Fantasy THE FIGHTER

[Soku74]

Bhai sacchiii me ek dam zabardast kahani hai continue karo

 

[Last benchers]

Bhai plz update koi problem hai to share kr do

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..

Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.

Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.

Regards :Xforum Staff.

 

[Vk248517]

Bhai story complete hoga kya

 

[Soku74]

story maasssstttt hai continue karo

 

[nain11ster]

Karan ....o karan.... uth beta dekha subha k 6 am baj rha
Anita apna beta ko utha rhi thi jo ka uthna ka naam nhi la rha tha
Main.... uth rha hu mom ap jiya main tiyar ho kr ata hu
Mom... jaldi ana beta warna pata ha na Dad gussa krain ja
Main ok ok a rha hu

Main jld jldi utha or ready ho kr dinner krna ka liya bhag gya kyu ka mujha pata tha ka agr main late hua to mera baap or bhai meri izzat lutna main time waste nhi krna walla or meri pyari bhan wo to asa baat krti ha mujh sa jasa main koi anjaan hu us ka liya

Dad... a gya Sahabzada bathiya ara bathiya na ara Anita khana do apna ladla ko bechara kitna bookha ho g jldi kro

Mom....ap bs bhi ki gya bacha ha ap to picha hi pr jata hain


Bhai......Bacha ha ya 18 ka hona wala ha or akl naam ki cheez nhi ha is main

Dad.... kitni br kha ha Dinner ka time pr koi bhi late ho mujha ya psand nhi

Or main chup chap sab sun rha tha asa nhi ka main bol nhi sakta pr pata nhi kyu main apna dad or bhai sa itna darta hu

Phir kya tha meri izzat to lut chuki thi so sab na chup chap khana khaya or chl dya apna apna rasta matlb Dad office or bhai or vanshika colage ki tarf jana ka liya niklna walla tha lekin picha sa mom na awaaz di


Mom......Ara rahul karan ko bhi sath la ja rasta main hi to is ka school ata ha chor dana isa bhi

Rahul .....Mom main is fattu ko sath la kr nhi ja rha koi dost dekh la ja to mzakh urya ja mera

Vanshika......Right ab jldi chlo i am getting late

Mom....Beta karan tu in ki baat ka bura mat man tera bhai bhen ha jldi smjh jayn ga tujha

Or main phir sa apna face latka ka chl diya school ki taraf





A fattu idhar a zara or ya awaz thi Ritik ki jisa mujha pershan krna kuch zyda hi psand ha main jana to nhi chahta tha pr agr na jata to bd main ya or pershaan krta isliya chl diya udhar bhi


Ritik.....Or lallu kidr ja rha tha

Main....wo wo ...class shuru hona walli ha na isliya udhar j rha tha

Ritik na mera bag mujhsa cheen liya or hor rozz ki tarha ak ad thapper khan ka bd main class ki tarf chl diya


In class



Teacher class ko prha rhi thi or main Kartika
ko dekh rha tha kb sa to dosto kartika meri class mate ha pr wo mujha sukkha ghass tk nhi dalti pr aj mana soch liya tha kartika sa baat krna ka class over hoyi to main us ka pass gya



Main .......k.k.kkkkartika meri baat suno gi please

meri school main koi achi image nhi thi is liya koi mera dost nhi tha sivaya Rishab ka jo aj nhi aya tha us ka ilava mujha bulana koi psand nhi karta school main

Kartika ....Apni friends sa tum log roko main ati hu ha bolo kya khna ha


Main..... kya.... kya...ham dost bn sakta hain


Kartika .....main or tum sa dosti kru hahahaha dafa ho jao yha sa smjhaaa

Meri ankhoo main nami a gyi thori or main chl diya main kartika ko ak achi larki smjhta tha but ya bhi wasi hi nikli main school sa bahir gya to kartika ka bhai khra tha apna dosto ka sath is phela ka main kuch smjh pata wo sb meri taraf lapka or phir mana whi kya jis main main expert tha main bhag nikla wha sa bhut muskil sa picha chuttta un sa main na ak khli sa park dekha or wha baitha gya




Main....man me... Akhir kab tak main asa hi bhahta rhu ja apni problems sa kabtak main fattu rhu ja kab tak main yu hi ba izzat hota rhu ga kb tak ya sb sochta hua kb meri ankho main ansu a gyaaaa.......

Ek dabe kuchle ladke ki kahani... Aksar hi aisa hota hai parivar me bhi jab apne hi bhai bahan swarthi ho jate hain... Unhe privacy chahiye hota hai aur jab mauka mile chhoton ko daant de...

Ek fattu ladke ki kalpna kafi rochak aur realistic tarike se ki hai... Bechara ghar se bhi gaya aur school me bhi dil toota... Dekhte hain aage karan ka nasib...

Wonderful update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Is story ko pura karna chahiye tha

 

[Smith_15]

Bhai sacchiii me ek dam zabardast kahani hai continue karo

Story is interesting,
Please give update, or tell us when will the update come
Silent reader

 

[Smith_15]

Next update

 

[Smith_15]

Story is nice