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Fantasy The Secret Island (Completed)

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Bhai I hope ab sab theek hoga, or aapka kaam bhi track par aa gya hoga, but apki story itni achi h ki eagerly waiting for update.
 
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Ek mand roshanee vaale kamare ke shaant aalingan mein, ek deep ki tim-timati lau se sahalaate hue, parchhaiyan deewaron par nrity kar rahi thi. Hava mein chandan ke ras se bhini ek sugandhit shaanti thee. kamare ke madhy mein, ek safed saree pahane hue ek mahila dhyaan me baithi huvi thi. Kamara uski alaukik upasthiti ke saamane jhuka hua prateet ho raha tha, aur uske chehare se nikalane vali halki chamak usake bhitar ek divy shakti ka sanket de rahi thi. Ek halki saans ke saath, usane apani aankhen kholi.

Vikrant dar se niche betha ke aansu bahaye ja raha tha. Aaj uske hatho do-do begunah vyakti mot ke ghat utar diye gaye the, Aur Rani ke sath kiye apne vyavhar se sarminda tha. Aage Kusum kya karne wali thi iski soch me duba huva tha. Vikrant ke paas me Rani khadi huvi thi. Uske samne Kusum shaitan ki tarah hase ja rahi thi. Aur in sabhi ke aas-pass Kusum ke vash me bandhe sainik khade huve the. Dar aur dukh se khade log dur se inn sabhi ko dekh rahe the.

Kusum: Rani ji, Ab aapki bari hai. Mere baap ki moat ki saza ke liye taiyar ho?.

Rani: Tumhara baap ek haiwan tha, janwar tha. Uske liye tum begunah logo ko mar rahi ho?

Kusum: To kya huva? Tha to mera baap na? Aur jo mere sath hua uska kya?

Rani kuch samaj nhi pati, wo acharaj se Kusum ki aur dekh rahi thi.

Kusum: Jis din tumne mere pita ko marvaya tha, muje desh nikala diya tha usi din tumhari vajah se meri ijjat luti gayi. Uska kya?

Rani: Usme hamara kya kasoor?

Kusum: Me kuch nahi janti!

Kusum Vikrant ki aur dekhti hai aur issara karte huve bolti hai.

Kusum: Isski izzat bachane ke liye tumne mere baap ko mara tha na? Aaj tumhi iske sath iske hi logo ke samne, tum is ki izzat ke sath kheloge, issko sabke samne nanga karake iske sath sambhog karoge.

Ye kehte hue Kusum Vikrant ki aur dekhte huve ishara karti hai, aur phir se Vikrant ko apne vash me kar leti hai. Aur usko dekhte huve rani ke kapde utar ne ko keh deti hai. Vikrant bhi kisi katputali ki tarah uske aadesh par khada ho hai aur Rani ki aur mudte huve unki saree ko pakad kar khich ne lagta hai. Rani apni saree ko pakde hue bachane ki koshish karti hai. Aur roti hui bolti hai.

Rani: Vikrant, Hosh me aao. Tum aesa nahi kar sakte? Tum aise insaan nahi ho.

Kusum (Haste huve): Ye jaisa bhi insan ho, abhi ke liye wo sirf mere aadesh anusar kam karega.

Rani Kusum ki bat sunti hai, aur khud ko bachane ki koshish karti rehti hai.

Rani: Vikrant, Muje chhod do. Main tumhare samne hath jodti hu.

Vikrant kuch nahi sunta aur jor se Rani ki saree ko kich deta hai, Rani Vikrant ke aage kuch nahi kar pati. Vikrant saree khichta rehta hai. Rani ghum jati hai. Unki aankhon se aansu beh nikle the. Wo apne upari bhag ko apne hatho se chupane ki koshish karne lagti hai. Vikrant rani ki puri saree ko nikal deta hai, aur dur fek deta hai. Dur khade log bhi Rani ke sath hote huve iss vyavhar ko dekh gusse me chilate hai, par jese hi unki awaz Kusum suni, wo unki aur ghumti hai. Kusum ko apne aur ghumte dekh log dar se chhup ho jate hai. Unhe samajh aa gya ki Kusum ke aage wo ek pal bhi nahi tik pane wale hai.

Kusum: Vikrant, ab isske pure kapde fad do.

Kusum ki awaz Vikrant ke kano me padte hi, Vikrant apna hath Rani ke blouse ki aur hath badhata hai. Rani apne kadmo ko piche karne lagti hai. Vikrant tezi se Rani ko pakad kr uske blouse ko khichne lagta hai, aur usse fadne ki koshish karne lagta hai.

Rani khud ko bachane ke liye Vikrant ke hatho pe mukke marne lagti hai, par unka Vikrant par kuch bhi farq nahi pad raha tha. Vikrant Rani ke blouse ko jor se khichta huva fad deta hai. Rani apne hatho se khud ke stano ko dhank leti hai. Aur Vikrant ko dekte huve roye ja rahi thi. Rani ki halat dekh dur khade log bhi apni aankhe niche juka lete hai.

Kusum Rani ki halat dekh muskura rahi thi, par abhi bhi uske dil ko chain nahi mil raha tha. Wo ek sainik ki aur dekhti hai, aur uske paas ek chhadi mangvati hai. Sainik Kusum ka hukum man chali jati hai, thodi dair bad ek chadi lekar aa jati hai, Aur Kusum ko deti hai.

Kusum(Chhadi ko Vikrant ki aur badhate huve): Ye lo Vikrant, iske badan pe itna maro ki isse nisan uth jaye.

Vikrant Kusum ke hath se chhadi leta hai, aur dheere se Rani ke badan pe marta hai. Rani ko kuch mehsus nahi hota hai. Vikrant firse marta hai, par abki baar jara tez. Jisse Rani ko thoda dard hota hai. Vikrant dheere dheere chhadi ko tezi ko badhata hai, aur issi ke sath Rani ka dard bhi badhane lagta hai.

Vikrant ab bahot hi tezi se chadi ko Rani ke badan pe Marne lagta hai, Rani dard se chillane lagti hai. Uske badan par chhadi ke nisan padne lagte hai. Rani ki aankho se aansu ki dhar beh rahi thi. Rani ko apne purane din fir se yaad aane lagte hai, jese Shairshing usse marta tha. Vikrant ke roop me usse Shairshing dikhne lagta hai.

Rani ko mar khate dekh Kusum muskura rahi thi, aur wo Vikrant ko bolti hai.

Kusum: Ruk jao Vikrant mar jayegi ye, isse itni jaldi nahi marna hai.

Vikrant ruk jata hai, aur Rani ke agle aadesh ka intezar karne lagta hai.

Kusum: Kyu Chandralekha! mere baap ki yaad aayi?

Kusum: Abhi to tumara dard aur badhne wala hai. Jese tum mere baap ke niche maze leti thi, wese hi tum aaj Vikrant ke niche maze karogi.

Kusum: Vikrant, ab tumhare maze karne ka waqt aa gaya hai. Chalo aage badho.

Vikrant Kusum ka aadesh sun, Rani ka petikot utar ne ke liye aage badhne lagta hai. Rani bhi thak har kar wahi khadi thi. Unhe bhi pata tha ki wo bach nahi sakti. Vikrant jese hi Rani ka petikot pakadta he aur nikal ne hi wala tha, tabhi use ek awaz sunai deti hai.

"Ruko Vikrant, Ye kya kar rahe ho?"

"Me tumko Kusum ke vash se chhuda sakati hu, me tumhari madad kar sakti hu."


Jese hi Vikrant ye awaz sunta hai, Kusum ka vashikaran tut jata hai. Vikrant ka hath ruk jata hai.

"Vikrant, Aese achanak se ruko mat, Usse shaq ho jayega."

"Main tumhe uske vashikaran se bacha sakti hu, par uske aage samna to tumhe hi karna hoga."


Vikrant apne hosh me tha, Vikrant ruk jata hai. Vikrant ko rukta dekh Kusum bolti hai.

Kusum: Kya hua? Ruk kyu gaye?

Vikrant kuch nahi bolta, bs ruka rehta hai, Rani bhi Vikrant ko dekh rahi thi. Kusum gusse me Vikrant ki aur badhati hai. Jese hi Kusum Vikrant ke pass aati hai, Vikrant apne hath se Kusum pe var karta hai. Kusum dur jake girti hai.

Vikrant dur padi Rani ki saree ke pass jaake use uthata hai, aur Rani ke pass aa kar, Rani ke badan ko saree se dhak deta hai.

Vikrant piche mudta hai, Kusum ki aur dekhta hai. Kusum Vikrant ke var se hairan thi. Use samaj nahi aa rha tha ki kon he jo Vikrant par se uska vashikaran hata sakta hai. Kusum junjulaate huve uthati hai, aur phir se Vikrant par apna vashikaran karne ki kosish karti hai, par ab Vikrant par uska koi asar nahi ho raha tha.

Kusum 7-8 sainiko ko Vikrant pr hamla karne ka issara deti hai, uske aadesh milte hi sainik Vikrant pr hamla kar dete hai. Vikrant sainik se khud ko bacha ratha tha, naki un par bal se palat var kar raha tha. Kyoki use malum tha ki abhi ye sab kusum ki katputali hai, ye abhi bhi rajya ke hi log hai. Iss vajah se wo jitna ho sake un par var karne se bach raha tha.

Jese jese samay bit raha tha, Kusum ka bhi gussa badh raha tha, nahi uska vashikaran kam aa rha tha, aur nahi sainik Vikrant ka kuch bigad pa rahe the. Kusum uske sath huve baki sainik ko bhi aadesh deti hai.

Vikrant ke samne 15 se 20 sainik var kar rahe the, Jis ab Vikrant bhi kamjor padne lagata hai, kyoki abhi bhi wo apni puri takat ka prayog nahi kar rha tha. Sare sainik ek sath Vikrant par tut pade he, Vikrant ko har taraf se laat ghuse, dande pad rhe he. Vikrant ab unka samna karne se thakne laga tha. Sainik Vikrant ko puri tarah se jakad lete hai, aur usse majboorn zamin par leta dete hai.

Kusum ye dekh khus hoti hai, aur wo Vikrant ke pass jati hai.

Kusum: Vikrant Vikrant Vikrant, tumhare jazbaat tumhe kamzor bana dete hai.

Kusum: Tum chaho to in sab ko aasani se mat de sakte ho, par tumhare jazbaat...

Kusum: Chalo sayad, ab tumhara kam mujhe karna padega, Rani ko mujhe marna padega.

Vikrant zamin par leta hua hai, uske upar 7 8 sainik use pura zamin par dabaye huve he, aur kayi uske hatho aur pairo ko pakde huve hai.

Kusum apne kadam Rani ki taraf badha deti hai. Jisse dekh Vikrant gusse me apne aap ko chudane ke liye tadap raha tha. Vikrant apni puri takat ke sath apne hatho ko sainiko se chudane ki koshish karta hai. Jese hi uska ek hath chatta hai, wo ek hath se sainiko par var kar deta hai. Issbar Vikrant jyada zor se sainiko par var krta hai, jisse dheere dheere sainiko ki pakad us par se chutane lagti hai.

Jesse jesse sainik use chod rahe the, Vikrant apni puri takat ke sath uthata hai, jiski vajah se 5-6 sainik dur hawa me uchal jate hai. Baki sainik se Vikrant khud ko chudata hai, aur Kusum ki aur daudte hue jata hai.

Jab tak kusum ko pata chale, tab tak Vikrant use pakadta hai, aur dur hawa me uchalta huva fek deta hai. Kusum dur jake girti hai. Usse isski ummid nahi thi.

Kusum gusse me khadi hoti hai, aur kuch mantra bolti hui Vikrant par hamala karne daudti hai. Jese jese wo aage badh rahi thi, uske sath sath ek Kali parchai ki takat bhi uske sath badh rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese us parchai ne Kusum ke badan ke aakar me usse lipati huvi ho.

Kusum Vikrant par apne hatho se hamla karti hai, Vikrant khud ko bachane ki koshish karta hai, par kusum ki kali takat ke aage nahi bach pata, wo dur 15 20 feet jake girta hai. Vikrant ladkhadata huve uthata hai. Jise dekh Kusum ko aur bhi gussa aata hai.

Kusum firse ussi tarah hamala karne aage badhti hai, par issbar Vikrant uske hath ko pakad use hawa me jula deta hai, aur apne ek pair se us par lat marta huva niche patak deta hai.

Dono ek dusre par var par var kiye ja rahe the, kabhi Vikrant Kusum ko pachad deta, to kabhi Kusum apni takato se var karti huve use marti, aur dur pachad deti.
Var pe var ho rahe the, koi bhi jukane ka nam nahi le raha tha. Dono ka gussa badh raha tha. Kisi bhi halat me dusre ko harana chahta tha. Kusum apne badle ke liye, Vikrant Rani ko bachane ke liye.

Kusum ki kali shaktiyo ke sath bhi, Vikrant usse takkar de rha tha, Kusum firse sainiko ko Vikrant par hamla karne ka aadesh deti hai, usse lag rha tha jese Vikrant unpar palat var nahi karega.

Sanik fir se ek sath Vikrant par hamala kar dete hai. Vikrant firse unpar sambhal sambhal kar var karne lagta hai, aur jitna ban sake unko kam marane ki koshish karta hai. Sainik firse Vikrant par bhari padne lagte hai.

Vikrant jo pehle se Kusum par gussa tha, aur in Sainiko se jitna ho sake sambhal kar var krta tha, us par wo bhari padh rhe the. Dheere dheere uska gussa aur badhne laga tha. Uski samaj usska sath chod rhi thi. Vikrant ab apne aape se bahar hone ko tha. Uska muh pura khun se san chuka tha, uski aankhe gusse se laal ho chuki thi.

Vikrant apne aape se bahar ho chuka tha, Gussa uske man par sawar ho chuka tha, sainiko par var karte huve aage badhne lagta hai. Uska var aam sainko ke sahan ke bar ho rha tha. Vikrant ek ek sainik ko pakadta huva marata aur jab tak mar na jati tab tak usse marta. Iss bich jo bhi sainik use marne aata Vikrant use pakad kar dur uchal kar fek de rha tha. Jese jese Vikrant aage badh raha tha wo sainko ke khun se aur bhi jyada Sana ja raha tha. Uske dono hath sainko ke khun se sanne huve the.

Vikrant ka ye roop dekh, dur khade log aur Rani sabhi logo ke badan mai dar bethta ja raha tha. Uske samne khadi Kusum gusse se laal huve ja rhi thi. Itne sare sainko ko Vikrant marta huva uske aage badh raha tha.

Jese hi Vikrant akhari sainik ko marta hai, wo Kusum ko dekhta hai aur uski aur badh chalta hai. Kusum bhi kuch mantra padhati huvi Vikrant ka samna karne khadi hoti hai. Vikrant jese hi uske pass aata hai, wo apne hath se Kusum par jordar mukka marne badhata hai, par Kusum uske hath ko pakadti hai, aur Use hawa me uchal deti hai, aur zor se zamin par patak deti hai.

Vikrant ke zamin par takkarane se, zammi par se dhul ka badal udd chalta hai. Vikrant uthane ki koshish karta hai, par uske muh se khun ki ulti nikal padti hai. Kusum saitani muskurati huve uske charo aur ghumne lagti hai.

Kusum: Vikrant tum kitani bhi kosish karlo tum mujhse nahi jeet paoge. Aaj tumhe aur tumhari iss Rani ko marna hoga.

Vikrant apne muh se khun bahata huva khada hota hai. Kusum fir se apne hatho se Vikrant ko mukka marti hai. Vikrant ke muh se fir se khun ka fuvara chut padta hai. Aur sidha Kusum ke muh pe lagata hai. Kusum khun ko pochati huve Rani ki aur badhati hai. Aur muskurati hui bolti hai.

"Vikrant dekhlo apni Rani ko aakhari bar, iss pal ke bad tum isse nahi dekh paoge. Ummar bhar mere baap ki gulami ki isne, marne ke bad meri kali shaktiyo ki gulami karegi ye."

Vikrant apne ghutno ke bal betha huva Kusum ko Rani ki aur badhate huve dekhta hai. Vikrant apni puri takat lagate huve khada hota hai, aur Kusum ki aur daud laga deta hai, Kusum bhi use dekh leti hai, jese hi Vikrant pass aaya Kusum apne mukke se var kar deti hai, Vikrant bhi apna mukka Kusum se bhida deta hai.

Jese hi dono ke mukke takaraye, ek hava ki tarang uske pass se udda chali. Aesa laga mano jese do takato ka takrao huva ho. Kusum apna hath pakde hue dard se beth jati hai. Jese hi wo bethati hai, Vikrant uske hatho ko pakad kar use khichta he aur havame uchalta huva zamin pe girata hai, aur fir ghasita hua thoda piche jata hai. Vikrant Kusum ko firse hava me uchalta hai aur dur piche ki taraf fek deta hai.

Kusum dur jake girti hai, khun se sani huvi. Usse yakin nahi ho pa raha tha ki kese uski itni shaktiyo ke bad bhi ye insaan use itna mar rha hai. Wo khadi hoti hai aur Vikrant ki aur dekhti hai, jo usiki aur badh raha tha, Ladkhadata huva.

Jese jese Vikrant aage badh rha tha, Kusum ka dar bhi badh raha tha. Wo piche dekhati he, Vasundhara ko. Vasundhara ko apne vash me kar, Vikrant par hamala karne ko kehti hai. Vasundhara bhi uska aadesh man Vikrant par hamla karti hai. Par Vikrant use patak deta hai. Vasundhara dard ke mare khadi nahi ho payi.

Vikrant Kusum ke pass pahuchta hai. Aur uss par hamla kar deta hai. Firse dono ek dusre par mokko aur lato ki barsat kar dete hai. Par issbar Vikrant bhari pad rha tha. Vikrant Kusum ko hawame uchalta huva patak deta hai.

Kusum dard me leti huvi Vikrant ko dekhati hai, uske chehre ko dekhti hai. Vikrant ki aankhe surkh laal ho chuki thi. Aisa lag rha tha jese koyi shaitan ki aankhe ho.

Vikrant niche bethata hai, aur Kusum ke muh par apne hath se jor jor se mukke marne lagta hai. Uska Gussa itna tha ki har mukko ke sath Kusum ka sar thoda zamin me ghus raha tha. Kusum ke badan se kali parchai ka dhuva uth chala tha, jese wo uska sath chod rhi ho. Kusum ka chehra khun se pura laal ho chuka tha, uski naak tut chuki thi. Kab Kusum apni akhari saanse chod chuki pata nahi chala. Uska mrit sharir zameen par tha, aur uss par Vikrant mukke mare ja rha tha.

Dur se log ye nazara dekh rahe the, Rani bhi dur se dekh rhi thi. Sabko malum tha ki sab khatam ho chuka tha, Kusum mar chuki he, par kisi ki bhi himmat nhi ho rhi thi ki koi jake Vikrant ko roke. Jo Vikrant ko rok sakti thi wo usse kuch dur mirit avastha me thi.
Gauri ji.
 

mrDevi

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Excellent update Bhai ☺️😊
Excellent Update ☺️😊
Good update
Nice update
Very nice update bro.
Good update waiting for next fight
बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट
Nice update
Nice update
Next update kab Tak aayega broo
Bahot jabardast update the dost. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa dost 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thank you friends for support, New update posted
 

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Han chalo bhai itna sunna tha bas ab aaram se likho soch k
Koi baat nahi dost bus update jaldi dena. Bahot besabri se intajaar kiya iss story ke update ke liye. Mene socha tha ki iye story bhi adhuri hi reh jaaygi but I am happy for your comeback. Bhai agar time naa ho paay aapke paas story me update chhota chhota de dena par roj dena aur hosake to iss story kabhi adhura mat chhorna bhai story bahot pyaari hain. Update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Bhai I hope ab sab theek hoga, or aapka kaam bhi track par aa gya hoga, but apki story itni achi h ki eagerly waiting for update.
Bada update Dena Devi bhai thoda sa se Mann nhi bharega.....
Dosto thank you for your patience, aur kahani ke sath banne rehane ke liye.
 
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