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Aayega Aayega, bahot hi badiyaWaiting for the update bhai, excitingly waiting for it.
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Vikrant niche bethata hai, aur Kusum mrit sab ke muh par apne hath se jor jor se mukke mare ja rha he. Kusum ka pura sar zamin me dhas gaya tha. Uska chehra pura khoon se laal ho gaya tha. Par abhi bhi Vikrant rukne ka naam nahi le rha tha.
Dur khade log, dar se jakde huve hain. Koi bhi aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutha sakta, unke samne vyakti ke gussa ka manzar dekhte huve. Ek bhayankar ghabrahat ka mahaul hawaa mein ghula huva hai. Logon ke beech dar se chuppi chayi huvi hai. Sabke man mein ek hi sawaal hai - kya ab koi bhi himmat karke Vikrant ko sant karne ki koshish kar skta hai?
Tabhi ek divya mahila dikhayi deti hai, door se aati hui. Usne safed saree pehni hui hai, aur uske lambe baal hawaa mein lehrate hain. Uski umar lagbhag 50-55 saal ki hai, lekin uske chehre par ek divyata ka prakash hai. Jab wo chalti hai, chandan ki sugandh uske charo aur bas jati hai. Uske har ek kadam vatavaran main ek pavitrata ka anubhav chodate ja rhe hai.
Jese hi logo ki nazar unpar padti hai, sabhi unke aage niche beth jate hai, aur apne hath jod lete hai, logo ko niche bethta dekh, Rani Chandralekha bhi piche mudti hai, aur us mahila ko dekh wo bhi niche apne ghutno ke bal beth jati hai, aur hath jod leti hai. Mahila Rani ke pass che chalti huvi, Vikrant ki aur badh jati hai. Rani ke muh se dhimi aavaz aati hai: Guru Ma..
Guru Ma Vikrant ke pass pahuchti hai, aur uske mathe par hath rakhti hai, Jese hi Vikrant ko hath mehsus hota hai, wo gusse me khada hota hai, aur Guru Ma ki gardan pakad leta hai, Vikrant ke khun se sane hath Guru Ma ki gardan ko daboch lete he. Guru Ma apna hath Vikrant ke sar pe banaye rakhati hai, Unka man abhi sant, chehare par koy bhi bhav nahi dikh rahe the. Kuch hi pal me Vikrant apni pakad dhili karta huva, gardan ko chod deta hai.
Vikrant ki aankhe dukh se bhari ho jati hai aur wo piche ki or mud jata hai aur uski najar Gauri ji ke bejan sharir par padati hai. Wo uski or daudata hai, hatasha se uske har kadam bhari padane lagte hai. Uske pass pahuch apane ghutanon ke bal girate hue, use apani baahon mein bhar liya, us bejaan roop ko gale lagate hue jisamen kabhi garmajoshi aur hansi thi. dukh ka bojh us par tut padata hai aur wo dil dahala dene vali sisakiyon ki jhadi laga deta hai.
Uski chuikhen aas-paas ke vatavaran mein gunjati hain, dard ki ek bhayavah dhun jo hava mein gunjati hai. pida bhari awaj un logo ke dilon mein gunj uthati hai jo gavah hain, logo par dukh ki bhaavana chha jati hai. Vikraant ki ruh kampa dene vali vedana ki awaz, jo waha khade sabhi logo ke dil ki gaharaiyon tak pahunch jati hai.
Guru ma Vikrant ke karib aati hain, dhire se apana hath uske kandhe par rakhati hain.
Guru ma: sant ho jao, ab use shanti se apani aage ki yatra jaane do.
Vikrant ki aankhen aansuon se dhundhali ho gayi thi, vah Guru ma ki or dekh raha tha, usake chehare par aphasos aur hatasha ka mishran dikh raha tha.
Vikraant: ye sab meree vajah se hua hai, aapane ek haivaan ko janm diya hai.
guru maan shaant bhaav se use aashvast karatee hain.
Guru ma: Aisa mat socho, jo hona tha vo ho gaya hai.
Vikrant, kampati huvi aavaj mein, apane aparaadh ko rok nahin paata.
Vikrant: Apane pichhe dekho aap, meri vajah se kitani masoom jaan gayi hai. Rani ji ko dekho meri vajah se unaki ijjat par dag lagane vala tha.
Guru ma Vikraant ke gaal par santvana bhara hath rakhati hain.
Guru ma: Jo hua vo sabaki niyati thi, isamen tumhara koi dosh nahin hai. tumane jo kiya, vo tumhara karm tha, ye hi nirdhaarit tha. tum apane aap ko dosh mat do.
Vikrant, abhi bhi pareshan hai, apane aansuon ko rokate hue, Gauri ji ke bejaan sharir par apani nazar dalata hai.
Vikrant: Agar aapako sab maloom tha ki ye sab nirdharit tha, to aapane Rani ji ko bataya kyon nahin? agar aap bata dete to ye khoon kharaba nahin hota.
Jaise hi Vikrant bolata hai, usaki aavaz pachhatave ke bojh se phootane lagati hai.
Vikraant: Gauri ji abhi aisee bejaan nahin padi hoti. Anandita, aur baki sainik jinhonen apani jaan meri vajah se gavayi, sab abhi jinda hote.
Guru ma karunamay drshti se use santvana dene ka prayas karati hain.
Guru ma: Main niyati ko rok nahin sakati, aur na hi tum. jo hona hai vo ho ke rahega. isame tum...
Isase pahale ki Guru ma apani bat puri kar pati, Vkrant achanak Rani ki or badh jata hai. Wo uske pairon par ghutanon ke bal gir jaata hai, usake chehare se aansu bahate hue kshama ki bhikh mangata hain. Is apratyashit mod se hairan Rani ko samajh nahin aa raha ki vah kaise pratikriya de. Vikrant uthata hain aur hath jodakar bolta hain.
Vikrant: Mujhe maaf kar dijie ga, jo maine aapake sath kiya, use main badal nahin sakata, bs maafi hee mang sakata hoon.
Rani, abhi abhi sthiti se nipat rahi hai, Vikrant ki aankhon mein dekhatee hai. Wo na keval unse balki un logo se bhi maafi mangata hai jo waha khade ye sab dekh rahe the, aur dard ke bich mukti ka ek marmik kshan nirmit karata hai. Log stabdh rah jalate hain kyonki Vikrant apane karyon se bojhil hokar ghar ki or chala jata hai. Usake pashchatap ka bojh hava mein bana hua hai, jisane un logo ke dilon par ek amit chhap chhodi hai jinhone is manzar ko dekha hai.
Vikrant ke jane ke bad, sabhi log mrit logo ke samman se uthate he, aur sabhi ko ek sath agni dah diya jata hai, Kusum ko bhi. Guru ma ke kahe anusar "Jab tak wo jinda thi wo dusman thi, Uske marne ke bad dusmani bhi khatam ho gayi thi".
Idhar Vikrant ghar pe aa kar khud ko bandh kar leta hai, wo ghar aakar bhi khub roya, jab tak uski aankhe sukh na gayi. Vikrant ne khud ko iss kadar akela kar liya tha, ki na hi wo ghar se bahar aata, na kisi se bat krta. Jab bhi bahar aata, khamoshi se apna kam nipta aur fir se khud ko kaid kr leta.
Din pe din bit rahe the, Rajgya me sabhi log pehle ki tarah rehne lage the. Vikrant abhi bhi apne me kaid huva tha, koy usse bat karne ki koshish karta to use talta huva, aage badh jata. Dhi dhire wo pehle se alag dikhne laga tha. Lambi dadhi, kandhe tak lambe bal. Apni wahi purant pent, aur vahi ladai me tuta huva shirt pehne. Apne main hi khoya huva, jo pehle gaane gun gunata huva chalta, ab wo sant aur khud main duba huva, aata aur chala jata.
Aese hi do mahine ke waqt bit gaya. Ek sainik daudate huvi aati hai, aur Vikrant ke ghar ke darwaze ko khatakhataya. Vikrant andar se hi chilata huva bolta hai.
Vikrant(Gusse me): Kon hai?
Sainik: Mahal se Rani ne aapko bulaya hai.
Vikrant: Muje kisi se nahi milna hai.
Sainik: Ye aapki bhalai ke liye hi hai, Sath me Guru ma ne bhi hai.
Vikrant thodi dair sochata hai, aur darwaza kholta hai.
Vikrant: Kya kam hai unko?
Sainik: Ye to mujhe nahi bata hai, par aapko turant bulaya hai.
Vikrant jese hal me tha, wese hi chal deta hai. Jaha se Vikrant ja raha tha, log usse dekhne ke liye ruk ja rhe the, par Vikrant kisi ki bhi aur dekhe Bina bas chale ja raha tha, sainik ke sath. Jese hi wo Mahal me pahuche, Sainik ne Vikrant ko darbaar ki aur jane ko kaha aur khud vahi ruk gayi. Vikrant sainik ki bat sun darbaar ki aur chal padta hai. Darbaar me pahuch wo dekta hai ki Vaha sirf teen log hi hai, Guru ma, Rani Chandralekha aur Vasundhara. Vikrant ka ye alag roop dekh teeno hairan the. Vikrant kya se kya ban betha tha.
Vikrant: Kyu bulaya mujhe? Ab kis ki jaan leni hai?
Guru ma: Kisi ki bhi nahi, Hume to bas tumse milna tha. Tumse bat karni thi.
Vikrant: Me yaha sirf baat karne nahi aaya hu, Aapko kuch kam ho to bolo, Varna me apne Ghar vapis ja raha hu.
Guru ma: Usi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaya gaya hai, Vikrant.
Guru ma: Tumhare apne ghar main jane ka waqt aa gya hai, tumhare apne ghar, apne waqt main.
Guru ma ki bat sun Vikrant chauk padta hai, usse yakin nahi ho raha tha ki wo sach me ye sun raha hai.
Rani: Ha Vikrant, Humne aapko issi liye bulaya hai ki aapko ye khabar bata sake.
Vikrant ki aankhe chamak uthati hai.
Vikrant: Kya main sach me ja sakta hu?
Guru Ma: Ha ha, ab tum sach main ja sakte ho, apne ghar.
Vikrant khusi main jhum uthata hai, uski khusi ki awaz pure darbaar me gunj uthi thi. Tino Vikrant ko aesa khus dekh wo bhi khus ho gaye the. Jiss Vikrant ko aate huve unhone dekha tha, aur jo abhi khusi me jum rha tha dono alag dikh rahe the.
Fir achanak use sab kuch yaad aa gya, wo firse pehle ki tarah sant ho gya. Vikrant ko firse sant hota dekh Rain hairani se bolti hai.
Rani: Vikrant, Hume maf kar do. Hmari vajah se aap kya se kya ban gaye.
Vikrant: Aap aesa mat boliye, Jo huva meri vajah se huva hai. Ab main chala jaunga to aap sab santi se reh paoge.
Guru ma bich me bol padti hai.
Guru ma: Vikrant abhi hmare pass bat karne ka waqt nahi hai. Tumhe abhi niklna hoga. Aur tumhare pass Aaj raat ka hi waqt hai. Uske bad pata nahi kab ye waqt vapis aayega.
Vikrant: Par main jaunga kese?
Guru ma: tumhe samundar main 7 yojna tak jana hoga, tab jakar tumhe wo dwar milega Jo tumhe apne waqt main le jayega.
Vikrant: 1 yojan mane kamse kam 14 km, yani 98 se 99 km?
Vikrant: Itne time me thodi hai? Wo bhi iss waqt ki naav me. Main nahi pahuch paunga.
Guru ma: Ek kam karo 4 sainik ko apne sath naav main le jao, jese hi tumhe tufan ki nisani dikhay de, tumhe uski tairte huve akele jana hoga.
Vikrant: Par isme khatara hai, main meri vajah se ab kisi ek bhi jaan khatare me nahi dalna chata.
Vasundhara: Main sath chalungi.
Vikrant: Nahi Vasundhara ji, mene pehle hi aapki jaan khatre me daal di thi, aap nahi chal sakti.
Vasundhara: Tumhe, is rajya main mai hi layi thi, aur tumhe yaha se vida bhi main hi karungi.
Vikrant: Par...
Guru ma: Vikrant tumhare pass waqt nahi hai, agar tum abhi nahi nikle to fir pata nahi kab ye waqt aayega.
Rani: Vikrant, Guru ma sahi keh rahi hai, aapko abhi niklna hoga.
Vikrant sabhi ki bat man leta hai, aur jane ke liye taiyar ho jata hai. Vasundhara apne sath 3 aur sainko ko sath lene ka kehti hai. Is tarh kul 5 log jaane wale the. Vikrant Rani se kehta hai,
Vikrant: Rani ji, Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dijiye ga, mene jo bhi aap ke aur aapke rajya ke logo ke sath kiya.
Rani: Iski koy jarurat nahi he, aap nischit ho kar jaiye apne ghar, aapki ma aapki rah dekh rahi hongi.
Apni ma ki bat sun Vikrant khus ho jata hai, aur Guru ma ke charan chu kar wo bahar ki chal padta hai. Jese hi Vikrant bahar aata hai, Rajya ke pure log mahal ke bahar khade the. Unhe dekh Vikrant chauk padta hai. Rani piche se chalti huvi aati hai aur bolti hai.
Rani: In sabhi ko humne bulaya hai. Apne rakhshak ko akhari bar dekhne ke liye.
Apne samne sabhi ko dekh, Vikrant ki aankhon main paani aa jata hai, aur sabse ek bar firse mafi mangta hai. Aur unse bich me hote huve, aage ki aur badh jata hai.
Vikrant, Vasundhara aur baki k 3 sainik chalte huve rajya ke bahari dwar tak aate hai, aur unke piche piche sabhi log. Vikrant ek bar piche mudta hai, aur sabhi ko dekhta hai. Ek bar Prakriti Dweep ki jamin ko chuta hai, aur dwar se hota huva bahar aata hai. Vikrant ke bahar aate hi, dwar firse bandh hojata hai.
Pancho log samundar ki aur chal padte hai, Vaha pahuch Unke liye taiyar ki gayi naav par pancho svahar ho jate hai. Aur ek sath sabhi chappu chalate huve samundar me aage ki aur badhne lagte hai. 5 log ek gati main chalate huve aage ki aur badhe ja rahe the.
Samundar me karib 6 yojan ja chuke the, Rat ka waqt ho gya tha. Aage jese bhavar bana ho aese awaz aa rahi thi, Samundar me tufan ka mahol ho chala tha. Vikrant vahi naav rokne ko keh deta hai. Charo se aakhri bar mil, wo apne sath laye huve lakdi ke tukde ke sahare samundar me kud padta hai. Aur jiss aur bhavar ki awaz aa rahi thi uski aur terne lagta hai. Vasundhara sainik ko le vapis chali jati hai.
Jese jese Vikrant aage badh raha tha, samundar me tufan badh raha tha, Vikrant ko aage badhne me dikkat ho rahi thi. Samundar main pani ki leharon se mar khata huva, yaha se waka feka ja raha tha. Aur achanak wo andar ki aur khich gaya. Aur usme hi kho gaya.
The End of Secret Island
Aa gaya bhai aa gaya update kiya baat hain bhai bahot bahot bahot jada jabardast tha. Bhai update dete rehna bhai story bahot pyaari hain bhai. Dil khush ho gaya update milne se. Bhai aapne wada pura kiya update bahot jabardast tha. Bhai next update jaldi dena bhai sabar nahi ho raha bahot maja aaya
bhai bahut mast or jabardast update, kusum mar gae Gauri ke lie bahut bura lag rha hai ki vo mar gae, par waiting ki aage kya hoga Vikrant ke saath or rajya ke saath
Very nice update bro.
Nice update
Maja bahot kam bolna hoga dil khush gaya bhai. Next update ka besabri se intajaar rahegaa
Nice
Thank you, New update postedBahot hi badhia update tha, aur Gauri ji ke bina Vikrant to sant kon karega