Fantasy The Ring of Light

[Mr. Marvel]

Hey guys... i have a question for you guys. Kya ap chahte hain ki main characters ki thodi bahut information first page pe likhun yah fir aise hi theek hai.

 

[Vipul]

Hey guys... i have a question for you guys. Kya ap chahte hain ki main characters ki thodi bahut information first page pe likhun yah fir aise hi theek hai.

Ha likh dijiye

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB starting...

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Ha likh dijiye

Jarur bhai.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

SuperB starting...

Thanks dost.

 

[Ragnarok]

No

Hey guys... i have a question for you guys. Kya ap chahte hain ki main characters ki thodi bahut information first page pe likhun yah fir aise hi theek hai.

Bro, In my opinion...... mat likho (character information) isse story ki look hi kharab hogi .......bro jis type ka abhi tak update raha hai us hisaab se apki writing skill badhaiya hai aap bhi normal writers ki traha mat kro. And dheree -dheree character build hota hai tab hi kisi novel ya story ko padhne mein ek alag maja aata hai Lekin kai writers shuru mein character ki brief knowledge de kar story ka kabada kar dete hai although jo apki choice.... It's just my opinion

 

[Mr. Marvel]

No

Bro, In my opinion...... mat likho (character information) isse story ki look hi kharab hogi .......bro jis type ka abhi tak update raha hai us hisaab se apki writing skill badhaiya hai aap bhi normal writers ki traha mat kro. And dheree -dheree character build hota hai tab hi kisi novel ya story ko padhne mein ek alag maja aata hai Lekin kai writers shuru mein character ki brief knowledge de kar story ka kabada kar dete hai although jo apki choice.... It's just my opinion

Ok bro... you have a point. Thanks for this good advice man.

 

[Naina]

UPDATE 1​

“Good Morning Rosebowl. Main hun apki apni Anjali. Aur ap sun rahe hain Rosebowl Radio. Apki mast subah ko aur mast banane ke liye suniye ek tadkata fadkata gaana.” Radio par koi Gaana play hone laga aur Ayush bhi omelette banate banate uske sath gun guna raha tha.



“Mera Dil Tere liye hi…. Lalalala"



“Ayush kya kar rahe ho beta. Mujhe der ho rahi hai.” Bahar se Madhu ki awaj ayi.



“Aya mom bas do minute.” Ayush ne jawab diya aur fir se gaane ke sath jhumte huye coffee aur omelette banane laga.



Kuchh der baad usne nashta dinning table par laga diya. “Breakfast is ready.” Ayush jor se chilaya aur tabhi uski mom hath me suitcase liye apni shirt sahi karte huye seedion se neeche utri.



“Han bas Ayi… do minute..” Madhu kafi jaldi mein lag rahi thi.



“Are mom ap kion sara din paglon ki tarah bhagti rehti ho. Thoda khud ke liye bhi time nikala karo.” Ayush ne Suitcase Madhu ke hath se lete huye kaha.



“oh shit… main apna laptop toh room mein hi bhool gayi.” Madhu ne mathe par hath maara.



“Are mom ap aram se baithiye aur nashta kijiye main jakar abhi apka laptop le ata hun.” Ayush ne Madhu ko kandhe se pakad kar chair par bithate huye kha.



“Ohhh… thanks Honey.” Madhu ne pyar se Ayush ke gaal pe hath firaya. Ayush ne samne se ek pyari si smile paas ki aur uper ki taraf chal pada.



“Lalalala… mera dil tere liye… hi dhadhke meri janejana…” Ayush abhi bhi wahi gaana gungunate huye ja raha tha. Usne Madhu ke room ka darwaja khola aur idhar udhar dhundhne laga.



“Lalala. Kahan hai tu … kahan chhipa hai re tu…” Ayush ne fir se usi gaane ki dhun gungunayi aur laptop dhundhne laga.



“fuck man... Yeh mom ke room mein sab kitna bikhra pada hai.” Usne idhar udhar bikhre kapdon ko dhyan se dekhte huye kaha. Tabhi uski nazar ek chhote se kaale bag par padi.



“aha... Yeh raha laptop...” Ayush ne bag liya aur wahan se nikal kar niche ki taraf chal pada. Uske pahunchne tak Madhu ne apna breakfast khatam kar liya tha aur woh apne kapde theek karke chair se khadi huyi.



“Thank you baby.” Madhu ne Laptop bag Ayush ke hath se liya aur sath hi apna suitcase bhi utha liya. Usne age badh kar Ayush ke gaal par ek halki si kiss ki aur use bye bol kar wahan se nikal padi.



“Hashhh... mom time se tyar ho gayi. Ab main bhi jaldi se khana khake tyar ho jata hun nahi toh Goli kabhi bhi yahan tapak padega.” Yeh soch kar Usne jaldi se khana khaya aur School ke liye tyar ho gaya.



“Ting Tong" Darwaje ki ghanti baji.



“Lagta hai Goli a gaya.” Ayush ne khud se hi kaha. “Aya... do minute”...woh jor se chila kar bola.



Ayush ne fatafat apna school bag uthaya aur bahar ki taraf chal pada. Usne Darwaja khola “are Goli.” Itna bolte hi woh chup ho gaya kionk wahan koi bhi nahi tha.



“Kamal hai.” Usne hairan hote huye kaha. Idhar udhar dekha par koi nazar nahi aya. Tabhi jameen par ek kagaz ka tukda pada dikhayi diya. Ayush ne jhuk kar use uthaya toh kuchh khaas nahi tha. Bas ek ajeeb sa nishan.







“Ab yeh kya hai?” Ayush ne us Sign ko gaur se dekhte huye kaha. Par kuchh samajh mein nahi aya.



“Ayushhh.”



Ayush ko Goli ki awaj sunayi di. Usne dekha toh wo apne cycle par uske ghar ke samne khada tha. Ayush ko dekhte hi usne hath hilaya.



“han bas aya...” Ayush ne samne se jawab diya. Usne us paper ko fold karke pocket mein daala aur darwaje ko lock laga kar Garage ki taraf chal pada. Usne apni cycle wahan se nikali aur garage band kardi.



“Yaar aja... late ho jayega...” Goli chilate huye bola.



“han han.. bas a hi raha hun.” Ayush ne jaldi se apni cycle street par nikali aur pedal maar kar nikal pada school ki aur.



“kya huya pareshan sa lag raha hai.” Goli ne cycle chalate huye Ayush ki taraf dekh kar kaha.



“Nahi kuchh nahi. Bas mom ki tension ho rahi thi.” Ayush ne age dekhte huye hi jawab diya.



“Tension mat le.... She is a fighter yaar... jab unhone itne saal sab kuchh manage kar liya hai toh age bhi kar hi lengi.” Goli ne kaha.



“han pata hai but aj kal woh kuchh jyada hi kaam karti hain. Mujhe dar hai ki kahin unki tabiyat hi kharab na ho jaye.” Ayush ne chinta mein kaha.



“chill dude... kuchh nahi hoga... Tu hai na unka khyal rakhne ke liye...” Goli ne Ayush ki taraf muskurate huye kaha.



Ayush ne kuchh nahi kaha bas halki si muskaan ke baad woh age dekh kar cycle chalata raha.



“achha tune math ke test ki tyari karli?” Goli ne Ayush se puchha.



“han ki toh hai.... par kuchh pale nahi pada...” Ayush ne jawab diya.



“Tension mat le... asaan hi hai.” Goli bola.



“Han tujhe toh lagega hi.... miss Nandini ka chamcha jo thehra.” Ayush ne Goli ko chhedte huye kaha aur woh samne se ladkion ki tarah Sharma gaya aur Ayush use dekh kar hasne laga.



Dono ne school pahunch kar cycle parking mein apne cycle park kar diye aur School ki taraf jaane lage. Tabhi unke theek samne se bijli ki raftaar se ek bike nikli. Woh bike itni tezi se nikli ki Goli ki toh fat kar hath mein a gayi.



“Awww.... Yeh kya tha.” Goli chaukte huye bola.



“kuchh nahi wahi chutiya hoga... Rocky...” Ayush ne munh banate huye kaha.



“aise kon chalata hai... Agar uske paas bike hai toh aisi harkatein karega?” Goli gusse mein bola.



“chhod na yaar... woh hai hi aisa...” Ayush ne Goli ke kandhe par hath rakh kar use apne sath lekar school ki taraf chal pada.



“Pata nahi hamare paas bike kab ayegi?” Goli ne puchha.



“A jayegi bhai.” Ayush bola.



“Pata nahi kab ayegi.” Goli badbadaya. Woh dono apni class mein chale gaye.




“kaisa raha tera test?” Ayush ne Class se niklte huye Goli se puchha.



“Ekdum badiya.... Tu bata...” Goli ne jawab diya.



“han theek hi ho gaya. Mujhe toh laga tha ki fail hi ho jaunga but jyada mushkil nahi tha.” Ayush ne khus hote huye kaha.



“bola toh tha maine.” Goli ne jawab diya. Tabhi usne dekha ki Ayush use sunne ki bajaye kahin aur hi dekh raha hai. Usne uski ankhon ka peechha kiya toh woh Ritika ko dekh raha tha. Woh apni do sahelion ke sath batein karte huye unki taraf hi a rahi thi.



“Yeh nahi sudhrega" Goli ne sir jhatkate huye kaha. “are bhai use ankhon se hi nighal jayega kya.”



Goli ki baat sunkar Ayush thoda sakpaka sa gaya. Usne aise acting ki jaise use kuchh pata hi na. “kya huya... kiski baat kar raha hai.”



“Achha sale... Tu..” abhi Goli itna bola hi tha ki tabhi kisi ke ladne ki awaj ane lagi. Un dono ne garden ghuma kar dekha toh wo Ritika hi thi.



“Ab isko kya huya.” Goli ne puchha.



“mujhe kya pata... Chal kar dekhte hain.” Ayush itna bolte huye uski taraf chal pada.



Wahan aur bhi students ikathe hone lage aur Ritika jor jor se chilla rahi thi. “tum andhe ho kya jo tumhe itna bada insaan dikhta nahi hai.” Ritika Rocky par jor jor se chilla rahi thi.



“han nahi dikhta... kya kar legi..” Rocky ne ankhein dikhate huye jawab diya.



“Tujhe toh main...” itna bol kar Ritika ne apne hath ki mukki banayi aur seedha Rocky ke naak par de maari. Sab bache jor jor se hasne lage. Unhe haste huye dekh kar Rocky jhalla utha.



“Behanchod.” Usne gaali dete huye Ritika ko dhakka de diya aur woh seedha Ayush se ja takrayi. Ayush ne kisi tarah khud ko aur Ritika... Dono ko sambhal liya.



“thank you.” Ritika ne Ayush ko kaha.



Isse pehle ki Ayush kuchh bol pata Rocky baghte huye unki taraf aya. Jise Ayush ne dekh liya aur usne Ritika ko side kar diya. Itne mein saand ki tarah chilate huye Rocky ne seedha sir Ayush ke ribs mein de mara aur woh peeche ki taraf gir pada. “ahhhhh" uske munh se ek jor ki cheekh nikli.



“Ayush..” Goli chilate huye uski taraf bhaga.



“kya chal raha hai yahan?” Tej awaj mein principal Bansal chilaye aur sabhi ke sabhi bache ek dum shant ho gaye. Rocky toh chup chap wahan se nikal gaya.



Bansal ne Ayush ko jameen par gira dekha “kya huya Ayush?”



Ayush ne jawab dene se pehle nazar ghuma kar Ritika ki taraf dekha aur socha ki agar ladayi ka bataya toh Ritika bhi fas jayegi. “Sir woh main gir gaya tha.” Usne badi safayi se jhuth bolte huye kaha.



“kaise gir gaye... dhyan se chalna chahiye tumhe...jyada chot toh nahi lagi?” Bansal ne apni bhari awaj mein puchha.



“Nahi sir.... i am fine.” Ayush ne jawab diya.



“Tum log yahan kya khade ho... Koi tamasha ho raha hai kya?” Bansal wahan khade bachon par chilate huye wahan se chala gaya aur baaki bache bhi apne apne raste chal pade. Goli ne Ayush ko jameen se khada kiya. Usne apne kapde saaf kiye aur ribs ko halka sa sehlane laga.



“i am really very sorry...”



Ayush ke kaanon mein Ritika ki pyari si awaj padi. Uski tone Rocky ke sath ladte waqt bilkul alag hi thi.



“that’s ok...” Ayush ne muskurate huye jawab diya.



“And thanks for saving me.... By the way I’m Ritika...” usne apna hath age badhate huye kaha. Ayush jaise apna pura dard bhul gaya ho. Usne jhat se apna hath age badha kar handshake kar liya.



“Hi... Ayush... nice to meet you...” Ayush ne bateesi nikalte huye kaha.



“Sala aise natak kar raha hai jaise use janta hi na ho.” Goli apne Man mein badbadaya.



“I know it was not a really good meeting.” Ritika ne muskurate huye kaha toh Ayush bhi halka muskura diya. “i am really sorry once again and how are you now?” Ritika ne puchha.



“don’t worry... main theek hun.” Ayush ne jawab diya.



Ritika ne use apni friends se introduce karwaya toh usne bhi Goli ka parichay karwa diya. Thodi der aur batein karne ke baad woh apne ghar jane ke liye nikal gayi aur Goli aur Ayush bhi bahar ki taraf chal pade.



“Tu kion kab se mujhe ghure ja raha hai?” Ayush ne Goli se puchha.



“kuchh nahi... par tere lachhan theek nahi lag rahe mujhe.” Goli bola.



“kion maine kya kiya... Ab kisi ki help karna koi buri baat hai kya?” Ayush ne safayi di.



“Nahi lekin tu aj kal us ladki ki taraf kuchh jyada hi dhyan de raha hai.” Goli bola.



“han... kuchh bhi... chal jaldi se ghar chal mujhe aur bhi kaam hain..” itna bol kar Ayush tezi se cycle parking ki taraf chal pada.



“han bachu... Kab tak bhagega mujhse?” Goli ne man hi Man socha aur uske peeche peeche wo bhi chal pada.



Ayush jaise hi apne cycle ke paas pahuncha toh use apne cycle ke uper ek paper pada huya dikhayi diya usne use utha kar dekha toh fir se wahi subah wala nishan tha. “yeh sab kon kar raha hai?” Ayush soch mein pad gaya.



“Kya huya aise kya khada hai?” Pichhe se Goli ki awaj ayi. Ayush ne jaldi se woh paper apni pocket mein rakha aur muskurate huya bola “kuchh nahi mote... tera wait kar raha tha...”



Goli ko uska bartaw kuchh ajeeb sa laga par usne usse kuchh puchha nahi aur woh dono wahan se apne ghar ki taraf chal pade.


(Thanks for reading guys. This is the first update of the story. Please give me your thoughts and opinions on the content and writing style. Your comments will help me improve.

Thank you.)

matlab ek baat saaf hai ki aayush hi the choosen one hai.. yani ki wohi hai is story ka hero...
par wohi the choosen one kyun hai?
Kya nata hai hakimo se ya us ring se?
waise shayad aayush aur uski mom akele rehte hai... aur ghar ki saari jimmedari uski mom ne apne kandho pe le li hai...
hmmm..
so abhi school life chal rahi hai hero ki jindagi mein.... kuch khatti mithi ghatanao ke sath... ek jigdi dost goli.. wohi dusri taraf ritika, jisko wo pyar karta hai mann hi mann....
ek villain usi school mein bhi hai rocky naam se.... shayad aage chalke hero aur rocky ke bich jabardast ladayi ho.. jiske chalte rocky mara jaye shayad khaufnaak tarike se
Khair let's see what happens next
Bahot hi dilchasp update tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

 

[Mr. Marvel]

UPDATE 2​

“Yeh akhir hai kya?” Ayush un dono papers ko lekar bed par baitha unka muyana kar raha tha.



“Pehle subah koi door bell baja kar ise chhod gaya fir mere cycle par…. Koi majak kar raha hai kya? Par mere sath majak kon kar sakta hai?” Ayush soch mein pad gaya.



“Goli.... Han wahi hoga….. nahi nahi… wo nahi ho sakta… Pura time mere sath hi toh tha class mein… Aisa kon ho sakta hai jo mere ghar aur School dono jagah pahunch gaya.” Ayush ko kuchh bhi samajh mein nahi a raha tha. Tabhi door bell baji.



“Lagta hai mom a gayi.” Ayush ne wo papers bed ke side wale drawer mein daale aur uth kar darwaja kholne chala gaya.



“Hey baby…” Madhu ne age badh kar Ayush ke mathe par kiss kiya aur Ayush ne uske hath se uska suitcase aur laptop bag liya aur ander a gaya.



“apka din kaisa raha...” Ayush ne paani ka gilas Madhu ko dete huye kaha.



“It was ok... tum batao tumhari presentation kaisi thi?” Madhu ne paani peete huye puchha.



“presentation nahi mom... math test tha..” Ayush haste huye bola but Madhu thoda udaas ho gayi.



“kya huya mom?” Madhu ko aise udaas dekhkar Ayush ne puchha.



“i am sorry honey... main kaam ki wajah se tumhe bilkul bhi time nahi de paati... ulta tumhe mera dhyan rakhna padta hai..” Madhu ne mayus hote huye kaha. Ayush ne Madhu ke hath se paani ka gilas lekar table par rakha aur use chair par bitha kar khud uske samne ghutnon par baith gaya.



“Mom i still remember ki apne kaise mujhe paala hai and I know ki ap kitni mehnat karte ho pura din... agar main apke liye thoda kar dunga toh usse apka pyar kam thode na ho jayega. And i am not a kid anymore .... ap sirf apna khyal rakhiye baaki meri fikar mat kijiye ap...”



Ayush ki batein sunkar Madhu ke ankhon mein ansoo the usne halka sa muskura kar apne ansoo saaf kiye aur Ayush ko utha kar use hug kar liya “i love you Baby...” Madhu ne uske mathe ko chumte huye kaha.



“i love you too mom and plz yeh sab rona dhona band kijiye aur jakar fresh ho jaiye... Fir mil kar dinner karte hain.” Ayush ne Madhu ke gaal kheechte huye bola. Jisse Madhu ki hansi chhut gayi.



“pagal kahin ka... Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki tu meri mom hai.... tu khana laga main ayi das minute mein fresh hokar...” Madhu hanste huye seedian chadhte huye uper chali gayi.



“lalalalala… maan ke dil ka kaha… main kahin ka na raha…” Ayush gaane gungunate huye khana table par lagane laga. Thodi der baad Madhu bhi niche aa gayi.



“Kya baat hai bada khus lag raha hai aj?” Madhu ne Ayush se puchha.



“Are kuchh nahi mom… ap baithiye… khana thanda ho raha hai.” Ayush ne baat taalte huye kaha.



“Yup baby… Vaise khushbu badi achhi a rahi hai.” Madhu boli.



“thanks mom…” Ayush ne jawab diya.



“Chal jaldi se khana shuru karte hain… wait nahi hota ab…” Madhu ne Ayush ki khana proshne mein help ki. Fir dono aram se khana khane lage. Ayush baar baar kuchh yaad karke khus huye ja raha tha. Madhu ne use notice kiya.



“lagta hai kuchh toh baat hai jo itna khus ho raha hai aj… Achha hi hai… haste huye achha lagta hai…” Madhu ne man hi man socha aur halka sa muskura di.




“Thak thak" “thak thak" darwaja khatkane ki awaj ayi.



“Are yaar Is waqt kon hai ab?” Ayush ankhein malte huye bistar se khada huya.



“ek minute… Yeh darwaja khatkane ki awaj meri balkani se ayi hai kya?” Ayush ne thoda samjhne ki try ki. “lekin behanchod koi meri balkani tak kaise pahunch gaya?”



Ayush buri tarah se ghabra gaya. Usne jaldi se kamre ki light on ki aur bed ki side mein pada guldaan utha kar balkani ki taraf chal pada. Usne ek baar gehri saans li aur uper wale ka naam lekar darwaja khol diya.



Usne apna guldaan uper uthaya par balkani mein koi bhi nahi tha. Bas fir se darwaje par wahi kagaz aur us par wahi ajeeb sa nishan.



“Kya yaar… Ab yeh kya bakchodi hai. Sala itni raat ko bhi kisi ne iske liye uthaya aur behanchod yeh konsa bander hai jo pehle maale par bina seedi ke chadh gaya.” Ayush ne neeche ki taraf dekhte huye kaha. Usne woh kagaz ka tukda liya aur Darwaja band karke wapis ander a gaya.



“Akhir yeh hai kya... Yeh sign jarur koi hint yah kuchh paheli bagera hoga.... par yeh sab kar kon raha hai.... Sala kab ata hai kab jata hai kuchh samajh hi nahi a raha....” Ayush ne woh teeno paper eksath bed par failaye aur unhein dhyan se dekhne laga.



“yeh kya hai yaar... Ek bada sa circle usmein yeh ajeeb se triangle bane huye hain aur yeh ajeeb si bhasha mein kuchh shabad likhe huye hain... sabse badi baat yeh chahta kya hai mujhse.... kuchh samajh mein nahi a raha....” Ayush kuchh der aise hi baitha sochta raha. Time dekha toh raat ke 1 bajne wale the.



“chhod yaar abhi so hi jata hun... subah dekhi jayegi.... Goli se baat karta hun kal ko...” Ayush ne woh kagaz wapis se drawer mein rakhe aur light band karke bed par late gaya.




“Good Morning Rosebowl. Main hun apki apni Anjali. Aur ap sun rahe hain Rosebowl Radio. Apki mast subah ko aur mast banane ke liye suniye ek tadkata fadkata gaana.”



Roz ki tarah Ayush Radio chala kar nashta bana raha tha par uska dhyan gaane taraf tha hi nahi.



“yaar akhir wo hai kon… jisne meri neend haraam kar rakhi hai… yaar jitni shiddat se wo meri lene pe tula hai usse ek baat toh saaf hai ki koi mazak toh nahi kar raha… Raat ke 1 Baje kisko Pamphlet baantne ke daure padte hain…” Ayush ne man hi man socha. “Agar mere ko ek baar mil jaye na toh main….”



“babyyy…” Pichhe se Madhu ke chilane ki awaj ayi.



“Oh Shit yeh toh pura jal gaya….” Ayush ne chule par pade nashte ka haal dekha toh usmein se dhuyan nikle ja raha tha. Usne jaldi se gas band kiya aur pan ko utaar kar side mein rakh diya.



“Kya huya Ayush… tumhara dhyan kahan tha beta?” Madhu ne puchha.



“I don’t know mom… Pata hi nahi chala… ap bas do minute rukiye main apke liye sandwich bana deta hun…” Ayush ne refrigerator ka door kholte huye kaha.



“that’s ok Honey…. I am getting late… main bahar se kha lungi… aur tum bhi late ho jaoge…” Madhu ne kaha.



“Ok… are you Sure ki ap bahar se kha lengi?” Ayush ne puchha.



“are han beta… sach mein kha lungi…” Madhu ne muskurate huye kaha aur wo Ayush ko mathe par kiss karke ghar se chali gayi.



“shit yaar… Yeh sign ke chakkar mein toh mera nashta bhi jal gaya…chalo pehle toh ise hi saaf kar deta hun…” Ayush ne Refrigerator band kiya aur pan utha kar Sink mein le gaya.



“hashhh… yeh toh ho gaya ab bas main fresh ho jata hun fir tab tak Goli bhi a jayega…” Ayush uper apne room ki taraf jate huye bola.



“Ting Tong” Darwaje ki ghanti baji.



“Lagta hai Goli a gaya… yah fir wahi Ninja Postman na ho…” Ayush hanste huye khud se bola aur darwaja kholne chala gaya.



“Abe sale tu tyar nahi huya abhi tak?” Goli ne Ayush ko dekh kar kaha.



“Are nahi yaar... aur tu ander a... Mujhe tujhse kuchh baat karni hai.” Ayush Ne Goli ko ander kheench kar darwaja band kar diya.



“kya huya tujhe... Itna pareshan kion lag raha hai... aur aj tujhe school nahi jana kya??” Goli ne sawalon ki barsaat karte huye kaha.



“Abe chodulaal... zara saans toh lele... Tu uper kamre mein chal tujhe sab batata hun...” Ayush bola.



“Bhai kamre mein jaane ka time nahi hai... Tu jaldi se tyar hoja humein school jana hai..” Goli bola.



“Abe bhaad mein jaye school... Yahan meri raaton ki neend gayab hai aur tujhe school jane ki padi hai...” Ayush chidhte huye bola..



“Par huya...” Goli itna hi bola tha ki Ayush ne uska hath pakda aur khinchte huye uper jane laga...



“Abe ata hun yaar... Tu toh serious hi ho gaya...” Goli Ayush se bola par woh toh seedha Room mein hi jakar ruka. Usne bina kuchh bole woh teeno paper Drawer se nikale aur Apne study table par rakh diye. Goli ne ek baar un papers ki taraf dekha aur fir Ayush ki shakal par jo ki ekdum serious huyi padi thi.



“kya hai yeh...” Goli ne puchha.



“Wahi toh main janna chahta hun ki hai kya yeh... kal se koi meri lene pe tula hai... Pehle koi doorbell baja ka mere darwaje par chhod gaya fir Dopehar mein school parking mein mere cycle par... chal yeh sab theek tha par bhai sahab raat ko 1 baje meri balkani mein pahunch gaye... bhai pata nahi konsa maal funk ke baitha hai koi...” Ayush ne puri baat batayi.



“Toh tune kaha ki raat ko koi teri balkani mein yeh kagaz chhod kar gaya...” Goli ne Hairani se puchha.



“han... sahi suna tune...” Ayush bola.



“behanchod yeh kaise ho sakta hai... Teri balkani mein bahar se koi kaise pehle maale par a sakta hai?” Goli chaukte huye bola.



“Abe yaar tu kya yahan par time waste kar raha hai... Yeh Jo bhi hai... kuchh palle nahi pad raha... Tu pehle yeh dekh ki yeh kya hai is paper par...” Ayush ne us Sign ki taraf ishara karte huye kaha.



Goli ne unmein se ek paper uthaya aur use dhyan se dekha. Fir baari baari sabko check kiya...



“haha" Goli achanak se hasa.



“kya huya?” Ayush ne puchha.



“kuchh nahi... soch raha tha ki kitna chutiya hai koi... Ek paper baar dene ke liye kitni ghis raha hai apni...” Goli hanste huye bola.



“Oye Chamanlaal ke chodu... Tu kya yahan yeh gande joke sunane aya hai... Tu ek kaam kar tu school ja main khud hi kar lunga...” Ayush ne uske hath se paper chhinne ki try ki.



“Abe rukja... Mujhe pata hai ki yeh kya hai...” Goli us paper ko jor se pakadte huye bola.



“Achha... chal bata kya bawaseer hai yeh?” Ayush ne puchha.



“matlab mujhe exactly nahi pata but itna pata hai ki yeh Sign The Order of Ethan ka hai.” Goli ne kaha.



“Kya... konsa order... aur yeh hai kya?” Ayush ko kuchh samajh mein nahi aya.



“achha tu do minute mujhe apna laptop de main tujhe dikhata hun.” Goli ne apna backpack side mein rakhte huye bola.



“Ok... Yeh le..” Ayush ne use apna Laptop lakar de diya. Goli ne use study table par rakha aur chair par baith gya. Usne laptop mein log in karke internet par The Order of ETHAN search kiya. Wahan bahut se articles ke sath us Sign ke photos khul gaye. Ayush Goli ki chair ke peeche khada sab dekh raha tha but use kuchh samajh mein nahi a raha tha.



“Yeh sab kya hai?” Ayush ne puchha.



“Toh actually maine ek baar ek book padi thi The Secrets of the Galmor... Basically Writer ke according Galmor ek old human civilisation thi jo magic aur Divine Brilliance mein maante the. Aur unhone hi apni ek Secret Community banai thi The Order of ETHAN. Uske writer ne is bare mein jyada kuchh toh nahi bataya but yeh jarur likha tha ki woh log kuch research wagera karte the.” Goli ne Ayush ko pura explain kiya.



“Ek minute... Toh basically tu kehna chahta hai ki koi mujhe kisi fictional organisation ke fictional Symbol ke parche baant ta fir raha hai... Yaar tu baat ko suljhane ki jagah aur uljha raha hai..” Ayush gusse mein bola.



“han ek baat aur ki us Writer ne yeh bhi likha tha ki The Order of ETHAN abhi bhi exist karta hai aur kahin na kahin se chhip kar operate karta hai.” Goli ne baat ko age badhaya.



“Achha theek hai... main samajh gaya... par is sab se mera kya lena dena?” Ayush jor se chilaya.



“Ab pata nahi us Writer ne itna hi likha tha... Maine uska aur koi article dhundhne ki bahut kosish ki taki isse age ki story padhne ko mile but baad mein pata chala ki yeh wala article likhne ke 2 din baad hi woh achanak gayab ho gaya tha aur aj tak nahi mila...” Goli ne thoda sanjida hote huye kaha.



“Sale tu mujhe abhi dara raha hai... kahin tu hi toh koi ganda majak nahi kar raha...” Ayush ne Goli se puchha.



“kya yaar... mummy kasam maine kuchh nahi kiya... aur yaar tujhe lagta hai ki main balkani mein bina seedi ke chadh jaunga...” Goli ne apne pet ki aur ishara karte huye kaha.



“Sorry yaar... bas main thoda pareshan hun...” Ayush bola.



“koi baat nahi... tu ek kaam kar... Tu fresh hoja... hum school jakar library mein check karte hain agar kuchh mila toh...” Goli ne kaha.



“Han theek hai... Tu yahi baith... main do minute mein aya... Fir dekhte hain ki yeh hai Kya... The Order of ETHAN...” Itna bol kar Ayush Washroom mein chala gaya aur Goli wahin baitha Internet par kuchh dhundhne ki kosish karta raha.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

matlab ek baat saaf hai ki aayush hi the choosen one hai.. yani ki wohi hai is story ka hero...
par wohi the choosen one kyun hai?
Kya nata hai hakimo se ya us ring se?
waise shayad aayush aur uski mom akele rehte hai... aur ghar ki saari jimmedari uski mom ne apne kandho pe le li hai...
hmmm..
so abhi school life chal rahi hai hero ki jindagi mein.... kuch khatti mithi ghatanao ke sath... ek jigdi dost goli.. wohi dusri taraf ritika, jisko wo pyar karta hai mann hi mann....
ek villain usi school mein bhi hai rocky naam se.... shayad aage chalke hero aur rocky ke bich jabardast ladayi ho.. jiske chalte rocky mara jaye shayad khaufnaak tarike se
Khair let's see what happens next
Bahot hi dilchasp update tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab

Thanks once again for the "Writer Sahab". And happy to see that you are liking it. Baki lagta hai apko logon ko "Khaufnaak" tarike se marwane ka bahut shauk hai. Next update a chuka hai. Apke review ka intezar rahega.