uske chakkar ma hi mene apni Shalini ko kho diya.

Vinay Shalini sa bilkul bhi pyar nahi krta tha vo use randi manta tha par gharwalo ka samne usna sharafat ka chola odh rakha tha. Or das sal phla Shalini ki maut kuch is prakar Hui ki sab uska jimmadara shlok ko manne lage.
Jabki satyanand or Santosh ya bat man sa nhi mante the
Vo apna pote ko bhot pyar krte the .

Esa kya hua tha das saal phla vo age pata chalaga

Megha : ha dadi us rascal ki vajah sa meri mumma mar gyi uski bat mat kro 😭

Dadi : thik h beta

Dada : chalo ab sab khana Khao

Vinay shlok sa nafrat krta tha or megha or Suman sa bhi par ya bat vo unhe dikhata nhi tha kyuki vo unhe randiya hi manta tha. Vo chahta tha ki jald hi dono ki shadi karke vo unhe Vida kr da par stayanand ki ichha thi ki vo jab tak chahe pad skte h
Vase megha or suman Shalini ki beti nhi thi vo uski maa ka kothe pa kam krna wali ek vaishya ki beti thi par use ya bat pata nhi thi. .
vinay na kisi ko bhi ya bat unhe batana sa mana kiya tha vo ek achha bap krna ka achha natak krta tha
vinay ki gandi Nazar unpe thi
ya bat shweta tak ko nhi pata thi
Vo unhe apni beti nhi manti thi par vinay ka dar sa khuch nhi khti thi par vinay to khud unhe bhogna chahta tha
Meghna or suman bhi vinay ko apna bap manti thi


Vinay : ji pita ji
Vinay ek agyakari beta tha vo hamesa apna pita ka account paso sa bhara rkhta tha or kabhi unse hisab nhi mangta h
Par satyanand kabhi un paso ko istemal nhi krte
Un paso sa adha sa jyada pase vo shlok ko bhej dete
Vo sab sa chupa rhe the ki shlok Landon ma h.

Location: Dubai

Do ladkiya hizab phna hua Dubai airport par ek sath chal rhi thi unka hat ma ek suitcase tha
Vo jaldi jaldi kadam badha rahi thi jase mano koi unka picha kar rha ho. Or bat shi bhi thi khuch Gunda airport par unhe hi dhund rahe the unki photo lekar .





Ella
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Bella

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Vo dono jaldi sa ek plane ma un gundo sa bachte bachate baith gyi.vo plane ja rha tha dubai to Landon.

Location : Landon
Shlok school ka liya taiyar ho gya tha or vo apna baal bna rha tha tabhi uska phone Baja

Shlok : hello
Lisa : happy birthday my birthday boy

Shlok : tumna already bol diya tha subah

Lisa : ek bar or shi
Shlok : ab kyu phone kra

Lisa: tumhe pata h na ki aj tumhe muje pick krna h mere ghar sa.

Shlok: lisa subah tumne ya bhi bata diya tha kyu time waste kr rhi ho.

Lisa: ok baba aj to celebration hoga or sirf ma or tum jaenge resturant

Shlok : muje koi celebration nhi krna

Lisa: par kya tumuje ek treat bhi nhi de skte

Shlok : achha thik h

Lisa : To aj school ka bad pakka rha jaldi a jao

Shlok : ok bye

Lisa : bye 😍

Note: Landon ma sab English ma bat krte h lisa or shlok bhi
Ma janbuj kr hindi ma likh rha hu lisa ko sirf hindi ka Gina chuna sentence ata h
Shlok ko hindi english dono ati h


Phir shlok apni bike nikal kar nikal jata h lisa ka ghar
Shlok bhot smart h gora h or aj usna black t shirt black jeans black jacket or black Google's or upar sa uski black bike
Bike kafi mehngi h name mention nhi kr rha apni pasand ki koi bhi man lo
Shlok ko apna dada sa Paisa Lena pasand nhi h fir bhi uske dada na use apni Kasam deke ya sab diya h.

Shlok pahuch jata h lisa ka ghar vha use Julia poodho ko Pani deti Hui milti h

Julia(lisa ki ma)42

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Julia : good morning shlok and happy birthday

Shlok : thankyou aunty.

Tabhi lisa bhar ati h or vo shlok ka dekh ka hakka Bakka ho jati h Vo bhot smart lg rha tha

Lisa : happy birthday shlok 😍😍

Shlok : kitni bar khogi

Lisa : jitni bar man karega

Shlok : chalo der ho rhi h

Julia : shlok phla breakfast kar lo

Shlok : nhi aunty ma kar ke aya hu.

Tabhi lisa ekdum sa bolti h

Lisa : achha kya khaya juice piya h ya koi breakfast h

Shlok lisa ko ankhe dikhata h

Par lisa khanda uchka ka has deti h

Julia : shlok mana kha na kha lo

Shlok : hmm aunty

Shlok lisa or Julia breakfast kar rhe hote h tabhi Julia ka phone bajta h

Julia : hello
Julia phone pa bat krke khush ho jati h or phone katti h

Lisa : kiska phone tha mumma

Julia : beta teri masi ka phone tha vo Landon a rhi h vi yha ek hospital ma appoint ho gyi h

Lisa : sach

Julia : ha beta to aj tum or shlok use airport jake le aoge kya

Lisa : mumma par bike pa sirf do log hi baith skta h shlok ki

Julia : shlok to kya tum jake le aoge kya

Shlok :hmm

Lisa : no way aj hmare already plans h

Julia : beta uska plane 2 bje a jayga tumhare paas phir bhi purra din hoga

Shlok : it's ok aunty ma le aunga

Lisa shlok ko chid ka dekhte h

Phir lisa or shlok apna last paper deke ata h
Shlok airport chala jata h or lisa ghar. Ek plane airport par land krta h. us plane sa ek khubsurat ladki nikalti h

Emly(lisa ki mausi )(26 years)

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Usi plane sa elle or Bella utarti h vo dekhti h ki khuch gunda vhi airport pa unka wait kr rhe hoti h vo unse Bach ka bhag rhi hoti h k tabhi Bella emly sa takra jati h or emly or Bella ka hath ma jo suit case tha vo ekdum same hota h

Tabhi Ella glti sa emly wala suitcase utha leti h or

Ella : soory mam

Or vo dono jaldi sa chali jati h

Emly : ( man ma )ediots

Tabhi emly bhar ati h dusra suitcase utha k jisa vo apna samj rhi thi
Bhar use shlok milta h
Uske hat ma emly nam ka board hota h vo smaj jati h ki vo use lene ya h

Emly : hi
Shlok : emly?
Emly : yes ,shlok?
Shlok : hmm
Emly: to chla
Shlok gardan hila deta h Or hat sa bike pa bethna ka ishara krta h
Emly : nice bike❤️
Shlok: Beth jaiya
Emly : mana kha nice bike
Shlok : mene sun liya ab beth bhi jaiya
Emly : oooook🥴
Vo emly ko leke lisa ka ghar ata h julia sbka introduction karwate h

Emly: didi jiju kha h
Julia : woh to clinic ma hi rhta h ajkal
Khuch jyada hi kam h unhe aj kal
Emly : ok
Thodi der bad emly shlok ko ghur rhi hoti h
Lisa notice kar lete h
Phir emly apna bag dekhte h to bolti h
Emly : shit ya kya
Julia : kya hua
Emly : mera bag lgta h un ediots sa exchange ho gya
Fir una vo Ella Bella vala incident batati h
Julia : kya tum police station ja kar complain likha doge plz
Shlok : sure vase kya tha apke bag ma
Emly : mere important certificates or is ma to koi Ganda sa box h
Shlok : muje dijiya ma police ko ya wala de dunga or apka wala ki missing report likwa dunga
Shlok vo box leke chala jata h police station par vo box vo apna ghar hi bhul jata h kyuki vo police station Jane sa phla apna ghar jata h shower lene.
Or jab use is chiz ka pata chalta h to woh bas emly wale box ki complain krwa deta hi ki jab wo emly ka box wapas krengi to wo bhi unhe unka box de dega
Shlok police station sa bhar nikalta h
Vaha lisa shlok ko phone krti h
Shlok: hello
Lisa: treat yad h na
SHlok: mera man nhi h yar ma thak gya hu
Lisa: plz yar mere liya
Shlok: hmm ,kha?
Lisa:xxxxxxhotel.
Shlok: ok 15 minute ma pahuch rha hu.
Lisa: ok😍ma bhi bas a rhi hu.
Lisa khush hokar phone rakhti or phir ek bar hasti h or bolti h
Lisa :yess😍😍
Or wo jaise hi palti uske samne emly thi
Emly : kya bat h kisse bat kr rhi thi.
Lisa : kise sa nhi masi friend thi.
Emly: thi ya tha, shlok tha na?
Lisa :hmm😳🙈
Emly: bhut jyada attitude h usme
Lisa: nahi nahi masi vo bhot achha ldka h bas thoda kam bolta h
Emly : achha to hma bhi mila Zara usse
Lisa : ap mili to thi subah infact wo hi apko laya tha airport sa
Emly : achha sa nhi mili na
Lisa : kal mil Lena masi
Emly : kal kyu aj uska birthday hai mene suna
Lisa : h to
Emly : to kya wo mujhe treat nhi de skta
Lisa : esi bat nhi h masi wooo..
Emly : wo kya agr ya date h to ma nhi chalti.
Lisa : nhi masi date nhi h
Emly : to kya dikkat hai
Lisa: ummmm..thik h
Emly: ya Hui na bat Lisa ma tuje us akdu ka sath akela nhi chodna chahti samji
Lisa: ok masi

Shlok hotel ka bhar unka wait kr rha hota h
Tabhi ek cab ma sa lisa nikalti h
Wo bhot Sundar lg rhi thi
Sab ladke use dekhna laga
Par shlok bas use ek bar dekhta h
Lisa : ya kya shlok tumna change nhi Kiya
Shok : to kya hua
Lisa : aj tumhara birthday hai
Shlok : to
Lisa : toh khuch nhi buddhu
Shlok hotel ki tarf ishara krta h
Shlok: andar chala
Emly : ha chalo
Shlok use dekh kar chownk jata h or lisa sa ankho sa puchta h ki ya yha kaisa
Emly : use mat puchu actually mera bhi man tha bhar ghumna ka to a gai any problem .
Shlok: no 🥱
Emly : to chalo


Vhi dusri taraf vo box shlok ka ghar ma tha tabhi koi shakhs pipe sa shlok ki balkani ma ata h or master key sa darwaja khol kar andar ghus jata h or hall ma use shlok ka laptop iPad or kafi mehnga saman dikhta h jise dekh kar uski ankhe chmakna lgti h
Ji ha vo shakhs ek chor tha jo chori ka irada sa aya tha
Tabhi balkani ka darwaja apna ap band ho jata h or shlok ka ghar ma ajeeb ajeeb awaje ana lgti h
Jaise kutte ka rone ki
Kisi ka hasne kior rone ki
Rakshas ki gurraht ki jaise
Vo chor dar jata h
Tabhi use dikhta h ki Ek light shlok ke bedroom sa a rhi h
Vo darte hue bedroom ma jata h jha use vo box dikhata h jo chamak rha tha ya yu kho ki jal rha tha
Pura Ghar ma andhera tha
Vo us box ko uthata h or kholta h usme ek ghadi hoti h
Ek watch jisme ek devil ki khopdi ka design hota h or uske patto par likha hota h 666 matlab devil number
Tabhi awaje tej ho jati h or wo ghadi khud ba khud us chor ka hato ma bandh jati h
Par uski energy itni jyada hoti h ki voh seh nahi pata or vo chillata h
Chor : ahhhhhjjjjj nhiiiiiiiiiii bachaooooo koi bachaooooo
Or thodi der bad uas energy sa vo bilkul dhua ban jata h or ghadi nicha gir jate h
Fir usma vo khopdi hasne lgti h


Vha shlok lisa or emly ek table par baithe the
Emly : tumna change nhi Kiya fir bhi achha lg rha ho not bad 😒
Lisa : ha shlok tum achha lg rhe ho
Shlok : kya khaogi
Lisa : jo tum bolo birthday tumhara hai 🥴
Emly : esa kase, ma to xxxxkhaugi
Shlok na vo hi order kr diya
Khane ka bad jab sab vapas jane lage to lisa shlok ko side ma leke gyi or use uska gift diya or bola ki ghar Jake kholna plzzz.
Shlok jab apna ghar aya or apna bedroom ma gya to use vo box khula hua dikha or watch niche padi dikhi vo chaunk gya usna apna ghar check Kiya par saare darwaje band the uski kuch samj ma nhi aya to wo shower leke us watch ko table pa rakh ka sooo gya .

Uske sote hi devil watch phirse chamkne lagi 👿👿..


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Aj ka liya itna hi next update thrusday ko ayegi kya shlok devil watch ka next shikar hoga esa kya h us Devil watch ma

Update 3 shlok loses his virginity( coming soon)thrusday 8 pm
Good one
keep posting❤️❤️
 

Bilal jan

My Attitude your problem 🖕 Your attitude my foot
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Actually bhai ab ma clear kr deta hu ki ma koi function ma nhi hu actually mere ek relative ko nashe ki lat lag gyi thi to unhe rehab center ma dalne ka liya edhar udhar dhakke kha rha tha abtak kabhi koi chiz mangte the kabhi koi document but ab ma free hu Tuesday ko de dunga
Mene to adha update likh bhi Diya tha but pata nhi jab site open kri to sab gayab mene draft ma save bhi kiya tha jab bhi
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UPDATE 15 : SAZA (the punishment )



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Khuch bachhe or ladkiya dare hue khadi thi or unhi ke as pass bhut sare log guns lekar khade the

Or samne ek chair par ek admi overcoat pehne hue apni tang ka upar tang rakh kar betha tha aur usne muh me ek sigar lagaya hua tha

Tabhi vo admi chair sa khada hota h

Big boss: ya kon h

Uska ishara pas ma padi hui laash sa tha

Leader: boss ya ladka pata nhi kha sa upar a gya vo to mene isa shi time par dekh liya or mar Diya



Big boss: "Aj delivery ho Jani chaiya or in bachho ko bhi kam par laga do or is ladke ki body bhi thikane laga dena "

Vo shlok ko dhyan sa dekhe bina hi khta h

Leader: Ji boss

"Hmm"

Or itna kehker vo vha sa jane lgta h or building ka terrace par phuchta h
Jha uska chopper taiyar khada tha

Chopper ka bagal ma khada admi apne boss ka ate hi apna hath unke samne kr deta h or fir uska boss uska hat thamte hue chopper par chadta h

"Let's go"

Or uska itna hi kehna tha ki chopper ka wings chalu ho gye or dekhete dekhete uska chopper vha sa hawa ho gya


Vhi nicha

Leader: suna nhi big boss na kya kha dafna do iski body

G1: yes boss

Or 4 pach gunde pas ma padi hui body ka pass jane lgte h jo jahir si bat h ki shlok ki Thi

Jase hi unme sa ek body ko uthane ki liya hath lagat h vase he shlok ekdum sa jag jata h

Shlok ekdum Undertaker style ma hosh ma ata h or vo is vakt haf rha hota h

Shlok ka esa hosh ma ata dekh in sab ki Gand fat jati

Shlok: huuhhh huhhh

Vo jor jor saanse le rha tha

Jab shlok ko yad ata h ki abhi khuch der pehla kya hua tha to vo fatafat apne sine ki or dekhta h or pata h ki uske sine ka sare jakhm bhar chuke h

Un gundo na bhi ya bat observe kre or isse unki gand or double fat rhi thi

G1: dekh kya rhe ho madarchodo maro sale ko

Or uske itna khta hi un sab na shlok ka uper ka uper goliyo ki barsaat krdi


Shlok ka uper goliyo ki barish ho rhi thi or khon to jase nadi ki tarah BH rha tha

Thodi der bad jab unhone firing roki to ab unke gand ka ched fat ka ghadda ban gya

G2 : bhai ya toooo...😱😨

Hua ya tha ki abhi jase hi vo log ruke shlok ka sharir sa goliya khud bahar nikalne lagi or uske jhakhm light ki speed sa bharne lage

Shock ma to shlok bhi tha par use ya bat Ella sa phle hi pata chal gyi thi

G1: bhenchod ya h kon

Leader ki bhi Gand fat chuki thi

Watch: apko use saza deni h master

Shlok: i know

Watch: in sabko mar diziya bas us leader ko last ma Ma saza dena jo ma khu

Ab shlok un gunde ki taraf badhne laga

G1 : aaaa vhi ruk age mat ana


Vo shlok par phir fire krne lgta h par abki bar goli shlok ka sharir sa takrakar niche girne lage

Is chiz ko dekhkar vo log sadme ma a gye

Shlok ab g1 ka bilkul pas jakar khada ho gya

G1 : bhai muje jane do muje mat maro

Watch : kill him

Shlok g1 ka hath sa gun chinta h or usi ki khopdi ma goli bhar deta h

Ab baki gunde ya sab dekhka bhagne lagte h


Watch : kill them master ya log bhar na ja paye , inhone kisiko apke bare ma bata diya to problem ho jayegi

Itna sunte hi shlok goli ki raftar sa bhag kar shutter ka pas phuch gya or use niche kar diya

Uske raftar dekhkar sab hairan the ab

G1: bhai ya bhoot h, muje jane da yar mere biwi bachee h

Leader: hame jane do 😭😭


Shlok na kisi ki bat ka jawab nhi Diya or niche padi Uzi Gun uthayi or bhata bhat fire chalu kr di

Ander mano jaise khoon ki holi shru ho gyi

Ab Ander ki halat kisi nark sa Kam nhi thi poora farsh khoon sa Sana hua tha or nicha bhot sare lashe padi hui thi

Sirf leader tha jise shlok na nhi mara tha or vo abhi abhi apne sathiyo ki is tarah marte dekh total sadme tha uske pair kap rhe the or

Fir shlok apni gun leader ki tarf krta Jise dekhkar leader ki kali pent or jyada dark hone lagti h or usme sa moot tapakne lgta h

Jise dekhke shlok ka face par smile a jate h

Leader fatafat upar ki taraf bhagta h

Shlok gun ko uthata h or ek ankh band krke leader ka sar par nishana lagata h vo uski khopdi udane hi wala tha

Watch: ap use nhi mar skte use mere hisab sa saja deni h apko

Shlok gun ko nicha krta h

Shlok: hmm thik h

Leader abtak upar wale floor par phuch gya tha

Shlok bhi dheere dheere upar ki taraf jata h

Jase hi shlok upar phuchta h vo dekhta h ki

Samne bhot sare chote bachhe or bachhiya ro rhe the
Un bachho ki sthiti bhut buri thi kisi ka hath tuta hua tha kisi ke ankh futi hui thi kisi ka tang par jalne ka Nishan the

Vhi bagal ma ladkiya bhi khadi thi thi jo lagatar Asu bha rhi thi .shlok ko upar ata hua dekh vo dar gyi

Unsab ki aise halat dekh shlok ki ankhe Gili ho gyi
Us se jyada use guusa a gya shlok ki ankhe ab lal ho chuki thi

Shlok: kha gya h vo

Shlok na ya bat bhot serious mood ma un ladkiyo sa phuchi thi

Ladkiyo na bhi darte hue pas ma ek piller ki taraf ishara kiya

Shlok dheere dheere us piller ki taraf Jane laga

Leader piller ka dusri taraf bhut Dara hua baitha tha uski dhadkan 200 ki speed sa chal rhi thi usne apne muh par hath rakh rakha tha taki uske sisakne ki awaj shlok tak na jaye
Uski halat bhut buri thi

Tabhi use piller ka samne jameen par kisi ki parchai dikhai di jise dekh kar uska halak sukh gya

Usne darte hua piche dekha to use najar aya bhayanak devil eyes jo shlok ki thi
Uska chehra jaise jam sa gya tha halak sa awaj Ani band ho gyi thi

Vo himmat krke khuch bolta usse pehla hi shlok na ek hath sa uski gardan pakadkar use hawa ma utha diya

Uske saans folne lagi uski body tadap rhi thi vo tadapti machli ki tarah hawa ma hil rha tha


Watch: use chor dijiya master

Shlok: (gusse me ) noooo , let me kill him

Watch: apne wada kiya tha

Shlok ya sunkar apna hath uske gale sa hata leta

Or leader dhadam sa nicha girta h vo abhi maut ka muh sa vapas aya tha vo fatafat apna gala pa hath rakhkar apne sanse durust krne ma lag gya


Shlok: what the hell tum ise jinda chorne wali ho kya ,tumne dekha nhi un bachho ke sath isne......


Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiya

Shlok bol rha tha ka tabhi watch bol padi or boli bhi khuch aisa jiska shlok ko andaja nhi thi

Shlok: wha...what?

Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiye master , ise dardnaak maut dijiya

Shlok mana nhi kr skta tha sach khe to use bhi us admi par bhot gussa a rha tha

Shlok dheere dheere us admi ki taraf bada or uska hath pakda shlok ka hath kap rhe the vo pehli bar aise darandgi kar rha tha

Shlok na uska hath pakda hua tha leader ki halat bhot buri thi isliya vo ab ek laash ki tarh pada tha bas

Watch: do it master

Shlok ka mathe par pasina a gya

Shlok na ya suna or jor sa leder hath ko apne hath ma dabocha uska sar par apna per rakha

Or ek bar fir watch boli

Watch: do it master😈

Ab shlok na apne ankhe band Kari or ek jhatke ma uska hath khich liya


Leader: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Vha khade bachhe or ladkiya to ya manjar dekhker hi saham gye

Ab scene ya tha ki shlok ka chehre par khun ki chite the or uske ek hath ma leader ka ukhada hua hath tha jisme sa blood tapak rha tha

Vhi niche leader bethasha tadap rha tha

Ab shlok na dheere sa apni akhe kholi or jab usne leader ko tadapta hua dekha uske ankhe laal ho gyi face par ek devil smile a gye

Watch : dusra bhi master

Ab ki bar shlok na sunte hi leader ka dusra hath bhi ukhad Diya

Or leader vhi tadap tadap ka mar gya

Vhi jab usne piche mud ka dekha to bachoo or ladkiyo ki buri tarah sa fati padi thi

Shlok: chalo tum sab Azad ho

Or shlok niche ki taraf Jane lgta h or sab uske piche piche chalne lgte h

Vo niche jakar shutter open krta h or ladkiyo or bachoo ko vhi khade ek truck ma bithakar sidha police station ka samne phuch jata h


Shlok ek ladki sa khta h

Shlok: meri ek madad krogi

Ladki: apne hame us nark sa nikala h, kyu nhi krungi apki madad jaroor krungi

Shlok: to police station ka andar tumhe ek lady inspector Lana milegi unse jake khna ki tumlog khud vha sa bhag aye kyuki un gundo ma apas ma hi ladayi ho gyi thi

Ladki: par...

Shlok: par var khuch nhi jaise ma kh rha hu vasa Karo plz

Ladki: thik h ,par apna chehra to dikhaye na

Shlok: nhi dikha skta or tum bhi mere bare ma kisi ko mat batana or insab sa bhi mana kr dena plz

Ladki: ok

Shlok: ha ek or bat inspector Lana sa kehna ki ek ladka abhi bhi vha fasa hua h use bhi jaldi vha sa le aye

Ladki: par vha pa to ab koi bhi nhi tha

Shlok: jase ma kh rha hu vesa krna plz

Ladki: thik h

Shlok: ab ma chalta hu yad rhe Jo bola h vo hi krna

Itna bolkar shlok chupta chipata fir us building ma phuch gya or shutter band krke niche hi floor par let gya

Watch : mere sath rehkar ap ek hi din ma kafi akalmand ban gye h master ab Lana sa dosti kroge taki vo apko chaya tak phochaye h na?

Shlok: what tumhe kase pata ma kya soch rha hu

Watch : mujse khuch nhi chipa skte ap heehee😁😁

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Shlok abhi kal rat ka bare ma soch hi rha tha ke tabhi


🚓🚓🚨🚨🚨🚨

Police ka siron ki awaj jor jor sa ane lagi

Watch: a gayi apki nayi friend

Shlok: shut up

Shlok ka face par bhi ek devil smile a gayi thi

Muje apne ap ko thoda chotil krna hoga taki use lage ki ma yha fasa hua tha

Watch: hmm

Shlok: kya hmm muje thoda khun nikalna hoga

Watch : to nikaleye

Shlok: are yar par mere ghav to jaldi bhar jate h na ?

Watch: vo to sirf jab ma chahu

Shlok: really

Watch: hmm

Shlok jaldi sa pas ma pada ek nukile rod uthakar apne hath or pet par ek cut marta h par es bar use dard bhi hua or uska Kun bhi nikla

Watch: itne sa kya hoga , thoda jyada taki use taras aye ap par

Shlok: to kya kru

Watch: is rod ko apne pet ka ar par kijiya

Shlok:what ?

Watch: mujper bharosa rakhiye abhi khud

dekha na apne

Shlok: par..

Watch :do it

Shlok: hmm

Or shlok na himmat krke apni ankhe band kri or

Khaaaaaaaaach🔪🔪

Or rod ko apne pet sa ar paar kr diya

Shlok: ahhhhhh dard ho rha h muje

Watch: ap maroge nhi

Shlok: ha par ya dard ahhhh

Watch: thoda dard to sehna hi hoga agr plan or rhna h to

Shlok: hmm


Or vo muskrata hua akhe band krke let jata h or behoshi ka natak krne lgta h

Tabhi shutter ma dhum dhum ki awaje ati h jase koi use bhar sa kholne ki koshish kar rha ho


Srrrrrr srrrr srrrrr

Ki awaj ka sath shutter khul jata h or samne lana hath ma gun liya position ma khadi hoti h or uske piche uski force

Jab Lana ki nazar shlok par padti h to wo forun uske pas bhag kar jate h or uski nerves check krti h

Lana: abhi jinda h , ise forun hospital phuchao

Steve : ok mam

Fir khuch log milkar shlok ko uthane lagte h

Or shlok muskarata hua jate hue akhri bar Lana ko dekhta h
Usne ankhe itni Kam kholi thi ki koi uske ya harkat ko dekh na paya

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To shlok se watch bate karti hai or use uska future dikhati hai jo uske bina ho sakta hai or fir use apni 3 sarte btati hai, shlok ke man Jane ke baad ek task milta hai jisko pura karne ko slock gya tha pr Bich me hi target goli mar deta hai... Flash back superb bhai sandar jabarjast
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Update achha tha ye wala scene pura dikhana chahiye tha ki aakhir shlok ne use mara kaise ......

Aur ab to ise Shikha ka badla lene Jana chahiye kyuki ab un gundo ka papo ka ghada bhar chuka h.....

Shikha ke badle ke baad bhai ab shlok ko India le chalna bahut rah liye videsh me ab apne desh me pahuche taki incest ki shuruaat ho sake.....


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UPDATE 15 : SAZA (the punishment )



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Khuch bachhe or ladkiya dare hue khadi thi or unhi ke as pass bhut sare log guns lekar khade the

Or samne ek chair par ek admi overcoat pehne hue apni tang ka upar tang rakh kar betha tha aur usne muh me ek sigar lagaya hua tha

Tabhi vo admi chair sa khada hota h

Big boss: ya kon h

Uska ishara pas ma padi hui laash sa tha

Leader: boss ya ladka pata nhi kha sa upar a gya vo to mene isa shi time par dekh liya or mar Diya



Big boss: "Aj delivery ho Jani chaiya or in bachho ko bhi kam par laga do or is ladke ki body bhi thikane laga dena "

Vo shlok ko dhyan sa dekhe bina hi khta h

Leader: Ji boss

"Hmm"

Or itna kehker vo vha sa jane lgta h or building ka terrace par phuchta h
Jha uska chopper taiyar khada tha

Chopper ka bagal ma khada admi apne boss ka ate hi apna hath unke samne kr deta h or fir uska boss uska hat thamte hue chopper par chadta h

"Let's go"

Or uska itna hi kehna tha ki chopper ka wings chalu ho gye or dekhete dekhete uska chopper vha sa hawa ho gya


Vhi nicha

Leader: suna nhi big boss na kya kha dafna do iski body

G1: yes boss

Or 4 pach gunde pas ma padi hui body ka pass jane lgte h jo jahir si bat h ki shlok ki Thi

Jase hi unme sa ek body ko uthane ki liya hath lagat h vase he shlok ekdum sa jag jata h

Shlok ekdum Undertaker style ma hosh ma ata h or vo is vakt haf rha hota h

Shlok ka esa hosh ma ata dekh in sab ki Gand fat jati

Shlok: huuhhh huhhh

Vo jor jor saanse le rha tha

Jab shlok ko yad ata h ki abhi khuch der pehla kya hua tha to vo fatafat apne sine ki or dekhta h or pata h ki uske sine ka sare jakhm bhar chuke h

Un gundo na bhi ya bat observe kre or isse unki gand or double fat rhi thi

G1: dekh kya rhe ho madarchodo maro sale ko

Or uske itna khta hi un sab na shlok ka uper ka uper goliyo ki barsaat krdi


Shlok ka uper goliyo ki barish ho rhi thi or khon to jase nadi ki tarah BH rha tha

Thodi der bad jab unhone firing roki to ab unke gand ka ched fat ka ghadda ban gya

G2 : bhai ya toooo...😱😨

Hua ya tha ki abhi jase hi vo log ruke shlok ka sharir sa goliya khud bahar nikalne lagi or uske jhakhm light ki speed sa bharne lage

Shock ma to shlok bhi tha par use ya bat Ella sa phle hi pata chal gyi thi

G1: bhenchod ya h kon

Leader ki bhi Gand fat chuki thi

Watch: apko use saza deni h master

Shlok: i know

Watch: in sabko mar diziya bas us leader ko last ma Ma saza dena jo ma khu

Ab shlok un gunde ki taraf badhne laga

G1 : aaaa vhi ruk age mat ana


Vo shlok par phir fire krne lgta h par abki bar goli shlok ka sharir sa takrakar niche girne lage

Is chiz ko dekhkar vo log sadme ma a gye

Shlok ab g1 ka bilkul pas jakar khada ho gya

G1 : bhai muje jane do muje mat maro

Watch : kill him

Shlok g1 ka hath sa gun chinta h or usi ki khopdi ma goli bhar deta h

Ab baki gunde ya sab dekhka bhagne lagte h


Watch : kill them master ya log bhar na ja paye , inhone kisiko apke bare ma bata diya to problem ho jayegi

Itna sunte hi shlok goli ki raftar sa bhag kar shutter ka pas phuch gya or use niche kar diya

Uske raftar dekhkar sab hairan the ab

G1: bhai ya bhoot h, muje jane da yar mere biwi bachee h

Leader: hame jane do 😭😭


Shlok na kisi ki bat ka jawab nhi Diya or niche padi Uzi Gun uthayi or bhata bhat fire chalu kr di

Ander mano jaise khoon ki holi shru ho gyi

Ab Ander ki halat kisi nark sa Kam nhi thi poora farsh khoon sa Sana hua tha or nicha bhot sare lashe padi hui thi

Sirf leader tha jise shlok na nhi mara tha or vo abhi abhi apne sathiyo ki is tarah marte dekh total sadme tha uske pair kap rhe the or

Fir shlok apni gun leader ki tarf krta Jise dekhkar leader ki kali pent or jyada dark hone lagti h or usme sa moot tapakne lgta h

Jise dekhke shlok ka face par smile a jate h

Leader fatafat upar ki taraf bhagta h

Shlok gun ko uthata h or ek ankh band krke leader ka sar par nishana lagata h vo uski khopdi udane hi wala tha

Watch: ap use nhi mar skte use mere hisab sa saja deni h apko

Shlok gun ko nicha krta h

Shlok: hmm thik h

Leader abtak upar wale floor par phuch gya tha

Shlok bhi dheere dheere upar ki taraf jata h

Jase hi shlok upar phuchta h vo dekhta h ki

Samne bhot sare chote bachhe or bachhiya ro rhe the
Un bachho ki sthiti bhut buri thi kisi ka hath tuta hua tha kisi ke ankh futi hui thi kisi ka tang par jalne ka Nishan the

Vhi bagal ma ladkiya bhi khadi thi thi jo lagatar Asu bha rhi thi .shlok ko upar ata hua dekh vo dar gyi

Unsab ki aise halat dekh shlok ki ankhe Gili ho gyi
Us se jyada use guusa a gya shlok ki ankhe ab lal ho chuki thi

Shlok: kha gya h vo

Shlok na ya bat bhot serious mood ma un ladkiyo sa phuchi thi

Ladkiyo na bhi darte hue pas ma ek piller ki taraf ishara kiya

Shlok dheere dheere us piller ki taraf Jane laga

Leader piller ka dusri taraf bhut Dara hua baitha tha uski dhadkan 200 ki speed sa chal rhi thi usne apne muh par hath rakh rakha tha taki uske sisakne ki awaj shlok tak na jaye
Uski halat bhut buri thi

Tabhi use piller ka samne jameen par kisi ki parchai dikhai di jise dekh kar uska halak sukh gya

Usne darte hua piche dekha to use najar aya bhayanak devil eyes jo shlok ki thi
Uska chehra jaise jam sa gya tha halak sa awaj Ani band ho gyi thi

Vo himmat krke khuch bolta usse pehla hi shlok na ek hath sa uski gardan pakadkar use hawa ma utha diya

Uske saans folne lagi uski body tadap rhi thi vo tadapti machli ki tarah hawa ma hil rha tha


Watch: use chor dijiya master

Shlok: (gusse me ) noooo , let me kill him

Watch: apne wada kiya tha

Shlok ya sunkar apna hath uske gale sa hata leta

Or leader dhadam sa nicha girta h vo abhi maut ka muh sa vapas aya tha vo fatafat apna gala pa hath rakhkar apne sanse durust krne ma lag gya


Shlok: what the hell tum ise jinda chorne wali ho kya ,tumne dekha nhi un bachho ke sath isne......


Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiya

Shlok bol rha tha ka tabhi watch bol padi or boli bhi khuch aisa jiska shlok ko andaja nhi thi

Shlok: wha...what?

Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiye master , ise dardnaak maut dijiya

Shlok mana nhi kr skta tha sach khe to use bhi us admi par bhot gussa a rha tha

Shlok dheere dheere us admi ki taraf bada or uska hath pakda shlok ka hath kap rhe the vo pehli bar aise darandgi kar rha tha

Shlok na uska hath pakda hua tha leader ki halat bhot buri thi isliya vo ab ek laash ki tarh pada tha bas

Watch: do it master

Shlok ka mathe par pasina a gya

Shlok na ya suna or jor sa leder hath ko apne hath ma dabocha uska sar par apna per rakha

Or ek bar fir watch boli

Watch: do it master😈

Ab shlok na apne ankhe band Kari or ek jhatke ma uska hath khich liya


Leader: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Vha khade bachhe or ladkiya to ya manjar dekhker hi saham gye

Ab scene ya tha ki shlok ka chehre par khun ki chite the or uske ek hath ma leader ka ukhada hua hath tha jisme sa blood tapak rha tha

Vhi niche leader bethasha tadap rha tha

Ab shlok na dheere sa apni akhe kholi or jab usne leader ko tadapta hua dekha uske ankhe laal ho gyi face par ek devil smile a gye

Watch : dusra bhi master

Ab ki bar shlok na sunte hi leader ka dusra hath bhi ukhad Diya

Or leader vhi tadap tadap ka mar gya

Vhi jab usne piche mud ka dekha to bachoo or ladkiyo ki buri tarah sa fati padi thi

Shlok: chalo tum sab Azad ho

Or shlok niche ki taraf Jane lgta h or sab uske piche piche chalne lgte h

Vo niche jakar shutter open krta h or ladkiyo or bachoo ko vhi khade ek truck ma bithakar sidha police station ka samne phuch jata h


Shlok ek ladki sa khta h

Shlok: meri ek madad krogi

Ladki: apne hame us nark sa nikala h, kyu nhi krungi apki madad jaroor krungi

Shlok: to police station ka andar tumhe ek lady inspector Lana milegi unse jake khna ki tumlog khud vha sa bhag aye kyuki un gundo ma apas ma hi ladayi ho gyi thi

Ladki: par...

Shlok: par var khuch nhi jaise ma kh rha hu vasa Karo plz

Ladki: thik h ,par apna chehra to dikhaye na

Shlok: nhi dikha skta or tum bhi mere bare ma kisi ko mat batana or insab sa bhi mana kr dena plz

Ladki: ok

Shlok: ha ek or bat inspector Lana sa kehna ki ek ladka abhi bhi vha fasa hua h use bhi jaldi vha sa le aye

Ladki: par vha pa to ab koi bhi nhi tha

Shlok: jase ma kh rha hu vesa krna plz

Ladki: thik h

Shlok: ab ma chalta hu yad rhe Jo bola h vo hi krna

Itna bolkar shlok chupta chipata fir us building ma phuch gya or shutter band krke niche hi floor par let gya

Watch : mere sath rehkar ap ek hi din ma kafi akalmand ban gye h master ab Lana sa dosti kroge taki vo apko chaya tak phochaye h na?

Shlok: what tumhe kase pata ma kya soch rha hu

Watch : mujse khuch nhi chipa skte ap heehee😁😁

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Shlok abhi kal rat ka bare ma soch hi rha tha ke tabhi


🚓🚓🚨🚨🚨🚨

Police ka siron ki awaj jor jor sa ane lagi

Watch: a gayi apki nayi friend

Shlok: shut up

Shlok ka face par bhi ek devil smile a gayi thi

Muje apne ap ko thoda chotil krna hoga taki use lage ki ma yha fasa hua tha

Watch: hmm

Shlok: kya hmm muje thoda khun nikalna hoga

Watch : to nikaleye

Shlok: are yar par mere ghav to jaldi bhar jate h na ?

Watch: vo to sirf jab ma chahu

Shlok: really

Watch: hmm

Shlok jaldi sa pas ma pada ek nukile rod uthakar apne hath or pet par ek cut marta h par es bar use dard bhi hua or uska Kun bhi nikla

Watch: itne sa kya hoga , thoda jyada taki use taras aye ap par

Shlok: to kya kru

Watch: is rod ko apne pet ka ar par kijiya

Shlok:what ?

Watch: mujper bharosa rakhiye abhi khud

dekha na apne

Shlok: par..

Watch :do it

Shlok: hmm

Or shlok na himmat krke apni ankhe band kri or

Khaaaaaaaaach🔪🔪

Or rod ko apne pet sa ar paar kr diya

Shlok: ahhhhhh dard ho rha h muje

Watch: ap maroge nhi

Shlok: ha par ya dard ahhhh

Watch: thoda dard to sehna hi hoga agr plan or rhna h to

Shlok: hmm


Or vo muskrata hua akhe band krke let jata h or behoshi ka natak krne lgta h

Tabhi shutter ma dhum dhum ki awaje ati h jase koi use bhar sa kholne ki koshish kar rha ho


Srrrrrr srrrr srrrrr

Ki awaj ka sath shutter khul jata h or samne lana hath ma gun liya position ma khadi hoti h or uske piche uski force

Jab Lana ki nazar shlok par padti h to wo forun uske pas bhag kar jate h or uski nerves check krti h

Lana: abhi jinda h , ise forun hospital phuchao

Steve : ok mam

Fir khuch log milkar shlok ko uthane lagte h

Or shlok muskarata hua jate hue akhri bar Lana ko dekhta h
Usne ankhe itni Kam kholi thi ki koi uske ya harkat ko dekh na paya

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Hope you enjoyed it
Awesome update
 

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Khuch bachhe or ladkiya dare hue khadi thi or unhi ke as pass bhut sare log guns lekar khade the

Or samne ek chair par ek admi overcoat pehne hue apni tang ka upar tang rakh kar betha tha aur usne muh me ek sigar lagaya hua tha

Tabhi vo admi chair sa khada hota h

Big boss: ya kon h

Uska ishara pas ma padi hui laash sa tha

Leader: boss ya ladka pata nhi kha sa upar a gya vo to mene isa shi time par dekh liya or mar Diya



Big boss: "Aj delivery ho Jani chaiya or in bachho ko bhi kam par laga do or is ladke ki body bhi thikane laga dena "

Vo shlok ko dhyan sa dekhe bina hi khta h

Leader: Ji boss

"Hmm"

Or itna kehker vo vha sa jane lgta h or building ka terrace par phuchta h
Jha uska chopper taiyar khada tha

Chopper ka bagal ma khada admi apne boss ka ate hi apna hath unke samne kr deta h or fir uska boss uska hat thamte hue chopper par chadta h

"Let's go"

Or uska itna hi kehna tha ki chopper ka wings chalu ho gye or dekhete dekhete uska chopper vha sa hawa ho gya


Vhi nicha

Leader: suna nhi big boss na kya kha dafna do iski body

G1: yes boss

Or 4 pach gunde pas ma padi hui body ka pass jane lgte h jo jahir si bat h ki shlok ki Thi

Jase hi unme sa ek body ko uthane ki liya hath lagat h vase he shlok ekdum sa jag jata h

Shlok ekdum Undertaker style ma hosh ma ata h or vo is vakt haf rha hota h

Shlok ka esa hosh ma ata dekh in sab ki Gand fat jati

Shlok: huuhhh huhhh

Vo jor jor saanse le rha tha

Jab shlok ko yad ata h ki abhi khuch der pehla kya hua tha to vo fatafat apne sine ki or dekhta h or pata h ki uske sine ka sare jakhm bhar chuke h

Un gundo na bhi ya bat observe kre or isse unki gand or double fat rhi thi

G1: dekh kya rhe ho madarchodo maro sale ko

Or uske itna khta hi un sab na shlok ka uper ka uper goliyo ki barsaat krdi


Shlok ka uper goliyo ki barish ho rhi thi or khon to jase nadi ki tarah BH rha tha

Thodi der bad jab unhone firing roki to ab unke gand ka ched fat ka ghadda ban gya

G2 : bhai ya toooo...😱😨

Hua ya tha ki abhi jase hi vo log ruke shlok ka sharir sa goliya khud bahar nikalne lagi or uske jhakhm light ki speed sa bharne lage

Shock ma to shlok bhi tha par use ya bat Ella sa phle hi pata chal gyi thi

G1: bhenchod ya h kon

Leader ki bhi Gand fat chuki thi

Watch: apko use saza deni h master

Shlok: i know

Watch: in sabko mar diziya bas us leader ko last ma Ma saza dena jo ma khu

Ab shlok un gunde ki taraf badhne laga

G1 : aaaa vhi ruk age mat ana


Vo shlok par phir fire krne lgta h par abki bar goli shlok ka sharir sa takrakar niche girne lage

Is chiz ko dekhkar vo log sadme ma a gye

Shlok ab g1 ka bilkul pas jakar khada ho gya

G1 : bhai muje jane do muje mat maro

Watch : kill him

Shlok g1 ka hath sa gun chinta h or usi ki khopdi ma goli bhar deta h

Ab baki gunde ya sab dekhka bhagne lagte h


Watch : kill them master ya log bhar na ja paye , inhone kisiko apke bare ma bata diya to problem ho jayegi

Itna sunte hi shlok goli ki raftar sa bhag kar shutter ka pas phuch gya or use niche kar diya

Uske raftar dekhkar sab hairan the ab

G1: bhai ya bhoot h, muje jane da yar mere biwi bachee h

Leader: hame jane do 😭😭


Shlok na kisi ki bat ka jawab nhi Diya or niche padi Uzi Gun uthayi or bhata bhat fire chalu kr di

Ander mano jaise khoon ki holi shru ho gyi

Ab Ander ki halat kisi nark sa Kam nhi thi poora farsh khoon sa Sana hua tha or nicha bhot sare lashe padi hui thi

Sirf leader tha jise shlok na nhi mara tha or vo abhi abhi apne sathiyo ki is tarah marte dekh total sadme tha uske pair kap rhe the or

Fir shlok apni gun leader ki tarf krta Jise dekhkar leader ki kali pent or jyada dark hone lagti h or usme sa moot tapakne lgta h

Jise dekhke shlok ka face par smile a jate h

Leader fatafat upar ki taraf bhagta h

Shlok gun ko uthata h or ek ankh band krke leader ka sar par nishana lagata h vo uski khopdi udane hi wala tha

Watch: ap use nhi mar skte use mere hisab sa saja deni h apko

Shlok gun ko nicha krta h

Shlok: hmm thik h

Leader abtak upar wale floor par phuch gya tha

Shlok bhi dheere dheere upar ki taraf jata h

Jase hi shlok upar phuchta h vo dekhta h ki

Samne bhot sare chote bachhe or bachhiya ro rhe the
Un bachho ki sthiti bhut buri thi kisi ka hath tuta hua tha kisi ke ankh futi hui thi kisi ka tang par jalne ka Nishan the

Vhi bagal ma ladkiya bhi khadi thi thi jo lagatar Asu bha rhi thi .shlok ko upar ata hua dekh vo dar gyi

Unsab ki aise halat dekh shlok ki ankhe Gili ho gyi
Us se jyada use guusa a gya shlok ki ankhe ab lal ho chuki thi

Shlok: kha gya h vo

Shlok na ya bat bhot serious mood ma un ladkiyo sa phuchi thi

Ladkiyo na bhi darte hue pas ma ek piller ki taraf ishara kiya

Shlok dheere dheere us piller ki taraf Jane laga

Leader piller ka dusri taraf bhut Dara hua baitha tha uski dhadkan 200 ki speed sa chal rhi thi usne apne muh par hath rakh rakha tha taki uske sisakne ki awaj shlok tak na jaye
Uski halat bhut buri thi

Tabhi use piller ka samne jameen par kisi ki parchai dikhai di jise dekh kar uska halak sukh gya

Usne darte hua piche dekha to use najar aya bhayanak devil eyes jo shlok ki thi
Uska chehra jaise jam sa gya tha halak sa awaj Ani band ho gyi thi

Vo himmat krke khuch bolta usse pehla hi shlok na ek hath sa uski gardan pakadkar use hawa ma utha diya

Uske saans folne lagi uski body tadap rhi thi vo tadapti machli ki tarah hawa ma hil rha tha


Watch: use chor dijiya master

Shlok: (gusse me ) noooo , let me kill him

Watch: apne wada kiya tha

Shlok ya sunkar apna hath uske gale sa hata leta

Or leader dhadam sa nicha girta h vo abhi maut ka muh sa vapas aya tha vo fatafat apna gala pa hath rakhkar apne sanse durust krne ma lag gya


Shlok: what the hell tum ise jinda chorne wali ho kya ,tumne dekha nhi un bachho ke sath isne......


Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiya

Shlok bol rha tha ka tabhi watch bol padi or boli bhi khuch aisa jiska shlok ko andaja nhi thi

Shlok: wha...what?

Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiye master , ise dardnaak maut dijiya

Shlok mana nhi kr skta tha sach khe to use bhi us admi par bhot gussa a rha tha

Shlok dheere dheere us admi ki taraf bada or uska hath pakda shlok ka hath kap rhe the vo pehli bar aise darandgi kar rha tha

Shlok na uska hath pakda hua tha leader ki halat bhot buri thi isliya vo ab ek laash ki tarh pada tha bas

Watch: do it master

Shlok ka mathe par pasina a gya

Shlok na ya suna or jor sa leder hath ko apne hath ma dabocha uska sar par apna per rakha

Or ek bar fir watch boli

Watch: do it master😈

Ab shlok na apne ankhe band Kari or ek jhatke ma uska hath khich liya


Leader: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Vha khade bachhe or ladkiya to ya manjar dekhker hi saham gye

Ab scene ya tha ki shlok ka chehre par khun ki chite the or uske ek hath ma leader ka ukhada hua hath tha jisme sa blood tapak rha tha

Vhi niche leader bethasha tadap rha tha

Ab shlok na dheere sa apni akhe kholi or jab usne leader ko tadapta hua dekha uske ankhe laal ho gyi face par ek devil smile a gye

Watch : dusra bhi master

Ab ki bar shlok na sunte hi leader ka dusra hath bhi ukhad Diya

Or leader vhi tadap tadap ka mar gya

Vhi jab usne piche mud ka dekha to bachoo or ladkiyo ki buri tarah sa fati padi thi

Shlok: chalo tum sab Azad ho

Or shlok niche ki taraf Jane lgta h or sab uske piche piche chalne lgte h

Vo niche jakar shutter open krta h or ladkiyo or bachoo ko vhi khade ek truck ma bithakar sidha police station ka samne phuch jata h


Shlok ek ladki sa khta h

Shlok: meri ek madad krogi

Ladki: apne hame us nark sa nikala h, kyu nhi krungi apki madad jaroor krungi

Shlok: to police station ka andar tumhe ek lady inspector Lana milegi unse jake khna ki tumlog khud vha sa bhag aye kyuki un gundo ma apas ma hi ladayi ho gyi thi

Ladki: par...

Shlok: par var khuch nhi jaise ma kh rha hu vasa Karo plz

Ladki: thik h ,par apna chehra to dikhaye na

Shlok: nhi dikha skta or tum bhi mere bare ma kisi ko mat batana or insab sa bhi mana kr dena plz

Ladki: ok

Shlok: ha ek or bat inspector Lana sa kehna ki ek ladka abhi bhi vha fasa hua h use bhi jaldi vha sa le aye

Ladki: par vha pa to ab koi bhi nhi tha

Shlok: jase ma kh rha hu vesa krna plz

Ladki: thik h

Shlok: ab ma chalta hu yad rhe Jo bola h vo hi krna

Itna bolkar shlok chupta chipata fir us building ma phuch gya or shutter band krke niche hi floor par let gya

Watch : mere sath rehkar ap ek hi din ma kafi akalmand ban gye h master ab Lana sa dosti kroge taki vo apko chaya tak phochaye h na?

Shlok: what tumhe kase pata ma kya soch rha hu

Watch : mujse khuch nhi chipa skte ap heehee😁😁

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Shlok abhi kal rat ka bare ma soch hi rha tha ke tabhi


🚓🚓🚨🚨🚨🚨

Police ka siron ki awaj jor jor sa ane lagi

Watch: a gayi apki nayi friend

Shlok: shut up

Shlok ka face par bhi ek devil smile a gayi thi

Muje apne ap ko thoda chotil krna hoga taki use lage ki ma yha fasa hua tha

Watch: hmm

Shlok: kya hmm muje thoda khun nikalna hoga

Watch : to nikaleye

Shlok: are yar par mere ghav to jaldi bhar jate h na ?

Watch: vo to sirf jab ma chahu

Shlok: really

Watch: hmm

Shlok jaldi sa pas ma pada ek nukile rod uthakar apne hath or pet par ek cut marta h par es bar use dard bhi hua or uska Kun bhi nikla

Watch: itne sa kya hoga , thoda jyada taki use taras aye ap par

Shlok: to kya kru

Watch: is rod ko apne pet ka ar par kijiya

Shlok:what ?

Watch: mujper bharosa rakhiye abhi khud

dekha na apne

Shlok: par..

Watch :do it

Shlok: hmm

Or shlok na himmat krke apni ankhe band kri or

Khaaaaaaaaach🔪🔪

Or rod ko apne pet sa ar paar kr diya

Shlok: ahhhhhh dard ho rha h muje

Watch: ap maroge nhi

Shlok: ha par ya dard ahhhh

Watch: thoda dard to sehna hi hoga agr plan or rhna h to

Shlok: hmm


Or vo muskrata hua akhe band krke let jata h or behoshi ka natak krne lgta h

Tabhi shutter ma dhum dhum ki awaje ati h jase koi use bhar sa kholne ki koshish kar rha ho


Srrrrrr srrrr srrrrr

Ki awaj ka sath shutter khul jata h or samne lana hath ma gun liya position ma khadi hoti h or uske piche uski force

Jab Lana ki nazar shlok par padti h to wo forun uske pas bhag kar jate h or uski nerves check krti h

Lana: abhi jinda h , ise forun hospital phuchao

Steve : ok mam

Fir khuch log milkar shlok ko uthane lagte h

Or shlok muskarata hua jate hue akhri bar Lana ko dekhta h
Usne ankhe itni Kam kholi thi ki koi uske ya harkat ko dekh na paya

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Khuch bachhe or ladkiya dare hue khadi thi or unhi ke as pass bhut sare log guns lekar khade the

Or samne ek chair par ek admi overcoat pehne hue apni tang ka upar tang rakh kar betha tha aur usne muh me ek sigar lagaya hua tha

Tabhi vo admi chair sa khada hota h

Big boss: ya kon h

Uska ishara pas ma padi hui laash sa tha

Leader: boss ya ladka pata nhi kha sa upar a gya vo to mene isa shi time par dekh liya or mar Diya



Big boss: "Aj delivery ho Jani chaiya or in bachho ko bhi kam par laga do or is ladke ki body bhi thikane laga dena "

Vo shlok ko dhyan sa dekhe bina hi khta h

Leader: Ji boss

"Hmm"

Or itna kehker vo vha sa jane lgta h or building ka terrace par phuchta h
Jha uska chopper taiyar khada tha

Chopper ka bagal ma khada admi apne boss ka ate hi apna hath unke samne kr deta h or fir uska boss uska hat thamte hue chopper par chadta h

"Let's go"

Or uska itna hi kehna tha ki chopper ka wings chalu ho gye or dekhete dekhete uska chopper vha sa hawa ho gya


Vhi nicha

Leader: suna nhi big boss na kya kha dafna do iski body

G1: yes boss

Or 4 pach gunde pas ma padi hui body ka pass jane lgte h jo jahir si bat h ki shlok ki Thi

Jase hi unme sa ek body ko uthane ki liya hath lagat h vase he shlok ekdum sa jag jata h

Shlok ekdum Undertaker style ma hosh ma ata h or vo is vakt haf rha hota h

Shlok ka esa hosh ma ata dekh in sab ki Gand fat jati

Shlok: huuhhh huhhh

Vo jor jor saanse le rha tha

Jab shlok ko yad ata h ki abhi khuch der pehla kya hua tha to vo fatafat apne sine ki or dekhta h or pata h ki uske sine ka sare jakhm bhar chuke h

Un gundo na bhi ya bat observe kre or isse unki gand or double fat rhi thi

G1: dekh kya rhe ho madarchodo maro sale ko

Or uske itna khta hi un sab na shlok ka uper ka uper goliyo ki barsaat krdi


Shlok ka uper goliyo ki barish ho rhi thi or khon to jase nadi ki tarah BH rha tha

Thodi der bad jab unhone firing roki to ab unke gand ka ched fat ka ghadda ban gya

G2 : bhai ya toooo...😱😨

Hua ya tha ki abhi jase hi vo log ruke shlok ka sharir sa goliya khud bahar nikalne lagi or uske jhakhm light ki speed sa bharne lage

Shock ma to shlok bhi tha par use ya bat Ella sa phle hi pata chal gyi thi

G1: bhenchod ya h kon

Leader ki bhi Gand fat chuki thi

Watch: apko use saza deni h master

Shlok: i know

Watch: in sabko mar diziya bas us leader ko last ma Ma saza dena jo ma khu

Ab shlok un gunde ki taraf badhne laga

G1 : aaaa vhi ruk age mat ana


Vo shlok par phir fire krne lgta h par abki bar goli shlok ka sharir sa takrakar niche girne lage

Is chiz ko dekhkar vo log sadme ma a gye

Shlok ab g1 ka bilkul pas jakar khada ho gya

G1 : bhai muje jane do muje mat maro

Watch : kill him

Shlok g1 ka hath sa gun chinta h or usi ki khopdi ma goli bhar deta h

Ab baki gunde ya sab dekhka bhagne lagte h


Watch : kill them master ya log bhar na ja paye , inhone kisiko apke bare ma bata diya to problem ho jayegi

Itna sunte hi shlok goli ki raftar sa bhag kar shutter ka pas phuch gya or use niche kar diya

Uske raftar dekhkar sab hairan the ab

G1: bhai ya bhoot h, muje jane da yar mere biwi bachee h

Leader: hame jane do 😭😭


Shlok na kisi ki bat ka jawab nhi Diya or niche padi Uzi Gun uthayi or bhata bhat fire chalu kr di

Ander mano jaise khoon ki holi shru ho gyi

Ab Ander ki halat kisi nark sa Kam nhi thi poora farsh khoon sa Sana hua tha or nicha bhot sare lashe padi hui thi

Sirf leader tha jise shlok na nhi mara tha or vo abhi abhi apne sathiyo ki is tarah marte dekh total sadme tha uske pair kap rhe the or

Fir shlok apni gun leader ki tarf krta Jise dekhkar leader ki kali pent or jyada dark hone lagti h or usme sa moot tapakne lgta h

Jise dekhke shlok ka face par smile a jate h

Leader fatafat upar ki taraf bhagta h

Shlok gun ko uthata h or ek ankh band krke leader ka sar par nishana lagata h vo uski khopdi udane hi wala tha

Watch: ap use nhi mar skte use mere hisab sa saja deni h apko

Shlok gun ko nicha krta h

Shlok: hmm thik h

Leader abtak upar wale floor par phuch gya tha

Shlok bhi dheere dheere upar ki taraf jata h

Jase hi shlok upar phuchta h vo dekhta h ki

Samne bhot sare chote bachhe or bachhiya ro rhe the
Un bachho ki sthiti bhut buri thi kisi ka hath tuta hua tha kisi ke ankh futi hui thi kisi ka tang par jalne ka Nishan the

Vhi bagal ma ladkiya bhi khadi thi thi jo lagatar Asu bha rhi thi .shlok ko upar ata hua dekh vo dar gyi

Unsab ki aise halat dekh shlok ki ankhe Gili ho gyi
Us se jyada use guusa a gya shlok ki ankhe ab lal ho chuki thi

Shlok: kha gya h vo

Shlok na ya bat bhot serious mood ma un ladkiyo sa phuchi thi

Ladkiyo na bhi darte hue pas ma ek piller ki taraf ishara kiya

Shlok dheere dheere us piller ki taraf Jane laga

Leader piller ka dusri taraf bhut Dara hua baitha tha uski dhadkan 200 ki speed sa chal rhi thi usne apne muh par hath rakh rakha tha taki uske sisakne ki awaj shlok tak na jaye
Uski halat bhut buri thi

Tabhi use piller ka samne jameen par kisi ki parchai dikhai di jise dekh kar uska halak sukh gya

Usne darte hua piche dekha to use najar aya bhayanak devil eyes jo shlok ki thi
Uska chehra jaise jam sa gya tha halak sa awaj Ani band ho gyi thi

Vo himmat krke khuch bolta usse pehla hi shlok na ek hath sa uski gardan pakadkar use hawa ma utha diya

Uske saans folne lagi uski body tadap rhi thi vo tadapti machli ki tarah hawa ma hil rha tha


Watch: use chor dijiya master

Shlok: (gusse me ) noooo , let me kill him

Watch: apne wada kiya tha

Shlok ya sunkar apna hath uske gale sa hata leta

Or leader dhadam sa nicha girta h vo abhi maut ka muh sa vapas aya tha vo fatafat apna gala pa hath rakhkar apne sanse durust krne ma lag gya


Shlok: what the hell tum ise jinda chorne wali ho kya ,tumne dekha nhi un bachho ke sath isne......


Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiya

Shlok bol rha tha ka tabhi watch bol padi or boli bhi khuch aisa jiska shlok ko andaja nhi thi

Shlok: wha...what?

Watch : iske hath ukhad dijiye master , ise dardnaak maut dijiya

Shlok mana nhi kr skta tha sach khe to use bhi us admi par bhot gussa a rha tha

Shlok dheere dheere us admi ki taraf bada or uska hath pakda shlok ka hath kap rhe the vo pehli bar aise darandgi kar rha tha

Shlok na uska hath pakda hua tha leader ki halat bhot buri thi isliya vo ab ek laash ki tarh pada tha bas

Watch: do it master

Shlok ka mathe par pasina a gya

Shlok na ya suna or jor sa leder hath ko apne hath ma dabocha uska sar par apna per rakha

Or ek bar fir watch boli

Watch: do it master😈

Ab shlok na apne ankhe band Kari or ek jhatke ma uska hath khich liya


Leader: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Vha khade bachhe or ladkiya to ya manjar dekhker hi saham gye

Ab scene ya tha ki shlok ka chehre par khun ki chite the or uske ek hath ma leader ka ukhada hua hath tha jisme sa blood tapak rha tha

Vhi niche leader bethasha tadap rha tha

Ab shlok na dheere sa apni akhe kholi or jab usne leader ko tadapta hua dekha uske ankhe laal ho gyi face par ek devil smile a gye

Watch : dusra bhi master

Ab ki bar shlok na sunte hi leader ka dusra hath bhi ukhad Diya

Or leader vhi tadap tadap ka mar gya

Vhi jab usne piche mud ka dekha to bachoo or ladkiyo ki buri tarah sa fati padi thi

Shlok: chalo tum sab Azad ho

Or shlok niche ki taraf Jane lgta h or sab uske piche piche chalne lgte h

Vo niche jakar shutter open krta h or ladkiyo or bachoo ko vhi khade ek truck ma bithakar sidha police station ka samne phuch jata h


Shlok ek ladki sa khta h

Shlok: meri ek madad krogi

Ladki: apne hame us nark sa nikala h, kyu nhi krungi apki madad jaroor krungi

Shlok: to police station ka andar tumhe ek lady inspector Lana milegi unse jake khna ki tumlog khud vha sa bhag aye kyuki un gundo ma apas ma hi ladayi ho gyi thi

Ladki: par...

Shlok: par var khuch nhi jaise ma kh rha hu vasa Karo plz

Ladki: thik h ,par apna chehra to dikhaye na

Shlok: nhi dikha skta or tum bhi mere bare ma kisi ko mat batana or insab sa bhi mana kr dena plz

Ladki: ok

Shlok: ha ek or bat inspector Lana sa kehna ki ek ladka abhi bhi vha fasa hua h use bhi jaldi vha sa le aye

Ladki: par vha pa to ab koi bhi nhi tha

Shlok: jase ma kh rha hu vesa krna plz

Ladki: thik h

Shlok: ab ma chalta hu yad rhe Jo bola h vo hi krna

Itna bolkar shlok chupta chipata fir us building ma phuch gya or shutter band krke niche hi floor par let gya

Watch : mere sath rehkar ap ek hi din ma kafi akalmand ban gye h master ab Lana sa dosti kroge taki vo apko chaya tak phochaye h na?

Shlok: what tumhe kase pata ma kya soch rha hu

Watch : mujse khuch nhi chipa skte ap heehee😁😁

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Shlok abhi kal rat ka bare ma soch hi rha tha ke tabhi


🚓🚓🚨🚨🚨🚨

Police ka siron ki awaj jor jor sa ane lagi

Watch: a gayi apki nayi friend

Shlok: shut up

Shlok ka face par bhi ek devil smile a gayi thi

Muje apne ap ko thoda chotil krna hoga taki use lage ki ma yha fasa hua tha

Watch: hmm

Shlok: kya hmm muje thoda khun nikalna hoga

Watch : to nikaleye

Shlok: are yar par mere ghav to jaldi bhar jate h na ?

Watch: vo to sirf jab ma chahu

Shlok: really

Watch: hmm

Shlok jaldi sa pas ma pada ek nukile rod uthakar apne hath or pet par ek cut marta h par es bar use dard bhi hua or uska Kun bhi nikla

Watch: itne sa kya hoga , thoda jyada taki use taras aye ap par

Shlok: to kya kru

Watch: is rod ko apne pet ka ar par kijiya

Shlok:what ?

Watch: mujper bharosa rakhiye abhi khud

dekha na apne

Shlok: par..

Watch :do it

Shlok: hmm

Or shlok na himmat krke apni ankhe band kri or

Khaaaaaaaaach🔪🔪

Or rod ko apne pet sa ar paar kr diya

Shlok: ahhhhhh dard ho rha h muje

Watch: ap maroge nhi

Shlok: ha par ya dard ahhhh

Watch: thoda dard to sehna hi hoga agr plan or rhna h to

Shlok: hmm


Or vo muskrata hua akhe band krke let jata h or behoshi ka natak krne lgta h

Tabhi shutter ma dhum dhum ki awaje ati h jase koi use bhar sa kholne ki koshish kar rha ho


Srrrrrr srrrr srrrrr

Ki awaj ka sath shutter khul jata h or samne lana hath ma gun liya position ma khadi hoti h or uske piche uski force

Jab Lana ki nazar shlok par padti h to wo forun uske pas bhag kar jate h or uski nerves check krti h

Lana: abhi jinda h , ise forun hospital phuchao

Steve : ok mam

Fir khuch log milkar shlok ko uthane lagte h

Or shlok muskarata hua jate hue akhri bar Lana ko dekhta h
Usne ankhe itni Kam kholi thi ki koi uske ya harkat ko dekh na paya

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Hope you enjoyed it
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