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Nice and beautiful introduction of the story....Family Introduction
Dada - V N Tiwari (60 yrs) Pehle ye shehar me Accountant hua karte the lekin baad me humara pura pariwaar gaon aagaya. Inhe kitabe padhna pasand hai.
[Inke 3 bete aur ek beti hai]
Dadi - Kamla Tiwari (56 yrs) Ghar aur Gaon me sabhi log inka samman karte hai. Apne Parivar se bohot pyaar karti hai, aur ghar grahasti ki kafi samajh rakhti hai.
(For representative purposes only)
Bade Papa & Badi Maa ka jab mai chhota tha tabhi accident me death hogayi thi. Inki death ke baad hi Dada ji ne apne naukari chhodi thi aur vo sab ko leke Gaon aagaye the.
[Inki ek Beti hai]
Didi - Ankita Tiwari (24 yrs) Ye Bade Papa aur Maa ke accident ke baad se humare saath hi rehti thi. Abhi 6 months pehle hi inki pass ke Town me shaadi hui hai. Tab se ye apne Sasural me hi rehti hai. Mai ghar me sabse chhota hu isliye mujhe bohot pyaar karti hai.
(For representative purposes only)
Papa - Alok Nath Tiwari (42 yrs) Ye Thakur Sahab ke vaha Accountant hai. Kafi padhe likhe aur samajhdaar insaan hai. Inhe apne bade bete se jyada lagav hai.
[Inke 2 bete hai]
Maa - Nita Tiwari (38 yrs) Bohot hi pyaari aur sundar hai. Doodh jaisi safed aur Malai jaisa komal badan. Housewife hai apne parivar aur bacho se bohot pyaar karti hai. Aur mujhe to kuch jyada hi achha manti hai.
(For representative purposes only)
Bhaiya - Harshit Tiwari (21 yrs) Army me hai isliye bohot kam hi ghar aata hai, kafi fit aur intelligent hai. Ye Bachpan se hi padhai ki vajah se ghar se bahar hi rahe hai to inhe ghar se jyada lagaav bhi nahi.
Mai - Shaswat Tiwari (18 yrs) Mai ek Genius hu. Aur mujhe science and technology kafi pasand hai.
Chacha - Anuj Tiwari (37 yrs) Inhone Agriculture ki padhai ki hai to ab gaon me hamare khet yahi sambhalte hai. Mujhe apna beta hi samajhte hai.
[Inki 1 beti hai]
Chachi - Ritu Tiwari (35 yrs) Bohot hi sundar aur achhi hai. Ye bhi Maa ki tarah housewife hai aur ghar par hi rehti hai.
(For representative purposes only)
Cousin - Avni Tiwari (18 Yrs) Bohot hi hot ladki hai ekdam chachi pe gayi hai, Pass hi ke Sehar me Agriculture Sciences ki padhai kar rahi hai. Jab ghar me hi rehti tab meri isse kafi banti thi, Par ab bahar chali gayi hai to kabhi kabhi phone pe baat hoti hai. Ye bhi padhai me achhi hai.(Mere jitni bhi nahi..)
(For representative purposes only)
The story is in initial phase, any suggestions and ideas are very much welcome!
Thank You
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normal intro means khani flow me Chalke glow karagi I am waiting for that glow....and update alsoUpdate 01
Bang Bang Bang (Gunshot Sound in Movie)
Mai Baithak me sofe pe let ke araam se movie dekh raha tha, Aur karta bhi kya kyunki kal hi mere 12th boards ke exam khatam hue hai.
Aage karne keliye to bohot kuch hai par maine socha 1 din thoda araam karlu. Vaise bhi dopahar ka samay tha aur sab khana kha ke apne apne room me araam hi kar rahe the.
Movie khatam hone ke baad mai apne room me aagaya, Maine apna room kafi achha aur Hi-Tech bana rakha tha. Vaise to humara ghar Gaon mai hai par maine poore ghar me high speed wifi laga rakha tha aur mera Computer aur Phone to alag hi level ke hai.
Jaha tak maine suna hai ye humara pushtaini ghar hai jab dada ji apni shehar me naukari chhod kar gaon aaye the to fir sab yaha rehne lag gaye the. Aur ghar ko hamesha rennovate karate rehte hai isliye kafi naya jaisa hi hai.
(For Representative Purposes only)
Ghar me hi ek chhota sa Garden hai jiski Dadi dekhbhal karti hai.
Ground Floor - Baithak, Kitchen, Dada-Dadi ka Room aur Maa-Papa ka Room (Maa-Papa wala Room Master Bedroom hai to bohot bada aur sundar hai)
First Floor - Chacha-Chachi ka Room, Mera Room, Store Room aur ek badi si balcony.
Second Floor - Dada ji ka Office, Harshit Bhaiya ka Room and Ankita Didi ka room.
Third Floor - Badi se Chhat aur ek room joki pichli rennovation me hi bana tha isliye khali hi rehta hai.
Ankita didi ka room band hi rehta hai. Bhaiya aur Avni ka room jab vo log aate hai tab khulta hai aajkal to band hi hai.
Apne Room me aane ke baad mai bore ho raha tha, shaam bhi hogayi thi to maine socha apne dosto ke saath kahi ghumne niklu.
Mere 2 sabse achhe dost hai - Veer Gautam aur Sahil Syed
(Veer - Ye padhai me kuch khas nahi bas kaise taise pass ho jata hai, Din bhar body banata rehta hai isliye muscular bohot hai. Iske Papa ka Gaon me akhada hai.)
(Sahil - Ye padhai me achha hai science and technology isse bohot achhi lagti hai aage ussi ki padhai bhi karega. Mujhe Science ki pehle se hi bohot deep knowledge hai isliye mujhe apna Guru manta hai. Iske Papa ka Handicrafts ka buisness hai.)
Maine pehle Sahil ko call kiya
Mai - Hello, Sahil Ghumne Chal raha hai?
Sahil - Nahi bhai padhai karni hai.
Mai - Ab kya padhai karni hai?
Sahil - Bhai, Engineering entrance exam keliye padhna hai, tujhe bataya to tha.
Mai - Achha han ab yaad aaya. Chal thik hai fir Bye..
Ye to jaa nahi raha tha to maine Veer ko call kiya,
Mai - Hello, Bhai abhi free hai??
Veer - Bhai mai to hamesha hi khali hun!
Mai - Chal to fir ghumne chalte hai.
Veer - Thik hai, Bike lau ya paidal hi?
Mai - Aaj aise hi chalte hai mausam achha hai.
Veer - Chal thik hai thodi der me tere ghar aata hu. Bye..
Thodi der me Veer ghar ke neeche aagaya to mai room se aagaya. Jab mai baithak me pahucha to vaha Dadi aur Chachi baithe the.
Mai - Amma, Mai Veer ke Saath ghumne jaa raha hu.
Dadi - Achha Chai to pita ja.
Mai - Abhi Mann nahi.
Fir Mai Bahar aagaya aur vaha Veer khada mera intezaar kar raha tha.
Veer - Haa Bhai kaha chale?
Mai - Chal Nadi tak chakkar maar ke aate hai.
(Humare Gaon me ek Nadi bhi hai - Kesari Nadi)
Fir hum baat chit karte jane lage.
Mai - Bhai ab aage kya karega 12th to hogayi.
Veer - Bhai 12th mai pehle pass to ho jau.
Mai - Abe har exam ke din pehle maine tujhe padhaya hai kaise nahi hoga pass.
Veer - Ho jau to badhiya hi hai. Vaise tu kya karega?
Mai - Bhai mai to Gaon me reh kar Buisness karunga.
Veer - Mujhe laga tu padhai me itna achha hai to kuch scientist type banega.
Mai - Abe chutiye har intelligent aadmi scientist hi nahi banta.
Fir aise hi jaate jaate nadi aagayi.
Veer - Bhai chal Nadi mai Swimming challenge karte hai dekhte hai kon jaldi nadi paar karke aata hai.
Mai - Tujh jaisi budhi wale ko yahi sab aata hai!
Veer - Chal na Please maja aayega.
Mai - Chal theek hai.
Mai pehle bhi nadi me taira hu par kabhi koi competition nahi kiya tha.
Fir hum dono ne kapde utare aur phone me timer laga ke kud gaye nadi me.
Veer mujhse bohot tej tair raha tha, par mujhe pehle se hi pata tha ki jite ga to vahi.
Jab hum vapas starting point par pahuche to mujhe 20 min lage aur Veer ko sirf 8 min!
Mai - Jitne wala to tu hi tha tabhi to tune idea diya.
Veer - Haan par kya fark padhta hai, dono ka workout to ho gaya.
Mai - Chal thik hai fir ab Raat hogayi hai ghar chalte hai.
Fir vo apne ghar ki taraf chal diya aur mai apne.
To be Continued...
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Nice and lovely update....Update 01
Bang Bang Bang (Gunshot Sound in Movie)
Mai Baithak me sofe pe let ke araam se movie dekh raha tha, Aur karta bhi kya kyunki kal hi mere 12th boards ke exam khatam hue hai.
Aage karne keliye to bohot kuch hai par maine socha 1 din thoda araam karlu. Vaise bhi dopahar ka samay tha aur sab khana kha ke apne apne room me araam hi kar rahe the.
Movie khatam hone ke baad mai apne room me aagaya, Maine apna room kafi achha aur Hi-Tech bana rakha tha. Vaise to humara ghar Gaon mai hai par maine poore ghar me high speed wifi laga rakha tha aur mera Computer aur Phone to alag hi level ke hai.
Jaha tak maine suna hai ye humara pushtaini ghar hai jab dada ji apni shehar me naukari chhod kar gaon aaye the to fir sab yaha rehne lag gaye the. Aur ghar ko hamesha rennovate karate rehte hai isliye kafi naya jaisa hi hai.
(For Representative Purposes only)
Ghar me hi ek chhota sa Garden hai jiski Dadi dekhbhal karti hai.
Ground Floor - Baithak, Kitchen, Dada-Dadi ka Room aur Maa-Papa ka Room (Maa-Papa wala Room Master Bedroom hai to bohot bada aur sundar hai)
First Floor - Chacha-Chachi ka Room, Mera Room, Store Room aur ek badi si balcony.
Second Floor - Dada ji ka Office, Harshit Bhaiya ka Room and Ankita Didi ka room.
Third Floor - Badi se Chhat aur ek room joki pichli rennovation me hi bana tha isliye khali hi rehta hai.
Ankita didi ka room band hi rehta hai. Bhaiya aur Avni ka room jab vo log aate hai tab khulta hai aajkal to band hi hai.
Apne Room me aane ke baad mai bore ho raha tha, shaam bhi hogayi thi to maine socha apne dosto ke saath kahi ghumne niklu.
Mere 2 sabse achhe dost hai - Veer Gautam aur Sahil Syed
(Veer - Ye padhai me kuch khas nahi bas kaise taise pass ho jata hai, Din bhar body banata rehta hai isliye muscular bohot hai. Iske Papa ka Gaon me akhada hai.)
(Sahil - Ye padhai me achha hai science and technology isse bohot achhi lagti hai aage ussi ki padhai bhi karega. Mujhe Science ki pehle se hi bohot deep knowledge hai isliye mujhe apna Guru manta hai. Iske Papa ka Handicrafts ka buisness hai.)
Maine pehle Sahil ko call kiya
Mai - Hello, Sahil Ghumne Chal raha hai?
Sahil - Nahi bhai padhai karni hai.
Mai - Ab kya padhai karni hai?
Sahil - Bhai, Engineering entrance exam keliye padhna hai, tujhe bataya to tha.
Mai - Achha han ab yaad aaya. Chal thik hai fir Bye..
Ye to jaa nahi raha tha to maine Veer ko call kiya,
Mai - Hello, Bhai abhi free hai??
Veer - Bhai mai to hamesha hi khali hun!
Mai - Chal to fir ghumne chalte hai.
Veer - Thik hai, Bike lau ya paidal hi?
Mai - Aaj aise hi chalte hai mausam achha hai.
Veer - Chal thik hai thodi der me tere ghar aata hu. Bye..
Thodi der me Veer ghar ke neeche aagaya to mai room se aagaya. Jab mai baithak me pahucha to vaha Dadi aur Chachi baithe the.
Mai - Amma, Mai Veer ke Saath ghumne jaa raha hu.
Dadi - Achha Chai to pita ja.
Mai - Abhi Mann nahi.
Fir Mai Bahar aagaya aur vaha Veer khada mera intezaar kar raha tha.
Veer - Haa Bhai kaha chale?
Mai - Chal Nadi tak chakkar maar ke aate hai.
(Humare Gaon me ek Nadi bhi hai - Kesari Nadi)
Fir hum baat chit karte jane lage.
Mai - Bhai ab aage kya karega 12th to hogayi.
Veer - Bhai 12th mai pehle pass to ho jau.
Mai - Abe har exam ke din pehle maine tujhe padhaya hai kaise nahi hoga pass.
Veer - Ho jau to badhiya hi hai. Vaise tu kya karega?
Mai - Bhai mai to Gaon me reh kar Buisness karunga.
Veer - Mujhe laga tu padhai me itna achha hai to kuch scientist type banega.
Mai - Abe chutiye har intelligent aadmi scientist hi nahi banta.
Fir aise hi jaate jaate nadi aagayi.
Veer - Bhai chal Nadi mai Swimming challenge karte hai dekhte hai kon jaldi nadi paar karke aata hai.
Mai - Tujh jaisi budhi wale ko yahi sab aata hai!
Veer - Chal na Please maja aayega.
Mai - Chal theek hai.
Mai pehle bhi nadi me taira hu par kabhi koi competition nahi kiya tha.
Fir hum dono ne kapde utare aur phone me timer laga ke kud gaye nadi me.
Veer mujhse bohot tej tair raha tha, par mujhe pehle se hi pata tha ki jite ga to vahi.
Jab hum vapas starting point par pahuche to mujhe 20 min lage aur Veer ko sirf 8 min!
Mai - Jitne wala to tu hi tha tabhi to tune idea diya.
Veer - Haan par kya fark padhta hai, dono ka workout to ho gaya.
Mai - Chal thik hai fir ab Raat hogayi hai ghar chalte hai.
Fir vo apne ghar ki taraf chal diya aur mai apne.
To be Continued...
Himanshu kumar
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Yasasvi3
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Dekho sab koi yahi chahaga update nada ho or daily aaye....but in real life daily bada update... possible nahi h kuki bada update likhne me 4 ghante lag jate h sirf likhna.....ho ki shyad na ho paye....to...aap do kaam kar sakte h...phala aap roj fix time p update de chahe wo 1k word ka ho ya jitna bada...kisi din Kam kisi din jyada ....ya dusraaap....
2 din se update de per thoda bada ....ya aap 3 din se bhi de sakte h per........deal yahi hogi ki aap update fix time pe de deI know yaha forum per asa koi reword nahi h ki aap likh doge to kuch milaga but Mera Maan na h ki kuch nahi karne sebehtar h kuch karana....mene bhi try kiye h but niji karno ki wajah se mera possible hi nahi h likhna....warna ideas khanaiya bhot aati h mind m....so ager aap likh pa rahe ho matlab aap khud nasib hokher that's what I wanna say ...... Hope u will update soon