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Fantasy The Rise of Legend

Rocks_Ankur

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Introduction and Synopsis posted......

Characters details will be added in this Introduction whenever the character will be added in the story and will be used in the story throughout.

Characters with the limited role will be introduce in the story itself.
 
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andyking302

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Phase – I

Chapter – 1 : Memories of a Pill Sovereign

Update - 1

"main kaun hoon? main hoon... Aaryan!"

“I look down on the very heavens, the arrogant nine heavens’ peerless Pill Sovereign - Aaryan?

...main ek aisa vyakti hoon jo har kisee ke dvaara dhokha diya jaata hai aur dhamakaaya jaata hai, ek spineless, bekaar ka cripple jo cultivation karane mein asamarth hai - Aaryan?"

uske man mein bhram ki sthiti thi aur saath hi usake poore shareer mein tej dard hone laga. Aaryan apane dimaag ke chaotic vichaaron ko rokane mein asamarth tha aur karaahane laga.

"Aaryan, aap jaag gaye hain? bhagavaan ka shukr hai, tumhaari maa tumhare baare mein bhut chintit thi! Agar aap apani taakat ka bakhaan karana chahate hain, to theek hai, lekin aapako un logon ke saath duel kyon karana pada? ”

Aaryan ke kaan ke paas ek dayaalu aur komal aavaaj sunaee di.

Wo aavaaj khushee aur sukoon se bhari hui thi, lekin ant mein vah bhi bhaavana se grasat ho gayi.

Aaryan ne dheere se apanee aankhen kholee. Uski dhundhali drshti dheere-dheere spasht hoti gayi aur ek stree ka chehara uske saamane prakat hua. Mahila apane 30 ki umar ki dikhai de rahi thi aur wo behad khoobasoorat thi.

Haalanki, usaki aankhon ke kone par kuch gahari jhurriyaan thi jo usake kam umar se mel nahin khaati thi.

Vartamaan mein, yah mahila Aaryan ko pyaar se bhari aankhon se dekh rahi thi, jisase Aaryan ke dil mein garmaahat ka ehasaas ho raha tha.

"Child, you scared your mom to the death." mahila ke bolate hi usaki aankhen aur bhi laal ho gayi aur uske aansoo bahane lage.

"maa???" Aaryan ne is jaane-pahachane lekin anjan chehare ki or dekha. Usne sandeh ke saath yah ek shabd kaha, usaka chehara asamanjas se bhar gaya.

"bache, apani maa ko mat darao! kya tum mujhe nahin pahachanate?" mahila ka chehara turant ghabara gaya.

Isi dauraan mahila ke bagal mein ek bujurg vyakti dikhai diya. Unhonne Aaryan ki jaanch ki aur unhone kaha, " Aaryan ko usake sir ke pichhale hisse mein chot lagi thi, isliye yah sambhav hai ki use apani yaadon ko theek karane ke liye thoda aaraam karne ki aavashyakata hai. Aap jayada chinta mat kijiye; abhi-abhi maine Young Master Aaryan ko kuch medicine di hai. Medicinal Energy abhi bhi poori tarah se dissolve nahin hui hai, isliye Young Master Aaryan ko thodi der aaraam karane de."

Radha (Aaryan Mother) ne chinta se Aaryan ko dekha. Aniachha se, usne apana sir hilaaya aur kamare se bahar us bujurg vyakti ke saath bahar aa gyi.

Aaryan ne door se hi bujurg vyakti ko apni maa ko dheere se salaah dete hue suna, "shrimati, ye ek fact hai ki Young Master Aaryan pahale se hi aseem roop se bhaagyashaali hai ki wo apne jeevan ke saath lautane mein kaamayaab rahe, abhi k liye unke saath jyada jabaradasti aap mat kijiye, anayatha parinam kuch bhi ho skta hai."

Radha ne kaampate hue javaab diya, “Master alchemist iska matalab hai ki mera beta..."

bujurg vyakti, jise Master alchemist kaha jaata tha, ne aah bhari, "young master ke mastishk ko ek teevr jhataka laga hai. sach kahoon to hosh mein aane k liye saksham hona pahale se hi behad mushkil tha, wo to achaa hai ki Young master Aryan bhut bhaagyashaali hai; haalaanki, nateeje nishchit roop se abhi bhi bahut gambheer honge. Iss sthiti mein unaki yaadaasht khone ki possibility bhut jyada hai..."

Dono log dheere-dheere aage aur dur chale gaye, isliye Aaryan ab unhe spasht roop se nahin sun sakata tha... lekin jo use mushkil se thoda bhut sunai de raha tha wo thi apni maa ke rone ki aavaaj.

Aaryan oopar ki chhat par ektak dekhta rha kyonki use apne poore shareer mein, vishesh roop se uske sir ke pichale hisse mein, jo sooje hu tha, gambheer dard mahasoos kiya.

Abhi kya hua? main Aaryan hoon, aur isliye Mrs. Radha meri maa hain. Lekin jab mai unka blood child hu to mujhe aisi aparichit anubhooti kaise ho sakatee hai?

aur ye saare bhramit karne vali yaaden, kahan se aayi?

mere paas yaadein hain ki main ek abhimaanee, atyadhik shaktishaali vyakti hoon … pill soverrgin Aaryan? Trash Aaryan?

Asli mein kaun si hai? kya main pill soveregin ka punarjanm hoon? ya main pill Soveregin ki aatma ka ek kamajor sa hissa hu jo ab ek trash weakling hu?

Aakhir kon hu mai………………………
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई
 

Xabhi

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Introduction:

kya vah ek pill Soveregin ka punarjanm hai? ya vah aatmaon ka sangam hai? ek yuva jiska spirit root, spirit blood aur spirit bone sabi chori ho gaye the - Aaryan ko divine pill refining arts aur ek bhut hi mysterious cultivation technique jiska naam tha Nine star Hegemon Body Art prr puri traha se nirbhar rehna hoga jisse wo apne jivan mein chaye huye kohre ki paraton ko vibhaajit aur svarg ko hila dene wali pahelee ko sulajha kar such se reh sake.

svarg aur prithvee uski mutthee mein hain kyonki vah brahmaand ke madhyam se kadam rakhata hai, sabhi prakaar ki sundar mahilaon se milata hai, aur shaitaanon, raakshason aur devataon ka daman karta hai.

Legends kehte hai ki jab Aaryan aata hai, to bhoomi dahaadati hai aur svarg chillaata hai, bhoot sisakate hain aur devata rote hain.

Synopsis:

Aaryan, ek crippled yuva jo cultivation nahin kar sakata hai, use lagaataar uske saathi aur uske kul ke uttaraadhikaariyon dvaara lajjit aur dhamakaaya jaata hai.

Ek bhut buri pitaee ke baad, vah uthata hai aur mahasoos karata hai ki ek pill sovereign ki aatma kisi tarah uske saath vileen ho gayi hai, jisase use kuch atirikt yaadein mil gayi hain. un yaadon ke bheetar mysterious cultivation technique jiska naam tha Nine star Hegemon Body Art hai jise vah bhi prashikshit kar sakata hai, lekin jiske rahasy aur utpatti abhi bhi uske liye ek rahasy hai.

Apani unnat pravrtti par bharosa karate hue jaise hi vah cultivation karna shuru karata hai, use pata chalata hai ki Phoenix Cry Empire ke bheetar ek badi saajish chal rahi hai;

Ek saajish jismein uske pita, royal parivaar ke sadasya aur yahaan tak ki svayam Emperor bhi shaamil the. Apane aas-paas ke rahasyon ko suljhane ke lie, use apni nayi alchemy techniques aur shaktishali lekin chaunkane vali Nine Star Hegemon Body Art par bharosa karana chahiye.

Anaginat shatru use rokate hain kyonki vah cultivation world ke shikhar par chadhane ka prayaas karata hai. Kismat ne use keval ek shataranj ka tukada hone ke lie niyat kiya, lekin vah svarg ki ichchha ke aage nahin jhukega ye uska apna faisla hai.
Congrats bro for the story Sandar intro diya hai Apne ek ladka Jise sb state hai dutkarte hai Vo divyang hai Sayad iske liye use kuchh bahut hi jabarjast milta hai pill sovereign Jo apne sath kuchh bahut hi umdha tecnik (yado) ko apne sath lati hai aaryan us tecnik ko practice karta hai to use pta chalta hai ki yha jo dikh rha hai Vo hai nhi or jo hai Vo dikh nhi rha Yani bahut se sadyantra Jisme uske pita se lekr rular tk sb isme samil hai Aryan abhi itna takatvar nhi hua ki unko rok ske pr vah jald hi ho jayega... Superb bhai sandar
 

Naik

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congratulations for starting this thread ankur bhai...

nice intro though....

aaryan ek apang... jisse sabne dutkara.. aaspaas ke log ho ya phir uske khud ke pariwar waale... pil sovereign shayad koi bari shakti ya shaktion mein uchh koti... iske sareer mein vaas karti hain.. lekin usne iska hi sareer kyun chuna shayad aage pata chale...

kivdantio ke anusar aaryan ek bahut hi shaktishaali aatma ban jaati hain jisse shab khauf khaate hain chahe wo narakwaasi ho ya swargvaasi... kya aaryan ek buri soul hain ya phir wo bas unko kast pahunchati hain jo aapne raste se bhatakte hain...

abhi ke liye uss pill sovereign ke aane se kuchh yaado ka khajana mil gaya... un yaado mein se nine star technique ek utkrist star kee vidhi hain jo abhi ke niwasi iska raaz nahin jante.. uska pratham prabhaw se usse kuchh chauka deni waali jaankari mili ek saajish kee... lekin usme sabhi shaamil hain jitne hi shaktishaali log... badshah se le kar uske pita tak... lekin abhi wo iss kaabil nahin hain kee rok paye...

lekin jab hoga tab shabko jawab dena hoga uske utpeeran ka un shadyantro ke liye...

nice update....
Bahot behtareen shaandaar Intro
 

Xabhi

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Phase – I

Chapter – 1 : Memories of a Pill Sovereign

Update - 1

"main kaun hoon? main hoon... Aaryan!"

“I look down on the very heavens, the arrogant nine heavens’ peerless Pill Sovereign - Aaryan?

...main ek aisa vyakti hoon jo har kisee ke dvaara dhokha diya jaata hai aur dhamakaaya jaata hai, ek spineless, bekaar ka cripple jo cultivation karane mein asamarth hai - Aaryan?"

uske man mein bhram ki sthiti thi aur saath hi usake poore shareer mein tej dard hone laga. Aaryan apane dimaag ke chaotic vichaaron ko rokane mein asamarth tha aur karaahane laga.

"Aaryan, aap jaag gaye hain? bhagavaan ka shukr hai, tumhaari maa tumhare baare mein bhut chintit thi! Agar aap apani taakat ka bakhaan karana chahate hain, to theek hai, lekin aapako un logon ke saath duel kyon karana pada? ”

Aaryan ke kaan ke paas ek dayaalu aur komal aavaaj sunaee di.

Wo aavaaj khushee aur sukoon se bhari hui thi, lekin ant mein vah bhi bhaavana se grasat ho gayi.

Aaryan ne dheere se apanee aankhen kholee. Uski dhundhali drshti dheere-dheere spasht hoti gayi aur ek stree ka chehara uske saamane prakat hua. Mahila apane 30 ki umar ki dikhai de rahi thi aur wo behad khoobasoorat thi.

Haalanki, usaki aankhon ke kone par kuch gahari jhurriyaan thi jo usake kam umar se mel nahin khaati thi.

Vartamaan mein, yah mahila Aaryan ko pyaar se bhari aankhon se dekh rahi thi, jisase Aaryan ke dil mein garmaahat ka ehasaas ho raha tha.

"Child, you scared your mom to the death." mahila ke bolate hi usaki aankhen aur bhi laal ho gayi aur uske aansoo bahane lage.

"maa???" Aaryan ne is jaane-pahachane lekin anjan chehare ki or dekha. Usne sandeh ke saath yah ek shabd kaha, usaka chehara asamanjas se bhar gaya.

"bache, apani maa ko mat darao! kya tum mujhe nahin pahachanate?" mahila ka chehara turant ghabara gaya.

Isi dauraan mahila ke bagal mein ek bujurg vyakti dikhai diya. Unhonne Aaryan ki jaanch ki aur unhone kaha, " Aaryan ko usake sir ke pichhale hisse mein chot lagi thi, isliye yah sambhav hai ki use apani yaadon ko theek karane ke liye thoda aaraam karne ki aavashyakata hai. Aap jayada chinta mat kijiye; abhi-abhi maine Young Master Aaryan ko kuch medicine di hai. Medicinal Energy abhi bhi poori tarah se dissolve nahin hui hai, isliye Young Master Aaryan ko thodi der aaraam karane de."

Radha (Aaryan Mother) ne chinta se Aaryan ko dekha. Aniachha se, usne apana sir hilaaya aur kamare se bahar us bujurg vyakti ke saath bahar aa gyi.

Aaryan ne door se hi bujurg vyakti ko apni maa ko dheere se salaah dete hue suna, "shrimati, ye ek fact hai ki Young Master Aaryan pahale se hi aseem roop se bhaagyashaali hai ki wo apne jeevan ke saath lautane mein kaamayaab rahe, abhi k liye unke saath jyada jabaradasti aap mat kijiye, anayatha parinam kuch bhi ho skta hai."

Radha ne kaampate hue javaab diya, “Master alchemist iska matalab hai ki mera beta..."

bujurg vyakti, jise Master alchemist kaha jaata tha, ne aah bhari, "young master ke mastishk ko ek teevr jhataka laga hai. sach kahoon to hosh mein aane k liye saksham hona pahale se hi behad mushkil tha, wo to achaa hai ki Young master Aryan bhut bhaagyashaali hai; haalaanki, nateeje nishchit roop se abhi bhi bahut gambheer honge. Iss sthiti mein unaki yaadaasht khone ki possibility bhut jyada hai..."

Dono log dheere-dheere aage aur dur chale gaye, isliye Aaryan ab unhe spasht roop se nahin sun sakata tha... lekin jo use mushkil se thoda bhut sunai de raha tha wo thi apni maa ke rone ki aavaaj.

Aaryan oopar ki chhat par ektak dekhta rha kyonki use apne poore shareer mein, vishesh roop se uske sir ke pichale hisse mein, jo sooje hu tha, gambheer dard mahasoos kiya.

Abhi kya hua? main Aaryan hoon, aur isliye Mrs. Radha meri maa hain. Lekin jab mai unka blood child hu to mujhe aisi aparichit anubhooti kaise ho sakatee hai?

aur ye saare bhramit karne vali yaaden, kahan se aayi?

mere paas yaadein hain ki main ek abhimaanee, atyadhik shaktishaali vyakti hoon … pill soverrgin Aaryan? Trash Aaryan?

Asli mein kaun si hai? kya main pill soveregin ka punarjanm hoon? ya main pill Soveregin ki aatma ka ek kamajor sa hissa hu jo ab ek trash weakling hu?

Aakhir kon hu mai………………………

To Aryan ko hosh aata hai apne Aapko ek bister me pata hai uske bagal me uski ma radha use pukar rhi thi vah unhe dekhta hai to use pahchanne me thoda kathinai hoti hai use apni yado me kisi or ki yade bhi mili hui lagti hai Tabhi kamre me ek Dr aata hai (vaidh) vo Uski ma radha ko kuchh bate btata hai Jise sun vo rone lagti hai vhi Aryan bhi apne un yado ke bare me sochne lagta hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

Naik

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Phase – I

Chapter – 1 : Memories of a Pill Sovereign

Update - 1

"main kaun hoon? main hoon... Aaryan!"

“I look down on the very heavens, the arrogant nine heavens’ peerless Pill Sovereign - Aaryan?

...main ek aisa vyakti hoon jo har kisee ke dvaara dhokha diya jaata hai aur dhamakaaya jaata hai, ek spineless, bekaar ka cripple jo cultivation karane mein asamarth hai - Aaryan?"

uske man mein bhram ki sthiti thi aur saath hi usake poore shareer mein tej dard hone laga. Aaryan apane dimaag ke chaotic vichaaron ko rokane mein asamarth tha aur karaahane laga.

"Aaryan, aap jaag gaye hain? bhagavaan ka shukr hai, tumhaari maa tumhare baare mein bhut chintit thi! Agar aap apani taakat ka bakhaan karana chahate hain, to theek hai, lekin aapako un logon ke saath duel kyon karana pada? ”

Aaryan ke kaan ke paas ek dayaalu aur komal aavaaj sunaee di.

Wo aavaaj khushee aur sukoon se bhari hui thi, lekin ant mein vah bhi bhaavana se grasat ho gayi.

Aaryan ne dheere se apanee aankhen kholee. Uski dhundhali drshti dheere-dheere spasht hoti gayi aur ek stree ka chehara uske saamane prakat hua. Mahila apane 30 ki umar ki dikhai de rahi thi aur wo behad khoobasoorat thi.

Haalanki, usaki aankhon ke kone par kuch gahari jhurriyaan thi jo usake kam umar se mel nahin khaati thi.

Vartamaan mein, yah mahila Aaryan ko pyaar se bhari aankhon se dekh rahi thi, jisase Aaryan ke dil mein garmaahat ka ehasaas ho raha tha.

"Child, you scared your mom to the death." mahila ke bolate hi usaki aankhen aur bhi laal ho gayi aur uske aansoo bahane lage.

"maa???" Aaryan ne is jaane-pahachane lekin anjan chehare ki or dekha. Usne sandeh ke saath yah ek shabd kaha, usaka chehara asamanjas se bhar gaya.

"bache, apani maa ko mat darao! kya tum mujhe nahin pahachanate?" mahila ka chehara turant ghabara gaya.

Isi dauraan mahila ke bagal mein ek bujurg vyakti dikhai diya. Unhonne Aaryan ki jaanch ki aur unhone kaha, " Aaryan ko usake sir ke pichhale hisse mein chot lagi thi, isliye yah sambhav hai ki use apani yaadon ko theek karane ke liye thoda aaraam karne ki aavashyakata hai. Aap jayada chinta mat kijiye; abhi-abhi maine Young Master Aaryan ko kuch medicine di hai. Medicinal Energy abhi bhi poori tarah se dissolve nahin hui hai, isliye Young Master Aaryan ko thodi der aaraam karane de."

Radha (Aaryan Mother) ne chinta se Aaryan ko dekha. Aniachha se, usne apana sir hilaaya aur kamare se bahar us bujurg vyakti ke saath bahar aa gyi.

Aaryan ne door se hi bujurg vyakti ko apni maa ko dheere se salaah dete hue suna, "shrimati, ye ek fact hai ki Young Master Aaryan pahale se hi aseem roop se bhaagyashaali hai ki wo apne jeevan ke saath lautane mein kaamayaab rahe, abhi k liye unke saath jyada jabaradasti aap mat kijiye, anayatha parinam kuch bhi ho skta hai."

Radha ne kaampate hue javaab diya, “Master alchemist iska matalab hai ki mera beta..."

bujurg vyakti, jise Master alchemist kaha jaata tha, ne aah bhari, "young master ke mastishk ko ek teevr jhataka laga hai. sach kahoon to hosh mein aane k liye saksham hona pahale se hi behad mushkil tha, wo to achaa hai ki Young master Aryan bhut bhaagyashaali hai; haalaanki, nateeje nishchit roop se abhi bhi bahut gambheer honge. Iss sthiti mein unaki yaadaasht khone ki possibility bhut jyada hai..."

Dono log dheere-dheere aage aur dur chale gaye, isliye Aaryan ab unhe spasht roop se nahin sun sakata tha... lekin jo use mushkil se thoda bhut sunai de raha tha wo thi apni maa ke rone ki aavaaj.

Aaryan oopar ki chhat par ektak dekhta rha kyonki use apne poore shareer mein, vishesh roop se uske sir ke pichale hisse mein, jo sooje hu tha, gambheer dard mahasoos kiya.

Abhi kya hua? main Aaryan hoon, aur isliye Mrs. Radha meri maa hain. Lekin jab mai unka blood child hu to mujhe aisi aparichit anubhooti kaise ho sakatee hai?

aur ye saare bhramit karne vali yaaden, kahan se aayi?

mere paas yaadein hain ki main ek abhimaanee, atyadhik shaktishaali vyakti hoon … pill soverrgin Aaryan? Trash Aaryan?

Asli mein kaun si hai? kya main pill soveregin ka punarjanm hoon? ya main pill Soveregin ki aatma ka ek kamajor sa hissa hu jo ab ek trash weakling hu?

Aakhir kon hu mai………………………
Behtareen shaandaar shuruwat bhai
 
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