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Update-1(Character Introduction)
Ek shehar ke sunsan se sadak par ek chota bacha apni choti behen ko apni god me utha kar chal raha tha.. uske kapde fate huye aur puraane se the.. uski choti behen ro rahi thi..
Ladka(Shaant karate huye)- “Shaant ho ja Ishu..”
Wo dhire dhire apni behen ki peeth sehlane laga.. aur use apni god me jhula jhulane laga..
Ladka(Man me)-“Lagta hai ise bhuk lagi hai..”
Usne apni behen ko pakad kar aas paas dekha par waha koi bhi ni tha.. Use apni halat par rona aa raha tha.. uske aankho se aansu girne lage.. wo daud kar thoda aage badhne laga use waha kuch log dikhayi diye.. dikhne me wo thode high class ke log the.. wo ladka unke paas bhaag kar gaya aur kaha..
Ladka(haath jodte huye) – “Sahab.. meri behen bhuki hai.. kuch paise de do..”
Un logo ne us ladke ko dur dhakka de diya aur kaha
“Chal chal nikal.. bhikari kahi ka..”
Dhakke se wo ladka girte girte bacha usne apni behen ko dekha jo abhi bhi ro rahi thi.. us ladke ne saamne ek mehengi gaadi dekhi jisme se ek aurat bahar nikli.. Ladka tezi se bhag kar us aurat ke pairo me gir gaya aur us se kehne laga
“Mem sahab.. meri behen ke liye thode paise de dijiye..”
Us aurat ko gussa aaya aur usne us ladko ko lath maar kar dur kar diya..
Aurat –“Chal hatt.. meri saree ko chhune ki himmat kaise huyi..”
Aur wo waha se dur chali gayi.. Ladke utha aur khud ko thik kiya.. usne apne behen ke pith par haath pheraya.. uske aankho se aansu beh rahe the usne apni behen ko dekha jisne rona band kar diya tha.. us bachi ne apne bhai ko dekha to usne apne chote chote haatho se apne bhai ke chehre par aansu pochne lagi.. us ladke ne apni behen ke maathe par kiss kiya aur use sulane ki koshish karne laga... Wahi thodi dur se ek chai wala apni dukaan se un dono ko dekh raha tha..
Chaiwala – “Ae ladke..”
Ladke ne us chai wale ki taraf dekha..
Chaiwala- “Haa tu.. idhar aa..”
Ladka us chaiwale ke paas ja kar khada ho gaya.. uski dukaan choti si hi thi.. us chaiwale ne us ladke se pucha..
Chaiwala –“Kyun bhai.. tumhare maa baap kaha hai..”
Ladka-“humara koi ni hai sahab.. hum to khud anath ashram se bhaag kar aaye hai.. waha...”
Is se aage wo ladka kuch bolta us chaiwale ne us ladke ko roka..
Chaiwala-“Acha pehle apni behen ko ye dudh pila de.. aur ye le tu bhi pee le..”
Chaiwale ne use do glass dudh diya.. Ladka pehle thoda hichkichaya par phir usne ek glass dudh pakad kar wahi saamne ek kursi par baith gaya aur apni behen ko dhire dhire dudh pilaane laga.. dudh peene ke baad usne apni behen ko dhire dhire jhulana start kiya aur uske saath khelne laga.. un dono ko dekh kar us chaiwale ki aankho me pani aa gaya..
Usne us ladke ke paas aa kar uske sar par haath pheraya.. aur kaha
Chaiwala-“Arre tumne to dudh hi ni piya..”
Ladka-“Nahi sahab.. mujhe sirf meri behen ke liye chahiye tha use bhuk lagi thi..”
Chaiwala-“Lagta hai bahut khayal rakhte ho apni behen ka..”
Ladka-“Iske alawa mera aur hai hi kaun sahab..”
Chaiwala-“Yu baar baar mujhe sahab na kaho.. Mera naam Shankar hai.. tum mujhe Kaka bol sakte ho.. Aur Agar dudh ni piyoge to kamjor ho jaoge.. aur phir apni behen ka khayal kaise rakhoge uski dekhbal kaise karoge..”
Us ladke ne Shankar ki aur dekha.. Pehli baar us ladke se kisi ne pyaar se baatein ki thi.. Pehli baar use kisi ne ek apnepan ka ehsaas dilaya tha.. Usne us glass se thoda dudh phir apni behen ko pilaya aur baki khud pura pi gaya..
Ladka-“Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka kaka.. mujhe nahi maalum tha ki aap jaise log bhi is duniya me hote hai.. Jabse duniya samjhi hai sabne bas dutkar kar mujhe bhaga diya..”
Shankar-“Ye duniya aisi hi hai beta.. Jinke paas paisa hai wo sabko paise se hi parakhte hai.. aur jo log unse aukaat me unse chote hote hai.. unhe to ye kuch bhi ni samajhte.. Par beta aisa soch kar duniya me har kisi se dwesh mat rakhna.. kuch log paiso ke saath saath dil se bhi ameer hote hai.. Iss duniya me achai dhundhne ki koshish karoge to ye duniya utni bhi buri nahi hai..”
Shankar ki baatein sun kar Wo ladka use dekhne laga..
Shankar-“Acha tumhara naam kya hai..”
Ladka-“Gaurav... Aur ye meri behen Isha..”
Shankar-“Acha beta ye lo.. Tumhare raaste me ye kaam aaenge..”
Shankar ne use ek bottle dudh aur thode bread ke slices diye.. Gaurav ne Shankar ka dhanyawaad kiya aur waha se aage chale gaya..Thodi dur chalne ke baad use ek mandir dikha us mandir ke bahar kuch bhikari so rahe the.. Gaurav ne wahi rukne ka faisla kiya aur waha ja kar diwaar ke satkar baith gaya.. aur Isha ko apne god me sula diya..
Kuch din Gaurav wahi mandir ke saamne bheek maangne laga use jo kuch paise mil jate the wo us se Isha ke liye doodh ur apne liye kuch khane ko kharid leta tha.. Ek din Gaurav Isha ko lekar mandir ke seedhiyo par hi baitha tha.. Aaj use jyada paise nahi mile the.. uske paas Ishu ke doodh ke liye bhi paise nahi the.. Wo soch hi raha tha ki uske saamne ek ladka aaya..
Ladka-“Ye lo!!”
Gaurav ne sar utha kar dekha, wo ladka use kuch paise de raha tha.. Wo ladka dikhne me normal sa hi lag raha tha.. uske kapde bahut sadharan the.. Gaurav ne paise nahi liye bas use dekhta raha..
Ladka-“Le lo.. Jab tumhare paas ho to mujhe dena de dena.. abhi tumhari behen ke liye ja kar khana kharid lo!!”
Gaurav gaya aur usne Ishu ke liye doodh kharida aur apne liye kuch khaane ko. Wapas aa kar usne us ladke ko dhunda.. wo ladka use ek ped ke niche baitha mila. Gaurav uske paas gaya aur ja kar baith gaya.
Gaurav – “Bhaiya bahut bahut dhanyawaad..”
Ladka-“Arre Koi nahi bhai.. Kabhi mai bhi tumhare jagah tha.. Mujhe pata hai bhook kya hoti hai.. waise tumhara naam kya hai?”
Gaurav-“Gaurav aur ye meri behen Isha..”
Ladka-“Tum rehte kaha ho?”
Gaurav-“wahi mandir ki seedhiyo par..”
Ladka-“Tum mandir me mere saath kyu ni rehte..”
Gaurav-“Mai to yaha kisi ko bhi ni janta bhaiya..”
Yuhi thodi der baate krte krte naa jaane kyu Us ladke ko Gaurav ki baate uska vyavahar bahut acha laga.. Usne Gaurav ki madad karne ki sochi aur us se kaha..
Ladka-“Chalo mai tumhe kisi se milwata hu..”
Ladka Gaurav ko le kar mandir ke andar gaya.. waha mandir ke pandit ji kuch phoolon ki mala bana rahe the..
Ladka-“Namaste Babuji..”
Pandit-“Arre Abhimanyu beta.. aao aao.. ye tumhare saath kaun hai..”
Abhimanyu –“Ji ye humare mandir ke seedhiyo pe rehta hai.. Gaurav aur ye iski behen Ishu..”
Pandit ji uth kar gaurav k paas aaye aur uske sar par haath phera. Tabhi unhe gaurav ki aankho me kuch dikhayi diya jise dekh kar wo hairaan ho gaye. thode der wo gaurav ko yuhi dekhte rahe.
Abhimanyu ne unhe bulaya to unka dhyan tuta.
Abhimayu-“Babuji..”
Pandit-“Haa. Haa.. kuch nahi.. bas aise hi..”
Abhimanyu-“Aap thik to hai?”
Pandit-“Haa main thik hu..”
Abhimanyu-“Bas ise agar mandir me kuch kaam mil jata to??”
Pandit-“Arre ye to bahut chhota hai.. chalo koi nahi..”
Pandit ji ne Ishu ki taraf use uthane ke liye haath badhaya.. Ishu unke paas chale gayi.
Pandit-“Chalo koi nahi tum yaha mandir me idhar udhar safayi kar dena..”
Gaurav-“Ishu...”
Pandit-“Tum chinta mat karo ab se ye humari bhi gudiya hai..”
Itna keh kar Pandit ji ne gaurav aur ishu ko apne ek chhote se kamre me le gaye..
Pandit-“Tum yaha rehna ab se..”
Gaurav ne unki baatein maan li.. Gaurav aur ishu ko waha chhod panditji bahar aaye..
Abhimanyu-“Aisa kya hua Babuji.. aap use dekh kar itna kyu ghabra gaye..”
Pandit ji ne kuch nahi kaha.
Abhimanyu-“Babuji..”
Pandit-“Humari talaash puri huyi Abhimanyu..”
Abhimanyu ye sun kar bahut hairaan ho gaya..
Abhimanyu-“Kya? Kya yahi hai wo!! Par ye to bacha hai!!”
Pandit-“Haa Abhimanyu! Uski taqdeer use humare paas laayi hai! Abhi uski takat ka ehsaas use khud nahi hai..”
Abhimanyu ne us kamre ki khidki ke paas ja kar gaurav ko dekha.. Panditji uske piche khade ho gaye aur wo bhi gaurav ko dekhne lage.. Gaurav ishu ko apni gaud me khila raha tha..
Pandit-“Ise hume sabse chhupa kar rakhna hoga Abhimanyu.. Kal se ise tum dhire dhire abhyas karwana shuru karo..”
Abhimanyu-“Par main??”
Pandit-“Bhulo mat Abhimanyu.. tum mere sabse shresth shishya ho.. tumne jitney jaldi apni taakato ke bare me sikha aur unhe jis tarike se niyantrit kiya.. wo kisi chamatkar se kam nahi!!”
Abhimanyu thoda soch me padd gaya..
Pandit-“Daro mat Abhimanyu.. Gaurav ke liye tumse acha Guru aur koi nahi!! Mujhe tum par bharosa hai....”
Itna keh kar Pandit ji waha se chale gaye aur Abhimanyu sochne laga ki Gaurav ko kaise train karega!
Ek shehar ke sunsan se sadak par ek chota bacha apni choti behen ko apni god me utha kar chal raha tha.. uske kapde fate huye aur puraane se the.. uski choti behen ro rahi thi..
Ladka(Shaant karate huye)- “Shaant ho ja Ishu..”
Wo dhire dhire apni behen ki peeth sehlane laga.. aur use apni god me jhula jhulane laga..
Ladka(Man me)-“Lagta hai ise bhuk lagi hai..”
Usne apni behen ko pakad kar aas paas dekha par waha koi bhi ni tha.. Use apni halat par rona aa raha tha.. uske aankho se aansu girne lage.. wo daud kar thoda aage badhne laga use waha kuch log dikhayi diye.. dikhne me wo thode high class ke log the.. wo ladka unke paas bhaag kar gaya aur kaha..
Ladka(haath jodte huye) – “Sahab.. meri behen bhuki hai.. kuch paise de do..”
Un logo ne us ladke ko dur dhakka de diya aur kaha
“Chal chal nikal.. bhikari kahi ka..”
Dhakke se wo ladka girte girte bacha usne apni behen ko dekha jo abhi bhi ro rahi thi.. us ladke ne saamne ek mehengi gaadi dekhi jisme se ek aurat bahar nikli.. Ladka tezi se bhag kar us aurat ke pairo me gir gaya aur us se kehne laga
“Mem sahab.. meri behen ke liye thode paise de dijiye..”
Us aurat ko gussa aaya aur usne us ladko ko lath maar kar dur kar diya..
Aurat –“Chal hatt.. meri saree ko chhune ki himmat kaise huyi..”
Aur wo waha se dur chali gayi.. Ladke utha aur khud ko thik kiya.. usne apne behen ke pith par haath pheraya.. uske aankho se aansu beh rahe the usne apni behen ko dekha jisne rona band kar diya tha.. us bachi ne apne bhai ko dekha to usne apne chote chote haatho se apne bhai ke chehre par aansu pochne lagi.. us ladke ne apni behen ke maathe par kiss kiya aur use sulane ki koshish karne laga... Wahi thodi dur se ek chai wala apni dukaan se un dono ko dekh raha tha..
Chaiwala – “Ae ladke..”
Ladke ne us chai wale ki taraf dekha..
Chaiwala- “Haa tu.. idhar aa..”
Ladka us chaiwale ke paas ja kar khada ho gaya.. uski dukaan choti si hi thi.. us chaiwale ne us ladke se pucha..
Chaiwala –“Kyun bhai.. tumhare maa baap kaha hai..”
Ladka-“humara koi ni hai sahab.. hum to khud anath ashram se bhaag kar aaye hai.. waha...”
Is se aage wo ladka kuch bolta us chaiwale ne us ladke ko roka..
Chaiwala-“Acha pehle apni behen ko ye dudh pila de.. aur ye le tu bhi pee le..”
Chaiwale ne use do glass dudh diya.. Ladka pehle thoda hichkichaya par phir usne ek glass dudh pakad kar wahi saamne ek kursi par baith gaya aur apni behen ko dhire dhire dudh pilaane laga.. dudh peene ke baad usne apni behen ko dhire dhire jhulana start kiya aur uske saath khelne laga.. un dono ko dekh kar us chaiwale ki aankho me pani aa gaya..
Usne us ladke ke paas aa kar uske sar par haath pheraya.. aur kaha
Chaiwala-“Arre tumne to dudh hi ni piya..”
Ladka-“Nahi sahab.. mujhe sirf meri behen ke liye chahiye tha use bhuk lagi thi..”
Chaiwala-“Lagta hai bahut khayal rakhte ho apni behen ka..”
Ladka-“Iske alawa mera aur hai hi kaun sahab..”
Chaiwala-“Yu baar baar mujhe sahab na kaho.. Mera naam Shankar hai.. tum mujhe Kaka bol sakte ho.. Aur Agar dudh ni piyoge to kamjor ho jaoge.. aur phir apni behen ka khayal kaise rakhoge uski dekhbal kaise karoge..”
Us ladke ne Shankar ki aur dekha.. Pehli baar us ladke se kisi ne pyaar se baatein ki thi.. Pehli baar use kisi ne ek apnepan ka ehsaas dilaya tha.. Usne us glass se thoda dudh phir apni behen ko pilaya aur baki khud pura pi gaya..
Ladka-“Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka kaka.. mujhe nahi maalum tha ki aap jaise log bhi is duniya me hote hai.. Jabse duniya samjhi hai sabne bas dutkar kar mujhe bhaga diya..”
Shankar-“Ye duniya aisi hi hai beta.. Jinke paas paisa hai wo sabko paise se hi parakhte hai.. aur jo log unse aukaat me unse chote hote hai.. unhe to ye kuch bhi ni samajhte.. Par beta aisa soch kar duniya me har kisi se dwesh mat rakhna.. kuch log paiso ke saath saath dil se bhi ameer hote hai.. Iss duniya me achai dhundhne ki koshish karoge to ye duniya utni bhi buri nahi hai..”
Shankar ki baatein sun kar Wo ladka use dekhne laga..
Shankar-“Acha tumhara naam kya hai..”
Ladka-“Gaurav... Aur ye meri behen Isha..”
Shankar-“Acha beta ye lo.. Tumhare raaste me ye kaam aaenge..”
Shankar ne use ek bottle dudh aur thode bread ke slices diye.. Gaurav ne Shankar ka dhanyawaad kiya aur waha se aage chale gaya..Thodi dur chalne ke baad use ek mandir dikha us mandir ke bahar kuch bhikari so rahe the.. Gaurav ne wahi rukne ka faisla kiya aur waha ja kar diwaar ke satkar baith gaya.. aur Isha ko apne god me sula diya..
Kuch din Gaurav wahi mandir ke saamne bheek maangne laga use jo kuch paise mil jate the wo us se Isha ke liye doodh ur apne liye kuch khane ko kharid leta tha.. Ek din Gaurav Isha ko lekar mandir ke seedhiyo par hi baitha tha.. Aaj use jyada paise nahi mile the.. uske paas Ishu ke doodh ke liye bhi paise nahi the.. Wo soch hi raha tha ki uske saamne ek ladka aaya..
Ladka-“Ye lo!!”
Gaurav ne sar utha kar dekha, wo ladka use kuch paise de raha tha.. Wo ladka dikhne me normal sa hi lag raha tha.. uske kapde bahut sadharan the.. Gaurav ne paise nahi liye bas use dekhta raha..
Ladka-“Le lo.. Jab tumhare paas ho to mujhe dena de dena.. abhi tumhari behen ke liye ja kar khana kharid lo!!”
Gaurav gaya aur usne Ishu ke liye doodh kharida aur apne liye kuch khaane ko. Wapas aa kar usne us ladke ko dhunda.. wo ladka use ek ped ke niche baitha mila. Gaurav uske paas gaya aur ja kar baith gaya.
Gaurav – “Bhaiya bahut bahut dhanyawaad..”
Ladka-“Arre Koi nahi bhai.. Kabhi mai bhi tumhare jagah tha.. Mujhe pata hai bhook kya hoti hai.. waise tumhara naam kya hai?”
Gaurav-“Gaurav aur ye meri behen Isha..”
Ladka-“Tum rehte kaha ho?”
Gaurav-“wahi mandir ki seedhiyo par..”
Ladka-“Tum mandir me mere saath kyu ni rehte..”
Gaurav-“Mai to yaha kisi ko bhi ni janta bhaiya..”
Yuhi thodi der baate krte krte naa jaane kyu Us ladke ko Gaurav ki baate uska vyavahar bahut acha laga.. Usne Gaurav ki madad karne ki sochi aur us se kaha..
Ladka-“Chalo mai tumhe kisi se milwata hu..”
Ladka Gaurav ko le kar mandir ke andar gaya.. waha mandir ke pandit ji kuch phoolon ki mala bana rahe the..
Ladka-“Namaste Babuji..”
Pandit-“Arre Abhimanyu beta.. aao aao.. ye tumhare saath kaun hai..”
Abhimanyu –“Ji ye humare mandir ke seedhiyo pe rehta hai.. Gaurav aur ye iski behen Ishu..”
Pandit ji uth kar gaurav k paas aaye aur uske sar par haath phera. Tabhi unhe gaurav ki aankho me kuch dikhayi diya jise dekh kar wo hairaan ho gaye. thode der wo gaurav ko yuhi dekhte rahe.
Abhimanyu ne unhe bulaya to unka dhyan tuta.
Abhimayu-“Babuji..”
Pandit-“Haa. Haa.. kuch nahi.. bas aise hi..”
Abhimanyu-“Aap thik to hai?”
Pandit-“Haa main thik hu..”
Abhimanyu-“Bas ise agar mandir me kuch kaam mil jata to??”
Pandit-“Arre ye to bahut chhota hai.. chalo koi nahi..”
Pandit ji ne Ishu ki taraf use uthane ke liye haath badhaya.. Ishu unke paas chale gayi.
Pandit-“Chalo koi nahi tum yaha mandir me idhar udhar safayi kar dena..”
Gaurav-“Ishu...”
Pandit-“Tum chinta mat karo ab se ye humari bhi gudiya hai..”
Itna keh kar Pandit ji ne gaurav aur ishu ko apne ek chhote se kamre me le gaye..
Pandit-“Tum yaha rehna ab se..”
Gaurav ne unki baatein maan li.. Gaurav aur ishu ko waha chhod panditji bahar aaye..
Abhimanyu-“Aisa kya hua Babuji.. aap use dekh kar itna kyu ghabra gaye..”
Pandit ji ne kuch nahi kaha.
Abhimanyu-“Babuji..”
Pandit-“Humari talaash puri huyi Abhimanyu..”
Abhimanyu ye sun kar bahut hairaan ho gaya..
Abhimanyu-“Kya? Kya yahi hai wo!! Par ye to bacha hai!!”
Pandit-“Haa Abhimanyu! Uski taqdeer use humare paas laayi hai! Abhi uski takat ka ehsaas use khud nahi hai..”
Abhimanyu ne us kamre ki khidki ke paas ja kar gaurav ko dekha.. Panditji uske piche khade ho gaye aur wo bhi gaurav ko dekhne lage.. Gaurav ishu ko apni gaud me khila raha tha..
Pandit-“Ise hume sabse chhupa kar rakhna hoga Abhimanyu.. Kal se ise tum dhire dhire abhyas karwana shuru karo..”
Abhimanyu-“Par main??”
Pandit-“Bhulo mat Abhimanyu.. tum mere sabse shresth shishya ho.. tumne jitney jaldi apni taakato ke bare me sikha aur unhe jis tarike se niyantrit kiya.. wo kisi chamatkar se kam nahi!!”
Abhimanyu thoda soch me padd gaya..
Pandit-“Daro mat Abhimanyu.. Gaurav ke liye tumse acha Guru aur koi nahi!! Mujhe tum par bharosa hai....”
Itna keh kar Pandit ji waha se chale gaye aur Abhimanyu sochne laga ki Gaurav ko kaise train karega!
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