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Incest The Hidden King đź‘‘ (fantasy + magic )

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Bramhand ke us anant shunya main ek aisi jagha Jaha kaal (time) apni pehchan kho deta tha aur Aakash sirf ek gehra raaz tha Wahan suraj ki garmi hazaron yugon se nahi pahunchi thi, chand ki chandni ka koi nishan nahi tha aur galaxiyon ka jhilmilata samundar bi is gehre shunya se dar kar duri bana chuka tha Yeh sthan "Anant-Gupt-Kshetra" ke naam se jaana jaata tha aur iski thandi maut si shanti main hi Devlok ka sarvashreshth sthal Amar-Sabha tika hua tha

Amar-Sabha hazar surajon jitni tez roshni se chamak rahi thi. Uska safed marmar ka floor anant shakti ka prateek tha jahan Devlok ke panch devta apne divya singhasanon par virajman the


( Guys Yaha main Naam mension Nahin kar Raha kyunke yeh forum ke rules ke again Hain to main Unke Naam ke sirf pahle lafz likhoga okay to confused mat hona okay )


Devraj ( Vajra dhaari aur netritva karta) S.Dev ( Tejasvi aur Kal drishya ) A.Dev ( Jwala aur shakti ke swami ) V.Dev ( Gati aur shwas ke neta ) aur J.Dev 4 ( Jal aur gehraiyon ka rakshak )

( Guys Yaha per vayu aur Varun dono Naam v se start hote Hain to Maine Varun ke v ki jagha J lik diya Hain confused mat hona okay )


Aisa shant mahul sadiyon se amar tha Par aaj us Amar-Sabha main kuch alag tha ek bayanak shanti ke beech maha parivartan ki prateeksha thi

Sabse pehle devo ne mehsos kiya. Unhone koi awaz nahi suni koi roshni nahi dekhi... unhone sirf shunya ki dhadkan ko badlate hue mehsos kiya.
Aur phir... woh tez chaka chaund karne wali roshni prakat hui

Yeh roshni aisi thi jaise pura bramhand ek saath jal utha ho aur phir ushi pal shant ho gaya ho Roshni itni tez thi ki Amar-Sabha ke safed marmar ke floor par uski neli sunehri Parchaiyan nachne lagi Roshni ke center main ek chota bindu tha jo pal bhar main phail kar ek vishal, aag sa gola ban raha tha Yeh gola roshni ka nahi tha yeh shakti ka sang raha tha

Devraj ne pehle dhemi awaz main sanket diya unki aankheen zor se chamakne lagi

Devraj : Yeh kya ho raha hai…

Unka Vajra apne ap hi vibrate karne laga tha jaise koi purani shakti use wapis bula rahi ho

S.Dev ne apni divya drishti se us bindu ko dekha. Unka chehra pal bhar main* safed pad gaya Unki divya tejas (divine radiance) kuch pal ke liye kam ho gayi. Unki Aankhoo main dehshat aur pehle yug ki yadain saaf jalak rahi thi

S.Dev : Yeh… yeh roshni… yeh wahi hai… woh sanket… Maha Yug ka sanket…


A.Dev ki jwalayain buri tarah se tez ho gayi yeh unka gussa nahi, balki utsah tha

A.Dev : Yeh… yeh wahi roshni hai jo us din thi… hazaron saal pehle… jab Samrat… jab Veeranchal gayab hua tha…


usne apni shakti ko vibhakt kiya tha…
V.Dev ne shunya se guzarti hawa ko rok kar mehsos kiya Unke jism main kampan tha

V.Dev : Bramhand kamp raha hai… yeh kampan dar ka nahi hai yeh aagman (arrival) ka hain Naye Tattva ka aagman ka

J.Dev ne apne samundron ko pukara ( jo sirf unke mastishk main the ) lekin unka man samundar tufaan se hil raha tha


J.Dev: Yeh… yeh nahi ho sakta… Kaal-Chakra wapis ghum gaya hai…


Aur phir... woh hua.
Roshni ke center se ek vishal neela sunehra gola nikla Yeh gola tez raftar se badne laga Uske badne ki gati aisi thi jaise samay piche daud raha ho Pal bhar main woh ek pura grah ban gaya Ek grah jaisa gola par jeevant shakti se bharpoor

VEERANCHAL – Uska naam tha


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Yeh grah sirf ek graha nahi tha Yeh sankalp, tyag, aur anant balance ka jeevant roop tha. Uske charon taraf neli aur sunehri aag ki leharain thi. Yeh aag jalati nahi thi Shanti deti thi. Uske center main ek vishal chakra ghum raha tha – Panch Tattva ka Chakra – jismain panch rang the Neela (Jal), Laal (Agni), Safed (Vayu), Sunehra (Prithvi), aur Kala (Shunya/Akash) Yeh chakra itni tez raftar se ghum raha tha ki uski dhwani (sound) samay aur shunya ki deewaron ko tod kar pure bramhand main gunj rahi thi


Jaise hi yeh grah pura prakat hua pure bramhand main maha bhukamp aa gaya
Galaxiyon ke beech ka shunya zor se hilne laga. Tare apni jagha se hat gaye jaise koi haath unhe dakel raha ho Nebulae phatne lage Black Holes bi kamp uthe unki kheenchne ki shakti pal bhar ke liye dhemi pad gayi Samay ki leharain bi ruk gayi

Amar-Sabha main Devon ne apne singhasanon se uth kar sir jhukaya Unke chehre par dar tha dar is anant shakti ka, lekin saath hi ek ajeeb si khushi bi thi khushi is balance ke wapis aane ki.
Devraj ne apna Vajra uthaya lekin unka haath kamp raha tha Devraj ab sankoch se bhaybheet the


Devraj : Yeh… yeh Veeranchal hai… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… Woh wapis aa gaya… Samrat ki shakti ka prateek.

S.Dev ki aankhoo main ansu chalak aaye

S.Dev : Jiska dar tha… wahi hua… Lekin dar vinash ka nahi tha dar parivartan ka tha Samrat wapis aa chuka hai… aur ab Kall Dhwaj ka ant nischit hain Lekin uske bad Jo Hoga uska abhi se soch kar dar lag Raha Hain

A.Dev ki jwalayain aankhoo main tez ho gayi

A.Dev : Us din… jab woh gayab hua tha… tab pura bramhand hil gaya tha… aaj phir wahi ho raha hai… shanti se pehle ka maha bhumkamp

V.Dev ki aankhoo main gehra gyan jalak raha tha

V.Dev : Yeh grah sirf ek grah nahi tha… yeh Samrat ki rooh ka hissa tha jo uske tyag ke baad yeh grah gayab ho gaya tha … ab yeh wapis aa gaya… matlab... Veeranchal ne purn roop le liya hain


J.Dev ne sir jhukaya.

J.Dev : Matlab… woh wapis aa gaya hai… Samrat… woh punarjanm le chuka hai… Kavir ki icha puri ho gayi…


to wahi ek Anjan jagha per :-


Jab pura Bramhand kamp raha tha Kaal Granthalaya ki gehraiyon main Shanti thi Rishi Bhramar aur Kavir jo ab Veeranchal ki shakti se bhega hua tha, par abhi bi manav roop main stir tha asmaan ke darpan main is drishya ko dekh rahe the.
Kavir ki aankhoo main Vishal Chakra ki pratibimb thi Woh hairat se Rishi Bhramar ko dekta raha

Kavir ( Dhemi, par Awaz main Anant-Shanti ) : Rishi… yeh… yeh grah… kya yeh meri akhri icha ka natija hai? Kya yeh Veeranchal ki shakti ka bhautik roop hain

Rishi Bhramar muskuraye Unka chehra apni Sari shanti se bharmar tha

Rishi Bhramar : Beta Kavir woh grah sirf grah nahi hai. Woh Tumhara Tyag hain Jab Samrat Veeranchal vibhakt hua tha, toh uski rooh ka bahari kosh (outer shell) is grah main chala gaya tha. Woh kosh prakat ho gaya, kyunke tumne uske teesre tukde – Icha-Shakti – ko purn kar diya

Kavir ne dheere se apne haath dekhe jahan Neeli-Sunehri roshni abhi bi thehri hui thi

Kavir : Lekin Rishi… Veeranchal ab wapis aa gaya toh Kya ab Maha yudh nischit hai? Veeranchal ke prakat hone se sab itne dar kyun rahe hain jabke woh khud balance ka swami Hain

Rishi Bhramar ki aankhoo main gehrai thi

Rishi Bhramar : sab Dev Veeranchal se nahi darte Kavir Woh darte hain Kall Dhwaj ki Pratikriya (reaction) se Veeranchal ka punarjanm uske ant ka aramb Hain Jab Shaktiyan ek saath aati hain toh Andhera zor se ladta hai Aur Kall Dhwaj hamesha Veeranchal ka dusman raha hain

Kavir : Toh ab… meri bhomika kya hai? Kya main wapis Veeranchal main jaa Sakta ho Ya uske saath rehkar burai se ladhoga

Rishi Bhramar ( akhri shant sargoshi ) : Kavir Tumhare manav-roop ne tyag kiya hain Tumhara grah prakat ho chuka hai. Ab nirnay tumhara hai Tumhara jeevan ab ek yudh hai Kavir. Aur yeh yudh andar se shuru hokar bahar khatam hoga

rashi Bhramar ki baat sunkar kavir ne koi jawab Nahin diya aur woh uth kar Usne Rishi Bhramar ko pranam Kiya aur waha se chale gaye

Kall Dhwajgarh andhere aur krurta (cruelty) ka Vishal Samrajya. Usi pal, jab Veeranchal prakat hua, Kall Dhwaj apne singhasan par baitha tha. Uska gussa shant nahi hua tha. Viraksha ki haar, Dahakaal ka bheja jaana – sab kuch uske dimag main ek tufan bana hua tha. Uska chehra kala pad chuka tha uske honth kamp rahe the

Tabhi darbar ke darwaze par ek tez, bhayanak awaz aayi jaise koi bimeari andar aa gayi ho

Ek chota sa darpok sa Kabri Asur andar aya. Uska sharir sara kamp raha tha jaise thandi lag rahi ho jabki Kall Dhwajgarh hamesha aag se bhara rehta tha Uska matha paseene se bhara tha.
Kabri Asur kanpte hue uski awaz dabi hui thi

Kabri : Maharaj… Maharaj… bohut badi khabar hai…

Kall Dhwaj ne uski taraf dekha. Uski Aankhoo main aag nahi shunya tha Usne dheere se apna sir jhukaya

Kall Dhwaj : Bolo! Agar tumhara shabd mere gusse se chota hua toh tumhari rakh bi nahi milegi

Kabri Asur ne Sara darr ek saath nigeal liya.
Kabri Asur : Veeranchal… woh grah… wapis aa gaya hai…

Kall Dhwaj ka chehra ek pal main safed pad gaya Usne apna singhasan ka hathla itne zor se pakad liya ki uski ungliyan pathar main ghus gayi Kall Dhwajgarh ka sinhasan pathar ka nahi Asuri Dhatu ka tha

Kall Dhwaj dhemi, lekin Bayankar jaise ek mara hua shaitan bol raha ho

Kall Dhwaj : Kya… kaha… tumne…? Yeh jhoot hai! Jhoot bolo Tum ke yeh jhoot bol Rahe ho

Kabri Asur ne sir jhuka liya. Uske hoth apas main jud chuke the

Kabri Asur : Maharaj… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… woh aaj subah se dikhai de raha hai… pure bramhand main… har jagha… har Kisi ko pata chal gaya Hain ke Veeranchal grah wapis aa gaya Hain


Kall Dhwaj ne apni aankheen band ki Uske dimag main woh purana Yudh yaad aa gaya Woh yudh jis main usne apni puri sena kho di thi Woh yudh jis main Samrat ne usko buri tarha hara kar Veeranchal se buri tarha se nikal diya aur kall Dhwaj ko Shakti bi Usse cheen li Th


Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur gusse main uski sansain tez thi

Kall Dhwaj : Nahi… nahi… yeh nahi ho sakta… woh toh mar chuka tha… uski shakti toh maine hi… khatam ki thi… main hi Bramhand ka samrat hoon

Usne apni aankheen kholi Uski Aankhoo main gussa kam Bayankar dar ziyada tha. Pure darbar main sannata chha gaya

Kall Dhwaj ne apna haath uthaya aur us kabri asur ko apni taraf khincha Asur ka sharir hawa main ud gaya. Asur chekh bi nahi paya

Kall Dhwaj Chillate hue uski awaz Bramhand main gunj Rahi Thi

Kall Dhwaj ( gusse main Chillate hue ) : TUNE MUJHE YE KHABAR KYUN DI?! TUNE MUJHE DARAYA HAI MERI SHANTI BHANG KI HAI TUMNE

Usne apna haath aur zor se dabaya. Kabri Asur ka sharir pal bhar main jal kar kali Rakh ho gaya aur woh rakh hawa main mil gayi

Kall Dhwaj ab apne singhasan se utha. Uska jism kamp raha tha Uske dimag main sirf ek hi vichar tha Apna Ant Rokna

Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur pagalpan ki had tak

Kall Dhwaj : Agar woh wapis aa gaya… toh mera ant nischit hai… woh mujhe nahi chodege… woh mujhe zinda nahi chodege… usne mera sab kuch cheena tha


Usne apne darbar ki taraf dekha Uske chehre par ab gussa nahi balki khoonkhar pagalpan chaya hua tha

Kall Dhwaj ( tez awaz main ) : “ABHI KE ABHI! POORI SENA KO TAIYAR KARO! HAR EK ASUR, HAR EK DAITYA, PURE GRAH MAIN JITNE BI LOG HAIN SABKO TAIYAR KARO ! HUM ABHI KE ABHI US GRAH PAR HAMLA KAREGE! MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! JIS GRAH KO WOH APNI ROOH KEHTA HAI MAIN USE JALA DUNGA

Usne apn Dand uthaya ( jo Black Hole ke core se bana tha ) aur zameen par zor se mara. Pura Kall Dhwajgarh tez awaz ke saath hil gaya aur uski dewaron se agni nikalne lagi

Kall Dhwaj akhri cheekh, uski Aankhoo main Bramhand ka Vinash tha

Kall Dhwaj : MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! CHAHE ISKE LIYE MUJHE PURA BRAMHAND JALANA PADE! MAHA YUDH KA AARAMBH ABHI HOGA

Uske aadesh ke saath hi, pura Kall Dhwajgarh yudh ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Maha Sankat aane wala tha Veeranchal wapis aa chuka tha aur uske dusman aur dost sabhi jante the ki ab shanti asanbhav hain

To wahi Satyalok main :-

Surya aur Lady of Satyalok us tez roshni ke beech tezi se aage badh rahe the. Surya ka jism tej aur ajeeb urja se bhara tha Usne pehli baar Bramhand ki asli shakti ko itne kareeb se mehsos kiya tha Lady of Satyalok uske aage thi unka chehra shant lekin sankalp se bhara tha

Surya Hairani se aas-pass ki roshni ko dekte hue ladki se kehta Hain

Surya : Devi yeh kaun si jagha hai Hum kitni tezi se travel kar rahe hain

Ladki : Yeh kaal aur samay se pare hai, Surya Hum man ki raftar se chal rahe hain Is se pehle ki Kall Dhwaj apni nakami se dar kar koi aur pagalpan kare, humain us tak pahunchna hoga

Surya ( Thoda ghabrahat main ) : Lekin Devi Dahakaal itna shaktishali tha uske pass Kall Dand ki shakti thi Aur jise aapne mere roop main Dharti par choda tha... woh kaun tha? Kya woh apki shakti hain

Ladki : ( Muskurate hue bina ruke ) : Haan Surya. Woh main thi aur tum the Meri adhi shakti jo shuddhi aur gyan ki rakshak hai, use tumhara roop diya gaya tha Kall Dand ki shakti ko sirf brahmandiya urja hi hara sakti thi

Surya ( Gehri soch main ) : Toh main kall dhwaj ka Samna kaise karunga Jab ap usko akhiri mauka de rahi thi... tab usne aisa Kya kaha jis se ap itna gussa ho gayi ke itni jald hi ap us kall Dhwaj ka ant Karna Chahti Hain

Lady of Satyalok ruk gayi Unke rukte hi aaspass ki roshni bi shant ho gayi, jaise koi tez nade ruk gayi ho Unka chehra ab dard aur gehre rahasya se bhara tha

Lady of Satyalok Dheere se boli unki awaz main hazaron yugo ka bojh tha

Ladki : Kall Dhwaj ki asli kamzori shakti nahi uska ahankaar hain Aur uska ahankaar mujhse juda hai Sadiyon pehle jab Brahmand main Samrat ka raaj tha... Kall Dhwaj unka sabse vishwaspaatr (most trusted) senapati tha

Surya : Samrat (man main) yeh Samrat Kon Hain akhir kyun yeh Naam sunte hi man main ek ajeeb si feeling AA jati Hain aisa lagta hain jaise ke main hi Samrat ho

Abhi Surya soch hi Raha tha ke Lady of Satyalok phir se boli

Ladki : Haan. Samrat Kall Dhwaj ne hamesha Samrat ki shakti aur niyamon ka apman kiya Ek baar usne Samrat ke samne mujhe pane ki ghustakhi (audacity) ki Samrat ne usko apne Darbar se nikal diya aur uski shakti cheen li. Us din se, Kall Dhwaj ne Samrat se badla lene aur mujhe pane ke liye Kall Dand ki paapi tapasya shuru ki. Woh janta hai, agar woh mujhe hasil kar leta hai toh woh Samrat ki sabse badi jeet ko har main badal dega

Surya ( Gusse main ) : Toh woh badle ke liye yeh sab kar raha hain

Ladki : Haan Lekin ab yeh Samrat ki baat nahi hain Ab yeh Brahmand ki shanti ki baat hain Aur ismain tumhara Gyan aur Sankalp hi kaam aayega

Unke chehre par ek gahra nishchay aya

Ladki : Tumhe Samrat ke Samrajya Satyalok main aye ho Surya. Yaha tumhe woh shakti milegi jiski tumhe zarorat hain Main tumhe kaal ki seemaon se pare sidhe dwaar tak pahunchati hoon


Lady of Satyalok ke akhri shabd tezi se roshni main ghul gaye Aur agle hi pal, Surya ek tez neele portal (dwaar) se bahar nikla aur uske jism ko ek ajeeb si shanti ne ghera (surround) kar liya Us portal ki tez roshni uske sharir se guzri, aur jab woh thehra, toh usne apni aankhoo par vishwas nahi kiya

Woh Anant Shunya ka tez, thanda andhera gayab ho chuka tha. Uske badle Surya khada tha Divya Prakash main jaha har kan main jeevan tha Yeh Satyalok tha

Pehla ehsas Vayu ka tha—ek aisi hawa jo saanson main amrit ghol de. Dusra ehsas roshni ka tha ek Sun (Suraj) jaisa gola jo Bramhand ke har taraf apna rang faila raha tha Us Sun ke upar kai galaxiyon ke jhilmilate nishan the Badal ruyi ki tarah safed the aur un badalon ke upar chote-chote floating islands ( udte hue dweepv) tehar rahe the

Samne do vishal sundar arch (dwaar-stambh) the jo gulabi aur neele pholon se dhake hue the Un dwaron ke beech se Surya ne Satyalok ki asli shan dekhi.
Satyalok koi aam darti nahi thi. Yeh Shakti aur Saundarya ka mishran tha.
Center main ek Vishal, sunehri mandir shaan se khada tha. Mandir ek bade floating island par bana hua tha, aur us island se charon taraf do vishal waterfalls (jharna) shanti se niche gir rahe the. Woh pani sirf jal nahi tha divya urja ka pravah tha. Woh Pani niche guzarte hue beech main bane ek Vishal talab (pond) main mil raha tha


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Us talab main hazaron kamal khile hue the neele gulabi naurangi (orange) – jinki roshni Pani main dheere dheere nach rahi thi. Talab ke upar do sundar pathar ke pul the jo pholon se saje the aur woh pul mandir ki taraf jate the


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Har taraf vriksh the jinki shakhon par here chamak rahe the aur unke pass chote chote floating islands the jin par chote chote mandir bane the Surya ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Usne apne ap ko pukara (summoned his focus) Uske manav-roop ki thakan is mahol main gayab ho gayi

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Surya ab dheere se us talab ki taraf badha Uske kadam awaz nahi kar rahe the, jaise woh hawa par chal raha ho. Jab woh pul ke pass pohcha, usne apni pehli nazar samne badi murti par Dali.
Vaha talab ke beech main chote se teele (mound) par ek vishal murti khadi thi. Murti safed sangmarmar ki thi, par usmain sunehre aur neele nishan the. Woh murti ek majboot, divya-yoddha ki thi, jisne ek haath main tez roshni ki talwar utha rakhi thi, aur uski Aankhoo mein anant shanti thi. Murti ke paas ek khoobsurat mayur (peacock) khada tha, jiske pankh neeli roshni se chamak rahe the


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Surya us murti ko dhyan se dek hi raha tha, ki tabhi talab ke pani par halke se chalte hue woh ladki uske samne aayi. Uska chehra shanti aur saundarya ka prateek tha. Uske vastra gulabi kamal ke patton se bune the, aur uski Aankhoo main Satyalok ka Gyan bhara hua tha

Ladki : Swagat hai Surya… humari prateeksha (our wait) safal hui

Uski awaz shehad ki tarah methi aur Vayu ki tarah halki thi

Surya ( Us murti se nazar hataye bina ) : Swagat… waqai bohut sundar aur alokik jagha Hain yeh Satyalok waise Yeh murti kiski hai? Yeh yodha kaun hai, jiske paas mayur aur tej talwar hai

Ladki us murti ki taraf dekhi. Uske chehre par aadar (reverence) ka bhav tha


Ladki : Yeh murti hamare Samrat ki hai us Samrat ki jisne is sansar main sachai aur achai ko kabhi Nahin jhukne diya
Bohut mahan Samrat the woh

Surya ( Hairat se ) : Lekin woh yahan murti main kyun hain agar woh itne bade Samrat hain toh

Ladki : Samrat yahan is Liye hain kyunke unhone apni shakti ko bramhand main vibhakt (divided) kar diya tha. Woh ab humare saath bhautik roop main nahi hain lekin unki aashirwad aur shakti hamesha Satyalok ko suraksha deti hai. Lekin… yeh prateeksha jaldi khatam hogi

Surya : Kaisi prateeksha?

Ladki : Unka punarjanm ho chuka hai. Woh wapis aane wale hain aur iss baar purani shakti puri hogi Satyalok unke aagman ki prateeksha main hi jevit hai. Humari har sans unke liye Hain

Ladki ne aage bad kar talab ke pani se ek bond uthai aur Surya ke mathe par laga diya

Ladki : satyalok keval pholon aur pani ka sthan nahi hai Surya Yeh shuddhta ka antim chor hain Yahan har ek pool ek yug ka gyan rakhta hai, aur har ek bond ek katha batati hai


Ladki ne dheere se kuch pal chup reh kar Surya ki aankhoo main dekha Uske chehre par gambherta aa gayi thi


Ladki : Ab samay aa chuka hai, Surya. Veeranchal ka aagman ho Chuka Hain aur uske aagman se ke foran bad Tumhe apne vastr ( costume ) wapis hasil karna hai

Surya ( Hairat aur Uljhan main ) : Costume? Kaisa costume? Ap kis costume ki baat kar raha hoon? Mere pass toh bas yeh vastr hain

Ladki Ek raaz bhari muskan ke saath

Ladki : Costume nahi shakti ka roop (form of power) Surya. Tumhara asli tej. Jab tumne manav roop liya tha, tab tumhari shakti chup gayi Thi Woh roop yahan Satyalok main surakshit hai Lekin abhi nahi…

Ladki ne apna haath aage badhaya aur talab se nikle gulabi kamalon ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Jab tum us tak pohunchoge tab dek lena Tumhari shakti tumhe bata degi ki woh kya hai Sirf pehchan zarori hain

Surya ne ek gehri sans li. Uski atma janti thi ki yeh raaz kitna zarori hai

Surya : Samaj gaya

Ladki turant mudi aur pul ki taraf chali gayi. Surya bi uske piche chal diya Pul se guzarte hue Surya ne dekha ki talab ka pani uske chalne par apne ap hat jata tha aisa lag Raha tha jaise Pani bi khud surya ko Rasta de Rahi ho

Woh dono mandir ki taraf nahi gaye. Ladki ne ek dusre chote raste ki taraf ishara kiya, jo do waterfalls ke beech se hokar ek chote floating island ki taraf jaata tha

Jab woh is naye dweep par pohche, Surya ne Pehchan liya ki yahan atmosphere badal gaya hain Center main ek vishal pathar ka stambh ( pillar ) tha jiske charon taraf neele aur gulabi rang ki roshni sarpilakar (spiral) main ghum rahi thi. Upar, ek vishal moon (chand) chamak raha tha, jismain ek neli urja dund rahi thi Yeh sthan shakti ka केंद्र (centre) tha


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Ladki ne us sarpilakar stambh ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Surya Tumhe ab yeh pariksha dekar woh costume hasil karna hi hoga. Tumhara asli tej is stambh ke shikar (peak) par chupa hua hai. Tumhari shakti tabhi jagegi jab tumhari atma teen sawalon ke sahi jawab degi

Surya : Pariksha? Kaise sawal? Aur agar main fail hua toh?

Ladki ( Shanti se ) : Sawal tumhare jeevan ke hisab se honge. Tumhari Atma se jude hue. Raste main aane wali har chunauti ek sawal hogi. Aur fail hone ka matlab… tum manav roop main hamesha ke liye kho jaoge, aur Bramhand per burai ka Raaj Hoga jis se phir koi bi burai ko rok Nahin payega

Surya : Aur ap Kya ap mere saath rahogi


Ladki : Nahi Yeh pariksha vyaktigat (personal) hain Tumhe akela chalna hoga, apni nishchay (determination) ke saath Lekin yaad rakna, Satyalok ki roshni hamesha tumhare saath hai

Surya
( Ek nishchay ke saath ) : Theek hain Main apni pariksha ke liye taiyar hoon

Ladki ne dheere se sir jukaya Uska chehra ek antim baar tez roshni se chamak utha

Ladki : Shubh yatra Surya. Samay tumhara hai

Aur agle hi pal, Ladki wahan se gayab ho gayi, jaise woh hawa main ghul gayi ho. Surya akela khada tha, us sarpilakar stambh ke paas. Uski Aankhoo main tez roshni thi, aur uske samne uske jeevan ki sabse badi pariksha khadi thi

To wahi college main :-

College ka maidan, Jaha kuch ghante pehle hasi, shor, aur jevan tha, ab ek bayanak, adrishya yudh-kshetra ban chuka tha. Asman kaala pad chuka tha, jaise suraj ko kisi vishal hatheli ne daba diya ho. Hawa main bijli aur maut ka shor chha chuka tha. Mousam ka dar itna ghana tha ki aas pass ki buildings ke kanch apne ap chatak (shattering) rahe the

Samne khada tha DAHAKAAL – 30 foot ka lohe aur kala lava se bana Vishal asur Uska jism dhoop se nahi, Kall Dand ki laal-kali bijli se chamak raha tha. Woh bijli har pal uske lohe ke jism main laplapati thi, jaise koi bimari tez ho rahi ho. Uske panv jahan padte the, wahan zameen Rakh ho jati thi
Uske samne, darti par akela khada tha N.Surya Uska roop sirf Surya jaisa nahi tha Woh ab manav nahi balki shuddh Tej ka sanchar tha Uska chehra Surya jaisa Masom tha, lekin uski Aankhoo main do bramhand gati (movement) kar rahe the—ek neela shunya aur dusra sunehra prakash

Uske charon taraf ek slow motion main teen divya mandal (Divine Rings) ghum rahe the Pehla mandal shwet tha ( Vayu ) dusra neela ( Jal ) aur tesra sunehra ( Prithvi ) Woh Teeno ek saath ghum rahe the jaise teen suraj ek jagha khel rahe hon aur unki gati se samay bi dhema pad chuka tha

Dahakaal aur N.Surya ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the Dahakaal ki aankhoo main Andere ki aag thi aur N.Surya ki aankhoo main hazaron yugon ki shanti thi

Zameen kamp rahi thi. Pahadon ki jagha ab college ki buildings thi, par shor wahi maha-pralay ka tha

Dahakaal ne apna vishal haath uthaya. Uske haath main samai Kall Dand ki shakti ek akhri galti karne ko taiyar thi.
Dahakaal ki awaz itni tez ki asman phat gaya mano darti bhi dard main ho


Dahakaal : Tum Surya ke roop main ho… lekin tum main Satyalok ki piri shakti bol rahi hai. Acha… aaj main Bramhand ki do sabse badi taqat ek saath nasht karunga! Pahle pahle us ladki ki takat aur dusri is darti ka ant


DAHAKAAL ne apne hathon ko jor se jod diya Uske jism se nikalti sari kali bijli uper asmaan ki taraf chali gayi

KALL DAND : MAHAPRALY CHAKRA

asman phat gaya Waha koi awaz nahi hui sirf ek tez aag thi. asman se ek 3 kilometre chauda kaala-laal chakra sedhe N.Surya ki taraf utra Yeh chakra sirf gol nahi tha yeh andere ki prateek thi. Uske andar lakhon bijli ke sanp (snakes) apne nishanon ko dund rahe the

Dahakaal ki aankhoo main gamand (arrogance) tha Yeh war itna shaktishali tha ki jahan se guzra, wahan pahad bi rakh ban gaye the aur ab uske raste main college ki imartein thi

N.Surya ne dheere se sans bhari Uske chehre par ek bi bhav nahi badla Yeh shanti hi uski sabse badi taqat thi

Uske sharir se nikalti tez, shwet sunehri roshni ab uske teen mandalon ke saath ghul gayi. Roshni itni shuddh thi ki aas-pass ka Andhera apne ap piche hat raha tha

Usne apna daya haath aage kiya. Uske haath main koi talwar nahi thi

sirf anant shakti ka kendra (center) tha.

“ANANT PRAKASH : BRAMHAND VIRAAT„

Uske haath se ek Shudh shwet-sunehri kiran nikli – lekin yeh koi kiran nahi thi. Yeh tez roshni ki Dewar thi. Yeh shakti itni tez thi ki andhera bi pal bhar ke liye jal gaya, aur kaal ki dehshat bi mit gayi.
Kiran ne MahaPralay Chakra ko beech main se chera

Wahan koi takkar nahi hui. Koi vishal damaka nahi hua. Sirf ek pal ki shanti thi, jab shuddhta paap se mili

Chakra ke do tukde huye aur woh tukde asman main hi bhasm ho gaye Bijli ke sanp roshni main badal gaye. Pure shehar main ek pal ke liye tez din ho gaya, jaise teen suraj ek saath ugg aaye hon

Dahakaal ki aankheen phail gayi Uska gamand toot chuka tha

Dahakaal : Yeh… yeh kya shakti hai Tune mera mahapralay aise kaise khatam kar diya

N.Surya dheere se bola uski awaz shanti ki garaj thi

N.Surya : Yeh shakti nahi… yeh Satyalok ka niyam (law) hai. Jahan Andera hoga wahan roshni ka pravah swabhavik (natural) hain Tumne todna sekha maine jodna sekha Hain ab tera ant Hoga Dahakaal

N.Surya ne samne ki taraf dekha College ki buildings adhi toot chuki thi zameen phat chuki thi, aur students aur teachers dar ke mare behosh padhe the

Usne apna baya haath uthaya. Uske haath se teen mandalon ki shakti ek saath nikli

“DIVYA SANKALP : AMRIT VARSHA”


asman se pani nahi, balki lakhon sunehre-neele phool girne lage Yeh phool sirf sundar nahi the yeh Satyalok ki rooh (soul) the Jahan jahan phool gire, wahan zameen phir se hari ho gayi Toti hui buildings ke tukde wapis judne lage. Ped paudhe phir se jee uthe

Amrit Varsha ka prabhav Dahakaal par bi hua. Uske jism par lagi Kali bijli shant hone lagi aur kuch der ke liye uska gussa dhema pad gaya Usne mehsos kiya ki uski shakti chin rahi hai

Dahakaal iska virod nahi seh saka. Usne N.Surya ki shakti ko apna apman samjha

Dahakaal gusse se chillaya, uski chekh main hazaron Asuro ka krod tha

Dahakaal : RUK JA! Main tera yeh bachpana nahi dekhunga! Main vinash hoon! Aur ab tera ant nischit hai

Woh dauda 30 foot ka Vishal jism ek pal main N.Surya ke samne pohanch gaya Usne apna pura Kall Dand ek vishal talwar main badla lamba aur bayankar aur N.Surya par apni sari shakti se war kiya

KALL DAND : ASUR-ANGAAR TALWAR

Talwar neche giri. Agar yeh war lagta toh pura campus pal bhar main shunya ho jaata. Lekin N.Surya apni jagha sthir khada tha


N.Surya ne apne dono haatho ko dheere se upar uthaya. Uske charon taraf ghumte teen mandal tez raftar se ghumne lage aur ek saath jud gaye

“PARAM TATVA : KAAL-CHAKRA BANDHAN”

Uske charon taraf ek sunehra neela ghumta hua chakra bana Yeh chakra shakti ka nahi samay ka tha Chakra ke andar samay ki Teeno dishayain dik rahi thi bhoot (past) tez raftar se chalta hua vartmaan (present) ek bindu par thehra hua, aur bhavishya (future) ek tez roshni ki tarah aage badta hua

Dahakaal ki Asur Angaar Talwar us chakra se takrayi aur… Theek ushi pal… ruk gayi

Tension itni tez thi ki dono ki shakti apas main takra kar ek shunya bana rahi thi. Dahakaal apni puri shakti se talwar ko aage dakel raha tha, lekin talwar kaal ki deewar se aage nahi badh payi
N.Surya ne dheere se apna haath ghumaaya

Aur phir… Talwar palat (reversed) gayi. Samay ne Dahakaal ki shakti ko hi uske khilaf istemal kar diya

Talwar ulta mud kar tez raftar se Dahakaal ke sene main ghus gayi

“BOOM!!!!„

Dahakaal ke jism se tez awaz nikli. Woh dard se chillaya aur uska vishal jism 800 meter Peche ud kar zameen main 50 foot ka gehra gaddha bana gaya. Khoon ki jagha uske seene se kali bijli behti thi, jo zameen ko jala rahi thi


Dahakaal gusse aur apman main pagal ho gaya. Usne apne dono haatho se zameen par mukka mara. Ab usne apni antim aur sabse bhayanak shakti istemal ki

KALL DAND : MRITYU SANKET

Zameen tez raftar se phat gayi. College ka maidan ek Vishal, kala muh ban gaya. Usmain se lakhon kale haath nikle, jo N.Surya ko pakadne aaye. Yeh haath sirf haath nahi the, yeh Kall Dhwaj ki tapasya ka shunya roop tha

N.Surya ki aankhoo main ab ek naya sankalp tha. Usne apna tesra, sabse shaktishali mandal jageaya. Teen mandalon ki shakti uski atma se jud gayi

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM SWAROOP : TRINETRA MAHANYAAS”

Uske maathe par ek tesra neela-sunehra aankh khula. Yeh aankh gyan, shanti, aur nyay ka prateek tha. Us ankh se ek shwet prakash nikla – itna shudh ki sabhi kale hath rakh ho gaye Prakash sedha Dahakaal ke dil tak gaya

Jaise hi prakash dil main ghusa Dahakaal ke andar ka Sara paap, krod lobh aur Kall Dand ki tapasya sab ek saath jalne laga. Uska bhayankar jism andar se pighal raha tha

Dahakaal bhayanak dard main chillaya, uski awaz main khud ka ant tha

Dahakaal : Nahi… meri shakti… meri shakti mujhe kha rahi hai!! Yeh shuddhta mujhe jala rahi hain

Uske jism par bijli ki tarah lakdak lakdak phatne lagi. Kall Dand ki sari bijli andar se hi usko jalane lagi

N.Surya dheere se aage badha Usne apna daya haath Dahakaal ke seene par rakha

N.Surya dhimi lekin garajti awaz jo Dahakaal ki rooh tak gayi

N.surya : Tune Bramhand ke niyam tode. Tune sirf vinash chuna Ab tu shunya main shanti payega… sada ke liye. Yeh Satyalok ka antim nyay hai.

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM NYAAY : PARAM SHUNYA DWARM

Uske haath se ek chota sa shwet-neela gola bana. Yeh gola bada nahi tha lekin uska wazan pure Bramhand jitna tha. Gola Dahakaal ke seene main ghus gaya.
Dahakaal ka pura 30 foot ka jism ek pal ke liye shwet ho gaya… jaise usse sara kala rang chen liya gaya ho. Phir… ek chote se shunya (black-white hole) main convert hokar gayab ho gaya Saath main Kall Dand ki puri shakti bi hamesha ke liye shunya main sama gayi


Pure maidan main ekdum sannata chha gaya Dahakaal ka ant ho chuka tha Shunya ka chota sa gola dheere-dheere band ho gaya

Sirf sunehre neele phool hawa main ud rahe the jo Amrit Varsha se aaye the
N.Surya ne asman ki taraf dekha Uske sharir ki roshni dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi Uska roop wapis manav jaisa ho raha tha

N.Surya ( muskurate hue apne ap se ) :
Surya… ab tera samay aa gaya hai… Ab Veeranchal ka agla kaam shuru hoga

Uske teesre neele-sunehre aankh ab band ho chuke the Usne apne dono hatho ko dheere se upar uthaya

“SATYALOK KA PARAM AASHEESH : PUNARJANM AURA”

Uske hathon se ek shudh shwet sunehri lehri pure campus par phail gayi. Yeh lehri sirf marammat nahi kar rahi thi, yeh kaal-chakra ko wapis laa rahi thi

Jahan building tooti thi, wahan nayi dewarain khud ban gayi. Jahan zameen phati thi, wahan phir se hari ghans ug aayi. Toote hue ped, bench, canteen ka glass – sab kuch pal bhar main pehle jaisa ho gaya. Jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir usne apna daya haath sabki taraf kiya, jo ab bi wahan behosh padhe the

“DIVYA SANKALP : SMRITI MOKSHA”

Ek halki neeli roshni un sab ke maathe par lagi. Naira, Mehar, Sonia, Sapna, Rocky – aur pure college sabki aankheen ek pal ke liye shwet ho gayi. Unki Yadain – Dahakaal ka vishal roop, bijli, aag, tabahi – sab kuch ek jalak main mita diya gaya. Dahakaal ka naam bi unke dimag se gayab ho chuka tha.
Ab unke dimag main sirf itna yaad tha ki woh canteen main baith kar masti kar rahe the, phir bell baji, aur sab class ki taraf ja rahe the. Unki atma shant ho chuki thi


N.Surya ne apna roop dheere se badla ab woh bilkul normal Surya lag raha tha, college student ki tarha Usne tez kadam liye aur apne doston ke paas gaya jo ab uthe the

Surya bilkul normal awaz main, muskurate hue jismain ab koi tez shakti nahi thi

N.surya : Are yar, sorry! Mujhe abhi ek bohut zarori kaam yaad aa gaya Kam bohut important Hain ishi ki waja se shayad Kal bi naa AA Pao to Tum sab log tension mat Lena okay

Naira ( ab bilkul normal todi chinta se, apne baalo ko theek karte hue ) :
Kya hua Surya? Sab thek toh hai na? Tumhari aankheen thodi laal lag rahi hain

Surya ( muskurate hue) :Bas todi si problem hai, kal tak sab sort ho jayega. Tum log ghar jao, rest karo. Main message kar dunga okay

Sonia : agar kuch bi ho toh ek call kar dena. Hum aa jayenge. Apna khayal rakhna

Sapna ( aankhoo main pyaar aur chinta ) : Haan chote, jaldi wapis aana hum sab tera with karega okay

N.surya : ap sab tension mat lo maim thek ho jaldi hi AA jaoga okay bye everyone

Sab ne ek dusre ko hug kiya, bye bola aur apne-apne raste nikal gaye. Kisi ko kuch yaad nahi tha. Campus ek dum normal tha – jaise har roz hota hain
Surya un sab ko door tak jate dekhta raha Uske chehre par aaj pehli baar apne manav jeevan ko chodne ka dukh tha

Phir usne dheere se palta, aur college ke peche ek bilkul sunsan jagha purane store-room ke peche chala gaya Wahan koi nahi tha Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati bell ki awaz Thi

Wahan ponch kar usne apna haath aage badhaya

Ek chota sa sunehra neela gola prakat hua – portal Woh portal ladki ki sakti ka Prateek tha
Usne ek akhri bar college ki taraf dekha, muskuraya, aur dheere se bola:
Surya ( khud se ) : Ab… asli Yudh baki hai

Woh portal main kadam rakha.
Portal band hua. Wahan sirf thodi si sunehri neeli roshni ek pal ke liye chamki… phir woh bi gayab ho gayi.
Ab college ek dum shant tha Jaise kuch hua hi na ho

Lekin door asman main ek tez roshni phir se chamki – jaise koi aur, bohut bada tofan aane wala ho Aur woh roshni sedhe Satyalok ki taraf ja rahi thi... Veeranchal ke aagman ki ghoshna karte hue


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Bramhand ke us anant shunya main ek aisi jagha Jaha kaal (time) apni pehchan kho deta tha aur Aakash sirf ek gehra raaz tha Wahan suraj ki garmi hazaron yugon se nahi pahunchi thi, chand ki chandni ka koi nishan nahi tha aur galaxiyon ka jhilmilata samundar bi is gehre shunya se dar kar duri bana chuka tha Yeh sthan "Anant-Gupt-Kshetra" ke naam se jaana jaata tha aur iski thandi maut si shanti main hi Devlok ka sarvashreshth sthal Amar-Sabha tika hua tha

Amar-Sabha hazar surajon jitni tez roshni se chamak rahi thi. Uska safed marmar ka floor anant shakti ka prateek tha jahan Devlok ke panch devta apne divya singhasanon par virajman the


( Guys Yaha main Naam mension Nahin kar Raha kyunke yeh forum ke rules ke again Hain to main Unke Naam ke sirf pahle lafz likhoga okay to confused mat hona okay )


Devraj ( Vajra dhaari aur netritva karta) S.Dev ( Tejasvi aur Kal drishya ) A.Dev ( Jwala aur shakti ke swami ) V.Dev ( Gati aur shwas ke neta ) aur J.Dev 4 ( Jal aur gehraiyon ka rakshak )

( Guys Yaha per vayu aur Varun dono Naam v se start hote Hain to Maine Varun ke v ki jagha J lik diya Hain confused mat hona okay )


Aisa shant mahul sadiyon se amar tha Par aaj us Amar-Sabha main kuch alag tha ek bayanak shanti ke beech maha parivartan ki prateeksha thi

Sabse pehle devo ne mehsos kiya. Unhone koi awaz nahi suni koi roshni nahi dekhi... unhone sirf shunya ki dhadkan ko badlate hue mehsos kiya.
Aur phir... woh tez chaka chaund karne wali roshni prakat hui

Yeh roshni aisi thi jaise pura bramhand ek saath jal utha ho aur phir ushi pal shant ho gaya ho Roshni itni tez thi ki Amar-Sabha ke safed marmar ke floor par uski neli sunehri Parchaiyan nachne lagi Roshni ke center main ek chota bindu tha jo pal bhar main phail kar ek vishal, aag sa gola ban raha tha Yeh gola roshni ka nahi tha yeh shakti ka sang raha tha

Devraj ne pehle dhemi awaz main sanket diya unki aankheen zor se chamakne lagi

Devraj : Yeh kya ho raha hai…

Unka Vajra apne ap hi vibrate karne laga tha jaise koi purani shakti use wapis bula rahi ho

S.Dev ne apni divya drishti se us bindu ko dekha. Unka chehra pal bhar main* safed pad gaya Unki divya tejas (divine radiance) kuch pal ke liye kam ho gayi. Unki Aankhoo main dehshat aur pehle yug ki yadain saaf jalak rahi thi

S.Dev : Yeh… yeh roshni… yeh wahi hai… woh sanket… Maha Yug ka sanket…


A.Dev ki jwalayain buri tarah se tez ho gayi yeh unka gussa nahi, balki utsah tha

A.Dev : Yeh… yeh wahi roshni hai jo us din thi… hazaron saal pehle… jab Samrat… jab Veeranchal gayab hua tha…


usne apni shakti ko vibhakt kiya tha…
V.Dev ne shunya se guzarti hawa ko rok kar mehsos kiya Unke jism main kampan tha

V.Dev : Bramhand kamp raha hai… yeh kampan dar ka nahi hai yeh aagman (arrival) ka hain Naye Tattva ka aagman ka

J.Dev ne apne samundron ko pukara ( jo sirf unke mastishk main the ) lekin unka man samundar tufaan se hil raha tha


J.Dev: Yeh… yeh nahi ho sakta… Kaal-Chakra wapis ghum gaya hai…


Aur phir... woh hua.
Roshni ke center se ek vishal neela sunehra gola nikla Yeh gola tez raftar se badne laga Uske badne ki gati aisi thi jaise samay piche daud raha ho Pal bhar main woh ek pura grah ban gaya Ek grah jaisa gola par jeevant shakti se bharpoor

VEERANCHAL – Uska naam tha


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Yeh grah sirf ek graha nahi tha Yeh sankalp, tyag, aur anant balance ka jeevant roop tha. Uske charon taraf neli aur sunehri aag ki leharain thi. Yeh aag jalati nahi thi Shanti deti thi. Uske center main ek vishal chakra ghum raha tha – Panch Tattva ka Chakra – jismain panch rang the Neela (Jal), Laal (Agni), Safed (Vayu), Sunehra (Prithvi), aur Kala (Shunya/Akash) Yeh chakra itni tez raftar se ghum raha tha ki uski dhwani (sound) samay aur shunya ki deewaron ko tod kar pure bramhand main gunj rahi thi


Jaise hi yeh grah pura prakat hua pure bramhand main maha bhukamp aa gaya
Galaxiyon ke beech ka shunya zor se hilne laga. Tare apni jagha se hat gaye jaise koi haath unhe dakel raha ho Nebulae phatne lage Black Holes bi kamp uthe unki kheenchne ki shakti pal bhar ke liye dhemi pad gayi Samay ki leharain bi ruk gayi

Amar-Sabha main Devon ne apne singhasanon se uth kar sir jhukaya Unke chehre par dar tha dar is anant shakti ka, lekin saath hi ek ajeeb si khushi bi thi khushi is balance ke wapis aane ki.
Devraj ne apna Vajra uthaya lekin unka haath kamp raha tha Devraj ab sankoch se bhaybheet the


Devraj : Yeh… yeh Veeranchal hai… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… Woh wapis aa gaya… Samrat ki shakti ka prateek.

S.Dev ki aankhoo main ansu chalak aaye

S.Dev : Jiska dar tha… wahi hua… Lekin dar vinash ka nahi tha dar parivartan ka tha Samrat wapis aa chuka hai… aur ab Kall Dhwaj ka ant nischit hain Lekin uske bad Jo Hoga uska abhi se soch kar dar lag Raha Hain

A.Dev ki jwalayain aankhoo main tez ho gayi

A.Dev : Us din… jab woh gayab hua tha… tab pura bramhand hil gaya tha… aaj phir wahi ho raha hai… shanti se pehle ka maha bhumkamp

V.Dev ki aankhoo main gehra gyan jalak raha tha

V.Dev : Yeh grah sirf ek grah nahi tha… yeh Samrat ki rooh ka hissa tha jo uske tyag ke baad yeh grah gayab ho gaya tha … ab yeh wapis aa gaya… matlab... Veeranchal ne purn roop le liya hain


J.Dev ne sir jhukaya.

J.Dev : Matlab… woh wapis aa gaya hai… Samrat… woh punarjanm le chuka hai… Kavir ki icha puri ho gayi…



to wahi ek Anjan jagha per :-


Jab pura Bramhand kamp raha tha Kaal Granthalaya ki gehraiyon main Shanti thi Rishi Bhramar aur Kavir jo ab Veeranchal ki shakti se bhega hua tha, par abhi bi manav roop main stir tha asmaan ke darpan main is drishya ko dekh rahe the.
Kavir ki aankhoo main Vishal Chakra ki pratibimb thi Woh hairat se Rishi Bhramar ko dekta raha

Kavir ( Dhemi, par Awaz main Anant-Shanti ) : Rishi… yeh… yeh grah… kya yeh meri akhri icha ka natija hai? Kya yeh Veeranchal ki shakti ka bhautik roop hain

Rishi Bhramar muskuraye Unka chehra apni Sari shanti se bharmar tha

Rishi Bhramar : Beta Kavir woh grah sirf grah nahi hai. Woh Tumhara Tyag hain Jab Samrat Veeranchal vibhakt hua tha, toh uski rooh ka bahari kosh (outer shell) is grah main chala gaya tha. Woh kosh prakat ho gaya, kyunke tumne uske teesre tukde – Icha-Shakti – ko purn kar diya

Kavir ne dheere se apne haath dekhe jahan Neeli-Sunehri roshni abhi bi thehri hui thi

Kavir : Lekin Rishi… Veeranchal ab wapis aa gaya toh Kya ab Maha yudh nischit hai? Veeranchal ke prakat hone se sab itne dar kyun rahe hain jabke woh khud balance ka swami Hain

Rishi Bhramar ki aankhoo main gehrai thi

Rishi Bhramar : sab Dev Veeranchal se nahi darte Kavir Woh darte hain Kall Dhwaj ki Pratikriya (reaction) se Veeranchal ka punarjanm uske ant ka aramb Hain Jab Shaktiyan ek saath aati hain toh Andhera zor se ladta hai Aur Kall Dhwaj hamesha Veeranchal ka dusman raha hain

Kavir : Toh ab… meri bhomika kya hai? Kya main wapis Veeranchal main jaa Sakta ho Ya uske saath rehkar burai se ladhoga

Rishi Bhramar ( akhri shant sargoshi ) : Kavir Tumhare manav-roop ne tyag kiya hain Tumhara grah prakat ho chuka hai. Ab nirnay tumhara hai Tumhara jeevan ab ek yudh hai Kavir. Aur yeh yudh andar se shuru hokar bahar khatam hoga

rashi Bhramar ki baat sunkar kavir ne koi jawab Nahin diya aur woh uth kar Usne Rishi Bhramar ko pranam Kiya aur waha se chale gaye

Kall Dhwajgarh andhere aur krurta (cruelty) ka Vishal Samrajya. Usi pal, jab Veeranchal prakat hua, Kall Dhwaj apne singhasan par baitha tha. Uska gussa shant nahi hua tha. Viraksha ki haar, Dahakaal ka bheja jaana – sab kuch uske dimag main ek tufan bana hua tha. Uska chehra kala pad chuka tha uske honth kamp rahe the

Tabhi darbar ke darwaze par ek tez, bhayanak awaz aayi jaise koi bimeari andar aa gayi ho

Ek chota sa darpok sa Kabri Asur andar aya. Uska sharir sara kamp raha tha jaise thandi lag rahi ho jabki Kall Dhwajgarh hamesha aag se bhara rehta tha Uska matha paseene se bhara tha.
Kabri Asur kanpte hue uski awaz dabi hui thi

Kabri : Maharaj… Maharaj… bohut badi khabar hai…

Kall Dhwaj ne uski taraf dekha. Uski Aankhoo main aag nahi shunya tha Usne dheere se apna sir jhukaya

Kall Dhwaj : Bolo! Agar tumhara shabd mere gusse se chota hua toh tumhari rakh bi nahi milegi

Kabri Asur ne Sara darr ek saath nigeal liya.
Kabri Asur : Veeranchal… woh grah… wapis aa gaya hai…

Kall Dhwaj ka chehra ek pal main safed pad gaya Usne apna singhasan ka hathla itne zor se pakad liya ki uski ungliyan pathar main ghus gayi Kall Dhwajgarh ka sinhasan pathar ka nahi Asuri Dhatu ka tha

Kall Dhwaj dhemi, lekin Bayankar jaise ek mara hua shaitan bol raha ho

Kall Dhwaj : Kya… kaha… tumne…? Yeh jhoot hai! Jhoot bolo Tum ke yeh jhoot bol Rahe ho

Kabri Asur ne sir jhuka liya. Uske hoth apas main jud chuke the

Kabri Asur : Maharaj… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… woh aaj subah se dikhai de raha hai… pure bramhand main… har jagha… har Kisi ko pata chal gaya Hain ke Veeranchal grah wapis aa gaya Hain


Kall Dhwaj ne apni aankheen band ki Uske dimag main woh purana Yudh yaad aa gaya Woh yudh jis main usne apni puri sena kho di thi Woh yudh jis main Samrat ne usko buri tarha hara kar Veeranchal se buri tarha se nikal diya aur kall Dhwaj ko Shakti bi Usse cheen li Th


Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur gusse main uski sansain tez thi

Kall Dhwaj : Nahi… nahi… yeh nahi ho sakta… woh toh mar chuka tha… uski shakti toh maine hi… khatam ki thi… main hi Bramhand ka samrat hoon

Usne apni aankheen kholi Uski Aankhoo main gussa kam Bayankar dar ziyada tha. Pure darbar main sannata chha gaya

Kall Dhwaj ne apna haath uthaya aur us kabri asur ko apni taraf khincha Asur ka sharir hawa main ud gaya. Asur chekh bi nahi paya

Kall Dhwaj Chillate hue uski awaz Bramhand main gunj Rahi Thi

Kall Dhwaj ( gusse main Chillate hue ) : TUNE MUJHE YE KHABAR KYUN DI?! TUNE MUJHE DARAYA HAI MERI SHANTI BHANG KI HAI TUMNE

Usne apna haath aur zor se dabaya. Kabri Asur ka sharir pal bhar main jal kar kali Rakh ho gaya aur woh rakh hawa main mil gayi

Kall Dhwaj ab apne singhasan se utha. Uska jism kamp raha tha Uske dimag main sirf ek hi vichar tha Apna Ant Rokna

Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur pagalpan ki had tak

Kall Dhwaj : Agar woh wapis aa gaya… toh mera ant nischit hai… woh mujhe nahi chodege… woh mujhe zinda nahi chodege… usne mera sab kuch cheena tha


Usne apne darbar ki taraf dekha Uske chehre par ab gussa nahi balki khoonkhar pagalpan chaya hua tha

Kall Dhwaj ( tez awaz main ) : “ABHI KE ABHI! POORI SENA KO TAIYAR KARO! HAR EK ASUR, HAR EK DAITYA, PURE GRAH MAIN JITNE BI LOG HAIN SABKO TAIYAR KARO ! HUM ABHI KE ABHI US GRAH PAR HAMLA KAREGE! MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! JIS GRAH KO WOH APNI ROOH KEHTA HAI MAIN USE JALA DUNGA

Usne apn Dand uthaya ( jo Black Hole ke core se bana tha ) aur zameen par zor se mara. Pura Kall Dhwajgarh tez awaz ke saath hil gaya aur uski dewaron se agni nikalne lagi

Kall Dhwaj akhri cheekh, uski Aankhoo main Bramhand ka Vinash tha

Kall Dhwaj : MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! CHAHE ISKE LIYE MUJHE PURA BRAMHAND JALANA PADE! MAHA YUDH KA AARAMBH ABHI HOGA

Uske aadesh ke saath hi, pura Kall Dhwajgarh yudh ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Maha Sankat aane wala tha Veeranchal wapis aa chuka tha aur uske dusman aur dost sabhi jante the ki ab shanti asanbhav hain

To wahi Satyalok main :-

Surya aur Lady of Satyalok us tez roshni ke beech tezi se aage badh rahe the. Surya ka jism tej aur ajeeb urja se bhara tha Usne pehli baar Bramhand ki asli shakti ko itne kareeb se mehsos kiya tha Lady of Satyalok uske aage thi unka chehra shant lekin sankalp se bhara tha

Surya Hairani se aas-pass ki roshni ko dekte hue ladki se kehta Hain

Surya : Devi yeh kaun si jagha hai Hum kitni tezi se travel kar rahe hain

Ladki : Yeh kaal aur samay se pare hai, Surya Hum man ki raftar se chal rahe hain Is se pehle ki Kall Dhwaj apni nakami se dar kar koi aur pagalpan kare, humain us tak pahunchna hoga

Surya ( Thoda ghabrahat main ) : Lekin Devi Dahakaal itna shaktishali tha uske pass Kall Dand ki shakti thi Aur jise aapne mere roop main Dharti par choda tha... woh kaun tha? Kya woh apki shakti hain

Ladki : ( Muskurate hue bina ruke ) : Haan Surya. Woh main thi aur tum the Meri adhi shakti jo shuddhi aur gyan ki rakshak hai, use tumhara roop diya gaya tha Kall Dand ki shakti ko sirf brahmandiya urja hi hara sakti thi

Surya ( Gehri soch main ) : Toh main kall dhwaj ka Samna kaise karunga Jab ap usko akhiri mauka de rahi thi... tab usne aisa Kya kaha jis se ap itna gussa ho gayi ke itni jald hi ap us kall Dhwaj ka ant Karna Chahti Hain

Lady of Satyalok ruk gayi Unke rukte hi aaspass ki roshni bi shant ho gayi, jaise koi tez nade ruk gayi ho Unka chehra ab dard aur gehre rahasya se bhara tha

Lady of Satyalok Dheere se boli unki awaz main hazaron yugo ka bojh tha

Ladki : Kall Dhwaj ki asli kamzori shakti nahi uska ahankaar hain Aur uska ahankaar mujhse juda hai Sadiyon pehle jab Brahmand main Samrat ka raaj tha... Kall Dhwaj unka sabse vishwaspaatr (most trusted) senapati tha

Surya : Samrat (man main) yeh Samrat Kon Hain akhir kyun yeh Naam sunte hi man main ek ajeeb si feeling AA jati Hain aisa lagta hain jaise ke main hi Samrat ho

Abhi Surya soch hi Raha tha ke Lady of Satyalok phir se boli

Ladki : Haan. Samrat Kall Dhwaj ne hamesha Samrat ki shakti aur niyamon ka apman kiya Ek baar usne Samrat ke samne mujhe pane ki ghustakhi (audacity) ki Samrat ne usko apne Darbar se nikal diya aur uski shakti cheen li. Us din se, Kall Dhwaj ne Samrat se badla lene aur mujhe pane ke liye Kall Dand ki paapi tapasya shuru ki. Woh janta hai, agar woh mujhe hasil kar leta hai toh woh Samrat ki sabse badi jeet ko har main badal dega

Surya ( Gusse main ) : Toh woh badle ke liye yeh sab kar raha hain

Ladki : Haan Lekin ab yeh Samrat ki baat nahi hain Ab yeh Brahmand ki shanti ki baat hain Aur ismain tumhara Gyan aur Sankalp hi kaam aayega

Unke chehre par ek gahra nishchay aya

Ladki : Tumhe Samrat ke Samrajya Satyalok main aye ho Surya. Yaha tumhe woh shakti milegi jiski tumhe zarorat hain Main tumhe kaal ki seemaon se pare sidhe dwaar tak pahunchati hoon


Lady of Satyalok ke akhri shabd tezi se roshni main ghul gaye Aur agle hi pal, Surya ek tez neele portal (dwaar) se bahar nikla aur uske jism ko ek ajeeb si shanti ne ghera (surround) kar liya Us portal ki tez roshni uske sharir se guzri, aur jab woh thehra, toh usne apni aankhoo par vishwas nahi kiya

Woh Anant Shunya ka tez, thanda andhera gayab ho chuka tha. Uske badle Surya khada tha Divya Prakash main jaha har kan main jeevan tha Yeh Satyalok tha

Pehla ehsas Vayu ka tha—ek aisi hawa jo saanson main amrit ghol de. Dusra ehsas roshni ka tha ek Sun (Suraj) jaisa gola jo Bramhand ke har taraf apna rang faila raha tha Us Sun ke upar kai galaxiyon ke jhilmilate nishan the Badal ruyi ki tarah safed the aur un badalon ke upar chote-chote floating islands ( udte hue dweepv) tehar rahe the

Samne do vishal sundar arch (dwaar-stambh) the jo gulabi aur neele pholon se dhake hue the Un dwaron ke beech se Surya ne Satyalok ki asli shan dekhi.
Satyalok koi aam darti nahi thi. Yeh Shakti aur Saundarya ka mishran tha.
Center main ek Vishal, sunehri mandir shaan se khada tha. Mandir ek bade floating island par bana hua tha, aur us island se charon taraf do vishal waterfalls (jharna) shanti se niche gir rahe the. Woh pani sirf jal nahi tha divya urja ka pravah tha. Woh Pani niche guzarte hue beech main bane ek Vishal talab (pond) main mil raha tha


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Us talab main hazaron kamal khile hue the neele gulabi naurangi (orange) – jinki roshni Pani main dheere dheere nach rahi thi. Talab ke upar do sundar pathar ke pul the jo pholon se saje the aur woh pul mandir ki taraf jate the


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Har taraf vriksh the jinki shakhon par here chamak rahe the aur unke pass chote chote floating islands the jin par chote chote mandir bane the Surya ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Usne apne ap ko pukara (summoned his focus) Uske manav-roop ki thakan is mahol main gayab ho gayi

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Surya ab dheere se us talab ki taraf badha Uske kadam awaz nahi kar rahe the, jaise woh hawa par chal raha ho. Jab woh pul ke pass pohcha, usne apni pehli nazar samne badi murti par Dali.
Vaha talab ke beech main chote se teele (mound) par ek vishal murti khadi thi. Murti safed sangmarmar ki thi, par usmain sunehre aur neele nishan the. Woh murti ek majboot, divya-yoddha ki thi, jisne ek haath main tez roshni ki talwar utha rakhi thi, aur uski Aankhoo mein anant shanti thi. Murti ke paas ek khoobsurat mayur (peacock) khada tha, jiske pankh neeli roshni se chamak rahe the


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Surya us murti ko dhyan se dek hi raha tha, ki tabhi talab ke pani par halke se chalte hue woh ladki uske samne aayi. Uska chehra shanti aur saundarya ka prateek tha. Uske vastra gulabi kamal ke patton se bune the, aur uski Aankhoo main Satyalok ka Gyan bhara hua tha

Ladki : Swagat hai Surya… humari prateeksha (our wait) safal hui


Uski awaz shehad ki tarah methi aur Vayu ki tarah halki thi

Surya ( Us murti se nazar hataye bina ) : Swagat… waqai bohut sundar aur alokik jagha Hain yeh Satyalok waise Yeh murti kiski hai? Yeh yodha kaun hai, jiske paas mayur aur tej talwar hai

Ladki us murti ki taraf dekhi. Uske chehre par aadar (reverence) ka bhav tha


Ladki : Yeh murti hamare Samrat ki hai us Samrat ki jisne is sansar main sachai aur achai ko kabhi Nahin jhukne diya
Bohut mahan Samrat the woh

Surya ( Hairat se ) : Lekin woh yahan murti main kyun hain agar woh itne bade Samrat hain toh

Ladki : Samrat yahan is Liye hain kyunke unhone apni shakti ko bramhand main vibhakt (divided) kar diya tha. Woh ab humare saath bhautik roop main nahi hain lekin unki aashirwad aur shakti hamesha Satyalok ko suraksha deti hai. Lekin… yeh prateeksha jaldi khatam hogi

Surya : Kaisi prateeksha?

Ladki : Unka punarjanm ho chuka hai. Woh wapis aane wale hain aur iss baar purani shakti puri hogi Satyalok unke aagman ki prateeksha main hi jevit hai. Humari har sans unke liye Hain

Ladki ne aage bad kar talab ke pani se ek bond uthai aur Surya ke mathe par laga diya

Ladki : satyalok keval pholon aur pani ka sthan nahi hai Surya Yeh shuddhta ka antim chor hain Yahan har ek pool ek yug ka gyan rakhta hai, aur har ek bond ek katha batati hai


Ladki ne dheere se kuch pal chup reh kar Surya ki aankhoo main dekha Uske chehre par gambherta aa gayi thi


Ladki : Ab samay aa chuka hai, Surya. Veeranchal ka aagman ho Chuka Hain aur uske aagman se ke foran bad Tumhe apne vastr ( costume ) wapis hasil karna hai

Surya ( Hairat aur Uljhan main ) : Costume? Kaisa costume? Ap kis costume ki baat kar raha hoon? Mere pass toh bas yeh vastr hain

Ladki Ek raaz bhari muskan ke saath

Ladki : Costume nahi shakti ka roop (form of power) Surya. Tumhara asli tej. Jab tumne manav roop liya tha, tab tumhari shakti chup gayi Thi Woh roop yahan Satyalok main surakshit hai Lekin abhi nahi…

Ladki ne apna haath aage badhaya aur talab se nikle gulabi kamalon ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Jab tum us tak pohunchoge tab dek lena Tumhari shakti tumhe bata degi ki woh kya hai Sirf pehchan zarori hain

Surya ne ek gehri sans li. Uski atma janti thi ki yeh raaz kitna zarori hai

Surya : Samaj gaya

Ladki turant mudi aur pul ki taraf chali gayi. Surya bi uske piche chal diya Pul se guzarte hue Surya ne dekha ki talab ka pani uske chalne par apne ap hat jata tha aisa lag Raha tha jaise Pani bi khud surya ko Rasta de Rahi ho

Woh dono mandir ki taraf nahi gaye. Ladki ne ek dusre chote raste ki taraf ishara kiya, jo do waterfalls ke beech se hokar ek chote floating island ki taraf jaata tha

Jab woh is naye dweep par pohche, Surya ne Pehchan liya ki yahan atmosphere badal gaya hain Center main ek vishal pathar ka stambh ( pillar ) tha jiske charon taraf neele aur gulabi rang ki roshni sarpilakar (spiral) main ghum rahi thi. Upar, ek vishal moon (chand) chamak raha tha, jismain ek neli urja dund rahi thi Yeh sthan shakti ka केंद्र (centre) tha


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Ladki ne us sarpilakar stambh ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Surya Tumhe ab yeh pariksha dekar woh costume hasil karna hi hoga. Tumhara asli tej is stambh ke shikar (peak) par chupa hua hai. Tumhari shakti tabhi jagegi jab tumhari atma teen sawalon ke sahi jawab degi

Surya : Pariksha? Kaise sawal? Aur agar main fail hua toh?

Ladki ( Shanti se ) : Sawal tumhare jeevan ke hisab se honge. Tumhari Atma se jude hue. Raste main aane wali har chunauti ek sawal hogi. Aur fail hone ka matlab… tum manav roop main hamesha ke liye kho jaoge, aur Bramhand per burai ka Raaj Hoga jis se phir koi bi burai ko rok Nahin payega

Surya : Aur ap Kya ap mere saath rahogi


Ladki : Nahi Yeh pariksha vyaktigat (personal) hain Tumhe akela chalna hoga, apni nishchay (determination) ke saath Lekin yaad rakna, Satyalok ki roshni hamesha tumhare saath hai

Surya

( Ek nishchay ke saath ) : Theek hain Main apni pariksha ke liye taiyar hoon

Ladki ne dheere se sir jukaya Uska chehra ek antim baar tez roshni se chamak utha

Ladki : Shubh yatra Surya. Samay tumhara hai

Aur agle hi pal, Ladki wahan se gayab ho gayi, jaise woh hawa main ghul gayi ho. Surya akela khada tha, us sarpilakar stambh ke paas. Uski Aankhoo main tez roshni thi, aur uske samne uske jeevan ki sabse badi pariksha khadi thi

To wahi college main :-

College ka maidan, Jaha kuch ghante pehle hasi, shor, aur jevan tha, ab ek bayanak, adrishya yudh-kshetra ban chuka tha. Asman kaala pad chuka tha, jaise suraj ko kisi vishal hatheli ne daba diya ho. Hawa main bijli aur maut ka shor chha chuka tha. Mousam ka dar itna ghana tha ki aas pass ki buildings ke kanch apne ap chatak (shattering) rahe the

Samne khada tha DAHAKAAL – 30 foot ka lohe aur kala lava se bana Vishal asur Uska jism dhoop se nahi, Kall Dand ki laal-kali bijli se chamak raha tha. Woh bijli har pal uske lohe ke jism main laplapati thi, jaise koi bimari tez ho rahi ho. Uske panv jahan padte the, wahan zameen Rakh ho jati thi
Uske samne, darti par akela khada tha N.Surya Uska roop sirf Surya jaisa nahi tha Woh ab manav nahi balki shuddh Tej ka sanchar tha Uska chehra Surya jaisa Masom tha, lekin uski Aankhoo main do bramhand gati (movement) kar rahe the—ek neela shunya aur dusra sunehra prakash

Uske charon taraf ek slow motion main teen divya mandal (Divine Rings) ghum rahe the Pehla mandal shwet tha ( Vayu ) dusra neela ( Jal ) aur tesra sunehra ( Prithvi ) Woh Teeno ek saath ghum rahe the jaise teen suraj ek jagha khel rahe hon aur unki gati se samay bi dhema pad chuka tha

Dahakaal aur N.Surya ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the Dahakaal ki aankhoo main Andere ki aag thi aur N.Surya ki aankhoo main hazaron yugon ki shanti thi

Zameen kamp rahi thi. Pahadon ki jagha ab college ki buildings thi, par shor wahi maha-pralay ka tha

Dahakaal ne apna vishal haath uthaya. Uske haath main samai Kall Dand ki shakti ek akhri galti karne ko taiyar thi.
Dahakaal ki awaz itni tez ki asman phat gaya mano darti bhi dard main ho


Dahakaal : Tum Surya ke roop main ho… lekin tum main Satyalok ki piri shakti bol rahi hai. Acha… aaj main Bramhand ki do sabse badi taqat ek saath nasht karunga! Pahle pahle us ladki ki takat aur dusri is darti ka ant


DAHAKAAL ne apne hathon ko jor se jod diya Uske jism se nikalti sari kali bijli uper asmaan ki taraf chali gayi

KALL DAND : MAHAPRALY CHAKRA

asman phat gaya Waha koi awaz nahi hui sirf ek tez aag thi. asman se ek 3 kilometre chauda kaala-laal chakra sedhe N.Surya ki taraf utra Yeh chakra sirf gol nahi tha yeh andere ki prateek thi. Uske andar lakhon bijli ke sanp (snakes) apne nishanon ko dund rahe the

Dahakaal ki aankhoo main gamand (arrogance) tha Yeh war itna shaktishali tha ki jahan se guzra, wahan pahad bi rakh ban gaye the aur ab uske raste main college ki imartein thi

N.Surya ne dheere se sans bhari Uske chehre par ek bi bhav nahi badla Yeh shanti hi uski sabse badi taqat thi

Uske sharir se nikalti tez, shwet sunehri roshni ab uske teen mandalon ke saath ghul gayi. Roshni itni shuddh thi ki aas-pass ka Andhera apne ap piche hat raha tha

Usne apna daya haath aage kiya. Uske haath main koi talwar nahi thi

sirf anant shakti ka kendra (center) tha.

“ANANT PRAKASH : BRAMHAND VIRAAT„

Uske haath se ek Shudh shwet-sunehri kiran nikli – lekin yeh koi kiran nahi thi. Yeh tez roshni ki Dewar thi. Yeh shakti itni tez thi ki andhera bi pal bhar ke liye jal gaya, aur kaal ki dehshat bi mit gayi.
Kiran ne MahaPralay Chakra ko beech main se chera

Wahan koi takkar nahi hui. Koi vishal damaka nahi hua. Sirf ek pal ki shanti thi, jab shuddhta paap se mili

Chakra ke do tukde huye aur woh tukde asman main hi bhasm ho gaye Bijli ke sanp roshni main badal gaye. Pure shehar main ek pal ke liye tez din ho gaya, jaise teen suraj ek saath ugg aaye hon

Dahakaal ki aankheen phail gayi Uska gamand toot chuka tha

Dahakaal : Yeh… yeh kya shakti hai Tune mera mahapralay aise kaise khatam kar diya

N.Surya dheere se bola uski awaz shanti ki garaj thi

N.Surya : Yeh shakti nahi… yeh Satyalok ka niyam (law) hai. Jahan Andera hoga wahan roshni ka pravah swabhavik (natural) hain Tumne todna sekha maine jodna sekha Hain ab tera ant Hoga Dahakaal

N.Surya ne samne ki taraf dekha College ki buildings adhi toot chuki thi zameen phat chuki thi, aur students aur teachers dar ke mare behosh padhe the

Usne apna baya haath uthaya. Uske haath se teen mandalon ki shakti ek saath nikli

“DIVYA SANKALP : AMRIT VARSHA”


asman se pani nahi, balki lakhon sunehre-neele phool girne lage Yeh phool sirf sundar nahi the yeh Satyalok ki rooh (soul) the Jahan jahan phool gire, wahan zameen phir se hari ho gayi Toti hui buildings ke tukde wapis judne lage. Ped paudhe phir se jee uthe

Amrit Varsha ka prabhav Dahakaal par bi hua. Uske jism par lagi Kali bijli shant hone lagi aur kuch der ke liye uska gussa dhema pad gaya Usne mehsos kiya ki uski shakti chin rahi hai

Dahakaal iska virod nahi seh saka. Usne N.Surya ki shakti ko apna apman samjha

Dahakaal gusse se chillaya, uski chekh main hazaron Asuro ka krod tha

Dahakaal : RUK JA! Main tera yeh bachpana nahi dekhunga! Main vinash hoon! Aur ab tera ant nischit hai

Woh dauda 30 foot ka Vishal jism ek pal main N.Surya ke samne pohanch gaya Usne apna pura Kall Dand ek vishal talwar main badla lamba aur bayankar aur N.Surya par apni sari shakti se war kiya

KALL DAND : ASUR-ANGAAR TALWAR

Talwar neche giri. Agar yeh war lagta toh pura campus pal bhar main shunya ho jaata. Lekin N.Surya apni jagha sthir khada tha


N.Surya ne apne dono haatho ko dheere se upar uthaya. Uske charon taraf ghumte teen mandal tez raftar se ghumne lage aur ek saath jud gaye

“PARAM TATVA : KAAL-CHAKRA BANDHAN”

Uske charon taraf ek sunehra neela ghumta hua chakra bana Yeh chakra shakti ka nahi samay ka tha Chakra ke andar samay ki Teeno dishayain dik rahi thi bhoot (past) tez raftar se chalta hua vartmaan (present) ek bindu par thehra hua, aur bhavishya (future) ek tez roshni ki tarah aage badta hua

Dahakaal ki Asur Angaar Talwar us chakra se takrayi aur… Theek ushi pal… ruk gayi

Tension itni tez thi ki dono ki shakti apas main takra kar ek shunya bana rahi thi. Dahakaal apni puri shakti se talwar ko aage dakel raha tha, lekin talwar kaal ki deewar se aage nahi badh payi
N.Surya ne dheere se apna haath ghumaaya

Aur phir… Talwar palat (reversed) gayi. Samay ne Dahakaal ki shakti ko hi uske khilaf istemal kar diya

Talwar ulta mud kar tez raftar se Dahakaal ke sene main ghus gayi

“BOOM!!!!„

Dahakaal ke jism se tez awaz nikli. Woh dard se chillaya aur uska vishal jism 800 meter Peche ud kar zameen main 50 foot ka gehra gaddha bana gaya. Khoon ki jagha uske seene se kali bijli behti thi, jo zameen ko jala rahi thi


Dahakaal gusse aur apman main pagal ho gaya. Usne apne dono haatho se zameen par mukka mara. Ab usne apni antim aur sabse bhayanak shakti istemal ki

KALL DAND : MRITYU SANKET

Zameen tez raftar se phat gayi. College ka maidan ek Vishal, kala muh ban gaya. Usmain se lakhon kale haath nikle, jo N.Surya ko pakadne aaye. Yeh haath sirf haath nahi the, yeh Kall Dhwaj ki tapasya ka shunya roop tha

N.Surya ki aankhoo main ab ek naya sankalp tha. Usne apna tesra, sabse shaktishali mandal jageaya. Teen mandalon ki shakti uski atma se jud gayi

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM SWAROOP : TRINETRA MAHANYAAS”

Uske maathe par ek tesra neela-sunehra aankh khula. Yeh aankh gyan, shanti, aur nyay ka prateek tha. Us ankh se ek shwet prakash nikla – itna shudh ki sabhi kale hath rakh ho gaye Prakash sedha Dahakaal ke dil tak gaya

Jaise hi prakash dil main ghusa Dahakaal ke andar ka Sara paap, krod lobh aur Kall Dand ki tapasya sab ek saath jalne laga. Uska bhayankar jism andar se pighal raha tha

Dahakaal bhayanak dard main chillaya, uski awaz main khud ka ant tha

Dahakaal : Nahi… meri shakti… meri shakti mujhe kha rahi hai!! Yeh shuddhta mujhe jala rahi hain

Uske jism par bijli ki tarah lakdak lakdak phatne lagi. Kall Dand ki sari bijli andar se hi usko jalane lagi

N.Surya dheere se aage badha Usne apna daya haath Dahakaal ke seene par rakha

N.Surya dhimi lekin garajti awaz jo Dahakaal ki rooh tak gayi

N.surya : Tune Bramhand ke niyam tode. Tune sirf vinash chuna Ab tu shunya main shanti payega… sada ke liye. Yeh Satyalok ka antim nyay hai.

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM NYAAY : PARAM SHUNYA DWARM

Uske haath se ek chota sa shwet-neela gola bana. Yeh gola bada nahi tha lekin uska wazan pure Bramhand jitna tha. Gola Dahakaal ke seene main ghus gaya.
Dahakaal ka pura 30 foot ka jism ek pal ke liye shwet ho gaya… jaise usse sara kala rang chen liya gaya ho. Phir… ek chote se shunya (black-white hole) main convert hokar gayab ho gaya Saath main Kall Dand ki puri shakti bi hamesha ke liye shunya main sama gayi


Pure maidan main ekdum sannata chha gaya Dahakaal ka ant ho chuka tha Shunya ka chota sa gola dheere-dheere band ho gaya

Sirf sunehre neele phool hawa main ud rahe the jo Amrit Varsha se aaye the
N.Surya ne asman ki taraf dekha Uske sharir ki roshni dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi Uska roop wapis manav jaisa ho raha tha

N.Surya ( muskurate hue apne ap se ) :
Surya… ab tera samay aa gaya hai… Ab Veeranchal ka agla kaam shuru hoga

Uske teesre neele-sunehre aankh ab band ho chuke the Usne apne dono hatho ko dheere se upar uthaya

“SATYALOK KA PARAM AASHEESH : PUNARJANM AURA”

Uske hathon se ek shudh shwet sunehri lehri pure campus par phail gayi. Yeh lehri sirf marammat nahi kar rahi thi, yeh kaal-chakra ko wapis laa rahi thi

Jahan building tooti thi, wahan nayi dewarain khud ban gayi. Jahan zameen phati thi, wahan phir se hari ghans ug aayi. Toote hue ped, bench, canteen ka glass – sab kuch pal bhar main pehle jaisa ho gaya. Jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir usne apna daya haath sabki taraf kiya, jo ab bi wahan behosh padhe the

“DIVYA SANKALP : SMRITI MOKSHA”

Ek halki neeli roshni un sab ke maathe par lagi. Naira, Mehar, Sonia, Sapna, Rocky – aur pure college sabki aankheen ek pal ke liye shwet ho gayi. Unki Yadain – Dahakaal ka vishal roop, bijli, aag, tabahi – sab kuch ek jalak main mita diya gaya. Dahakaal ka naam bi unke dimag se gayab ho chuka tha.
Ab unke dimag main sirf itna yaad tha ki woh canteen main baith kar masti kar rahe the, phir bell baji, aur sab class ki taraf ja rahe the. Unki atma shant ho chuki thi


N.Surya ne apna roop dheere se badla ab woh bilkul normal Surya lag raha tha, college student ki tarha Usne tez kadam liye aur apne doston ke paas gaya jo ab uthe the

Surya bilkul normal awaz main, muskurate hue jismain ab koi tez shakti nahi thi

N.surya : Are yar, sorry! Mujhe abhi ek bohut zarori kaam yaad aa gaya Kam bohut important Hain ishi ki waja se shayad Kal bi naa AA Pao to Tum sab log tension mat Lena okay

Naira ( ab bilkul normal todi chinta se, apne baalo ko theek karte hue ) :
Kya hua Surya? Sab thek toh hai na? Tumhari aankheen thodi laal lag rahi hain

Surya ( muskurate hue) :Bas todi si problem hai, kal tak sab sort ho jayega. Tum log ghar jao, rest karo. Main message kar dunga okay

Sonia : agar kuch bi ho toh ek call kar dena. Hum aa jayenge. Apna khayal rakhna

Sapna ( aankhoo main pyaar aur chinta ) : Haan chote, jaldi wapis aana hum sab tera with karega okay

N.surya : ap sab tension mat lo maim thek ho jaldi hi AA jaoga okay bye everyone

Sab ne ek dusre ko hug kiya, bye bola aur apne-apne raste nikal gaye. Kisi ko kuch yaad nahi tha. Campus ek dum normal tha – jaise har roz hota hain
Surya un sab ko door tak jate dekhta raha Uske chehre par aaj pehli baar apne manav jeevan ko chodne ka dukh tha

Phir usne dheere se palta, aur college ke peche ek bilkul sunsan jagha purane store-room ke peche chala gaya Wahan koi nahi tha Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati bell ki awaz Thi

Wahan ponch kar usne apna haath aage badhaya

Ek chota sa sunehra neela gola prakat hua – portal Woh portal ladki ki sakti ka Prateek tha
Usne ek akhri bar college ki taraf dekha, muskuraya, aur dheere se bola:
Surya ( khud se ) : Ab… asli Yudh baki hai

Woh portal main kadam rakha.
Portal band hua. Wahan sirf thodi si sunehri neeli roshni ek pal ke liye chamki… phir woh bi gayab ho gayi.
Ab college ek dum shant tha Jaise kuch hua hi na ho

Lekin door asman main ek tez roshni phir se chamki – jaise koi aur, bohut bada tofan aane wala ho Aur woh roshni sedhe Satyalok ki taraf ja rahi thi... Veeranchal ke aagman ki ghoshna karte hue


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Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Xabhi123 bhai.....
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Bramhand ke us anant shunya main ek aisi jagha Jaha kaal (time) apni pehchan kho deta tha aur Aakash sirf ek gehra raaz tha Wahan suraj ki garmi hazaron yugon se nahi pahunchi thi, chand ki chandni ka koi nishan nahi tha aur galaxiyon ka jhilmilata samundar bi is gehre shunya se dar kar duri bana chuka tha Yeh sthan "Anant-Gupt-Kshetra" ke naam se jaana jaata tha aur iski thandi maut si shanti main hi Devlok ka sarvashreshth sthal Amar-Sabha tika hua tha

Amar-Sabha hazar surajon jitni tez roshni se chamak rahi thi. Uska safed marmar ka floor anant shakti ka prateek tha jahan Devlok ke panch devta apne divya singhasanon par virajman the


( Guys Yaha main Naam mension Nahin kar Raha kyunke yeh forum ke rules ke again Hain to main Unke Naam ke sirf pahle lafz likhoga okay to confused mat hona okay )


Devraj ( Vajra dhaari aur netritva karta) S.Dev ( Tejasvi aur Kal drishya ) A.Dev ( Jwala aur shakti ke swami ) V.Dev ( Gati aur shwas ke neta ) aur J.Dev 4 ( Jal aur gehraiyon ka rakshak )

( Guys Yaha per vayu aur Varun dono Naam v se start hote Hain to Maine Varun ke v ki jagha J lik diya Hain confused mat hona okay )


Aisa shant mahul sadiyon se amar tha Par aaj us Amar-Sabha main kuch alag tha ek bayanak shanti ke beech maha parivartan ki prateeksha thi

Sabse pehle devo ne mehsos kiya. Unhone koi awaz nahi suni koi roshni nahi dekhi... unhone sirf shunya ki dhadkan ko badlate hue mehsos kiya.
Aur phir... woh tez chaka chaund karne wali roshni prakat hui

Yeh roshni aisi thi jaise pura bramhand ek saath jal utha ho aur phir ushi pal shant ho gaya ho Roshni itni tez thi ki Amar-Sabha ke safed marmar ke floor par uski neli sunehri Parchaiyan nachne lagi Roshni ke center main ek chota bindu tha jo pal bhar main phail kar ek vishal, aag sa gola ban raha tha Yeh gola roshni ka nahi tha yeh shakti ka sang raha tha

Devraj ne pehle dhemi awaz main sanket diya unki aankheen zor se chamakne lagi

Devraj : Yeh kya ho raha hai…

Unka Vajra apne ap hi vibrate karne laga tha jaise koi purani shakti use wapis bula rahi ho

S.Dev ne apni divya drishti se us bindu ko dekha. Unka chehra pal bhar main* safed pad gaya Unki divya tejas (divine radiance) kuch pal ke liye kam ho gayi. Unki Aankhoo main dehshat aur pehle yug ki yadain saaf jalak rahi thi

S.Dev : Yeh… yeh roshni… yeh wahi hai… woh sanket… Maha Yug ka sanket…


A.Dev ki jwalayain buri tarah se tez ho gayi yeh unka gussa nahi, balki utsah tha

A.Dev : Yeh… yeh wahi roshni hai jo us din thi… hazaron saal pehle… jab Samrat… jab Veeranchal gayab hua tha…


usne apni shakti ko vibhakt kiya tha…
V.Dev ne shunya se guzarti hawa ko rok kar mehsos kiya Unke jism main kampan tha

V.Dev : Bramhand kamp raha hai… yeh kampan dar ka nahi hai yeh aagman (arrival) ka hain Naye Tattva ka aagman ka

J.Dev ne apne samundron ko pukara ( jo sirf unke mastishk main the ) lekin unka man samundar tufaan se hil raha tha


J.Dev: Yeh… yeh nahi ho sakta… Kaal-Chakra wapis ghum gaya hai…


Aur phir... woh hua.
Roshni ke center se ek vishal neela sunehra gola nikla Yeh gola tez raftar se badne laga Uske badne ki gati aisi thi jaise samay piche daud raha ho Pal bhar main woh ek pura grah ban gaya Ek grah jaisa gola par jeevant shakti se bharpoor

VEERANCHAL – Uska naam tha


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Yeh grah sirf ek graha nahi tha Yeh sankalp, tyag, aur anant balance ka jeevant roop tha. Uske charon taraf neli aur sunehri aag ki leharain thi. Yeh aag jalati nahi thi Shanti deti thi. Uske center main ek vishal chakra ghum raha tha – Panch Tattva ka Chakra – jismain panch rang the Neela (Jal), Laal (Agni), Safed (Vayu), Sunehra (Prithvi), aur Kala (Shunya/Akash) Yeh chakra itni tez raftar se ghum raha tha ki uski dhwani (sound) samay aur shunya ki deewaron ko tod kar pure bramhand main gunj rahi thi


Jaise hi yeh grah pura prakat hua pure bramhand main maha bhukamp aa gaya
Galaxiyon ke beech ka shunya zor se hilne laga. Tare apni jagha se hat gaye jaise koi haath unhe dakel raha ho Nebulae phatne lage Black Holes bi kamp uthe unki kheenchne ki shakti pal bhar ke liye dhemi pad gayi Samay ki leharain bi ruk gayi

Amar-Sabha main Devon ne apne singhasanon se uth kar sir jhukaya Unke chehre par dar tha dar is anant shakti ka, lekin saath hi ek ajeeb si khushi bi thi khushi is balance ke wapis aane ki.
Devraj ne apna Vajra uthaya lekin unka haath kamp raha tha Devraj ab sankoch se bhaybheet the


Devraj : Yeh… yeh Veeranchal hai… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… Woh wapis aa gaya… Samrat ki shakti ka prateek.

S.Dev ki aankhoo main ansu chalak aaye

S.Dev : Jiska dar tha… wahi hua… Lekin dar vinash ka nahi tha dar parivartan ka tha Samrat wapis aa chuka hai… aur ab Kall Dhwaj ka ant nischit hain Lekin uske bad Jo Hoga uska abhi se soch kar dar lag Raha Hain

A.Dev ki jwalayain aankhoo main tez ho gayi

A.Dev : Us din… jab woh gayab hua tha… tab pura bramhand hil gaya tha… aaj phir wahi ho raha hai… shanti se pehle ka maha bhumkamp

V.Dev ki aankhoo main gehra gyan jalak raha tha

V.Dev : Yeh grah sirf ek grah nahi tha… yeh Samrat ki rooh ka hissa tha jo uske tyag ke baad yeh grah gayab ho gaya tha … ab yeh wapis aa gaya… matlab... Veeranchal ne purn roop le liya hain


J.Dev ne sir jhukaya.

J.Dev : Matlab… woh wapis aa gaya hai… Samrat… woh punarjanm le chuka hai… Kavir ki icha puri ho gayi…



to wahi ek Anjan jagha per :-


Jab pura Bramhand kamp raha tha Kaal Granthalaya ki gehraiyon main Shanti thi Rishi Bhramar aur Kavir jo ab Veeranchal ki shakti se bhega hua tha, par abhi bi manav roop main stir tha asmaan ke darpan main is drishya ko dekh rahe the.
Kavir ki aankhoo main Vishal Chakra ki pratibimb thi Woh hairat se Rishi Bhramar ko dekta raha

Kavir ( Dhemi, par Awaz main Anant-Shanti ) : Rishi… yeh… yeh grah… kya yeh meri akhri icha ka natija hai? Kya yeh Veeranchal ki shakti ka bhautik roop hain

Rishi Bhramar muskuraye Unka chehra apni Sari shanti se bharmar tha

Rishi Bhramar : Beta Kavir woh grah sirf grah nahi hai. Woh Tumhara Tyag hain Jab Samrat Veeranchal vibhakt hua tha, toh uski rooh ka bahari kosh (outer shell) is grah main chala gaya tha. Woh kosh prakat ho gaya, kyunke tumne uske teesre tukde – Icha-Shakti – ko purn kar diya

Kavir ne dheere se apne haath dekhe jahan Neeli-Sunehri roshni abhi bi thehri hui thi

Kavir : Lekin Rishi… Veeranchal ab wapis aa gaya toh Kya ab Maha yudh nischit hai? Veeranchal ke prakat hone se sab itne dar kyun rahe hain jabke woh khud balance ka swami Hain

Rishi Bhramar ki aankhoo main gehrai thi

Rishi Bhramar : sab Dev Veeranchal se nahi darte Kavir Woh darte hain Kall Dhwaj ki Pratikriya (reaction) se Veeranchal ka punarjanm uske ant ka aramb Hain Jab Shaktiyan ek saath aati hain toh Andhera zor se ladta hai Aur Kall Dhwaj hamesha Veeranchal ka dusman raha hain

Kavir : Toh ab… meri bhomika kya hai? Kya main wapis Veeranchal main jaa Sakta ho Ya uske saath rehkar burai se ladhoga

Rishi Bhramar ( akhri shant sargoshi ) : Kavir Tumhare manav-roop ne tyag kiya hain Tumhara grah prakat ho chuka hai. Ab nirnay tumhara hai Tumhara jeevan ab ek yudh hai Kavir. Aur yeh yudh andar se shuru hokar bahar khatam hoga

rashi Bhramar ki baat sunkar kavir ne koi jawab Nahin diya aur woh uth kar Usne Rishi Bhramar ko pranam Kiya aur waha se chale gaye

Kall Dhwajgarh andhere aur krurta (cruelty) ka Vishal Samrajya. Usi pal, jab Veeranchal prakat hua, Kall Dhwaj apne singhasan par baitha tha. Uska gussa shant nahi hua tha. Viraksha ki haar, Dahakaal ka bheja jaana – sab kuch uske dimag main ek tufan bana hua tha. Uska chehra kala pad chuka tha uske honth kamp rahe the

Tabhi darbar ke darwaze par ek tez, bhayanak awaz aayi jaise koi bimeari andar aa gayi ho

Ek chota sa darpok sa Kabri Asur andar aya. Uska sharir sara kamp raha tha jaise thandi lag rahi ho jabki Kall Dhwajgarh hamesha aag se bhara rehta tha Uska matha paseene se bhara tha.
Kabri Asur kanpte hue uski awaz dabi hui thi

Kabri : Maharaj… Maharaj… bohut badi khabar hai…

Kall Dhwaj ne uski taraf dekha. Uski Aankhoo main aag nahi shunya tha Usne dheere se apna sir jhukaya

Kall Dhwaj : Bolo! Agar tumhara shabd mere gusse se chota hua toh tumhari rakh bi nahi milegi

Kabri Asur ne Sara darr ek saath nigeal liya.
Kabri Asur : Veeranchal… woh grah… wapis aa gaya hai…

Kall Dhwaj ka chehra ek pal main safed pad gaya Usne apna singhasan ka hathla itne zor se pakad liya ki uski ungliyan pathar main ghus gayi Kall Dhwajgarh ka sinhasan pathar ka nahi Asuri Dhatu ka tha

Kall Dhwaj dhemi, lekin Bayankar jaise ek mara hua shaitan bol raha ho

Kall Dhwaj : Kya… kaha… tumne…? Yeh jhoot hai! Jhoot bolo Tum ke yeh jhoot bol Rahe ho

Kabri Asur ne sir jhuka liya. Uske hoth apas main jud chuke the

Kabri Asur : Maharaj… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… woh aaj subah se dikhai de raha hai… pure bramhand main… har jagha… har Kisi ko pata chal gaya Hain ke Veeranchal grah wapis aa gaya Hain


Kall Dhwaj ne apni aankheen band ki Uske dimag main woh purana Yudh yaad aa gaya Woh yudh jis main usne apni puri sena kho di thi Woh yudh jis main Samrat ne usko buri tarha hara kar Veeranchal se buri tarha se nikal diya aur kall Dhwaj ko Shakti bi Usse cheen li Th


Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur gusse main uski sansain tez thi

Kall Dhwaj : Nahi… nahi… yeh nahi ho sakta… woh toh mar chuka tha… uski shakti toh maine hi… khatam ki thi… main hi Bramhand ka samrat hoon

Usne apni aankheen kholi Uski Aankhoo main gussa kam Bayankar dar ziyada tha. Pure darbar main sannata chha gaya

Kall Dhwaj ne apna haath uthaya aur us kabri asur ko apni taraf khincha Asur ka sharir hawa main ud gaya. Asur chekh bi nahi paya

Kall Dhwaj Chillate hue uski awaz Bramhand main gunj Rahi Thi

Kall Dhwaj ( gusse main Chillate hue ) : TUNE MUJHE YE KHABAR KYUN DI?! TUNE MUJHE DARAYA HAI MERI SHANTI BHANG KI HAI TUMNE

Usne apna haath aur zor se dabaya. Kabri Asur ka sharir pal bhar main jal kar kali Rakh ho gaya aur woh rakh hawa main mil gayi

Kall Dhwaj ab apne singhasan se utha. Uska jism kamp raha tha Uske dimag main sirf ek hi vichar tha Apna Ant Rokna

Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur pagalpan ki had tak

Kall Dhwaj : Agar woh wapis aa gaya… toh mera ant nischit hai… woh mujhe nahi chodege… woh mujhe zinda nahi chodege… usne mera sab kuch cheena tha


Usne apne darbar ki taraf dekha Uske chehre par ab gussa nahi balki khoonkhar pagalpan chaya hua tha

Kall Dhwaj ( tez awaz main ) : “ABHI KE ABHI! POORI SENA KO TAIYAR KARO! HAR EK ASUR, HAR EK DAITYA, PURE GRAH MAIN JITNE BI LOG HAIN SABKO TAIYAR KARO ! HUM ABHI KE ABHI US GRAH PAR HAMLA KAREGE! MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! JIS GRAH KO WOH APNI ROOH KEHTA HAI MAIN USE JALA DUNGA

Usne apn Dand uthaya ( jo Black Hole ke core se bana tha ) aur zameen par zor se mara. Pura Kall Dhwajgarh tez awaz ke saath hil gaya aur uski dewaron se agni nikalne lagi

Kall Dhwaj akhri cheekh, uski Aankhoo main Bramhand ka Vinash tha

Kall Dhwaj : MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! CHAHE ISKE LIYE MUJHE PURA BRAMHAND JALANA PADE! MAHA YUDH KA AARAMBH ABHI HOGA

Uske aadesh ke saath hi, pura Kall Dhwajgarh yudh ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Maha Sankat aane wala tha Veeranchal wapis aa chuka tha aur uske dusman aur dost sabhi jante the ki ab shanti asanbhav hain

To wahi Satyalok main :-

Surya aur Lady of Satyalok us tez roshni ke beech tezi se aage badh rahe the. Surya ka jism tej aur ajeeb urja se bhara tha Usne pehli baar Bramhand ki asli shakti ko itne kareeb se mehsos kiya tha Lady of Satyalok uske aage thi unka chehra shant lekin sankalp se bhara tha

Surya Hairani se aas-pass ki roshni ko dekte hue ladki se kehta Hain

Surya : Devi yeh kaun si jagha hai Hum kitni tezi se travel kar rahe hain

Ladki : Yeh kaal aur samay se pare hai, Surya Hum man ki raftar se chal rahe hain Is se pehle ki Kall Dhwaj apni nakami se dar kar koi aur pagalpan kare, humain us tak pahunchna hoga

Surya ( Thoda ghabrahat main ) : Lekin Devi Dahakaal itna shaktishali tha uske pass Kall Dand ki shakti thi Aur jise aapne mere roop main Dharti par choda tha... woh kaun tha? Kya woh apki shakti hain

Ladki : ( Muskurate hue bina ruke ) : Haan Surya. Woh main thi aur tum the Meri adhi shakti jo shuddhi aur gyan ki rakshak hai, use tumhara roop diya gaya tha Kall Dand ki shakti ko sirf brahmandiya urja hi hara sakti thi

Surya ( Gehri soch main ) : Toh main kall dhwaj ka Samna kaise karunga Jab ap usko akhiri mauka de rahi thi... tab usne aisa Kya kaha jis se ap itna gussa ho gayi ke itni jald hi ap us kall Dhwaj ka ant Karna Chahti Hain

Lady of Satyalok ruk gayi Unke rukte hi aaspass ki roshni bi shant ho gayi, jaise koi tez nade ruk gayi ho Unka chehra ab dard aur gehre rahasya se bhara tha

Lady of Satyalok Dheere se boli unki awaz main hazaron yugo ka bojh tha

Ladki : Kall Dhwaj ki asli kamzori shakti nahi uska ahankaar hain Aur uska ahankaar mujhse juda hai Sadiyon pehle jab Brahmand main Samrat ka raaj tha... Kall Dhwaj unka sabse vishwaspaatr (most trusted) senapati tha

Surya : Samrat (man main) yeh Samrat Kon Hain akhir kyun yeh Naam sunte hi man main ek ajeeb si feeling AA jati Hain aisa lagta hain jaise ke main hi Samrat ho

Abhi Surya soch hi Raha tha ke Lady of Satyalok phir se boli

Ladki : Haan. Samrat Kall Dhwaj ne hamesha Samrat ki shakti aur niyamon ka apman kiya Ek baar usne Samrat ke samne mujhe pane ki ghustakhi (audacity) ki Samrat ne usko apne Darbar se nikal diya aur uski shakti cheen li. Us din se, Kall Dhwaj ne Samrat se badla lene aur mujhe pane ke liye Kall Dand ki paapi tapasya shuru ki. Woh janta hai, agar woh mujhe hasil kar leta hai toh woh Samrat ki sabse badi jeet ko har main badal dega

Surya ( Gusse main ) : Toh woh badle ke liye yeh sab kar raha hain

Ladki : Haan Lekin ab yeh Samrat ki baat nahi hain Ab yeh Brahmand ki shanti ki baat hain Aur ismain tumhara Gyan aur Sankalp hi kaam aayega

Unke chehre par ek gahra nishchay aya

Ladki : Tumhe Samrat ke Samrajya Satyalok main aye ho Surya. Yaha tumhe woh shakti milegi jiski tumhe zarorat hain Main tumhe kaal ki seemaon se pare sidhe dwaar tak pahunchati hoon


Lady of Satyalok ke akhri shabd tezi se roshni main ghul gaye Aur agle hi pal, Surya ek tez neele portal (dwaar) se bahar nikla aur uske jism ko ek ajeeb si shanti ne ghera (surround) kar liya Us portal ki tez roshni uske sharir se guzri, aur jab woh thehra, toh usne apni aankhoo par vishwas nahi kiya

Woh Anant Shunya ka tez, thanda andhera gayab ho chuka tha. Uske badle Surya khada tha Divya Prakash main jaha har kan main jeevan tha Yeh Satyalok tha

Pehla ehsas Vayu ka tha—ek aisi hawa jo saanson main amrit ghol de. Dusra ehsas roshni ka tha ek Sun (Suraj) jaisa gola jo Bramhand ke har taraf apna rang faila raha tha Us Sun ke upar kai galaxiyon ke jhilmilate nishan the Badal ruyi ki tarah safed the aur un badalon ke upar chote-chote floating islands ( udte hue dweepv) tehar rahe the

Samne do vishal sundar arch (dwaar-stambh) the jo gulabi aur neele pholon se dhake hue the Un dwaron ke beech se Surya ne Satyalok ki asli shan dekhi.
Satyalok koi aam darti nahi thi. Yeh Shakti aur Saundarya ka mishran tha.
Center main ek Vishal, sunehri mandir shaan se khada tha. Mandir ek bade floating island par bana hua tha, aur us island se charon taraf do vishal waterfalls (jharna) shanti se niche gir rahe the. Woh pani sirf jal nahi tha divya urja ka pravah tha. Woh Pani niche guzarte hue beech main bane ek Vishal talab (pond) main mil raha tha


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Us talab main hazaron kamal khile hue the neele gulabi naurangi (orange) – jinki roshni Pani main dheere dheere nach rahi thi. Talab ke upar do sundar pathar ke pul the jo pholon se saje the aur woh pul mandir ki taraf jate the


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Har taraf vriksh the jinki shakhon par here chamak rahe the aur unke pass chote chote floating islands the jin par chote chote mandir bane the Surya ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Usne apne ap ko pukara (summoned his focus) Uske manav-roop ki thakan is mahol main gayab ho gayi

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Surya ab dheere se us talab ki taraf badha Uske kadam awaz nahi kar rahe the, jaise woh hawa par chal raha ho. Jab woh pul ke pass pohcha, usne apni pehli nazar samne badi murti par Dali.
Vaha talab ke beech main chote se teele (mound) par ek vishal murti khadi thi. Murti safed sangmarmar ki thi, par usmain sunehre aur neele nishan the. Woh murti ek majboot, divya-yoddha ki thi, jisne ek haath main tez roshni ki talwar utha rakhi thi, aur uski Aankhoo mein anant shanti thi. Murti ke paas ek khoobsurat mayur (peacock) khada tha, jiske pankh neeli roshni se chamak rahe the


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Surya us murti ko dhyan se dek hi raha tha, ki tabhi talab ke pani par halke se chalte hue woh ladki uske samne aayi. Uska chehra shanti aur saundarya ka prateek tha. Uske vastra gulabi kamal ke patton se bune the, aur uski Aankhoo main Satyalok ka Gyan bhara hua tha

Ladki : Swagat hai Surya… humari prateeksha (our wait) safal hui


Uski awaz shehad ki tarah methi aur Vayu ki tarah halki thi

Surya ( Us murti se nazar hataye bina ) : Swagat… waqai bohut sundar aur alokik jagha Hain yeh Satyalok waise Yeh murti kiski hai? Yeh yodha kaun hai, jiske paas mayur aur tej talwar hai

Ladki us murti ki taraf dekhi. Uske chehre par aadar (reverence) ka bhav tha


Ladki : Yeh murti hamare Samrat ki hai us Samrat ki jisne is sansar main sachai aur achai ko kabhi Nahin jhukne diya
Bohut mahan Samrat the woh

Surya ( Hairat se ) : Lekin woh yahan murti main kyun hain agar woh itne bade Samrat hain toh

Ladki : Samrat yahan is Liye hain kyunke unhone apni shakti ko bramhand main vibhakt (divided) kar diya tha. Woh ab humare saath bhautik roop main nahi hain lekin unki aashirwad aur shakti hamesha Satyalok ko suraksha deti hai. Lekin… yeh prateeksha jaldi khatam hogi

Surya : Kaisi prateeksha?

Ladki : Unka punarjanm ho chuka hai. Woh wapis aane wale hain aur iss baar purani shakti puri hogi Satyalok unke aagman ki prateeksha main hi jevit hai. Humari har sans unke liye Hain

Ladki ne aage bad kar talab ke pani se ek bond uthai aur Surya ke mathe par laga diya

Ladki : satyalok keval pholon aur pani ka sthan nahi hai Surya Yeh shuddhta ka antim chor hain Yahan har ek pool ek yug ka gyan rakhta hai, aur har ek bond ek katha batati hai


Ladki ne dheere se kuch pal chup reh kar Surya ki aankhoo main dekha Uske chehre par gambherta aa gayi thi


Ladki : Ab samay aa chuka hai, Surya. Veeranchal ka aagman ho Chuka Hain aur uske aagman se ke foran bad Tumhe apne vastr ( costume ) wapis hasil karna hai

Surya ( Hairat aur Uljhan main ) : Costume? Kaisa costume? Ap kis costume ki baat kar raha hoon? Mere pass toh bas yeh vastr hain

Ladki Ek raaz bhari muskan ke saath

Ladki : Costume nahi shakti ka roop (form of power) Surya. Tumhara asli tej. Jab tumne manav roop liya tha, tab tumhari shakti chup gayi Thi Woh roop yahan Satyalok main surakshit hai Lekin abhi nahi…

Ladki ne apna haath aage badhaya aur talab se nikle gulabi kamalon ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Jab tum us tak pohunchoge tab dek lena Tumhari shakti tumhe bata degi ki woh kya hai Sirf pehchan zarori hain

Surya ne ek gehri sans li. Uski atma janti thi ki yeh raaz kitna zarori hai

Surya : Samaj gaya

Ladki turant mudi aur pul ki taraf chali gayi. Surya bi uske piche chal diya Pul se guzarte hue Surya ne dekha ki talab ka pani uske chalne par apne ap hat jata tha aisa lag Raha tha jaise Pani bi khud surya ko Rasta de Rahi ho

Woh dono mandir ki taraf nahi gaye. Ladki ne ek dusre chote raste ki taraf ishara kiya, jo do waterfalls ke beech se hokar ek chote floating island ki taraf jaata tha

Jab woh is naye dweep par pohche, Surya ne Pehchan liya ki yahan atmosphere badal gaya hain Center main ek vishal pathar ka stambh ( pillar ) tha jiske charon taraf neele aur gulabi rang ki roshni sarpilakar (spiral) main ghum rahi thi. Upar, ek vishal moon (chand) chamak raha tha, jismain ek neli urja dund rahi thi Yeh sthan shakti ka केंद्र (centre) tha


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Ladki ne us sarpilakar stambh ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Surya Tumhe ab yeh pariksha dekar woh costume hasil karna hi hoga. Tumhara asli tej is stambh ke shikar (peak) par chupa hua hai. Tumhari shakti tabhi jagegi jab tumhari atma teen sawalon ke sahi jawab degi

Surya : Pariksha? Kaise sawal? Aur agar main fail hua toh?

Ladki ( Shanti se ) : Sawal tumhare jeevan ke hisab se honge. Tumhari Atma se jude hue. Raste main aane wali har chunauti ek sawal hogi. Aur fail hone ka matlab… tum manav roop main hamesha ke liye kho jaoge, aur Bramhand per burai ka Raaj Hoga jis se phir koi bi burai ko rok Nahin payega

Surya : Aur ap Kya ap mere saath rahogi


Ladki : Nahi Yeh pariksha vyaktigat (personal) hain Tumhe akela chalna hoga, apni nishchay (determination) ke saath Lekin yaad rakna, Satyalok ki roshni hamesha tumhare saath hai

Surya

( Ek nishchay ke saath ) : Theek hain Main apni pariksha ke liye taiyar hoon

Ladki ne dheere se sir jukaya Uska chehra ek antim baar tez roshni se chamak utha

Ladki : Shubh yatra Surya. Samay tumhara hai

Aur agle hi pal, Ladki wahan se gayab ho gayi, jaise woh hawa main ghul gayi ho. Surya akela khada tha, us sarpilakar stambh ke paas. Uski Aankhoo main tez roshni thi, aur uske samne uske jeevan ki sabse badi pariksha khadi thi

To wahi college main :-

College ka maidan, Jaha kuch ghante pehle hasi, shor, aur jevan tha, ab ek bayanak, adrishya yudh-kshetra ban chuka tha. Asman kaala pad chuka tha, jaise suraj ko kisi vishal hatheli ne daba diya ho. Hawa main bijli aur maut ka shor chha chuka tha. Mousam ka dar itna ghana tha ki aas pass ki buildings ke kanch apne ap chatak (shattering) rahe the

Samne khada tha DAHAKAAL – 30 foot ka lohe aur kala lava se bana Vishal asur Uska jism dhoop se nahi, Kall Dand ki laal-kali bijli se chamak raha tha. Woh bijli har pal uske lohe ke jism main laplapati thi, jaise koi bimari tez ho rahi ho. Uske panv jahan padte the, wahan zameen Rakh ho jati thi
Uske samne, darti par akela khada tha N.Surya Uska roop sirf Surya jaisa nahi tha Woh ab manav nahi balki shuddh Tej ka sanchar tha Uska chehra Surya jaisa Masom tha, lekin uski Aankhoo main do bramhand gati (movement) kar rahe the—ek neela shunya aur dusra sunehra prakash

Uske charon taraf ek slow motion main teen divya mandal (Divine Rings) ghum rahe the Pehla mandal shwet tha ( Vayu ) dusra neela ( Jal ) aur tesra sunehra ( Prithvi ) Woh Teeno ek saath ghum rahe the jaise teen suraj ek jagha khel rahe hon aur unki gati se samay bi dhema pad chuka tha

Dahakaal aur N.Surya ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the Dahakaal ki aankhoo main Andere ki aag thi aur N.Surya ki aankhoo main hazaron yugon ki shanti thi

Zameen kamp rahi thi. Pahadon ki jagha ab college ki buildings thi, par shor wahi maha-pralay ka tha

Dahakaal ne apna vishal haath uthaya. Uske haath main samai Kall Dand ki shakti ek akhri galti karne ko taiyar thi.
Dahakaal ki awaz itni tez ki asman phat gaya mano darti bhi dard main ho


Dahakaal : Tum Surya ke roop main ho… lekin tum main Satyalok ki piri shakti bol rahi hai. Acha… aaj main Bramhand ki do sabse badi taqat ek saath nasht karunga! Pahle pahle us ladki ki takat aur dusri is darti ka ant


DAHAKAAL ne apne hathon ko jor se jod diya Uske jism se nikalti sari kali bijli uper asmaan ki taraf chali gayi

KALL DAND : MAHAPRALY CHAKRA

asman phat gaya Waha koi awaz nahi hui sirf ek tez aag thi. asman se ek 3 kilometre chauda kaala-laal chakra sedhe N.Surya ki taraf utra Yeh chakra sirf gol nahi tha yeh andere ki prateek thi. Uske andar lakhon bijli ke sanp (snakes) apne nishanon ko dund rahe the

Dahakaal ki aankhoo main gamand (arrogance) tha Yeh war itna shaktishali tha ki jahan se guzra, wahan pahad bi rakh ban gaye the aur ab uske raste main college ki imartein thi

N.Surya ne dheere se sans bhari Uske chehre par ek bi bhav nahi badla Yeh shanti hi uski sabse badi taqat thi

Uske sharir se nikalti tez, shwet sunehri roshni ab uske teen mandalon ke saath ghul gayi. Roshni itni shuddh thi ki aas-pass ka Andhera apne ap piche hat raha tha

Usne apna daya haath aage kiya. Uske haath main koi talwar nahi thi

sirf anant shakti ka kendra (center) tha.

“ANANT PRAKASH : BRAMHAND VIRAAT„

Uske haath se ek Shudh shwet-sunehri kiran nikli – lekin yeh koi kiran nahi thi. Yeh tez roshni ki Dewar thi. Yeh shakti itni tez thi ki andhera bi pal bhar ke liye jal gaya, aur kaal ki dehshat bi mit gayi.
Kiran ne MahaPralay Chakra ko beech main se chera

Wahan koi takkar nahi hui. Koi vishal damaka nahi hua. Sirf ek pal ki shanti thi, jab shuddhta paap se mili

Chakra ke do tukde huye aur woh tukde asman main hi bhasm ho gaye Bijli ke sanp roshni main badal gaye. Pure shehar main ek pal ke liye tez din ho gaya, jaise teen suraj ek saath ugg aaye hon

Dahakaal ki aankheen phail gayi Uska gamand toot chuka tha

Dahakaal : Yeh… yeh kya shakti hai Tune mera mahapralay aise kaise khatam kar diya

N.Surya dheere se bola uski awaz shanti ki garaj thi

N.Surya : Yeh shakti nahi… yeh Satyalok ka niyam (law) hai. Jahan Andera hoga wahan roshni ka pravah swabhavik (natural) hain Tumne todna sekha maine jodna sekha Hain ab tera ant Hoga Dahakaal

N.Surya ne samne ki taraf dekha College ki buildings adhi toot chuki thi zameen phat chuki thi, aur students aur teachers dar ke mare behosh padhe the

Usne apna baya haath uthaya. Uske haath se teen mandalon ki shakti ek saath nikli

“DIVYA SANKALP : AMRIT VARSHA”


asman se pani nahi, balki lakhon sunehre-neele phool girne lage Yeh phool sirf sundar nahi the yeh Satyalok ki rooh (soul) the Jahan jahan phool gire, wahan zameen phir se hari ho gayi Toti hui buildings ke tukde wapis judne lage. Ped paudhe phir se jee uthe

Amrit Varsha ka prabhav Dahakaal par bi hua. Uske jism par lagi Kali bijli shant hone lagi aur kuch der ke liye uska gussa dhema pad gaya Usne mehsos kiya ki uski shakti chin rahi hai

Dahakaal iska virod nahi seh saka. Usne N.Surya ki shakti ko apna apman samjha

Dahakaal gusse se chillaya, uski chekh main hazaron Asuro ka krod tha

Dahakaal : RUK JA! Main tera yeh bachpana nahi dekhunga! Main vinash hoon! Aur ab tera ant nischit hai

Woh dauda 30 foot ka Vishal jism ek pal main N.Surya ke samne pohanch gaya Usne apna pura Kall Dand ek vishal talwar main badla lamba aur bayankar aur N.Surya par apni sari shakti se war kiya

KALL DAND : ASUR-ANGAAR TALWAR

Talwar neche giri. Agar yeh war lagta toh pura campus pal bhar main shunya ho jaata. Lekin N.Surya apni jagha sthir khada tha


N.Surya ne apne dono haatho ko dheere se upar uthaya. Uske charon taraf ghumte teen mandal tez raftar se ghumne lage aur ek saath jud gaye

“PARAM TATVA : KAAL-CHAKRA BANDHAN”

Uske charon taraf ek sunehra neela ghumta hua chakra bana Yeh chakra shakti ka nahi samay ka tha Chakra ke andar samay ki Teeno dishayain dik rahi thi bhoot (past) tez raftar se chalta hua vartmaan (present) ek bindu par thehra hua, aur bhavishya (future) ek tez roshni ki tarah aage badta hua

Dahakaal ki Asur Angaar Talwar us chakra se takrayi aur… Theek ushi pal… ruk gayi

Tension itni tez thi ki dono ki shakti apas main takra kar ek shunya bana rahi thi. Dahakaal apni puri shakti se talwar ko aage dakel raha tha, lekin talwar kaal ki deewar se aage nahi badh payi
N.Surya ne dheere se apna haath ghumaaya

Aur phir… Talwar palat (reversed) gayi. Samay ne Dahakaal ki shakti ko hi uske khilaf istemal kar diya

Talwar ulta mud kar tez raftar se Dahakaal ke sene main ghus gayi

“BOOM!!!!„

Dahakaal ke jism se tez awaz nikli. Woh dard se chillaya aur uska vishal jism 800 meter Peche ud kar zameen main 50 foot ka gehra gaddha bana gaya. Khoon ki jagha uske seene se kali bijli behti thi, jo zameen ko jala rahi thi


Dahakaal gusse aur apman main pagal ho gaya. Usne apne dono haatho se zameen par mukka mara. Ab usne apni antim aur sabse bhayanak shakti istemal ki

KALL DAND : MRITYU SANKET

Zameen tez raftar se phat gayi. College ka maidan ek Vishal, kala muh ban gaya. Usmain se lakhon kale haath nikle, jo N.Surya ko pakadne aaye. Yeh haath sirf haath nahi the, yeh Kall Dhwaj ki tapasya ka shunya roop tha

N.Surya ki aankhoo main ab ek naya sankalp tha. Usne apna tesra, sabse shaktishali mandal jageaya. Teen mandalon ki shakti uski atma se jud gayi

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM SWAROOP : TRINETRA MAHANYAAS”

Uske maathe par ek tesra neela-sunehra aankh khula. Yeh aankh gyan, shanti, aur nyay ka prateek tha. Us ankh se ek shwet prakash nikla – itna shudh ki sabhi kale hath rakh ho gaye Prakash sedha Dahakaal ke dil tak gaya

Jaise hi prakash dil main ghusa Dahakaal ke andar ka Sara paap, krod lobh aur Kall Dand ki tapasya sab ek saath jalne laga. Uska bhayankar jism andar se pighal raha tha

Dahakaal bhayanak dard main chillaya, uski awaz main khud ka ant tha

Dahakaal : Nahi… meri shakti… meri shakti mujhe kha rahi hai!! Yeh shuddhta mujhe jala rahi hain

Uske jism par bijli ki tarah lakdak lakdak phatne lagi. Kall Dand ki sari bijli andar se hi usko jalane lagi

N.Surya dheere se aage badha Usne apna daya haath Dahakaal ke seene par rakha

N.Surya dhimi lekin garajti awaz jo Dahakaal ki rooh tak gayi

N.surya : Tune Bramhand ke niyam tode. Tune sirf vinash chuna Ab tu shunya main shanti payega… sada ke liye. Yeh Satyalok ka antim nyay hai.

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM NYAAY : PARAM SHUNYA DWARM

Uske haath se ek chota sa shwet-neela gola bana. Yeh gola bada nahi tha lekin uska wazan pure Bramhand jitna tha. Gola Dahakaal ke seene main ghus gaya.
Dahakaal ka pura 30 foot ka jism ek pal ke liye shwet ho gaya… jaise usse sara kala rang chen liya gaya ho. Phir… ek chote se shunya (black-white hole) main convert hokar gayab ho gaya Saath main Kall Dand ki puri shakti bi hamesha ke liye shunya main sama gayi


Pure maidan main ekdum sannata chha gaya Dahakaal ka ant ho chuka tha Shunya ka chota sa gola dheere-dheere band ho gaya

Sirf sunehre neele phool hawa main ud rahe the jo Amrit Varsha se aaye the
N.Surya ne asman ki taraf dekha Uske sharir ki roshni dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi Uska roop wapis manav jaisa ho raha tha

N.Surya ( muskurate hue apne ap se ) :
Surya… ab tera samay aa gaya hai… Ab Veeranchal ka agla kaam shuru hoga

Uske teesre neele-sunehre aankh ab band ho chuke the Usne apne dono hatho ko dheere se upar uthaya

“SATYALOK KA PARAM AASHEESH : PUNARJANM AURA”

Uske hathon se ek shudh shwet sunehri lehri pure campus par phail gayi. Yeh lehri sirf marammat nahi kar rahi thi, yeh kaal-chakra ko wapis laa rahi thi

Jahan building tooti thi, wahan nayi dewarain khud ban gayi. Jahan zameen phati thi, wahan phir se hari ghans ug aayi. Toote hue ped, bench, canteen ka glass – sab kuch pal bhar main pehle jaisa ho gaya. Jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir usne apna daya haath sabki taraf kiya, jo ab bi wahan behosh padhe the

“DIVYA SANKALP : SMRITI MOKSHA”

Ek halki neeli roshni un sab ke maathe par lagi. Naira, Mehar, Sonia, Sapna, Rocky – aur pure college sabki aankheen ek pal ke liye shwet ho gayi. Unki Yadain – Dahakaal ka vishal roop, bijli, aag, tabahi – sab kuch ek jalak main mita diya gaya. Dahakaal ka naam bi unke dimag se gayab ho chuka tha.
Ab unke dimag main sirf itna yaad tha ki woh canteen main baith kar masti kar rahe the, phir bell baji, aur sab class ki taraf ja rahe the. Unki atma shant ho chuki thi


N.Surya ne apna roop dheere se badla ab woh bilkul normal Surya lag raha tha, college student ki tarha Usne tez kadam liye aur apne doston ke paas gaya jo ab uthe the

Surya bilkul normal awaz main, muskurate hue jismain ab koi tez shakti nahi thi

N.surya : Are yar, sorry! Mujhe abhi ek bohut zarori kaam yaad aa gaya Kam bohut important Hain ishi ki waja se shayad Kal bi naa AA Pao to Tum sab log tension mat Lena okay

Naira ( ab bilkul normal todi chinta se, apne baalo ko theek karte hue ) :
Kya hua Surya? Sab thek toh hai na? Tumhari aankheen thodi laal lag rahi hain

Surya ( muskurate hue) :Bas todi si problem hai, kal tak sab sort ho jayega. Tum log ghar jao, rest karo. Main message kar dunga okay

Sonia : agar kuch bi ho toh ek call kar dena. Hum aa jayenge. Apna khayal rakhna

Sapna ( aankhoo main pyaar aur chinta ) : Haan chote, jaldi wapis aana hum sab tera with karega okay

N.surya : ap sab tension mat lo maim thek ho jaldi hi AA jaoga okay bye everyone

Sab ne ek dusre ko hug kiya, bye bola aur apne-apne raste nikal gaye. Kisi ko kuch yaad nahi tha. Campus ek dum normal tha – jaise har roz hota hain
Surya un sab ko door tak jate dekhta raha Uske chehre par aaj pehli baar apne manav jeevan ko chodne ka dukh tha

Phir usne dheere se palta, aur college ke peche ek bilkul sunsan jagha purane store-room ke peche chala gaya Wahan koi nahi tha Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati bell ki awaz Thi

Wahan ponch kar usne apna haath aage badhaya

Ek chota sa sunehra neela gola prakat hua – portal Woh portal ladki ki sakti ka Prateek tha
Usne ek akhri bar college ki taraf dekha, muskuraya, aur dheere se bola:
Surya ( khud se ) : Ab… asli Yudh baki hai

Woh portal main kadam rakha.
Portal band hua. Wahan sirf thodi si sunehri neeli roshni ek pal ke liye chamki… phir woh bi gayab ho gayi.
Ab college ek dum shant tha Jaise kuch hua hi na ho

Lekin door asman main ek tez roshni phir se chamki – jaise koi aur, bohut bada tofan aane wala ho Aur woh roshni sedhe Satyalok ki taraf ja rahi thi... Veeranchal ke aagman ki ghoshna karte hue


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Bramhand ke us anant shunya main ek aisi jagha Jaha kaal (time) apni pehchan kho deta tha aur Aakash sirf ek gehra raaz tha Wahan suraj ki garmi hazaron yugon se nahi pahunchi thi, chand ki chandni ka koi nishan nahi tha aur galaxiyon ka jhilmilata samundar bi is gehre shunya se dar kar duri bana chuka tha Yeh sthan "Anant-Gupt-Kshetra" ke naam se jaana jaata tha aur iski thandi maut si shanti main hi Devlok ka sarvashreshth sthal Amar-Sabha tika hua tha

Amar-Sabha hazar surajon jitni tez roshni se chamak rahi thi. Uska safed marmar ka floor anant shakti ka prateek tha jahan Devlok ke panch devta apne divya singhasanon par virajman the


( Guys Yaha main Naam mension Nahin kar Raha kyunke yeh forum ke rules ke again Hain to main Unke Naam ke sirf pahle lafz likhoga okay to confused mat hona okay )


Devraj ( Vajra dhaari aur netritva karta) S.Dev ( Tejasvi aur Kal drishya ) A.Dev ( Jwala aur shakti ke swami ) V.Dev ( Gati aur shwas ke neta ) aur J.Dev 4 ( Jal aur gehraiyon ka rakshak )

( Guys Yaha per vayu aur Varun dono Naam v se start hote Hain to Maine Varun ke v ki jagha J lik diya Hain confused mat hona okay )


Aisa shant mahul sadiyon se amar tha Par aaj us Amar-Sabha main kuch alag tha ek bayanak shanti ke beech maha parivartan ki prateeksha thi

Sabse pehle devo ne mehsos kiya. Unhone koi awaz nahi suni koi roshni nahi dekhi... unhone sirf shunya ki dhadkan ko badlate hue mehsos kiya.
Aur phir... woh tez chaka chaund karne wali roshni prakat hui

Yeh roshni aisi thi jaise pura bramhand ek saath jal utha ho aur phir ushi pal shant ho gaya ho Roshni itni tez thi ki Amar-Sabha ke safed marmar ke floor par uski neli sunehri Parchaiyan nachne lagi Roshni ke center main ek chota bindu tha jo pal bhar main phail kar ek vishal, aag sa gola ban raha tha Yeh gola roshni ka nahi tha yeh shakti ka sang raha tha

Devraj ne pehle dhemi awaz main sanket diya unki aankheen zor se chamakne lagi

Devraj : Yeh kya ho raha hai…

Unka Vajra apne ap hi vibrate karne laga tha jaise koi purani shakti use wapis bula rahi ho

S.Dev ne apni divya drishti se us bindu ko dekha. Unka chehra pal bhar main* safed pad gaya Unki divya tejas (divine radiance) kuch pal ke liye kam ho gayi. Unki Aankhoo main dehshat aur pehle yug ki yadain saaf jalak rahi thi

S.Dev : Yeh… yeh roshni… yeh wahi hai… woh sanket… Maha Yug ka sanket…


A.Dev ki jwalayain buri tarah se tez ho gayi yeh unka gussa nahi, balki utsah tha

A.Dev : Yeh… yeh wahi roshni hai jo us din thi… hazaron saal pehle… jab Samrat… jab Veeranchal gayab hua tha…


usne apni shakti ko vibhakt kiya tha…
V.Dev ne shunya se guzarti hawa ko rok kar mehsos kiya Unke jism main kampan tha

V.Dev : Bramhand kamp raha hai… yeh kampan dar ka nahi hai yeh aagman (arrival) ka hain Naye Tattva ka aagman ka

J.Dev ne apne samundron ko pukara ( jo sirf unke mastishk main the ) lekin unka man samundar tufaan se hil raha tha


J.Dev: Yeh… yeh nahi ho sakta… Kaal-Chakra wapis ghum gaya hai…


Aur phir... woh hua.
Roshni ke center se ek vishal neela sunehra gola nikla Yeh gola tez raftar se badne laga Uske badne ki gati aisi thi jaise samay piche daud raha ho Pal bhar main woh ek pura grah ban gaya Ek grah jaisa gola par jeevant shakti se bharpoor

VEERANCHAL – Uska naam tha


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Yeh grah sirf ek graha nahi tha Yeh sankalp, tyag, aur anant balance ka jeevant roop tha. Uske charon taraf neli aur sunehri aag ki leharain thi. Yeh aag jalati nahi thi Shanti deti thi. Uske center main ek vishal chakra ghum raha tha – Panch Tattva ka Chakra – jismain panch rang the Neela (Jal), Laal (Agni), Safed (Vayu), Sunehra (Prithvi), aur Kala (Shunya/Akash) Yeh chakra itni tez raftar se ghum raha tha ki uski dhwani (sound) samay aur shunya ki deewaron ko tod kar pure bramhand main gunj rahi thi


Jaise hi yeh grah pura prakat hua pure bramhand main maha bhukamp aa gaya
Galaxiyon ke beech ka shunya zor se hilne laga. Tare apni jagha se hat gaye jaise koi haath unhe dakel raha ho Nebulae phatne lage Black Holes bi kamp uthe unki kheenchne ki shakti pal bhar ke liye dhemi pad gayi Samay ki leharain bi ruk gayi

Amar-Sabha main Devon ne apne singhasanon se uth kar sir jhukaya Unke chehre par dar tha dar is anant shakti ka, lekin saath hi ek ajeeb si khushi bi thi khushi is balance ke wapis aane ki.
Devraj ne apna Vajra uthaya lekin unka haath kamp raha tha Devraj ab sankoch se bhaybheet the


Devraj : Yeh… yeh Veeranchal hai… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… Woh wapis aa gaya… Samrat ki shakti ka prateek.

S.Dev ki aankhoo main ansu chalak aaye

S.Dev : Jiska dar tha… wahi hua… Lekin dar vinash ka nahi tha dar parivartan ka tha Samrat wapis aa chuka hai… aur ab Kall Dhwaj ka ant nischit hain Lekin uske bad Jo Hoga uska abhi se soch kar dar lag Raha Hain

A.Dev ki jwalayain aankhoo main tez ho gayi

A.Dev : Us din… jab woh gayab hua tha… tab pura bramhand hil gaya tha… aaj phir wahi ho raha hai… shanti se pehle ka maha bhumkamp

V.Dev ki aankhoo main gehra gyan jalak raha tha

V.Dev : Yeh grah sirf ek grah nahi tha… yeh Samrat ki rooh ka hissa tha jo uske tyag ke baad yeh grah gayab ho gaya tha … ab yeh wapis aa gaya… matlab... Veeranchal ne purn roop le liya hain


J.Dev ne sir jhukaya.

J.Dev : Matlab… woh wapis aa gaya hai… Samrat… woh punarjanm le chuka hai… Kavir ki icha puri ho gayi…



to wahi ek Anjan jagha per :-


Jab pura Bramhand kamp raha tha Kaal Granthalaya ki gehraiyon main Shanti thi Rishi Bhramar aur Kavir jo ab Veeranchal ki shakti se bhega hua tha, par abhi bi manav roop main stir tha asmaan ke darpan main is drishya ko dekh rahe the.
Kavir ki aankhoo main Vishal Chakra ki pratibimb thi Woh hairat se Rishi Bhramar ko dekta raha

Kavir ( Dhemi, par Awaz main Anant-Shanti ) : Rishi… yeh… yeh grah… kya yeh meri akhri icha ka natija hai? Kya yeh Veeranchal ki shakti ka bhautik roop hain

Rishi Bhramar muskuraye Unka chehra apni Sari shanti se bharmar tha

Rishi Bhramar : Beta Kavir woh grah sirf grah nahi hai. Woh Tumhara Tyag hain Jab Samrat Veeranchal vibhakt hua tha, toh uski rooh ka bahari kosh (outer shell) is grah main chala gaya tha. Woh kosh prakat ho gaya, kyunke tumne uske teesre tukde – Icha-Shakti – ko purn kar diya

Kavir ne dheere se apne haath dekhe jahan Neeli-Sunehri roshni abhi bi thehri hui thi

Kavir : Lekin Rishi… Veeranchal ab wapis aa gaya toh Kya ab Maha yudh nischit hai? Veeranchal ke prakat hone se sab itne dar kyun rahe hain jabke woh khud balance ka swami Hain

Rishi Bhramar ki aankhoo main gehrai thi

Rishi Bhramar : sab Dev Veeranchal se nahi darte Kavir Woh darte hain Kall Dhwaj ki Pratikriya (reaction) se Veeranchal ka punarjanm uske ant ka aramb Hain Jab Shaktiyan ek saath aati hain toh Andhera zor se ladta hai Aur Kall Dhwaj hamesha Veeranchal ka dusman raha hain

Kavir : Toh ab… meri bhomika kya hai? Kya main wapis Veeranchal main jaa Sakta ho Ya uske saath rehkar burai se ladhoga

Rishi Bhramar ( akhri shant sargoshi ) : Kavir Tumhare manav-roop ne tyag kiya hain Tumhara grah prakat ho chuka hai. Ab nirnay tumhara hai Tumhara jeevan ab ek yudh hai Kavir. Aur yeh yudh andar se shuru hokar bahar khatam hoga

rashi Bhramar ki baat sunkar kavir ne koi jawab Nahin diya aur woh uth kar Usne Rishi Bhramar ko pranam Kiya aur waha se chale gaye

Kall Dhwajgarh andhere aur krurta (cruelty) ka Vishal Samrajya. Usi pal, jab Veeranchal prakat hua, Kall Dhwaj apne singhasan par baitha tha. Uska gussa shant nahi hua tha. Viraksha ki haar, Dahakaal ka bheja jaana – sab kuch uske dimag main ek tufan bana hua tha. Uska chehra kala pad chuka tha uske honth kamp rahe the

Tabhi darbar ke darwaze par ek tez, bhayanak awaz aayi jaise koi bimeari andar aa gayi ho

Ek chota sa darpok sa Kabri Asur andar aya. Uska sharir sara kamp raha tha jaise thandi lag rahi ho jabki Kall Dhwajgarh hamesha aag se bhara rehta tha Uska matha paseene se bhara tha.
Kabri Asur kanpte hue uski awaz dabi hui thi

Kabri : Maharaj… Maharaj… bohut badi khabar hai…

Kall Dhwaj ne uski taraf dekha. Uski Aankhoo main aag nahi shunya tha Usne dheere se apna sir jhukaya

Kall Dhwaj : Bolo! Agar tumhara shabd mere gusse se chota hua toh tumhari rakh bi nahi milegi

Kabri Asur ne Sara darr ek saath nigeal liya.
Kabri Asur : Veeranchal… woh grah… wapis aa gaya hai…

Kall Dhwaj ka chehra ek pal main safed pad gaya Usne apna singhasan ka hathla itne zor se pakad liya ki uski ungliyan pathar main ghus gayi Kall Dhwajgarh ka sinhasan pathar ka nahi Asuri Dhatu ka tha

Kall Dhwaj dhemi, lekin Bayankar jaise ek mara hua shaitan bol raha ho

Kall Dhwaj : Kya… kaha… tumne…? Yeh jhoot hai! Jhoot bolo Tum ke yeh jhoot bol Rahe ho

Kabri Asur ne sir jhuka liya. Uske hoth apas main jud chuke the

Kabri Asur : Maharaj… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… woh aaj subah se dikhai de raha hai… pure bramhand main… har jagha… har Kisi ko pata chal gaya Hain ke Veeranchal grah wapis aa gaya Hain


Kall Dhwaj ne apni aankheen band ki Uske dimag main woh purana Yudh yaad aa gaya Woh yudh jis main usne apni puri sena kho di thi Woh yudh jis main Samrat ne usko buri tarha hara kar Veeranchal se buri tarha se nikal diya aur kall Dhwaj ko Shakti bi Usse cheen li Th


Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur gusse main uski sansain tez thi

Kall Dhwaj : Nahi… nahi… yeh nahi ho sakta… woh toh mar chuka tha… uski shakti toh maine hi… khatam ki thi… main hi Bramhand ka samrat hoon

Usne apni aankheen kholi Uski Aankhoo main gussa kam Bayankar dar ziyada tha. Pure darbar main sannata chha gaya

Kall Dhwaj ne apna haath uthaya aur us kabri asur ko apni taraf khincha Asur ka sharir hawa main ud gaya. Asur chekh bi nahi paya

Kall Dhwaj Chillate hue uski awaz Bramhand main gunj Rahi Thi

Kall Dhwaj ( gusse main Chillate hue ) : TUNE MUJHE YE KHABAR KYUN DI?! TUNE MUJHE DARAYA HAI MERI SHANTI BHANG KI HAI TUMNE

Usne apna haath aur zor se dabaya. Kabri Asur ka sharir pal bhar main jal kar kali Rakh ho gaya aur woh rakh hawa main mil gayi

Kall Dhwaj ab apne singhasan se utha. Uska jism kamp raha tha Uske dimag main sirf ek hi vichar tha Apna Ant Rokna

Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur pagalpan ki had tak

Kall Dhwaj : Agar woh wapis aa gaya… toh mera ant nischit hai… woh mujhe nahi chodege… woh mujhe zinda nahi chodege… usne mera sab kuch cheena tha


Usne apne darbar ki taraf dekha Uske chehre par ab gussa nahi balki khoonkhar pagalpan chaya hua tha

Kall Dhwaj ( tez awaz main ) : “ABHI KE ABHI! POORI SENA KO TAIYAR KARO! HAR EK ASUR, HAR EK DAITYA, PURE GRAH MAIN JITNE BI LOG HAIN SABKO TAIYAR KARO ! HUM ABHI KE ABHI US GRAH PAR HAMLA KAREGE! MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! JIS GRAH KO WOH APNI ROOH KEHTA HAI MAIN USE JALA DUNGA

Usne apn Dand uthaya ( jo Black Hole ke core se bana tha ) aur zameen par zor se mara. Pura Kall Dhwajgarh tez awaz ke saath hil gaya aur uski dewaron se agni nikalne lagi

Kall Dhwaj akhri cheekh, uski Aankhoo main Bramhand ka Vinash tha

Kall Dhwaj : MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! CHAHE ISKE LIYE MUJHE PURA BRAMHAND JALANA PADE! MAHA YUDH KA AARAMBH ABHI HOGA

Uske aadesh ke saath hi, pura Kall Dhwajgarh yudh ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Maha Sankat aane wala tha Veeranchal wapis aa chuka tha aur uske dusman aur dost sabhi jante the ki ab shanti asanbhav hain

To wahi Satyalok main :-

Surya aur Lady of Satyalok us tez roshni ke beech tezi se aage badh rahe the. Surya ka jism tej aur ajeeb urja se bhara tha Usne pehli baar Bramhand ki asli shakti ko itne kareeb se mehsos kiya tha Lady of Satyalok uske aage thi unka chehra shant lekin sankalp se bhara tha

Surya Hairani se aas-pass ki roshni ko dekte hue ladki se kehta Hain

Surya : Devi yeh kaun si jagha hai Hum kitni tezi se travel kar rahe hain

Ladki : Yeh kaal aur samay se pare hai, Surya Hum man ki raftar se chal rahe hain Is se pehle ki Kall Dhwaj apni nakami se dar kar koi aur pagalpan kare, humain us tak pahunchna hoga

Surya ( Thoda ghabrahat main ) : Lekin Devi Dahakaal itna shaktishali tha uske pass Kall Dand ki shakti thi Aur jise aapne mere roop main Dharti par choda tha... woh kaun tha? Kya woh apki shakti hain

Ladki : ( Muskurate hue bina ruke ) : Haan Surya. Woh main thi aur tum the Meri adhi shakti jo shuddhi aur gyan ki rakshak hai, use tumhara roop diya gaya tha Kall Dand ki shakti ko sirf brahmandiya urja hi hara sakti thi

Surya ( Gehri soch main ) : Toh main kall dhwaj ka Samna kaise karunga Jab ap usko akhiri mauka de rahi thi... tab usne aisa Kya kaha jis se ap itna gussa ho gayi ke itni jald hi ap us kall Dhwaj ka ant Karna Chahti Hain

Lady of Satyalok ruk gayi Unke rukte hi aaspass ki roshni bi shant ho gayi, jaise koi tez nade ruk gayi ho Unka chehra ab dard aur gehre rahasya se bhara tha

Lady of Satyalok Dheere se boli unki awaz main hazaron yugo ka bojh tha

Ladki : Kall Dhwaj ki asli kamzori shakti nahi uska ahankaar hain Aur uska ahankaar mujhse juda hai Sadiyon pehle jab Brahmand main Samrat ka raaj tha... Kall Dhwaj unka sabse vishwaspaatr (most trusted) senapati tha

Surya : Samrat (man main) yeh Samrat Kon Hain akhir kyun yeh Naam sunte hi man main ek ajeeb si feeling AA jati Hain aisa lagta hain jaise ke main hi Samrat ho

Abhi Surya soch hi Raha tha ke Lady of Satyalok phir se boli

Ladki : Haan. Samrat Kall Dhwaj ne hamesha Samrat ki shakti aur niyamon ka apman kiya Ek baar usne Samrat ke samne mujhe pane ki ghustakhi (audacity) ki Samrat ne usko apne Darbar se nikal diya aur uski shakti cheen li. Us din se, Kall Dhwaj ne Samrat se badla lene aur mujhe pane ke liye Kall Dand ki paapi tapasya shuru ki. Woh janta hai, agar woh mujhe hasil kar leta hai toh woh Samrat ki sabse badi jeet ko har main badal dega

Surya ( Gusse main ) : Toh woh badle ke liye yeh sab kar raha hain

Ladki : Haan Lekin ab yeh Samrat ki baat nahi hain Ab yeh Brahmand ki shanti ki baat hain Aur ismain tumhara Gyan aur Sankalp hi kaam aayega

Unke chehre par ek gahra nishchay aya

Ladki : Tumhe Samrat ke Samrajya Satyalok main aye ho Surya. Yaha tumhe woh shakti milegi jiski tumhe zarorat hain Main tumhe kaal ki seemaon se pare sidhe dwaar tak pahunchati hoon


Lady of Satyalok ke akhri shabd tezi se roshni main ghul gaye Aur agle hi pal, Surya ek tez neele portal (dwaar) se bahar nikla aur uske jism ko ek ajeeb si shanti ne ghera (surround) kar liya Us portal ki tez roshni uske sharir se guzri, aur jab woh thehra, toh usne apni aankhoo par vishwas nahi kiya

Woh Anant Shunya ka tez, thanda andhera gayab ho chuka tha. Uske badle Surya khada tha Divya Prakash main jaha har kan main jeevan tha Yeh Satyalok tha

Pehla ehsas Vayu ka tha—ek aisi hawa jo saanson main amrit ghol de. Dusra ehsas roshni ka tha ek Sun (Suraj) jaisa gola jo Bramhand ke har taraf apna rang faila raha tha Us Sun ke upar kai galaxiyon ke jhilmilate nishan the Badal ruyi ki tarah safed the aur un badalon ke upar chote-chote floating islands ( udte hue dweepv) tehar rahe the

Samne do vishal sundar arch (dwaar-stambh) the jo gulabi aur neele pholon se dhake hue the Un dwaron ke beech se Surya ne Satyalok ki asli shan dekhi.
Satyalok koi aam darti nahi thi. Yeh Shakti aur Saundarya ka mishran tha.
Center main ek Vishal, sunehri mandir shaan se khada tha. Mandir ek bade floating island par bana hua tha, aur us island se charon taraf do vishal waterfalls (jharna) shanti se niche gir rahe the. Woh pani sirf jal nahi tha divya urja ka pravah tha. Woh Pani niche guzarte hue beech main bane ek Vishal talab (pond) main mil raha tha


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Us talab main hazaron kamal khile hue the neele gulabi naurangi (orange) – jinki roshni Pani main dheere dheere nach rahi thi. Talab ke upar do sundar pathar ke pul the jo pholon se saje the aur woh pul mandir ki taraf jate the


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Har taraf vriksh the jinki shakhon par here chamak rahe the aur unke pass chote chote floating islands the jin par chote chote mandir bane the Surya ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Usne apne ap ko pukara (summoned his focus) Uske manav-roop ki thakan is mahol main gayab ho gayi

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Surya ab dheere se us talab ki taraf badha Uske kadam awaz nahi kar rahe the, jaise woh hawa par chal raha ho. Jab woh pul ke pass pohcha, usne apni pehli nazar samne badi murti par Dali.
Vaha talab ke beech main chote se teele (mound) par ek vishal murti khadi thi. Murti safed sangmarmar ki thi, par usmain sunehre aur neele nishan the. Woh murti ek majboot, divya-yoddha ki thi, jisne ek haath main tez roshni ki talwar utha rakhi thi, aur uski Aankhoo mein anant shanti thi. Murti ke paas ek khoobsurat mayur (peacock) khada tha, jiske pankh neeli roshni se chamak rahe the


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Surya us murti ko dhyan se dek hi raha tha, ki tabhi talab ke pani par halke se chalte hue woh ladki uske samne aayi. Uska chehra shanti aur saundarya ka prateek tha. Uske vastra gulabi kamal ke patton se bune the, aur uski Aankhoo main Satyalok ka Gyan bhara hua tha

Ladki : Swagat hai Surya… humari prateeksha (our wait) safal hui


Uski awaz shehad ki tarah methi aur Vayu ki tarah halki thi

Surya ( Us murti se nazar hataye bina ) : Swagat… waqai bohut sundar aur alokik jagha Hain yeh Satyalok waise Yeh murti kiski hai? Yeh yodha kaun hai, jiske paas mayur aur tej talwar hai

Ladki us murti ki taraf dekhi. Uske chehre par aadar (reverence) ka bhav tha


Ladki : Yeh murti hamare Samrat ki hai us Samrat ki jisne is sansar main sachai aur achai ko kabhi Nahin jhukne diya
Bohut mahan Samrat the woh

Surya ( Hairat se ) : Lekin woh yahan murti main kyun hain agar woh itne bade Samrat hain toh

Ladki : Samrat yahan is Liye hain kyunke unhone apni shakti ko bramhand main vibhakt (divided) kar diya tha. Woh ab humare saath bhautik roop main nahi hain lekin unki aashirwad aur shakti hamesha Satyalok ko suraksha deti hai. Lekin… yeh prateeksha jaldi khatam hogi

Surya : Kaisi prateeksha?

Ladki : Unka punarjanm ho chuka hai. Woh wapis aane wale hain aur iss baar purani shakti puri hogi Satyalok unke aagman ki prateeksha main hi jevit hai. Humari har sans unke liye Hain

Ladki ne aage bad kar talab ke pani se ek bond uthai aur Surya ke mathe par laga diya

Ladki : satyalok keval pholon aur pani ka sthan nahi hai Surya Yeh shuddhta ka antim chor hain Yahan har ek pool ek yug ka gyan rakhta hai, aur har ek bond ek katha batati hai


Ladki ne dheere se kuch pal chup reh kar Surya ki aankhoo main dekha Uske chehre par gambherta aa gayi thi


Ladki : Ab samay aa chuka hai, Surya. Veeranchal ka aagman ho Chuka Hain aur uske aagman se ke foran bad Tumhe apne vastr ( costume ) wapis hasil karna hai

Surya ( Hairat aur Uljhan main ) : Costume? Kaisa costume? Ap kis costume ki baat kar raha hoon? Mere pass toh bas yeh vastr hain

Ladki Ek raaz bhari muskan ke saath

Ladki : Costume nahi shakti ka roop (form of power) Surya. Tumhara asli tej. Jab tumne manav roop liya tha, tab tumhari shakti chup gayi Thi Woh roop yahan Satyalok main surakshit hai Lekin abhi nahi…

Ladki ne apna haath aage badhaya aur talab se nikle gulabi kamalon ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Jab tum us tak pohunchoge tab dek lena Tumhari shakti tumhe bata degi ki woh kya hai Sirf pehchan zarori hain

Surya ne ek gehri sans li. Uski atma janti thi ki yeh raaz kitna zarori hai

Surya : Samaj gaya

Ladki turant mudi aur pul ki taraf chali gayi. Surya bi uske piche chal diya Pul se guzarte hue Surya ne dekha ki talab ka pani uske chalne par apne ap hat jata tha aisa lag Raha tha jaise Pani bi khud surya ko Rasta de Rahi ho

Woh dono mandir ki taraf nahi gaye. Ladki ne ek dusre chote raste ki taraf ishara kiya, jo do waterfalls ke beech se hokar ek chote floating island ki taraf jaata tha

Jab woh is naye dweep par pohche, Surya ne Pehchan liya ki yahan atmosphere badal gaya hain Center main ek vishal pathar ka stambh ( pillar ) tha jiske charon taraf neele aur gulabi rang ki roshni sarpilakar (spiral) main ghum rahi thi. Upar, ek vishal moon (chand) chamak raha tha, jismain ek neli urja dund rahi thi Yeh sthan shakti ka केंद्र (centre) tha


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Ladki ne us sarpilakar stambh ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Surya Tumhe ab yeh pariksha dekar woh costume hasil karna hi hoga. Tumhara asli tej is stambh ke shikar (peak) par chupa hua hai. Tumhari shakti tabhi jagegi jab tumhari atma teen sawalon ke sahi jawab degi

Surya : Pariksha? Kaise sawal? Aur agar main fail hua toh?

Ladki ( Shanti se ) : Sawal tumhare jeevan ke hisab se honge. Tumhari Atma se jude hue. Raste main aane wali har chunauti ek sawal hogi. Aur fail hone ka matlab… tum manav roop main hamesha ke liye kho jaoge, aur Bramhand per burai ka Raaj Hoga jis se phir koi bi burai ko rok Nahin payega

Surya : Aur ap Kya ap mere saath rahogi


Ladki : Nahi Yeh pariksha vyaktigat (personal) hain Tumhe akela chalna hoga, apni nishchay (determination) ke saath Lekin yaad rakna, Satyalok ki roshni hamesha tumhare saath hai

Surya

( Ek nishchay ke saath ) : Theek hain Main apni pariksha ke liye taiyar hoon

Ladki ne dheere se sir jukaya Uska chehra ek antim baar tez roshni se chamak utha

Ladki : Shubh yatra Surya. Samay tumhara hai

Aur agle hi pal, Ladki wahan se gayab ho gayi, jaise woh hawa main ghul gayi ho. Surya akela khada tha, us sarpilakar stambh ke paas. Uski Aankhoo main tez roshni thi, aur uske samne uske jeevan ki sabse badi pariksha khadi thi

To wahi college main :-

College ka maidan, Jaha kuch ghante pehle hasi, shor, aur jevan tha, ab ek bayanak, adrishya yudh-kshetra ban chuka tha. Asman kaala pad chuka tha, jaise suraj ko kisi vishal hatheli ne daba diya ho. Hawa main bijli aur maut ka shor chha chuka tha. Mousam ka dar itna ghana tha ki aas pass ki buildings ke kanch apne ap chatak (shattering) rahe the

Samne khada tha DAHAKAAL – 30 foot ka lohe aur kala lava se bana Vishal asur Uska jism dhoop se nahi, Kall Dand ki laal-kali bijli se chamak raha tha. Woh bijli har pal uske lohe ke jism main laplapati thi, jaise koi bimari tez ho rahi ho. Uske panv jahan padte the, wahan zameen Rakh ho jati thi
Uske samne, darti par akela khada tha N.Surya Uska roop sirf Surya jaisa nahi tha Woh ab manav nahi balki shuddh Tej ka sanchar tha Uska chehra Surya jaisa Masom tha, lekin uski Aankhoo main do bramhand gati (movement) kar rahe the—ek neela shunya aur dusra sunehra prakash

Uske charon taraf ek slow motion main teen divya mandal (Divine Rings) ghum rahe the Pehla mandal shwet tha ( Vayu ) dusra neela ( Jal ) aur tesra sunehra ( Prithvi ) Woh Teeno ek saath ghum rahe the jaise teen suraj ek jagha khel rahe hon aur unki gati se samay bi dhema pad chuka tha

Dahakaal aur N.Surya ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the Dahakaal ki aankhoo main Andere ki aag thi aur N.Surya ki aankhoo main hazaron yugon ki shanti thi

Zameen kamp rahi thi. Pahadon ki jagha ab college ki buildings thi, par shor wahi maha-pralay ka tha

Dahakaal ne apna vishal haath uthaya. Uske haath main samai Kall Dand ki shakti ek akhri galti karne ko taiyar thi.
Dahakaal ki awaz itni tez ki asman phat gaya mano darti bhi dard main ho


Dahakaal : Tum Surya ke roop main ho… lekin tum main Satyalok ki piri shakti bol rahi hai. Acha… aaj main Bramhand ki do sabse badi taqat ek saath nasht karunga! Pahle pahle us ladki ki takat aur dusri is darti ka ant


DAHAKAAL ne apne hathon ko jor se jod diya Uske jism se nikalti sari kali bijli uper asmaan ki taraf chali gayi

KALL DAND : MAHAPRALY CHAKRA

asman phat gaya Waha koi awaz nahi hui sirf ek tez aag thi. asman se ek 3 kilometre chauda kaala-laal chakra sedhe N.Surya ki taraf utra Yeh chakra sirf gol nahi tha yeh andere ki prateek thi. Uske andar lakhon bijli ke sanp (snakes) apne nishanon ko dund rahe the

Dahakaal ki aankhoo main gamand (arrogance) tha Yeh war itna shaktishali tha ki jahan se guzra, wahan pahad bi rakh ban gaye the aur ab uske raste main college ki imartein thi

N.Surya ne dheere se sans bhari Uske chehre par ek bi bhav nahi badla Yeh shanti hi uski sabse badi taqat thi

Uske sharir se nikalti tez, shwet sunehri roshni ab uske teen mandalon ke saath ghul gayi. Roshni itni shuddh thi ki aas-pass ka Andhera apne ap piche hat raha tha

Usne apna daya haath aage kiya. Uske haath main koi talwar nahi thi

sirf anant shakti ka kendra (center) tha.

“ANANT PRAKASH : BRAMHAND VIRAAT„

Uske haath se ek Shudh shwet-sunehri kiran nikli – lekin yeh koi kiran nahi thi. Yeh tez roshni ki Dewar thi. Yeh shakti itni tez thi ki andhera bi pal bhar ke liye jal gaya, aur kaal ki dehshat bi mit gayi.
Kiran ne MahaPralay Chakra ko beech main se chera

Wahan koi takkar nahi hui. Koi vishal damaka nahi hua. Sirf ek pal ki shanti thi, jab shuddhta paap se mili

Chakra ke do tukde huye aur woh tukde asman main hi bhasm ho gaye Bijli ke sanp roshni main badal gaye. Pure shehar main ek pal ke liye tez din ho gaya, jaise teen suraj ek saath ugg aaye hon

Dahakaal ki aankheen phail gayi Uska gamand toot chuka tha

Dahakaal : Yeh… yeh kya shakti hai Tune mera mahapralay aise kaise khatam kar diya

N.Surya dheere se bola uski awaz shanti ki garaj thi

N.Surya : Yeh shakti nahi… yeh Satyalok ka niyam (law) hai. Jahan Andera hoga wahan roshni ka pravah swabhavik (natural) hain Tumne todna sekha maine jodna sekha Hain ab tera ant Hoga Dahakaal

N.Surya ne samne ki taraf dekha College ki buildings adhi toot chuki thi zameen phat chuki thi, aur students aur teachers dar ke mare behosh padhe the

Usne apna baya haath uthaya. Uske haath se teen mandalon ki shakti ek saath nikli

“DIVYA SANKALP : AMRIT VARSHA”


asman se pani nahi, balki lakhon sunehre-neele phool girne lage Yeh phool sirf sundar nahi the yeh Satyalok ki rooh (soul) the Jahan jahan phool gire, wahan zameen phir se hari ho gayi Toti hui buildings ke tukde wapis judne lage. Ped paudhe phir se jee uthe

Amrit Varsha ka prabhav Dahakaal par bi hua. Uske jism par lagi Kali bijli shant hone lagi aur kuch der ke liye uska gussa dhema pad gaya Usne mehsos kiya ki uski shakti chin rahi hai

Dahakaal iska virod nahi seh saka. Usne N.Surya ki shakti ko apna apman samjha

Dahakaal gusse se chillaya, uski chekh main hazaron Asuro ka krod tha

Dahakaal : RUK JA! Main tera yeh bachpana nahi dekhunga! Main vinash hoon! Aur ab tera ant nischit hai

Woh dauda 30 foot ka Vishal jism ek pal main N.Surya ke samne pohanch gaya Usne apna pura Kall Dand ek vishal talwar main badla lamba aur bayankar aur N.Surya par apni sari shakti se war kiya

KALL DAND : ASUR-ANGAAR TALWAR

Talwar neche giri. Agar yeh war lagta toh pura campus pal bhar main shunya ho jaata. Lekin N.Surya apni jagha sthir khada tha


N.Surya ne apne dono haatho ko dheere se upar uthaya. Uske charon taraf ghumte teen mandal tez raftar se ghumne lage aur ek saath jud gaye

“PARAM TATVA : KAAL-CHAKRA BANDHAN”

Uske charon taraf ek sunehra neela ghumta hua chakra bana Yeh chakra shakti ka nahi samay ka tha Chakra ke andar samay ki Teeno dishayain dik rahi thi bhoot (past) tez raftar se chalta hua vartmaan (present) ek bindu par thehra hua, aur bhavishya (future) ek tez roshni ki tarah aage badta hua

Dahakaal ki Asur Angaar Talwar us chakra se takrayi aur… Theek ushi pal… ruk gayi

Tension itni tez thi ki dono ki shakti apas main takra kar ek shunya bana rahi thi. Dahakaal apni puri shakti se talwar ko aage dakel raha tha, lekin talwar kaal ki deewar se aage nahi badh payi
N.Surya ne dheere se apna haath ghumaaya

Aur phir… Talwar palat (reversed) gayi. Samay ne Dahakaal ki shakti ko hi uske khilaf istemal kar diya

Talwar ulta mud kar tez raftar se Dahakaal ke sene main ghus gayi

“BOOM!!!!„

Dahakaal ke jism se tez awaz nikli. Woh dard se chillaya aur uska vishal jism 800 meter Peche ud kar zameen main 50 foot ka gehra gaddha bana gaya. Khoon ki jagha uske seene se kali bijli behti thi, jo zameen ko jala rahi thi


Dahakaal gusse aur apman main pagal ho gaya. Usne apne dono haatho se zameen par mukka mara. Ab usne apni antim aur sabse bhayanak shakti istemal ki

KALL DAND : MRITYU SANKET

Zameen tez raftar se phat gayi. College ka maidan ek Vishal, kala muh ban gaya. Usmain se lakhon kale haath nikle, jo N.Surya ko pakadne aaye. Yeh haath sirf haath nahi the, yeh Kall Dhwaj ki tapasya ka shunya roop tha

N.Surya ki aankhoo main ab ek naya sankalp tha. Usne apna tesra, sabse shaktishali mandal jageaya. Teen mandalon ki shakti uski atma se jud gayi

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM SWAROOP : TRINETRA MAHANYAAS”

Uske maathe par ek tesra neela-sunehra aankh khula. Yeh aankh gyan, shanti, aur nyay ka prateek tha. Us ankh se ek shwet prakash nikla – itna shudh ki sabhi kale hath rakh ho gaye Prakash sedha Dahakaal ke dil tak gaya

Jaise hi prakash dil main ghusa Dahakaal ke andar ka Sara paap, krod lobh aur Kall Dand ki tapasya sab ek saath jalne laga. Uska bhayankar jism andar se pighal raha tha

Dahakaal bhayanak dard main chillaya, uski awaz main khud ka ant tha

Dahakaal : Nahi… meri shakti… meri shakti mujhe kha rahi hai!! Yeh shuddhta mujhe jala rahi hain

Uske jism par bijli ki tarah lakdak lakdak phatne lagi. Kall Dand ki sari bijli andar se hi usko jalane lagi

N.Surya dheere se aage badha Usne apna daya haath Dahakaal ke seene par rakha

N.Surya dhimi lekin garajti awaz jo Dahakaal ki rooh tak gayi

N.surya : Tune Bramhand ke niyam tode. Tune sirf vinash chuna Ab tu shunya main shanti payega… sada ke liye. Yeh Satyalok ka antim nyay hai.

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM NYAAY : PARAM SHUNYA DWARM

Uske haath se ek chota sa shwet-neela gola bana. Yeh gola bada nahi tha lekin uska wazan pure Bramhand jitna tha. Gola Dahakaal ke seene main ghus gaya.
Dahakaal ka pura 30 foot ka jism ek pal ke liye shwet ho gaya… jaise usse sara kala rang chen liya gaya ho. Phir… ek chote se shunya (black-white hole) main convert hokar gayab ho gaya Saath main Kall Dand ki puri shakti bi hamesha ke liye shunya main sama gayi


Pure maidan main ekdum sannata chha gaya Dahakaal ka ant ho chuka tha Shunya ka chota sa gola dheere-dheere band ho gaya

Sirf sunehre neele phool hawa main ud rahe the jo Amrit Varsha se aaye the
N.Surya ne asman ki taraf dekha Uske sharir ki roshni dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi Uska roop wapis manav jaisa ho raha tha

N.Surya ( muskurate hue apne ap se ) :
Surya… ab tera samay aa gaya hai… Ab Veeranchal ka agla kaam shuru hoga

Uske teesre neele-sunehre aankh ab band ho chuke the Usne apne dono hatho ko dheere se upar uthaya

“SATYALOK KA PARAM AASHEESH : PUNARJANM AURA”

Uske hathon se ek shudh shwet sunehri lehri pure campus par phail gayi. Yeh lehri sirf marammat nahi kar rahi thi, yeh kaal-chakra ko wapis laa rahi thi

Jahan building tooti thi, wahan nayi dewarain khud ban gayi. Jahan zameen phati thi, wahan phir se hari ghans ug aayi. Toote hue ped, bench, canteen ka glass – sab kuch pal bhar main pehle jaisa ho gaya. Jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir usne apna daya haath sabki taraf kiya, jo ab bi wahan behosh padhe the

“DIVYA SANKALP : SMRITI MOKSHA”

Ek halki neeli roshni un sab ke maathe par lagi. Naira, Mehar, Sonia, Sapna, Rocky – aur pure college sabki aankheen ek pal ke liye shwet ho gayi. Unki Yadain – Dahakaal ka vishal roop, bijli, aag, tabahi – sab kuch ek jalak main mita diya gaya. Dahakaal ka naam bi unke dimag se gayab ho chuka tha.
Ab unke dimag main sirf itna yaad tha ki woh canteen main baith kar masti kar rahe the, phir bell baji, aur sab class ki taraf ja rahe the. Unki atma shant ho chuki thi


N.Surya ne apna roop dheere se badla ab woh bilkul normal Surya lag raha tha, college student ki tarha Usne tez kadam liye aur apne doston ke paas gaya jo ab uthe the

Surya bilkul normal awaz main, muskurate hue jismain ab koi tez shakti nahi thi

N.surya : Are yar, sorry! Mujhe abhi ek bohut zarori kaam yaad aa gaya Kam bohut important Hain ishi ki waja se shayad Kal bi naa AA Pao to Tum sab log tension mat Lena okay

Naira ( ab bilkul normal todi chinta se, apne baalo ko theek karte hue ) :
Kya hua Surya? Sab thek toh hai na? Tumhari aankheen thodi laal lag rahi hain

Surya ( muskurate hue) :Bas todi si problem hai, kal tak sab sort ho jayega. Tum log ghar jao, rest karo. Main message kar dunga okay

Sonia : agar kuch bi ho toh ek call kar dena. Hum aa jayenge. Apna khayal rakhna

Sapna ( aankhoo main pyaar aur chinta ) : Haan chote, jaldi wapis aana hum sab tera with karega okay

N.surya : ap sab tension mat lo maim thek ho jaldi hi AA jaoga okay bye everyone

Sab ne ek dusre ko hug kiya, bye bola aur apne-apne raste nikal gaye. Kisi ko kuch yaad nahi tha. Campus ek dum normal tha – jaise har roz hota hain
Surya un sab ko door tak jate dekhta raha Uske chehre par aaj pehli baar apne manav jeevan ko chodne ka dukh tha

Phir usne dheere se palta, aur college ke peche ek bilkul sunsan jagha purane store-room ke peche chala gaya Wahan koi nahi tha Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati bell ki awaz Thi

Wahan ponch kar usne apna haath aage badhaya

Ek chota sa sunehra neela gola prakat hua – portal Woh portal ladki ki sakti ka Prateek tha
Usne ek akhri bar college ki taraf dekha, muskuraya, aur dheere se bola:
Surya ( khud se ) : Ab… asli Yudh baki hai

Woh portal main kadam rakha.
Portal band hua. Wahan sirf thodi si sunehri neeli roshni ek pal ke liye chamki… phir woh bi gayab ho gayi.
Ab college ek dum shant tha Jaise kuch hua hi na ho

Lekin door asman main ek tez roshni phir se chamki – jaise koi aur, bohut bada tofan aane wala ho Aur woh roshni sedhe Satyalok ki taraf ja rahi thi... Veeranchal ke aagman ki ghoshna karte hue


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Bramhand ke us anant shunya main ek aisi jagha Jaha kaal (time) apni pehchan kho deta tha aur Aakash sirf ek gehra raaz tha Wahan suraj ki garmi hazaron yugon se nahi pahunchi thi, chand ki chandni ka koi nishan nahi tha aur galaxiyon ka jhilmilata samundar bi is gehre shunya se dar kar duri bana chuka tha Yeh sthan "Anant-Gupt-Kshetra" ke naam se jaana jaata tha aur iski thandi maut si shanti main hi Devlok ka sarvashreshth sthal Amar-Sabha tika hua tha

Amar-Sabha hazar surajon jitni tez roshni se chamak rahi thi. Uska safed marmar ka floor anant shakti ka prateek tha jahan Devlok ke panch devta apne divya singhasanon par virajman the


( Guys Yaha main Naam mension Nahin kar Raha kyunke yeh forum ke rules ke again Hain to main Unke Naam ke sirf pahle lafz likhoga okay to confused mat hona okay )


Devraj ( Vajra dhaari aur netritva karta) S.Dev ( Tejasvi aur Kal drishya ) A.Dev ( Jwala aur shakti ke swami ) V.Dev ( Gati aur shwas ke neta ) aur J.Dev 4 ( Jal aur gehraiyon ka rakshak )

( Guys Yaha per vayu aur Varun dono Naam v se start hote Hain to Maine Varun ke v ki jagha J lik diya Hain confused mat hona okay )


Aisa shant mahul sadiyon se amar tha Par aaj us Amar-Sabha main kuch alag tha ek bayanak shanti ke beech maha parivartan ki prateeksha thi

Sabse pehle devo ne mehsos kiya. Unhone koi awaz nahi suni koi roshni nahi dekhi... unhone sirf shunya ki dhadkan ko badlate hue mehsos kiya.
Aur phir... woh tez chaka chaund karne wali roshni prakat hui

Yeh roshni aisi thi jaise pura bramhand ek saath jal utha ho aur phir ushi pal shant ho gaya ho Roshni itni tez thi ki Amar-Sabha ke safed marmar ke floor par uski neli sunehri Parchaiyan nachne lagi Roshni ke center main ek chota bindu tha jo pal bhar main phail kar ek vishal, aag sa gola ban raha tha Yeh gola roshni ka nahi tha yeh shakti ka sang raha tha

Devraj ne pehle dhemi awaz main sanket diya unki aankheen zor se chamakne lagi

Devraj : Yeh kya ho raha hai…

Unka Vajra apne ap hi vibrate karne laga tha jaise koi purani shakti use wapis bula rahi ho

S.Dev ne apni divya drishti se us bindu ko dekha. Unka chehra pal bhar main* safed pad gaya Unki divya tejas (divine radiance) kuch pal ke liye kam ho gayi. Unki Aankhoo main dehshat aur pehle yug ki yadain saaf jalak rahi thi

S.Dev : Yeh… yeh roshni… yeh wahi hai… woh sanket… Maha Yug ka sanket…


A.Dev ki jwalayain buri tarah se tez ho gayi yeh unka gussa nahi, balki utsah tha

A.Dev : Yeh… yeh wahi roshni hai jo us din thi… hazaron saal pehle… jab Samrat… jab Veeranchal gayab hua tha…


usne apni shakti ko vibhakt kiya tha…
V.Dev ne shunya se guzarti hawa ko rok kar mehsos kiya Unke jism main kampan tha

V.Dev : Bramhand kamp raha hai… yeh kampan dar ka nahi hai yeh aagman (arrival) ka hain Naye Tattva ka aagman ka

J.Dev ne apne samundron ko pukara ( jo sirf unke mastishk main the ) lekin unka man samundar tufaan se hil raha tha


J.Dev: Yeh… yeh nahi ho sakta… Kaal-Chakra wapis ghum gaya hai…


Aur phir... woh hua.
Roshni ke center se ek vishal neela sunehra gola nikla Yeh gola tez raftar se badne laga Uske badne ki gati aisi thi jaise samay piche daud raha ho Pal bhar main woh ek pura grah ban gaya Ek grah jaisa gola par jeevant shakti se bharpoor

VEERANCHAL – Uska naam tha


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Yeh grah sirf ek graha nahi tha Yeh sankalp, tyag, aur anant balance ka jeevant roop tha. Uske charon taraf neli aur sunehri aag ki leharain thi. Yeh aag jalati nahi thi Shanti deti thi. Uske center main ek vishal chakra ghum raha tha – Panch Tattva ka Chakra – jismain panch rang the Neela (Jal), Laal (Agni), Safed (Vayu), Sunehra (Prithvi), aur Kala (Shunya/Akash) Yeh chakra itni tez raftar se ghum raha tha ki uski dhwani (sound) samay aur shunya ki deewaron ko tod kar pure bramhand main gunj rahi thi


Jaise hi yeh grah pura prakat hua pure bramhand main maha bhukamp aa gaya
Galaxiyon ke beech ka shunya zor se hilne laga. Tare apni jagha se hat gaye jaise koi haath unhe dakel raha ho Nebulae phatne lage Black Holes bi kamp uthe unki kheenchne ki shakti pal bhar ke liye dhemi pad gayi Samay ki leharain bi ruk gayi

Amar-Sabha main Devon ne apne singhasanon se uth kar sir jhukaya Unke chehre par dar tha dar is anant shakti ka, lekin saath hi ek ajeeb si khushi bi thi khushi is balance ke wapis aane ki.
Devraj ne apna Vajra uthaya lekin unka haath kamp raha tha Devraj ab sankoch se bhaybheet the


Devraj : Yeh… yeh Veeranchal hai… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… Woh wapis aa gaya… Samrat ki shakti ka prateek.

S.Dev ki aankhoo main ansu chalak aaye

S.Dev : Jiska dar tha… wahi hua… Lekin dar vinash ka nahi tha dar parivartan ka tha Samrat wapis aa chuka hai… aur ab Kall Dhwaj ka ant nischit hain Lekin uske bad Jo Hoga uska abhi se soch kar dar lag Raha Hain

A.Dev ki jwalayain aankhoo main tez ho gayi

A.Dev : Us din… jab woh gayab hua tha… tab pura bramhand hil gaya tha… aaj phir wahi ho raha hai… shanti se pehle ka maha bhumkamp

V.Dev ki aankhoo main gehra gyan jalak raha tha

V.Dev : Yeh grah sirf ek grah nahi tha… yeh Samrat ki rooh ka hissa tha jo uske tyag ke baad yeh grah gayab ho gaya tha … ab yeh wapis aa gaya… matlab... Veeranchal ne purn roop le liya hain


J.Dev ne sir jhukaya.

J.Dev : Matlab… woh wapis aa gaya hai… Samrat… woh punarjanm le chuka hai… Kavir ki icha puri ho gayi…



to wahi ek Anjan jagha per :-


Jab pura Bramhand kamp raha tha Kaal Granthalaya ki gehraiyon main Shanti thi Rishi Bhramar aur Kavir jo ab Veeranchal ki shakti se bhega hua tha, par abhi bi manav roop main stir tha asmaan ke darpan main is drishya ko dekh rahe the.
Kavir ki aankhoo main Vishal Chakra ki pratibimb thi Woh hairat se Rishi Bhramar ko dekta raha

Kavir ( Dhemi, par Awaz main Anant-Shanti ) : Rishi… yeh… yeh grah… kya yeh meri akhri icha ka natija hai? Kya yeh Veeranchal ki shakti ka bhautik roop hain

Rishi Bhramar muskuraye Unka chehra apni Sari shanti se bharmar tha

Rishi Bhramar : Beta Kavir woh grah sirf grah nahi hai. Woh Tumhara Tyag hain Jab Samrat Veeranchal vibhakt hua tha, toh uski rooh ka bahari kosh (outer shell) is grah main chala gaya tha. Woh kosh prakat ho gaya, kyunke tumne uske teesre tukde – Icha-Shakti – ko purn kar diya

Kavir ne dheere se apne haath dekhe jahan Neeli-Sunehri roshni abhi bi thehri hui thi

Kavir : Lekin Rishi… Veeranchal ab wapis aa gaya toh Kya ab Maha yudh nischit hai? Veeranchal ke prakat hone se sab itne dar kyun rahe hain jabke woh khud balance ka swami Hain

Rishi Bhramar ki aankhoo main gehrai thi

Rishi Bhramar : sab Dev Veeranchal se nahi darte Kavir Woh darte hain Kall Dhwaj ki Pratikriya (reaction) se Veeranchal ka punarjanm uske ant ka aramb Hain Jab Shaktiyan ek saath aati hain toh Andhera zor se ladta hai Aur Kall Dhwaj hamesha Veeranchal ka dusman raha hain

Kavir : Toh ab… meri bhomika kya hai? Kya main wapis Veeranchal main jaa Sakta ho Ya uske saath rehkar burai se ladhoga

Rishi Bhramar ( akhri shant sargoshi ) : Kavir Tumhare manav-roop ne tyag kiya hain Tumhara grah prakat ho chuka hai. Ab nirnay tumhara hai Tumhara jeevan ab ek yudh hai Kavir. Aur yeh yudh andar se shuru hokar bahar khatam hoga

rashi Bhramar ki baat sunkar kavir ne koi jawab Nahin diya aur woh uth kar Usne Rishi Bhramar ko pranam Kiya aur waha se chale gaye

Kall Dhwajgarh andhere aur krurta (cruelty) ka Vishal Samrajya. Usi pal, jab Veeranchal prakat hua, Kall Dhwaj apne singhasan par baitha tha. Uska gussa shant nahi hua tha. Viraksha ki haar, Dahakaal ka bheja jaana – sab kuch uske dimag main ek tufan bana hua tha. Uska chehra kala pad chuka tha uske honth kamp rahe the

Tabhi darbar ke darwaze par ek tez, bhayanak awaz aayi jaise koi bimeari andar aa gayi ho

Ek chota sa darpok sa Kabri Asur andar aya. Uska sharir sara kamp raha tha jaise thandi lag rahi ho jabki Kall Dhwajgarh hamesha aag se bhara rehta tha Uska matha paseene se bhara tha.
Kabri Asur kanpte hue uski awaz dabi hui thi

Kabri : Maharaj… Maharaj… bohut badi khabar hai…

Kall Dhwaj ne uski taraf dekha. Uski Aankhoo main aag nahi shunya tha Usne dheere se apna sir jhukaya

Kall Dhwaj : Bolo! Agar tumhara shabd mere gusse se chota hua toh tumhari rakh bi nahi milegi

Kabri Asur ne Sara darr ek saath nigeal liya.
Kabri Asur : Veeranchal… woh grah… wapis aa gaya hai…

Kall Dhwaj ka chehra ek pal main safed pad gaya Usne apna singhasan ka hathla itne zor se pakad liya ki uski ungliyan pathar main ghus gayi Kall Dhwajgarh ka sinhasan pathar ka nahi Asuri Dhatu ka tha

Kall Dhwaj dhemi, lekin Bayankar jaise ek mara hua shaitan bol raha ho

Kall Dhwaj : Kya… kaha… tumne…? Yeh jhoot hai! Jhoot bolo Tum ke yeh jhoot bol Rahe ho

Kabri Asur ne sir jhuka liya. Uske hoth apas main jud chuke the

Kabri Asur : Maharaj… woh grah jo hazaron saal pehle gayab ho gaya tha… woh aaj subah se dikhai de raha hai… pure bramhand main… har jagha… har Kisi ko pata chal gaya Hain ke Veeranchal grah wapis aa gaya Hain


Kall Dhwaj ne apni aankheen band ki Uske dimag main woh purana Yudh yaad aa gaya Woh yudh jis main usne apni puri sena kho di thi Woh yudh jis main Samrat ne usko buri tarha hara kar Veeranchal se buri tarha se nikal diya aur kall Dhwaj ko Shakti bi Usse cheen li Th


Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur gusse main uski sansain tez thi

Kall Dhwaj : Nahi… nahi… yeh nahi ho sakta… woh toh mar chuka tha… uski shakti toh maine hi… khatam ki thi… main hi Bramhand ka samrat hoon

Usne apni aankheen kholi Uski Aankhoo main gussa kam Bayankar dar ziyada tha. Pure darbar main sannata chha gaya

Kall Dhwaj ne apna haath uthaya aur us kabri asur ko apni taraf khincha Asur ka sharir hawa main ud gaya. Asur chekh bi nahi paya

Kall Dhwaj Chillate hue uski awaz Bramhand main gunj Rahi Thi

Kall Dhwaj ( gusse main Chillate hue ) : TUNE MUJHE YE KHABAR KYUN DI?! TUNE MUJHE DARAYA HAI MERI SHANTI BHANG KI HAI TUMNE

Usne apna haath aur zor se dabaya. Kabri Asur ka sharir pal bhar main jal kar kali Rakh ho gaya aur woh rakh hawa main mil gayi

Kall Dhwaj ab apne singhasan se utha. Uska jism kamp raha tha Uske dimag main sirf ek hi vichar tha Apna Ant Rokna

Kall Dhwaj apne ap se dar aur pagalpan ki had tak

Kall Dhwaj : Agar woh wapis aa gaya… toh mera ant nischit hai… woh mujhe nahi chodege… woh mujhe zinda nahi chodege… usne mera sab kuch cheena tha


Usne apne darbar ki taraf dekha Uske chehre par ab gussa nahi balki khoonkhar pagalpan chaya hua tha

Kall Dhwaj ( tez awaz main ) : “ABHI KE ABHI! POORI SENA KO TAIYAR KARO! HAR EK ASUR, HAR EK DAITYA, PURE GRAH MAIN JITNE BI LOG HAIN SABKO TAIYAR KARO ! HUM ABHI KE ABHI US GRAH PAR HAMLA KAREGE! MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! JIS GRAH KO WOH APNI ROOH KEHTA HAI MAIN USE JALA DUNGA

Usne apn Dand uthaya ( jo Black Hole ke core se bana tha ) aur zameen par zor se mara. Pura Kall Dhwajgarh tez awaz ke saath hil gaya aur uski dewaron se agni nikalne lagi

Kall Dhwaj akhri cheekh, uski Aankhoo main Bramhand ka Vinash tha

Kall Dhwaj : MAIN USKO KHATAM KARKE RAHUNGA! CHAHE ISKE LIYE MUJHE PURA BRAMHAND JALANA PADE! MAHA YUDH KA AARAMBH ABHI HOGA

Uske aadesh ke saath hi, pura Kall Dhwajgarh yudh ke liye taiyar ho gaya. Maha Sankat aane wala tha Veeranchal wapis aa chuka tha aur uske dusman aur dost sabhi jante the ki ab shanti asanbhav hain

To wahi Satyalok main :-

Surya aur Lady of Satyalok us tez roshni ke beech tezi se aage badh rahe the. Surya ka jism tej aur ajeeb urja se bhara tha Usne pehli baar Bramhand ki asli shakti ko itne kareeb se mehsos kiya tha Lady of Satyalok uske aage thi unka chehra shant lekin sankalp se bhara tha

Surya Hairani se aas-pass ki roshni ko dekte hue ladki se kehta Hain

Surya : Devi yeh kaun si jagha hai Hum kitni tezi se travel kar rahe hain

Ladki : Yeh kaal aur samay se pare hai, Surya Hum man ki raftar se chal rahe hain Is se pehle ki Kall Dhwaj apni nakami se dar kar koi aur pagalpan kare, humain us tak pahunchna hoga

Surya ( Thoda ghabrahat main ) : Lekin Devi Dahakaal itna shaktishali tha uske pass Kall Dand ki shakti thi Aur jise aapne mere roop main Dharti par choda tha... woh kaun tha? Kya woh apki shakti hain

Ladki : ( Muskurate hue bina ruke ) : Haan Surya. Woh main thi aur tum the Meri adhi shakti jo shuddhi aur gyan ki rakshak hai, use tumhara roop diya gaya tha Kall Dand ki shakti ko sirf brahmandiya urja hi hara sakti thi

Surya ( Gehri soch main ) : Toh main kall dhwaj ka Samna kaise karunga Jab ap usko akhiri mauka de rahi thi... tab usne aisa Kya kaha jis se ap itna gussa ho gayi ke itni jald hi ap us kall Dhwaj ka ant Karna Chahti Hain

Lady of Satyalok ruk gayi Unke rukte hi aaspass ki roshni bi shant ho gayi, jaise koi tez nade ruk gayi ho Unka chehra ab dard aur gehre rahasya se bhara tha

Lady of Satyalok Dheere se boli unki awaz main hazaron yugo ka bojh tha

Ladki : Kall Dhwaj ki asli kamzori shakti nahi uska ahankaar hain Aur uska ahankaar mujhse juda hai Sadiyon pehle jab Brahmand main Samrat ka raaj tha... Kall Dhwaj unka sabse vishwaspaatr (most trusted) senapati tha

Surya : Samrat (man main) yeh Samrat Kon Hain akhir kyun yeh Naam sunte hi man main ek ajeeb si feeling AA jati Hain aisa lagta hain jaise ke main hi Samrat ho

Abhi Surya soch hi Raha tha ke Lady of Satyalok phir se boli

Ladki : Haan. Samrat Kall Dhwaj ne hamesha Samrat ki shakti aur niyamon ka apman kiya Ek baar usne Samrat ke samne mujhe pane ki ghustakhi (audacity) ki Samrat ne usko apne Darbar se nikal diya aur uski shakti cheen li. Us din se, Kall Dhwaj ne Samrat se badla lene aur mujhe pane ke liye Kall Dand ki paapi tapasya shuru ki. Woh janta hai, agar woh mujhe hasil kar leta hai toh woh Samrat ki sabse badi jeet ko har main badal dega

Surya ( Gusse main ) : Toh woh badle ke liye yeh sab kar raha hain

Ladki : Haan Lekin ab yeh Samrat ki baat nahi hain Ab yeh Brahmand ki shanti ki baat hain Aur ismain tumhara Gyan aur Sankalp hi kaam aayega

Unke chehre par ek gahra nishchay aya

Ladki : Tumhe Samrat ke Samrajya Satyalok main aye ho Surya. Yaha tumhe woh shakti milegi jiski tumhe zarorat hain Main tumhe kaal ki seemaon se pare sidhe dwaar tak pahunchati hoon


Lady of Satyalok ke akhri shabd tezi se roshni main ghul gaye Aur agle hi pal, Surya ek tez neele portal (dwaar) se bahar nikla aur uske jism ko ek ajeeb si shanti ne ghera (surround) kar liya Us portal ki tez roshni uske sharir se guzri, aur jab woh thehra, toh usne apni aankhoo par vishwas nahi kiya

Woh Anant Shunya ka tez, thanda andhera gayab ho chuka tha. Uske badle Surya khada tha Divya Prakash main jaha har kan main jeevan tha Yeh Satyalok tha

Pehla ehsas Vayu ka tha—ek aisi hawa jo saanson main amrit ghol de. Dusra ehsas roshni ka tha ek Sun (Suraj) jaisa gola jo Bramhand ke har taraf apna rang faila raha tha Us Sun ke upar kai galaxiyon ke jhilmilate nishan the Badal ruyi ki tarah safed the aur un badalon ke upar chote-chote floating islands ( udte hue dweepv) tehar rahe the

Samne do vishal sundar arch (dwaar-stambh) the jo gulabi aur neele pholon se dhake hue the Un dwaron ke beech se Surya ne Satyalok ki asli shan dekhi.
Satyalok koi aam darti nahi thi. Yeh Shakti aur Saundarya ka mishran tha.
Center main ek Vishal, sunehri mandir shaan se khada tha. Mandir ek bade floating island par bana hua tha, aur us island se charon taraf do vishal waterfalls (jharna) shanti se niche gir rahe the. Woh pani sirf jal nahi tha divya urja ka pravah tha. Woh Pani niche guzarte hue beech main bane ek Vishal talab (pond) main mil raha tha


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Us talab main hazaron kamal khile hue the neele gulabi naurangi (orange) – jinki roshni Pani main dheere dheere nach rahi thi. Talab ke upar do sundar pathar ke pul the jo pholon se saje the aur woh pul mandir ki taraf jate the


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Har taraf vriksh the jinki shakhon par here chamak rahe the aur unke pass chote chote floating islands the jin par chote chote mandir bane the Surya ek pal ke liye ruk gaya. Usne apne ap ko pukara (summoned his focus) Uske manav-roop ki thakan is mahol main gayab ho gayi

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Surya ab dheere se us talab ki taraf badha Uske kadam awaz nahi kar rahe the, jaise woh hawa par chal raha ho. Jab woh pul ke pass pohcha, usne apni pehli nazar samne badi murti par Dali.
Vaha talab ke beech main chote se teele (mound) par ek vishal murti khadi thi. Murti safed sangmarmar ki thi, par usmain sunehre aur neele nishan the. Woh murti ek majboot, divya-yoddha ki thi, jisne ek haath main tez roshni ki talwar utha rakhi thi, aur uski Aankhoo mein anant shanti thi. Murti ke paas ek khoobsurat mayur (peacock) khada tha, jiske pankh neeli roshni se chamak rahe the


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Surya us murti ko dhyan se dek hi raha tha, ki tabhi talab ke pani par halke se chalte hue woh ladki uske samne aayi. Uska chehra shanti aur saundarya ka prateek tha. Uske vastra gulabi kamal ke patton se bune the, aur uski Aankhoo main Satyalok ka Gyan bhara hua tha

Ladki : Swagat hai Surya… humari prateeksha (our wait) safal hui


Uski awaz shehad ki tarah methi aur Vayu ki tarah halki thi

Surya ( Us murti se nazar hataye bina ) : Swagat… waqai bohut sundar aur alokik jagha Hain yeh Satyalok waise Yeh murti kiski hai? Yeh yodha kaun hai, jiske paas mayur aur tej talwar hai

Ladki us murti ki taraf dekhi. Uske chehre par aadar (reverence) ka bhav tha


Ladki : Yeh murti hamare Samrat ki hai us Samrat ki jisne is sansar main sachai aur achai ko kabhi Nahin jhukne diya
Bohut mahan Samrat the woh

Surya ( Hairat se ) : Lekin woh yahan murti main kyun hain agar woh itne bade Samrat hain toh

Ladki : Samrat yahan is Liye hain kyunke unhone apni shakti ko bramhand main vibhakt (divided) kar diya tha. Woh ab humare saath bhautik roop main nahi hain lekin unki aashirwad aur shakti hamesha Satyalok ko suraksha deti hai. Lekin… yeh prateeksha jaldi khatam hogi

Surya : Kaisi prateeksha?

Ladki : Unka punarjanm ho chuka hai. Woh wapis aane wale hain aur iss baar purani shakti puri hogi Satyalok unke aagman ki prateeksha main hi jevit hai. Humari har sans unke liye Hain

Ladki ne aage bad kar talab ke pani se ek bond uthai aur Surya ke mathe par laga diya

Ladki : satyalok keval pholon aur pani ka sthan nahi hai Surya Yeh shuddhta ka antim chor hain Yahan har ek pool ek yug ka gyan rakhta hai, aur har ek bond ek katha batati hai


Ladki ne dheere se kuch pal chup reh kar Surya ki aankhoo main dekha Uske chehre par gambherta aa gayi thi


Ladki : Ab samay aa chuka hai, Surya. Veeranchal ka aagman ho Chuka Hain aur uske aagman se ke foran bad Tumhe apne vastr ( costume ) wapis hasil karna hai

Surya ( Hairat aur Uljhan main ) : Costume? Kaisa costume? Ap kis costume ki baat kar raha hoon? Mere pass toh bas yeh vastr hain

Ladki Ek raaz bhari muskan ke saath

Ladki : Costume nahi shakti ka roop (form of power) Surya. Tumhara asli tej. Jab tumne manav roop liya tha, tab tumhari shakti chup gayi Thi Woh roop yahan Satyalok main surakshit hai Lekin abhi nahi…

Ladki ne apna haath aage badhaya aur talab se nikle gulabi kamalon ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Jab tum us tak pohunchoge tab dek lena Tumhari shakti tumhe bata degi ki woh kya hai Sirf pehchan zarori hain

Surya ne ek gehri sans li. Uski atma janti thi ki yeh raaz kitna zarori hai

Surya : Samaj gaya

Ladki turant mudi aur pul ki taraf chali gayi. Surya bi uske piche chal diya Pul se guzarte hue Surya ne dekha ki talab ka pani uske chalne par apne ap hat jata tha aisa lag Raha tha jaise Pani bi khud surya ko Rasta de Rahi ho

Woh dono mandir ki taraf nahi gaye. Ladki ne ek dusre chote raste ki taraf ishara kiya, jo do waterfalls ke beech se hokar ek chote floating island ki taraf jaata tha

Jab woh is naye dweep par pohche, Surya ne Pehchan liya ki yahan atmosphere badal gaya hain Center main ek vishal pathar ka stambh ( pillar ) tha jiske charon taraf neele aur gulabi rang ki roshni sarpilakar (spiral) main ghum rahi thi. Upar, ek vishal moon (chand) chamak raha tha, jismain ek neli urja dund rahi thi Yeh sthan shakti ka केंद्र (centre) tha


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Ladki ne us sarpilakar stambh ki taraf ishara kiya

Ladki : Surya Tumhe ab yeh pariksha dekar woh costume hasil karna hi hoga. Tumhara asli tej is stambh ke shikar (peak) par chupa hua hai. Tumhari shakti tabhi jagegi jab tumhari atma teen sawalon ke sahi jawab degi

Surya : Pariksha? Kaise sawal? Aur agar main fail hua toh?

Ladki ( Shanti se ) : Sawal tumhare jeevan ke hisab se honge. Tumhari Atma se jude hue. Raste main aane wali har chunauti ek sawal hogi. Aur fail hone ka matlab… tum manav roop main hamesha ke liye kho jaoge, aur Bramhand per burai ka Raaj Hoga jis se phir koi bi burai ko rok Nahin payega

Surya : Aur ap Kya ap mere saath rahogi


Ladki : Nahi Yeh pariksha vyaktigat (personal) hain Tumhe akela chalna hoga, apni nishchay (determination) ke saath Lekin yaad rakna, Satyalok ki roshni hamesha tumhare saath hai

Surya

( Ek nishchay ke saath ) : Theek hain Main apni pariksha ke liye taiyar hoon

Ladki ne dheere se sir jukaya Uska chehra ek antim baar tez roshni se chamak utha

Ladki : Shubh yatra Surya. Samay tumhara hai

Aur agle hi pal, Ladki wahan se gayab ho gayi, jaise woh hawa main ghul gayi ho. Surya akela khada tha, us sarpilakar stambh ke paas. Uski Aankhoo main tez roshni thi, aur uske samne uske jeevan ki sabse badi pariksha khadi thi

To wahi college main :-

College ka maidan, Jaha kuch ghante pehle hasi, shor, aur jevan tha, ab ek bayanak, adrishya yudh-kshetra ban chuka tha. Asman kaala pad chuka tha, jaise suraj ko kisi vishal hatheli ne daba diya ho. Hawa main bijli aur maut ka shor chha chuka tha. Mousam ka dar itna ghana tha ki aas pass ki buildings ke kanch apne ap chatak (shattering) rahe the

Samne khada tha DAHAKAAL – 30 foot ka lohe aur kala lava se bana Vishal asur Uska jism dhoop se nahi, Kall Dand ki laal-kali bijli se chamak raha tha. Woh bijli har pal uske lohe ke jism main laplapati thi, jaise koi bimari tez ho rahi ho. Uske panv jahan padte the, wahan zameen Rakh ho jati thi
Uske samne, darti par akela khada tha N.Surya Uska roop sirf Surya jaisa nahi tha Woh ab manav nahi balki shuddh Tej ka sanchar tha Uska chehra Surya jaisa Masom tha, lekin uski Aankhoo main do bramhand gati (movement) kar rahe the—ek neela shunya aur dusra sunehra prakash

Uske charon taraf ek slow motion main teen divya mandal (Divine Rings) ghum rahe the Pehla mandal shwet tha ( Vayu ) dusra neela ( Jal ) aur tesra sunehra ( Prithvi ) Woh Teeno ek saath ghum rahe the jaise teen suraj ek jagha khel rahe hon aur unki gati se samay bi dhema pad chuka tha

Dahakaal aur N.Surya ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the Dahakaal ki aankhoo main Andere ki aag thi aur N.Surya ki aankhoo main hazaron yugon ki shanti thi

Zameen kamp rahi thi. Pahadon ki jagha ab college ki buildings thi, par shor wahi maha-pralay ka tha

Dahakaal ne apna vishal haath uthaya. Uske haath main samai Kall Dand ki shakti ek akhri galti karne ko taiyar thi.
Dahakaal ki awaz itni tez ki asman phat gaya mano darti bhi dard main ho


Dahakaal : Tum Surya ke roop main ho… lekin tum main Satyalok ki piri shakti bol rahi hai. Acha… aaj main Bramhand ki do sabse badi taqat ek saath nasht karunga! Pahle pahle us ladki ki takat aur dusri is darti ka ant


DAHAKAAL ne apne hathon ko jor se jod diya Uske jism se nikalti sari kali bijli uper asmaan ki taraf chali gayi

KALL DAND : MAHAPRALY CHAKRA

asman phat gaya Waha koi awaz nahi hui sirf ek tez aag thi. asman se ek 3 kilometre chauda kaala-laal chakra sedhe N.Surya ki taraf utra Yeh chakra sirf gol nahi tha yeh andere ki prateek thi. Uske andar lakhon bijli ke sanp (snakes) apne nishanon ko dund rahe the

Dahakaal ki aankhoo main gamand (arrogance) tha Yeh war itna shaktishali tha ki jahan se guzra, wahan pahad bi rakh ban gaye the aur ab uske raste main college ki imartein thi

N.Surya ne dheere se sans bhari Uske chehre par ek bi bhav nahi badla Yeh shanti hi uski sabse badi taqat thi

Uske sharir se nikalti tez, shwet sunehri roshni ab uske teen mandalon ke saath ghul gayi. Roshni itni shuddh thi ki aas-pass ka Andhera apne ap piche hat raha tha

Usne apna daya haath aage kiya. Uske haath main koi talwar nahi thi

sirf anant shakti ka kendra (center) tha.

“ANANT PRAKASH : BRAMHAND VIRAAT„

Uske haath se ek Shudh shwet-sunehri kiran nikli – lekin yeh koi kiran nahi thi. Yeh tez roshni ki Dewar thi. Yeh shakti itni tez thi ki andhera bi pal bhar ke liye jal gaya, aur kaal ki dehshat bi mit gayi.
Kiran ne MahaPralay Chakra ko beech main se chera

Wahan koi takkar nahi hui. Koi vishal damaka nahi hua. Sirf ek pal ki shanti thi, jab shuddhta paap se mili

Chakra ke do tukde huye aur woh tukde asman main hi bhasm ho gaye Bijli ke sanp roshni main badal gaye. Pure shehar main ek pal ke liye tez din ho gaya, jaise teen suraj ek saath ugg aaye hon

Dahakaal ki aankheen phail gayi Uska gamand toot chuka tha

Dahakaal : Yeh… yeh kya shakti hai Tune mera mahapralay aise kaise khatam kar diya

N.Surya dheere se bola uski awaz shanti ki garaj thi

N.Surya : Yeh shakti nahi… yeh Satyalok ka niyam (law) hai. Jahan Andera hoga wahan roshni ka pravah swabhavik (natural) hain Tumne todna sekha maine jodna sekha Hain ab tera ant Hoga Dahakaal

N.Surya ne samne ki taraf dekha College ki buildings adhi toot chuki thi zameen phat chuki thi, aur students aur teachers dar ke mare behosh padhe the

Usne apna baya haath uthaya. Uske haath se teen mandalon ki shakti ek saath nikli

“DIVYA SANKALP : AMRIT VARSHA”


asman se pani nahi, balki lakhon sunehre-neele phool girne lage Yeh phool sirf sundar nahi the yeh Satyalok ki rooh (soul) the Jahan jahan phool gire, wahan zameen phir se hari ho gayi Toti hui buildings ke tukde wapis judne lage. Ped paudhe phir se jee uthe

Amrit Varsha ka prabhav Dahakaal par bi hua. Uske jism par lagi Kali bijli shant hone lagi aur kuch der ke liye uska gussa dhema pad gaya Usne mehsos kiya ki uski shakti chin rahi hai

Dahakaal iska virod nahi seh saka. Usne N.Surya ki shakti ko apna apman samjha

Dahakaal gusse se chillaya, uski chekh main hazaron Asuro ka krod tha

Dahakaal : RUK JA! Main tera yeh bachpana nahi dekhunga! Main vinash hoon! Aur ab tera ant nischit hai

Woh dauda 30 foot ka Vishal jism ek pal main N.Surya ke samne pohanch gaya Usne apna pura Kall Dand ek vishal talwar main badla lamba aur bayankar aur N.Surya par apni sari shakti se war kiya

KALL DAND : ASUR-ANGAAR TALWAR

Talwar neche giri. Agar yeh war lagta toh pura campus pal bhar main shunya ho jaata. Lekin N.Surya apni jagha sthir khada tha


N.Surya ne apne dono haatho ko dheere se upar uthaya. Uske charon taraf ghumte teen mandal tez raftar se ghumne lage aur ek saath jud gaye

“PARAM TATVA : KAAL-CHAKRA BANDHAN”

Uske charon taraf ek sunehra neela ghumta hua chakra bana Yeh chakra shakti ka nahi samay ka tha Chakra ke andar samay ki Teeno dishayain dik rahi thi bhoot (past) tez raftar se chalta hua vartmaan (present) ek bindu par thehra hua, aur bhavishya (future) ek tez roshni ki tarah aage badta hua

Dahakaal ki Asur Angaar Talwar us chakra se takrayi aur… Theek ushi pal… ruk gayi

Tension itni tez thi ki dono ki shakti apas main takra kar ek shunya bana rahi thi. Dahakaal apni puri shakti se talwar ko aage dakel raha tha, lekin talwar kaal ki deewar se aage nahi badh payi
N.Surya ne dheere se apna haath ghumaaya

Aur phir… Talwar palat (reversed) gayi. Samay ne Dahakaal ki shakti ko hi uske khilaf istemal kar diya

Talwar ulta mud kar tez raftar se Dahakaal ke sene main ghus gayi

“BOOM!!!!„

Dahakaal ke jism se tez awaz nikli. Woh dard se chillaya aur uska vishal jism 800 meter Peche ud kar zameen main 50 foot ka gehra gaddha bana gaya. Khoon ki jagha uske seene se kali bijli behti thi, jo zameen ko jala rahi thi


Dahakaal gusse aur apman main pagal ho gaya. Usne apne dono haatho se zameen par mukka mara. Ab usne apni antim aur sabse bhayanak shakti istemal ki

KALL DAND : MRITYU SANKET

Zameen tez raftar se phat gayi. College ka maidan ek Vishal, kala muh ban gaya. Usmain se lakhon kale haath nikle, jo N.Surya ko pakadne aaye. Yeh haath sirf haath nahi the, yeh Kall Dhwaj ki tapasya ka shunya roop tha

N.Surya ki aankhoo main ab ek naya sankalp tha. Usne apna tesra, sabse shaktishali mandal jageaya. Teen mandalon ki shakti uski atma se jud gayi

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM SWAROOP : TRINETRA MAHANYAAS”

Uske maathe par ek tesra neela-sunehra aankh khula. Yeh aankh gyan, shanti, aur nyay ka prateek tha. Us ankh se ek shwet prakash nikla – itna shudh ki sabhi kale hath rakh ho gaye Prakash sedha Dahakaal ke dil tak gaya

Jaise hi prakash dil main ghusa Dahakaal ke andar ka Sara paap, krod lobh aur Kall Dand ki tapasya sab ek saath jalne laga. Uska bhayankar jism andar se pighal raha tha

Dahakaal bhayanak dard main chillaya, uski awaz main khud ka ant tha

Dahakaal : Nahi… meri shakti… meri shakti mujhe kha rahi hai!! Yeh shuddhta mujhe jala rahi hain

Uske jism par bijli ki tarah lakdak lakdak phatne lagi. Kall Dand ki sari bijli andar se hi usko jalane lagi

N.Surya dheere se aage badha Usne apna daya haath Dahakaal ke seene par rakha

N.Surya dhimi lekin garajti awaz jo Dahakaal ki rooh tak gayi

N.surya : Tune Bramhand ke niyam tode. Tune sirf vinash chuna Ab tu shunya main shanti payega… sada ke liye. Yeh Satyalok ka antim nyay hai.

“SATYALOK KA ANTAM NYAAY : PARAM SHUNYA DWARM

Uske haath se ek chota sa shwet-neela gola bana. Yeh gola bada nahi tha lekin uska wazan pure Bramhand jitna tha. Gola Dahakaal ke seene main ghus gaya.
Dahakaal ka pura 30 foot ka jism ek pal ke liye shwet ho gaya… jaise usse sara kala rang chen liya gaya ho. Phir… ek chote se shunya (black-white hole) main convert hokar gayab ho gaya Saath main Kall Dand ki puri shakti bi hamesha ke liye shunya main sama gayi


Pure maidan main ekdum sannata chha gaya Dahakaal ka ant ho chuka tha Shunya ka chota sa gola dheere-dheere band ho gaya

Sirf sunehre neele phool hawa main ud rahe the jo Amrit Varsha se aaye the
N.Surya ne asman ki taraf dekha Uske sharir ki roshni dheere-dheere kam ho rahi thi Uska roop wapis manav jaisa ho raha tha

N.Surya ( muskurate hue apne ap se ) :
Surya… ab tera samay aa gaya hai… Ab Veeranchal ka agla kaam shuru hoga

Uske teesre neele-sunehre aankh ab band ho chuke the Usne apne dono hatho ko dheere se upar uthaya

“SATYALOK KA PARAM AASHEESH : PUNARJANM AURA”

Uske hathon se ek shudh shwet sunehri lehri pure campus par phail gayi. Yeh lehri sirf marammat nahi kar rahi thi, yeh kaal-chakra ko wapis laa rahi thi

Jahan building tooti thi, wahan nayi dewarain khud ban gayi. Jahan zameen phati thi, wahan phir se hari ghans ug aayi. Toote hue ped, bench, canteen ka glass – sab kuch pal bhar main pehle jaisa ho gaya. Jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
Phir usne apna daya haath sabki taraf kiya, jo ab bi wahan behosh padhe the

“DIVYA SANKALP : SMRITI MOKSHA”

Ek halki neeli roshni un sab ke maathe par lagi. Naira, Mehar, Sonia, Sapna, Rocky – aur pure college sabki aankheen ek pal ke liye shwet ho gayi. Unki Yadain – Dahakaal ka vishal roop, bijli, aag, tabahi – sab kuch ek jalak main mita diya gaya. Dahakaal ka naam bi unke dimag se gayab ho chuka tha.
Ab unke dimag main sirf itna yaad tha ki woh canteen main baith kar masti kar rahe the, phir bell baji, aur sab class ki taraf ja rahe the. Unki atma shant ho chuki thi


N.Surya ne apna roop dheere se badla ab woh bilkul normal Surya lag raha tha, college student ki tarha Usne tez kadam liye aur apne doston ke paas gaya jo ab uthe the

Surya bilkul normal awaz main, muskurate hue jismain ab koi tez shakti nahi thi

N.surya : Are yar, sorry! Mujhe abhi ek bohut zarori kaam yaad aa gaya Kam bohut important Hain ishi ki waja se shayad Kal bi naa AA Pao to Tum sab log tension mat Lena okay

Naira ( ab bilkul normal todi chinta se, apne baalo ko theek karte hue ) :
Kya hua Surya? Sab thek toh hai na? Tumhari aankheen thodi laal lag rahi hain

Surya ( muskurate hue) :Bas todi si problem hai, kal tak sab sort ho jayega. Tum log ghar jao, rest karo. Main message kar dunga okay

Sonia : agar kuch bi ho toh ek call kar dena. Hum aa jayenge. Apna khayal rakhna

Sapna ( aankhoo main pyaar aur chinta ) : Haan chote, jaldi wapis aana hum sab tera with karega okay

N.surya : ap sab tension mat lo maim thek ho jaldi hi AA jaoga okay bye everyone

Sab ne ek dusre ko hug kiya, bye bola aur apne-apne raste nikal gaye. Kisi ko kuch yaad nahi tha. Campus ek dum normal tha – jaise har roz hota hain
Surya un sab ko door tak jate dekhta raha Uske chehre par aaj pehli baar apne manav jeevan ko chodne ka dukh tha

Phir usne dheere se palta, aur college ke peche ek bilkul sunsan jagha purane store-room ke peche chala gaya Wahan koi nahi tha Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati bell ki awaz Thi

Wahan ponch kar usne apna haath aage badhaya

Ek chota sa sunehra neela gola prakat hua – portal Woh portal ladki ki sakti ka Prateek tha
Usne ek akhri bar college ki taraf dekha, muskuraya, aur dheere se bola:
Surya ( khud se ) : Ab… asli Yudh baki hai

Woh portal main kadam rakha.
Portal band hua. Wahan sirf thodi si sunehri neeli roshni ek pal ke liye chamki… phir woh bi gayab ho gayi.
Ab college ek dum shant tha Jaise kuch hua hi na ho

Lekin door asman main ek tez roshni phir se chamki – jaise koi aur, bohut bada tofan aane wala ho Aur woh roshni sedhe Satyalok ki taraf ja rahi thi... Veeranchal ke aagman ki ghoshna karte hue


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