Fantasy THE SAVIOR OF PLANETS

[Cyanide]

Introduction​

HERO'S FAMILY
ISHWAR SAKHRE - yeh bahot hi ache insan hai hamesha dusro ki madad karte hai. Bahot hi fit hai mascular body hai.inki age 43 hai.

KAVITA ISHWAR SAKHRE - yeh bhi inke pati ki jaise hai bahot hi ache insan hai. yeh apne pati ko aur bachho ko hamesha pyar karti hai.inka figure aage Jake malum hoga.inki age 41 hai.

RIYA SAKHRE - yeh bhi achi insan hai lekin thodi gusse wali hai. Yeh apne hero ko bahot pyar karti hai.yeh bahot hi sexy dikhti hai. inki age 19 hai.

KUSHAL SAKHRE - yeh Mai hu yani ki isse story ka hero.yeh apni family ko bahot pyar Kate hai.yeh bhi apnie pita par hi Gaye hai bahot hi ache insan aur har subah uth ke practice karte hai kiski karte hai woh aage story Mai PATA chalega.

PLANETS

KIRO PLANET
GHAVO PLANET
MANGHI PLANET
HAVIKO PLANET
TRETO PLANET
YOUJI PLANET
OKA PLANET

inn planets ke bare Mai aage pta chalega jaise jaise story aage badhegi.

ABB AATE HAI MAIN POINT PAI STORY UPDATE TIME PAI.TO DOSTO TIME AAPPE CHODTA HU.
1.MONDAY 10 A.M
FRIDAY 10 P.M
2.THURSDAY 7 P.M
SUNDAY 9 P.M

AAPKO JO TIMING PASAND HO REPLY ME PLEASE.I AM TRY MY BEST FOR STORY.

Saare characters bahut acche log hai...planets bhi acche hai...
Time ka kya hai aap jitna jyada update doge humme utni khushi hogi.. to jo bhi time aapko pasand ho usme de dena

Again
Characters bahut acche log hai ..

Keep writing

 

[Rohit1988]

Congratulations ? for new story

Congratulations bhai ji new story ke liye

Dekhte hai is story me hame thriller, adventure, action fantasy, suspense, or pure love (not sex), or Horror bhi dekhne mile bina horror ke fantasy story ka koi matlab nahi
aasha karta hu ki ye story lambi chale shot story na ho ya bich me hamara sath na choro aap ham aapke sath rahege

Rahi baat timing ki to jo aapne di hai sahi

Aasha karunga ek extraordinary story padhne ko milegi
God Bless u bhai ji
Or likhte raho

 

[Chutiyadr]

for new thread

 

[Patelman2348]

GUYS MONDAY 10 A.M KO 1 UPDATE AUR FRIDAY KO 10 P.M KO 2 UPDATE AAYEGE.AGAR MAI MONDAY KO UPDATE NA KAR PAO TO FRIDAY 10 P.M KO 3 UPDATE AAYENGE.SO GUYS THANK SFOR SUPPORT ME AND NEXT UPDATE 2&3 FRIDAY 10P.M KO AAYENGE.

 

[Ajay]

Nice bhai

 

[Abhi123]

Congratulations bhai for new story

 

[Reza]

GUYS MONDAY 10 A.M KO 1 UPDATE AUR FRIDAY KO 10 P.M KO 2 UPDATE AAYEGE.AGAR MAI MONDAY KO UPDATE NA KAR PAO TO FRIDAY 10 P.M KO 3 UPDATE AAYENGE.SO GUYS THANK SFOR SUPPORT ME AND NEXT UPDATE 2&3 FRIDAY 10P.M KO AAYENGE.

kab ayega update??

 

[anshukumar123]

writer mahoday Friday khatam ho gaya Monday bhi as Gaya but update Kaha hai

 

[Patelman2348]

UPDATE-1
Ek ladka apni hi dhin Mai chale ja Raha tha use yeh bhi pata nahi tha ki woh kaha ja Raha hai woh toh apni hi soch Mai chale ja Raha tha.woh larka apne atit ke bare Mai soch rahata.chalo dekhte hai yeh Kya soch raha hai.isse pehle iska introduction de dete hai.toh is larke ka naam hai KUSHAL SAKHARE.yeh dikhne Mai itna khas nahi tha.chehre PE dadhi badhi Hui thi sarir sukha hua tha aiesa lag raha tha ki bahot dino se isne khaya nahi hoga.iski aage bhi nelee thi.

Flashback 20 years

Ek gadi Jo bahot hi speed se ja rahi thi usme ek aurat aur ek aadmi tha.
Aadmi - ( rote hue ) Kavita aakhe khuli rakho Kavita kuch nahi hoga Kavita tumhe bas ham pahochne vaale hai.

[ Ha to dosto aadmi ka naam tha ISHWAR SAKHRE yeh Delhi Mai rehete hai.yeh bahot garib to nahi keh sakte par utne amir bhi nahi keh sakte.yeh ek private bank Mai chaprasi the.
Aur aurat ka naam tha KAVITA ISHWAR SAKHRE.yeh ek patiwrata aurat hai aur sath me housewife bhi hai.]
to story par aate hue KAVITA 9 mahine se pregnant thi.aur use aaj lebar pain suru hogaya yha to unke pados Mai rehete aurat ne unki chikhne ki aawaj suni to ISHWAR ko phone lagaya aur use jaldi aane ko bola to woh jaldi aagya ur taxi karke unhe hospital leke jaa rahe hai.
Thodi der Mai taxi hospital pahochne ke baad ISHWAR doctor ko bulata hai use KAVITA ko dikhata hai . doctor Kavita check karne ke bad kehte hai ki unhe jaldi i.c.u Mai leke jaana hoga.
4 hours later at outside I.C.U
nurse aake kehti hai ki Mubarak ho aapko beta paida hua hai.
ISHWAR yeh sunke khush hota hai aur puchta hai "Meri biwi kesi hai nurse" to nurse unhe thodi der baaad unhe Milne jaane ke liye permission dedeti hai.
Thodi der baaad ISHWAR KAVITA se Milne andar jata hai to dekhta hai ek cute sa bacha nili aakho Wala KAVITA ke baju Mai ro Raha hai aur KAVITA use chup Kara rahi hai.

ISHWAR - arere Mera bacha kyu to Raha hai lao use do papa ke pass aaja Mera bacha.

Kavita baap - bete ka pyaar dekh ke
Khush ho jati hai .

Thode dino baad KAVITA ko discharge karaya jata hai.ishwar apni bwi aur bache ke saath Ghar jata hai.aur thode dino baad bache ka naam karan hota hai usme Bache ka naam KUSHAL rakha jata hai.

Aise hi Ghar Mai khusiya aajati hai.ishwar aur KAVITA apne bete KUSHAL ko bahot pyar karte hai aur bahot masti karte hai aur ghemne bhi leke jaate hai.aise hi 18 saal ghujar jaate hai.

Ek din KUSHAL school Mai padhai kar Raha tha tabhi peon aata hai aur kehta hai

Peon - KUSHAL SAKHRE ko principal sir ne office Mai bulaya hai.

Teacher - kyu bulaya hai sir ne KUSHAL ko?
[ Ab sala yeh baat smajh nhi aati ki sab teacher ko har baat pe taang adaane ki Kya jarurat hai sala kyu bulaya Matlab TU jaanke Kya karlega sala mc]

Peon - mujhe nahi pata.

Teacher - Jao KUSHAL.

KUSHAL peon ke saath Chala jaata hai principal sir ke pass.use yeh bhi pata nahi tha ki aaj uska JINDAGI ka kala din tha.aaj se uski JINDAGI badalne wali thi.

Principal - aao beta betho.

KUSHAL unke samne rakhi chair Mai baith jata hai.

KUSHAL - yes sir aapne mujhe bulaya.

Principal - ha beta tumhe abhi Ghar jaana hoga.

KUSHAL - kyu sir?aise achanak.

Principal - woh to mai nahi janta lekin tumahre Ghar ke padosi ka phone aaya tha tumhe Ghar bula rahe the urgent.

KUSHAL - ok sir.

KUSHAL apne Ghar jaane ke liye nikalta hai auto mai. Aur jaise hi Ghar pahochta hai to use uske Ghar ke saamne bhid dikh rahi thi.use dekh ke KUSHAL ko dar lagne lagata hai ki Kya huya hoga sochne lagta hai.kushal jab bheed ko cheer ke Ghar ke aagne Mai aake dekhta hai to woh wahi jad ki tarah khada ho jata hai thodi der fir behos ho jata hai.kyuki.........

 

[Fighter]

Congress bro for new story