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Fantasy The great warrior

Luffy

Luffy

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Raj Singh Thakur said:
Update.............. 16
location ............. Magic school

me aur Suwarna jb school aye to mene Suwarna ko kl ka
Milne ka kh kr apne room me chla gya
ajj me bhut thk gya tha kyoki mene 8 lavel beast ke
soul light ko absorb kia tha me apne bed pr aya
aur let kr age ke bare me sochne lga ki ab
kya karna hi


Mene Raj 1 ko yad kia wo mer samne a gya mene use apne me
samahit kr lia
ushne jo kia tha mujhe pta chl gya

Uske bad mene Raj 1 aur Raj 2 ko yad kia
wo dono mere samne hazir ho gye

Me ...............
Raj 1 tum jo book mene tumhe dinhi use ache se padh
lo us ke hr magic yad kr lo uske bad tumhe
Teleport wale magic pr dyan dena hi me
janta hu ye bhut kathin magic hi
but tumhe ise sikhna hoga

Raj 1 ..............
ji malik me puri kosis krunga apko nirash nhi krunga
mere malik

Me.............
Mughe tum se yahi asha hi ab tum dubara T . F me chle jao aur
jb tk me ne khun usme se mt niklna

Raj 1.............
ji thik hi malik jesi apki agya

Me.............
bhut ache Raj 1 ab tum ja sakte ho

uske bad Raj 1 wapas T . F me chla gya
fir me kuch der socha aur fir Raj 2 se bola

Me ...............
Raj 2 mughe asha hi ki tum wo jin wali book ache se read kr rhe ho
aur ha ab ache se samajh lene kyoki ager koi bhul hui
to hm bach nhi payege

Raj 2 ...............
app fikar na kare mere malik mere malik app ko
galti ka muka nhi denge hm

Me .........
mughe tum se yahi asha hi
aur ha 5 hour bad mughe nend se jga dena tum ab tum ja sakte ho
Raj 2

Raj 2 ..........
jesi app ki echa mere malik

uske bad Raj 2 chla gya aur me bhi so gya

( Ab chote hi hm Maharaj Aditya ke Rajya me Maharaj Aditya karna
ke pita hi )

Maharaj Aditya apne Singhasan pr bethe the
aur apne mantriyo se kisi bat pr charcha kr rhe the ki
tvi ek senik aya aur bola

Senik ...........
Maharaj Abi - Abi pta chla hi ki Senapati apas agye hi

Senik ki baat sun ki Maha Raj Aditya bhut kuch hogay
usne senik se kha ki

Aditya .......
bhut ache Senik jao aur unhe kaho ki
hm e yad kia hi

Senik ............
Jo hukam maharaj

Aur eske bad wo Senik chla gya Aditya yah janne ke
liye byakul honutha ki Senapati ne us ladke ko kese
saja di ho gi jese use mara hoga es liy Aditya bhut
byakul ho utha kuch der intjar karne ke bad senapati

ji aye


Senapati........ Maharaj ki jay ho

Aditya ........... Btao sena pati ji apne us badtameez balk ko kya
saja di jisne hmare Jan se pyare bete ka apman ki hm sb bistar
se sunna chahte hi

Senapati bechara kya khta suna dala kese use
phle H . M ne aur bad me Godess princess Suwarna
ne doya
tha senapati ki bat sun kept Aditya bhut gussa ho gya

Aditya ( gusse se ) ..............
kya bk rhe ho tum hm H . M ko kisi
tarah samahl lete lakin ye swarna
desh ki godess princess Suwarna
us do tke ke ladke ka sath de rhi
hi jha tk hmne suna tha Suwarna
kisi garib se baat tk nhi karti to
wo us ladke ko kyo bacha rhi hi

Senapati ( darte hue )....................
Maharaj mene pata lgwaya hi kuch
dino me wo aur godess Suwarna dono
hi sath rhte hi

Aditya ...........
wo ladka bhut chalak hi usne
godess princess Suwarna se
dosti kr li hi kyoki wo janta
hi use hmse keval goddess princess
Suwarna hi bacha sakti hi aur koi
bhi lakin hm bhi dekhte hi ki kb tk
Goddes 🤴 Suwarna us ladke ko kb tk bacha
pati hi kabhi na kabhi hme mouka jarur milega
bs whi waqt us ladke ka akhiri waqt hoga

fir Aditya waha se chala jata hi



location .............. Angle lok






Angel lok me is samay lord of
Angle apni sabha me bethe the
aur kuch adesh de rhe the


Lord .............
hm kuch samay ke liye God ka dyan karne ja rhe
hi unse yah puchne ki kese hm Lucifier ko rok
sakte hi jb tk hm nhi a jate tb tk is lok ki sari
jimme dari Suprim Angle ki hi thik hi ye hamara
adesh hi

sb angle .......... Ji lord
jesa app khe

Supreme angle .......
ok angle lord hm jb tk app a nhi jate tb tk
Angle lok ko samhale ge

Lord .......... Mughe app se yahi acha thi


us ke bad Lord chale jate hi .


Location.......... Devil lok

Rajguru ............. Hmne jo karya tum logo se kha hi wo ho
Jana chahiye

Sare mantri ........ Ho jayega Rajguru ji

Rajguru ........... Kl hm sb ke liye bhut bada din hi kl hamare maharaj
apni tapasya puri kr krke uthege

koi bhi galti nhi honi chahiye
thik hi

SB mantri ( kushi se ) ...........
hi jayega mere malik

Intro khani ke sabhi patra ka

hero ....... Raj

father of hero ......... God of death

Baba hero ke ( hero ko pala hi )

maa hero ki ( jinhone hero ko pala hi ) ....... Tara

Maharaj Aditya



(Ajj mene jo likha wo delete ho gya hi isi liye
Ajj bs yhi Update ayega next update kl ayega)

( Ab likhne ka mn nhi kh raha hi app sb ajj isi se kam chla le
next update me ful introduction sabhi patra ka mil jaye ga
Thank

Apka friend
Raj Thakur
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Luffy

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Raj Singh Thakur said:
Hallo friends ye Keval Introduction hi update nhi ise app achi trah se padh le taki app ko story achi trh se samajh me ajaye

Introduction of some important character of story

1) Real father of Raj ........ God of death

2) Veer ( Raj ko palne wale ) inhe apna hero Baba khta hi

3) Tara ( Raj ko palne wali mhila ) inhe apna hero Maa khta hi

4) Raj ( inhe to app sb jante hi honge ye hi hmari khani ke hero ) Main character

Jis Rajya me hmara hero aur uske maa baba rhte hi us Rajya ka Name hi

Jha hero rhta hi Rajya ka name hi .... Isla

King of Isla ........ Maharaj Vikram

Queen of Isla ......... Maharani Swati

Princess of Isla ........ Aarti ( ye hero ke school me uske sath padhti hi inke pass lightning element hi aur Fier eliment hi

Magic school ......... Ye ek school hi jha bache magic sikhne ke liye ate hi ye Isla me hi aur bhut acha school hi yha alag alag desh aur Rajya ke bachhe padhne ate hi

H . M ...... Ye Isla school ke head master hi aur inke pass bhut power hi inka nam ..... Deepak hi

Madam Priya ....... Ye magic school ki ek high lavel ki teacher hi jo Thunder element ke bare me parhati hi


Madam Shalini ......... Ye hi hmar hero ki class teacher
Jo five elements ka bare me padhati
Hi

Master Veer ........ Ye hero ko aur princess of Isla yani Aarti ko lightning element ke bare me padhate hi

Rajya name .............. Aditya Nagar
Ye wo Rajya hi jha karna ke pita Maharaj Aditya Raj karte hi

Karna ....... Prince of Aditya Nagar

Aditya ....... King of Aditya nager

Senapati Aditya Nagar ka uska name hi ......... Karma

hero ke sarh kuch padhne walo ke bare me

Raja .......... Ye ek Prince hi iske Rajya ka nam hi Ray desh

priya ....... Ye ek princess hi iske Rajya ka name hi krma desh


Rohit ....... Ek student jo ki Raj ke sath padhta hi

Devil lok ....... Ye ek esa lok hi jha black magic karne wale khaternak
Devil rhte hi
Yha ka King hi
King of devil lok .......... Lucifier

Rajguru of devil lok inka name ............ Derya guru Mahavir hi

Angle lok .......... Ye ek esa Rajya hi jaha Angle aur punya atmaye rhti hi

yha ka king hi

KIng of Angle lok ....... Lord of Angle Virbhadra

Suprim Angle name ....... Sarthak

God ( ye character ke bare me batane ki jarurt hi nhi hi )

Adi sakti ....... Ye God ki wife hi


God of deth ......... Ye god ke bete hi enka karya hi sabko apne michir samay pr
deth dena unhe unke karma anushar phal dena enke ek beta hi jiska nam
Raj hi jo ki hmare hero hi God of death 3 number pr hi power me inhe keval inke mata pita ani God aur wife God Adi sakti hi hara sakti hi

Mata Nikumbla devi ....... Inke pass God of deth se thodi km power hi ye sansar ki 4 number pr sabse sakti shali hi

Suwarna ........ Ye swarna desh ki Rajkumari hi aur ye ek angle hi enhe sb goddess prencess Suwarna ke nam se jante hi enke jesi ladki pure grah me nhi hi

Swarna desh ...... Ye jis grah pr hero Rhta hi wha ka sabse powerfull Rajya hi




Age aur bhi character ayenge jese jese wo ayenge me intron karta rahunga
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