Fantasy The great warrior

[Raj Singh Thakur]

javani janeman hasin dilruba raj ne to kar diya dil pe war

Thank you bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Shanndar update bhai

Thank you bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Raj bhai update bada karo yaar. Maja hi nhi aa raha lagta he bs jldi jldi jitna likha apne utna update kar diya , timings or update jay Suthar ( God and demon) jese rakho maja aa jayega. Week me 3 update but bade bade

Bhai meri abhi hebit bhi bani hi likhne ki
Fir bhi me kosis krunga

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Awesome fabulous update Bhai

Thank you black water bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Bhai maza aagya updte pad ke Aise he likhte raho

Thank you Vickey bhai

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update.............. 16
location ............. Magic school

me aur Suwarna jb school aye to mene Suwarna ko kl ka
Milne ka kh kr apne room me chla gya
ajj me bhut thk gya tha kyoki mene 8 lavel beast ke
soul light ko absorb kia tha me apne bed pr aya
aur let kr age ke bare me sochne lga ki ab
kya karna hi


Mene Raj 1 ko yad kia wo mer samne a gya mene use apne me
samahit kr lia
ushne jo kia tha mujhe pta chl gya

Uske bad mene Raj 1 aur Raj 2 ko yad kia
wo dono mere samne hazir ho gye

Me ...............
Raj 1 tum jo book mene tumhe dinhi use ache se padh
lo us ke hr magic yad kr lo uske bad tumhe
Teleport wale magic pr dyan dena hi me
janta hu ye bhut kathin magic hi
but tumhe ise sikhna hoga

Raj 1 ..............
ji malik me puri kosis krunga apko nirash nhi krunga
mere malik

Me.............
Mughe tum se yahi asha hi ab tum dubara T . F me chle jao aur
jb tk me ne khun usme se mt niklna

Raj 1.............
ji thik hi malik jesi apki agya

Me.............
bhut ache Raj 1 ab tum ja sakte ho

uske bad Raj 1 wapas T . F me chla gya
fir me kuch der socha aur fir Raj 2 se bola

Me ...............
Raj 2 mughe asha hi ki tum wo jin wali book ache se read kr rhe ho
aur ha ab ache se samajh lene kyoki ager koi bhul hui
to hm bach nhi payege

Raj 2 ...............
app fikar na kare mere malik mere malik app ko
galti ka muka nhi denge hm

Me .........
mughe tum se yahi asha hi
aur ha 5 hour bad mughe nend se jga dena tum ab tum ja sakte ho
Raj 2

Raj 2 ..........
jesi app ki echa mere malik

uske bad Raj 2 chla gya aur me bhi so gya

( Ab chote hi hm Maharaj Aditya ke Rajya me Maharaj Aditya karna
ke pita hi )

Maharaj Aditya apne Singhasan pr bethe the
aur apne mantriyo se kisi bat pr charcha kr rhe the ki
tvi ek senik aya aur bola

Senik ...........
Maharaj Abi - Abi pta chla hi ki Senapati apas agye hi

Senik ki baat sun ki Maha Raj Aditya bhut kuch hogay
usne senik se kha ki

Aditya .......
bhut ache Senik jao aur unhe kaho ki
hm e yad kia hi

Senik ............
Jo hukam maharaj

Aur eske bad wo Senik chla gya Aditya yah janne ke
liye byakul honutha ki Senapati ne us ladke ko kese
saja di ho gi jese use mara hoga es liy Aditya bhut
byakul ho utha kuch der intjar karne ke bad senapati

ji aye


Senapati........ Maharaj ki jay ho

Aditya ........... Btao sena pati ji apne us badtameez balk ko kya
saja di jisne hmare Jan se pyare bete ka apman ki hm sb bistar
se sunna chahte hi

Senapati bechara kya khta suna dala kese use
phle H . M ne aur bad me Godess princess Suwarna
ne doya
tha senapati ki bat sun kept Aditya bhut gussa ho gya

Aditya ( gusse se ) ..............
kya bk rhe ho tum hm H . M ko kisi
tarah samahl lete lakin ye swarna
desh ki godess princess Suwarna
us do tke ke ladke ka sath de rhi
hi jha tk hmne suna tha Suwarna
kisi garib se baat tk nhi karti to
wo us ladke ko kyo bacha rhi hi

Senapati ( darte hue )....................
Maharaj mene pata lgwaya hi kuch
dino me wo aur godess Suwarna dono
hi sath rhte hi

Aditya ...........
wo ladka bhut chalak hi usne
godess princess Suwarna se
dosti kr li hi kyoki wo janta
hi use hmse keval goddess princess
Suwarna hi bacha sakti hi aur koi
bhi lakin hm bhi dekhte hi ki kb tk
Goddes Suwarna us ladke ko kb tk bacha
pati hi kabhi na kabhi hme mouka jarur milega
bs whi waqt us ladke ka akhiri waqt hoga

fir Aditya waha se chala jata hi



location .............. Angle lok






Angel lok me is samay lord of
Angle apni sabha me bethe the
aur kuch adesh de rhe the


Lord .............
hm kuch samay ke liye God ka dyan karne ja rhe
hi unse yah puchne ki kese hm Lucifier ko rok
sakte hi jb tk hm nhi a jate tb tk is lok ki sari
jimme dari Suprim Angle ki hi thik hi ye hamara
adesh hi

sb angle .......... Ji lord
jesa app khe

Supreme angle .......
ok angle lord hm jb tk app a nhi jate tb tk
Angle lok ko samhale ge

Lord .......... Mughe app se yahi acha thi


us ke bad Lord chale jate hi .


Location.......... Devil lok

Rajguru ............. Hmne jo karya tum logo se kha hi wo ho
Jana chahiye

Sare mantri ........ Ho jayega Rajguru ji

Rajguru ........... Kl hm sb ke liye bhut bada din hi kl hamare maharaj
apni tapasya puri kr krke uthege

koi bhi galti nhi honi chahiye
thik hi

SB mantri ( kushi se ) ...........
hi jayega mere malik

Intro khani ke sabhi patra ka

hero ....... Raj

father of hero ......... God of death

Baba hero ke ( hero ko pala hi )

maa hero ki ( jinhone hero ko pala hi ) ....... Tara

Maharaj Aditya



(Ajj mene jo likha wo delete ho gya hi isi liye
Ajj bs yhi Update ayega next update kl ayega)

( Ab likhne ka mn nhi kh raha hi app sb ajj isi se kam chla le
next update me ful introduction sabhi patra ka mil jaye ga
Thank

Apka friend
Raj Thakur

Nice update

 

[King]

Update........ 13

Location ........ Magic school of Isla

Me Godess Suwarna se mil kr ane ke bad me apne room me a gya aur sochne lga

ab mughe apni cultivation

bhadani hogi kuch din bad C .D .T hi

Mughe apni power badhani hogi





Father God of deth le Anusar mughe

Forest of Isla jana hoga



MUKLE KL JO SAPNA aya tha us ke bare me sochne laga



Tomorrow night flash back



kl mere sapne me pita God of deth aye



G. D ..... Kese ho Putra Raj thik to ho



me ........ Pranam pita ji ji pita ji Me thik hu

G.D ....

RAj tumhe acche se practice kr na hi aur clone magic sikhna hi



Ab waqt agya hi tumhe Forest of Isla jana hi



Me...... Jo agya pita shree



G. D ....... putra tum age badhte rho tumhe raste apne app milege



aur tumhara Dark magic tumhare cantrol se bhar chla jata hi



tumhe ache se dyan lagana hoga aur maa Nikumbla devi ki puja karni hogi



tvi tum apne dark element ki use kr sakte ho aur ha kisi ko ye mt batana ki tumhare pass dark element hi jb tk tum uska use karna na sikh jao



ME...... Thik hi Pita ji



G . D .......Tum kl jaker Suwarna se milna hoga wo tumhare school ki no. 1 hi



Aur wah ek Angle hi tumhe jo samajh me nhi aye ga usse puch lena wo



tumhe bta degi thik hi

ab me chalta hu



ME...... Ji Thik hi



Back to ...... Present



Me kl ke bare me soch rha tha jo pita ji ne mughe kha

tha



mene socha kuch der clone magic ki practice hi kr leta hu



Me apne T . F me chla gya aur dyan me jaker mantra padhne laga



16 minutes to aram se phada fir mughe dard hone lga dire dire mere kan muh se

khun niklne lga



Pr me apne dyan se bahr nhi aya

kuch der bad me behos ho gya

jb me hos me aya to



apne clone magic ki timeing dikha to bhut kush hogya pur 38 minut tk dyan me rhkr mantra padh paya tha



Mughe clone magic lene ke liye 52 minutes mantra padhna padega



Me Apne T . F se bahr aya to jakr fresh

hua aur so gya



Time ....... Evining



Godess Suwarna Kabir ke room pr ayi aur drwaja khat khatya



Sare bacche ye dekh heran the godess Suwarna kisi se bat nhi kerti wo Raj ke room me kyo gyi hi



jb mene room ka door open kia to dekha room ke bhar Suwarna khadi hi



me ne unhe behaya



Suwarna ....... Bolo Raj kya baat karni hi tumhe



Me...... Mughe Suwarna se nhi Angel Suwarna se baat karni hi



ye lga Suwarna ko jhatka ki jb kisi ko pta nhi tha ki wo ek Angla hi to !ughe kese pta chla



Suwarna ne mere gale pr apni Talwar rakh di aur kha



Suwarna ........ Kon ho tum aur tumhe kese pata chla ki me ek Angle hu btao

mughe



ME...... Me phli baat ye apni Talwar hatao phle dushri bat dubara mere upper Talwar rakhne ki glti kabhi mt karna



Me ...... God of deth ka son hu Prince of deth aur Pita ji ne kha tha ki ager tumhe kuch samaj na aye to tum se puch lu



Itna khne ke bad me apne Prince of deth ke roop me agya





Suwarna mere samne guthne ke bl neth gyi



Suwarna ....... Maf kr digiyega Malik mugh se bhut badi galti ho gyi



mughe nhi pata chla ki app kon hi nhi to me esi galti kabhi nhi kerti mere malik



Me. ........Koi baat nhi jo pita ji ne kha ager koi cheez mughe samajh nhi ayi to tumse

puch lunga



Suwarna....... Ye to mera sobhagya ho ga



Mere malik



Me ...... Sbke samne mughe malik nhi khna ok

aur kl Senapati a rha hi Karna ke pita ka





Suwarna....... App chinta na kare gusse se use to me dekh lungi app kisi bat ki chinta na kare apki sewa karna mere liye sobhagya ki bat hoga



ME...... Ab tum jao he din hm tumse ground me milenge thik hi

Jb hm bulaye to a jana ok



Suwarna ........ Ji







uske jane ke bad me apne normal roop me agya fir kuch der magic ki prectice karke jo mene library se book li thi usi mese

Kush magic sikha fir me so gya







Time morning .......... 4. 00



Me utha aur fresh hua aur dyan karne laga ajj mene soch lia tha ajj chaye jo ho jaye ajj me colone magic sikh kr hi rhunga



ME dyan me beth gya aur mantra padhne laga phle 32 minutes kuch nhi uha lakin phir mughe bhut dard hone lga

mene himmat nhi hari meri eye se blood niklne lga muh se bar bar blood nikl rha tha





jb 52 minutes pure hue to mere jism se Asim pida ho rhi thi



kuch der bad meri peha shant hui to me bhut kush tha sabse phle mene

colone magic speel mn me bola



Mere samne mera clone khad tha



C . Raj ........kya agya hi mere malik



Ajj phli bar tha jb me etna kush hua tha ki me bata nhi sakta





muhe thakawat

mhsus ho rhi thi to mene socha chlo kush der bhar hi gumh lete hi



ME....... Raj 1 tum hr waqt T.. f me rhoge jao aur meri magic book se practice karo

T . F se bahr tb tk na nikalna jb tk me na khu



Raj 1 ....... Jo agya mare malik



mene apna ek clone banaya tha to mugje tkhawat bhut masus ho rhi thi to me chal dia bhar





jb me park me pucha to dekha Aarti apne kuch sathiyo ke sath bethi hi karna apne kush chamcho ke sath beta hi



Rohit aur Raja aur kuch student bethe hi kisi cheez pr discuss kr rhe hi



mugje dekhte hi sb log mughe dekhne lge

karna mere pass aya aur bola



Karna ...... Raj tumne mugh se Dushmani laker acha nhi kia hi ajj tumhara akhiri din hoga is duniya me



Mughe uski baat sun aur gussa a gya ek to me itna thaka hua uper se ye dimag bekar lie hi



meme mara ek lat karna ki wo niche gira



Me.......... Jo karna hoga kr lena me na tumse darta hi aur na tumhare baap se ab isse phle me aur kuch karu chup chap nikl lo warna bhut marunga





karna jate jate gusse se bol gya

bas jitna udhna hi udh lo bs keval ajj ki

Baat hi





Uski bat sun kr me chl dia apne raste pr uski baat sun kr Raja aur Rohit , Aarti bhut preshan ho gye



Rohit..... Raja karna kya karne wala hi Raj ke sath aur ye Raj bhi hr waqt karna se uljhta rhta hi



Raja ......... Pta nhi yar but karna aur Maharaj Aditya nkuch na kuch krenge jarur



Me thodi der gumhne ke bad apne room gya aur so gya



Time ............. Evening

Ek update ko do bar padhu kya

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update

 

[SameerK]

Update.............. 16
location ............. Magic school

me aur Suwarna jb school aye to mene Suwarna ko kl ka
Milne ka kh kr apne room me chla gya
ajj me bhut thk gya tha kyoki mene 8 lavel beast ke
soul light ko absorb kia tha me apne bed pr aya
aur let kr age ke bare me sochne lga ki ab
kya karna hi


Mene Raj 1 ko yad kia wo mer samne a gya mene use apne me
samahit kr lia
ushne jo kia tha mujhe pta chl gya

Uske bad mene Raj 1 aur Raj 2 ko yad kia
wo dono mere samne hazir ho gye

Me ...............
Raj 1 tum jo book mene tumhe dinhi use ache se padh
lo us ke hr magic yad kr lo uske bad tumhe
Teleport wale magic pr dyan dena hi me
janta hu ye bhut kathin magic hi
but tumhe ise sikhna hoga

Raj 1 ..............
ji malik me puri kosis krunga apko nirash nhi krunga
mere malik

Me.............
Mughe tum se yahi asha hi ab tum dubara T . F me chle jao aur
jb tk me ne khun usme se mt niklna

Raj 1.............
ji thik hi malik jesi apki agya

Me.............
bhut ache Raj 1 ab tum ja sakte ho

uske bad Raj 1 wapas T . F me chla gya
fir me kuch der socha aur fir Raj 2 se bola

Me ...............
Raj 2 mughe asha hi ki tum wo jin wali book ache se read kr rhe ho
aur ha ab ache se samajh lene kyoki ager koi bhul hui
to hm bach nhi payege

Raj 2 ...............
app fikar na kare mere malik mere malik app ko
galti ka muka nhi denge hm

Me .........
mughe tum se yahi asha hi
aur ha 5 hour bad mughe nend se jga dena tum ab tum ja sakte ho
Raj 2

Raj 2 ..........
jesi app ki echa mere malik

uske bad Raj 2 chla gya aur me bhi so gya

( Ab chote hi hm Maharaj Aditya ke Rajya me Maharaj Aditya karna
ke pita hi )

Maharaj Aditya apne Singhasan pr bethe the
aur apne mantriyo se kisi bat pr charcha kr rhe the ki
tvi ek senik aya aur bola

Senik ...........
Maharaj Abi - Abi pta chla hi ki Senapati apas agye hi

Senik ki baat sun ki Maha Raj Aditya bhut kuch hogay
usne senik se kha ki

Aditya .......
bhut ache Senik jao aur unhe kaho ki
hm e yad kia hi

Senik ............
Jo hukam maharaj

Aur eske bad wo Senik chla gya Aditya yah janne ke
liye byakul honutha ki Senapati ne us ladke ko kese
saja di ho gi jese use mara hoga es liy Aditya bhut
byakul ho utha kuch der intjar karne ke bad senapati

ji aye


Senapati........ Maharaj ki jay ho

Aditya ........... Btao sena pati ji apne us badtameez balk ko kya
saja di jisne hmare Jan se pyare bete ka apman ki hm sb bistar
se sunna chahte hi

Senapati bechara kya khta suna dala kese use
phle H . M ne aur bad me Godess princess Suwarna
ne doya
tha senapati ki bat sun kept Aditya bhut gussa ho gya

Aditya ( gusse se ) ..............
kya bk rhe ho tum hm H . M ko kisi
tarah samahl lete lakin ye swarna
desh ki godess princess Suwarna
us do tke ke ladke ka sath de rhi
hi jha tk hmne suna tha Suwarna
kisi garib se baat tk nhi karti to
wo us ladke ko kyo bacha rhi hi

Senapati ( darte hue )....................
Maharaj mene pata lgwaya hi kuch
dino me wo aur godess Suwarna dono
hi sath rhte hi

Aditya ...........
wo ladka bhut chalak hi usne
godess princess Suwarna se
dosti kr li hi kyoki wo janta
hi use hmse keval goddess princess
Suwarna hi bacha sakti hi aur koi
bhi lakin hm bhi dekhte hi ki kb tk
Goddes Suwarna us ladke ko kb tk bacha
pati hi kabhi na kabhi hme mouka jarur milega
bs whi waqt us ladke ka akhiri waqt hoga

fir Aditya waha se chala jata hi



location .............. Angle lok






Angel lok me is samay lord of
Angle apni sabha me bethe the
aur kuch adesh de rhe the


Lord .............
hm kuch samay ke liye God ka dyan karne ja rhe
hi unse yah puchne ki kese hm Lucifier ko rok
sakte hi jb tk hm nhi a jate tb tk is lok ki sari
jimme dari Suprim Angle ki hi thik hi ye hamara
adesh hi

sb angle .......... Ji lord
jesa app khe

Supreme angle .......
ok angle lord hm jb tk app a nhi jate tb tk
Angle lok ko samhale ge

Lord .......... Mughe app se yahi acha thi


us ke bad Lord chale jate hi .


Location.......... Devil lok

Rajguru ............. Hmne jo karya tum logo se kha hi wo ho
Jana chahiye

Sare mantri ........ Ho jayega Rajguru ji

Rajguru ........... Kl hm sb ke liye bhut bada din hi kl hamare maharaj
apni tapasya puri kr krke uthege

koi bhi galti nhi honi chahiye
thik hi

SB mantri ( kushi se ) ...........
hi jayega mere malik

Intro khani ke sabhi patra ka

hero ....... Raj

father of hero ......... God of death

Baba hero ke ( hero ko pala hi )

maa hero ki ( jinhone hero ko pala hi ) ....... Tara

Maharaj Aditya



(Ajj mene jo likha wo delete ho gya hi isi liye
Ajj bs yhi Update ayega next update kl ayega)

( Ab likhne ka mn nhi kh raha hi app sb ajj isi se kam chla le
next update me ful introduction sabhi patra ka mil jaye ga
Thank

Apka friend
Raj Thakur

Fabulous update bhai