Incest The Hidden King 👑 (fantasy + magic )

[Xabhi123]

Very very nice really superb bhai

Thank you

 

[Xabhi123]

Next update

Thank you

 

[Xabhi123]

Sorry guys update 1 ya 2 din tak Nahin de paoga kyunke argent Kam ki waja se mujhe city Jana pad Raha hain
Maine Kuch time pahle Qatar ke visa apply Kiya tha us main Kuch problem ho gayi Hain to Jana padega 1 ya 2 din maybe m update de Dunga

 

[Naik]

Update 19​

Woh roshni aakas se hote hue sidhe aakar Surya se takra gayi aur jaise hi us Roshni ne Surya ko chua, ek tez, chaka chaundh karne wala jhatka laga. Surya ki aankhoo ke samne sab kuch safed ho gaya, aur usne apne badan ko hawa main udta hua mehsoos kiya. Ek lamhe ke liye aisa laga jaise uska wajood hi khatam ho gaya ho, aur agle hi pal uski aankhoo ke saamne ek nayi, anjan duniya thi


Jab uski aankheen khuli, woh ek aisi jagah par tha jiske bare main usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha. Wahan na koi sheher tha, na koi jungle. Bas ek ajeeb si shanti thi, aur hawa main ajeeb si khushbo thi. Uske upar asman bhi nahi tha, bas ek neeli, chamakdar roshni thi. Surya ne apne haath uthaye aur usne dekha ki uske kapde aur badan bilkul saaf the, jaise woh kabhi lada hi na ho


Usne darte hue apne aas pass dekha. Tabhi, uske samne ek aurat aayi. Uski lambi, safed baal the, aur uski aankhoo main ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne ek bhi baat nahi ki, bas muskurate hue Surya ki taraf dekha


Aurat : Swagat hai Surya. Tumhara yahan par ( uski awaz aisi thi jaise woh hawa se bani ho, bilkul shant aur sundar )


Surya : (hairan hote hue) Ap... ap kaun hain Aur main yahan kaise aaya

Surya ne darte hue poocha. Uska chehra pareshani se bhara hua tha. Woh hamesha sab kuch control karta tha, par is jagah par usko sab kuch alag lag raha tha


Aurat : Main is jagah ki rakshak hoon. Aur tumhara yahan par barson se intezar kar rahi hoon I
usne ahista se kaha.


Surya : Mera...? Lekin kyun? Mera intezar kyun kar rahi hain ap?


Aurat : Is baat ka jawab tumhe sahi samay aane par mil jayega ( usne muskurate hue kaha ) Aur tumhara intezar yahan is liye ho raha hai taki tum apni shakti hasil kar sako


Surya : (pareshan hote hue) Meri shakti? Meri kaunsi shakti

Surya dimag main ek bhi baat nahi thi, jisse woh apni shakti ko pehchan sake


Aurat : Tumhe Apne sakti chakra hasil Karna hain jis main Panchbhut Hain Tumhe uski khud ki himmat aur takat se hasil Karne honge

Surya : (sochte hue) Thek hai. To... mujhe kahan jaana hoga?

Aurat ne apni aankheen band ki, aur uske saamne ek chamakdar, neeli roshni bani. Usne us roshni ko Surya ki taraf ishara kiya


Aurat : Yeh hai tumhara rasta. Is par chalo, aur tum apni shakti ko hasil kar sakoge Par yaad rakhna, is raste par tum akele ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur phir usne apne raste ki taraf dekha. Uske andar ajeeb si aag thi ek aag jo usko aage badhne ke liye keh rahi thi. Usne dar ko chora, aur woh us neeli roshni ki taraf aage badne laga.

Jab Surya ne dar ko chora, woh neeli roshni ki taraf aage badhne laga. Uske kadam jaise hi us roshni se bane raste par pade ek halki si awaz gonji, aur woh rasta uske peche se band hota gaya. Uske charon taraf anjan si shanti thi, na hawa, na awaz. Bas woh aur woh neeli roshni.
Chalte chalte, woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan zameen bilkul saaf nahi thi. Wahan, zameen ajeeb tarah se hill rahi thi, jaise woh sans le rahi ho. Uske samne ek bada, gehra jheel tha, jismain se neli roshni nikal rahi thi. Jhel ke kinare, pani bilkul saaf tha, par jaise hi woh aage badha, ek tez jhatka laga. Zameen uske neche se hilne lagi, aur uske samne ek bada, patthar ka dewar ban gaya


Surya ne us dewar ko dekha. Uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha, par usne us dar ko control kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki usne kitni mushkilon ka samna kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main yeh kar sakta hoon


Usne aage badhne ki koshish ki, par har baar jab woh ek kadam badhata, zameen hilne lagti aur ek naya dewar uske samne aa jata. Woh har dewar ko todne ki koshish karta, par har baar woh dewar wahi rehti. Uska saans rukne laga. Uske dimag main ek baat aayi

Surya ( sochta hue ) : Yeh physical taqat ka imtehaan nahi hai

Usne ek gehri saans li aur usne aankheen band ki Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne har mushkil ka saamna apne dimag se kiya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ke gusse ko control kiya tha. Usne ab apne dimag ko shant kiya, aur usne us zameen ko mehsos kiya


Jab usne apni aankheen kholi, usne apne ap ko ek aisi jagah par dekha jahan har taraf raste the. Har rasta usko us jheel ki taraf le ja raha tha. Par ek rasta alag tha, aur woh usko dusre raste se door le ja raha tha

Surya ne us raste ko dekha, aur usne bina soche samjhe us raste par chalna shuru kiya Jab woh aghe badha, zameen bilkul shant thi Usne dekha ki woh us jheel ki taraf ja raha tha, jahan se neeli roshni nikal rahi thi

Jab woh us jheel ke pass pahuncha wahan koi nahi tha. Bas woh aur woh neeli roshni thi Surya ne dekha ki jheel ke beech main ek chota sa teela tha, jaha ek chota sa diya jala hua tha. Usne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi aur jaise ki surya ne usko mehsos kiya to agle hi pal surya ek nayi jagha per tha

Prithvi ki Pariksha :-


Jab Surya ne us neeli roshni se bane raste par apna pehla kadam rakha wahan ka vatavaran hi badal gaya. Hawa main ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi itni gehri ki uski apni sanson ki awaz bhi gonj rahi thi Uske pairon ke neche ki zamen na mitti thi, na patthar, bas ek thandi, roshan satah thi. Surya aghe badhta gaya, aur uske peche se woh neeli roshni ka rasta dheere dheere gayab ho gaya, jaise uske aane se pehle wahan kuch tha hi nahi


Chalte chalte woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan har taraf ek ajeeb, nela kanch tha. Yeh aam kanch nahi tha. Har tukda hawa main tair raha tha, aur unki satah par Surya ki alag alag tasverein thi. Un tasveron se ek ajeeb, sunsan awaz aa rahi thi, jaise hawa gonj rahi ho

Awaz : Swagat hai, surya ... tumhari asal duniya main

Surya jatke se ruka Uska dil tez dhadakne laga. Usne darte hue ek kanch ke tukde ko dekha, aur usmain ek haivan ki parchhai thi. Us parchhai ne ek hansi di

Parchai : Tum kya kar rahe ho yahan, surya ? Tumne to bas khoon bahane jaana hai. Tumhari jagha yahan nahi, us tofan main hai jise tumne khud banaya hai

Surya ka chehra gusse se lal ho gaya. Usne ek muthe bech di

Surya : Main haivan nahi hoon!

Surya gusse se kaha


Parchai : Jhoot bolte ho, Surya. Tum wahi ho. Yaad karo, woh raat jab tumne un sabhi logon ko mara tha. Tumhe unki chekhain sunai nahi di? Ya tumne bas unhain marne main maza liya?


Uske aage ek aur kanch ka tukda aya, jismain uski maa ki aankhoo main dar tha. Unki aankhoo se ansu beh rahe the, par woh uski taraf nahi dekh rahi thi. Unki parchai ne apne haath uthaye, aur use door hat gayi Maa ki awaz sunai de rahi hai?

Perchai : Surya... Surya, mat jao... Maa
ne tumse kaha Lekin tumne unki baat nahi suni. Tum bas waha se Nikal gaye


Surya ki aankhoo main ansu aa gaye. Usne apni aankhoo ko band kiya aur usne us dar ko mehsos kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise uski maa ne usko gale lagaya Karti thi. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise uske dada ji ne usko uske ghar bulaya tha. Usne apne dar ko ek taraf kiya, aur usne us awaz ko suni jo uske andar se aayi thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Yeh bas tumhare dar ka aina hai


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne ek ajeeb si shanti mehsos ki. Usne us kanch ke tukde ko dekha, aur usne usko chua. Kanch ka tukda toot gaya

Parchhai : Tum galat ho Surya. Tum haar gaye ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya aage badna shuru kiya. Ab har taraf uske dar ka aina tha. Uske samne ek aur kanch ka tukda aya, jismain woh ladki thi. Uski aankhoo main dar aur gamand tha

Ladki : Tum ne sakti chakra ko Nahin balke apni taqat ko chua Tum koi aam insan Nahin bohut kass ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main bas apne ap ko dund raha hoon Apne dar ko nahi


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne us dar ko control kiya. Usne apne andar ki shakti ko mehsos kiya, jise Shakti chakra ke naam se jaana tha. Usne us shakti ko mehsos kiya, aur usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main darunga nahi Main har musibat ka samna karunga Main apne dar ko harauga


Jab usne apni aankhoo ko khola uske saamne ab koi kanch ka tukda nahi tha. Wahan ek ajeeb, neeli roshni thi. Usne us roshni ko dekha, aur usne apne ap ko us roshni main chod diya

Jab woh roshni se bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi

Aurat : Tumne pehli pariksha pass kar li, Surya Tumne apne dar ko hara diya. Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho

Surya : Yeh pehli pariksha thi?

Aurat : Haan Yeh Prithvi ki pariksha thi. Prithvi humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhati hai, par agar hum apne dar ke aage jhuk jaate hain, to woh humain nahi dikhati Tumne apne dar ko hara diya aur is liye tumne Prithvi ka imtehaan pass kar liya


Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga.

Dusri Pariksha :-

Jaal ki Pariksha :-


Jab Surya ne pehli pariksha pass ki, uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne aage badne ka socha, aur tabhi uske samne ka rasta bilkul badal gaya. Woh neeli roshni ab usko ek gehri, andheri gufa main le ja rahi thi. Hawa main ab thandak aur nami thi, aur har taraf se pani ki boondon ki awaz aa rahi thi, jaise woh kuch kehna chahti hon


Surya chalte chalte ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan ek bada, gehra jheel tha. Is jheel ka pani bilkul kala tha itna gehra ki uski satah par usko apna chehra bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha. Jheel se ek ajeeb si thandi hawa chal rahi thi, jo uske andar ek anjan dar paida kar rahi thi. Uski sansein thodi rukne lagi, aur uske dimag main ek ajeeb sa sawal aaya

Dimag : Kya yeh safar sahi hai? Kya main sach main ek insan ban sakta hoon?


Tabhi, uske dimag main ek awaz aayi. Woh uski apni awaz thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Tumne apne ap ko mara hai. Tumne sabko chora

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne ap ko ek insan banaya tha Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ki aag ko control kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha,

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya aage badna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aghe badhaya, pani hilne laga. Pani ke andar se chehre nikalne lage. Un chehron main kuch aise log the, jinhain usne haivan ke roop main mara tha. Unke chehre par gussa aur gamand tha, aur unki aankhoo main ek ajeeb sa dard tha

Chehre : Tumne humain mara Surya. Tumne hamare gharon ko tabah kiya. Tumne humain mara, par hum ab bhi yahan hain. Tumhe aghe badhne nahi denge

Surya ne un chehron ko dekha, aur uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha. Woh dar un chehron ka nahi, balke apni khud ki galti ka tha. Usne us dar ko control kiya, aur usne aage badhne ki koshish ki Par har baar, pani usko peche dhakelta raha


Surya ne socha : Agar main inko hara sakta hoon, to main is pani ko bhi hara sakta hoon


Usne apne haath uthaye, aur us Pani ho Apne samne se hatane ki Koshish ki Lekin agle hi pal Pani ne surya ko ek jatka diya aur surya Piche ki taraf gir gaya


Chehre : Tum hamari aatma ko nahi jala sakte, Surya. Tumne jo kiya, woh galat tha


Surya ne unki taraf dekha, aur usne harr maan li Usne apne hathon ko neche kiya, aur usne apne dar ko mehsos kiya. Uske dimag main ek awaz aayi

Awaz : Tumne harr maan li, Surya

Surya : Main kaise jeet sakta hoon? Main ne bohut logon ko dukh diya hai


Awaz : (ek ajeeb si awaz main) Tumne sahi kaha Surya Tumne logon ko dukh diya hai, par tum usko thek bhi kar sakte ho. Tumhe apne andar ke gusse ko control karna hoga

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main kaise?


Awaz : Tumhe apne andar ke gamand ko control karna hoga. Tumhe apne ap ko maaf karna hoga


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne us pani ko dekha. Usne apne haath uthaye aur usne ek gehra sans liya Usne us pani ko chua, aur pani usko andar khinchne laga. Ek pal ke liye usko aisa laga jaise woh doob raha hai, par phir usne apne ap ko pani main chod diya


Jab woh dooba, woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan har taraf roshni thi. Usne dekha ki uske samne ek bada gola tha, jo usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Usne us ghole ko dekha, aur usne usko apne andar le liya. Jab woh us ghole ko andar le gaya, usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo dard tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha. Usne apne ap ko wapis pani main uthaya, aur usne dekha ki pani bilkul saaf tha. Woh saaf pani ab usko ek nayi jagah par le ja raha tha


Jab woh bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskaan thi

Aurat : Tumne dusri pariksha pass kar
Surya Tumne apne gamand ko hara diya. Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Yeh dusri pariksha thi?


Aurat : Haan. Yeh Jal ki pariksha thi. Jal humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke gamand ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne gamand ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Jal ka imtehaan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badhne laga

Teesri Pariksha :-

Agni Pariksha :-



Jab Surya ne Jal ki pariksha ko pass kiya, uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne apne ap ko dekha, aur usko laga jaise woh ek naya insan ho. Tabhi, uske samne ka rasta bilkul badal gaya. Woh neeli roshni ab usko ek aisi jagah par le ja rahi thi, jahan har taraf aag thi. Hawa main ab tandak nahi, balke ek ajeeb si garmi thi, jo uski sanson ko rok rahi thi.
Surya chalte chalte ek aisi jagah par pahuncha, jahan har taraf laal, peeli aur neeli aag ki laptein thi. Zameen bilkul garam thi, itni garam ki uske pair jalne lage. Uske upar asman nahi, balke aag ke badal the, jo har pal garaj rahe the. Uske aage, usko ek ajeeb sa chehra nazar aaya. Woh chehra ek haivan ka tha, par woh aag se bana tha, aur uski aankhoo main gussa tha


Haivan : Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, Surya? Tum bas ek aam insaan ho. Tumhari taqat is aag ke aage kuch nahi

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha, Main ek haivan Nahin balke surya ho


Haivan : Jhoot bolte ho, Surya. Tum wahi ho. Tumne apne andar ke gusse ko nahi chora. Tumne apne andar ke gusse ko nahi roka

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne socha

Surya : Kya yeh Haivan ka astitva hai? Kya yeh meri asliyat hai?


Haivan : Haan, yeh tumhari asliyat hai. Tum sirf ek khooni ho. Tumne un sabhi logon ko mara, aur tumne unko marte hue maza liya

Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne us awaz ko suni. Usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya, aur usko laga jaise woh bilkul aag se bhara hua ho. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne har mushkil ka saamna apne gusse se kiya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne dushmanon ko mara tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon

Tabhi, uske dimag main ek aur awaz aayi. Woh uski maa ki awaaz thi

Maa : Beta, gussa mat karo. Gussa sirf tabahi laata hai

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko khola Usne Haivan ki taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon

Usne aage badhna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aage badhaya, Haivan ne us par hamla kiya. Haivan ne ek tez aag ka gola banaya, jisse woh Surya par phenka


"Dhaam!"



ki awaz ke saath, Surya ne usko roka, par woh usko nahi rok paya. Uske haath jalne lage, aur woh zameen par gir gaya


Haivan : Tum harr gaye ho, Surya. Tum aam insaan ho


Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main aam nahi hoon. Main woh hoon, jo apne andar ki aag ko control kar sakta hai

Usne apne haath uthaye, aur usne haivan ki taraf dekha. Usne apne andar ki aag ko mehsoos kiya, aur usne us aag ko control kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main gussa nahi karunga


Jab usne apni aankhoo ko khola haivan gayab ho gaya, aur uske samne ek aag ka samundar tha. Is samundar main ek ajeeb si roshni chamak rahi thi. Surya ne socha ki yeh wahi roshni hai, jo usko us anjan duniya main le gayi thi. Usne us roshni ko dekha, aur usne aage badhne ka socha.
Jab woh us samundar ke pass pahuncha, wahan koi nahi tha. Bas woh aur woh roshni thi. Surya ne dekha ki roshni ke andar ek chota sa diya jala hua tha. Usne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi.
Surya ne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi. Usne apne andar ki aag ko control kiya, aur usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Usne aage badhna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aage badhaya, uske saamne ek ajeeb si roshni aayi. Woh roshni uske andar ghus gayi, aur usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo gussa tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha

Ab usko ek nayi jagah par jaana tha


Jab Surya ne Agni ko shant kiya, uske charon taraf ka mausam ekdum se badal gaya. Woh jalte hue maidan aur aag ki laptein pal bhar main gayab ho gayi. Uski jagah ek aisi jagah thi jahan har taraf ek gehri shanti thi, par hawa bilkul bhi shaant nahi thi. Ek ajeeb, anokhi hawa har pal chal rahi thi, aur uski awaz gonj rahi thi, jaise woh kuch kehna chahti ho


Tabhi, uske samne wohi aurat aayi iske lambe safed baal aur shaant aankheen thi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi.


Aurat : Tumne Agni ko hara diya, Surya Tumne apne gusse aur apni tabahi ko control kar liya. Tumne Apni aag ko shant kar diya

Surya (saans lete hue) : Yeh aag... woh meri taqat thi. Main ne use control kar liya


Aurat: Wahi, Surya. Lekin tumhari asli pariksha ab shuru hogi. Ab tumhe Vayu ki pariksha ko pass karna hoga

Surya : (hairan hote hue) : Vayu... hawa?


Aurat : Vayu azadi hai, Surya. Woh har jagah hai par kahin nahi. Woh sab kuch hai, par kuch nahi. Agar tumne Vayu ki pariksha ko pass nahi kiya, toh tum kabhi apni taqat ko control nahi kar paoge

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main taiyar hoon


Aurat : Jao, aur apne ap ko dhondho

Woh aurat gayab ho gayi, aur Surya aage badhne laga


chuthi Pariksha :-

Vayu ki Pariksha :-


Jaise hi Surya aage badha, hawa ki tezi badhne lagi. Shuru main, hawa bilkul aam thi, par jaise hi woh aage badha, hawa itni tez ho gayi ki uske kapde udne lage. Uske baal hawa main uddne lage, aur usko laga jaise woh hawa main udd raha ho


Uske samne koi dewar nahi thi, na koi aag, na koi pani. Bas hawa thi. Ek ajeeb, tezi se chalne wali hawa. Yeh hawa usko rok rahi thi. Woh har kadam par use peche dhakel rahi thi. Surya ne apne haathon ko zameen par rakha aur woh aage badhne laga

Uske dimag main ek awaz aayi

Dimag : Tum kahan ja rahe ho, Surya? Tum kyun lad rahe ho? Tum kya ho? Ek insan? Ya ek haivaan?


Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne apne dimag main ek baat ko socha

Surya : Main Surya hoon

Hawa ki tezi badhne lagi

" Shoooo"

ki awaz ke saath, hawa ne ek bada tofan bana diya. Us tofan ne Surya ko hawa main uthaya aur usko ghumane laga. Pzzzzz ki awaz ke saath, usne ek tez bijli ka gola banaya, aur usko Surya par phenka. Surya ne usko roka, par woh usko rok nahi paya

Surya (gusse se) : Tum kaun ho?

Awaz : Main woh hoon, jo tum ho. Tum ek haivan ho Tumne apne ap ko mara. Tumne sabko chora


Surya : Jhoot bolte ho


Awaz : Agar main jhoot bolta hoon, to tumhari taqat kyun nahi hai? Tum kyun hawa main ud rahe ho? Tum kyun apna astitva kho rahe ho?


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne dekha ki uske haath aur paon bilkul alag ho gaye hain. Woh hawa main udd raha tha, aur usko laga jaise woh bilkul halka ho gaya ho. Usne apne dimag main ek baat ko socha

Surya (sochte hue ) : Main nahi hawa hoon. Main Surya hoon

Usne apne ap ko wapis zameen par uthaya, aur usne us tofan ko dekha. Usne apne haath uthaye, aur usne us tofan ko apne andar le liya

Jab woh us tofan ko andar le gaya, usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo dard tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha. Usne apne ap ko wapis zameen par uthaya, aur usne dekha ki hawa bilkul shant thi. Woh shant hawa ab usko ek nayi jagah par le ja rahi thi

Jab woh bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi


Aurat : Tumne chauthi pariksha pass kar li, Surya Tumne apne ap ko dund liya Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho


Surya : Yeh chauthi pariksha thi?


Aurat : Haan Yeh Vayu ki pariksha thi. Vayu humain hamesha sahi raasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke shor ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne andar ke shor ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Vayu ka imtehaan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga


Jab Surya ne Vayu ki pariksha ko pass kiya, uske charon taraf ka mahaul ekdum se badal gaya. Woh tezi se chalti hawa aur uski awaz pal bhar main gayab ho gayi. Uski jagah ek aisi jagah thi jahan bilkul khamoshi thi Na zameen thi, na asman, na koi rang. Bas ek gehri, anant shanti thi. Surya ek anjane, safed ghole main tair raha tha. Uske pass na hawa thi, na aag, na pani, na hi dharti. Bas woh aur woh gehri shanti thi

Surya ne socha ki woh kahan hai. Uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha, par woh us dar ko control nahi kar paya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main kahan hoon? Kya main mar gaya hoon?

Tabhi uske andar ek ajeeb si awaz aayi. Woh uski apni awaz thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Tum mare nahi ho. Tum bas wahan ho, jahan sab kuch shuru hota hai. Aur sab kuch khatam hota hai

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne apne andar ki aag ko mehsos kiya, aur usne usko control kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne ap ko ek insan banaya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ki shanti ko control kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Usne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne dekha ki uske samne ek chamakta hua gola tha. Woh gola usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Surya ne usko dekha, aur usne socha

Surya ( sochte hue ) agar main us gole ko chuye, to kya hoga? Kya main mar jaoga? Ya main apne ap ko kho dunga?

Surya ( sochte hue ) : Agar main is gole ko nahi choga, to main kaise aage badhunga?

Usne apne hathon ko aage badhaya, aur usne us ghole ko chua. Ek dam se, uske andar ek tez current doud gaya, aur uski ankhon ke samne sab kuch neela ho gaya. Uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi, aur usko aisa laga jaise woh hawa main udd raha ho. Usne apne andar ek ajeeb si taqat mehsos ki, ek aisi taqat jo usko sab kuch karne ke liye keh rahi thi. Usne apne andar Shakti chakra ki shakti ko mehsos kiya


Jab woh roshni se bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi

Aurat : Tumne akhri pariksha pass kar li
Surya Tumne Akash ki Pariksha pass kardi Hain Ab tum apni shakti Chakra hasil kar sakte ho

Surya : Yeh akhri pariksha thi?

Aurat : Haan Yeh Akash ki pariksha thi. Akash humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke shor ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne andar ke shor ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Akash ka imtehan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main aghe badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga


Jab Surya aage badha, uske samne ek ajeeb sa manzar tha. Ek tarah se woh ek samundar tha, par us samundar mein pani nahi, balke roshni thi. Har taraf roshni hi roshni thi. Uske samne ek bada gola tha, jo usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Usne socha ki yeh wahi gola hai, jise usne pehle dekha tha.

Surya ( sochte hue ) : to yeh Hain woh sakti jisko hasil Karne ke liye main Yaha aya ho

Yeh soch kar woh Bina soche samje aghe badne Laga aur surya ne us sakti ho Apne right hand se chua aur aisa Karke hi us pure jagha per Roshani hi Roshani pel gayi aur surya us Roshni ke bech Hawa per udd kar Apne dono haath peela diya aur apni ankheen band kar li aur surya ke sarir se Roshani Nikal Rahi Thi Kuch der bad woh deere Deere niche utarne Laga aur jab woh puri tarha niche utar gaya to usne apni ankheen kol li to uske samne woh aurat AA gayi

Aurat : Tumne Panchbhut ko control kar liya, Surya ab se Tum agni Vayu prithvi jal aur aakas ki sakti ka istemal kar sakte ho

Surya : Kya Sach main me panchmahabhut ki sakti ka istemal kar Sakta ho

Aurat : haa Tum Sach main kar sakte ho

Surya : main Kon ho Kya ap yeh Bata sakti Hain

Aurat : Tum woh ho, jo tum banna chahte ho. Tum ab woh ho, jo har kisi ko bacha sakta hai. Ab tum wapis ja sakte ho
Per ek baat yaad rakna yeh saktiya Tum sirf tab istamal kar sakte ho jab koi khatre main ho ya bohut zarori ho tabhi warna in saktiyou ka istemal matt Karna

Surya : thek Hain Jase ao kahe danyawad


tabhi aurat ne ek ajeeb sa gola banaya, aur usne us gole ko zameen par phenka. Ek dam se, ek tez roshni nikli, jo surya ko apni dunya main wapis lee ayi

Jab surya ne dekha ke abhi toda toda andera Hain aur subhe hone ho ayi Hain to surya waha se sidhe Nikal gaya hotel ki taraf


~~~ aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~~


Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena agar koi galti hui Hain toh maaf karna

Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Tow SURYA ne apni Panchmahabhut Shakti hasil Karli Badhiya h
Ab dekhte h aage kia hota h badhiya shaandar lajawab update

 

[Achin_Saha18]

Update 19​

Woh roshni aakas se hote hue sidhe aakar Surya se takra gayi aur jaise hi us Roshni ne Surya ko chua, ek tez, chaka chaundh karne wala jhatka laga. Surya ki aankhoo ke samne sab kuch safed ho gaya, aur usne apne badan ko hawa main udta hua mehsoos kiya. Ek lamhe ke liye aisa laga jaise uska wajood hi khatam ho gaya ho, aur agle hi pal uski aankhoo ke saamne ek nayi, anjan duniya thi


Jab uski aankheen khuli, woh ek aisi jagah par tha jiske bare main usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha. Wahan na koi sheher tha, na koi jungle. Bas ek ajeeb si shanti thi, aur hawa main ajeeb si khushbo thi. Uske upar asman bhi nahi tha, bas ek neeli, chamakdar roshni thi. Surya ne apne haath uthaye aur usne dekha ki uske kapde aur badan bilkul saaf the, jaise woh kabhi lada hi na ho


Usne darte hue apne aas pass dekha. Tabhi, uske samne ek aurat aayi. Uski lambi, safed baal the, aur uski aankhoo main ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne ek bhi baat nahi ki, bas muskurate hue Surya ki taraf dekha


Aurat : Swagat hai Surya. Tumhara yahan par ( uski awaz aisi thi jaise woh hawa se bani ho, bilkul shant aur sundar )


Surya : (hairan hote hue) Ap... ap kaun hain Aur main yahan kaise aaya

Surya ne darte hue poocha. Uska chehra pareshani se bhara hua tha. Woh hamesha sab kuch control karta tha, par is jagah par usko sab kuch alag lag raha tha


Aurat : Main is jagah ki rakshak hoon. Aur tumhara yahan par barson se intezar kar rahi hoon I
usne ahista se kaha.


Surya : Mera...? Lekin kyun? Mera intezar kyun kar rahi hain ap?


Aurat : Is baat ka jawab tumhe sahi samay aane par mil jayega ( usne muskurate hue kaha ) Aur tumhara intezar yahan is liye ho raha hai taki tum apni shakti hasil kar sako


Surya : (pareshan hote hue) Meri shakti? Meri kaunsi shakti

Surya dimag main ek bhi baat nahi thi, jisse woh apni shakti ko pehchan sake


Aurat : Tumhe Apne sakti chakra hasil Karna hain jis main Panchbhut Hain Tumhe uski khud ki himmat aur takat se hasil Karne honge

Surya : (sochte hue) Thek hai. To... mujhe kahan jaana hoga?

Aurat ne apni aankheen band ki, aur uske saamne ek chamakdar, neeli roshni bani. Usne us roshni ko Surya ki taraf ishara kiya


Aurat : Yeh hai tumhara rasta. Is par chalo, aur tum apni shakti ko hasil kar sakoge Par yaad rakhna, is raste par tum akele ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur phir usne apne raste ki taraf dekha. Uske andar ajeeb si aag thi ek aag jo usko aage badhne ke liye keh rahi thi. Usne dar ko chora, aur woh us neeli roshni ki taraf aage badne laga.

Jab Surya ne dar ko chora, woh neeli roshni ki taraf aage badhne laga. Uske kadam jaise hi us roshni se bane raste par pade ek halki si awaz gonji, aur woh rasta uske peche se band hota gaya. Uske charon taraf anjan si shanti thi, na hawa, na awaz. Bas woh aur woh neeli roshni.
Chalte chalte, woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan zameen bilkul saaf nahi thi. Wahan, zameen ajeeb tarah se hill rahi thi, jaise woh sans le rahi ho. Uske samne ek bada, gehra jheel tha, jismain se neli roshni nikal rahi thi. Jhel ke kinare, pani bilkul saaf tha, par jaise hi woh aage badha, ek tez jhatka laga. Zameen uske neche se hilne lagi, aur uske samne ek bada, patthar ka dewar ban gaya


Surya ne us dewar ko dekha. Uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha, par usne us dar ko control kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki usne kitni mushkilon ka samna kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main yeh kar sakta hoon


Usne aage badhne ki koshish ki, par har baar jab woh ek kadam badhata, zameen hilne lagti aur ek naya dewar uske samne aa jata. Woh har dewar ko todne ki koshish karta, par har baar woh dewar wahi rehti. Uska saans rukne laga. Uske dimag main ek baat aayi

Surya ( sochta hue ) : Yeh physical taqat ka imtehaan nahi hai

Usne ek gehri saans li aur usne aankheen band ki Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne har mushkil ka saamna apne dimag se kiya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ke gusse ko control kiya tha. Usne ab apne dimag ko shant kiya, aur usne us zameen ko mehsos kiya


Jab usne apni aankheen kholi, usne apne ap ko ek aisi jagah par dekha jahan har taraf raste the. Har rasta usko us jheel ki taraf le ja raha tha. Par ek rasta alag tha, aur woh usko dusre raste se door le ja raha tha

Surya ne us raste ko dekha, aur usne bina soche samjhe us raste par chalna shuru kiya Jab woh aghe badha, zameen bilkul shant thi Usne dekha ki woh us jheel ki taraf ja raha tha, jahan se neeli roshni nikal rahi thi

Jab woh us jheel ke pass pahuncha wahan koi nahi tha. Bas woh aur woh neeli roshni thi Surya ne dekha ki jheel ke beech main ek chota sa teela tha, jaha ek chota sa diya jala hua tha. Usne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi aur jaise ki surya ne usko mehsos kiya to agle hi pal surya ek nayi jagha per tha

Prithvi ki Pariksha :-


Jab Surya ne us neeli roshni se bane raste par apna pehla kadam rakha wahan ka vatavaran hi badal gaya. Hawa main ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi itni gehri ki uski apni sanson ki awaz bhi gonj rahi thi Uske pairon ke neche ki zamen na mitti thi, na patthar, bas ek thandi, roshan satah thi. Surya aghe badhta gaya, aur uske peche se woh neeli roshni ka rasta dheere dheere gayab ho gaya, jaise uske aane se pehle wahan kuch tha hi nahi


Chalte chalte woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan har taraf ek ajeeb, nela kanch tha. Yeh aam kanch nahi tha. Har tukda hawa main tair raha tha, aur unki satah par Surya ki alag alag tasverein thi. Un tasveron se ek ajeeb, sunsan awaz aa rahi thi, jaise hawa gonj rahi ho

Awaz : Swagat hai, surya ... tumhari asal duniya main

Surya jatke se ruka Uska dil tez dhadakne laga. Usne darte hue ek kanch ke tukde ko dekha, aur usmain ek haivan ki parchhai thi. Us parchhai ne ek hansi di

Parchai : Tum kya kar rahe ho yahan, surya ? Tumne to bas khoon bahane jaana hai. Tumhari jagha yahan nahi, us tofan main hai jise tumne khud banaya hai

Surya ka chehra gusse se lal ho gaya. Usne ek muthe bech di

Surya : Main haivan nahi hoon!

Surya gusse se kaha


Parchai : Jhoot bolte ho, Surya. Tum wahi ho. Yaad karo, woh raat jab tumne un sabhi logon ko mara tha. Tumhe unki chekhain sunai nahi di? Ya tumne bas unhain marne main maza liya?


Uske aage ek aur kanch ka tukda aya, jismain uski maa ki aankhoo main dar tha. Unki aankhoo se ansu beh rahe the, par woh uski taraf nahi dekh rahi thi. Unki parchai ne apne haath uthaye, aur use door hat gayi Maa ki awaz sunai de rahi hai?

Perchai : Surya... Surya, mat jao... Maa
ne tumse kaha Lekin tumne unki baat nahi suni. Tum bas waha se Nikal gaye


Surya ki aankhoo main ansu aa gaye. Usne apni aankhoo ko band kiya aur usne us dar ko mehsos kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise uski maa ne usko gale lagaya Karti thi. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise uske dada ji ne usko uske ghar bulaya tha. Usne apne dar ko ek taraf kiya, aur usne us awaz ko suni jo uske andar se aayi thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Yeh bas tumhare dar ka aina hai


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne ek ajeeb si shanti mehsos ki. Usne us kanch ke tukde ko dekha, aur usne usko chua. Kanch ka tukda toot gaya

Parchhai : Tum galat ho Surya. Tum haar gaye ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya aage badna shuru kiya. Ab har taraf uske dar ka aina tha. Uske samne ek aur kanch ka tukda aya, jismain woh ladki thi. Uski aankhoo main dar aur gamand tha

Ladki : Tum ne sakti chakra ko Nahin balke apni taqat ko chua Tum koi aam insan Nahin bohut kass ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main bas apne ap ko dund raha hoon Apne dar ko nahi


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne us dar ko control kiya. Usne apne andar ki shakti ko mehsos kiya, jise Shakti chakra ke naam se jaana tha. Usne us shakti ko mehsos kiya, aur usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main darunga nahi Main har musibat ka samna karunga Main apne dar ko harauga


Jab usne apni aankhoo ko khola uske saamne ab koi kanch ka tukda nahi tha. Wahan ek ajeeb, neeli roshni thi. Usne us roshni ko dekha, aur usne apne ap ko us roshni main chod diya

Jab woh roshni se bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi

Aurat : Tumne pehli pariksha pass kar li, Surya Tumne apne dar ko hara diya. Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho

Surya : Yeh pehli pariksha thi?

Aurat : Haan Yeh Prithvi ki pariksha thi. Prithvi humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhati hai, par agar hum apne dar ke aage jhuk jaate hain, to woh humain nahi dikhati Tumne apne dar ko hara diya aur is liye tumne Prithvi ka imtehaan pass kar liya


Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga.

Dusri Pariksha :-

Jaal ki Pariksha :-


Jab Surya ne pehli pariksha pass ki, uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne aage badne ka socha, aur tabhi uske samne ka rasta bilkul badal gaya. Woh neeli roshni ab usko ek gehri, andheri gufa main le ja rahi thi. Hawa main ab thandak aur nami thi, aur har taraf se pani ki boondon ki awaz aa rahi thi, jaise woh kuch kehna chahti hon


Surya chalte chalte ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan ek bada, gehra jheel tha. Is jheel ka pani bilkul kala tha itna gehra ki uski satah par usko apna chehra bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha. Jheel se ek ajeeb si thandi hawa chal rahi thi, jo uske andar ek anjan dar paida kar rahi thi. Uski sansein thodi rukne lagi, aur uske dimag main ek ajeeb sa sawal aaya

Dimag : Kya yeh safar sahi hai? Kya main sach main ek insan ban sakta hoon?


Tabhi, uske dimag main ek awaz aayi. Woh uski apni awaz thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Tumne apne ap ko mara hai. Tumne sabko chora

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne ap ko ek insan banaya tha Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ki aag ko control kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha,

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya aage badna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aghe badhaya, pani hilne laga. Pani ke andar se chehre nikalne lage. Un chehron main kuch aise log the, jinhain usne haivan ke roop main mara tha. Unke chehre par gussa aur gamand tha, aur unki aankhoo main ek ajeeb sa dard tha

Chehre : Tumne humain mara Surya. Tumne hamare gharon ko tabah kiya. Tumne humain mara, par hum ab bhi yahan hain. Tumhe aghe badhne nahi denge

Surya ne un chehron ko dekha, aur uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha. Woh dar un chehron ka nahi, balke apni khud ki galti ka tha. Usne us dar ko control kiya, aur usne aage badhne ki koshish ki Par har baar, pani usko peche dhakelta raha


Surya ne socha : Agar main inko hara sakta hoon, to main is pani ko bhi hara sakta hoon


Usne apne haath uthaye, aur us Pani ho Apne samne se hatane ki Koshish ki Lekin agle hi pal Pani ne surya ko ek jatka diya aur surya Piche ki taraf gir gaya


Chehre : Tum hamari aatma ko nahi jala sakte, Surya. Tumne jo kiya, woh galat tha


Surya ne unki taraf dekha, aur usne harr maan li Usne apne hathon ko neche kiya, aur usne apne dar ko mehsos kiya. Uske dimag main ek awaz aayi

Awaz : Tumne harr maan li, Surya

Surya : Main kaise jeet sakta hoon? Main ne bohut logon ko dukh diya hai


Awaz : (ek ajeeb si awaz main) Tumne sahi kaha Surya Tumne logon ko dukh diya hai, par tum usko thek bhi kar sakte ho. Tumhe apne andar ke gusse ko control karna hoga

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main kaise?


Awaz : Tumhe apne andar ke gamand ko control karna hoga. Tumhe apne ap ko maaf karna hoga


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne us pani ko dekha. Usne apne haath uthaye aur usne ek gehra sans liya Usne us pani ko chua, aur pani usko andar khinchne laga. Ek pal ke liye usko aisa laga jaise woh doob raha hai, par phir usne apne ap ko pani main chod diya


Jab woh dooba, woh ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan har taraf roshni thi. Usne dekha ki uske samne ek bada gola tha, jo usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Usne us ghole ko dekha, aur usne usko apne andar le liya. Jab woh us ghole ko andar le gaya, usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo dard tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha. Usne apne ap ko wapis pani main uthaya, aur usne dekha ki pani bilkul saaf tha. Woh saaf pani ab usko ek nayi jagah par le ja raha tha


Jab woh bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskaan thi

Aurat : Tumne dusri pariksha pass kar
Surya Tumne apne gamand ko hara diya. Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Yeh dusri pariksha thi?


Aurat : Haan. Yeh Jal ki pariksha thi. Jal humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke gamand ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne gamand ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Jal ka imtehaan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badhne laga

Teesri Pariksha :-

Agni Pariksha :-



Jab Surya ne Jal ki pariksha ko pass kiya, uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Usne apne ap ko dekha, aur usko laga jaise woh ek naya insan ho. Tabhi, uske samne ka rasta bilkul badal gaya. Woh neeli roshni ab usko ek aisi jagah par le ja rahi thi, jahan har taraf aag thi. Hawa main ab tandak nahi, balke ek ajeeb si garmi thi, jo uski sanson ko rok rahi thi.
Surya chalte chalte ek aisi jagah par pahuncha, jahan har taraf laal, peeli aur neeli aag ki laptein thi. Zameen bilkul garam thi, itni garam ki uske pair jalne lage. Uske upar asman nahi, balke aag ke badal the, jo har pal garaj rahe the. Uske aage, usko ek ajeeb sa chehra nazar aaya. Woh chehra ek haivan ka tha, par woh aag se bana tha, aur uski aankhoo main gussa tha


Haivan : Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, Surya? Tum bas ek aam insaan ho. Tumhari taqat is aag ke aage kuch nahi

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha, Main ek haivan Nahin balke surya ho


Haivan : Jhoot bolte ho, Surya. Tum wahi ho. Tumne apne andar ke gusse ko nahi chora. Tumne apne andar ke gusse ko nahi roka

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne socha

Surya : Kya yeh Haivan ka astitva hai? Kya yeh meri asliyat hai?


Haivan : Haan, yeh tumhari asliyat hai. Tum sirf ek khooni ho. Tumne un sabhi logon ko mara, aur tumne unko marte hue maza liya

Surya ne apni aankhoo ko band kiya, aur usne us awaz ko suni. Usne apne andar ke gusse ko mehsos kiya, aur usko laga jaise woh bilkul aag se bhara hua ho. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne har mushkil ka saamna apne gusse se kiya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne dushmanon ko mara tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon

Tabhi, uske dimag main ek aur awaz aayi. Woh uski maa ki awaaz thi

Maa : Beta, gussa mat karo. Gussa sirf tabahi laata hai

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko khola Usne Haivan ki taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon

Usne aage badhna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aage badhaya, Haivan ne us par hamla kiya. Haivan ne ek tez aag ka gola banaya, jisse woh Surya par phenka


"Dhaam!"



ki awaz ke saath, Surya ne usko roka, par woh usko nahi rok paya. Uske haath jalne lage, aur woh zameen par gir gaya


Haivan : Tum harr gaye ho, Surya. Tum aam insaan ho


Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,


Surya : Main aam nahi hoon. Main woh hoon, jo apne andar ki aag ko control kar sakta hai

Usne apne haath uthaye, aur usne haivan ki taraf dekha. Usne apne andar ki aag ko mehsoos kiya, aur usne us aag ko control kiya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main gussa nahi karunga


Jab usne apni aankhoo ko khola haivan gayab ho gaya, aur uske samne ek aag ka samundar tha. Is samundar main ek ajeeb si roshni chamak rahi thi. Surya ne socha ki yeh wahi roshni hai, jo usko us anjan duniya main le gayi thi. Usne us roshni ko dekha, aur usne aage badhne ka socha.
Jab woh us samundar ke pass pahuncha, wahan koi nahi tha. Bas woh aur woh roshni thi. Surya ne dekha ki roshni ke andar ek chota sa diya jala hua tha. Usne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi.
Surya ne us diye ko uthaya, aur usne mehsos kiya ki uske andar ek ajeeb si taqat thi. Usne apne andar ki aag ko control kiya, aur usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Usne aage badhna shuru kiya, par jaise hi usne apna kadam aage badhaya, uske saamne ek ajeeb si roshni aayi. Woh roshni uske andar ghus gayi, aur usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo gussa tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha

Ab usko ek nayi jagah par jaana tha


Jab Surya ne Agni ko shant kiya, uske charon taraf ka mausam ekdum se badal gaya. Woh jalte hue maidan aur aag ki laptein pal bhar main gayab ho gayi. Uski jagah ek aisi jagah thi jahan har taraf ek gehri shanti thi, par hawa bilkul bhi shaant nahi thi. Ek ajeeb, anokhi hawa har pal chal rahi thi, aur uski awaz gonj rahi thi, jaise woh kuch kehna chahti ho


Tabhi, uske samne wohi aurat aayi iske lambe safed baal aur shaant aankheen thi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi.


Aurat : Tumne Agni ko hara diya, Surya Tumne apne gusse aur apni tabahi ko control kar liya. Tumne Apni aag ko shant kar diya

Surya (saans lete hue) : Yeh aag... woh meri taqat thi. Main ne use control kar liya


Aurat: Wahi, Surya. Lekin tumhari asli pariksha ab shuru hogi. Ab tumhe Vayu ki pariksha ko pass karna hoga

Surya : (hairan hote hue) : Vayu... hawa?


Aurat : Vayu azadi hai, Surya. Woh har jagah hai par kahin nahi. Woh sab kuch hai, par kuch nahi. Agar tumne Vayu ki pariksha ko pass nahi kiya, toh tum kabhi apni taqat ko control nahi kar paoge

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main taiyar hoon


Aurat : Jao, aur apne ap ko dhondho

Woh aurat gayab ho gayi, aur Surya aage badhne laga


chuthi Pariksha :-

Vayu ki Pariksha :-


Jaise hi Surya aage badha, hawa ki tezi badhne lagi. Shuru main, hawa bilkul aam thi, par jaise hi woh aage badha, hawa itni tez ho gayi ki uske kapde udne lage. Uske baal hawa main uddne lage, aur usko laga jaise woh hawa main udd raha ho


Uske samne koi dewar nahi thi, na koi aag, na koi pani. Bas hawa thi. Ek ajeeb, tezi se chalne wali hawa. Yeh hawa usko rok rahi thi. Woh har kadam par use peche dhakel rahi thi. Surya ne apne haathon ko zameen par rakha aur woh aage badhne laga

Uske dimag main ek awaz aayi

Dimag : Tum kahan ja rahe ho, Surya? Tum kyun lad rahe ho? Tum kya ho? Ek insan? Ya ek haivaan?


Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne apne dimag main ek baat ko socha

Surya : Main Surya hoon

Hawa ki tezi badhne lagi

" Shoooo"

ki awaz ke saath, hawa ne ek bada tofan bana diya. Us tofan ne Surya ko hawa main uthaya aur usko ghumane laga. Pzzzzz ki awaz ke saath, usne ek tez bijli ka gola banaya, aur usko Surya par phenka. Surya ne usko roka, par woh usko rok nahi paya

Surya (gusse se) : Tum kaun ho?

Awaz : Main woh hoon, jo tum ho. Tum ek haivan ho Tumne apne ap ko mara. Tumne sabko chora


Surya : Jhoot bolte ho


Awaz : Agar main jhoot bolta hoon, to tumhari taqat kyun nahi hai? Tum kyun hawa main ud rahe ho? Tum kyun apna astitva kho rahe ho?


Surya ne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne dekha ki uske haath aur paon bilkul alag ho gaye hain. Woh hawa main udd raha tha, aur usko laga jaise woh bilkul halka ho gaya ho. Usne apne dimag main ek baat ko socha

Surya (sochte hue ) : Main nahi hawa hoon. Main Surya hoon

Usne apne ap ko wapis zameen par uthaya, aur usne us tofan ko dekha. Usne apne haath uthaye, aur usne us tofan ko apne andar le liya

Jab woh us tofan ko andar le gaya, usko aisa laga jaise woh bilkul shant ho gaya ho. Uske andar jo dard tha, woh bilkul khatam ho gaya tha. Usne apne ap ko wapis zameen par uthaya, aur usne dekha ki hawa bilkul shant thi. Woh shant hawa ab usko ek nayi jagah par le ja rahi thi

Jab woh bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi. Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi


Aurat : Tumne chauthi pariksha pass kar li, Surya Tumne apne ap ko dund liya Ab tum agle pariksha ke liye taiyar ho


Surya : Yeh chauthi pariksha thi?


Aurat : Haan Yeh Vayu ki pariksha thi. Vayu humain hamesha sahi raasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke shor ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne andar ke shor ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Vayu ka imtehaan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha,

Surya : Main aage badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga


Jab Surya ne Vayu ki pariksha ko pass kiya, uske charon taraf ka mahaul ekdum se badal gaya. Woh tezi se chalti hawa aur uski awaz pal bhar main gayab ho gayi. Uski jagah ek aisi jagah thi jahan bilkul khamoshi thi Na zameen thi, na asman, na koi rang. Bas ek gehri, anant shanti thi. Surya ek anjane, safed ghole main tair raha tha. Uske pass na hawa thi, na aag, na pani, na hi dharti. Bas woh aur woh gehri shanti thi

Surya ne socha ki woh kahan hai. Uske andar ek ajeeb sa dar tha, par woh us dar ko control nahi kar paya. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main kahan hoon? Kya main mar gaya hoon?

Tabhi uske andar ek ajeeb si awaz aayi. Woh uski apni awaz thi

Awaz : Tum galat ho, Surya. Tum mare nahi ho. Tum bas wahan ho, jahan sab kuch shuru hota hai. Aur sab kuch khatam hota hai

Surya ne us awaz ko sunkar, apni aankhoo ko band kiya. Usne apne andar ki aag ko mehsos kiya, aur usne usko control kiya. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne ap ko ek insan banaya tha. Usne yaad kiya ki kaise usne apne andar ki shanti ko control kiya tha. Usne apne ap se kaha

Surya : Main galat nahi hoon


Usne apni aankhoo ko khola, aur usne dekha ki uske samne ek chamakta hua gola tha. Woh gola usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Surya ne usko dekha, aur usne socha

Surya ( sochte hue ) agar main us gole ko chuye, to kya hoga? Kya main mar jaoga? Ya main apne ap ko kho dunga?

Surya ( sochte hue ) : Agar main is gole ko nahi choga, to main kaise aage badhunga?

Usne apne hathon ko aage badhaya, aur usne us ghole ko chua. Ek dam se, uske andar ek tez current doud gaya, aur uski ankhon ke samne sab kuch neela ho gaya. Uske andar ek ajeeb si shanti thi, aur usko aisa laga jaise woh hawa main udd raha ho. Usne apne andar ek ajeeb si taqat mehsos ki, ek aisi taqat jo usko sab kuch karne ke liye keh rahi thi. Usne apne andar Shakti chakra ki shakti ko mehsos kiya


Jab woh roshni se bahar nikla, woh bilkul thek tha. Uske samne woh aurat aayi Usne Surya ki taraf dekha aur uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskan thi

Aurat : Tumne akhri pariksha pass kar li
Surya Tumne Akash ki Pariksha pass kardi Hain Ab tum apni shakti Chakra hasil kar sakte ho

Surya : Yeh akhri pariksha thi?

Aurat : Haan Yeh Akash ki pariksha thi. Akash humain hamesha sahi rasta dikhata hai, par agar hum apne andar ke shor ko control nahi kar pate, to woh humain nahi dikhata. Tumne apne andar ke shor ko hara diya, aur isliye tumne Akash ka imtehan pass kar liya

Surya ne uski taraf dekha, aur usne kaha

Surya : Main aghe badhna chahta hoon

Aurat : Tum aage badh sakte ho

Usne ek pal bhi nahi gawaya aur woh aage badne laga


Jab Surya aage badha, uske samne ek ajeeb sa manzar tha. Ek tarah se woh ek samundar tha, par us samundar mein pani nahi, balke roshni thi. Har taraf roshni hi roshni thi. Uske samne ek bada gola tha, jo usko apni taraf khinch raha tha. Usne socha ki yeh wahi gola hai, jise usne pehle dekha tha.

Surya ( sochte hue ) : to yeh Hain woh sakti jisko hasil Karne ke liye main Yaha aya ho

Yeh soch kar woh Bina soche samje aghe badne Laga aur surya ne us sakti ho Apne right hand se chua aur aisa Karke hi us pure jagha per Roshani hi Roshani pel gayi aur surya us Roshni ke bech Hawa per udd kar Apne dono haath peela diya aur apni ankheen band kar li aur surya ke sarir se Roshani Nikal Rahi Thi Kuch der bad woh deere Deere niche utarne Laga aur jab woh puri tarha niche utar gaya to usne apni ankheen kol li to uske samne woh aurat AA gayi

Aurat : Tumne Panchbhut ko control kar liya, Surya ab se Tum agni Vayu prithvi jal aur aakas ki sakti ka istemal kar sakte ho

Surya : Kya Sach main me panchmahabhut ki sakti ka istemal kar Sakta ho

Aurat : haa Tum Sach main kar sakte ho

Surya : main Kon ho Kya ap yeh Bata sakti Hain

Aurat : Tum woh ho, jo tum banna chahte ho. Tum ab woh ho, jo har kisi ko bacha sakta hai. Ab tum wapis ja sakte ho
Per ek baat yaad rakna yeh saktiya Tum sirf tab istamal kar sakte ho jab koi khatre main ho ya bohut zarori ho tabhi warna in saktiyou ka istemal matt Karna

Surya : thek Hain Jase ao kahe danyawad


tabhi aurat ne ek ajeeb sa gola banaya, aur usne us gole ko zameen par phenka. Ek dam se, ek tez roshni nikli, jo surya ko apni dunya main wapis lee ayi

Jab surya ne dekha ke abhi toda toda andera Hain aur subhe hone ho ayi Hain to surya waha se sidhe Nikal gaya hotel ki taraf


~~~ aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~~


Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena agar koi galti hui Hain toh maaf karna

Nice update

 

[Xabhi123]

Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Tow SURYA ne apni Panchmahabhut Shakti hasil Karli Badhiya h
Ab dekhte h aage kia hota h badhiya shaandar lajawab update

Thank you

 

[Xabhi123]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[User invalid]

Fa

Update 2

Ab aghe hero ki zubani

Jab Maine maa ko jate hue dekha toh bohut duk hua mujhe magar main rone ke ilawa Kuch kar Nahin paa Raha tha kyunke nana ji ne wada Kiya tha ke agar main maa ko chod kar Chala Jao toh woh maa ko bacha lenge ishi waja se mere naa chahte hue bi maa ko chod kar Jana pad Raha hain kher main Kuch der wahi kadha raha phir waha se Chala gaya railway station ki taraf jaha bohut Ziyada bid Thi aur waha per ek train kadi thi aur main bi chal kar us train main Chad gaya aur ek side main beth gaya Kuch der main train chal padhi aur Kuch der bad Tickets check Karne ke liye jab tc aya magar main wahi per sone la natak Karne Laga kyunke bale hi Meri age CHOTI Thi magar galti se bi agar TC yeh poch leta toh main Kya Bolta ke main Kiske Saath aya ho ishi liye maine sone ka natak Kiya Lekin Kuch der bad mujhe Sach much ki neend AA gayi aur much pata hi Nahin Chala ke main kab Soo gaya ho aur Meri neend sidhe subhe kuli jab dekha toh train ek station per kadhi Thi toh main train se niche utar kar idhar udhar dekha lwkin Kuch Samaj Nahin ayi ke konsi jagha Hain toh Maine waha Kisi se pocha toh pata Chala ke yeh Mumbai Hain tohain station se Bahar AA gaya aur idhar udhar dekha toh Kuch Samaj Nahin aya ke Kya karo toh main chal padha Bahar ki taraf Kuch der chalne ke bad Maine ek dabha dekha kaha per log nishta kar Rahe the usko dekar mujhe bo bohut bok lag gayi aur main bi ushi taraf chal padha

Lekin problem yeh Thi ke mere pass paise Nahin the toh main wahi per chup kar beth gaya aur jaise hi us dabhe ke Malik ki Nazar dusri taraf gayi toh Maine jaldi se waha per rakhe parathe utha Liye aur wahi per chup kar beth gaya dekha toh 2 parathe mere haath lag gaye the aur main jaldi se beth kar wahi per khane laga ek paratha pura kha gaya aur dusra abhi adha hi gaya tha ke dabhe ke Malik ne mujhe pakad Liya aur mujhe Marne Laga

Malik : oyee Teri himmat kesi hui chori Karne ki

Main : bok lagi Thi aur kalse Kuch Nahin kaya Hain

Malik : acha Lekin main Kya karo agar tujhe book lagi Hain toh

Aur yeh kehkar woh Malik mujhe phir se Marne Laga Lekin tabhi waha per ek admi adhe aya aur us Malik ko pakad kar Piche dakel diya aur mujhe Apne Saath laga Liya

Admi : are yeh Kya kar Rahe ho koi aisa bi karta Hain Bache ke Saath

Malik : acha phir Tum hi batao kese karte Hain ek toh chori uper se seena zori

Admi : are Mera Matlab hai. Ke yeh bacha Hain bhok ladies Hogi becare ko

Malik : acha aur Mera Jo nukshan hua Hain uska Kya kon dega woh

Admi : Me de Dunga bolo kitna paise Hain

Malik paise batata Hain aur admi paise de deta Hain phir woh admi mujko Apne Saath lekar Chala jata Hain aur rishte main mujse Bolta hain

Admi : beta Naam Kya hai. Tumhara

Main : uncle Mera Naam "SURYA" Hain

Admi : acha tumhare maa bap kaha Hain

Main : main anath ho

Admi : oooo chalo koi baat nahin aj se Tum Mera Saath rahoge thek Hain Mera bete ban kar

Main : thek Hain uncle

Admi : uncle Nahin aj se Tum mujhe papa bologe thek Hain

Main : thek Hain papa

Admi : Tum school jate ho Kya

Main : haan uncle main 1st class tak padha ho

Admi : chalo koi baat nahin ab Tum mere bete ho toh aj se mere Saath rahoge aur mere bacho ke Saath school jaoge thek Hain

main : thek Hain papa

Admi : good chalo ab

Phir hum ishi tarha baate karte hue uske Ghar AA gaye

Short intro

Sanjay Agarwal (33)
Yeh ek bank employee Hain

Santi Agarwal (30)
Yeh ek housewife hain inke 2 bete aur ek beti Hain

1st beta Vikram 9
Yeh school main 2nd class main Hain

2nd beti mehar 8
1s class main Hain

3rd beta Manav 6
Isne abhi school join Nahin Kiya hain

Jaise hi main aur woh admi Ghar main enter karte Hain toh samne se ek aunty ki Nazar hum per padti Hain toh woh foran humari taraf AA jati Hain aur bolti Hain

Aurat : are Sanjay ap wapis kyun aa gaye Kuch chahiye Kya

Sanja : are Nahin Kuch Nahin santi main isko (Meri taraf ishara karte hue ) Ghar tak chodne aya tha

Santi : Kon Hain yeh pyara bacha

Phir Sanjay usko sab Kuch Bata deta Hain jisko sunkar Santi Ko duk hota Hain aur mujhe gale Laga kar kehti Hain

Santi : beta aj se Tum mujhe maa kehna

Main : thek Hain maa

Santi : chalo Tumhe bhok lagi Hogi Chalo nishta karo

Sanjay : acha Santi Suno main jaa Raha ho Bache sab kaha Hain

Santi : Vikram aur mehar school gaye Hain aur manav Bahar gaya Hain kelne

Sanjay : thek Hain main jaata ho bye apna aur surya ka kayal rakna thek Hain

Santi : thek Hain jee ap bi apna kayal rakna bye


Next update main leap ayega aur ho Sakta kuch aur bi ho thank you



~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~

Agar koi galti ho gayi Hain toh sorry Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena







​

Fabulous

 

[Sunli]

Weating for next apdet Bhai

 

[Xabhi123]

Bhai log update aj Raat ko AA jayega agar Nahin aya to Kal 12 pm se pahle AA jayega okay