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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

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Rohit1988

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dosto yaha se story aage fast forward hogi...

update -3

rudra aur samaara ki shadi ke baad din aise hi beetne lage. inke beech ka pyar din par din badhta hi jaa raha tha. aur dekhte hi dekhte wo din bhi aa gaya. aaj rudra ghar par nahi tha wo ek meeting ke silsile me city se bahar tha. aur idhar samaara ko subah se hi bechaini ho rahi thi. usko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aaj aisa kyon ho raha hai. pregnancy me aisa hona to common hai. but aaj to jaise had hi ho gayi chakkar bechaini ghabrahat ruki hi nahi rahi thi. aisa nahi tha ki samaara ko knowledge nahi thi..usko bhi pata tha ki is waqt me aisa hota hai..ye koi badi baat nahi hai.kyonki dono ke parents to the nahi jinda jo dekhbhal kar sake. rishtedaro se itni banti nahi gahar me koi bada bujurg family ka tha nahi the to bas servants aur to aur rudra bhi aaj bahar tha. samaara soch rahi thi ki aaj hi aisa kyon ho raha hai.
samaara - aaj itni jyada bechaini kyon ho rahi hai upar se bp bhi low lag raha hai. aur to aur rudra bhi nahi hai. but dr. ne date do teen din baaf ki di thi..aur ye phone nahi utha raha..samajh me nahi aa raha ki kya karu o god agar mom hoti to sambhal leti. samaara let ke ye sab sochhi rahi thi ki achanak se dard shuru ho gaya jo har pal badhte hi jaa raha tha. samaara dard me cheekhe jaa rahi thi. uski cheekh sun ke sara staff bhi daute hue uske room me aa gaya. aur usko hospital me admit karwaya. admit karwa ke unhone rudra ko call kiya.

servant - sir ma'am hospital me hai unko pain start ho gaya tha to hum logo be unko yaha st. Andrews me admit karwa diya..ap ho saje to jaldi aa jayiye..

rudra - what...!! pain start ho gaya dr. se baat karao turant.

dr. yes mr. rudra..jitni jaldi ho sake yaha aa jaiye mrs. malik ko aapki jarurat hai..aur jab aapko pata hai to aise time me aapko unke sath hona chahiye.

rudra - mujhe pata hai dr. but mere jaana jaruri tha nahi to main nahi jaata. khair ye sab chodhiye aur ye bataiye ki aspne date to kuch din baad ki di thi to time se pahle.

dr. - kuch cases me aisa hota hai mr. malik khiar ye sab chodhiye aur please come asap. baato ne time waste mat kariye...

rudra - main jaldi hi pahuch jaunga dr.
idhar hospital me samaara ko OT me leke jaate hai. aur kuch time baad samaara ek cheekh ke sath behosh ho jati hai. kuch time baad rudra bhi hospital pahuch jaata hai. idhar rudra hospital pahuchne ke baad inquiry me jaakar samaara ke bare me puchta hai. tab dr. usko us ward me le ke jati hai jisme samaara admit thi.

dr. congratulation mr. malik aapki wife ne twins diye hai ek ladka aur ladki. rudra ke liye mano khushi sambhale nahi sambhal rahi thi. uske liye aaj duniya ka shayad sabse accha din tha. bed me ek taraf samaara so rahi thi. theek uske bagal me do nihayati khubsurat bacche so rahe the..jinme ek ladka aur ek ladki thi..rudra ek tak un baccho ko dekhne laga uski aankh se aansu thamne ka naam ka nahi le rahe the..itna khush tha wo baccho se baate kiye ja raha tha. uski baate sun kar samaara bhi uth gayi.
samaara - rudra aaj hum complete ho gaye. dekho hum parents ban gaye.

rudra - haa samaara main aaj itna khush hoon ki mujhe samajh nahin aa raha ki main kya kahu, kya karu matlab main bata nahi sakta. thankyou..thankyou..thankyou samaara main bata nahi sakta tumne itni badi khushi di hai mujhe..

samaara - aaram se rudra bacche uth jaayenge.

rudra - oh sorry sorry ha tum theek kah rahi ho..main kya karu excitement me thoda tej bol diya..waise tum theek ho..

samaara - rudra agar itne pain ke baad aise khushi mile to main har dard bardaasht kar sakti hoon.

rudra - hmm sahi kaha ye pal beshkeemti hai. ye khushi hi anuthi hai..samaara.
ek - do din admit rahne ke baad samaara bhi baccho ke sath ghar aati hai. parents banne ki khushi me rudra ek shaandaar party deta hai. is party me rudra ke business circle ka shayad hi aisa koi insaan hoga jo naa aa ho..aur ho bhi kyon na aakhir rudra malik baap bana hai..koi aise waise baat thode hi na hai.

ghar me as usual ek badi si puja rakhi jati hai waise rudra ko puja wagarah me koi bhi interest nahi tha. but wo mana nahi karta. pandit aakar dono baccho ka naam rakhta hai..ladke ka naam rubal aur ladki ka naam kaayra rakkha gaya. janha rubal dikhne me bilkul rudra ki tarah wahi kaayra apni maa pae gayi thi.

samay aise hi beetne laga janha rubal aur kaayra dheer dheere bade hone lage wahi rudra bhi as usual apne business me busy rahne laga..aur samaara jaha pahle rudra me busy rahti thi. ab wo baccho ke sath rudra me busy rahne lagi..rudra bhi apne business se time nikal kar rubal aur kaayra ko barabar time deta tha..khas kar rubal ko kyonki wo to copy rudra jaise tha waisa hi nature usme rudra ki kaafi aadte thi..lekin wo kaayra ko bhi pyar karta tha. aur kaayra wo to jaha apne maa ki laadli thi..aamtaur par jaha betiya pita ke jyada kareeb hoti hai. wahi iske ulat kaayra apne maa ke kareeb jyada thi. aur rubal to kyaara par jaan chidakta tha. idhar kaayra bhi chubesso ghante rubal ke peeche bhagti rahti. shaitani aur shararto me to rubal se ek kadam aage hi thi. time bhi apni speed se badhne laga janha rubal aur kaayra thide bade hue idhar rudra ki jawani bhi joro par thi..control choota aur dusri baar jholi me ek aur beti nitigya aai...ye mili juli sarkar thi. rubal aur kaayara bhi nitigya ka bakhubi dhyan rakhte the..jab kabhi kaayra jyada shaitani kari aur rubal use daanta to rudra aur samaara use kahte ki na betu aise nahi karte..wo aapki sister hai na aur aap to ek laute ladke ko..(ye to waqt hi batayega) aur uspar rudea bhi kahta rubal aap kis ki tarah banoge bade hokar..to rubal apni totli jaban me kahta ki main to aapke tarah businessman banuga.
rudra rubal ki ye baat sun kar khushi se phool jata ki uska beta aage chal ke uske nakshe kadam par chalega. idhar kuch saal baad ye ek baar aur maa baap bane reason wahi purana control..kyonki rudra ne humesha hi nirodh ka virodh kiya...entry hui amayra ki..curly hair brown eyes beautiful si angel..amayra ke janm ke baad samaara ne rudra se ek baar tang aakar bola -

samaara - rudra apne upar control rakkha karo jaruri nahi hai ki har baar andar hi drop karo apna semen..ek to tum condom bhi use nahi karte na hi mujhe kuch karne dete ho.

rudra - baby tum to janti ho ki maine humesha hi nirodh ka Virodh kiya hai..aur andar drop karne ka mera man nhi hota but kya karu tumhari chut hai hi itni tight hai ki mera apne aap choot jaata hai..

ssamaara - tumhara to choot jata hai..aur bhugtana to mujhe padta hai..main ab maa nahi banna chahti..tum to baaj aaoge nahi mujhe hi kuch sochna padega..already humare chaar baache hai. tum kya fauj khadi karne ke cgakkar me ho..

rudra - dekha meri fitness...mera dum aur tum bhi kam nahi ho chaar baache paida karne ke baad bhi bur waise hi tight hai..maana padega tum bhi dhyan bakhubi rakhti ho apna aur apni iska...

samaara - chup raho tum..ek baar khud pregnant ho jaao tab pata chalega..tumhe

rudra - ye to is janam me mumkin nahi hai..agle ka agle me sochenge..aur ek baar fir next round kar ke dono so gaye.




Sundar update bhai ji
 

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ab tak aapne pada ki rudra aur samaara apne parenthood enjoy rahe the. Janha rubal, kaayra, nitigya aur amayra ke aane se khushi sambhale nahi sambhal rahi thi.

update -4

Ab aage..

samay ka pahiya apni gati ke hisab se chal raha tha. idhar dheere - dheere bacche bhi bade hone lage the. kul mila ke life inki sahi jaa rahi thi. raat me jo badan ke tutne tak jo pyar rudra ne kiya tha uska asar samaara ko agli subah pata chala pure body me meeta meetha dard tha.

morning me samaara ki aankh sabse pahle khuli..waise rudra hi pahle utha hai..kyonki exercise ka keeda itne andar tak ghusa hai..banda bina khaaye rah sakta hai.but bina exercise aur kaam ke nahi rah sakta. aur rudra utha kyon nahi sunday ki wajah se. ek yahi aisa din hai jis din wo apne body aur mind ko ret deta hai. to samaara sabse pahle uthi aur usne rudra ko dekha pyar bhari najro se uske hontho par kiss kar ke boli love you baby.

par rudra to apna bekhabar soya pada tha. aur ho bhi kyon na sunday ko choh kar machine ke jaise pila pada rahta hai apne kaam par. isliye hafte bhar ki thakan sunday ko nikalti hai..but jitna bhi thaka ho thukai me peeche nahi hat ta.

rudra ko niharne ke baad samaara apne baccho ko rooms ki taraf chal padi. sunday hone ki wajah se mostly staff bhi leave par hota hai. sirf kuch servants hote hai jo dusting and cleaning wagarah dekhte hai. baccho je room me jaakar me jaakar wo apne baccho ko dekhti jo sab kuch bhula kar aaram se chain ki neend soye the..samaara baccho ko dekhne me itni khoyi hui thi.. ki kab rudra ne aakar usko apni baaho me le liya aur gaal par kiss kar ke bola...

rudra - kya hua kaha khoyi ho jo tumhe mere aane ka bhi pata nahi chala..

samaara - kahi nahi bacche kitne acche lag rahe hai na sote hue jaise kisi baat ki tension ho hi na..pata hai ab aisa lagta hai ki mujhesab kuch mil gaya ab aisa nahi lagta ki pahle mom dad chale gaye fir jin aunt ne paala unka saath bhi choot gaya..fir uske baad tum aaye life me..tab aisa laga ki main hoon..but jab se rubal aur kayra aaye life me. to aisa laga ki main ab piri ho chuki ho..family hone ka ahsaas hone laga hai..fir nitigya aur amayra ne is khushi ko kitne hi guna bada diya..

rudra - haa ye to tumne sach kaha..inke aane se aisa lag raha hai ki life puri ho gayi. chalo ek kaam karte hai khushi aur kar lete hai isi baat par kajo kya khayal hai..main bhi to masoom sa baccha hoon. jise morning me doodh nahi mila.

samaara - chup raho tum..tumhe to maa nahi banna padta tumhe kya kuch khusi aur kar lete hai..(khushi ka matlab bacche se hai.) aur kya kaha masoom tumhari masoomiyat room ke andar dikhayi padti hai ki kitne massom ho tum abhi tak badan me dard hai. aur kya kaha doodh nahi milta raat ko jaise nichod kar piya tha. lag to aisa raha hai ki amayara ko bhi nahi milega...

rudra - are itna thodi nahi piya tha.

samaara - pata hai mujhe tum kitne seedhe ho..bas meri yahi wish hai ki mere is sansaar ko kuch na ho..

rudra - aise hi hoga...main kuch bura hone nahi dunga.

fir waise saare routine work niptaaye aur ye din bhi aache se beet gaya.
 
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