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Fantasy THE LAGEND (EK ANOKHE KAHANI)

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Update 1

Intro

Samad khan (dada g)..age 70 but lgte 60 ke hen ya 1 scietest hen

Samar khan (dad) ..age 45 pakistan ke top 5 bassnismans ma se 1 hen inke apny madicins companys hen jo ke world ma madicins supply krte hen

Sara khan (mom).. Age 42 ya house wife hen but 1 fast minded lady be hen har problm ka sulution bohat jald nikal lete hen aur kabhe khud ko kamzor nh hone dete apny family ke lye kuch be kar jaany ko tayar rehte hen

Sahil khan (hero).. age 19
Janab ne kuch din phle he colleg ma admisson lya ha
Hight 5fit 10 inch body muscular face pe hamisha smile rakhta ha apny dada dad aur mom ke jaan ha ya lakin janab 1 buri aadat ha inko gussa jald ata ha but decent ha galat bat bilkul bardasht nh krta
Apny family ma sabko bohat ziyada pyar krta ha

Saif bajwa..age 19 sahil ka bacpan ka dost
Ya dono dost km bhai ziyada hen

Saif ke mom..rubi bajwa..age 39 ya 1 doctar hen apna hospital ha inka

Saif ke dad army ma the jinke death ho chuky ha

Aur be kirdar ai ge jinka intro time to time dunga
Awesome intro Bhai...
Clo hero ka family chota hai.
 
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Shukhriya doston aapke sath ka
 

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Dostö mera mbl repair hoke aagya ha

Eid se regular update dunga
 

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Update 4

Mega update


Salman aur saif bahar ate hen saif madkit lake salman ke hath pe marham lagata ha aur pati krta ha

Phr rubi nashta lagate ha aur dono nashta kr niklte he colg ke taraf

Wahe africa ma 1 jangal ma
Is jangal ko khooni jangal kaha jata ha

Bich jangal andhere ma koi betha tha akila

ab aagye

saif in car..Bhai dekho mujhe darr lag Raha ha raging se tu janta be ha na

sahil are Meri jaan fikar mat Kar ma Hun na Tere sath har jaga

saif..ok Bhai tu ha aur tujhpe to mujhe khud SE ziyada bhrosa ha

sahil..chal ab chill karna lo aagya college

sahil car ko sidha andr parking ma achi achi cars khre thi but BMW bus sahil KE thi Jo sabky nazro ma aagyi

sahil ne car park ke aur dono car se utar gye

saif KE nazar samny pre jaha sinor raging le rhe the sabky

saif ya dekhte he ....sahil Dekh samny agr kuch hua to tu soch Lena ma Kya KR bethoga

sahil.waha dekhte hue
Are tu chal na kuch NH hota ma be dekhta hun Kon Tere raging lega

dono milkar canten KE taraf ja rhe hote hen class start hony ma time that

Sahil aur Saif dono mazey se chalte hue canteen ma poch jate hen Bina donors KE nazar pre

In canteeen

sahil..ku kuch NH hua na Bina waja darr Raha tha tu yaaar

saif..wo Dekh to sahe kese se gaanna sun rhe hen kese se kuch krwa rhe hen acha hua hampy unky nazar NH pre warna tera to pata NH ma Kya krta NH janta ma

sahil ..kuch NH hua na to ab dimag be kahrab mat kr chal Bata Kya chai mangwao ya kuch aur

saif..many tea NH pe thi think se to tea piyoga ma tu Jo Dil kre mangwa le

Sahil ne tea ka order de dya

it unknown place?

Bohat badshakal Surat ka admi betha tha lagta tha jese aag ma uska face jal gya ho usky samny bohat se log hath badhe khre the

admi...tum logo se 1 Kam NH hota thek se wo chilla Kar bola

us bher ma xe 1 admi apna sar jhuka KR bola..admi2.......boss wo log hamary hath NH charte bohat kosish ke hamny lakin pata NH kese hamara har plane correct time pe fail ho jata ha

boss gusse se til Mila utha


Boss...tum log Bina kuch kiye wapas ai ho Kam se Kam us larki ko utha late to acha that wohi us budhi KE kitab kaha ha Bata dete aur ham formola bana lete lakin tum log kese Kam ke nh ho

admi...sorry boss

boss..av mujhe usko bulana prega wohi ya Kam Kar sakte ha jao dafa ho jao tum log

wo sab dum dabakar bhagte hen waha se

phr boss 1 nmbr parr call krta ha

boss...tumhari zarort par gye ha formola kaha ha pata chal gya ha usko tum he la sakti ho mere admion sw NH ho para Raha

unknown........

boss...ok jaga kaha aana ha Bata Dena

unknown..........

yaha to bat hue kahatam

ab chalte hen 1 aur jaga jaha bohat se doctars 1 tube numa capsule ma band kese insan pe kuch experiment Kar rhe the

dr1..sir aaj agr Kam ho gya to ham log duniya ke Malik ban jaige

dr2...yesss but ab isko haevy dose do taky ya is gehre nend se Jag Jai mere khuwab Sacha yehe kar sakta ha

tb sab doctar milky alg alg camputr pe Kam krne lge hen bohat se alg alg tubes ma pre hue alg alg camical ke injections us shaks ke body ma Daly jate hen jis se wo bohat ziyada tarpny lagta ha

dr2..ab tum sab Bahar jao ma isko Handel Kar lunga

sab Bahar jate hen

unky Bahar jate he doctar2 jiska Nam Jack tha apna hath Kat Kar us se niklny Wala blood 1 injection ma lagata ha aur wo injection 1 tube ma dalta ha aur uska blood be us tube se hota hua us insan me rago ma Chala jata ha

tabhi us insan ke heartbeat Jo ruk chuki this shuru ho jate ha

jack..... hahahahahahahahha ma kamiyab ho gyaa hahahaha


it college...

sahil aur Saif ne tea pe le

saif...chal college ka sports Hal Dekh Kar aate hen

sahil..ok chal

sahil aur Saif jese he canteen se bahr jate hen sinor KE nazar is bar unpy pr jate ha

sinor....Oye tum dono yaha aaao kaha patli galy se nikal rhe ho

ya sun Saif ke halat buri hony lgte ha

but sahil ignor krte hue Saif ko chalny ka bolta ha

sahil..unpy dhiyan mat de chal tu yaha se

sinor jab dekhta ha sahil aur Saif usky taraf na aakr apny raste ja rhe hen to usko apny beizati mehsos hoti ja

sinor apny boys se...Oye dekho wo dono ja rhe hen inko yaha leke ao ABI

3 larke Saif aur sahil KE piche jate hen aur PHR usky samny aakr unka Rasta rok dete hen

larka1..Oye chutiya tuny suna NH Bhai ne tumhe bulaya to kaha bhag rhe ho

sahil..Dekh Bhai wo Jo be hamen farak NH prta so raste se hato aur hamen jany du

larka2..aby Teri to hamen raste se hatne ka bol Raha ha sale

saif ko darr lgne lga tha(note saif itna ku darta ha isky waja aapko aagy pata chalege)

saif..sahil Bhai panga mat krna plz

sahil...cool down yaaar NH krta ma kuch inhe

larka3...aby tu hamse panga leke yaha reh paiga chalta ha Bhai KE pass ya tum dono ke dhulai karki leke jai ham tum logo ko


sahil...dekho Bhai ham yaha study krne aai hen so plz aap hamara Rasta chor do warna

larka1..warna Kya be (us ne aagy barh sahil ka greeban pakr Liya )

sahil kbhi galat bardst NH krta tha aaj to had ho gye

sahil...Saif tu chal ma aata Hun

saif..lakin

sahil..jata ha ya nh

saif..ok jaldi aana 10 mint ma class ka time ho jaiga

saif waha se sports hall Chala jata ha

sahil..to hath hataiga ya nh

larka1..nh hataiga Kya krega saly MADRCHOD(ya galti krdi isni bohat bary)

sahil...buss bohat hua

ya bolti hue sahil ne usky nakk pe zordar punch jhar Diya
wo larka bury trha se chikkh utha jis waja se sabka dhiyaan us taraf Chala gya

sahil..mujhe kuch be bolta ma seh leta but gali kabhi bardst NH krta ma khass Kar agr koi Meri family ko kuch boldi to

ya bat bol sahil ne usky tatto pe kick mar de zor se wo chiktaaa hua apny tatte pakr Beth gya

tab Tak sinor be waha agya apny larke do dard se tarpta Dekh uska para be char Gaya

sinor...aby kutte Kon ha tu aaj to tu Gaya mere larke ko Mara tuny..

sahil...Dekh ma yaha study krne aaya Hun larne NH tu apna Kam Kar mujhe apna krne de isni mujhe gali de tabui many isko Mara samjha ab agr kese ne be mujhe touch krne KE kosish ke to wo chalny KE kabil NH rhega


sinor...Sala bohat ghamand ha tujhe khud pe janta ha ma Kon Hun yaha KE minister ka beta Hun


sahil...to ma kaya kru tu jiska be beta ha Mera Rasta chor de


sinor...Teri to ma wat lgao ga aur Teri sath Teri har dost aur family members ke be jinky wajase tuny Meri dost ko Mara

sahil ne Bina kuch boly jhamp mar Kar sinor KE senny ma zordar kich mar de jis KE lgte he wo dur ja gira

sinor dard SE khrate hue...Oye Dekh ja rhe ho Mar mar Kar hadi pasly Tor do isky

12 larke sahil ko ghir Kar khre ho gye sabky hath ma hoky sticks thi

wo log jese he sahil pw hamla krne wale the achank se waha kese ne Hawa ma fire ke







 

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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

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Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
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