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Fantasy THE FIGHTER

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Update no 5


Jackson or baki dono becharo ko kafi waqt laga mujha ya sabit krna main ka main pichla ak saal sa coma main tha

Main....wasa main ak saal comma main gya kasa koi mujh pr rahm kra or ya bhi bta da


Jack....Is ka 2 main reason hain!

Main...or wo kya hain.........main is waqt hlka gussa main tha gussa ay bhi kyu na ap so kr utho or koi ap sa kha ka tum ak sall sa mara pra tha to phir gussa to ay ga hi na


jack...1st tumhari soul ka kuch hissa us aggrement na absorb kr liya or 2nd ham na jo urjha tumhari body main dali thi wo stable nhi ho rhi thi ya to acha huva ham na tumhari urjha pr seal lga di warna us urjha ko stable hona main shayd 20 25 saal lg gata itni zyda urhja thi smjha kuch



or main muu phara ya sab sun rha tha ab itna kuch dekh or sun liya tha ka kuch bhi namumkin mujha nhi lag rha tha


Main....wasa tum logo na itni shakti mujha kyu di wo tum khud bhi to rakh sakta tha na


Or mera is bachkana swal pr wo sirf muskura diya ab kya btata mujha ka agr wo us shakti ko absorb krna ki koshish krta to un ka sath kya hota?


Main...khush hota hua....to ab mera pass shaktiya


jack....zyda khush mat ho jasa ka mana bola un sab shaktiyo pr abhi seal lagi hoi ha to is ka mtlb ka tumhari shaktiya abhi ak deep sleeping state main hain


Main.....bhut nikami shaktiya hain yaar mana unha istemal tak nhi kya or ya abhi sa sleeping state main chli gyi


jack .....tora sa furstrated hota hua....yaar un pr seal lagi ha is liya wo sleeping state main hain smjha or tumhara sharir abhi is kabil nhi ha ka unha sambhal ska



Main...to phir ab kya krna ha mujha ak or baat jldi ghar pohncha do sab kitna pershan honga mera liya


Jack......abhi hamin tumhari body ko strong bnana ho ga or rhi baat tumhara apno ki to ya dekho


or us ka hath sa ak ray nikli jisna ja kr ak screen ka roop la liya jis main mana dekha mera coma ka jna ka bad Rishab na mujha kitna dhunda wo kitna pershan tha kitna roya wo mera liya akhir bachpan ka dost tha mera or jab us na ghar ja kr sab ko ya btaya to mom kitna royi or ak traf mera baap bhai or pyari bhen jinhain kuch khass feel tak na hua or yo hi sab ki zindgi aga brhna lagi sab mujha bhool chuka tha sivay Rishab or mom ka jo kabhi kabhi mujha yaad kr ka do ansu bha liya krta tha baki sab ki zindgi pr mera jana sa kuch khass frak na pra kyu un sab ka liya to main sirf ak lalu hi tha




Ya sab mujha sa or bardsht na hua or mana pass pra hu pather utha kr us screen pr da mara jisa wo gyab ho gi or main apna sir pkad kr baith gya nicha


jack...dekho bacha yhi zindgi ha is duniya main apni jgha khud bnanai prti ha or bhut kam asa apna hota ha jo sath nibhata hain is safar main koi bhi kisi ko perfect nhi dakh sakta pr tum lucky ho tumhara pass chance ha apni is zindgi ko kuch mayna dena ka kuch kr dikhna ka is duniya apni jgha bnana ka agr tum chaho to ham tumhain ghar chor kr a skta hain abhi ka abhi ya tum yha rah kr khud ko ak nya roop da skta ho faisla tumhara jo bhi ho main tumha nhi roku ga



Jack ka har lafz mujh pr ak bhot zyda deep asar choor gya in lafzo na meri puri soch bdal di or kuch jo ksar baki thi wo apna dad bhai or vanshika na nikal di thi mujha hamesha lgta tha ka bhai or vanshika ko meri fikar rehti ha pr wo show nhi krta or jab mujha yaad aya ka jinha main mom dad kah rha hu wo asal main mera maa baap hain hi nhi to phir picha jana ka to swal hi paida nhi hua



Main......man me...ab picha pltna ka waqt nhi hain ab waqt ha sab ko mu tor jwab dena ka ab waqt ha dunuya ko laat mar kr jina ka waqt ha aga brhna ka or zindgi jina ka


ya sab kuch meri soch thi or kuch mera ander chuppi shatiyo ka asar tha hla na ka wo abhi seal thi lekin hamesha ja liya to nhi na


main...mujha batiya kya krna hoga mujha

jack....muskurata hua.....acha faisla liya ha tum na bacha well phela tumhain apni body ko strong bnana ho ga jisa kaliya sab sa best options hain martial arts ... com fu ... judo ..krata ...or bhi hsin pr abhi pr phela ya



Main.....to main in sab main sa chosse kr sakta hu na ...khush hota hua

jack....ak devil smile deta hua??....well is main kuch bhi chosse nhi krna ya sab kuch sikhna ha ya to kuch bhi nhi hain kuch fighting techniqes ham na khud invent ki ha wo bhi ham tumhain sikhain ga pr abhi tum ya sab sikh lo


us ki baat sun kr meri gaand phat kr khander ban gyi sari zindgi mana excercise kya morning walk nhi ki or kya bola ja rha ha




Main...wwoo kkuch kam nhi ho sakta kya is main sa


Hahahahahahahahaha

or sab apna dant dikha diya mujha or main in ka matlb samjh gy

Main.....wasa ham hain kha




jack ......ya ak iland ha jo ka india sa kafi dur ha or yha dur dur tak koi country ya kuch bhi nhi


Main..to ham kana kya khayn ga...pershaan hota hua

Jack...us ku tension tum mat lo or jao aaram kro apna ghar main kyu ka subha sa tumha arram krba ka golden chance nhi milna wala smjha


Main.....ghar abe is khander ko ghar kon bolta ha ba pgla gy ho kya


or wo sab meri bast sunna sa phela hi gyab ho chuka tha main bhi khander main ghus gya body to phela hi weak thi is liya jld hi main neend ki agosh main agya


Main so rha tha kisi na mujha zabrdasti hila hila kr uthya mana samna dekhta to ya jack tha main abhi bhi adi neend main tha


main...kya ha sona da na ba bhaag ya sa

jack na mera hath pkra or agla hi pal ham gyab ho kr kisi waterfall ka nicha ga gira mtlb main gira wa sala jack to bahir khra tha jasa ka main ab bhi pura jaga nhi tha is liya achanks asa hota hi



Main.....aaaaaaaaaaaah mai doob rha hu koi bchao aaaaaaah aaaaaaaah abe jack kta kr rha mujha bacha main mar jau ga

main jab thora hosh main aya to pata chla ka pani to sirf meri kamer tak hi tha phir maun zara nhya ak baar ji bhr ka skhir bhai ak saal bd nha rha tha main nhana ka baad whi gilli pant or shirt ka sath bhair aya kapra to or tha nhi so whi sukha kr kam chla liya


Main..excitment main shuru krain


jack...kyu nhi jao is pr iland ka 10 chakker lga kr ao

main mu phra.. ......kya pagal ho gya ha kya pata ha kitna bra iland ha ya kyu firki la rha ha yaar

jack...15 chakker


main .....jack yrr mzakh na kr please


jack....20 chakker

main phatti aankho sa bs jack ko dekh rha tha



Main jldi jldi......jack aa jack bhai 15 pr deal done krta hain na bhai aaaa bhai

jack....25

jack 25 chakker khna wala tha pr main wha sa phela hi bhag gya chakker lgana ka iland bhut bra tha mana mushkil sa 4 chakker lgay or main bheosh pra tha wha pr jack mera pass aya us na kuch bola or main dobara hosh main agya


jack .....dobara sa


main .......nhi nhi plz plz bhai

pr usna ak na sunni meri or main phir sa whi krna lga mtlb bhgna lga asa hi din guzrna lga ab main 10 chakker kafi aaram sa lga leta tha jack na kuch marital arts bhi shuru krwa diya tha jis pr wo martial arts ki training ka naam pr mujha mar mar kr apni bhrass niklta rheta tha
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Aj pura 1 month ho gya tha mujha is iland pa is ak mahina main jackson or baki dono na mujh sa pata nhi kon sa jnam ka badla liya tha salo na ab main aram sa is pura iland ka 60 70 chakker lga sakta tha ab kafi hd ta martial arts,judo or krata main sikh chuka thaphela 5 10 din to jack na mujha acha sa pita or jab bhi main puchta martial arts sikhana ka bjaya tu mujha pit kyu rha ha to us ka jwab hamesha ki tarha yhi hota ka marna sa zyda mar khana ana chahiya us sa pit pit kr har roz bhaag bhaag kr or kuch martial arts ki training sa ab meri body kafi strong ho gi thi ab kafi hd tak us ki mar bardasht kr lata tha aj to situation ya thi ka ager jack mujha do mara to us ka bdla main bhi zyda nhi pr ak to mar hi sakta or jack ko wo ak bhi main pori shiddat sa marta tha mera bs chlta to main is jack naam ka pranni ka khoon pi jata sala itna zulam rehna ka liya ak alishan khander subha khana ka liya phal jo ka main khud la kr ata tha or ager koi shikar mil jay to meri to chandi hoti thi us din yha rah kr main shikar krna bhi sikh gya tha or mera pass ak hi shirt or pant thi jisa har roz khud hi dhobbi ki tarha dho kr phan leta tha aj meri bhut zyda phat rhi or is ki wjha bhi ap ko pata hi ho gi ji ha wo wjha jack hi ha us na kal mujh sa bola tha ka kal mujha wo kuch asi fighting techniques sikhaya go us na khud invent ki hain or main soch rha tha ka jo martial ats or krata ki tachniques jo isna mujha sikhai wo itni khatrnak thi to jo us na khud invent ki wo kitni khatrnak ho sakti ha main jab fresh hokar hamesha ki tarha us place pr gya jha jack mujha train krta tha wha ja kr main dhyan main baith gya ya bhi jack babu na hi sikhaya tha kuch dair main vo bhi a gya




jack...To ready ho bacha



Main.....Yes i am ready!!!!! asal main ander sa meri phat rhi thi


Jack.....ab tak jo tum ab tak tum insano ki sari ni purani fighting techniques kuch hd tak sikh chuka ho pr wo sab to bacho wali techniques thi ab tumha main sikhta hoon asli fighting skills is ka bd ham dono aamna samna akr khra ho gya main kuch samjh pata is sa pehla ya aya punch gisa aaram sa block kr liya mana main abhi isi main khush jack na dusra hath ki 2 ungliya mera chest pr mari us ka bad ak or punch chest pa or ak kick or main urta huva samna trees ka bich ga gira main apna kisi bhi body part ko hila nhi pa rha tha asa lag rha tha jasa pura sharir main jaan hi na ho

jack.....Hahahahahahaha ya to meri sab sa low level ki technique thi tum to abhi sa dhar ho gya


mana kafi bar jack sa mar khi thi lekin ya thori alag thi jack mera pass aya us na dono fingers mera chest pr rakh ka kuch kiya or tab ja kr mujha kuch hosh aya mujha bohat hi zyda kamzori feel ho rhi thi aj jack na rest krna ka bola or main chal diya apna Raj mahal ki tarf kuch aaram kiya or subh phir whi asa hi 4 month bit gay ab tak main jack ki sari techniques main expert ho chuka tha is ka ilava sword fight main bhi mana mharat hasil kar li thi main apni sikhna ki speed sa khud bhibkafi heran tha sari zindgi jisna excercise to dur morning walk tak na ki aj wo duniya bhar ki fighting techniques main expert ban chuka tha or kuch techniques jo jack na sikhai thi woto shyad puri duniya main koi na hanta ho aj jab fresh ho kr main apna kapra dho rha tha to pani main apni body dakhi sala yha to apna 8 packs ban gay tha hight bhi ab 6 fit ka karib ho gyi ho gi or ya mera face jisa mana 1.5 years sa shave nhi kiya tha ak bar to main bhi dar gya ager koi or dakh leta to sala heart attack sa hi mar jata itna horror scen pash kar rha tha mera face aj jab jack ka pass gya to wo asa hi baitha huva tha







Main....jack aj training nhi krway ga kya jldi kr uth




Jack....tumhari training puri ho chuki ha bacha asi koi fighting technique nhi bachi puri duniya main jo tumha na ati ho ab tum redy ho




Main....ya to achi baat ha na to chl kuch or sikha do yaar


Jack......ab kuch or nhi bacha ab tumhara wapis janaka time agya ha



Main........pr meri powers pr jo seal lagi ha us ka kya wo to htai nhi tum na ager main ready hu to usa hta do na



Jack .......nhi nhi abhi nhi abhi waqt nhi aya ha isa htana ka jab us ka htna ka shi time wo khud ba khud hat gayi gi or tumhari shaktiya purn roop sa jagrit ho gay gi




Main........kya yaar abhi bhi time nhi aya to kab ay ga




jack.....pershan na ho bacha"""TERA TIME AY GA""""""" hahahaha


Main ..muskurata huva haan kyu nhi

ab samjh nhi arha tha ka kya bolu jack ko ka usa chor kar nhi jana chahta kya socha ga wo or udhr jack ka bhi kuch whi haal tha


























Ak lambi khamoshi .................................

sach baat to ya thi ka main wapis nhi jana chahta tha ak alag sa lagav ho gya tha is jgha ka sath or jack ka sath sala jo bhi bolu pr jack bnda great tha











Jack......zyda mat socho tumha jana hi ho ga tumhari nyi zindgi tumhara intezar kar rhi ha karan or ya lo meri taraf sa ak Gift



ya ak purana sa box tha jab mana khola to us main ak bhot hi khobsurat dagger tha jis ka ka handle pr ak Tiger ka nishan bna hua






Jack........ya mujha mera guru na diya tha sari zindgi isa smbhal kr rakha mana pr aj tumha da rha hu


jack ki aankhain nam ho gi thi




Main... to apna jack dukhi bhi hota ya kuch alag ha main aga brha or jack ko gala sa lga liya



jack......chal chal ab zyda notanki na kr niklna ka liya ready ho ga


Main...ready kya hona ha main kon sa samman la kr aya tha yha


jack...to chlo



jack na ak black hole open kya jo sidha khula mera shaher ka bhar jack mujha wha chor kr nikal liya or main khra tha apna shaher ka samna jha milli thi mujha sirf zilllat insult jha pr meri hasiyat do kori ki nhi thi lekin ab



main....man me......ab agya hu wapis ab pura hisab lu ga har us insan sa jisna mujha taklif di because""""" NOW ITS MY TIME""""""
 
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Aj pura 1 month ho gya tha mujha is iland pa is ak mahina main jackson or baki dono na mujh sa pata nhi kon sa jnam ka badla liya tha salo na ab main aram sa is pura iland ka 60 70 chakker lga sakta tha ab kafi hd ta martial arts,judo or krata main sikh chuka thaphela 5 10 din to jack na mujha acha sa pita or jab bhi main puchta martial arts sikhana ka bjaya tu mujha pit kyu rha ha to us ka jwab hamesha ki tarha yhi hota ka marna sa zyda mar khana ana chahiya us sa pit pit kr har roz bhaag bhaag kr or kuch martial arts ki training sa ab meri body kafi strong ho gi thi ab kafi hd tak us ki mar bardasht kr lata tha aj to situation ya thi ka ager jack mujha do mara to us ka bdla main bhi zyda nhi pr ak to mar hi sakta or jack ko wo ak bhi main pori shiddat sa marta tha mera bs chlta to main is jack naam ka pranni ka khoon pi jata sala itna zulam rehna ka liya ak alishan khander subha khana ka liya phal jo ka main khud la kr ata tha or ager koi shikar mil jay to meri to chandi hoti thi us din yha rah kr main shikar krna bhi sikh gya tha or mera pass ak hi shirt or pant thi jisa har roz khud hi dhobbi ki tarha dho kr phan leta tha aj meri bhut zyda phat rhi or is ki wjha bhi ap ko pata hi ho gi ji ha wo wjha jack hi ha us na kal mujh sa bola tha ka kal mujha wo kuch asi fighting techniques sikhaya go us na khud invent ki hain or main soch rha tha ka jo martial ats or krata ki tachniques jo isna mujha sikhai wo itni khatrnak thi to jo us na khud invent ki wo kitni khatrnak ho sakti ha main jab fresh hokar hamesha ki tarha us place pr gya jha jack mujha train krta tha wha ja kr main dhyan main baith gya ya bhi jack babu na hi sikhaya tha kuch dair main vo bhi a gya




jack...To ready ho bacha



Main.....Yes i am ready!!!!! asal main ander sa meri phat rhi thi


Jack.....ab tak jo tum ab tak tum insano ki sari ni purani fighting techniques kuch hd tak sikh chuka ho pr wo sab to bacho wali techniques thi ab tumha main sikhta hoon asli fighting skills is ka bd ham dono aamna samna akr khra ho gya main kuch samjh pata is sa pehla ya aya punch gisa aaram sa block kr liya mana main abhi isi main khush jack na dusra hath ki 2 ungliya mera chest pr mari us ka bad ak or punch chest pa or ak kick or main urta huva samna trees ka bich ga gira main apna kisi bhi body part ko hila nhi pa rha tha asa lag rha tha jasa pura sharir main jaan hi na ho

jack.....Hahahahahahaha ya to meri sab sa low level ki technique thi tum to abhi sa dhar ho gya


mana kafi bar jack sa mar khi thi lekin ya thori alag thi jack mera pass aya us na dono fingers mera chest pr rakh ka kuch kiya or tab ja kr mujha kuch hosh aya mujha bohat hi zyda kamzori feel ho rhi thi aj jack na rest krna ka bola or main chal diya apna Raj mahal ki tarf kuch aaram kiya or subh phir whi asa hi 4 month bit gay ab tak main jack ki sari techniques main expert ho chuka tha is ka ilava sword fight main bhi mana mharat hasil kar li thi main apni sikhna ki speed sa khud bhibkafi heran tha sari zindgi jisna excercise to dur morning walk tak na ki aj wo duniya bhar ki fighting techniques main expert ban chuka tha or kuch techniques jo jack na sikhai thi woto shyad puri duniya main koi na hanta ho aj jab fresh ho kr main apna kapra dho rha tha to pani main apni body dakhi sala yha to apna 8 packs ban gay tha hight bhi ab 6 fit ka karib ho gyi ho gi or ya mera face jisa mana 1.5 years sa shave nhi kiya tha ak bar to main bhi dar gya ager koi or dakh leta to sala heart attack sa hi mar jata itna horror scen pash kar rha tha mera face aj jab jack ka pass gya to wo asa hi baitha huva tha







Main....jack aj training nhi krway ga kya jldi kr uth




Jack....tumhari training puri ho chuki ha bacha asi koi fighting technique nhi bachi puri duniya main jo tumha na ati ho ab tum redy ho




Main....ya to achi baat ha na to chl kuch or sikha do yaar


Jack......ab kuch or nhi bacha ab tumhara wapis janaka time agya ha



Main........pr meri powers pr jo seal lagi ha us ka kya wo to htai nhi tum na ager main ready hu to usa hta do na



Jack .......nhi nhi abhi nhi abhi waqt nhi aya ha isa htana ka jab us ka htna ka shi time wo khud ba khud hat gayi gi or tumhari shaktiya purn roop sa jagrit ho gay gi




Main........kya yaar abhi bhi time nhi aya to kab ay ga




jack.....pershan na ho bacha"""TERA TIME AY GA""""""" hahahaha


Main ..muskurata huva haan kyu nhi

ab samjh nhi arha tha ka kya bolu jack ko ka usa chor kar nhi jana chahta kya socha ga wo or udhr jack ka bhi kuch whi haal tha


























Ak lambi khamoshi .................................

sach baat to ya thi ka main wapis nhi jana chahta tha ak alag sa lagav ho gya tha is jgha ka sath or jack ka sath sala jo bhi bolu pr jack bnda great tha











Jack......zyda mat socho tumha jana hi ho ga tumhari nyi zindgi tumhara intezar kar rhi ha karan or ya lo meri taraf sa ak Gift



ya ak purana sa box tha jab mana khola to us main ak bhot hi khobsurat dagger tha jis ka ka handle pr ak Tiger ka nishan bna hua






Jack........ya mujha mera guru na diya tha sari zindgi isa smbhal kr rakha mana pr aj tumha da rha hu


jack ki aankhain nam ho gi thi




Main... to apna jack dukhi bhi hota ya kuch alag ha main aga brha or jack ko gala sa lga liya



jack......chal chal ab zyda notanki na kr niklna ka liya ready ho ga


Main...ready kya hona ha main kon sa samman la kr aya tha yha


jack...to chlo



jack na ak black hole open kya jo sidha khula mera shaher ka bhar jack mujha wha chor kr nikal liya or main khra tha apna shaher ka samna jha milli thi mujha sirf zilllat insult jha pr meri hasiyat do kori ki nhi thi lekin ab



main....man me......ab agya hu wapis ab pura hisab lu ga har us insan sa jisna mujha taklif di because""""" NOW ITS MY TIME""""""
Nice update bro butt chota tha
 

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Update no 6

Aj pura 1 month ho gya tha mujha is iland pa is ak mahina main jackson or baki dono na mujh sa pata nhi kon sa jnam ka badla liya tha salo na ab main aram sa is pura iland ka 60 70 chakker lga sakta tha ab kafi hd ta martial arts,judo or krata main sikh chuka thaphela 5 10 din to jack na mujha acha sa pita or jab bhi main puchta martial arts sikhana ka bjaya tu mujha pit kyu rha ha to us ka jwab hamesha ki tarha yhi hota ka marna sa zyda mar khana ana chahiya us sa pit pit kr har roz bhaag bhaag kr or kuch martial arts ki training sa ab meri body kafi strong ho gi thi ab kafi hd tak us ki mar bardasht kr lata tha aj to situation ya thi ka ager jack mujha do mara to us ka bdla main bhi zyda nhi pr ak to mar hi sakta or jack ko wo ak bhi main pori shiddat sa marta tha mera bs chlta to main is jack naam ka pranni ka khoon pi jata sala itna zulam rehna ka liya ak alishan khander subha khana ka liya phal jo ka main khud la kr ata tha or ager koi shikar mil jay to meri to chandi hoti thi us din yha rah kr main shikar krna bhi sikh gya tha or mera pass ak hi shirt or pant thi jisa har roz khud hi dhobbi ki tarha dho kr phan leta tha aj meri bhut zyda phat rhi or is ki wjha bhi ap ko pata hi ho gi ji ha wo wjha jack hi ha us na kal mujh sa bola tha ka kal mujha wo kuch asi fighting techniques sikhaya go us na khud invent ki hain or main soch rha tha ka jo martial ats or krata ki tachniques jo isna mujha sikhai wo itni khatrnak thi to jo us na khud invent ki wo kitni khatrnak ho sakti ha main jab fresh hokar hamesha ki tarha us place pr gya jha jack mujha train krta tha wha ja kr main dhyan main baith gya ya bhi jack babu na hi sikhaya tha kuch dair main vo bhi a gya




jack...To ready ho bacha



Main.....Yes i am ready!!!!! asal main ander sa meri phat rhi thi


Jack.....ab tak jo tum ab tak tum insano ki sari ni purani fighting techniques kuch hd tak sikh chuka ho pr wo sab to bacho wali techniques thi ab tumha main sikhta hoon asli fighting skills is ka bd ham dono aamna samna akr khra ho gya main kuch samjh pata is sa pehla ya aya punch gisa aaram sa block kr liya mana main abhi isi main khush jack na dusra hath ki 2 ungliya mera chest pr mari us ka bad ak or punch chest pa or ak kick or main urta huva samna trees ka bich ga gira main apna kisi bhi body part ko hila nhi pa rha tha asa lag rha tha jasa pura sharir main jaan hi na ho

jack.....Hahahahahahaha ya to meri sab sa low level ki technique thi tum to abhi sa dhar ho gya


mana kafi bar jack sa mar khi thi lekin ya thori alag thi jack mera pass aya us na dono fingers mera chest pr rakh ka kuch kiya or tab ja kr mujha kuch hosh aya mujha bohat hi zyda kamzori feel ho rhi thi aj jack na rest krna ka bola or main chal diya apna Raj mahal ki tarf kuch aaram kiya or subh phir whi asa hi 4 month bit gay ab tak main jack ki sari techniques main expert ho chuka tha is ka ilava sword fight main bhi mana mharat hasil kar li thi main apni sikhna ki speed sa khud bhibkafi heran tha sari zindgi jisna excercise to dur morning walk tak na ki aj wo duniya bhar ki fighting techniques main expert ban chuka tha or kuch techniques jo jack na sikhai thi woto shyad puri duniya main koi na hanta ho aj jab fresh ho kr main apna kapra dho rha tha to pani main apni body dakhi sala yha to apna 8 packs ban gay tha hight bhi ab 6 fit ka karib ho gyi ho gi or ya mera face jisa mana 1.5 years sa shave nhi kiya tha ak bar to main bhi dar gya ager koi or dakh leta to sala heart attack sa hi mar jata itna horror scen pash kar rha tha mera face aj jab jack ka pass gya to wo asa hi baitha huva tha







Main....jack aj training nhi krway ga kya jldi kr uth




Jack....tumhari training puri ho chuki ha bacha asi koi fighting technique nhi bachi puri duniya main jo tumha na ati ho ab tum redy ho




Main....ya to achi baat ha na to chl kuch or sikha do yaar


Jack......ab kuch or nhi bacha ab tumhara wapis janaka time agya ha



Main........pr meri powers pr jo seal lagi ha us ka kya wo to htai nhi tum na ager main ready hu to usa hta do na



Jack .......nhi nhi abhi nhi abhi waqt nhi aya ha isa htana ka jab us ka htna ka shi time wo khud ba khud hat gayi gi or tumhari shaktiya purn roop sa jagrit ho gay gi




Main........kya yaar abhi bhi time nhi aya to kab ay ga




jack.....pershan na ho bacha"""TERA TIME AY GA""""""" hahahaha


Main ..muskurata huva haan kyu nhi

ab samjh nhi arha tha ka kya bolu jack ko ka usa chor kar nhi jana chahta kya socha ga wo or udhr jack ka bhi kuch whi haal tha


























Ak lambi khamoshi .................................

sach baat to ya thi ka main wapis nhi jana chahta tha ak alag sa lagav ho gya tha is jgha ka sath or jack ka sath sala jo bhi bolu pr jack bnda great tha











Jack......zyda mat socho tumha jana hi ho ga tumhari nyi zindgi tumhara intezar kar rhi ha karan or ya lo meri taraf sa ak Gift



ya ak purana sa box tha jab mana khola to us main ak bhot hi khobsurat dagger tha jis ka ka handle pr ak Tiger ka nishan bna hua






Jack........ya mujha mera guru na diya tha sari zindgi isa smbhal kr rakha mana pr aj tumha da rha hu


jack ki aankhain nam ho gi thi




Main... to apna jack dukhi bhi hota ya kuch alag ha main aga brha or jack ko gala sa lga liya



jack......chal chal ab zyda notanki na kr niklna ka liya ready ho ga


Main...ready kya hona ha main kon sa samman la kr aya tha yha


jack...to chlo



jack na ak black hole open kya jo sidha khula mera shaher ka bhar jack mujha wha chor kr nikal liya or main khra tha apna shaher ka samna jha milli thi mujha sirf zilllat insult jha pr meri hasiyat do kori ki nhi thi lekin ab



main....man me......ab agya hu wapis ab pura hisab lu ga har us insan sa jisna mujha taklif di because""""" NOW ITS MY TIME""""""
Nice update bro
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update no 6

Aj pura 1 month ho gya tha mujha is iland pa is ak mahina main jackson or baki dono na mujh sa pata nhi kon sa jnam ka badla liya tha salo na ab main aram sa is pura iland ka 60 70 chakker lga sakta tha ab kafi hd ta martial arts,judo or krata main sikh chuka thaphela 5 10 din to jack na mujha acha sa pita or jab bhi main puchta martial arts sikhana ka bjaya tu mujha pit kyu rha ha to us ka jwab hamesha ki tarha yhi hota ka marna sa zyda mar khana ana chahiya us sa pit pit kr har roz bhaag bhaag kr or kuch martial arts ki training sa ab meri body kafi strong ho gi thi ab kafi hd tak us ki mar bardasht kr lata tha aj to situation ya thi ka ager jack mujha do mara to us ka bdla main bhi zyda nhi pr ak to mar hi sakta or jack ko wo ak bhi main pori shiddat sa marta tha mera bs chlta to main is jack naam ka pranni ka khoon pi jata sala itna zulam rehna ka liya ak alishan khander subha khana ka liya phal jo ka main khud la kr ata tha or ager koi shikar mil jay to meri to chandi hoti thi us din yha rah kr main shikar krna bhi sikh gya tha or mera pass ak hi shirt or pant thi jisa har roz khud hi dhobbi ki tarha dho kr phan leta tha aj meri bhut zyda phat rhi or is ki wjha bhi ap ko pata hi ho gi ji ha wo wjha jack hi ha us na kal mujh sa bola tha ka kal mujha wo kuch asi fighting techniques sikhaya go us na khud invent ki hain or main soch rha tha ka jo martial ats or krata ki tachniques jo isna mujha sikhai wo itni khatrnak thi to jo us na khud invent ki wo kitni khatrnak ho sakti ha main jab fresh hokar hamesha ki tarha us place pr gya jha jack mujha train krta tha wha ja kr main dhyan main baith gya ya bhi jack babu na hi sikhaya tha kuch dair main vo bhi a gya




jack...To ready ho bacha



Main.....Yes i am ready!!!!! asal main ander sa meri phat rhi thi


Jack.....ab tak jo tum ab tak tum insano ki sari ni purani fighting techniques kuch hd tak sikh chuka ho pr wo sab to bacho wali techniques thi ab tumha main sikhta hoon asli fighting skills is ka bd ham dono aamna samna akr khra ho gya main kuch samjh pata is sa pehla ya aya punch gisa aaram sa block kr liya mana main abhi isi main khush jack na dusra hath ki 2 ungliya mera chest pr mari us ka bad ak or punch chest pa or ak kick or main urta huva samna trees ka bich ga gira main apna kisi bhi body part ko hila nhi pa rha tha asa lag rha tha jasa pura sharir main jaan hi na ho

jack.....Hahahahahahaha ya to meri sab sa low level ki technique thi tum to abhi sa dhar ho gya


mana kafi bar jack sa mar khi thi lekin ya thori alag thi jack mera pass aya us na dono fingers mera chest pr rakh ka kuch kiya or tab ja kr mujha kuch hosh aya mujha bohat hi zyda kamzori feel ho rhi thi aj jack na rest krna ka bola or main chal diya apna Raj mahal ki tarf kuch aaram kiya or subh phir whi asa hi 4 month bit gay ab tak main jack ki sari techniques main expert ho chuka tha is ka ilava sword fight main bhi mana mharat hasil kar li thi main apni sikhna ki speed sa khud bhibkafi heran tha sari zindgi jisna excercise to dur morning walk tak na ki aj wo duniya bhar ki fighting techniques main expert ban chuka tha or kuch techniques jo jack na sikhai thi woto shyad puri duniya main koi na hanta ho aj jab fresh ho kr main apna kapra dho rha tha to pani main apni body dakhi sala yha to apna 8 packs ban gay tha hight bhi ab 6 fit ka karib ho gyi ho gi or ya mera face jisa mana 1.5 years sa shave nhi kiya tha ak bar to main bhi dar gya ager koi or dakh leta to sala heart attack sa hi mar jata itna horror scen pash kar rha tha mera face aj jab jack ka pass gya to wo asa hi baitha huva tha







Main....jack aj training nhi krway ga kya jldi kr uth




Jack....tumhari training puri ho chuki ha bacha asi koi fighting technique nhi bachi puri duniya main jo tumha na ati ho ab tum redy ho




Main....ya to achi baat ha na to chl kuch or sikha do yaar


Jack......ab kuch or nhi bacha ab tumhara wapis janaka time agya ha



Main........pr meri powers pr jo seal lagi ha us ka kya wo to htai nhi tum na ager main ready hu to usa hta do na



Jack .......nhi nhi abhi nhi abhi waqt nhi aya ha isa htana ka jab us ka htna ka shi time wo khud ba khud hat gayi gi or tumhari shaktiya purn roop sa jagrit ho gay gi




Main........kya yaar abhi bhi time nhi aya to kab ay ga




jack.....pershan na ho bacha"""TERA TIME AY GA""""""" hahahaha


Main ..muskurata huva haan kyu nhi

ab samjh nhi arha tha ka kya bolu jack ko ka usa chor kar nhi jana chahta kya socha ga wo or udhr jack ka bhi kuch whi haal tha


























Ak lambi khamoshi .................................

sach baat to ya thi ka main wapis nhi jana chahta tha ak alag sa lagav ho gya tha is jgha ka sath or jack ka sath sala jo bhi bolu pr jack bnda great tha











Jack......zyda mat socho tumha jana hi ho ga tumhari nyi zindgi tumhara intezar kar rhi ha karan or ya lo meri taraf sa ak Gift



ya ak purana sa box tha jab mana khola to us main ak bhot hi khobsurat dagger tha jis ka ka handle pr ak Tiger ka nishan bna hua






Jack........ya mujha mera guru na diya tha sari zindgi isa smbhal kr rakha mana pr aj tumha da rha hu


jack ki aankhain nam ho gi thi




Main... to apna jack dukhi bhi hota ya kuch alag ha main aga brha or jack ko gala sa lga liya



jack......chal chal ab zyda notanki na kr niklna ka liya ready ho ga


Main...ready kya hona ha main kon sa samman la kr aya tha yha


jack...to chlo



jack na ak black hole open kya jo sidha khula mera shaher ka bhar jack mujha wha chor kr nikal liya or main khra tha apna shaher ka samna jha milli thi mujha sirf zilllat insult jha pr meri hasiyat do kori ki nhi thi lekin ab



main....man me......ab agya hu wapis ab pura hisab lu ga har us insan sa jisna mujha taklif di because""""" NOW ITS MY TIME""""""
Zabrdast update..?
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update no 6

Aj pura 1 month ho gya tha mujha is iland pa is ak mahina main jackson or baki dono na mujh sa pata nhi kon sa jnam ka badla liya tha salo na ab main aram sa is pura iland ka 60 70 chakker lga sakta tha ab kafi hd ta martial arts,judo or krata main sikh chuka thaphela 5 10 din to jack na mujha acha sa pita or jab bhi main puchta martial arts sikhana ka bjaya tu mujha pit kyu rha ha to us ka jwab hamesha ki tarha yhi hota ka marna sa zyda mar khana ana chahiya us sa pit pit kr har roz bhaag bhaag kr or kuch martial arts ki training sa ab meri body kafi strong ho gi thi ab kafi hd tak us ki mar bardasht kr lata tha aj to situation ya thi ka ager jack mujha do mara to us ka bdla main bhi zyda nhi pr ak to mar hi sakta or jack ko wo ak bhi main pori shiddat sa marta tha mera bs chlta to main is jack naam ka pranni ka khoon pi jata sala itna zulam rehna ka liya ak alishan khander subha khana ka liya phal jo ka main khud la kr ata tha or ager koi shikar mil jay to meri to chandi hoti thi us din yha rah kr main shikar krna bhi sikh gya tha or mera pass ak hi shirt or pant thi jisa har roz khud hi dhobbi ki tarha dho kr phan leta tha aj meri bhut zyda phat rhi or is ki wjha bhi ap ko pata hi ho gi ji ha wo wjha jack hi ha us na kal mujh sa bola tha ka kal mujha wo kuch asi fighting techniques sikhaya go us na khud invent ki hain or main soch rha tha ka jo martial ats or krata ki tachniques jo isna mujha sikhai wo itni khatrnak thi to jo us na khud invent ki wo kitni khatrnak ho sakti ha main jab fresh hokar hamesha ki tarha us place pr gya jha jack mujha train krta tha wha ja kr main dhyan main baith gya ya bhi jack babu na hi sikhaya tha kuch dair main vo bhi a gya




jack...To ready ho bacha



Main.....Yes i am ready!!!!! asal main ander sa meri phat rhi thi


Jack.....ab tak jo tum ab tak tum insano ki sari ni purani fighting techniques kuch hd tak sikh chuka ho pr wo sab to bacho wali techniques thi ab tumha main sikhta hoon asli fighting skills is ka bd ham dono aamna samna akr khra ho gya main kuch samjh pata is sa pehla ya aya punch gisa aaram sa block kr liya mana main abhi isi main khush jack na dusra hath ki 2 ungliya mera chest pr mari us ka bad ak or punch chest pa or ak kick or main urta huva samna trees ka bich ga gira main apna kisi bhi body part ko hila nhi pa rha tha asa lag rha tha jasa pura sharir main jaan hi na ho

jack.....Hahahahahahaha ya to meri sab sa low level ki technique thi tum to abhi sa dhar ho gya


mana kafi bar jack sa mar khi thi lekin ya thori alag thi jack mera pass aya us na dono fingers mera chest pr rakh ka kuch kiya or tab ja kr mujha kuch hosh aya mujha bohat hi zyda kamzori feel ho rhi thi aj jack na rest krna ka bola or main chal diya apna Raj mahal ki tarf kuch aaram kiya or subh phir whi asa hi 4 month bit gay ab tak main jack ki sari techniques main expert ho chuka tha is ka ilava sword fight main bhi mana mharat hasil kar li thi main apni sikhna ki speed sa khud bhibkafi heran tha sari zindgi jisna excercise to dur morning walk tak na ki aj wo duniya bhar ki fighting techniques main expert ban chuka tha or kuch techniques jo jack na sikhai thi woto shyad puri duniya main koi na hanta ho aj jab fresh ho kr main apna kapra dho rha tha to pani main apni body dakhi sala yha to apna 8 packs ban gay tha hight bhi ab 6 fit ka karib ho gyi ho gi or ya mera face jisa mana 1.5 years sa shave nhi kiya tha ak bar to main bhi dar gya ager koi or dakh leta to sala heart attack sa hi mar jata itna horror scen pash kar rha tha mera face aj jab jack ka pass gya to wo asa hi baitha huva tha







Main....jack aj training nhi krway ga kya jldi kr uth




Jack....tumhari training puri ho chuki ha bacha asi koi fighting technique nhi bachi puri duniya main jo tumha na ati ho ab tum redy ho




Main....ya to achi baat ha na to chl kuch or sikha do yaar


Jack......ab kuch or nhi bacha ab tumhara wapis janaka time agya ha



Main........pr meri powers pr jo seal lagi ha us ka kya wo to htai nhi tum na ager main ready hu to usa hta do na



Jack .......nhi nhi abhi nhi abhi waqt nhi aya ha isa htana ka jab us ka htna ka shi time wo khud ba khud hat gayi gi or tumhari shaktiya purn roop sa jagrit ho gay gi




Main........kya yaar abhi bhi time nhi aya to kab ay ga




jack.....pershan na ho bacha"""TERA TIME AY GA""""""" hahahaha


Main ..muskurata huva haan kyu nhi

ab samjh nhi arha tha ka kya bolu jack ko ka usa chor kar nhi jana chahta kya socha ga wo or udhr jack ka bhi kuch whi haal tha


























Ak lambi khamoshi .................................

sach baat to ya thi ka main wapis nhi jana chahta tha ak alag sa lagav ho gya tha is jgha ka sath or jack ka sath sala jo bhi bolu pr jack bnda great tha











Jack......zyda mat socho tumha jana hi ho ga tumhari nyi zindgi tumhara intezar kar rhi ha karan or ya lo meri taraf sa ak Gift



ya ak purana sa box tha jab mana khola to us main ak bhot hi khobsurat dagger tha jis ka ka handle pr ak Tiger ka nishan bna hua






Jack........ya mujha mera guru na diya tha sari zindgi isa smbhal kr rakha mana pr aj tumha da rha hu


jack ki aankhain nam ho gi thi




Main... to apna jack dukhi bhi hota ya kuch alag ha main aga brha or jack ko gala sa lga liya



jack......chal chal ab zyda notanki na kr niklna ka liya ready ho ga


Main...ready kya hona ha main kon sa samman la kr aya tha yha


jack...to chlo



jack na ak black hole open kya jo sidha khula mera shaher ka bhar jack mujha wha chor kr nikal liya or main khra tha apna shaher ka samna jha milli thi mujha sirf zilllat insult jha pr meri hasiyat do kori ki nhi thi lekin ab



main....man me......ab agya hu wapis ab pura hisab lu ga har us insan sa jisna mujha taklif di because""""" NOW ITS MY TIME""""""
Zabardast update dost:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:
 
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