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Fantasy THE LAGEND (EK ANOKHE KAHANI)

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Naina

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Sahil..kal tk pasport chahye

Ab aagy

Ya bol sahil ne cal cut krde

Ami..sahil tumny kisko pasport ka kaha ha
Aur kon rat ma he pasport tayar kr lega

Sahil..kuch dost hen mere jo racing ke doran bane the wohi log ma hacker aur fighters be hen

Ami..ma kaya hun tu janta ha meri asliyat

Sahil..nh

Rubi..sahil wesy kaha jane ka program ha

Sahil,.ami aur sona sydne ja rhe hen kal ma yahe rhoga

Ami ya sun chounky

Ami..tu ku nh jai ga
Ma tujhe yaha nh chor kar jany wali akele

Sahil,,ami you know apky info ke lye bata du ke upar jo log dono he wo dadu and abu nh hen

Ya sun ami rubi n sona chounk gye unka mou esa ho gaya jesy kesi ne unko 440 valt ka jhatka d diya ho

Khair kuch der sab shock ma rhe

Sahil..ami ami
Unko pakar kar jhinjhora tab jake wo hosh ma ai

Ami ne sawal bhare ankho se mujhe dekha

Sahil..ami yad ha apko meri 17 brthday ko papa aur dadu apko kuch zarori batany wale the

Ami ne han ma gardan hilai

Sahil..dadu aur abu ko meri pida hote pata chala tha ke ma normal nh hun
Alag hun
10 B
Ami..kya mtlb normal nh ho tum

Sahil..mujhe ziyada to nh pata but jo pata ha batata hu

(Flashback)

17th brthday ke rat dadu mujhe apny lab ma lekar gye aur unho ne mujhe kaha ke sahil beta tum sabsy alag ho tumpy bohat zimidariya aany wale hen unka dat kar muqabla krna

Sahil..dadu ma alag kese hun

Dadu..beta tumhe qudarat ne kese bohat bare kam ke lye chuna ha jo tumhary 21 hony ke bad tumhe khud pata chal jaiga
Lakin us se phle tumhe khud ko aur tumhari mom ka khayal rakhna hoga kaya pata ham rhe na rhe

Dadu ke ya bat sun mujhe bechin ho gaya tha

Sahil..dadu esa na bole ma kese ko kuch nh hone dunga ap batai mujhe kaya krna ha

Dadu..ma tumhari ami ko 1 injection diya ha jo waqt ba waqt tumhe lagate rhege jab jab tumhe gussa ai ga
Tum ma kuch natural powers hen jo seal hen hen lakin wo jab jab tum pe khatra hoga khud tumhe protect krege aur tmhe be unko use krna sikhna hoga

Sahil..dadu ya mazak ha na ku ke ya powers only movies ma ache lagte hen real ma nh

Dadu..tumhe yakeen nh meri bat pe
10 C
Ya bol dadu ne pas pare chaku utha mere hath pe mar diya

Ma chilla utha tha dard ke waja se

Dadu..sahil apna hath dekho

Ma dard ma he apna hath dekha to chounk be gaya tha

Meri hath ma jaha chaku ke waja se cut laga tha waha meri meri chamre wapas se apas ma jur rhe the
1 mint laga tha mera hath phle jesa ho gaya tha

Ma dadu ko dekha

Dadu..ab yakeen aaya

Ma..han dadu but ya realty ma kese ho gaya

Dadu..jab jab duniya ma burai apny uroj pe aate ha tab tab us burai ko mitany ke lye koi masiha aata ha as baar tumhary roop ma aaya ha wo

Ma..dadu ab kya krna ha tumhe

Dadu..yaha let jao tumhari body ma mujhe 1 formula inject krna ha jis se tumhari body ke heling power seconds ke hisab se kam kregy aur tumhary powers jalde active ho jaige

Ma bina sawal kiye waha lage machin ma let gaya jiske bad kai sary nidals meri body ma har taraf se inject ke gye aur phr dadu ne mujhe behosh kar diya tha

(Flashback end)

Ya sunte sab chup the

Sahil..uske bad jab meri ankh khule to waha dadu nh the
hmm... to matlab bahot pehle hi sahil ko pata chal gaya tha apne shaktiyo ke bare mein.... Btw uske dada ji ne uski bahot madad ki hai us waqt is mamle mein... aur ushe ehsaas dilaya ki na sirf sahil ek supernatural power holder hai balki uski mom ke paas bhi kuch shaktiya hai... aur in future kayi mamlo mein uski mom as a shield roop mein uski raksha karegi...
waise maa apne bachhe ko har buri chij se dur rakhti hai aur raksha bhi karti hai.. kyunki duniya mein sabse anmol maa hi hai har bachhe ke liye :adore:
wait a minute.... Agar yeh sahil kya bol raha ki upor jo ghum rahe hai dono wo iske dada ji...aur iske papa nahi hai..
ye kaisa suspense hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
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SONA..YA BAT HA CHALO MUJHE KAMZOR SAMJTE HO TUM
YA BOL USNY CHUTKY BAJAI TO WAHA 1 NAKABPOSH AADMI AAGYA JO KE 1 NINJA JESE DRESS MA THA

SONA..LO AGR TUMNE ISKO MAR DIYA YA HARA DIYA TO MA YAHA SE ABY KE LYE CHALE JAOGE
LAKIN AGR TUM AS SE HAR GYE TO TUMHARI MOM SAIF AUR RUBI IN 3NO KO APNY SATH GAYAB KAR LE JAOGE AUR PHR TUMHE IN TAK POHCHNE KE LYE BOHAT BURY HALAT SE GUZRNA PARE GA

SAHIL..BOHAT BARE GALTE KARDE TUNY YA BOL

YA BOL SAHIL KESI BIJLI KE TARHA US NAKABPOSH TAK POHCHA AUR USKE SENNY MA JORDAR PUNCH MARA WO URTA HAWA JA DIWAR SE TAKRA GAYA WO KHARA HOTA US SE PHLE SAHIL US TAK POHCHA AUR USKY TANG PAKAR GOL GOL GHUMATE HUE ZAMMEN PE AS TARHA MARA JESE DHOBI KAPRE KO DHOTA HA

WO NINJA ZAMMEN PE GIR UTHTA US PHLE SAHIL NE APNA KHANJAR NIKAL USKE SENNY MA GAR DIYA
AUR CHIRTY HUE NICHE TAK LE GAYA

JAB WO DØØR HUA TO WO NINJA KE BODY GAYAB HO GYE

LAKIN JAB USNY PICHE MUR KAR DEKHA TO SONA AMI RUBI GAYAB THE
WO SAMAJ GYA YA GAME KHEL GYE SONA

SAHIL CHEKH PARA.SONA TU AUR TERA MALIK ROUGE
are is sona ki to aisi ki taisi :bat:
are is sona aur iske Malik ka kissa jaldi khatam karo... :bat:
Let's see what happens next
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Sona ami rubi aur saif ko le gye

Ab aagy
Sahil ghutno ke bal betha tha usky ankhen num the

Sahil khud se...mujhe chuna gya tha burai mitane ke lye insaniyat ko bachany ke lye lakin ma to khud ke ami aur dost ko be nh bacha paya to kya ma as duniya ko bacha paoga
Nh ma as duniya ko nh bachaoga meri dada meri abu aur ab ami rubi aur saif sabko to kho diya ha many to ku bachao ma as duniya ko
Ab tak ma 1 acha insan bankar apna farz nibha raha tha lakin ab ma bura banoga ke ya duniya meri aagy jhukge chun chun kar maroga sabko aaj ke bad mujhe duniya burai ke lye yaad krege hahahahahahahahaha

Sahil waha se uth jata ha aur weapon room ma jata ha

Waha se wo rdx uthata ha aur katana utha leta ha

Bag ma rdx rakh wo baki sara saman apne dono cars ma rakh deta ha aur phr waha pe har jaga bomb fit kar deta ha

Phr apny watch se dono bike aur 1 car ko auto mood pe set kar 2sre car ma khud beth waha se nikal jata ha

Kuch door jate ha sahil ka undrgrownd base aur ghar 1 ke bad 1 dhamake hote hen aur sab khatam
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Sahil 1 car ma aagy tha aur 2sre car aur dono bike auto mood pe usky piche aa rhe the abhe subha ke 3 hue the sahil jangal ke bich se hote hue bohat aagy nikal aaya tha 1 ghnte bad wo 1 pahari alaqe ma aa gya
Usny car bethe bethe 1 batton press kiya to waha 1 pahari ke pas se pathar hat gya sahil ne car waha andr park ke jab bike aur car andr aa gye to wo rasta band ho gya

Sahil car se utar andr gaya to yaha ka mahol he alag tha

Andar light jal rhe the har taraf bohat he khubsurat tariqe se pathar ko kat kar andr base banaya gaya tha jaha bohat se car bike high wichels khre the

Sahil waha se cross kar aagy barha to samne 1 darwaza tha

Sahil usky samne khra ho gya us darwazy ke upar 1 device lge hue the usny sahil ke body scan ke phr wo andar chala gaya

Sahil..suwagat nh kroge apny baap ka bacho tez aur bhare aawaz ma ya bat bole sahil ne

Samne 1 bohat bara hall tha jaha as waqt 1 bohat bara tabel laga hua tha jiske side ma 200 kursiya pare the

Wo log sahil ko dekh khush ho gye

larki..hy darling
12 C
Sahil..hy baby
Sahil waha jake larki ke pas cher pe beth jata ha

Waha aur be bohat log bethe the
(Important logo ka intro)
Mark..duniya ke behtreen top 10 figters ma 1 ha(200 murders kiye most wanted top listed)

Chang..all types of swords master (most wanted in 10 countrys)

Jhon..worlds top 10 drivers ma se 1(most wanted crminal)

Simi..rdx and explosive expart(secret agent)

Hina..top 3 hackers of the world(top wanted on all world)

Dr..luko(robotic scientest
Ya ese robo banate hen jo insan be dhoka kha jai dekh kar robo ko)

Ya sab most wanted hen arbon rupe ke price he inpy but aaj tak koi chu tak nh paya inhe

Sahil..so gayz kam kesa chal rha ha

Hina..darling sab set ha

Sahil..luko robots ka kaya hua

Dr luko..sir kam khatam ho chuka ha mera bus ab robots ko traning ke tayari shuru ha

Sahil..good doc

Mark..bro i have question
Sahil..yeah pocho
Mark..i know tumhari pas natural super power ha to phr ya sab ku krwa rhe ho

Sahil usky bat sun...hahahaha bzc i m not lagend im davil beast distroyer
Hmm... so uske dada aur baap asli nahi hai..
ab ye kya.. matlab us sona ne uski mom, rubi aur Saif ko le gayi...
are ye sahil un teeno ko churane jaane bajaye idhar apni team sang hanshe jaa raha hai :hmm2:
Akhir ho kya raha hai udhar?
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Wo larki larke ke senny pe sar rakh ro rhe the tabhe room ma 1 aurt ai

Aurat..beti pari ya kaya kar rhe ho ku ro rhe ho

Pari,.ami dekho na 2 sal guzar gye lakin ya bolte he nh nh dekh sakti ma inke ya halat jaan nikal jate ha jab inko ma is hall ma dekhti ho

Aurat aakar pari ko gali lagate ha..chup hoja beti tere dadu ne kaha ha na jaldi he hosh aa jaiga ab teri jaan ko ab rona band kar tujhe pata ha na ya teri ankh ma anso nh dekh sakta to ku ro rhe ha bhale he ya gehri nend ma ha lakin jab jage ga na tum dekhna iska phla sawal yahi krega ke tum roye ku

Pari..thek ha ami lakin ab waqai ma agr ya 2 din bad nh jage to ma wo kroge jo inho ne be nh socha hoga

Ya khte hue wo tezi se room se nikal gye

Wo aurat larke ke pas ai aur usky sar pe chum kar
Aurat..beta pari ke baten sun le na bohat pyar krte ha tumhe jaldi jag jao
Ya khe kar wo aurat be chale gye

(new intro)
Dadu..kamal khan(top scientest and nasa s suprior)
Aurat.. Sobia khan(X ISI AGENT)
Larki..pari khan( UNKNWON)
Larka..+++++++(UNKNWON)
shayad ye pari heroine hogi is story ki :D
Khair let's see what happens next
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10 mint tak as tarha bhogne ke bad sahil ne apna ling hina ke yoni se nikala aur usky chehre par dono side chatakk chatakk thapar mara jis se hina hosh ma ai lakin agly he pal sahil ne hina ko palat ghode banaya aur apna ling usky ass ke hol pe set krte hue 1 dhuwandar jhatky se ghusa diya pora ling ass ko chirta hua andar ghus gaya hina as bar aur bury tarha se cheekkh rhe the

Hina rote hue..maf krdo mujhse galte ho gye mujhe nh pata tha tum bura man jaoge plz chor do

Sahil tezy se jhatky marta hua'...bohat uchalte ha na tu aaj ke bad dubara uchlne ke layak nh rhege sali rand mujhse unche aawaz ma bat ke tuny

Hina dard aur taqlif ma..mujhse galte ho gye maf kardo plz ruk jao aur bardasht nh kar sakte ma

Sahil ne usky kamar pakar tez jhatky marne laga jis se hina ke pori body dhile hone lge aur usky ankho ma andhera ho gya itne ma sahil 1 akhri tez dhake se pora ling hina ke ass ma jar tak ghusa kar farig hone laga

Farig hote sahil chutky baja apny kpry phn nikal gya

Hina usy hal ma waha pare the
lo.... ab hero balatkari bhi ban gaya :dazed:
ya phir pehle se hi balatkari tha wo :dazed:
Khair....
Let's see what happens next
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Lose..to kaya woh sach ha jo god ne hamen btaya tha ajse 20 sal phle ke 1 waqt ane wala ha jab achai aur burai ke jang hoge jaha sach kamzor hoga aur jhot takatwar

Simon..han wo is waqt ke he bat kar rhe the aur ab wo waqt aa gaya ha jaha bhai ka ansh burai ka sath dega wahe usko takar dene ke lye be kese ne janam liya ha

Ya sun lose ke ankho ma halke nami to aai lakin wo apny us nami ko chupany ma kamiyab ho gye

Kiara..hm to aap lagend ke bat kar rhe ho

Suwan..distroyer vs lagend yahe hen wo jaha 1 mitany wala ha to dosra bachany wala 1 mout ha to 2sra zindge
1 andhera ha to 2sra roshni

Lose..simon kaya ham usko dekh sakte hen kal wo 20 sal ka hony wala ha lakin hamary powers pe apny hamen uska chehra tak dekhne nh diya aaj tak

Ya khte hue 1 tarap the lose ke aawaz ma 1 ese tarap jo 1 maa ke apny jaan se aziz bache ke lye hote ha

Simon lose ke tarap samajhta tha aur suwan aur kiara be as dard se wakif the

Simon..kal ke bad aap usko jab chahe dekh paige lakin galte se be us se bat na krna plz
are yaar mana ki story ki demand hai par itni jaldi itne kirdaar bhi na add kar do ki baad mein confusion ho jaaye..
Baaki aapki marji..
Khair let's see what happens next
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Hina..kese chup kro jisko ma masiha samjte the wo to haiwan ha wo haiwan ha haiwan

Simi ke be ankhen num the..hina chup ho chal tu beth ma injection late hun tujhe aram miliga

Hina..ya jism ka dard to chala jaiga lakin us zakham ka kya jo meri rooh tak ko 1 esa zakham d gya ha jo marte dum tak dard deta rhega

Simi ne aram se apny ungle hina ke nick pe la uske rubs daba de hina trunt behosh ho gye simi ne room ma aakar bedshet chang ke phr hina ko lake waha sula diya aur 2injection lagai usko

Simi..maf krna hina ya zarori tha tumhara dard kuch km krne ke lye

Phr simi room se nikal apny room ma gye

Apny room ma aakar simi ne apny camputer ko on kiya phr apny balo ma hath dal 3 pins nikal le aur 3no ko aapas ma jor diya aur phr apny kan ma phne bale.(tops)nikal un pins ma fit ke to 1 usb ban gye phr wo apny camputer ma lagai

Phr kuch der ma usny us ke kuch files open ke aur kuch likha then sara data kahi transfer kar diya

Uske bad usny dubara pc of kiya aur sb kam nipta kar let gye

Simi.game is on
Actually sahil ko bandh ke thik se uski dhulai karwao taaki uski akal thikane mein aa jaye :D
wo kya hai na shaktiya milte hi ahankari aur magrur ban baitha hai wo..
Khair let's see what happens next
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Pari ke kiss ma pyar tha 1 bepanah tarap the itne time apny pyar se juda rehne ka dard tha

Wo sab ahsas wo us larke ko karwa rhe the jo in 2 sal ma usny saha tha

10 mint tak chale is kiss ma sirf pyar he pyar tha

Akhir pari ke sanse jab rukne ko hue to us larke ne jhatky se kiss khatam ke aur pari jo halki se sans rukne ke waja se girne wale the usko apne baho ma bhar utha liya aur bed pe leta diya

Pari apny baahen usky galy ma dale muskura rhe the

Ahhhmmm
Ahhhmmm

Khansi ke awaz sun dono ka dhiyan tota to darwazy pe dada aur sobia khre muskura rhe the

Pari ne sharma kr us larke ke senny ma apna chehra chupa liya

Sobia aur dadu aagy barh waha aagy ai

Sobia..mil gye thandk tujhe pari ya abhe aur kuch be krna ha tujhe to bata ham bad ma aate hen

Ya sun pari pani 2 ho gye

Dadu..are ab chor be hamen be milne de teri wajasy isy hosh aany ke bad be ham nh milne ai taki to phle mil sake

Ya sun pari unky taraf dekhte ha

Pari..apny mujhe btaya ku nh

Sobia..ham bta dete to maza kesi milta

Pari..mtlb
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hey Salu bhai ...ju ne kaha ki as a villain wo nalla apsyu, tharki imli aur hawas ki pujaran jivisha aane wali hai story pe... kaha hai wo teeno :bat:
ju promise tod rahe ho :bat:
 

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hey Salu bhai ...ju ne kaha ki as a villain wo nalla apsyu, tharki imli aur hawas ki pujaran jivisha aane wali hai story pe... kaha hai wo teeno :bat:
ju promise tod rahe ho :bat:

Ary naina g kal rat he to apasyu aur jivisha ko intry krwai ha
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Update 17
Read kre
Many apna promise pora kiya ha
Again read with focus ku ke apny update 16 tak he parha kal rat wala update read he nh kiya
 
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