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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

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flashback continues:

rudra ne fir pucha ki to decide kar lo tum sab ki kaha pe chalna hai.

sab ne ek sath bola aur kaha ki switzerland.

samara - ok packing kar lo tum sab

armaan - meri packing amu kar degi. aur main aaya abhi mike freya se

itna bol ke wo freya se milne chala gaya.

waha freya ke ghar me wo apne gifts khol ke dekh rahi thi..

tabhi armaan bola

armaan - ye kya tumne abhi tak gifts nahi khole.

freya - nahi itne saare jo hai time to lagega hi.

armaan - ok ok..

waise aunty kaha hai dikh nahi rahi.

freya - mom bahar gayi hai.

armaan - accha waise tum school nahi gayi.

school ki baat sunte hi freya ki aankho me nami aa gayi. jis chehre par abhi muskurahat thi. ab usi jagah pas ek udasi ne ghar kar liya...

jab dad the tab jati thi. aur pata hai amy tab hum is ghar me bhi nahi rahte the. dad mujhe aur mom ko roj ghumane le ke jate the. tab main bhi aur baccho ki tarah school jati thi. meri bhi bhait si friends thi. par dad ko jab gog ne apne paas bulaya tab se maine school jana bhi band kar diya kyonki mom ke paas paise nahi hote itne. aur wo ghar bhi humne chodh diya.

itna bol ke freya rone lagi...

tab armaan uske paas gaya aur bola ki sshhhh nahi freya bas maine to aise hi pucha tha. mera maksad tumhe rulana nahi tha. chup ho jaao nahi to main bhi ro dunga.

jab freya ne ye suna tab usne apne aansu poche aur boli ki tum mat rona dekho main bhi nahi ro rahi ab

thodi hi der baad sophia bhi aa gayi aur jab unhone armaan ko dekha to wo bhi khush ho gayi. un dono ke beech me normally bate chal rahi thi. tab armaan ne bataya ki wo 15 days ke holiday pe apni family ke sath bahar jaa raha hai. ye sunte hi freya ek baar fir udas ho gayi.

tab armaan ne bola ki tum sad mat ho main tumse jaldi hi milunga aur tumhare liye gifts bhi launga and waha se aane ke baad hum bahar bhi jayenge.

tabhi achanak se ghar ke bahar 4 se 5 gadiya aakar ruki aur unme se yahi koi 8 - 10 log utre aur seedhe ghar ke andar chale gaye unke sath kuch police officers bhi the.

yaha sophia to dekh ke shocked ho gayi itne logo ek sath dekhkar aur jab sath me police ko dekha to shock ke dar bhi gayi. eka ek uske man me khayal aaya ki kai kisi ne use school me jump marte hue to nahi dekh liya aur uski complain kar di.

is khayal se uska chehra paseene se bheeg gaya tha. is time agar koi use gaur se dekhta to samajh jata ki ye bhaut dari hui hai. armaan bhi un sab ko gaur se dekh raha tha. aur situation samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki ye log hai kaun.

tabhi unme se ek aadmi aage aaya aur bola ki sophia brown kaun hai. tabhi sophia ne darte darte kaha ki ji main hoon sophia brown.

tab wo aadmi bola ki mrs. brown hum log stallions industries ye hai..asal me aapje husband mr. charlie brown ne humari company me invest kiya tha.

but us time company ki economical condition acchi nahi thi.

us time me mostly shareholders ne apne apne share bech diye the. jis wajah se company ko kafi loss hua aur share bikne se goodwill bhi down ho gayi.

but aapke husband aur unke sath ke logo ne na sirf apne share hold par rakkhe balki company par apna trust bhi banay rakkha.

isliye unke profit ke taur pe company ne aapko ek ghar mall aur sath hi stallions ke 25 % ka shareholder bhi banaya hai.

ye rahe uske paper...aap chahe to check kar sakti hai.

sophia to ye sun ke shocked ho gayi ki..achanak se kya ho gaya. jab kafi der tak usne response nahi diya us aadmi ke baar baar naam bulay jane par tab armaan ne hilakar hosh me laya.

jispar sophia sense me aayi aur usne paper check kiye jo bata rahe the. ki charlie brown ne company me invest kiya tha.

par sophia ne bola ki but charlie ne to kabhi is baat ka zikra nahi kiya mujhse aur aap kah rahe hai ki usne aapki.company me invest kiya tha.

tab wo aadmi bola ki ye hume nahi pata hume jitna kaha gaya tha humne utna kiya. aap chal ke apna ghar aur mall dekh lijiye baki ki formalities advocate aapke naye ghar me kar dega.

yaha sophia is baare me soch rahi thi. soch kya use samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki achanak se ho kya raha hai.

tabhi armaan ke cell me ek message aata hai...jisme likha tha..ki


work done. maine apna part complete kiya ab tum sambhalo aage.

ye message rudra ne bheja tha.



armaan samajh gaya ki use kya karna hai.

tab armaan ne sophia se bola ki aunty aap soch kya rahi hai. aap chaliye jaldi.

itna bol ke armaan unko sath le ke gadi me chal diya. aur wahi freya aone chote se dimag se samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi. ki ye ho kya raha hai. but usne jab dekha ki uski mom pareshan hai to usne kuch nahi pucha.

kuch time baad wo log ek ghar ke saamne the. ghar kya use bangla kahna jyada theek rahega.

sophia ghar ko dekh kar shocked ho gayi kyonki kaha uska tuta ghar aur kaha ye mahal jaisa ghar.

ghar me aane ke baad wakil ne share ke paper aur mall ke paper bhi de diye. aur ye kaha ki aap jab chahe tab dekh sakti hai. aur company se har month profit ke taur pe aapke hisse ka aapke account me aa jayega.

aur sath hi aapki beti yani freya brown ka admission bhi school me karwa diya gaya hai.

school ka naam sunte hi freya to kudne lagi.

itna sab bol ke wo log wapas chale gaye.

tab armaan ne sophia se kaha ki wow aunty ab aapki sb problem bhi khatam ho gayi aur aapko ab freya ko akele chodh ke kaam par bhi nahi jana padega.

sophia - wo to theek hai armaan but main akele kaise ye sab manage karungi..

aunty aap akele kaha hai. aapki help ke liye william hai aur mere dad aur brother bhi hai.

aapko jis bhi cheej me problem aaye aap william ko call kar lena. ek kaam karta hoon main william ko abhi yahi bula leta hoon. hum uske sath jaake aapka mall bhi dekh lete hai.

thodi der baad william bhi aa gaya armaan ne usko bataya aajnke bare me aur sophia ki problem ke bare me bhi.

tab william ne kaha ki business me kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hogi wo main kar dunga. aur ye jis mall ki baat kar rahe hai usme construction chal raha hai. kyonki maine dekha hai. aap wo share ke papers dikhaiye.

tabhi sophia ne william ko ek folder diya jisme share ke paper sath me profit ka agreement chequebook credit and debit card the.

paper dekhne ke baad william ne bataya ki aap ke account me har month takreeban millions of dollars credit hoenge. kyonki stallions london ki nahi balki world ki jani mani company hai.

iske baad sophia ne mall dekha aur freya ka school bhi jisme wo next monday se jane wali thi.

aise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya. aur armaan bhi sophia ko bol kar apne ghar chala gaya. aur yaha sophia apni nayi life ko manage karne me lag gayi.

wahi armaan ghar me sidha jaake rudra ke upar kood gaya..aur kahne laga ki ThankYou ThankYou ThankYou dad..jo aapne meri baat rakkhi.

armaan ye sab chilla chilla kar kah raha tha. air uski aawaj sun kar baki ke log bhi hall me aa gaye.

tab rudra bola ki are kaise nahi karta mere bete ne pahli baar kuch kaha tha.

inki baate aise hi chalti rahi. next day armaan bhi apne vacation par switzerland nikal gaya.

aur yaha london me mall ka kaam bhi pura ho gaya tha. inauguration ke time par sophia ne armaan ko call kiya aur bataya ki mall ka kaam pura ho chuka hai..khair armaan ko ye pahle se pata tha. tab armaan ne bola ki hum log parso pahuch jayenge. opening me.

armaan ko khushi hui ki sophia paise aane ke baad badli nahi.

aur finally opening ka time bhi aa gaya. aaj sophia pure malik family de mili jaha par wo niti ko dekhkar pahle to shocked hui. kyonki parlour me niti ne help ki thi sophia ki.

aur sophia ko bhi sab logo ka nature accha laga.(faltu ke conversation ya melodrama nahi likh raha samajh jana)

inke din yuhi bitne lage. armaan ne bhi sab ko puri tarah se maaf kar diya tha.

idhar armaan aur freya ki friendship bhi gahri ho gayi thi. dono ki dosti ko 5 saal ho chuke the. dono hi free time me ek sath hi hote the. haa indo kuch hua ho ya nahi but ek cheej hui thi. aur wo thi armaan ki power jo in salo me kabhi najar nahi aayi. halaki armaan ki physical aur mental strength. uski umra se kayi guna aage ke the. log usko dekh ke shocked hi hote. ki aakhir ye hai kaun.

par shayad kuch hona tha. aur wo kya



Beautiful update bhai ji
 

Rohit1988

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in dino main bhaut busy hoon. Time ki chudi padi hai...bc daru pine ka bhi time nahi mil raha...update shayad khas na lage. but kal freya ka flashback khatam ho jayega.



Kabhi kabhi hota hai bhai ji jab time nahi milta koi baat nahi


Bas aap likhte raho ham sath hai aapke
 

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flashback continues:

rudra ne fir pucha ki to decide kar lo tum sab ki kaha pe chalna hai.

sab ne ek sath bola aur kaha ki switzerland.

samara - ok packing kar lo tum sab

armaan - meri packing amu kar degi. aur main aaya abhi mike freya se

itna bol ke wo freya se milne chala gaya.

waha freya ke ghar me wo apne gifts khol ke dekh rahi thi..

tabhi armaan bola

armaan - ye kya tumne abhi tak gifts nahi khole.

freya - nahi itne saare jo hai time to lagega hi.

armaan - ok ok..

waise aunty kaha hai dikh nahi rahi.

freya - mom bahar gayi hai.

armaan - accha waise tum school nahi gayi.

school ki baat sunte hi freya ki aankho me nami aa gayi. jis chehre par abhi muskurahat thi. ab usi jagah pas ek udasi ne ghar kar liya...

jab dad the tab jati thi. aur pata hai amy tab hum is ghar me bhi nahi rahte the. dad mujhe aur mom ko roj ghumane le ke jate the. tab main bhi aur baccho ki tarah school jati thi. meri bhi bhait si friends thi. par dad ko jab gog ne apne paas bulaya tab se maine school jana bhi band kar diya kyonki mom ke paas paise nahi hote itne. aur wo ghar bhi humne chodh diya.

itna bol ke freya rone lagi...

tab armaan uske paas gaya aur bola ki sshhhh nahi freya bas maine to aise hi pucha tha. mera maksad tumhe rulana nahi tha. chup ho jaao nahi to main bhi ro dunga.

jab freya ne ye suna tab usne apne aansu poche aur boli ki tum mat rona dekho main bhi nahi ro rahi ab

thodi hi der baad sophia bhi aa gayi aur jab unhone armaan ko dekha to wo bhi khush ho gayi. un dono ke beech me normally bate chal rahi thi. tab armaan ne bataya ki wo 15 days ke holiday pe apni family ke sath bahar jaa raha hai. ye sunte hi freya ek baar fir udas ho gayi.

tab armaan ne bola ki tum sad mat ho main tumse jaldi hi milunga aur tumhare liye gifts bhi launga and waha se aane ke baad hum bahar bhi jayenge.

tabhi achanak se ghar ke bahar 4 se 5 gadiya aakar ruki aur unme se yahi koi 8 - 10 log utre aur seedhe ghar ke andar chale gaye unke sath kuch police officers bhi the.

yaha sophia to dekh ke shocked ho gayi itne logo ek sath dekhkar aur jab sath me police ko dekha to shock ke dar bhi gayi. eka ek uske man me khayal aaya ki kai kisi ne use school me jump marte hue to nahi dekh liya aur uski complain kar di.

is khayal se uska chehra paseene se bheeg gaya tha. is time agar koi use gaur se dekhta to samajh jata ki ye bhaut dari hui hai. armaan bhi un sab ko gaur se dekh raha tha. aur situation samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki ye log hai kaun.

tabhi unme se ek aadmi aage aaya aur bola ki sophia brown kaun hai. tabhi sophia ne darte darte kaha ki ji main hoon sophia brown.

tab wo aadmi bola ki mrs. brown hum log stallions industries ye hai..asal me aapje husband mr. charlie brown ne humari company me invest kiya tha.

but us time company ki economical condition acchi nahi thi.

us time me mostly shareholders ne apne apne share bech diye the. jis wajah se company ko kafi loss hua aur share bikne se goodwill bhi down ho gayi.

but aapke husband aur unke sath ke logo ne na sirf apne share hold par rakkhe balki company par apna trust bhi banay rakkha.

isliye unke profit ke taur pe company ne aapko ek ghar mall aur sath hi stallions ke 25 % ka shareholder bhi banaya hai.

ye rahe uske paper...aap chahe to check kar sakti hai.

sophia to ye sun ke shocked ho gayi ki..achanak se kya ho gaya. jab kafi der tak usne response nahi diya us aadmi ke baar baar naam bulay jane par tab armaan ne hilakar hosh me laya.

jispar sophia sense me aayi aur usne paper check kiye jo bata rahe the. ki charlie brown ne company me invest kiya tha.

par sophia ne bola ki but charlie ne to kabhi is baat ka zikra nahi kiya mujhse aur aap kah rahe hai ki usne aapki.company me invest kiya tha.

tab wo aadmi bola ki ye hume nahi pata hume jitna kaha gaya tha humne utna kiya. aap chal ke apna ghar aur mall dekh lijiye baki ki formalities advocate aapke naye ghar me kar dega.

yaha sophia is baare me soch rahi thi. soch kya use samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki achanak se ho kya raha hai.

tabhi armaan ke cell me ek message aata hai...jisme likha tha..ki


work done. maine apna part complete kiya ab tum sambhalo aage.

ye message rudra ne bheja tha.



armaan samajh gaya ki use kya karna hai.

tab armaan ne sophia se bola ki aunty aap soch kya rahi hai. aap chaliye jaldi.

itna bol ke armaan unko sath le ke gadi me chal diya. aur wahi freya aone chote se dimag se samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi. ki ye ho kya raha hai. but usne jab dekha ki uski mom pareshan hai to usne kuch nahi pucha.

kuch time baad wo log ek ghar ke saamne the. ghar kya use bangla kahna jyada theek rahega.

sophia ghar ko dekh kar shocked ho gayi kyonki kaha uska tuta ghar aur kaha ye mahal jaisa ghar.

ghar me aane ke baad wakil ne share ke paper aur mall ke paper bhi de diye. aur ye kaha ki aap jab chahe tab dekh sakti hai. aur company se har month profit ke taur pe aapke hisse ka aapke account me aa jayega.

aur sath hi aapki beti yani freya brown ka admission bhi school me karwa diya gaya hai.

school ka naam sunte hi freya to kudne lagi.

itna sab bol ke wo log wapas chale gaye.

tab armaan ne sophia se kaha ki wow aunty ab aapki sb problem bhi khatam ho gayi aur aapko ab freya ko akele chodh ke kaam par bhi nahi jana padega.

sophia - wo to theek hai armaan but main akele kaise ye sab manage karungi..

aunty aap akele kaha hai. aapki help ke liye william hai aur mere dad aur brother bhi hai.

aapko jis bhi cheej me problem aaye aap william ko call kar lena. ek kaam karta hoon main william ko abhi yahi bula leta hoon. hum uske sath jaake aapka mall bhi dekh lete hai.

thodi der baad william bhi aa gaya armaan ne usko bataya aajnke bare me aur sophia ki problem ke bare me bhi.

tab william ne kaha ki business me kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hogi wo main kar dunga. aur ye jis mall ki baat kar rahe hai usme construction chal raha hai. kyonki maine dekha hai. aap wo share ke papers dikhaiye.

tabhi sophia ne william ko ek folder diya jisme share ke paper sath me profit ka agreement chequebook credit and debit card the.

paper dekhne ke baad william ne bataya ki aap ke account me har month takreeban millions of dollars credit hoenge. kyonki stallions london ki nahi balki world ki jani mani company hai.

iske baad sophia ne mall dekha aur freya ka school bhi jisme wo next monday se jane wali thi.

aise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya. aur armaan bhi sophia ko bol kar apne ghar chala gaya. aur yaha sophia apni nayi life ko manage karne me lag gayi.

wahi armaan ghar me sidha jaake rudra ke upar kood gaya..aur kahne laga ki ThankYou ThankYou ThankYou dad..jo aapne meri baat rakkhi.

armaan ye sab chilla chilla kar kah raha tha. air uski aawaj sun kar baki ke log bhi hall me aa gaye.

tab rudra bola ki are kaise nahi karta mere bete ne pahli baar kuch kaha tha.

inki baate aise hi chalti rahi. next day armaan bhi apne vacation par switzerland nikal gaya.

aur yaha london me mall ka kaam bhi pura ho gaya tha. inauguration ke time par sophia ne armaan ko call kiya aur bataya ki mall ka kaam pura ho chuka hai..khair armaan ko ye pahle se pata tha. tab armaan ne bola ki hum log parso pahuch jayenge. opening me.

armaan ko khushi hui ki sophia paise aane ke baad badli nahi.

aur finally opening ka time bhi aa gaya. aaj sophia pure malik family de mili jaha par wo niti ko dekhkar pahle to shocked hui. kyonki parlour me niti ne help ki thi sophia ki.

aur sophia ko bhi sab logo ka nature accha laga.(faltu ke conversation ya melodrama nahi likh raha samajh jana)

inke din yuhi bitne lage. armaan ne bhi sab ko puri tarah se maaf kar diya tha.

idhar armaan aur freya ki friendship bhi gahri ho gayi thi. dono ki dosti ko 5 saal ho chuke the. dono hi free time me ek sath hi hote the. haa indo kuch hua ho ya nahi but ek cheej hui thi. aur wo thi armaan ki power jo in salo me kabhi najar nahi aayi. halaki armaan ki physical aur mental strength. uski umra se kayi guna aage ke the. log usko dekh ke shocked hi hote. ki aakhir ye hai kaun.

par shayad kuch hona tha. aur wo kya
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Nice update brother.
Sophia ki problems ka hal ho gaya aur Armaan aur Freya bhi close aa gaye. 5 saal bhi nikal gaye. Abb dekhte hein Armaan ki life mein konsa tufaan aata hai..
 
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