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Ishhhh finally story close ..lol
Koi na writer Bhai update na diye koi BT nhi ..story close KR lo Bhai...
Koi na writer Bhai update na diye koi BT nhi ..story close KR lo Bhai...
Bhaion or doaton me ek story likh na chata hun agar ijazat ho to suru karna cahunga ...... basically ye story Hindi mythology or Roman mythology ki ek kalpanik mishran hogi....
Meme pehle ek story suru ki thi jiski jiski plot mujhe kuch khas pasand nehi aii ...
Or uss ke kuch din baad ho me ek family tour me chat dham yatra ke liye chala Gaya tha to wo thread hi close ho gayi thi...
That's why mujhe app logon ki ijazat chahiye nayi story likhne ki......
Agar app log comment karke Batana ..
Yes ya no
Regards
Santu
Bhai abhi update adhi likhi hai subha 12 baje 1 update post kar dunga
Thanks for your love and support,....
-THE LEAGUE OF HALF BLOODS
UPDATE -1
EK LADKA APNI SUPER BIKE *MTT TURBINE* LEKE BOHOT JADA SPEED SE EK SUNSAN SADAK SE GUJAR RAHA THA KI TABHI....
USSE KISI KI CIKH SUNAI DI JO JO SIRF EK YA DO SECOND KE LIYE THA Q KI BIKE BOHOT TEJ THI TO USSE WO AWAJ THODI DHIMI SUNAI DI, JAB TAK WO USS AWAJ KO AACHE SE SAMJH KE BREAK LAGATA TAB TAK WO 2KM AAGE NIKAL CHUKA THA,
BIKE ROKNE KE BAD WO SOCHA KON HOGA JO ITNE SUNSAN ROAD ME ITNI RAAT KO CIKH RAHA HAI MUJHE JAKE DEKHNI CAHIYE YA NEHI........?????
TABHI USSKE MAN KI AWAJ AII KI JAKE DEKH LE TERA KYA JATA HAI *CHUTIYE*
WO LADKA BHI APNA KANDHA UCHKA DETA HAI JESE WO APNI MAN KI BAT SE SEHMAT HO,PHIR USS KE MAN NE BOLA AGAR WO CHIK KISI BHOOOOT KI HUI TO?????????????
BHOOOT WORD SUN KE LADKE KO ITNI HASI AAI KI USSE LAGA KI WOO HAS HAS KE HI MAR JAYEGA, KHER WO APNI BIKE GHUMAI OR CHAL PADA USS AWAJ KI TARAF JAHAN SE WO AAI THI,
THODI DUR JANE KE BAD WO USS JAGA POHONCH BHI GAYA,JAB BIKE SE UTRA TO USSE JADA MEHNAT NEHI KARNI PADI USSE KUCH KI DURI PAR EK AUDI OR EK JEEP SADAK SE NICHE KI TARAF UTRI HUI MILI THODI DER IDHER UDHAR DEKHNE KA BAD USSE JANGAL KI TARAF KUCH HALCHAL SUNAI DI OR WO JANGAL KI TARF BADH CHALA ABHI THODI AAGE CHALA THA KI SAMNE KA MANGAR DEKH KE USS KE SARE CONFUSION DUR HO GAYI...............
SAMNE KA SEAN KUCH ISS TARHA THA......
KUCH 6 LADKE DO LADKION KE SATH JABARJASTI KARNE KOSISH KAR RAHE THE .............
AB SE LADKE KI JAGHA ME LIKHUNGA....
TABHI ME UN SAB PICHE AWAJ DETA HUN ...
UNN GUNDO SE KEHTA HUN HAY BHAILOG UN DONO KO CHOD DO...........
YE AWAJ SUN WO LOG IDHAR UDHAR DEKHNE LAGTE HAIN KYUN KI UN LOGAN KO LAG TA HAI KI ITNE RAAT ME YE SUN SAN JUNGAL ME KON AA SAKTA HAI?????????
UN LOGON KO ESE DEKH ME BOLTA HUN, ABE YAAR AAJU BAJU NAHI PICHEEEE TO DEKHOOOO........
YE AWAJ SUN GUNDE JAB PICHE DEKHTE HE TO UN KE SAMNE EK LADKA KHADA THA APROX 6.5 INCH KA, GOLDEN BLACK COLOR KI EK LETHAR JACKET PEHNE HUE THA,USS LADKE KI PURI BODY COVERED THI....
(WESE MERA KOI INTENSON NEHI THA BALKI ME MAJBOOR THA MERI MAJBURI BIKE CHALANA THA THAND ME)
USS LADKE KI SIRF EYES DIKH RAHI THI JO KI AMBER COLOR KI THI..........OR PERSONALITY KISI HERO MAFIK....
AB UN LOGON KA DHYAN MERI OR AA CHUKA THA TO LADKE NE PHIR SE BOLA BHAI LOG LADKION KO CHOD DO OR.................................... NIKAL LO WO BHI CHUP CHAP..
TABHI UNMESE EK PANCH FUTIYA KO KAY HUA PATA NEHI WO EK DUM KISI PAGAL SAAND KI TARHA DODKE AAYA OR US MERI GIREWAN PAKAD LIYA OR BOLA KYU TU HERO HAI KAY BE????
*CORRECTION*
ME :- I M NOT A HERO..... OR
I M DONT WANNA BE A HERO *Q KI IM BETTER THEN A HERO AND WORSTER THEN A VILLIAN*
IDHAR MERA dialogue KHATAM HUA OR UDHAR USS 5 FUTIYE KI JINDEGI Q KI USKI PER JAMIN SE TEEN FEET UPAR HAWA ME JHUL RAHI THI.....
OR US KI GARDAN MERI HATON ME.......
JAB WO PANCH FUTIYA NICHE GIRA OR HILNA DULNA BAND HO GAYA TO, TO BAKI BACHE GUNDO ME SE EK NE BOLA...
GUNDA:-YE LADKE KYA KIYA TUNE ISKE SATH.....
ME:- DON'T WORRY HE IS NO MORE, MUJHE ISKE LIYE BADI KHED HAI...
GOON :- TERI MAA KI..........
BICHARE KI BAAT USS KE MUH ME HI REH GAYI....
OR DUSRA BANDA BHI SAHID HO GAYA AFSOSH....
BAKI CHAR JO BACHE THE WO DARE HUE THE AB DARE HUE LOGON KO KYA MARNA..... Q KI MENE KAHIN SUNA THA (JO DAR GAYA SAMJHO MAR GAYA)
SO MENE UNKO IGNORE KARKE UN DO LADKIO KI TARAF BADHA
WO DONO BHI KISI STATUE KI TARHA USI HALL ME HI THI JIS HAL ME UN GUNDO NE CHODA THA ....
MATLAB DONO KI TIJORIYA KHULI PADI THI ....
EK BAR KO TO ME BHI PIGHAL GAYA THA UN DONO KO DEKH...
SAHI ME DONO HI BEINTHIA KHUBSUSAT THI....
ME EK LAMBI SAANS LEKAR APNE SARE EMOTION KO CONTROL KI..PHIR BOLA..
ME:- HELLO LEDIES PLZ APNA ÀPNE KHAJANA WO KO DHAK KE RAKHO, WARNA WO LOG TO SRIF DAKU THE, ME UNN SAB KA SARDAR HOON OR NAAM HAI GABBAR GABBAR SINGH .....
MERI BAT SUN KE JESE DONO KO HOSH AAYA DONO NE JALDI SE APNE KAPDE PEHNE...OR KHÀDI HO GAYI..
ME:- PICHE MUDA TO WO CHARO ABHI TAK JESE KA WESE KHADE THE, TO ME UNSE KEHTA HOON
ME:- TUM SAB GANDU LOG APNE SARE CHED KHOLKE SUNO AJJ KE MUJHE APNI SAKAL NEHI DIKHANI HAI... SAMAJH GAYE
CHARO APNI MUNDI HILANE LAGE...
ME:- GOOD NIKLO AB...
CHARO ASE GAYAB HUE JESE MISTER INDIA....
UN LOGO KE JANE KE BAD ME APNA RUKH DONO LADKIO KE TARAF KI... TAB PEHLI BARR DONO ME SE EK NE KUCH BOLI...
L1:- THANKS FOR SAVEING OUR LIFE WESE MERA NAAM RUHI HAI
L2 KI ROMA HAI ...
THANKS AGAIN
ROMA:- WESE KYA ME HAMARI JAAN BACHANE WALE MASIHA KA NAAM JAN SAKTI HUN???
ME:-GHOOR KE PEHLI BAAT ME KOI MASIHA NEHI HUN,OR DUSRI NAHI, NAHI JAN SAKTI OR HAN JADA FAMILIAR HONE KI JARURAT NEHI ISS SE PEHLE MERA MOOD BADLE OR ME WAHI KARUN TUM LOGO KE SATH JO WO GUNDE KARNA CHATE THE NIKLO YAHA SE(YE SAB MENE THODA RAUGH VOICE ME BOLA THA)JISE SUN DONO SACH MUCH DAR GAYI OR DONO SACH ME WAHAN SE NIKAL GAYE....
UN KE JANE KE BAAD
ME:- BADI AAYI NAAM PUCHNE WALI...KAMINI
OR KUCH DER ME ME BHI NIKAL LIYA DONO BODY'S KO THIKANE LAGAKE APNE DESTINATION MEAN GHAR,HOME SWEET HOME JAHAN MERE SATH ME KHUD REHTA HOON....
Story closeIshhhh finally story close ..lol
Koi na writer Bhai update na diye koi BT nhi ..story close KR lo Bhai...
Ajj do update de dunga mobile mme kuch problem thi net on karnese switch of ho jata tha ajj sarvic center se leke aaya hun....... Raat ke do teen bake tak.... update milegaIshhhh finally story close ..lol
Koi na writer Bhai update na diye koi BT nhi ..story close KR lo Bhai...
Hmm dekhte haiAjj do update de dunga mobile mme kuch problem thi net on karnese switch of ho jata tha ajj sarvic center se leke aaya hun....... Raat ke do teen bake tak.... update milega
Ok waitingAjj do update de dunga mobile mme kuch problem thi net on karnese switch of ho jata tha ajj sarvic center se leke aaya hun....... Raat ke do teen bake tak.... update milega