Fantasy THE FIGHTER
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Ab tak ke Sare update lajawab the
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my story
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Update no 16
Mera sir bhut dard kar tha tha aankhain kholna main bhi kafi problem ho rhi thi mujha akhri baat ya yaad thi ka main police sa bhag rha tha or mujha goli lagi thi mana jab apni kamer pr us jgha dekha jha goli lagi thi wo bilkul thik tha main abhi yhi soch rha tha ka itna main vikki bhagta hua aya
vikki......bhai bhai ap ko hosh a gya Thank God pata ha ham sab kitna tense tha ap ka liya
main.....thank god nhi thanks devil bol bacha wasa main kab sa bheosh tha
vikki ......bhai ap 2 din sa bheosh tha
main....chillata hua.....kya bhencho main 2 din sa bheosh tha
vikki....yes bhai wo jis jgha ap ko holi lagi thi wo kafi jldi heal ho gi matlb mana aj subha hi dekha to zakhm tha hi nhi wha pr ya kasa ho sakta ya kya jadu ha bhai
main.......abe wo sab bd main pehla ya bata sara saman kidr rakha ha
vikki......bhai plan ka mutabik left room main ak bara sa jadha khod kr eha dafna diya hain
main.....good or jb main bheosh hua tha tb kuch giles or cd type thi apna hath main wo kidr hain
vikkii.....haan wo sambhl kar rakhi hain bhai pr sach main apna kamal kar diya kasam sa
main....acha wo sab choor or ya bata bank ki chori ka bd police ka kya reaction ha
vikki....bhai apna plan kaam kar gya or police na car ki no plate dekh li thi or jasa hi police ko pata chala ka wo car robby ki thi utha liya puri gang unhon na mc maza agy bhai
main...hahahah shi ha maderchod bhut aish kar li us gandu na its time to pay off
whi dusri tarf Ghar
dad na mera bhut pata kiya but main nhi mila unhain akhir wo bhi thk har kar baith gya ghar main mom guilty feel ho rha tha ka unhon na ya kiya kar diya
dad ab zyada baat nhi karta tha kisi sa mom sa to bs kaam ki baat karta tha or jb mom na us baat karna ka try karti wo koi jwab nhi deta dusri tarf rahul khush tha or vanshi ka ko shyad pehli br mera liya bura lag rha tha mera liya pr ab kafi late ho chuka tha
...........
main bhi tiyar hua socha zara bahir thora tahal au
main....vikki kuch pasa la kr a mujha shopping karni ha apna liya kuch ab sa main yhi rahu ga or jb tak wo bank wala panga solve nhi hota tab tk un choori wala paso ko hath nhi lgaya ga samjh gya
vikki......Ji boss
samjh gya
Main bhi nikal gya socha kuch shopping kar lu apna loya sab kuch to wahi chor aya tha main apna so called ghar pa main chal diya ak bara shopping maal ki tarf socha sala ab middle clasa sa high class ki tarf jana ka main ander ghussa to mc kya place tha yaar asal main pehli baar aya tha asa maal main
main hents section ki tarf chal diya khul kr mc shopping ki mana apna purana kapra whi changing room
fanka or new phan kar gana laga bhencho asa to ho nhi sakta jhan apun ho or panga na ho ak jana pehchana chehra mera pass sa guzara pr mana dhyan nhi dya achank ak banda mujh sa takra gya main gira to nhi pr mera hath sa shopping bags gir gya or wo sala chup chap aga nikal gya meri to gaand main aag lag gyi
main....bhai sahb zara rukiya ga pleasa
wo aadmi picha palta uniform sa to loi guard lag rha tha sala
Guard.....kya ha
main.....bilkul aaram sa......sir apna ya mera sara saman gira diya zara dhyan sa chal ki giya
guard........ya bolna ka liya tuna mujha roka ha
main.....haa bhaiya bilkul isliya roka ap ko
guard.....bhencho dimag mat kha or ja yha sa ab
main.....bilkul sharafat sa.
........ap plz soory boliya apna mujha galli di jo mujha bilkul psand nhi ayi
guard....main soory bolu bacha bhag yha sa
main ........mana ak bar bola na sorry boliya samjha nhi ap
..guard......agr mana sorry na bola to kya kar la ga tu bol na bol
Wha dur khri do aankhain ya sab dekh rhi thi or ya thi
Ruhi khurana
Ruhi......man me......oh shit mujha jack ko rokna ho ga warna wo is larka ki hadiyan tor da ga or wo to bechara ha bhi sharif sa
Ruhi jasa hi ya soch mera tarf ana ko hoi ka
chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkk
hua kuch ya ka guard na mera collar pakra hi tha ka mana ak jhar di usa or wo bechara picha ga gira
Ruhi mujha ghura ja rhi thi ka kasa mana us ka highly trained guard ko ak thapper main nicha gira diya
Ruhi.......man me.......Strange kuch to baat ha is banda main something different ak well trained aadmi ko ak thapper main gira diya
collage main mujha dekha tak nhi jb ka main is ka pas baithi thi kuch to ha is main jo samjh nhi a rha
main......sala ak bar bolana sorry bol behra ha kya aaram sa samjh nhi ata kuch bhi tuja haan bol na bol na chup kyu ha
or wo bechara chup chap nicha para mujha ghur ak thapper sa hi usa samjh a gya tha ka us ka samna khara banda kisi bhi angle sa simple nhi ha
Guard....sor...sorry
main...hmmm good
Ruhi mujh sa baat karna ka liya aja brhi pr tab tak main wha sa ja chuka tha
Mera sir bhut dard kar tha tha aankhain kholna main bhi kafi problem ho rhi thi mujha akhri baat ya yaad thi ka main police sa bhag rha tha or mujha goli lagi thi mana jab apni kamer pr us jgha dekha jha goli lagi thi wo bilkul thik tha main abhi yhi soch rha tha ka itna main vikki bhagta hua aya
vikki......bhai bhai ap ko hosh a gya Thank God pata ha ham sab kitna tense tha ap ka liya
main.....thank god nhi thanks devil bol bacha wasa main kab sa bheosh tha
vikki ......bhai ap 2 din sa bheosh tha
main....chillata hua.....kya bhencho main 2 din sa bheosh tha
vikki....yes bhai wo jis jgha ap ko holi lagi thi wo kafi jldi heal ho gi matlb mana aj subha hi dekha to zakhm tha hi nhi wha pr ya kasa ho sakta ya kya jadu ha bhai
main.......abe wo sab bd main pehla ya bata sara saman kidr rakha ha
vikki......bhai plan ka mutabik left room main ak bara sa jadha khod kr eha dafna diya hain
main.....good or jb main bheosh hua tha tb kuch giles or cd type thi apna hath main wo kidr hain
vikkii.....haan wo sambhl kar rakhi hain bhai pr sach main apna kamal kar diya kasam sa
main....acha wo sab choor or ya bata bank ki chori ka bd police ka kya reaction ha
vikki....bhai apna plan kaam kar gya or police na car ki no plate dekh li thi or jasa hi police ko pata chala ka wo car robby ki thi utha liya puri gang unhon na mc maza agy bhai
main...hahahah shi ha maderchod bhut aish kar li us gandu na its time to pay off
whi dusri tarf Ghar
dad na mera bhut pata kiya but main nhi mila unhain akhir wo bhi thk har kar baith gya ghar main mom guilty feel ho rha tha ka unhon na ya kiya kar diya
dad ab zyada baat nhi karta tha kisi sa mom sa to bs kaam ki baat karta tha or jb mom na us baat karna ka try karti wo koi jwab nhi deta dusri tarf rahul khush tha or vanshi ka ko shyad pehli br mera liya bura lag rha tha mera liya pr ab kafi late ho chuka tha
...........
main bhi tiyar hua socha zara bahir thora tahal au
main....vikki kuch pasa la kr a mujha shopping karni ha apna liya kuch ab sa main yhi rahu ga or jb tak wo bank wala panga solve nhi hota tab tk un choori wala paso ko hath nhi lgaya ga samjh gya
vikki......Ji boss
samjh gya
Main bhi nikal gya socha kuch shopping kar lu apna loya sab kuch to wahi chor aya tha main apna so called ghar pa main chal diya ak bara shopping maal ki tarf socha sala ab middle clasa sa high class ki tarf jana ka main ander ghussa to mc kya place tha yaar asal main pehli baar aya tha asa maal main
main hents section ki tarf chal diya khul kr mc shopping ki mana apna purana kapra whi changing room
fanka or new phan kar gana laga bhencho asa to ho nhi sakta jhan apun ho or panga na ho ak jana pehchana chehra mera pass sa guzara pr mana dhyan nhi dya achank ak banda mujh sa takra gya main gira to nhi pr mera hath sa shopping bags gir gya or wo sala chup chap aga nikal gya meri to gaand main aag lag gyi
main....bhai sahb zara rukiya ga pleasa
wo aadmi picha palta uniform sa to loi guard lag rha tha sala
Guard.....kya ha
main.....bilkul aaram sa......sir apna ya mera sara saman gira diya zara dhyan sa chal ki giya
guard........ya bolna ka liya tuna mujha roka ha
main.....haa bhaiya bilkul isliya roka ap ko
guard.....bhencho dimag mat kha or ja yha sa ab
main.....bilkul sharafat sa.
........ap plz soory boliya apna mujha galli di jo mujha bilkul psand nhi ayi
guard....main soory bolu bacha bhag yha sa
main ........mana ak bar bola na sorry boliya samjha nhi ap
..guard......agr mana sorry na bola to kya kar la ga tu bol na bol
Wha dur khri do aankhain ya sab dekh rhi thi or ya thi
Ruhi khurana
Ruhi......man me......oh shit mujha jack ko rokna ho ga warna wo is larka ki hadiyan tor da ga or wo to bechara ha bhi sharif sa
Ruhi jasa hi ya soch mera tarf ana ko hoi ka
chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkk
hua kuch ya ka guard na mera collar pakra hi tha ka mana ak jhar di usa or wo bechara picha ga gira
Ruhi mujha ghura ja rhi thi ka kasa mana us ka highly trained guard ko ak thapper main nicha gira diya
Ruhi.......man me.......Strange kuch to baat ha is banda main something different ak well trained aadmi ko ak thapper main gira diya
collage main mujha dekha tak nhi jb ka main is ka pas baithi thi kuch to ha is main jo samjh nhi a rha
main......sala ak bar bolana sorry bol behra ha kya aaram sa samjh nhi ata kuch bhi tuja haan bol na bol na chup kyu ha
or wo bechara chup chap nicha para mujha ghur ak thapper sa hi usa samjh a gya tha ka us ka samna khara banda kisi bhi angle sa simple nhi ha
Guard....sor...sorry
main...hmmm good
Ruhi mujh sa baat karna ka liya aja brhi pr tab tak main wha sa ja chuka tha
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very nice update bhai... Lekin spelling mistake ke Karan Sara maza kharab Ho jata hai.. Please Aap spelling per bhi dhyan dijiye
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lovely update but writer ji update ka size badane ka ye tarika achha hai bich bich me gep dekar update ka size khub badaya aapne thanks writer ji
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Nice mind blowing update brother