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Fantasy The great warrior

Luffy

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Update 7
Subha uth kr dyan kiya aur kuch der gumne ke bad me sb baccho ke sath khana kya aur tyar hokar

Class ki traf chl dia class me phuch kr me first row me beth gya kuch der bad Shalini madam ayi

S.l ..... Student aaj se app loogo ki class starts hogi sabhi mehnat se padhiyega
aur Rajkumari Aarti aur Raj app ki weak me sirf 3 hi class chlegi aur apko Raj 2 class extra lini hogi aur Rajkumari Aarti aap ko 1 class ok app dono ko weak ke three class me physical training di jaye gi
Aarti ... Ok madam

Ajj hm logo ki physical ki class thi to phle sabhi ground me gye
fir mam ne sabhi ko kha ki ground ka 10 chaker lagao

Raja .... Shalini madam 10 chaker nhai laga payenge

Shalini mam. Jitna kha jaye utna kro

fir kya tha hm log chaker lgane me lg gye 4 chaker lgane me bhut se student gir pade ab ground me kul mila kr 12---15 bacche hi bhag rahe the

6 chaker me Keval me, Raja , Aarti, karna , Swati aur Kirti hi the inme sbse age karna aur Aarti hi the unhe dekh mughe pta chl
gya ye sb ghar pr phle se practice karte honge
7 chaker ate ate hm 4 log hi bache the jisme Raja sbse piche tha me third aur arti karna ke bhut najdik phuch gyi thi mene socha ager ayese hi chlta rha to har jaunga

Me puri takat se bgha mene dekha Aarti aur karna brabr pr chl rhe the me ne dekh ab sirf 200 meter hi bche the mene karn aur Aarti ko 120 meter bad cross kr gya ab mene soch liya ki mughe aur mehnat kerne ki jarurt hi

Mere 10 chaker complet karne pr karna aur Aarti mughse 40 meter dur the

Raja acha dora tha 9 chaker lgaye the


hm sb ke Runing complete karne ke bad mam ne 10 minute ka break diya

karna .... Bhut ache Rajkumari Aarti aap acha practice ki hi

Aarti .... Ap ci acha dore Rajkumar karna karna


Karna .... Thank akhir dore vi khona app aur hmare pass acche traner jo hi

Aarti .... Apne vi bhut acha ki Rajkumar Raja

karna .... Ha Raja verry good

Raja . Raj ne bhut acha kiya hi mughe lagta hi wo achi practice karta hi

Aarti ... Ha Raj me vi bhut acha kiya

karna ne mughe Bulaya jb me uske pass gya
To usne kha

karna.... Raj nam hi tumhara

Me ..... Ha

Karna ..... Hamara nam ( avi wo age bolne wala tha ki mene kha mughe pta hi

Me..... Tumhara nam karn hi thik kha na mene
kis liye bulaya tha ye btao mer mam puchne to bulya nhi hoga aur ik bat ajj bula liya ainda se kud ab bol jldi mere pass
bhut time nhi hi


kaena gusse se tum jante nhai ho me kon hu
tumhari himmat kese Hui mughse ayese bat kerne ki tumhe pata hi mere pita koon hi
Mharaja Aditya

Me .... To mughe kyo bta rhe ho aur gussa kisi aur pe dikhana thik hi aur pita ki Tasvir apne
sath chla kro

Meri bat sun kr Raja jor jor hasne laga aur karna bhed gussa ho gya

Karna ..... Me tumhare pure privar ke ik ik log
ko mar dunga

Bas itna sunna tha ki mera sr gusse se phatne laga mene do tmache itni jor se mare karn ko ki uske kan se khun nikl ne lga sari class sb idher hi dekh ne lage is samay mam khi gyi thi

Me .... Pure gusse me ik bat yad rakhna ik byank awaj me yad rkhana karna dubra asa bola ki to
hm tumara sina chir dil nikal lenge abtk karna khada ho gya tha karna ne bi hard training
ki thi usne mere sine pr ek lat mari me toda dur jakr gira lakin aaj me bhut gusse me tha me uth kr karna ke sine pr ek lat mari wo bhut dur jakr gira sb log dekhne lag gye karna aur me kuch

der aur ladhte rhe hm dono ko chote lagi
Kisi student ne jake mam se bta
diya mam jakr sidhe head master ke kabin me gayi kyoki karna Rajkumar tha

Mam .... Sir Rajkumar karna aur ek bcha apas me lad rhe hi

H. M..... Hme rokna hoga nhi to bacha mr gayega karna ne bhut hard training li hi jb dono ground pr punche tb


Mene karna ko sir pr jor se mara aur wo behos hogya mere v bhot chote lgi thi

H. M.... Ne jb dekha ki Raj ne karna ko mar mar ke behos kr dia hi sir aur mam dono ne hme utaya aur magic se thik kiya

pehle mughe hos aya tb

H. M.... Raj tum ne karna ko kese harya usne to bhut hard training li hi

Me..... Kesi vi traning li ho ager meri family ke bare me kuch kha to me ise khatm kr dunga

H. M ...... Raj wo bhut strong rajya ka Rajkumar hi

Me.... Hoga koi vi meri family ke bare me kuch kha to kisi ko nhi chodunga

karna ko jb hos aya to bhut gusse me chla gya

ME vi apne kamre me chla gya

head master bhut preshan ho gye aur apne ofice me chle gye sare student ki ajj ki class dismiss ho gyi

Karna bhut gusse me parents contact room ki traf gya aur apne pita

King Aditya ko ro -- ro kr sb btaya isse Aditya bhut gusse ho gya






Fantastic update
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Ek hi baat ko baar baar repeat kahe kiye ho bhai...... Aise me achha to nhi lagta naa...... Upar se mistake bhi bahut hote hai...... Sata maza kharab ho jata hai...... Post karo to ek baar recheck kar liya karo bhai....... Waise to update achhe hai..... Lekin lagta hai raj ke andar ghamand aa gaya hai kuchh jyada hi...... Ye to apne aage kuchh samajhta hi nhi....... Lagta hai power ka nasha chadh gaya hai....... Or chadhe bhi kyo naa bina kuchh kiye jo mil gai hain powers....... Ab yaha ye HM pahala gaya hai jo uski shadi ki baat kar raha hai raja se.... Dekhte hain aage kya hoga
Bhai update delete ho gya tha mene copy kia but kuch mistake agya isliye sory mene thik kr dia hi aur appko age story me pta chlega Raj ke behave ka karn
 

Luffy

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Update no. 7.2 ...............


Location........ School


apne kmre me ane ke bad me sochne lga ki ho na ho karna jrur apne pita se
es bare me jarur btye ga

Mughe Pahle se hi iske liye taiyar rahana hoga mere dimag mein ek upay ata hi
ME apne man me ( Ab dekhta hu me karna ko ki wo mera kya karta hi
sayad use pta nhi ki me Raj hu )

Location ........head master office

Head master soch rhe the ki Ho Na Ho Karna jarur Apne Pita se bataya hoga aur wo Raj ko Marne ke liye kuchh Na kuchh jarur kar rahe honge mujhe Raja ke pass Jana hoga aur unhen apni taraf Milana hoga taki Me Raj ki Suraksha kar sakun Raj hamare Rajya ke liye bahut mahatvpurn hai uske pass 2 -----2 world kenpowerful element hai mujhe kuchh na kuch karna hoga han main Raja ke pass jaunga aur unhen aur Raj ki Suraksha karne ke liye ye apni taraf milunga isase Raja Ko bhi fayda hoga
Aur Raj ki Suraksha ci ho

jiegi.

location....... Maharaja Aditya ka mahal



karna ke pita king Aditya apne bete ki bat sun kr bhut gussa ho
gye unhone apne ek sanik ko bulaya
aur kha ki jao aur senapati ko
kho ki turant rajdarbar
me hajir ho

jb senapati Darbar me aya to usne phle jukh kr Raja ka abiwadn kiya

Senapati .... Maharaj ki Jai Ho Maharaj apne hme Bulaya koi khas kam

Aditya ...... Senapati hmare bete Rajkumar karna ko school me kisi ne apmanit kia hi app turant kuch saniko ko le jae aur us ladke ko khatam kr do

Senapati.... Jesa app khe Maharaj hm ajj hi Isla ke liye niklte hi

Aditya..... Thik hi

Uske bad Senapati apne kuch seniko ko laker Isla Rajya ke traf chl dia

Location.... Isla Raj mhal

Intro....

king of Isla ................. Maharaja Vikram

Wife of Maharaja Vikram .................
Maharani Swati

Daughter of Maharaja Vikram .............. Rajkumari Aarti

Maha Raja Vikram aur Maharani bethe kuch bate kr rhe
the ki ek sewak aya

Sanik ...... Gushtakhi ki mafhi hujur Great magician school ke head master apse milna chte hi

Maharaj Vikram ...... Unhe ader purwk leker ayo

Sanik ..... Jo agya maharaj

kuch der bad head master mharaj ke pass aye

H M..... Prnam maharaj prnam maharani ji

Vikram ...... Ayie H M ji bethiye

H M ...... Dhnya bad maharaj

Vikram...... Bataye kese ana hua


H M ......... Maharaj hmere school me ek ladke ne Maharaj Aditya ke bete
Rajkumar karna ko bhut
mara hi aur Raja Aditya ne apne senapati ko is ladke ko khatam karne ke
Liye bheja hi hm chate hi app hmari
Us ladke ki surcha karne
me madad kriye

Vikarm ....... Hme jha tk pta hi karna bhut hard training kiye hi
to kese us ladke ne karna ko hara dia
aur kon hi wo ladka

Maharani Swati....... Ha H. M ji Maharaj
shi kh rhe hi

H M .... Maharaj us ladke ka nam Raj hi


H. M .... Maharaj Raj ke pass duniya ke do sbse khaternak element hi Lightning aur Thunder element wo hmare Rajya ke liye bhut hi important hi ager Raj hmare Rajya me rha aur humne Rajkumari Aarti ki sadi
ager Raj se kerde to hm world ke sabse powerful country me ane lge ge
Superb update
 

ashish_1982_in

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Update no. 7.2 ...............


Location........ School


apne kmre me ane ke bad me sochne lga ki ho na ho karna jrur apne pita se
es bare me jarur btye ga

Mughe Pahle se hi iske liye taiyar rahana hoga mere dimag mein ek upay ata hi
ME apne man me ( Ab dekhta hu me karna ko ki wo mera kya karta hi
sayad use pta nhi ki me Raj hu )

Location ........head master office

Head master soch rhe the ki Ho Na Ho Karna jarur Apne Pita se bataya hoga aur wo Raj ko Marne ke liye kuchh Na kuchh jarur kar rahe honge mujhe Raja ke pass Jana hoga aur unhen apni taraf Milana hoga taki Me Raj ki Suraksha kar sakun Raj hamare Rajya ke liye bahut mahatvpurn hai uske pass 2 -----2 world kenpowerful element hai mujhe kuchh na kuch karna hoga han main Raja ke pass jaunga aur unhen aur Raj ki Suraksha karne ke liye ye apni taraf milunga isase Raja Ko bhi fayda hoga
Aur Raj ki Suraksha ci ho

jiegi.

location....... Maharaja Aditya ka mahal



karna ke pita king Aditya apne bete ki bat sun kr bhut gussa ho
gye unhone apne ek sanik ko bulaya
aur kha ki jao aur senapati ko
kho ki turant rajdarbar
me hajir ho

jb senapati Darbar me aya to usne phle jukh kr Raja ka abiwadn kiya

Senapati .... Maharaj ki Jai Ho Maharaj apne hme Bulaya koi khas kam

Aditya ...... Senapati hmare bete Rajkumar karna ko school me kisi ne apmanit kia hi app turant kuch saniko ko le jae aur us ladke ko khatam kr do

Senapati.... Jesa app khe Maharaj hm ajj hi Isla ke liye niklte hi

Aditya..... Thik hi

Uske bad Senapati apne kuch seniko ko laker Isla Rajya ke traf chl dia

Location.... Isla Raj mhal

Intro....

king of Isla ................. Maharaja Vikram

Wife of Maharaja Vikram .................
Maharani Swati

Daughter of Maharaja Vikram .............. Rajkumari Aarti

Maha Raja Vikram aur Maharani bethe kuch bate kr rhe
the ki ek sewak aya

Sanik ...... Gushtakhi ki mafhi hujur Great magician school ke head master apse milna chte hi

Maharaj Vikram ...... Unhe ader purwk leker ayo

Sanik ..... Jo agya maharaj

kuch der bad head master mharaj ke pass aye

H M..... Prnam maharaj prnam maharani ji

Vikram ...... Ayie H M ji bethiye

H M ...... Dhnya bad maharaj

Vikram...... Bataye kese ana hua


H M ......... Maharaj hmere school me ek ladke ne Maharaj Aditya ke bete
Rajkumar karna ko bhut
mara hi aur Raja Aditya ne apne senapati ko is ladke ko khatam karne ke
Liye bheja hi hm chate hi app hmari
Us ladke ki surcha karne
me madad kriye

Vikarm ....... Hme jha tk pta hi karna bhut hard training kiye hi
to kese us ladke ne karna ko hara dia
aur kon hi wo ladka

Maharani Swati....... Ha H. M ji Maharaj
shi kh rhe hi

H M .... Maharaj us ladke ka nam Raj hi


H. M .... Maharaj Raj ke pass duniya ke do sbse khaternak element hi Lightning aur Thunder element wo hmare Rajya ke liye bhut hi important hi ager Raj hmare Rajya me rha aur humne Rajkumari Aarti ki sadi
ager Raj se kerde to hm world ke sabse powerful country me ane lge ge
very nice update bhai
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update no. 7.2 ...............


Location........ School


apne kmre me ane ke bad me sochne lga ki ho na ho karna jrur apne pita se
es bare me jarur btye ga

Mughe Pahle se hi iske liye taiyar rahana hoga mere dimag mein ek upay ata hi
ME apne man me ( Ab dekhta hu me karna ko ki wo mera kya karta hi
sayad use pta nhi ki me Raj hu )

Location ........head master office

Head master soch rhe the ki Ho Na Ho Karna jarur Apne Pita se bataya hoga aur wo Raj ko Marne ke liye kuchh Na kuchh jarur kar rahe honge mujhe Raja ke pass Jana hoga aur unhen apni taraf Milana hoga taki Me Raj ki Suraksha kar sakun Raj hamare Rajya ke liye bahut mahatvpurn hai uske pass 2 -----2 world kenpowerful element hai mujhe kuchh na kuch karna hoga han main Raja ke pass jaunga aur unhen aur Raj ki Suraksha karne ke liye ye apni taraf milunga isase Raja Ko bhi fayda hoga
Aur Raj ki Suraksha ci ho

jiegi.

location....... Maharaja Aditya ka mahal



karna ke pita king Aditya apne bete ki bat sun kr bhut gussa ho
gye unhone apne ek sanik ko bulaya
aur kha ki jao aur senapati ko
kho ki turant rajdarbar
me hajir ho

jb senapati Darbar me aya to usne phle jukh kr Raja ka abiwadn kiya

Senapati .... Maharaj ki Jai Ho Maharaj apne hme Bulaya koi khas kam

Aditya ...... Senapati hmare bete Rajkumar karna ko school me kisi ne apmanit kia hi app turant kuch saniko ko le jae aur us ladke ko khatam kr do

Senapati.... Jesa app khe Maharaj hm ajj hi Isla ke liye niklte hi

Aditya..... Thik hi

Uske bad Senapati apne kuch seniko ko laker Isla Rajya ke traf chl dia

Location.... Isla Raj mhal

Intro....

king of Isla ................. Maharaja Vikram

Wife of Maharaja Vikram .................
Maharani Swati

Daughter of Maharaja Vikram .............. Rajkumari Aarti

Maha Raja Vikram aur Maharani bethe kuch bate kr rhe
the ki ek sewak aya

Sanik ...... Gushtakhi ki mafhi hujur Great magician school ke head master apse milna chte hi

Maharaj Vikram ...... Unhe ader purwk leker ayo

Sanik ..... Jo agya maharaj

kuch der bad head master mharaj ke pass aye

H M..... Prnam maharaj prnam maharani ji

Vikram ...... Ayie H M ji bethiye

H M ...... Dhnya bad maharaj

Vikram...... Bataye kese ana hua


H M ......... Maharaj hmere school me ek ladke ne Maharaj Aditya ke bete
Rajkumar karna ko bhut
mara hi aur Raja Aditya ne apne senapati ko is ladke ko khatam karne ke
Liye bheja hi hm chate hi app hmari
Us ladke ki surcha karne
me madad kriye

Vikarm ....... Hme jha tk pta hi karna bhut hard training kiye hi
to kese us ladke ne karna ko hara dia
aur kon hi wo ladka

Maharani Swati....... Ha H. M ji Maharaj
shi kh rhe hi

H M .... Maharaj us ladke ka nam Raj hi


H. M .... Maharaj Raj ke pass duniya ke do sbse khaternak element hi Lightning aur Thunder element wo hmare Rajya ke liye bhut hi important hi ager Raj hmare Rajya me rha aur humne Rajkumari Aarti ki sadi
ager Raj se kerde to hm world ke sabse powerful country me ane lge ge
Superb update
 

Naik

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Location India City Delhi.

Hero name _ Raj
Raj dekhne mein theek thaak hai. Raj ki umra 19 sal hi college mein BSc first year me admission liya hai scholarship se Raj anath aashram mein rahata tha 18 sal Tak ab ek kirae ke kamre mein rahata hai Raj ki jindagi bahut kthinayi se biti school mein sab use loser loser kahate the kyunki Raj koi bhi game mein participate nahin Karta tha aur Na koi activity mein sirf padhai Karta tha aur dekhne mein bhi vo dubla patla sa ladka dekhta tha Raj ke kuch dost vi bne Keval Raj se apna Kam pura kar wate the sab matlab ke dost the fir bhi Raj kisi Ko kuch nahin khta tha sabki madad Karta tha jindagi bahut dukh Bhari hui thi.

Location. R . V College Delhi
Raj ka aaj college mein first day tha sabse pahle college ke liye ready hua Raj ke Ghar se college 3 kilometre duri per tha.

Ab Se Raj Ko me likhunga
Jab main college pahuncha GATE se entre Kiya kuch ladke junior student ko pareshan kar rahe the Jaise hi main gate ke andar hua ladke ne mujhe awaaz dekar Apne paas Bulaya
Ladka first. Idhar aa kya Naam hai Tera
Me. Ji Raj
Ladka 2. senior se baat karne ki tamiz nahin hai sir karkar bat kia kr
Me. Sir Raj naam hai mera
Ladka 3rd. Chal turant murga ban ja
Me ( man me socha ki) iske alwa mere pass koi rasta nahin hai yah log mujhse jyada hai aur takatwar bhi FIR kya tha main murga ban gaya.
Kuch der pareshan karne ke bad unhone mujhe Jane Diya Jaise hi main class mein pahuncha ek ladke ne mujhe dekh kar kaha
Ladka.. vah dekho Jo bahar murga banaa tha vah a Gaya
Aur sab hasne Lage
Main Bus dekh sakta tha kuchh kr sakta nahin tha isliye jakar piche Beth Gaya
15 minut bad
Class start ho gai class teacher eye sab ka introduction lene lge

Class teacher. Hello student myself Rajit main hun aapka class teacher Aaj sab apna apna introduction denge padhaai kl se hogi isi ke bad sab apna apna introduction dene lge


Jab meri Bari aayi

Hello myself Raj and my 12 percent is 97 %
Sb mujhe dekhne lage

Class teacher. Very good Raj good performance.
Main. Thanks sir.

Aise hi sari class over ho gai class ke bad mein apni bag lekar Ghar ki taraf chal Diya Achanak mujhe ek baccha sadak par dikha jo ki sadak par kar raha tha Maine dekha ki ek taraf ek car a rahi thi main dor ke use bachane gaya bacche ko leker baga pr tabhi car mugh se tkra gai mere hath se baccha udhar gira baccha Gaya .

JB main utha to dekha sab log meri body ko dekh rahe hain tabhi kisi ne kaha iske deth ho gai hai mujhe kuchh samajh mein nahin a raha tha main bahut din tak aise hi Raha. Meri body ko police ne hospital lekar gaye aur doctor ne mera postmortem Kiya meri body ko jala Diya Gaya meri bahut din tak vaha Raha
Behtareen shuruwat
 
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