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Thanks bhai main apni tarf sa pori koshish krta hy ka jitna jldi hoska update da duBhai its ok bas maine aisa kha isliye h ki muje story pasnd aayi or aage ki update na hone par thoda sa man m ye bat aa hi jati h na
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Thanks bhai main apni tarf sa pori koshish krta hy ka jitna jldi hoska update da duBhai its ok bas maine aisa kha isliye h ki muje story pasnd aayi or aage ki update na hone par thoda sa man m ye bat aa hi jati h na
Nice update brother......UPDATE NO 2
Park main baith kr rona sa jb mera man kuch shant hua to ghar ki taraf chal diya dad to office main tha or mom kitchen main main mom ko mujha disturb na krna ka bol kr apna room main a gya or kb meri Aankh lag gi pata hi nhi chla shaam ko jab ankh khulli to pata chla ka Dad bhai ko apna sath party main la kr gay hain jo un ka dost ka ghar pr thi vo mujha apna sath la kr jana psand nhi krta kyu ka main thora shy type ka hu or of course wo mujha sath la jana baezzati smjhta hain or vanshika to mujh sa baat kra gi nhi mom na dinner ready kr diya tha khya or chl pra room ki taraf.........
Unknown place.....
Yha pr 4 log tha jo full black dresses main khra tha ak jungle main in sab ko person 1 or 2 likhu ja
Person 1......Wo kabhi nhi mana ga is sodda ka liya
person 2.......Baat to tumhari thik ha lekin lord ka yhi hukum tha ka jab time aya to ham lord ki sari shaktiya us larka ka hawla krdain
person 3.....Ham jin ka pass itni zyda dark power ha wo lord ki shakti ko sambhal nhi sakta agr ham zra si koshish bhi krain un shaktiyo ko touch krna ki to ham jal kr khak ho gay ga to wo mamolli larka kasa sambhla ga in powers ko agr ya bakabu ho gi to pura snsar nashat ho sakta ha
person 4 ...... ham to bs whi kr skta hain jo lord na kha tha agr jnta ho wasa nhi kiya to kya hoga hamara sath
Or ya baat sunta hi baki 3 shaks Ghabra gya wo jnta ta tha ka agr unho na lord ka hukam pura nhi kiya to lord un ko mara ga nhi blka un ki zindgi moot sa batr kr da ja
Subha utha ready huva dad ka tanz bhri battian suni or chl diya school jha pr mera swgat ka liya pehla sa kartika ka bhai khra tha jisa ka naam rocky tha
Rocky.....a gya tu tera hi intezar ho rha tha wasa tujha to olympics main part lana chahiya kya bhgga tu ham sab to bs tujha dekhta rah gya to sun aya to tha tujha marna pr pata nhi kyu tujha marna ka man nhi kr rha
Rocky ka dost....wasa bhi mardo sa larta hain or tu sala pata nhi mard ha ya kuch or
Hahahaahaha or ya awazz thi sab students ki jo hans rha tha mujh pr mera mn kr rha tha zaamen pht gay or main is main dafan ho jau
Rocky....to beta tujha is br bhik main maffi deta hu agli baar meri bhan ka nazdik bhi nazr na ana mujha
Rocky or us ka dost to chla gya picha main rah gya main tni zyda insult bardasht nhi kr pa rha tha main rona to chahta tha pr chup tha pata nhi kyu shayd mera ansu hi nhi nikl rha tha ya yu khu ka khtam ho gya tha mera ansuu bah bah kr
In class
Rishabh....abe a gya tu kb sa tera w8 kr rha tha kha tha tu
phir mana usa puri story sunai jisa sun kr us ki ankho main khoon utr aya wo uth kr gana hi wlla tha ka
Main .....ruk bhai koi fidaa nhi ha in sab ka lrai jhgra ya sab nhi chahta main plz tuhja meri ksam bath ja
Rishabh..... gussa main.... har baar tu asa hi krta ha yaar asa nhi sudhrain ga ya sab
Main....chor na yaar ya sab bakwass ha tu ap i bta kya chl rha ha aj kl
Rishab....main bilkul fit bhai wasa next week jo trip ja rhi ha school ki minalli wha chla ga kya agr tu na hr br ki tarha na kha to phir sari zindgi apni shakl na dikhna mujha samjha
Main.....thik ha thik ha bhrak kyu rha ha ba chlu ga sath wasa kab jana ha
Rishabh.....next week read rhiyo warna tu janta ha ka........
Main .....thik ha thik ha ab ya devil smile mat pass kr wrna daant tor du ga tera
isi tarha aj ka bhi din guzr gya Rishabh hi sirf ak asa bnda ha jo mujha smjhta ha or hamesha mera sath rehta ha mera ghar ki tarf ja hi rha tha ka rasta main barrish shuru ho gi main ghar ki tarf dor lga di main man me soch rha tha ka Rishabh ka dil rakhna ka liya ha to bol di but main jana nhi chahta tha phir mana socha ya simple si trip hi to ha bs mujha kya pata tha ka ya trip meri zindgi bdal da gi....
main ghar pohncha gha ak ni mussibat mera liya tiyaar thi main ghar main dakhil nhi huva tha ka achank chataaaaaaakkkkkkk ya pra mujha thapper jo ka bhai na mara tha
Bhai...tujha kitni br bola ha ka bhar mat bola kr ka tu mera bhai ha samjh main nhi ata kya tujha
ap soch rha ho ga ka ya kya huva to chlta hain flash back main
In flashback
kl main kab park sa nikla to kafi late ho gya tha isliya socha kisi sa lift maan g lu rata main muja bhai ka kuch dost dikha jo ak jeep main ja rha tha mana aksar in ko dekha tha bhai ka sath mana un ha lift ka loya roka to unho na jeep roki or main baith kr chl diua rasta main
Dost 1... tuhja khi dakha ha yaaad nhi a rha
Dost ...sach kah rha ha yaar main bhi yhi soch rha tha
Dost 3....yaad aya tujha Rahul ka ghar main ata jata dekha ha ak do baar
Main....bhai wo mera hi ghar ha main rahul ka chotta bhai hu
Dost...kya tu rahul ka bhai us na to kabhi hi btaya rahul to thora dabaang bnda ha or tu to shakl sa hi lallu dikhta ha or sab hnsna lga rasta ma8n mujha utaar kr wo chl diya or aj Rahul bhai ki collage main unho na bhut insult ki ka tera bhai lallu ha asa ha wasa ha tum dono ak baap ki hi aulaad ho na wha to bhai kuch na bola pr ghar ak kr bhai na mujha zarror pita
Mom.....Rahul kya kr rha ha chor usa bhai ha ter chor mana bola chaaaaattttkkkkkk
or ya lga Rahul bhai ko ak jo dad na mara tha jo ka abhi office sa ay tha or mudt ka show dakh kr un ka para high ho gya
Rahul.....gussa main....daddddd isa smjha di giya apni hd main rha aj ka bd asa kuch pata chla to zinda gar du ja isa main
dad chup chap ja kr sofa pa baith gya or mom mujha utha kr room main la gyi is puri wardaat main meri itni fat gyi ka bhai ka samana bol tak na saka or meri pyari bhan uper sa show dakh rhi thi jo muskra kr chl di apna room main jb sab khtam hua aj main akela baith kr main ro nhi rha tha blka aj ajeeb tha aj mujha gussa arha tha zyda nhi pr kafi tha main khud heran tha ka mujha koi golli bhi mar da to main usa gussa sa na dakhu pr ya aj kya hogya mujha pr mujha kya pata tha ya to bs shuraat ha..............
ya to dekhna hi pra ga bhai by the way thanks for your comment broNice update brother......
abhi tak to hero ko bilkul chutiya or lallu dikhaya hai..... dekhte hai kya kamaal hota hai Manali ki trip mein aisa....ki use power milegi.....
keep writing....
keep posting.......
Thanks bro
for nawa story
update padh kar revo deta hu
Jabardast update brother......Update no 2
Subha mujha minalli jana tha raat ka 11 baj rha tha 1 ghanta to mera chutiya dost Rishabh na mujha sona nhi diya or dimag ki
dhi krta rha wha ja kr ya krain ja wha ja kr wo krain ga ya krain ga us sa jaan chura kr jab main na packing kr li to pani pina lga lekin meri phutti kismat bottle khali pri thi main nicha gya pani piya or jab wapis a rha tha to mom dad ka room ki light is time on thi phela to mana ignore kya or chal diya pr abhi main room tak nhi pohncha tha ka dad ki awaz ai awaz kafi kafi kam thi mana socha khi mom or dad kisi problem main to nhi is liya main mom ka room ki tarf bhaga main darwaza kholna hi wala tha ka room sa ik awaz ai jo dad ki thi
Dad......ya sab tumhari hi galti ha agr us raat tum usa utha kr ghar na lati to aj hamin us haram ka pile ka lharcha na uthana prta or hamri halat kuch behtar hoti upr sa wo ha bhi darpook or lallu akal nam ki cheez nhi ha is larka main bs baat baat pr ansu bha deta ha
Mom......Ara ap bhi bina baat ka mujh pr chilla rha ho galti ho jati ha hr insaan sa mujha to bas rahm a gya tha us din us ki halat dekh kr mujha kya pata tha ka wo asa ho ga main to bolti hu usa hostel main bajh deta hain prhna ka liya
Asal main anita apna pati ka gussa ko janti thi usa pata tha ka us ka pati ka gussa karan ka liya din b din brhta hi ga rha tha jis ki wjha shyad wo khud nhi janta tha wo chahti thi ka karan jld sa jld in sab sa khi dur chla gay whi us ka liya acha ho ga
Dad.....shi kah rhi ho acha ho ga ager wo yha sa chla gay panoti to tla gi sir sa main kal baat krta hu mera ak dost sa jo mumbai hota ha isa whi bhj deta ha karan ko
Or bhar khra main jo ya sab sun rha tha meri to jasa duniya hi lut gyi mujh un ki baato sa andaza to ho gya tha ka ya meri baat kr rha hain pr main bs isa manna nhi chahta tha dad ko to samjh main ata ha pr mom bhi aur rhi shi kami is baat sa puri ho gyi ka main un ka beta hi nhi hoon main pata nhi kis ka ganda khoon hu isi liya dad bhai or vanshu mujh sa asa behave krta hain or mom to bs dekhava krti hain un sab ka samna lekin aj main roya nhi aj meri ankh sa ansu tak nhi nikla pr ander sa main tut chuka tha asa lag rha tha jasa ka kisi na dil main khangar mar diya ho main chup chap a kar room main late gya sari raat mujha neend na ai
Bs yhi soch soch kr ka akhir kyu ho rha ha nera sath ya sab kyu kyu kyu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
subha main sab ka uthna sa pehla hi nikal gya jab school pohncha to abhi tak koi nhi aya tha bath kr intezzar krna lga thiri daar main sab a chuka tha or ham sab ho liya apni manzil ki taraf sara rasta rishab mujh sa puchta rha ka kya hua tu udass kyu ha lekin mana usa koi jawab nhi diya kya btata usa ka mera maa baap mera apna nhi hain main kisi ki na gizz olad hu ham na minalli pohnch kr ak hotel main rukna ka socha kyu ka sab kafi thak chuka tha raat ko 12 pm mujha neend a rhi thi neend ati bhi kasa main hotel sa bahir nikla or tu hi thori walk krna lga or ja kr ak bench pr baith gya or kal raat ki mom dad ki battain yaad krna lga mera sath wala bench pr ak Aadmi betha tha mana us pr dhyaan nhi diya jab tuk us na ya nhi kha
Aadmi.....Sirf sochna sa tumhari mushkilat hal nhi ho gain gi
main bri hi herani ka sath us aadmi ko dekha jo is waqt ak hat pehna hua tha jo raat ka andhera main us ka face ko chupa rhi thi or main ba yakini sa us ki tarf dekh rha tha ka ya bnda ha kon or is kasa pata main kya soch rha hy khair mujha bhut ajeeb laga main wha sa uth kr jana ki hua kyu ka meri usa dekh kr thori phat bhi rhi thi ka itni raat uper sa ya aadmi jo ajeeb battain kr rha ha
Aadmi....tumhari sari problems ka hal ha mera pass
or ya sun kr mera kdam whi pr jam gya main na plat kr us shaks ko dekha jo muskura rha tha us ki age shayd 40 ya 45 ka as pass ho gi lekin ak perfect body wala wo bnda jis ki bast sun kr main thora heran bhi tha or pershan bhi
Main.........ap kuch nhi janta meri zindgi ka bara main so please
Aadmi....main sab janta hu karan ka kasa lagta ha jab apna hi ap ko praya kr deta hain
or ta lga mujha ak or shock
Main...ap mera naam kasa janta hain or meri family ka bara main ap ko kasa pata
wo admi meri baat sun kr bs muskura diya
Admi.....Point ya nhi ka main kya janta hu point ya ha ka main tumhara liya kya kr sakta hu
Main thora ghabratahua......kya kr sakta ho
Admi......Bs ak SOODA ak simple si deal which will change your life !!!!!!!
Main....kasi deal or mera pass kuch bhi nhi ha ap ko dana ka liya
Admi...tumhara pass bhut kuch ha
Main....kya lgta ha uncle ap pagl ho gya hain or main jana lga
Admi ......mujha chahiya tumhari aatma tumhari Soul
Main .....log mujha chutiya or lallu khta hain pr yha to hahahaha soul aaatma hahaha
main mzakh krta hua .......acha thik ha thik ha la lo meri soul meri atma hihihihi
Wo admi bhi hans diya or us ki hansi sun kar meri hansi gayab ho gi bc itna dravna hans rha tha wo sala meri to phat kar 8 nhi 12 ho gi us na apni pocket sa ak kara nikla jis pr aggrement type kuch likha hua tha mana jaan churvana ka liya bina dekha smjha us pr sign kr diya or sign krta hi jb main picha hta to
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya cheekh meri thi mera ander sa kuch nikal kr ja rha tha us kapra ka ander or mujha na kabila bardasht dard ho rha tha jo ka hr lamha brhta hi ja rha tha achank suppppppppppppppp!!!!!!!
Wo sab rukka mujha asa lag rha tha jasa kisi na mujha nichor liya ho main bheosh ho chuka tha us aadmi na mujha uthya or la kr gyab ho gya or kisi andheri jgha pr pohncha jha us na mujha ak bra sa pather pr lita diyaor chillaya
Aadmi .........jldi lao usa wrna ya maar gay ga
Dusra aadmi bhgta hua aya ua ka hath main ak bra sa box tha jisa us na la kr phela wala ko diya or us main sa nikla us na ak dark colour ka diamond jo kalli roshni sa chamak rha tha or mera sina pr lga diya wo diamond mera dil ka pass apna ap pohnch kr ander jana lga or bheoshi main hi meri bhyanak cheenkh nikal gyi mera pura jisam hawa main tair rha tha kuch dair yu hi kala sa dhua mera as pass rha or meri body wapis apni us pather pr a giri!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!