Fantasy THE FIGHTER
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Wo writer ki jimaddri he story purio kare ke na kare hame suport karna chaiye unaka manbal badha na chaiye ..........
Sub apni apni life me busy ho te he brother hame to thenkx kena chaiye writer ko ke wo time nikal kar hame re sammne story pesh karte he ......
So child update late ate he to kya huwa hame padh ne to milta he or xforum pe kai sari story he wo bi ap padh sakte he brother .....
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Update no 21
hyyy karan a gya tum pr phir bhi late ....
Mishal na meri tarf ata hua ya baat ki
main.....sorry yaar actually rasta main bike khrab ho gi thi..
mishal .....it's ok mujha to laga tha tum ao ga hi nhi
main.....kyu nhi ata main akhir meri friend ka birthday ha
Mishal....wasa ya tumhara sath kon hain
main....ooh hhn main tumha introduce karna bhul gya in sa milo ya ha mera uncle man me....ab kya name btau ......
Lucifer.....Lucifer ....name ha mera
mishal....oh hyy main mishal karan ki dost wasa thora ajeeb name ha ap ka
Lucifer.....ab kya krain jo ha so ha
main baat badlta hua.... wasa rishi nhi aya abhi tak
Rishab...yha hu main sala tujh sa pehla aya gya tha
picha sa ata hua rishab na ya mitha bol bola mera liya phir mana Lucifer ko rishab sa introduce karwaya
Rishab......ya lo mishal ya meri tarf sa birthday gift
mishal ko ak box deta hus rishab na ya kha gift sa yaad aya mishal ka birthday gift to un half bloods wala panga main whi girl gya mishal na jab meri tarf dekha to main samjh gya ka wo rishi ki tarha mujh sa bhi gift expect kar rhi ha ab isa kya jwab du
Rishab mera karib a kr
Rishi....sala yo gift nhi laya kya
main.....haan wo......wo
Lucifer.....ara bhool gya tumha mujha gift diya tha sambhl kar rakhna ka liya
main...jldi sa .....haan haan whi to wo gift ap ka pass tha na
Lucifer......bilkul wo mana shan ko bol diya ha wo la kar ata hi ho ga....lo wo a gya ham na jab us side dekha jha lucifer na dekha to kuch bnda bara bara gift la kr a rha tha wo unhon na mishal ka pass rakha or wapis chal gya or jld hi or gifts la kar a gya main lucifer ka zara karib hua
main....tension.......ya kya ha itna sara gifts kuch zyada nhi ho gya sab hamin hi ghoor rha hain in sab ko kya zarrourt thi koi chotta mota gift bhi to la sakta tha
Lucifer...hhahaha devil birthday parties main nhi jata or jab jata ha to chotta mota gifts nhi deta yaar main devil hu kuch to izzat ha meri ab hell ka raja kisi ko chota motta gift data acha laga ga kya
main.....thik ha thik plz ab bhashn mat do ap
mishal.........oooh karan in sab ki kya zarrourt thi itna sara gifts you are so sweet.
or ya bol kar wo mera gala lag gyi or sab hamin asa ghurna laga jasa bc ham dono naga khara hoon
main....mishal sab dekh raha hain
mishal ........hmmmm
main .....sab ghur rha hain hamin
mishal .......oh haan ....haan....sorry
ya bol kr ya larki mujh sa alag hoi
lucifer mera kaan ka pass a kr bola......hmmm acha ha keep it up
Us ki baat sun kar mana bhi licifer ko devil wala look diya
lucifer...hahaha.acha ha devil ko hi devil look da raha ho
Mishal ko kisi na awaz di or wha chali gyi or us ka jata hi koi mujha mera hath sa pakr kr party sa bahir la gya is pr lucifer na bhi koi react nhi kiya or main bhi chup chap chal diya party ka bahir
chataaaaaaaaakkkkkkk
a thapper para mujha
wo aadmi......kha chala gya tha tu kitna dhund mana tujha asa koi karta ha bhala ghar ak choti si bahs hoi or ghar chor diya tuna chal abhi ka abhi mera sath ghar chal
main......sorry dad pr wo mera ghar nhi ha na ap log meri real family
ya bolta waqt sirf main janta tha ka mana apna ansu kasa rok rakha tha
Dad...pr beta ...
main .....bs dad main bhut izzat karta hu ap ki or ap ya janta ho or ap ko is trha bar-2 inkar krna mujha bilkul acha nhi lag rha
dad....beta pr meri..
main....bs dad agr apna Aj tak agr ak bar bi mujha apna beta mana ha to please ab mujha ghar jana ka liya na khiya ga or apni family ka pass jiya ab ya bol ka main andr chal diya is waqt meri halat kuch zyada achi nhi thi is liya main chup chap ak drink la kr corner main khara ho gya lucifer bhi mera pass a kr khara ho gya rishab kuch collage ka friends ka sath baatin kr rha tha ham dono bilkul chup khara tha na wo bol rha tha na main mana socha main hi pehl kar deta hu
main.....to ap itni care kyu karta ho meri hamara to koi relation bhi nhi ha na kuch or
Lucifer.....relation to ha bacha bhut gehra relation
Main...kya kya relation ha hamara
Lucifer....waqt ana pr btau ga
Main....pata nhi ya waqt kab aya ga or mujha mera swallon ka jwab milain ga
Lucifer...believe me jab wo waqt aya ga tum khwaish kro ga ka kash ya waqt na ata
main....well ya bhi dekh lain ga
lucifer......bilkul wasa mujha ab chalna chahiya mera zyada waqt earth pr rehna shi nhi ha
main ....ok then mujha bhi ghar tak chor dain
Main....actually mujha yhan pr kuch acha nhi lag rha ha
lucifer....chalo fir wasa abhi cake cut nhi hua to agr tum rukna chaho to...
main...no mujha jana ha
lucifer....ok to chlo bahir
Ham dono bahir ki tarf chal diya jata hua mana apni family pr ak sansani si nazar Dali sab khush tha hansi mzakh kr rha tha shyad dad ko chor kar kisi na dekha nhi tha mujha
main....man me.....sab khush hain mera jana sa koi frak nhi para good wasa fark kyu para ga main hu kon un ka
mera man bhut bhari ho gya tha mana mishal ko bhi nhi btaya or chup chap nikal gya bahir mishal na jab karan ko jata dekha to usa laga shyad wo kafi waqt sa yhan busy ha or karan ko time nhi da pai is liya wo naraz ho kar ja rha ha ya sochta hi wo jldi sa gate ki tarf bhagi pr us time tak lucifer mujha teleport kar ka jungle main la aya tha jungle main jha meri bike pri thi mana chup chap bike uthai kismat sa start bhi ho gi hala na ka us ki halat kuch achi ni thi phir main sidha pohncha ghar ab tak 12 baj chuka tha
vicky....a gya bhai mujha laga late go jao ga
main....haan a gya tu kyu jag rha ha ab tak
vivicky.....ara bhai main to abhi aya bs bahir gya tha wo paison wala ksam niptana wasa bhai ap kuch thik nhi lag rha ap asa nhi ho said sa ap to kafi khush rehta ho positive atitude type pr aj kuch ....
main....chor na yaar abhi bilkul mood nhi ya sab ka bara main baat karna ka subha discuss krain ga
vicky.....wasa bhai wo pasa white main convert ho gya Hain account banwa kar us main rakha diya hain jasa apna bola account fake I'd pr ha
main.....hmmmm ya achi khabr ha I like it to kitna maal bna sari jwelery ko add kar ka
vicky....bhai Two hundred seventy five CR
main....hmmm acha ha to tu kuch din pehla baat kar rha tha na yha pr underground fighting hoti ha jis pa open bet laga sakta hain log
Vicky .....haan bhai hoti to ha pr ap kyu poch rha ho
main....jo pocha ha pehla wo bata
vicky...bhai aasl main wha gang fights hi hoti hain zyada
main....ab ya sala gang fight kya ha ba
vicky...mera matlb bhai sabhi gangs ka leader apna bando ka sath ata hain or bari bari apna logo ko ak dosra ka sath fight ka liya bhajta hain or end main dono leaders ki fight or jis ka gang ka score high hota ha sara maal wo lout kar la jata hain bola to winner
main....good to ready kar sab ko kal apni fight arrange kar wha pr
vicky.....bhai pr apna bnda abhi itna experienced nhi ka wo fight kar skain wha upr sa wha koi rules nhi sala koi mar bhi gya to bhi koi frak nhi parta wha kisi ko
main ...gussa main....tujha jitna bola ha itna kar zyada dimag na laga or jo training karta ha roz wo kya lora ka liya karta hain agr larna nhi to
vicky....ok bhai
vicky ka mu bilkul chotta sa ho gya tha main chup chap gya apna room or aga ka plan bnata hua so gya main or so gya
...................
Thakur.......kya bkwas kar rha ho
aadmi 1....g..gg MMalik sara shehr dekh liya ha pr khi nhi mila chotta malik
Thakur...apni bkwas band kar or jldi sa jldi dhund mera pota ko warna tum sab ko zinda gar du ga
aadmi....g g thakur sahab
Thakur.....mana CM sa baat kar li ha tum logo ko koi problem nhi ho gi wha agr is bar tum log khaki hath aya to whi hath katwa kr tum logo ka ghar bhaj du ga
aadmi...g g ham chalta hain ab
Ya bol kar wo sara aadmi nikal liya or Thakur apni kursi or baith gya
Thakur....kha ho tum Raghuveer halat Bigarta ja rha hain zarrort ha tumhari
......................
hyyy karan a gya tum pr phir bhi late ....
Mishal na meri tarf ata hua ya baat ki
main.....sorry yaar actually rasta main bike khrab ho gi thi..
mishal .....it's ok mujha to laga tha tum ao ga hi nhi
main.....kyu nhi ata main akhir meri friend ka birthday ha
Mishal....wasa ya tumhara sath kon hain
main....ooh hhn main tumha introduce karna bhul gya in sa milo ya ha mera uncle man me....ab kya name btau ......
Lucifer.....Lucifer ....name ha mera
mishal....oh hyy main mishal karan ki dost wasa thora ajeeb name ha ap ka
Lucifer.....ab kya krain jo ha so ha
main baat badlta hua.... wasa rishi nhi aya abhi tak
Rishab...yha hu main sala tujh sa pehla aya gya tha
picha sa ata hua rishab na ya mitha bol bola mera liya phir mana Lucifer ko rishab sa introduce karwaya
Rishab......ya lo mishal ya meri tarf sa birthday gift
mishal ko ak box deta hus rishab na ya kha gift sa yaad aya mishal ka birthday gift to un half bloods wala panga main whi girl gya mishal na jab meri tarf dekha to main samjh gya ka wo rishi ki tarha mujh sa bhi gift expect kar rhi ha ab isa kya jwab du
Rishab mera karib a kr
Rishi....sala yo gift nhi laya kya
main.....haan wo......wo
Lucifer.....ara bhool gya tumha mujha gift diya tha sambhl kar rakhna ka liya
main...jldi sa .....haan haan whi to wo gift ap ka pass tha na
Lucifer......bilkul wo mana shan ko bol diya ha wo la kar ata hi ho ga....lo wo a gya ham na jab us side dekha jha lucifer na dekha to kuch bnda bara bara gift la kr a rha tha wo unhon na mishal ka pass rakha or wapis chal gya or jld hi or gifts la kar a gya main lucifer ka zara karib hua
main....tension.......ya kya ha itna sara gifts kuch zyada nhi ho gya sab hamin hi ghoor rha hain in sab ko kya zarrourt thi koi chotta mota gift bhi to la sakta tha
Lucifer...hhahaha devil birthday parties main nhi jata or jab jata ha to chotta mota gifts nhi deta yaar main devil hu kuch to izzat ha meri ab hell ka raja kisi ko chota motta gift data acha laga ga kya
main.....thik ha thik plz ab bhashn mat do ap
mishal.........oooh karan in sab ki kya zarrourt thi itna sara gifts you are so sweet.
or ya bol kar wo mera gala lag gyi or sab hamin asa ghurna laga jasa bc ham dono naga khara hoon
main....mishal sab dekh raha hain
mishal ........hmmmm
main .....sab ghur rha hain hamin
mishal .......oh haan ....haan....sorry
ya bol kr ya larki mujh sa alag hoi
lucifer mera kaan ka pass a kr bola......hmmm acha ha keep it up
Us ki baat sun kar mana bhi licifer ko devil wala look diya
lucifer...hahaha.acha ha devil ko hi devil look da raha ho
Mishal ko kisi na awaz di or wha chali gyi or us ka jata hi koi mujha mera hath sa pakr kr party sa bahir la gya is pr lucifer na bhi koi react nhi kiya or main bhi chup chap chal diya party ka bahir
chataaaaaaaaakkkkkkk
a thapper para mujha
wo aadmi......kha chala gya tha tu kitna dhund mana tujha asa koi karta ha bhala ghar ak choti si bahs hoi or ghar chor diya tuna chal abhi ka abhi mera sath ghar chal
main......sorry dad pr wo mera ghar nhi ha na ap log meri real family
ya bolta waqt sirf main janta tha ka mana apna ansu kasa rok rakha tha
Dad...pr beta ...
main .....bs dad main bhut izzat karta hu ap ki or ap ya janta ho or ap ko is trha bar-2 inkar krna mujha bilkul acha nhi lag rha
dad....beta pr meri..
main....bs dad agr apna Aj tak agr ak bar bi mujha apna beta mana ha to please ab mujha ghar jana ka liya na khiya ga or apni family ka pass jiya ab ya bol ka main andr chal diya is waqt meri halat kuch zyada achi nhi thi is liya main chup chap ak drink la kr corner main khara ho gya lucifer bhi mera pass a kr khara ho gya rishab kuch collage ka friends ka sath baatin kr rha tha ham dono bilkul chup khara tha na wo bol rha tha na main mana socha main hi pehl kar deta hu
main.....to ap itni care kyu karta ho meri hamara to koi relation bhi nhi ha na kuch or
Lucifer.....relation to ha bacha bhut gehra relation
Main...kya kya relation ha hamara
Lucifer....waqt ana pr btau ga
Main....pata nhi ya waqt kab aya ga or mujha mera swallon ka jwab milain ga
Lucifer...believe me jab wo waqt aya ga tum khwaish kro ga ka kash ya waqt na ata
main....well ya bhi dekh lain ga
lucifer......bilkul wasa mujha ab chalna chahiya mera zyada waqt earth pr rehna shi nhi ha
main ....ok then mujha bhi ghar tak chor dain
Main....actually mujha yhan pr kuch acha nhi lag rha ha
lucifer....chalo fir wasa abhi cake cut nhi hua to agr tum rukna chaho to...
main...no mujha jana ha
lucifer....ok to chlo bahir
Ham dono bahir ki tarf chal diya jata hua mana apni family pr ak sansani si nazar Dali sab khush tha hansi mzakh kr rha tha shyad dad ko chor kar kisi na dekha nhi tha mujha
main....man me.....sab khush hain mera jana sa koi frak nhi para good wasa fark kyu para ga main hu kon un ka
mera man bhut bhari ho gya tha mana mishal ko bhi nhi btaya or chup chap nikal gya bahir mishal na jab karan ko jata dekha to usa laga shyad wo kafi waqt sa yhan busy ha or karan ko time nhi da pai is liya wo naraz ho kar ja rha ha ya sochta hi wo jldi sa gate ki tarf bhagi pr us time tak lucifer mujha teleport kar ka jungle main la aya tha jungle main jha meri bike pri thi mana chup chap bike uthai kismat sa start bhi ho gi hala na ka us ki halat kuch achi ni thi phir main sidha pohncha ghar ab tak 12 baj chuka tha
vicky....a gya bhai mujha laga late go jao ga
main....haan a gya tu kyu jag rha ha ab tak
vivicky.....ara bhai main to abhi aya bs bahir gya tha wo paison wala ksam niptana wasa bhai ap kuch thik nhi lag rha ap asa nhi ho said sa ap to kafi khush rehta ho positive atitude type pr aj kuch ....
main....chor na yaar abhi bilkul mood nhi ya sab ka bara main baat karna ka subha discuss krain ga
vicky.....wasa bhai wo pasa white main convert ho gya Hain account banwa kar us main rakha diya hain jasa apna bola account fake I'd pr ha
main.....hmmmm ya achi khabr ha I like it to kitna maal bna sari jwelery ko add kar ka
vicky....bhai Two hundred seventy five CR
main....hmmm acha ha to tu kuch din pehla baat kar rha tha na yha pr underground fighting hoti ha jis pa open bet laga sakta hain log
Vicky .....haan bhai hoti to ha pr ap kyu poch rha ho
main....jo pocha ha pehla wo bata
vicky...bhai aasl main wha gang fights hi hoti hain zyada
main....ab ya sala gang fight kya ha ba
vicky...mera matlb bhai sabhi gangs ka leader apna bando ka sath ata hain or bari bari apna logo ko ak dosra ka sath fight ka liya bhajta hain or end main dono leaders ki fight or jis ka gang ka score high hota ha sara maal wo lout kar la jata hain bola to winner
main....good to ready kar sab ko kal apni fight arrange kar wha pr
vicky.....bhai pr apna bnda abhi itna experienced nhi ka wo fight kar skain wha upr sa wha koi rules nhi sala koi mar bhi gya to bhi koi frak nhi parta wha kisi ko
main ...gussa main....tujha jitna bola ha itna kar zyada dimag na laga or jo training karta ha roz wo kya lora ka liya karta hain agr larna nhi to
vicky....ok bhai
vicky ka mu bilkul chotta sa ho gya tha main chup chap gya apna room or aga ka plan bnata hua so gya main or so gya
...................
Thakur.......kya bkwas kar rha ho
aadmi 1....g..gg MMalik sara shehr dekh liya ha pr khi nhi mila chotta malik
Thakur...apni bkwas band kar or jldi sa jldi dhund mera pota ko warna tum sab ko zinda gar du ga
aadmi....g g thakur sahab
Thakur.....mana CM sa baat kar li ha tum logo ko koi problem nhi ho gi wha agr is bar tum log khaki hath aya to whi hath katwa kr tum logo ka ghar bhaj du ga
aadmi...g g ham chalta hain ab
Ya bol kar wo sara aadmi nikal liya or Thakur apni kursi or baith gya
Thakur....kha ho tum Raghuveer halat Bigarta ja rha hain zarrort ha tumhari
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Amazing update
Very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
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Jbardust update Bhai
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