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Hmm par mene to ye bola hi nahi ki ye story dark hai , light hai ya fir red haiStory achi hai......
Concept badhiya hai.....
Lekin agar ek dark story likh rahe ho to wo dark honi chahiye.....
Lekin mujhe yeh story kahi se bhi dark na lagi.....tum ise light bana rahe ho


And thanks for comment