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Fantasy The great warrior

Nevil singh

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Update 7
Subha uth kr dyan kiya aur kuch der gumne ke bad me sb baccho ke sath khana kya aur tyar hokar

Class ki traf chl dia class me phuch kr me first row me beth gya kuch der bad Shalini madam ayi

S.l ..... Student aaj se app loogo ki class starts hogi sabhi mehnat se padhiyega
aur Rajkumari Aarti aur Raj app ki weak me sirf 3 hi class chlegi aur apko Raj 2 class extra lini hogi aur Rajkumari Aarti aap ko 1 class ok app dono ko weak ke three class me physical training di jaye gi
Aarti ... Ok madam

Ajj hm logo ki physical ki class thi to phle sabhi ground me gye
fir mam ne sabhi ko kha ki ground ka 10 chaker lagao

Raja .... Shalini madam 10 chaker nhai laga payenge

Shalini mam. Jitna kha jaye utna kro

fir kya tha hm log chaker lgane me lg gye 4 chaker lgane me bhut se student gir pade ab ground me kul mila kr 12---15 bacche hi bhag rahe the

6 chaker me Keval me, Raja , Aarti, karna , Swati aur Kirti hi the inme sbse age karna aur Aarti hi the unhe dekh mughe pta chl
gya ye sb ghar pr phle se practice karte honge
7 chaker ate ate hm 4 log hi bache the jisme Raja sbse piche tha me third aur arti karna ke bhut najdik phuch gyi thi mene socha ager ayese hi chlta rha to har jaunga

Me puri takat se bgha mene dekha Aarti aur karna brabr pr chl rhe the me ne dekh ab sirf 200 meter hi bche the mene karn aur Aarti ko 120 meter bad cross kr gya ab mene soch liya ki mughe aur mehnat kerne ki jarurt hi

Mere 10 chaker complet karne pr karna aur Aarti mughse 40 meter dur the

Raja acha dora tha 9 chaker lgaye the


hm sb ke Runing complete karne ke bad mam ne 10 minute ka break diya

karna .... Bhut ache Rajkumari Aarti aap acha practice ki hi

Aarti .... Ap ci acha dore Rajkumar karna karna


Karna .... Thank akhir dore vi khona app aur hmare pass acche traner jo hi

Aarti .... Apne vi bhut acha ki Rajkumar Raja

karna .... Ha Raja verry good

Raja . Raj ne bhut acha kiya hi mughe lagta hi wo achi practice karta hi

Aarti ... Ha Raj me vi bhut acha kiya

karna ne mughe Bulaya jb me uske pass gya
To usne kha

karna.... Raj nam hi tumhara

Me ..... Ha

Karna ..... Hamara nam ( avi wo age bolne wala tha ki mene kha mughe pta hi

Me..... Tumhara nam karn hi thik kha na mene
kis liye bulaya tha ye btao mer mam puchne to bulya nhi hoga aur ik bat ajj bula liya ainda se kud ab bol jldi mere pass
bhut time nhi hi


kaena gusse se tum jante nhai ho me kon hu
tumhari himmat kese Hui mughse ayese bat kerne ki tumhe pata hi mere pita koon hi
Mharaja Aditya

Me .... To mughe kyo bta rhe ho aur gussa kisi aur pe dikhana thik hi aur pita ki Tasvir apne
sath chla kro

Meri bat sun kr Raja jor jor hasne laga aur karna bhed gussa ho gya

Karna ..... Me tumhare pure privar ke ik ik log
ko mar dunga

Bas itna sunna tha ki mera sr gusse se phatne laga mene do tmache itni jor se mare karn ko ki uske kan se khun nikl ne lga sari class sb idher hi dekh ne lage is samay mam khi gyi thi

Me .... Pure gusse me ik bat yad rakhna ik byank awaj me yad rkhana karna dubra asa bola ki to
hm tumara sina chir dil nikal lenge abtk karna khada ho gya tha karna ne bi hard training
ki thi usne mere sine pr ek lat mari me toda dur jakr gira lakin aaj me bhut gusse me tha me uth kr karna ke sine pr ek lat mari wo bhut dur jakr gira sb log dekhne lag gye karna aur me kuch

der aur ladhte rhe hm dono ko chote lagi
Kisi student ne jake mam se bta
diya mam jakr sidhe head master ke kabin me gayi kyoki karna Rajkumar tha

Mam .... Sir Rajkumar karna aur ek bcha apas me lad rhe hi

H. M..... Hme rokna hoga nhi to bacha mr gayega karna ne bhut hard training li hi jb dono ground pr punche tb


Mene karna ko sir pr jor se mara aur wo behos hogya mere v bhot chote lgi thi

H. M.... Ne jb dekha ki Raj ne karna ko mar mar ke behos kr dia hi sir aur mam dono ne hme utaya aur magic se thik kiya

pehle mughe hos aya tb

H. M.... Raj tum ne karna ko kese harya usne to bhut hard training li hi

Me..... Kesi vi traning li ho ager meri family ke bare me kuch kha to me ise khatm kr dunga

H. M ...... Raj wo bhut strong rajya ka Rajkumar hi

Me.... Hoga koi vi meri family ke bare me kuch kha to kisi ko nhi chodunga

karna ko jb hos aya to bhut gusse me chla gya

ME vi apne kamre me chla gya

head master bhut preshan ho gye aur apne ofice me chle gye sare student ki ajj ki class dismiss ho gyi

Karna bhut gusse me parents contact room ki traf gya aur apne pita

King Aditya ko ro -- ro kr sb btaya isse Aditya bhut gusse ho gya






Laajwaab update dost
 

Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Update 7
Subha uth kr dyan kiya aur kuch der gumne ke bad me sb baccho ke sath khana kya aur tyar hokar

Class ki traf chl dia class me phuch kr me first row me beth gya kuch der bad Shalini madam ayi

S.l ..... Student aaj se app loogo ki class starts hogi sabhi mehnat se padhiyega
aur Rajkumari Aarti aur Raj app ki weak me sirf 3 hi class chlegi aur apko Raj 2 class extra lini hogi aur Rajkumari Aarti aap ko 1 class ok app dono ko weak ke three class me physical training di jaye gi
Aarti ... Ok madam

Ajj hm logo ki physical ki class thi to phle sabhi ground me gye
fir mam ne sabhi ko kha ki ground ka 10 chaker lagao

Raja .... Shalini madam 10 chaker nhai laga payenge

Shalini mam. Jitna kha jaye utna kro

fir kya tha hm log chaker lgane me lg gye 4 chaker lgane me bhut se student gir pade ab ground me kul mila kr 12---15 bacche hi bhag rahe the

6 chaker me Keval me, Raja , Aarti, karna , Swati aur Kirti hi the inme sbse age karna aur Aarti hi the unhe dekh mughe pta chl
gya ye sb ghar pr phle se practice karte honge
7 chaker ate ate hm 4 log hi bache the jisme Raja sbse piche tha me third aur arti karna ke bhut najdik phuch gyi thi mene socha ager ayese hi chlta rha to har jaunga

Me puri takat se bgha mene dekha Aarti aur karna brabr pr chl rhe the me ne dekh ab sirf 200 meter hi bche the mene karn aur Aarti ko 120 meter bad cross kr gya ab mene soch liya ki mughe aur mehnat kerne ki jarurt hi

Mere 10 chaker complet karne pr karna aur Aarti mughse 40 meter dur the

Raja acha dora tha 9 chaker lgaye the


hm sb ke Runing complete karne ke bad mam ne 10 minute ka break diya

karna .... Bhut ache Rajkumari Aarti aap acha practice ki hi

Aarti .... Ap ci acha dore Rajkumar karna karna


Karna .... Thank akhir dore vi khona app aur hmare pass acche traner jo hi

Aarti .... Apne vi bhut acha ki Rajkumar Raja

karna .... Ha Raja verry good

Raja . Raj ne bhut acha kiya hi mughe lagta hi wo achi practice karta hi

Aarti ... Ha Raj me vi bhut acha kiya

karna ne mughe Bulaya jb me uske pass gya
To usne kha

karna.... Raj nam hi tumhara

Me ..... Ha

Karna ..... Hamara nam ( avi wo age bolne wala tha ki mene kha mughe pta hi

Me..... Tumhara nam karn hi thik kha na mene
kis liye bulaya tha ye btao mer mam puchne to bulya nhi hoga aur ik bat ajj bula liya ainda se kud ab bol jldi mere pass
bhut time nhi hi


kaena gusse se tum jante nhai ho me kon hu
tumhari himmat kese Hui mughse ayese bat kerne ki tumhe pata hi mere pita koon hi
Mharaja Aditya

Me .... To mughe kyo bta rhe ho aur gussa kisi aur pe dikhana thik hi aur pita ki Tasvir apne
sath chla kro

Meri bat sun kr Raja jor jor hasne laga aur karna bhed gussa ho gya

Karna ..... Me tumhare pure privar ke ik ik log
ko mar dunga

Bas itna sunna tha ki mera sr gusse se phatne laga mene do tmache itni jor se mare karn ko ki uske kan se khun nikl ne lga sari class sb idher hi dekh ne lage is samay mam khi gyi thi

Me .... Pure gusse me ik bat yad rakhna ik byank awaj me yad rkhana karna dubra asa bola ki to
hm tumara sina chir dil nikal lenge abtk karna khada ho gya tha karna ne bi hard training
ki thi usne mere sine pr ek lat mari me toda dur jakr gira lakin aaj me bhut gusse me tha me uth kr karna ke sine pr ek lat mari wo bhut dur jakr gira sb log dekhne lag gye karna aur me kuch

der aur ladhte rhe hm dono ko chote lagi
Kisi student ne jake mam se bta
diya mam jakr sidhe head master ke kabin me gayi kyoki karna Rajkumar tha

Mam .... Sir Rajkumar karna aur ek bcha apas me lad rhe hi

H. M..... Hme rokna hoga nhi to bacha mr gayega karna ne bhut hard training li hi jb dono ground pr punche tb


Mene karna ko sir pr jor se mara aur wo behos hogya mere v bhot chote lgi thi

H. M.... Ne jb dekha ki Raj ne karna ko mar mar ke behos kr dia hi sir aur mam dono ne hme utaya aur magic se thik kiya

pehle mughe hos aya tb

H. M.... Raj tum ne karna ko kese harya usne to bhut hard training li hi

Me..... Kesi vi traning li ho ager meri family ke bare me kuch kha to me ise khatm kr dunga

H. M ...... Raj wo bhut strong rajya ka Rajkumar hi

Me.... Hoga koi vi meri family ke bare me kuch kha to kisi ko nhi chodunga

karna ko jb hos aya to bhut gusse me chla gya

ME vi apne kamre me chla gya

head master bhut preshan ho gye aur apne ofice me chle gye sare student ki ajj ki class dismiss ho gyi

Karna bhut gusse me parents contact room ki traf gya aur apne pita

King Aditya ko ro -- ro kr sb btaya isse Aditya bhut gusse ho gya
Training, study, magic ek taraf aur samajhdaari ek taraf..
mana ki karna ghamandi ahankari hai, par running ke baad usne raj ko shaant tarike se hi apne paas bulaya tha baat karne ke liye.... okay.. Ye baat bhi thik hai ki karna se baat nahi karni ushe, na hi koi jaan pehchan karne ka shauk hai. lekin... us time wo just aaram se baat kar sakta tha... ...agar karna bad behave karta to baat alag thi..

Pehli baat to Raj abhi us kabil nahi hua hai ki karna ke pita ka saamna kar sake... aur dusri.. karna chup baithne walo mein se nahi hai,, uske ahankar par aghat kiya hai aaj Raj ne... shayad iska khamiyaja ghatak na jaye...
Kabhi kabhi Waqt jab tak khud ke hak mein na ho to bahaduri se zyada samajhdaari dikhana hi asli Warrior lakshan hai...
Khair.... update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Training, study, magic ek taraf aur samajhdaari ek taraf..
mana ki karna ghamandi ahankari hai, par running ke baad usne raj ko shaant tarike se hi apne paas bulaya tha baat karne ke liye.... okay.. Ye baat bhi thik hai ki karna se baat nahi karni ushe, na hi koi jaan pehchan karne ka shauk hai. lekin... us time wo just aaram se baat kar sakta tha... ...agar karna bad behave karta to baat alag thi..

Pehli baat to Raj abhi us kabil nahi hua hai ki karna ke pita ka saamna kar sake... aur dusri.. karna chup baithne walo mein se nahi hai,, uske ahankar par aghat kiya hai aaj Raj ne... shayad iska khamiyaja ghatak na jaye...
Kabhi kabhi Waqt jab tak khud ke hak mein na ho to bahaduri se zyada samajhdaari dikhana hi asli Warrior lakshan hai...
Khair.... update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Itni deep knowlege kha se laati ho 😅
Waise shi bhi hai ye baat

RAJ mrne k baad is planet pr aya hai . Ho skta hai mrne se phle us k sath kuch hua ho ya use akele rhna psnd ho . Pr RAJ kaisa bnega ye sab to writer k hath me hai . Wo chaye to agle update me Raj ko dobara mrwa de . Agar writer ne Raj ka character aisa bnaya hai to koi na koi reason jrur hoga jo aage pta chlega .
 

Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Itni deep knowlege kha se laati ho 😅
Waise shi bhi hai ye baat

RAJ mrne k baad is planet pr aya hai . Ho skta hai mrne se phle us k sath kuch hua ho ya use akele rhna psnd ho . Pr RAJ kaisa bnega ye sab to writer k hath me hai . Wo chaye to agle update me Raj ko dobara mrwa de . Agar writer ne Raj ka character aisa bnaya hai to koi na koi reason jrur hoga jo aage pta chlega .
Sab writer ke upor hai...
kahani ki flow..
Kirdaaro ki bhumika..
situations....
mod, pehlu, sab kuch... 😊
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Itni deep knowlege kha se laati ho 😅
Waise shi bhi hai ye baat

RAJ mrne k baad is planet pr aya hai . Ho skta hai mrne se phle us k sath kuch hua ho ya use akele rhna psnd ho . Pr RAJ kaisa bnega ye sab to writer k hath me hai . Wo chaye to agle update me Raj ko dobara mrwa de . Agar writer ne Raj ka character aisa bnaya hai to koi na koi reason jrur hoga jo aage pta chlega .
Thank you bhai age padh kr pta chlega Raj ka behave ke bare me
 
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