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hospital main ek mahila
Bad per padi Thi Jo shayad Soo Rahi Thi us mahila ke bagal main ek 8 Saal ka bacha bi tha Jo roo Raha tha apni maa ki yeh halat dekar rote rote woh bacha bi apni maa ke bagal main wahi sir rakar Soo gaya
Kuch der main waha per ek admi aya aur jaise hi darwaze ki aahat hui woh mahila jaag gayi aur us admi ko dekar gusse se boli
Mahila : tumhari himmat kesi hui Yaha aane ki
Admi : kyun Kya main Yaha Nahin AA Sakta
Mahila : dafa ho Jao yaha se
Admi : main Apne bete ko Lene aya ho
Mahila : yeh tumhara beta Nahin Hain samje Mera beta Hain sirf aur sirf Mera beta
Admi : Kya kar logi Tum uska kyunke tun khud ab Kuch din ki mehman ho phir
Mahila : woh Jo bi Hain Mera apna masla Hain Tum dafa ho Jao yaha se
Admi : thek hain jaa Raha ho waise bi Kuch din bad jab Tum mar jaogi tab to sirf main hi iska Sahara banoga na aur koi to Hain Nahin iska
Mahila : kyun Nahin Hain iska apna itna Bada parivar Hain iska apna nana nani mama Mami Musi bohut log Hain iske Apne
Admi : hahahaha yeh baat Tum bi ache se janti ho ke tumhare parivar ka har ke sadasya is se nafrat karta Hain aur kyun karta Hain yeh Tum ache se janti ho
Mahila : haa janti ho kyunke Maine Apne pita ki baat ko taal kar tuj kese dhoke baaj se shadi ki Thi aur ab iski saza mujhe mil rahi Hain
Admi : kher yeh baat chodo main Kisi meeting main jaa Raha ko Socha tumse milta chalo kyunke Kuch time bad toh Tum Marne wali ho ishi liye Socha milta chalo much madad chahiye ho toh bol Dena
Mahila : tumhari madad Lene se acha Hain ke main mar Jana Pasand karogi samje ab dafa ho jao
Admi : acha Suno toh
Abhi admi itna hi bola tha ke us mahila ne ek batan press kar diya
"Bipppp"
Ki awaz ke Saath do nurses Ander AA gayi aur boli
Nurse 1 : jee mam boliya Kuch Chahiye apko
Mahila : is admi ko dafa karo Yaha se aur aj ke bad usko yaha per aane mat Dena
Nurse 1 : okay mam (palat kar ) chaliye sir ap Bahar Jao please
Admi : are Suno toh Meri baat
Nurse 2 : please sir ap bahar Jao Nahin humko guards ko bulana padega
Admi : okay okay main jaa Raha ho ( mahila se ) bye sweetheart phir mileage
Mahila : woh din ab kabhi Nahin ayega samje
Phir admi waha se Chala jata Hain aur mahila phir se let jati Hain Lekin woh is baat se anjaan Thi ke us Bache ne sari baate sun li Hain
Kher Kuch der bad ek doctor AA jate Hain aur us mahila se bolte Hain
Doctor : hello juhi madam kesi Hain ap
Us mahila ka Naam juhi hain
Juhi : main thek ho doctor
Doctor : Dekho juhi ek waqt aisa tha jab Tumne Meri madad ki Thi ishi liye main Tumhe ek acha advise deta ho tumko ab apna aghe ka ilaj ab USA main Karna Chahiye kyunke agar ab aur der hi gayi toh shayad ao bach Nahin Paigi
Juhi : apki baat thek Hain doctor main Koshish Karti ho agar Kuch ho sakhe toh
Doctor : yahi better Hoga ap ke Liye
Phir doctor waha se Chala jata Hain aur juhi wahi per beth kar soch ne lag jati Hain ke kese jab uske bap ne uske liye ek ladka dunda tha uski shadi ke Liye Lekin juhi ne shadi wale din Apne boyfriend ke Saath baag gayi Thi kareeb 7 Saal ho gaye inki shadi ke aur in 7 saalo main uske apni mehnat se ek business Shuru Kiya tha aur woh safal bi ho gaya tha Lekin uske husband ne usko dhoka dekar uska Sara business Apne Naam per kar diya aur juhi ko devorce de diya us sadme ko juhi bardashat Nahin kar pai aur behosh ho Gai jab aur jab usko hospital main admit Kiya toh juhi ke Kuch aur bi tests kiye gae us main juhi ko pata Chala ke usko cancel Hain ab uske pass paise bi Nahin the kher Kuch le Dee ke jaise bi ho usne apna ilaz jari rakha
Lekin ab juhi ke pass bi paise khatam hone wale the usko Kuch Samaj Nahin AA Rahi Thi ke woh Kya kare
Juhi Apne hi socho main ghum Thi ke uska beta jaag gaya aur apni maa se bola
Beta : mamma mujhe Pani Pina Hain
Lekin juhi apne hi socho main ghum Thi usko Kuch sunai hi Nahin de Raha tha
Toh uska beta usko hilata Hain aur Bolta hain
Beta : mumma mujhe Pani Pina Hain
Juhi : ( hosh main aate hue ) haa haa beta Kya hua
Beta : mujhe Pani Pina Hain
Juhi : botal main khatam ho gaya Hain Tum Jao Bahar se Pani pikar Aao thek Hain
Beta : okay mamma
Aur jaane lagta hain tab juhi phir se usko awaz deti Hain
Juhi : beta idhar Aao
Beta jee mumma
Juhi : beta yeh lo Kuch paise aur Kuch khane le lee kar aana
Aur woh Chala jata Hain Pani pi kar aur Kuch khane ka lekar jab beta aata Hain toh dekha Hain ke uski maa Kisi se phone per baat kar Rahi Hain
Toh beta wahi khada ho jata Hain
Juhi : Nahin papa main aisa Nahin kar sakti
Juhi"father : ***********
Juhi : main Apne bete ke baghir mar jaogi papa please aisa naa boliye
Juhi"father : *************
Juhi : thek Hain papa main Marna Pasand karogi Lekin
Apne bete ko Nahin chodo gi main bye
Phir juhi call cut kar deti Hain
Aur aur jaise hi sir rakti Hain waise hi uska beta Ander AA jata Hain
Juhi : are beta AA gaye Tum
Beta : jee mumma aur yeh Dekho khana bi lekar AA gaya
Juhi : very good phir chalo Aao Yaha per beth kar khana kha lo
Beta : jee mumma
Phir dono maa beta khana khate Hain aur Kuch der pyari Pyari baate karte Hain aur dono Soo Jate Hain jaise hi juhi Soo jati Hain thek waise hi uska beta wapis uth kar apni maa ka phone le leta Hain aur lock open Karne Apne nana ji yani juhi ke papa ko call karta Hain Kuch der bad samne se phone utha leta Hain
Juhi'father : haa bolo phir call kyun ki
Juhi'beta : nana jee main *** bol Raha ho juhi mumma ka beta
Juhi'father : bolo kyun call ki
Juhi'beta : please ap mumma ko bacha lo woh bohut bimar Hain
Juhi'father : thek Hain bacha longa Lekin uske liye Tujhe apni mumma se hamesha hamesha ke Liye chod kar Jana Hoga
Juhi'beta : thek main nana ji main taiyar ho Lekin ap wada kijiye ke ap mumma ko thek kar denge
Juhi'father : wada karta ho main tumhari mumma ko bilkul thek kardoga Lekin Tumhe uske liye hamesha hamesha ke Liye Meri beti aur humari Zindagi se chale Jana Hoga
Juhi'beta : okay nana ji main taiyar ho ap abhi AA Jao mumma ko Lene main jaa Raha ho
Aur call cut kar Dena Hain phir wou ek latter lik kar apni maa ke bagal main rak deta Hain aur chupchap waha se Nikal jata Hain
Kareeb 3 baje jab juhi ki neend kul jati Hain toh woh Apne bete ko naa paa kar gabra jati Hain aur uski idhar udhar dundne lag jati Hain aur Jan juhi ki Nazar us latter per padti Hain toh usko utha leti Hain aur padne lag jati Hain
" In latter "
I'm sorry mumma main apko last bar bye bi Nahin bol paya lekin Meri mujbori Thi kyunke nana ji ne mujse promise Kiya hain ke agar main apki Zindagi se Chala Jao toh woh apko thek kar denge ishi liye main jaa Raha ho aur mujhe dundne ki Koshish mat karna bye
Apka beta *****
Jab juhi yeh latter padti Hain toh usko aisa lagta hain ke Kisi ne uski aatma ki uski jaan se Nikal di ho aur woh latter uske haatho se chut jata Hain aur uske ansoo tapak ne lag jata Hain aur woh turant Bahar ki taraf bag jati Hain yeh soch kar ke Kya pata abhi bi uska beta Kahi Bahar ho jaise hi woh Apne room se Bahar Nikal ti Hain thek waise hi waha per juhi ke father AA jate Hain aur woh usko sambal te hain lekin juhi lagatar rooye jaa Rahi Thi aur Apne bete ja Naam pukar Rahi Thi lekin juhi ke father usko zabardasti Apne Saath Lekin kar chale jate Hain aur yeh seen juhi ka beta Kuch Dori per chup kar dek Raha tha aur woh bi rone lag jata Hain
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Kareeb 30 minute dundne ke bad mujhe waha per ek darwaza Mila Jo bilkul is gufa main Jo Matti Thi us jaise dekne se pata ho Nahin chalta me yeh matti Hain ya darwaza
Khair maine us darwaze ko kol kar jaise hi ander inter hua toh dar ke mare tar tar kampne Laga aur mere mate se pasinaa aane Laga
Ab aghe !
Kyunke jaha main kada tha waha se Kuch duri per bohut sare snakethe Snake itne ziyada the ke ginna mumkin hi Nahin tha
Snake bohut katarnak lag Rahe the unke kule hue moo ko dek kar jism main khud ba khud kamp sa gaya
Ek pal ke Liye mere dimag main aya ke main wapis Chala Jao Yaha se aur main jaisa hi mudda toh mujhe ek ajeeb ehsas sa hone laga mujhe aisa lag Raha tha ke Mano Yaha koi Hain Jo mujhe pukar Raha Hain aur achanak pata nahin mujhe Kya hua aur mujhe Kya sujhi ke main wapis Piche ghum gaya aur dekne Laga ke aghe Kaise jaya jaa Sakta Hain jab Maine deyan se dekha toh waha per snake ke pass ek Bada ka pathar pada tha aur thek snake ke bich main uper se niche ek rassi latak Rahi Thi aur use aghe ek chota sa pillar bana hua tha in sabko dekar mere chahre per ek muskan AA gayi aur main bag kar us taraf gaya jaha snake tha aur waha per ek Bada sa pathar pada tha us per pair rak kar ek log jump Laga Liya aur jaise hi main niche aane Laga tab mera haath us rassi tak ponch gaya aur Maine usko pakad kar julte hue aghe gaya aur us chote se piller per ek pair rak kar aghe jump Laga Liye aur maim safely niche land ho gaya yeh dekar main bohut khush ho gaya aur main aghe bad gaya
Jaise jaise main aghe bad Raha tha waise waise mujhe dar lag Raha tha ke ab aghe Kya Hoga Kuch pata nahin tha mujhe
Jaise hi main aghe aya toh dekha waha per bohut Sara gold pada hua tha
Jisko dekar ek bar toh mere man me bi lalach AA gaya ke yeh sab Kuch main Apne Saath le Jao Lekin pata nahin mujhe aisa Kya aur ke main itne sare gold ko bi ignore Karke aghe bad gaya
Toh main ab aghe Chala gaya aur jaha per gold pada tha use jagha se aghe Chala gaya aur eb main ek Haal main AA gaya Maine aas pass dekha toh yeh jagha bilkul Khali tha ass pass dekha toh Jab Maine Lekin Kuch Nazar Nahin aaya toh achanak Meri Nazar uper gayi toh main shock main Jo gaya
Waha per ek Chirag rakha hua tha Jo chamak Raha tha jisko dek kar ek bar mujhe aisa Laga ke Mano main koi Sapna dek Raha ho Lekin main Maine Apne ap per chutki kati toh Yaqeen ho gaya ke yeh Sapna Nahin Hain toh main aghe bad gaya aur Chirag ko utha ne ke Liye haath lagaya toh mere haath main bohut jalad hone lagi aur todi der bad jab Maine Chirag ko utha Liya aur usko dekne Laga
Todi der bad dekne ke bad Maine Socha aur apni Kismat azmane ke Liye us Chirag ko jisne Laga todi der tak jab Maine us jadui Chirag ko gisne ke bad us Chirag se neelerang ka duwa Nikal ne Laga jisko dek kar main dar gaya aur Chirag mere haath se niche gir gaya aur main dar ke mare Piche ho gaya todi der tak duwa Nikal Raha tha uske bad duwa nikalna band ho gaya aur us duwe ne Deere Deere ek bohut badi Akriti main badalne lagi
Aur phir us Akriti ne ek jinn ka Roop le Liya jis ko dekar main aur bi bohut ziyada dar gaya aur dar ke mare behosh ho gaya
Mujhe is tarha behosh hota dekar jinn muskurane laga aur uske bad .main behosh ho gaya
Wahi jaise hi surya behosh ho gaya tabhi uper aakas main ek tez Roshni hui tabhi
Ek awaz gunji
Awaz : akhir kar Tum Azad ho gaye
Jinn : jee mahaguru Apke ashirwad se main ek bar phir se Azad ho gaya ho
Awaz : Hume khushi hui Tumhe dekar Lekin yad rakna phir se Tum AUR surya Pichli bar ki tarha galti mat karna
Jinn : ap nischit Rahe is bar hum se koi galti Nahin Hogi
Awaz : yahi Sahi rahega aur haa jitni jaldi ho sakhe surya ke Jeevan ki Yatra ka aramb karwao kyunke agar woh phir se Apne kidd se Azad ho gaya toh agar tridev bi Kuch Nahin kar payege
Jinn : ap Sahi Keh Rahe Hain bohut jald main sab thek kar dunga kyunke agar aj main aur mere aaka Yaha per Meri galti ki waja se hua
Awaz : haa Sahi kaha tumhari galti AUR surya ki nadani se surya ko ab prem ke Saath Kuch aur bi sakhana Hoga apko
Jinn : jaisa ap kahe
Awaz : ab hum chalte Hain surya putra ka deyan rakna
Jinn : ap nischit Rahe mahaguru pranam
Awaz : Vijaybava
Phir awaz aani band ho jati Hain phir jinn surya ko dekar Bolta hain
Jinn : aaka aj bi ap me chahre per woh bolapan aur prem chalakta Hain Jo pahle tha mujhe maaf Karna Meri waja se apki aj yeh halat Hain Lekin ab ki bar main aisa Nahin hone Dunga
Phir jinn ek chutki bajata hain aur surya ko dere dere apni ankheen kul ta Hain aur kada hokar aas pass dekta hain toh achanak uski Nazar us Jin per padti Hain toh surya phir se dar jata Hain
Surya ko is tarha darta dekhkar jinn halka sa muskurata hain aur phir Bolta hain
Jinn : are are ap dariye mat aaka main apka gulam ho apko mujse darni ki koi zarorat Nahin Hain
Surya : ddddekho mmmujhe jaane do waarna mainnnn apppko chooddo gaaa Nahin
Jinn : are Maine kaha na ap mat dariye mujse main apka gulam ho main apka har Aadesh manoga
Surya yeh sunkar pahle khush hota Hain phir Bolta hain
Surya : Kya Tum Sach Keh Rahe ho
Jinn : haa aaka main Sach Keh Rahe ho agar Yaqeen Nahin AA Rahe Hain toh ap Aadesh kijiye
Surya : Hhhmmmmm toh thek Hain mujhe bohut buk lagi Hain mujhe khana khana Hain
Apne samne itna Sara khana dekar surya ki buk aur ziyada bad gayi aur woh tut padha khana per aur pura table Khali kardi usne kyunke surya ko bohut ziyada buk lagi Thi
Khana khane ke bad jinn sab Kuch gayab kar deta Hain aur phir jinn surya se Bolta hain
Jinn : aaka ab hum chale Yaha sr
Surya : kyun Kya hua
Jinn : aaja yeh gufa ab nisht hone wali Hain
Surya : kyaaa Lekin kyun aur kese
Jinn : aaka yeh gufa sirf mere is jadui Chirag ki waja se Sahi salamat kadi thi warna kab ki vir gayi hoti
Surya : Lekin jayege kaha yahi Samaj Nahin AA Raha hain
Jinn : Matlab main samji Nahin
Surya : Mera is dunya main koi Nahin Hain toh kaha raho
Jinn : maf karna aaka Lekin apko ab mere kayal se apni maa ke pass wapis chale Jana chahiye
Surya ko ek jatka lagta hain aur Bolta hain
Surya : apko kese pata Meri maa ke bare main
Jinn : (jhoot bolte hue ) maaf Karna aaka jab ao behosh the tab maine apki sari yaade pad li aur dek bi li ishi liye mujhe sab pata hain
Surya : yeh Tumne acha Nahin Kiya
Jinn : maff Karna aaka galti ho gayi
Surya : chalo maaf Liya Lekin agli bar aisa mat karna
Jinn : thek Hain aaka
Surya : acha jab pata chal gaya Hain phir bi bol Rahe ho ke maa ke pass chale Jao jabke Maine nana ji se Kya waha Kiya tha tumko pata Hain na
Jinn : haa aaka mujhe pata Hain lekin ab woh badal gaye Hain
Surya : acha aur apko kese pata
Jinn : acha apko Yaqeen Nahin Hain na toh thek Hain ap khud hi jaa kar dek lo apni ankhoo se agar woh Sach main badal gaye Hain toh so sabko Sach Bata Dena aur aur mahine badala toh wapis chale Jana
Surya : shayad Tum thek Keh Rahe ho mujhe Kam se Kam Ek bar dek Lena Chahiye aur agar mahin bi badle toh Kam se Kam Ek akri baar maa ko toh dek lunga na
Jinn : haa main bi toh yahi Keh Raha ho
Surya : thek Hain main taiyar ho jaane ke Liye
~~aj ke Liye itna hi ~~~
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