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Fantasy The Revenge (is baar Teri Ga**) [Horror+incest+comedy+adultery+etc]

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:congrats::congrats:for NAwa stORY
 
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Yaha bata du ki yah kahani [ Fantcy+Adultory+Romance+Incest+Magic+more ] catagry me hoga to kisi bhai ko is kahani ke categry se koi bhi pareshani ho to kripya is kahani se dur rahe ya aap in categry ko ignor karate hai to mai kahata hu ki aapako story padhkar fully maja aane wala hai... ……………..

Yah kahani puri tarah se Kalpanik hogi is kahani ke koi bhi part ya phir patr sabhi kahani kalpanik hi honge so please app is kahani ko vastvikata se na jode yaha tak ki is kahani me bataye gaye location bhi kalpanik hi honge yadi kahani ke kisi bhi jagah, patr athawa part ……. Wastvikata se mel hota hai jo ki hoga nahi phir bhi huaa to use matr ek sanyog hi mana jayega………..

Kisi ko yadi kahani se problab hoto apane dvara diye gaye sujhaw apane pass hi rakhe ya phir ek sahi sujhaw de jo ki mujhe bhi padhane me achha lage aur mai apani galatiyo ko bhi sudhar lu…………..


mai yah kahani ko puri tarah se kalpanik hi likhunga aur samjhane ke liye kalpanikta ke next lavel tak bhi le ja sakta hu (Lekin Logic Ke sath) to please aap is kahani ko keval aur keval manoranjan ke liye hi padhe is kahani par bilkul bhi bharosha na kare kyoki kahani kalpani hai na ki real……………….
:congrats: for the story Bhai keep going
 
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The Revenge Story Intro
Komalapur : Nation jise teen bhago me bata gaya hai bahari chhetra (isame 36 state the), middil chhetra (25 state), center (5

state) is nation ke raja tha king vasu den

Ve State jo kahani me important hai :-

  • Vedh state (bahari chhetra state hai) raja ka naam sinchu nir hai (Hero Nanihaal)
  • Saroo state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Rishi Plash
  • Shantipur State (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Pulkit Sendha hai (Hero state)
  • Vimala kunj state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam hai Vedhu Sada hai
Charo state mitr state hai charo me bahut hhi ghanishatata hai………

Komalapur ki Rajdhani thi Basantpur hai………

Shantipur State:-

Sasak : pulkit Sendha yah state komalapur ke Adhinasth hai, pulkit Sendha ke aur do bhai the jiname se ek bhai ki teen ladakiya aur dusare bhai ki do ldakiya thi

Sendha Pariwar :-

Mukhiya : Pulkit Sendha (45) (P)

Patni ka naam :
Shaila sendha (42) (S), Megha Nir (40) (M), Chandani chel (38) (C), Naira nir (38) (N)

Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rudra Sendha (26) [son, mother name – Chandani Chel]
  • Abhinav Sendha (25) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
  • Kvya Sendha (22) [daughter mother name – Chandani chell]
  • Lakhan (Ravi) Sendha (18) (Hero) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
Medha nir aur shaila sendha ke koi bhi santan nahi hai kyoki dono raniyo par shaktiyo se bandh diya gaya hai dusman stats dwara aur chandani chel aur naira nir jo ki megha nir ki chacheri bahan hai se shadi ko gupat rakha gaya tha aur santan prapti ke baad inhe sabake samane laya gaya…………. Chandani chell ke pass kuchh shaktiya hai jo kahani me aage pata chalega ki yah shaktiya kaisi hai isake bare me koi nahi janata hai…………………..



Saroo state :-

Sasak : Rishi plash (komalapur ke adhinast state hai)



Plash pariwar

Mukhiya : Rishi plash (44) ( pulkit sendha friend)

Patni ka naam : Lasika vell (39) (midil kshetr ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rajani plash (24) (daughter)
  • Rasmika plash (22) (daughter)


Vedh state :-

Sashak : Sainchu Nir (62)

Nir pariwar:-

Mukhiya : sainchu nir ( pulkit sendha Father in law)

Patni ka naam : dhol kit (58) (center ki rajkumar, love mairige), Lawanya Nir (60) (saincu sister), sewi siriya (58) (middil Kshetra ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

Megha nir (40) (daughter) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)

  • Chandru Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Prassh Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Khate Nir (39) (Son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Naira nir (38) (daughter) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Hri nir (34) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Sailesh nir (30) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Kher Nir (27) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Sabu Nir (24) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Meena Nir (22) (daughter) (mother name- Dhol kit)


Yah kahani Maine ek dussari kahani se Inspired hai jo ki adult roop me hai lekin yah kahani copyed nahi hai se mane apane anusar likha hai halanki bhav vahi rahega………………. is kahani ko padhane se pahale sabhi readars apane ander ke sare snskar ko pahale Apane Se dur kar de kyoki is kahani me incest bhi hoga to jin logo ko incest story nahi pasand ho ve log pahale hi is kahani se dur ho jaye Nahi to incest scen par comment na kare baki aapaka is kahani me swagat hai ….…………………. Yah kahani puri trah se kalpanik hai is kahani ka kisi bhi jivit ya mrit vyakti se koi lena dena nahi hai agar kahani ke kisi bhag ka sambandh real world se hota hai (jo ki kabhi hoga nahi) to use matr ek sanyog mana jayega………..

Yah kahani hai do bhaiyo ki jinaka janm bhi sath hi hota hai (judawa) lekin dono bhaiyo me bahut hi lagav tha itana ki inaki ma kisi ek ko kisi galati ki saja deti to bhugatate dono hi the kyoki glatiya dono sath me hi karate the (hi hi hi) ………….. dono ka naam tha 1. Aadi, 2. Anadi………………………………………………………….

Dono ke janm ke samay rajguru ne yah bataya tha ki is sansar me inhe koi nahi maar sakata hai sivay ek dusare ke (
aadi anadi ko ya anadi aadi ko maar sakata) hai dusara koi nahi aur in dono me itana prrem tha ki ye dono aapas me kabhi lade hi nahi dekhate hi dekhate dono bade ho jate hai aadi ko yuvraj ghoshit kar diya jata hai……………

Aaj aadi ka vivah hone wala hai ………..lekin aadi khoon se lathpath apane kamere me pada huaa tha usake sar par gahra chot laga huaa tha aur ek chaku usake pith par dhasa huaa tha aadi abhi pichhe dekhane ke liye muda huaa ki usake sar par ek danda laga aur aadi niche gir gaya aur apana sar ghuma kar dekha to usake aakh par khoon ke karan dhundhala dikha aur usaka sar niche gir gaya Aur usaki aakhe Dhire Dhire Band Ho Gayi ……………….. lekin aadi ke maut ke baad ek aur baat huyi sab kuchh badal gaya aandi ek shaitan ban gaya kali shakti ko aarjit karake par vah apana asali chehara saabake samane nahi laya vah logo ke najar me bhagwan ban gaya aur apani shaktiyo se sare logo ke andar se aadi ki yaade mita diya aur khud ka naam parivartan kar liya vasu den aadi ke maut ke baad aandi amar sa ho gaya jise koi nahi maar sakata tha…………….

Lekin kya aanadi ko koi nahi maar sakta tha ya phir aadi ki mrityu nahi huyi ya aadi ki phir se janam hoga aanadi ko marane ke liye janane ke liye padhate rahiye The Revenge (Is Bar teri gand) ……………………………………..



EK Important Notice:-


  • Is kahani me sabhi patr aur ghatnaye kalpanik hai aatah aap sabhi se aanurodh hai ki ise apane jivan me prayog na kare anyatha usaka parinaam svaroop koi bhi aapaka gand maar sakata hai……………….
  • Is kahani ko akele me hi padhe nahi to aapake ghar ke padhe likhe log yadi aapako is kahani ko padhate huye pakad liya to aapake gand me bhusa bhar denge…..
  • Jisako Bhi Agar Is Kahani se koi bhi Pareshani Hai To ve Kahani me Comment Na kare Mujhase Conversation Par baat kare faltu me comment karake mera mood kharab na kare kyoki jab jab mai story me comment me reply karunga to use baar baar padhkar mera faltu me mood kharab ho jayega ha kahani me kahi kuchh samjh na aaya ho to aap kahi bhi puchh sakte hai………..


Attention Please :-


Aagr Aapke Man me koi sawal Hai to Vah Puchh sakte hai ha Agar Kahani me koi Sujhaw dena hai to hamse privetly Baat Kare Faltu me comment na kare kyoki mai comment me aapke sujhaw par dhayan nahi dunga lekin ek request hai Agar aapko Khani Aachhi Lage to please Aap Nice, Wow Etc se 10-12 word Adhik likhe jo kahani ke bare me ho ya fir aap jaha kahani samjh na aaye vah puchh sakte hai lekin agar sujhaw dena hai to comment me nahi balki dusari jagah baat kare………….. lekin nice…… namak word se kuchh aage bhi likhe……………………… Aisa karane se mujhe bhi apani kamiyo ka pata chalega aur mai sudhar bhi sakta hu usake baad aapke comment aur like se mujhe aage likhane me bhi maja aayega nahi to faltu me dimag lagane se sehat hi kharab hoti hai usake baad aap sabhi comment karenge ki kahani beech me hi adhuri chhod diya agar aap sabhi mere sath dete hai to yah kahani mai jarur pura karunga ha yadi mai kuchh kaamo me fas jaunga to kahani thode samay ke liye kahani rukegi lekin free hote hi kahani fir se apane rang me chalane lagegi lekin isame aap sabhi ka saath rahana aawasyak hai nahi to koi baat hi nahi ………………………..
 
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Pura introduction hi bounce ho gya bhaya. Kucch samajh me hi nhi aya. Introduction puzzle ki trahh likhe ho vo bhi ajhibo garib name ke sath. Ab jab introduction hi samajh me nhi aya to story to katai samajh me nhi ane Vali. Esse accha app pehle vali story complete karte... Agar ye running rhi to I'm sure ki vo kahani 100% adhuri rehegi
 
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The Revenge Story Intro
Komalapur : Nation jise teen bhago me bata gaya hai bahari chhetra (isame 36 state the), middil chhetra (25 state), center (5

state) is nation ke raja tha king vasu den

Ve State jo kahani me important hai :-


  • Vedh state (bahari chhetra state hai) raja ka naam sinchu nir hai (Hero Nanihaal)
  • Saroo state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Rishi Plash
  • Shantipur State (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Pulkit Sendha hai (Hero state)
  • Vimala kunj state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam hai Vedhu Sada hai
Charo state mitr state hai charo me bahut hhi ghanishatata hai………

Komalapur ki Rajdhani thi Basantpur hai………

Shantipur State:-

Sasak : pulkit Sendha yah state komalapur ke Adhinasth hai, pulkit Sendha ke aur do bhai the jiname se ek bhai ki teen ladakiya aur dusare bhai ki do ldakiya thi

Sendha Pariwar :-

Mukhiya : Pulkit Sendha (45) (P)

Patni ka naam :
Shaila sendha (42) (S), Megha Nir (40) (M), Chandani chel (38) (C), Naira nir (38) (N)

Son’s & Daughter’s :-


  • Rudra Sendha (26) [son, mother name – Chandani Chel]
  • Abhinav Sendha (25) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
  • Kvya Sendha (22) [daughter mother name – Chandani chell]
  • Lakhan (Ravi) Sendha (18) (Hero) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
Medha nir aur shaila sendha ke koi bhi santan nahi hai kyoki dono raniyo par shaktiyo se bandh diya gaya hai dusman stats dwara aur chandani chel aur naira nir jo ki megha nir ki chacheri bahan hai se shadi ko gupat rakha gaya tha aur santan prapti ke baad inhe sabake samane laya gaya…………. Chandani chell ke pass kuchh shaktiya hai jo kahani me aage pata chalega ki yah shaktiya kaisi hai isake bare me koi nahi janata hai…………………..



Saroo state :-

Sasak : Rishi plash (komalapur ke adhinast state hai)




Plash pariwar

Mukhiya : Rishi plash (44) ( pulkit sendha friend)

Patni ka naam : Lasika vell (39) (midil kshetr ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-


  • Rajani plash (24) (daughter)
  • Rasmika plash (22) (daughter)


Vedh state :-

Sashak : Sainchu Nir (62)


Nir pariwar:-

Mukhiya : sainchu nir ( pulkit sendha Father in law)

Patni ka naam : dhol kit (58) (center ki rajkumar, love mairige), Lawanya Nir (60) (saincu sister), sewi siriya (58) (middil Kshetra ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-
Megha nir (40) (daughter) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)

  • Chandru Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Prassh Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Khate Nir (39) (Son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Naira nir (38) (daughter) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Hri nir (34) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Sailesh nir (30) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Kher Nir (27) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Sabu Nir (24) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Meena Nir (22) (daughter) (mother name- Dhol kit)


Yah kahani Maine ek dussari kahani se Inspired hai jo ki adult roop me hai lekin yah kahani copyed nahi hai se mane apane anusar likha hai halanki bhav vahi rahega………………. is kahani ko padhane se pahale sabhi readars apane ander ke sare snskar ko pahale Apane Se dur kar de kyoki is kahani me incest bhi hoga to jin logo ko incest story nahi pasand ho ve log pahale hi is kahani se dur ho jaye Nahi to incest scen par comment na kare baki aapaka is kahani me swagat hai ….…………………. Yah kahani puri trah se kalpanik hai is kahani ka kisi bhi jivit ya mrit vyakti se koi lena dena nahi hai agar kahani ke kisi bhag ka sambandh real world se hota hai (jo ki kabhi hoga nahi) to use matr ek sanyog mana jayega………..


Yah kahani hai do bhaiyo ki jinaka janm bhi sath hi hota hai (judawa) lekin dono bhaiyo me bahut hi lagav tha itana ki inaki ma kisi ek ko kisi galati ki saja deti to bhugatate dono hi the kyoki glatiya dono sath me hi karate the (hi hi hi) ………….. dono ka naam tha 1. Aadi, 2. Anadi………………………………………………………….

Dono ke janm ke samay rajguru ne yah bataya tha ki is sansar me inhe koi nahi maar sakata hai sivay ek dusare ke (
aadi anadi ko ya anadi aadi ko maar sakata) hai dusara koi nahi aur in dono me itana prrem tha ki ye dono aapas me kabhi lade hi nahi dekhate hi dekhate dono bade ho jate hai aadi ko yuvraj ghoshit kar diya jata hai……………

Aaj aadi ka vivah hone wala hai ………..lekin aadi khoon se lathpath apane kamere me pada huaa tha usake sar par gahra chot laga huaa tha aur ek chaku usake pith par dhasa huaa tha aadi abhi pichhe dekhane ke liye muda huaa ki usake sar par ek danda laga aur aadi niche gir gaya aur apana sar ghuma kar dekha to usake aakh par khoon ke karan dhundhala dikha aur usaka sar niche gir gaya Aur usaki aakhe Dhire Dhire Band Ho Gayi ……………….. lekin aadi ke maut ke baad ek aur baat huyi sab kuchh badal gaya aandi ek shaitan ban gaya kali shakti ko aarjit karake par vah apana asali chehara saabake samane nahi laya vah logo ke najar me bhagwan ban gaya aur apani shaktiyo se sare logo ke andar se aadi ki yaade mita diya aur khud ka naam parivartan kar liya vasu den aadi ke maut ke baad aandi amar sa ho gaya jise koi nahi maar sakata tha…………….


Lekin kya aanadi ko koi nahi maar sakta tha ya phir aadi ki mrityu nahi huyi ya aadi ki phir se janam hoga aanadi ko marane ke liye janane ke liye padhate rahiye The Revenge (Is Bar teri gand) ……………………………………..



EK Important Notice:-

  • Is kahani me sabhi patr aur ghatnaye kalpanik hai aatah aap sabhi se aanurodh hai ki ise apane jivan me prayog na kare anyatha usaka parinaam svaroop koi bhi aapaka gand maar sakata hai……………….
  • Is kahani ko akele me hi padhe nahi to aapake ghar ke padhe likhe log yadi aapako is kahani ko padhate huye pakad liya to aapake gand me bhusa bhar denge…..
  • Jisako Bhi Agar Is Kahani se koi bhi Pareshani Hai To ve Kahani me Comment Na kare Mujhase Conversation Par baat kare faltu me comment karake mera mood kharab na kare kyoki jab jab mai story me comment me reply karunga to use baar baar padhkar mera faltu me mood kharab ho jayega ha kahani me kahi kuchh samjh na aaya ho to aap kahi bhi puchh sakte hai………..


Attention Please :-


Aagr Aapke Man me koi sawal Hai to Vah Puchh sakte hai ha Agar Kahani me koi Sujhaw dena hai to hamse privetly Baat Kare Faltu me comment na kare kyoki mai comment me aapke sujhaw par dhayan nahi dunga lekin ek request hai Agar aapko Khani Aachhi Lage to please Aap Nice, Wow Etc se 10-12 word Adhik likhe jo kahani ke bare me ho ya fir aap jaha kahani samjh na aaye vah puchh sakte hai lekin agar sujhaw dena hai to comment me nahi balki dusari jagah baat kare………….. lekin nice…… namak word se kuchh aage bhi likhe……………………… Aisa karane se mujhe bhi apani kamiyo ka pata chalega aur mai sudhar bhi sakta hu usake baad aapke comment aur like se mujhe aage likhane me bhi maja aayega nahi to faltu me dimag lagane se sehat hi kharab hoti hai usake baad aap sabhi comment karenge ki kahani beech me hi adhuri chhod diya agar aap sabhi mere sath dete hai to yah kahani mai jarur pura karunga ha yadi mai kuchh kaamo me fas jaunga to kahani thode samay ke liye kahani rukegi lekin free hote hi kahani fir se apane rang me chalane lagegi lekin isame aap sabhi ka saath rahana aawasyak hai nahi to koi baat hi nahi ………………………..
Aapne intro sandar diya hai pr ek sath dene pr samajhne me time lagega, Jaise jaise kahani aage badhe or character aate jate unko introduce karte jaiyega bhai...
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Yaha bata du ki yah kahani [ Fantcy+Adultory+Romance+Incest+Magic+more ] catagry me hoga to kisi bhai ko is kahani ke categry se koi bhi pareshani ho to kripya is kahani se dur rahe ya aap in categry ko ignor karate hai to mai kahata hu ki aapako story padhkar fully maja aane wala hai... ……………..

Yah kahani puri tarah se Kalpanik hogi is kahani ke koi bhi part ya phir patr sabhi kahani kalpanik hi honge so please app is kahani ko vastvikata se na jode yaha tak ki is kahani me bataye gaye location bhi kalpanik hi honge yadi kahani ke kisi bhi jagah, patr athawa part ……. Wastvikata se mel hota hai jo ki hoga nahi phir bhi huaa to use matr ek sanyog hi mana jayega………..

Kisi ko yadi kahani se problab hoto apane dvara diye gaye sujhaw apane pass hi rakhe ya phir ek sahi sujhaw de jo ki mujhe bhi padhane me achha lage aur mai apani galatiyo ko bhi sudhar lu…………..


mai yah kahani ko puri tarah se kalpanik hi likhunga aur samjhane ke liye kalpanikta ke next lavel tak bhi le ja sakta hu (Lekin Logic Ke sath) to please aap is kahani ko keval aur keval manoranjan ke liye hi padhe is kahani par bilkul bhi bharosha na kare kyoki kahani kalpani hai na ki real……………….
The Revenge Story Intro
Komalapur : Nation jise teen bhago me bata gaya hai bahari chhetra (isame 36 state the), middil chhetra (25 state), center (5

state) is nation ke raja tha king vasu den

Ve State jo kahani me important hai :-

  • Vedh state (bahari chhetra state hai) raja ka naam sinchu nir hai (Hero Nanihaal)
  • Saroo state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Rishi Plash
  • Shantipur State (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Pulkit Sendha hai (Hero state)
  • Vimala kunj state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam hai Vedhu Sada hai
Charo state mitr state hai charo me bahut hhi ghanishatata hai………

Komalapur ki Rajdhani thi Basantpur hai………

Shantipur State:-

Sasak : pulkit Sendha yah state komalapur ke Adhinasth hai, pulkit Sendha ke aur do bhai the jiname se ek bhai ki teen ladakiya aur dusare bhai ki do ldakiya thi

Sendha Pariwar :-

Mukhiya : Pulkit Sendha (45) (P)

Patni ka naam :
Shaila sendha (42) (S), Megha Nir (40) (M), Chandani chel (38) (C), Naira nir (38) (N)

Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rudra Sendha (26) [son, mother name – Chandani Chel]
  • Abhinav Sendha (25) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
  • Kvya Sendha (22) [daughter mother name – Chandani chell]
  • Lakhan (Ravi) Sendha (18) (Hero) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
Medha nir aur shaila sendha ke koi bhi santan nahi hai kyoki dono raniyo par shaktiyo se bandh diya gaya hai dusman stats dwara aur chandani chel aur naira nir jo ki megha nir ki chacheri bahan hai se shadi ko gupat rakha gaya tha aur santan prapti ke baad inhe sabake samane laya gaya…………. Chandani chell ke pass kuchh shaktiya hai jo kahani me aage pata chalega ki yah shaktiya kaisi hai isake bare me koi nahi janata hai…………………..



Saroo state :-

Sasak : Rishi plash (komalapur ke adhinast state hai)



Plash pariwar

Mukhiya : Rishi plash (44) ( pulkit sendha friend)

Patni ka naam : Lasika vell (39) (midil kshetr ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rajani plash (24) (daughter)
  • Rasmika plash (22) (daughter)


Vedh state :-

Sashak : Sainchu Nir (62)

Nir pariwar:-

Mukhiya : sainchu nir ( pulkit sendha Father in law)

Patni ka naam : dhol kit (58) (center ki rajkumar, love mairige), Lawanya Nir (60) (saincu sister), sewi siriya (58) (middil Kshetra ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

Megha nir (40) (daughter) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)

  • Chandru Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Prassh Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Khate Nir (39) (Son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Naira nir (38) (daughter) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Hri nir (34) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Sailesh nir (30) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Kher Nir (27) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Sabu Nir (24) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Meena Nir (22) (daughter) (mother name- Dhol kit)


Yah kahani Maine ek dussari kahani se Inspired hai jo ki adult roop me hai lekin yah kahani copyed nahi hai se mane apane anusar likha hai halanki bhav vahi rahega………………. is kahani ko padhane se pahale sabhi readars apane ander ke sare snskar ko pahale Apane Se dur kar de kyoki is kahani me incest bhi hoga to jin logo ko incest story nahi pasand ho ve log pahale hi is kahani se dur ho jaye Nahi to incest scen par comment na kare baki aapaka is kahani me swagat hai ….…………………. Yah kahani puri trah se kalpanik hai is kahani ka kisi bhi jivit ya mrit vyakti se koi lena dena nahi hai agar kahani ke kisi bhag ka sambandh real world se hota hai (jo ki kabhi hoga nahi) to use matr ek sanyog mana jayega………..

Yah kahani hai do bhaiyo ki jinaka janm bhi sath hi hota hai (judawa) lekin dono bhaiyo me bahut hi lagav tha itana ki inaki ma kisi ek ko kisi galati ki saja deti to bhugatate dono hi the kyoki glatiya dono sath me hi karate the (hi hi hi) ………….. dono ka naam tha 1. Aadi, 2. Anadi………………………………………………………….

Dono ke janm ke samay rajguru ne yah bataya tha ki is sansar me inhe koi nahi maar sakata hai sivay ek dusare ke (
aadi anadi ko ya anadi aadi ko maar sakata) hai dusara koi nahi aur in dono me itana prrem tha ki ye dono aapas me kabhi lade hi nahi dekhate hi dekhate dono bade ho jate hai aadi ko yuvraj ghoshit kar diya jata hai……………

Aaj aadi ka vivah hone wala hai ………..lekin aadi khoon se lathpath apane kamere me pada huaa tha usake sar par gahra chot laga huaa tha aur ek chaku usake pith par dhasa huaa tha aadi abhi pichhe dekhane ke liye muda huaa ki usake sar par ek danda laga aur aadi niche gir gaya aur apana sar ghuma kar dekha to usake aakh par khoon ke karan dhundhala dikha aur usaka sar niche gir gaya Aur usaki aakhe Dhire Dhire Band Ho Gayi ……………….. lekin aadi ke maut ke baad ek aur baat huyi sab kuchh badal gaya aandi ek shaitan ban gaya kali shakti ko aarjit karake par vah apana asali chehara saabake samane nahi laya vah logo ke najar me bhagwan ban gaya aur apani shaktiyo se sare logo ke andar se aadi ki yaade mita diya aur khud ka naam parivartan kar liya vasu den aadi ke maut ke baad aandi amar sa ho gaya jise koi nahi maar sakata tha…………….

Lekin kya aanadi ko koi nahi maar sakta tha ya phir aadi ki mrityu nahi huyi ya aadi ki phir se janam hoga aanadi ko marane ke liye janane ke liye padhate rahiye The Revenge (Is Bar teri gand) ……………………………………..



EK Important Notice:-


  • Is kahani me sabhi patr aur ghatnaye kalpanik hai aatah aap sabhi se aanurodh hai ki ise apane jivan me prayog na kare anyatha usaka parinaam svaroop koi bhi aapaka gand maar sakata hai……………….
  • Is kahani ko akele me hi padhe nahi to aapake ghar ke padhe likhe log yadi aapako is kahani ko padhate huye pakad liya to aapake gand me bhusa bhar denge…..
  • Jisako Bhi Agar Is Kahani se koi bhi Pareshani Hai To ve Kahani me Comment Na kare Mujhase Conversation Par baat kare faltu me comment karake mera mood kharab na kare kyoki jab jab mai story me comment me reply karunga to use baar baar padhkar mera faltu me mood kharab ho jayega ha kahani me kahi kuchh samjh na aaya ho to aap kahi bhi puchh sakte hai………..


Attention Please :-


Aagr Aapke Man me koi sawal Hai to Vah Puchh sakte hai ha Agar Kahani me koi Sujhaw dena hai to hamse privetly Baat Kare Faltu me comment na kare kyoki mai comment me aapke sujhaw par dhayan nahi dunga lekin ek request hai Agar aapko Khani Aachhi Lage to please Aap Nice, Wow Etc se 10-12 word Adhik likhe jo kahani ke bare me ho ya fir aap jaha kahani samjh na aaye vah puchh sakte hai lekin agar sujhaw dena hai to comment me nahi balki dusari jagah baat kare………….. lekin nice…… namak word se kuchh aage bhi likhe……………………… Aisa karane se mujhe bhi apani kamiyo ka pata chalega aur mai sudhar bhi sakta hu usake baad aapke comment aur like se mujhe aage likhane me bhi maja aayega nahi to faltu me dimag lagane se sehat hi kharab hoti hai usake baad aap sabhi comment karenge ki kahani beech me hi adhuri chhod diya agar aap sabhi mere sath dete hai to yah kahani mai jarur pura karunga ha yadi mai kuchh kaamo me fas jaunga to kahani thode samay ke liye kahani rukegi lekin free hote hi kahani fir se apane rang me chalane lagegi lekin isame aap sabhi ka saath rahana aawasyak hai nahi to koi baat hi nahi ………………………..
The Revenge Story Intro
Komalapur : Nation jise teen bhago me bata gaya hai bahari chhetra (isame 36 state the), middil chhetra (25 state), center (5

state) is nation ke raja tha king vasu den

Ve State jo kahani me important hai :-

  • Vedh state (bahari chhetra state hai) raja ka naam sinchu nir hai (Hero Nanihaal)
  • Saroo state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Rishi Plash
  • Shantipur State (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam Pulkit Sendha hai (Hero state)
  • Vimala kunj state (bahari chhetra state hai) Raja ka naam hai Vedhu Sada hai
Charo state mitr state hai charo me bahut hhi ghanishatata hai………

Komalapur ki Rajdhani thi Basantpur hai………

Shantipur State:-

Sasak : pulkit Sendha yah state komalapur ke Adhinasth hai, pulkit Sendha ke aur do bhai the jiname se ek bhai ki teen ladakiya aur dusare bhai ki do ldakiya thi

Sendha Pariwar :-

Mukhiya : Pulkit Sendha (45) (P)

Patni ka naam :
Shaila sendha (42) (S), Megha Nir (40) (M), Chandani chel (38) (C), Naira nir (38) (N)

Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rudra Sendha (26) [son, mother name – Chandani Chel]
  • Abhinav Sendha (25) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
  • Kvya Sendha (22) [daughter mother name – Chandani chell]
  • Lakhan (Ravi) Sendha (18) (Hero) [son, mother name – Naira Nir]
Medha nir aur shaila sendha ke koi bhi santan nahi hai kyoki dono raniyo par shaktiyo se bandh diya gaya hai dusman stats dwara aur chandani chel aur naira nir jo ki megha nir ki chacheri bahan hai se shadi ko gupat rakha gaya tha aur santan prapti ke baad inhe sabake samane laya gaya…………. Chandani chell ke pass kuchh shaktiya hai jo kahani me aage pata chalega ki yah shaktiya kaisi hai isake bare me koi nahi janata hai…………………..



Saroo state :-

Sasak : Rishi plash (komalapur ke adhinast state hai)



Plash pariwar

Mukhiya : Rishi plash (44) ( pulkit sendha friend)

Patni ka naam : Lasika vell (39) (midil kshetr ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

  • Rajani plash (24) (daughter)
  • Rasmika plash (22) (daughter)


Vedh state :-

Sashak : Sainchu Nir (62)

Nir pariwar:-

Mukhiya : sainchu nir ( pulkit sendha Father in law)

Patni ka naam : dhol kit (58) (center ki rajkumar, love mairige), Lawanya Nir (60) (saincu sister), sewi siriya (58) (middil Kshetra ki rajkumari)


Son’s & Daughter’s :-

Megha nir (40) (daughter) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)

  • Chandru Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Prassh Nir (39) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Khate Nir (39) (Son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Naira nir (38) (daughter) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Hri nir (34) (son) (mother name- Dhol kit)
  • Sailesh nir (30) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Kher Nir (27) (son) (mother name- Lawanya Nir)
  • Sabu Nir (24) (son) (mother name- Sewi siriya)
  • Meena Nir (22) (daughter) (mother name- Dhol kit)


Yah kahani Maine ek dussari kahani se Inspired hai jo ki adult roop me hai lekin yah kahani copyed nahi hai se mane apane anusar likha hai halanki bhav vahi rahega………………. is kahani ko padhane se pahale sabhi readars apane ander ke sare snskar ko pahale Apane Se dur kar de kyoki is kahani me incest bhi hoga to jin logo ko incest story nahi pasand ho ve log pahale hi is kahani se dur ho jaye Nahi to incest scen par comment na kare baki aapaka is kahani me swagat hai ….…………………. Yah kahani puri trah se kalpanik hai is kahani ka kisi bhi jivit ya mrit vyakti se koi lena dena nahi hai agar kahani ke kisi bhag ka sambandh real world se hota hai (jo ki kabhi hoga nahi) to use matr ek sanyog mana jayega………..

Yah kahani hai do bhaiyo ki jinaka janm bhi sath hi hota hai (judawa) lekin dono bhaiyo me bahut hi lagav tha itana ki inaki ma kisi ek ko kisi galati ki saja deti to bhugatate dono hi the kyoki glatiya dono sath me hi karate the (hi hi hi) ………….. dono ka naam tha 1. Aadi, 2. Anadi………………………………………………………….

Dono ke janm ke samay rajguru ne yah bataya tha ki is sansar me inhe koi nahi maar sakata hai sivay ek dusare ke (
aadi anadi ko ya anadi aadi ko maar sakata) hai dusara koi nahi aur in dono me itana prrem tha ki ye dono aapas me kabhi lade hi nahi dekhate hi dekhate dono bade ho jate hai aadi ko yuvraj ghoshit kar diya jata hai……………

Aaj aadi ka vivah hone wala hai ………..lekin aadi khoon se lathpath apane kamere me pada huaa tha usake sar par gahra chot laga huaa tha aur ek chaku usake pith par dhasa huaa tha aadi abhi pichhe dekhane ke liye muda huaa ki usake sar par ek danda laga aur aadi niche gir gaya aur apana sar ghuma kar dekha to usake aakh par khoon ke karan dhundhala dikha aur usaka sar niche gir gaya Aur usaki aakhe Dhire Dhire Band Ho Gayi ……………….. lekin aadi ke maut ke baad ek aur baat huyi sab kuchh badal gaya aandi ek shaitan ban gaya kali shakti ko aarjit karake par vah apana asali chehara saabake samane nahi laya vah logo ke najar me bhagwan ban gaya aur apani shaktiyo se sare logo ke andar se aadi ki yaade mita diya aur khud ka naam parivartan kar liya vasu den aadi ke maut ke baad aandi amar sa ho gaya jise koi nahi maar sakata tha…………….

Lekin kya aanadi ko koi nahi maar sakta tha ya phir aadi ki mrityu nahi huyi ya aadi ki phir se janam hoga aanadi ko marane ke liye janane ke liye padhate rahiye The Revenge (Is Bar teri gand) ……………………………………..



EK Important Notice:-


  • Is kahani me sabhi patr aur ghatnaye kalpanik hai aatah aap sabhi se aanurodh hai ki ise apane jivan me prayog na kare anyatha usaka parinaam svaroop koi bhi aapaka gand maar sakata hai……………….
  • Is kahani ko akele me hi padhe nahi to aapake ghar ke padhe likhe log yadi aapako is kahani ko padhate huye pakad liya to aapake gand me bhusa bhar denge…..
  • Jisako Bhi Agar Is Kahani se koi bhi Pareshani Hai To ve Kahani me Comment Na kare Mujhase Conversation Par baat kare faltu me comment karake mera mood kharab na kare kyoki jab jab mai story me comment me reply karunga to use baar baar padhkar mera faltu me mood kharab ho jayega ha kahani me kahi kuchh samjh na aaya ho to aap kahi bhi puchh sakte hai………..


Attention Please :-


Aagr Aapke Man me koi sawal Hai to Vah Puchh sakte hai ha Agar Kahani me koi Sujhaw dena hai to hamse privetly Baat Kare Faltu me comment na kare kyoki mai comment me aapke sujhaw par dhayan nahi dunga lekin ek request hai Agar aapko Khani Aachhi Lage to please Aap Nice, Wow Etc se 10-12 word Adhik likhe jo kahani ke bare me ho ya fir aap jaha kahani samjh na aaye vah puchh sakte hai lekin agar sujhaw dena hai to comment me nahi balki dusari jagah baat kare………….. lekin nice…… namak word se kuchh aage bhi likhe……………………… Aisa karane se mujhe bhi apani kamiyo ka pata chalega aur mai sudhar bhi sakta hu usake baad aapke comment aur like se mujhe aage likhane me bhi maja aayega nahi to faltu me dimag lagane se sehat hi kharab hoti hai usake baad aap sabhi comment karenge ki kahani beech me hi adhuri chhod diya agar aap sabhi mere sath dete hai to yah kahani mai jarur pura karunga ha yadi mai kuchh kaamo me fas jaunga to kahani thode samay ke liye kahani rukegi lekin free hote hi kahani fir se apane rang me chalane lagegi lekin isame aap sabhi ka saath rahana aawasyak hai nahi to koi baat hi nahi ………………………..

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