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Fantasy THE LAGEND (EK ANOKHE KAHANI)
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Thank you dosto
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Bahot khoob shaandaar lajawab update bhai
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Naina
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ye dada ji uski mom ko sab bata kyun nahi dete... ab dekho unko pe paas woh video clips bhi hai...
Naina
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First of all 
for new story...
The story is turning according to the need, due to which the story is becoming more interesting..
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.
In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with action, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .
Maybe the screen will slowly be removed from some mystery. And the real appearance of some characters are also coming out.
Many new characters are also being seen. Those characters are also playing their role properly with every aspect of the story.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
for new story...The story is turning according to the need, due to which the story is becoming more interesting..
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.
In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with action, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .
Maybe the screen will slowly be removed from some mystery. And the real appearance of some characters are also coming out.
Many new characters are also being seen. Those characters are also playing their role properly with every aspect of the story.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
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Ya to dada g he bata sakte hen baki ami ka jawab nh unho ne dada and abu ke band baja de prof deke
Hahahaha
Sath banai rakhen ya to just shuruwat ha jhatku ke
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First of all
The story is turning according to the need, due to which the story is becoming more interesting..
The story has quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.
In truth, story is becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you are advancing the story. Along with action, thrill and suspense also have a unique confluence in story .
Maybe the screen will slowly be removed from some mystery. And the real appearance of some characters are also coming out.
Many new characters are also being seen. Those characters are also playing their role properly with every aspect of the story.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
Wellcome on theard naina g
Shukhriya
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Thankyou bro
Ho saka to aaj rat ispy update dunga warna kal to update aana he ha
Aaj the red mon pe update diya
Than new story start ke
Nafrat ke aag
Apko wo be read krne chahye
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8 A
Dada..ya sab kab kya tumny beti
Ab aagy
Ami...bary abu jabse sahil 18 ka hua aur uska behiveor change hony laga tabse ma uspy nazar rakh rahe hun
Aur jab kai baar rat ko many apko sahil ke kamry ma chupky se jata hua dekha aur phr apko aur inko chupky rat ko bat krte dekha to aap dono pe nazar rakhne lage
Aur many ghar ma har jaga chote chote micro chips aur micro camra fit kar diye take ma har chiz pe nazar rakh sako
Ya bol ami chup ho gye lakin dada aur abu ami ko mou phare dekh rahe the jesy ami na hoke koi ajooba unky samny betha ho
Ami unhe khud ko youn dekhte hue phr gusse ma boli....ab aap log mujhe sach bataogy ya ma kal he sahil ko leke sedny chale jao apny chen ke ghar
Dada gusse ma,..tumhe bat krne ke tamiz nh ha kaya bahu jo ese bat kar rhe ho
Ami.,han nh ha tamiz jab bat mere 1 lote bete ke life ke ho ma duniya se takra jaoge
Abu ne gusse ma uth ami ko thapar mar diya chataaaakkkkk pore ghar ma thapar ke awaz gunj gye
Abu...tumhari himat kese hue baba se zuban larany ke
Ami gusse m
Dada..ya sab kab kya tumny beti
Ab aagy
Ami...bary abu jabse sahil 18 ka hua aur uska behiveor change hony laga tabse ma uspy nazar rakh rahe hun
Aur jab kai baar rat ko many apko sahil ke kamry ma chupky se jata hua dekha aur phr apko aur inko chupky rat ko bat krte dekha to aap dono pe nazar rakhne lage
Aur many ghar ma har jaga chote chote micro chips aur micro camra fit kar diye take ma har chiz pe nazar rakh sako
Ya bol ami chup ho gye lakin dada aur abu ami ko mou phare dekh rahe the jesy ami na hoke koi ajooba unky samny betha ho
Ami unhe khud ko youn dekhte hue phr gusse ma boli....ab aap log mujhe sach bataogy ya ma kal he sahil ko leke sedny chale jao apny chen ke ghar
Dada gusse ma,..tumhe bat krne ke tamiz nh ha kaya bahu jo ese bat kar rhe ho
Ami.,han nh ha tamiz jab bat mere 1 lote bete ke life ke ho ma duniya se takra jaoge
Abu ne gusse ma uth ami ko thapar mar diya chataaaakkkkk pore ghar ma thapar ke awaz gunj gye
Abu...tumhari himat kese hue baba se zuban larany ke
Ami gusse m