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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

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Rohit1988

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dear readers ho sakta hai ki recent ka update kuch khas nahi laga and size bhi chota tha. jab armaan ki entry hogi tab story ka rukh bhi badlega aur jo naye kirdar aaye hai unka intro bhi hoga. and in salo me kya hua hai wo jab flashback chalega tab pata chalega ki kya hua, kaise hua and thode din update late aayenge fur regular aane lagenge. ansmd story jarur complete hogi.



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ab tak aapne padha ki rudra ko wo project mil jata hai. aur wahi niti bhi doctor ban chuki hoti hai jise concern hota hai us patient ka.

ab aage

update - 29

raat ke is waqt mausam ka mijaj kuch alag tha. janha is waqt shahar ko barf ke aagosh me hona chahaiye. wo shahar is waqt barish ke thapedo me jhujh raha tha. sirf newyork hi nahi balki ye sthati is samay pure janha ki thi.

mausam ka ek sath duniya ke har hisse me badalna ye samanya baat nahi thi. har desh ki har sarkari sanstha mausam ke yun badal jane se pareshan thi. kyonki musladhar barish ne is waqt pure janha ko hi apne agosh me le liya tha.

aasman is samay bijli ki roshani me roshan tha. bijli kadkadane ki aawaj aur uski roshni ne pal bhar ke liye bhi aasman ka sath nahi chodha tha.

jo fiza shab dhalne tak mahak rahi thi. ab usi fiza ko dekhkar logo ki dhadkane badhi hui thi. aur to aur mausam vibhag ne bhi alert jari kar diya tha. ki ghar se bahar mat nikle. kai gaon kai shahr tabah ho gaye the is aksmat aaye hue tufaan ki wajah se.

log sirf upar wale se prey kar rahe the. lag raha tha jaise aaj ant ko duniya ka.

par upar wala bhi aaj sunne ke vichar me nahi tha. kisi ko aana tha, kisi ka sadiyo ki neend se uthne ka waqt aa chuka tha.

ek tufaan pahle aaya tha jab wo aaya tha. ek tufaan ab aaya hai. jab usko aana hai.


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chaliye inko chodhte hai aur chalte hai prithvi se kai upar universe me yaha is waqt sare angels beecho beech khade the. aur prakriti me aaye hue is badlav ko na sirf dekh rahe the. balki mahsus bhi kar rahe the.

ares - tum bhi wahi soch aur dekh rahi ho athena jo hum sabhi dekh rahe hai.

athena - nahi tum sirf dekh rahe ho par main mahsus bhi kar rahi hoon ak ajeeb si ghutan hai is mausam me main hairan hoon achanak aaye hue is badlav me. kyonki kisi ek hisse me agagr ye hua hota to koi khas baat nahi thi. par ek sath pure world me hi aisa mausam jaise aaj much samajh nahi aaya.

aphrodite - kahi iske peeche wo lucifer to nahi ya fir paimon aur uske sath ke aur ya fir unke koi leigions of devil.

apollo - par kafi waqt se un fallen angles ki koi presence maine feel nahi ki hai.

athena - hmm maine bhi nahi.

aphrodite - to jarur iske peeche wo badjaat lucifer hi hoooogaaa.

aphrodite ke last ke words uske muh me hi atak gaye the. kyonki is waqt uske pure sharir me jhatke lag rahe the aur in jhatko ki wajah se uske body ke aas paas ek black aura creat ho raha tha.

aphrodite ki sudden aise condition ko dekh ke saare angel shocked ho gaye the. reason unke partner ke sath aisa hona.

ares - ye aphrodite ko kya hua achanak se.

abhi achanak chodho aur kuch karo athena ke itna bolte hi sare angels ne apna apna hath aage kar ke pitradev sanrakhnam spell bola jisse unke hatho se ek white rays nikli jisne nikalte hi ek white tiger ka roop le liya aur wo aphrodite ke upar kood pada par jaise hi us tiger ne aphrodite ko chune ki koshish kari tabhi us black aura ne waise hi black tiger ka roop liya aur bhid gaya us white tiger se jaha se angels pahle shock se bahar aaye nahi the wahi phir ek shock us black tiger ko dekh ke ye kuch kahte usse pahle hi us black tiger ne white tiger ko apne panjo me fasakar mar diya ye sab mahaj chand palo me hua.
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tabhi waha ek aawaj gunji. kyonki us aawaj aur uske malik ko ye angels acchi tarah pahchante the. ye aawaj usi ki thi jiski insult aphrodite ne ki thi. aur result as quick as.

lucifer - tum log commanding angels jarur ho. aur jis post par ho to jahir si baat hai arrogance hona. par ye mat bhulo ki main kaun hoon. to mere baare me bolne se pahle to chodho apne jehan me mera khayal lane se bhi pahle jitni baar bhi soch sakte ho sochna. nahi to natija tumhare samne hai. tum jiski ibadat karte ho wo tumhe ek baar maaf kar bhi de par main maaf nahi karta. aur mere baare me to tum jante hi hoge ki main kaun hoon. main kya hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon. mera naam log respect se lene me bhi kai dafa sochte hai aur isne naam liya bhi to disrespect se. itna bol kar uski aawaj aani band ho gayi.

aur udhar aphrodite bhi behosh ho kar gir pada uski body me kai jagah black spot pad gaye the. un angels ko pata tha ki wo aphrodite ko heal nahi kar sakte isliye wo aphrodite ko lekar waha se gayab ho ke sidhe waha pahuche jaha ke wo the yani heaven.

idhar heaven me jitne bhi angels the in commanding angels ke alawa jab baki ke angels ne aphrodite ki halat dekhi tab wo sab bhi commanding angels ke sath apne apne ghutno par baith kar bolne lage..
 

Rohit1988

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ab tak aapne padha ki rudra ko wo project mil jata hai. aur wahi niti bhi doctor ban chuki hoti hai jise concern hota hai us patient ka.

ab aage

update - 29

raat ke is waqt mausam ka mijaj kuch alag tha. janha is waqt shahar ko barf ke aagosh me hona chahaiye. wo shahar is waqt barish ke thapedo me jhujh raha tha. sirf newyork hi nahi balki ye sthati is samay pure janha ki thi.

mausam ka ek sath duniya ke har hisse me badalna ye samanya baat nahi thi. har desh ki har sarkari sanstha mausam ke yun badal jane se pareshan thi. kyonki musladhar barish ne is waqt pure janha ko hi apne agosh me le liya tha.

aasman is samay bijli ki roshani me roshan tha. bijli kadkadane ki aawaj aur uski roshni ne pal bhar ke liye bhi aasman ka sath nahi chodha tha.

jo fiza shab dhalne tak mahak rahi thi. ab usi fiza ko dekhkar logo ki dhadkane badhi hui thi. aur to aur mausam vibhag ne bhi alert jari kar diya tha. ki ghar se bahar mat nikle. kai gaon kai shahr tabah ho gaye the is aksmat aaye hue tufaan ki wajah se.

log sirf upar wale se prey kar rahe the. lag raha tha jaise aaj ant ko duniya ka.

par upar wala bhi aaj sunne ke vichar me nahi tha. kisi ko aana tha, kisi ka sadiyo ki neend se uthne ka waqt aa chuka tha.

ek tufaan pahle aaya tha jab wo aaya tha. ek tufaan ab aaya hai. jab usko aana hai.


bp1.jpg


Screen-Shot-2020-05-21-at-12.55.35-PM.png


heavy-rain.jpg


chaliye inko chodhte hai aur chalte hai prithvi se kai upar universe me yaha is waqt sare angels beecho beech khade the. aur prakriti me aaye hue is badlav ko na sirf dekh rahe the. balki mahsus bhi kar rahe the.

ares - tum bhi wahi soch aur dekh rahi ho athena jo hum sabhi dekh rahe hai.

athena - nahi tum sirf dekh rahe ho par main mahsus bhi kar rahi hoon ak ajeeb si ghutan hai is mausam me main hairan hoon achanak aaye hue is badlav me. kyonki kisi ek hisse me agagr ye hua hota to koi khas baat nahi thi. par ek sath pure world me hi aisa mausam jaise aaj much samajh nahi aaya.

aphrodite - kahi iske peeche wo lucifer to nahi ya fir paimon aur uske sath ke aur ya fir unke koi leigions of devil.

apollo - par kafi waqt se un fallen angles ki koi presence maine feel nahi ki hai.

athena - hmm maine bhi nahi.

aphrodite - to jarur iske peeche wo badjaat lucifer hi hoooogaaa.

aphrodite ke last ke words uske muh me hi atak gaye the. kyonki is waqt uske pure sharir me jhatke lag rahe the aur in jhatko ki wajah se uske body ke aas paas ek black aura creat ho raha tha.

aphrodite ki sudden aise condition ko dekh ke saare angel shocked ho gaye the. reason unke partner ke sath aisa hona.

ares - ye aphrodite ko kya hua achanak se.

abhi achanak chodho aur kuch karo athena ke itna bolte hi sare angels ne apna apna hath aage kar ke pitradev sanrakhnam spell bola jisse unke hatho se ek white rays nikli jisne nikalte hi ek white tiger ka roop le liya aur wo aphrodite ke upar kood pada par jaise hi us tiger ne aphrodite ko chune ki koshish kari tabhi us black aura ne waise hi black tiger ka roop liya aur bhid gaya us white tiger se jaha se angels pahle shock se bahar aaye nahi the wahi phir ek shock us black tiger ko dekh ke ye kuch kahte usse pahle hi us black tiger ne white tiger ko apne panjo me fasakar mar diya ye sab mahaj chand palo me hua.
07654ff5c2f7a0392493758165db10a4.jpg


tabhi waha ek aawaj gunji. kyonki us aawaj aur uske malik ko ye angels acchi tarah pahchante the. ye aawaj usi ki thi jiski insult aphrodite ne ki thi. aur result as quick as.

lucifer - tum log commanding angels jarur ho. aur jis post par ho to jahir si baat hai arrogance hona. par ye mat bhulo ki main kaun hoon. to mere baare me bolne se pahle to chodho apne jehan me mera khayal lane se bhi pahle jitni baar bhi soch sakte ho sochna. nahi to natija tumhare samne hai. tum jiski ibadat karte ho wo tumhe ek baar maaf kar bhi de par main maaf nahi karta. aur mere baare me to tum jante hi hoge ki main kaun hoon. main kya hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon. mera naam log respect se lene me bhi kai dafa sochte hai aur isne naam liya bhi to disrespect se. itna bol kar uski aawaj aani band ho gayi.

aur udhar aphrodite bhi behosh ho kar gir pada uski body me kai jagah black spot pad gaye the. un angels ko pata tha ki wo aphrodite ko heal nahi kar sakte isliye wo aphrodite ko lekar waha se gayab ho ke sidhe waha pahuche jaha ke wo the yani heaven.

idhar heaven me jitne bhi angels the in commanding angels ke alawa jab baki ke angels ne aphrodite ki halat dekhi tab wo sab bhi commanding angels ke sath apne apne ghutno par baith kar bolne lage..



Nice update bhai ji
 

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Mtlb ab wo aane Wala hai..or bahut ke life Mai bahut kuch badlne Wala hai ..waah Bhai...
Dekhte hai kaise or kis rup Mai lotta hai .
 

DarkKnightKing

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ab tak aapne padha ki rudra ko wo project mil jata hai. aur wahi niti bhi doctor ban chuki hoti hai jise concern hota hai us patient ka.

ab aage

update - 29

raat ke is waqt mausam ka mijaj kuch alag tha. janha is waqt shahar ko barf ke aagosh me hona chahaiye. wo shahar is waqt barish ke thapedo me jhujh raha tha. sirf newyork hi nahi balki ye sthati is samay pure janha ki thi.

mausam ka ek sath duniya ke har hisse me badalna ye samanya baat nahi thi. har desh ki har sarkari sanstha mausam ke yun badal jane se pareshan thi. kyonki musladhar barish ne is waqt pure janha ko hi apne agosh me le liya tha.

aasman is samay bijli ki roshani me roshan tha. bijli kadkadane ki aawaj aur uski roshni ne pal bhar ke liye bhi aasman ka sath nahi chodha tha.

jo fiza shab dhalne tak mahak rahi thi. ab usi fiza ko dekhkar logo ki dhadkane badhi hui thi. aur to aur mausam vibhag ne bhi alert jari kar diya tha. ki ghar se bahar mat nikle. kai gaon kai shahr tabah ho gaye the is aksmat aaye hue tufaan ki wajah se.

log sirf upar wale se prey kar rahe the. lag raha tha jaise aaj ant ko duniya ka.

par upar wala bhi aaj sunne ke vichar me nahi tha. kisi ko aana tha, kisi ka sadiyo ki neend se uthne ka waqt aa chuka tha.

ek tufaan pahle aaya tha jab wo aaya tha. ek tufaan ab aaya hai. jab usko aana hai.


bp1.jpg


Screen-Shot-2020-05-21-at-12.55.35-PM.png


heavy-rain.jpg


chaliye inko chodhte hai aur chalte hai prithvi se kai upar universe me yaha is waqt sare angels beecho beech khade the. aur prakriti me aaye hue is badlav ko na sirf dekh rahe the. balki mahsus bhi kar rahe the.

ares - tum bhi wahi soch aur dekh rahi ho athena jo hum sabhi dekh rahe hai.

athena - nahi tum sirf dekh rahe ho par main mahsus bhi kar rahi hoon ak ajeeb si ghutan hai is mausam me main hairan hoon achanak aaye hue is badlav me. kyonki kisi ek hisse me agagr ye hua hota to koi khas baat nahi thi. par ek sath pure world me hi aisa mausam jaise aaj much samajh nahi aaya.

aphrodite - kahi iske peeche wo lucifer to nahi ya fir paimon aur uske sath ke aur ya fir unke koi leigions of devil.

apollo - par kafi waqt se un fallen angles ki koi presence maine feel nahi ki hai.

athena - hmm maine bhi nahi.

aphrodite - to jarur iske peeche wo badjaat lucifer hi hoooogaaa.

aphrodite ke last ke words uske muh me hi atak gaye the. kyonki is waqt uske pure sharir me jhatke lag rahe the aur in jhatko ki wajah se uske body ke aas paas ek black aura creat ho raha tha.

aphrodite ki sudden aise condition ko dekh ke saare angel shocked ho gaye the. reason unke partner ke sath aisa hona.

ares - ye aphrodite ko kya hua achanak se.

abhi achanak chodho aur kuch karo athena ke itna bolte hi sare angels ne apna apna hath aage kar ke pitradev sanrakhnam spell bola jisse unke hatho se ek white rays nikli jisne nikalte hi ek white tiger ka roop le liya aur wo aphrodite ke upar kood pada par jaise hi us tiger ne aphrodite ko chune ki koshish kari tabhi us black aura ne waise hi black tiger ka roop liya aur bhid gaya us white tiger se jaha se angels pahle shock se bahar aaye nahi the wahi phir ek shock us black tiger ko dekh ke ye kuch kahte usse pahle hi us black tiger ne white tiger ko apne panjo me fasakar mar diya ye sab mahaj chand palo me hua.
07654ff5c2f7a0392493758165db10a4.jpg


tabhi waha ek aawaj gunji. kyonki us aawaj aur uske malik ko ye angels acchi tarah pahchante the. ye aawaj usi ki thi jiski insult aphrodite ne ki thi. aur result as quick as.

lucifer - tum log commanding angels jarur ho. aur jis post par ho to jahir si baat hai arrogance hona. par ye mat bhulo ki main kaun hoon. to mere baare me bolne se pahle to chodho apne jehan me mera khayal lane se bhi pahle jitni baar bhi soch sakte ho sochna. nahi to natija tumhare samne hai. tum jiski ibadat karte ho wo tumhe ek baar maaf kar bhi de par main maaf nahi karta. aur mere baare me to tum jante hi hoge ki main kaun hoon. main kya hoon aur kya kar sakta hoon. mera naam log respect se lene me bhi kai dafa sochte hai aur isne naam liya bhi to disrespect se. itna bol kar uski aawaj aani band ho gayi.

aur udhar aphrodite bhi behosh ho kar gir pada uski body me kai jagah black spot pad gaye the. un angels ko pata tha ki wo aphrodite ko heal nahi kar sakte isliye wo aphrodite ko lekar waha se gayab ho ke sidhe waha pahuche jaha ke wo the yani heaven.

idhar heaven me jitne bhi angels the in commanding angels ke alawa jab baki ke angels ne aphrodite ki halat dekhi tab wo sab bhi commanding angels ke sath apne apne ghutno par baith kar bolne lage..
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