Fantasy The Secret Island (Completed)

[Rita Kumar]

Ladka aese hi rait par leta huva tha, samundar ki lehare use chu kar chali jati thi.

Tabhi wahaan ek mahila aati hai, jiska andaz purane zamane ka tha. Uski upasthiti prabhavit karti thi, wo purani yodhao ki tarah taiyar thi. Vah oonchi thi, uska sharir mazboot tha. Uske lambe baal ko salike se bandha gaya the aur uske vastra, ek prachin sipahi ke jaise dikh rahe the. Uski lambi height aur majboot sharir ke saath, wo ladke ke paas aati hai.

Mahila dhire se ladke ko apane bhala peeche ko ulta kerake se dheere se ladke ko hilane ki koshish karti hai, lekin ladka uttar nahi deta. Usne ladke ke paas aati he. Jab wo najdeek aa kar wo ladke ki saanson ki jaanch karti hai aur samajhti hai ki ladka saans le raha hai. Ladka abhi bhi hosh mein nahi tha.



Wo ladke ke kapdo, gour se dekhati hai, use ladke ke kapde ajib lag rahe the, uske mutabik, yeh koi ajnabi duniya se aya hua lagta hai. Wo apni kamar ke piche bandhe ek shankh nikalti hai or baja deti hai. Thodi hi der mein do aur mahila aati hain, waise hi purane yodhao ki tarah taiyar. Dono mahila ghode pe sawar thi.

Ghudsawar Mahila: Tumne shankh kyun bajaya? Kya koi ghuspaith hui hai?

Mahila: Dekho, ek ajnabi aa gaya hai, par yeh behosh hai.

Ghudsawar Mahila: Yeh yahaan kaise aa gaya?

Mahila: Dekhkar to lagta hai, samundar ke raste se aaya hai, par koi naav dikh nahi rahi hai, bas yeh tuti hui lakdi ka tukda hai.

Ghudsawar Mahila: Lagta hai samundar ke tufan mein fas gaya hoga!!

Mahila: Ho sakta hai. Par iska kya karein ab?

Ghudsawar Mahila: Ek kaam karo, abhi ise le chalte hain, aur kothari mein bandh karke rakhte hain. Jab hosh aayega, to rani ke samaksh raju karenge.

Mahila: Thik hai.

Mahila ladke ko utha kar, ghode pe leta deti hai. Us dusari ghudsawar ko dhyaan se jane ka keh deti hai.

Mahila fir Ghudsawar Mahila ke piche ghode pe baith jati hai, aur phir mahal ki taraf chal padte hain.

Mahila: Kitne saalon baad koi purush is jagah aaya hai.

Ghudsawar Mahila: Haan, yeh baat to sahi hai.

Mahila: Par kya raani use rehne dengi yahaan? Aur usse pata chala to? Kya woh use jinda rehne dega?

Ghudsawar Mahila: Woh to use hargiz nahi jeene dega. Par rani shayad uski bhalaai ke liye kuch kar sakti hai. Sayad use jaane de jahaan se woh aaya hai.

Teeno yodha mahal ke dwar pe pahuchti hai. Dwar pe khadi sainik ne ghode par kisi anjaan ko dekh kar unhe vahi par rok liya.

Dwar Sainik: Ruko, yeh kaun hai, saath mein?

Ghudsawar Mahila: Yeh ajnabi hai, samundar ke raaste se aaya hai. Dekh kar lagta hai, tufan mein phasa hua tha.

Dwar Sainik: Tum use andar nahi le ja sakte.

Ghudsawar Mahila: To kya karein iska, bahar khula chhod dein? Abhi yeh hosh mein nahi hai. Hum isse kothri mein daalne ja rahe hain. Jab isse hosh aayega, to isse rani ke samaksh pesh karenge, woh batayengi ki iska kya karna hai.

Dwar Sainik kuch sochti hai aur phir woh bahari darwaza khol deti hai.

Dwar khulte hi. dono ghudsawar apne ghode ko aage badha deti he. Ye pura mahal ek kille jessa malum pad rha tha. Main dwar aate hi badi badi diwaro ki 2 layer milti he, jo isski suraksa ko or bhi bada de rhi thi. Uske bad ek bada sa maidan aata jaha aama logo je liye ghar bane the. sabhi ghar ek jese hi the. Na koi bada na koi chota. dono ghudsawar gharo ko par krti huvi aage bdhati he. or samne ek bada mahal dikhay deta he, samanya ghar se thodi uchai pr tha. or bada tha. jisse malum padata he ki yaha rajsi rehte he.

Mahal char manjila ucha or utne hisab se bada tha. Mahal ki bahari or kayi paid lage huve the. waha se hote huve ghud savar ek surang ki or chal deti he. Or apne apne ghodo ko bahar rakh kar, surang me chali jati he. Us surang me kayi sari choti choti kothariya bani huvi thi. jo khali thi. Usme se ek kothri me ladke ko sula deti he. Or waha sainik ko bulake us pr nazar rakhne ka keh deti he, Or fir mahal ki chal padti he.

Dwar khulta hai. Dono ghudsawar apne ghode ko aage badhate hain. Jab dwar khulta hai, mahal ka prangan nazar aata hai, aur yeh pura mahal ek prachin kille jaisa dikhta hai.

Main dwar ke bahar ek badi-badi diwaron ki do layer milti hai, jo mahal ki suraksha ko or bhi bada deti hai. In deewaron ke beech mein ek khula maidan hai, jahan par aam logon ke liye ghar bane hote hain. Sabhi ghar ek jaise hain, na bade hain na chhote. Dono ghudsawar mahilaye gharon ke beech se aage badhti hai, aur unke ghode unke saath hote hain.

Maidan ko paar karne ke baad, unke samne ek bada mahal dikhai deta hai. Yeh mahal samanya gharon se thoda ucha hai aur bada bhi. Usse malum padta hai ki yahan raja-maharaja rehte hain.

Mahal char manzila uncha hai aur utne hisab se bada. Is mahal ki bahari taraf kayi paidalane lage hain, jo mahal ke mahol ko aur bhi anginat bana deti hain.

Un dono ghudsawar mahilayein mahal se hote hue ek surang ki or badhti hain. Dono apne ghode surang ke bahar rakh deti hain.

Surang ke andar jate hi, kayi sari choti-choti kothriyan bani hui dekhay deti hain, jo ki sari khali hain. Ghudsawar mahila ek kothri mein ladke ko sula deti hain, ladka abhi bhi behosh hi hai.

Mahilayein, ek sainik ko bulakar uspe nazar rakhne ka hukm deti hain. Sainik apni sthirata se wahan khadi ho jata hai, ladke ki suraksha aur uspar nazar rakhne ke liye.

Fir tino mahal k or chal padti hai..

wow bohat khubsurat story hai aapki

 

[Rita Kumar]

Tino mahila mahal mein jaati hain, rani ko is ghatana ke bare mein batane.

Mahila: Kya raani ji darbar mein hain?

Sainik: Ji nahi, woh apne kamre mein hain. Aaj darbar mein koi prakriya nahi hone wali.

Tino mahila ek dusre ko dekhti hain, unke aankhon mein ek sanket hota hai. Fir unhon ne sainik se keh kar rani ke kamre ki or badhna shuru kiya.

Mahal ke andar, unke kadam mahal ki galiyon mein badh rahe hain. Galiyon ki diwaron par pracheen kalpana chitrakari hai, jo mahal ki prakriti ki sundar chitro ka pradarshan karti hai. In pracheen kalpanaon ne mahal ki mahatva aur shanadar virasat ko jivit kiya.

Mahal ke andar, unke kadam mahal ki galiyon mein badh rahe hain. Galiyon ki diwaron par pracheen kalpana chitrakari hai, jo mahal ki prakriti ki sundar chitro ka pradarshan karti hai. In pracheen kalpanaon ne mahal ki mahatva aur shanadar virasat ko jivit kiya.

Mahal ki galiyan dhire-dhire prakash se bhar rahi hain, aur dhup ke kiranon ka khel galiyon ke jaliyon se aaram se pravesh kar raha hai.

Wahaan se hote hue, tino ek sidhiyon se upar ki manzil par jane lagti hain. Sidhiyon ki diwaron par bariki se naksha ki gayi hai. Upar pahunchne ke bad, tino rani ke kamre ke galiyaron ki or mud jati hain. Jagah-jagah sainik unke aane par aadar samman se sir jhuka ke abhivadan kar rhe the.

Tino rani ke kamre ke bahar khadi ho jati hain. Ek bahar khade sainik se puchti hain:

Mahila: Kya raniji andar hain?

Sainik: Ji haan, woh andar hain.

Mahila: Hume unse milna hai.

Sainik: Par abhi woh aram kar rahi hain.

Mahila: Humse unse milne ka zaroori vishay hai.

Sainik: Par...

Mahila: Yeh rajya ki suraksha ka mamla hai.

Sainik: Thik hai, aap yahin rukien.

Sainik andar room mein chali jati hai. Woh teeno phir se ek dusre ki taraf dekhti hain, unki aankhon mein ek sanketik bhasha mein batchit hoti hai.

Thodi der baad, sainik wapas aakar mahilaon se kehta hai ki aap andar ja sakti hain.

Tino mahila andar rani ke kamre mein jati hain. Kamre ke andar pahunchte hi unke saamne ek bada sa palang hota hai. Kamre ki diwaron par alag-alag prakar ki nakashiyan thi, jinse kamre ka mahaul aur bhi anginat ho gaya tha.

Kamre ki daayin taraf ek diwar par ek shelf thi, jahan par purani sharab ki bottles rakhi gayi thi, Unke rang mahfil mein jaan daal rahe the. Kachh ke khali glasses bhi wahan par the, jo sharab pilane ke liye istemal hote the.

Kamre ke bich mein chat par ek bada sa jhoomar tanga hua tha, jiski chamak kamre mein ek alag saundarya failati thi.

Palang pr rani piche ki dewar se apni pith tikaye bethi huvi thi. Rani rajay se apne aapko kandhe tak dhaki huvi thi. Unke lambe kale balo ne unke kandho or gale ko dhaka huva tha. Rani ka chehra kafi thakan bhara lag rha tha. Jese puri raat jagi huvi ho.

Rani: Ha Vasundhara bolo kya bat krani he?

Vasundhara: Rani ji, wo Anandita subah ki choki krne me samundar kinare ek ladka mila he?

Rani (Anandita se): kya koy jasus he?

Anandita: Lagta to nhi he, par wo aam aadmi jesa bhi nahi he, use kapde kuch ajib se dikh rhe the. Jese kahi bahri duniya se aaya ho. Jabse mila he tabse behos hi he. Lagta he jese samundar me bhatak gya ho.

Rani: to abhi wo kaha he?

Vasundhara: Abhi humne use kaid me rakha huva he. Jab use hosh aayega to aapke samne pais karenge.

Rani: Acha, thik hai. Kusum, tum kyun aayi ho?

Kusum: Ji wo hum tino sath me hi laye he usko. To me bhi aayi.

Rani: Acha thik he. Abhi tum tino ja skti ho jab use hosh aaye to batana.

Vasundhara: Vese ek or bat puchni thi, aapki izaazat ho to.

Rani: Ji, bolo,

Vasundhara: Aaj aap thik to he? Aaj abhi tak aap kamre me hi ho! Kya kuch huva he?

Rani: kusum tum abhi ja skti ho beta.

Kusum rani ki bat sun kar, chali jati he.

Rani apne upar se chadar hata deti he. Or unko dekh kr Vasundhara or Anandita ke aakhe fat jati he.

Rani ke pure sarir pr patto ke nisan the. Jese kisi ne behrami se mara ho. Unke stan sooj kr lal ho gye the. Unke gale pe unglio ke nisan the. Unke pait me nakhun rahad ne ki kharoche thi. Unki chut aesi thi jese kisi use bedardi se ronda ho. Vasundhara or Anandita ki aankho me aansu aa jate he.

Vasundhara: Aap kab tak sahan krogi ye?

Rani: Jab tak meri sans chal rhi he.

Anandita: Par aap kisi or ke gunah ki saja bhugat rhi ho.

Rani sirf halke se muskura deti hai.

Vasundhara: Kya uska koy tod nhi he?

Rani: Agar hota to kya me ye sab sahan krti?

Vasundhara: Aap kahe to me use mar deti hu.

Rani: Agar aesa hota to ab tak wo mara gya hota.

Awesome. aap bohat khubsurat lekh rahe ho but Gifs aur pics ka use bhi sath ma kijiye

 

[mrDevi]

wow bohat khubsurat story hai aapki

Awesome. aap bohat khubsurat lekh rahe ho but Gifs aur pics ka use bhi sath ma kijiye

Thanks.

 

[Rita Kumar]

Thanks.

aapko gifs bhi add karne chahiye

 

[mrDevi]

aapko gifs bhi add karne chahiye

Ok, aage se me dhyan rakhunga

 

[Rita Kumar]

Ok, aage se me dhyan rakhunga

Thank u main aapki story padh rahi hon aage bhi

 

[mrDevi]

Thank u main aapki story padh rahi hon aage bhi

Thank you

 

[king cobra]

Yani ki Rani ne sabko bachane ke liye apni ijjat ki qurbani diya.aur unko aaj tak koi bachane na aaya aur burai ki jeet hui to ab tak kayam hai

 

[mrDevi]

Yani ki Rani ne sabko bachane ke liye apni ijjat ki qurbani diya.aur unko aaj tak koi bachane na aaya aur burai ki jeet hui to ab tak kayam hai

Ha, or kyu ye aapko aage pata chalge

 

[Kasim256]

Very nice update bro.