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Update 3
Mai apne dosto se bat kar ke apne room me chala gaya fir thodi der dhyan lagaya aur so gaya.
Dusre din subah uth kar pahle dhyan lagaya aur gurudev se milne chala gaya.
Mai- Pranam Gurudev
Gurudev- yasashavi bhav putra.
Mai- Gurudev ab mujhe agya dijiye mai yaha se nikalne ke liye taiyar hu.
Gurudev- Putra tumhe yaha se sidha mumbai Jana hai aur waha jakar tumhe apna namankan mumbai biswa vidyalay me karwana hai (ek letter dete huye) Ye letter tum us biswa vidyalay ke pradhanadhyapak ko de wo tum logo ka namankan apne biswa vidyalay me kar dega.
(Dusra letter dete huye) Aur ye lette tumhe narayan malhotra ko dena hai wo mumbai ke ek janemane business man hai agar wo is letter ko padh kar tumhara sadi apne poti se kara dete hai to thik hai anyatha tum mere guru dakshina se ajad ho jaoge.
Mai- Thik hai gurudev aur koi agya gurudev.
Gurudev- prithvi par kali shaktiyon ka aur bure logo ka kuchh jyada hi prabhav padne laga hai is liye tumhe in sab ka khatma karna hoga aur achhai ka raksha karna hoga.
Aur ye sab karne ke liye tumhe shakti ke sath sath apna ek alag pahchan bhi banana hoga aur iske liye tumhe chahiye dhan kyuki tum har jagah par apna shaktiyon ko nhi dikha sakte.
Mai- Thik hai gurudev mai apke bato ko yad rakhunga.
Gurudev- Aur ha tum waha par ek normal insan ban kar hi rahoge ek bat yad rakhna jab bahut jyada jaruri na ho jaye tum apne divya shaktiyo ka istemal nhi karoge.
Tum divya shaktiyo ka istemal sirf kali shaktiyo ke khilaf hi karoge aur aam insan ke sath tum sirf apna sharirik bal ka hi prayog karoge.
Mai- jaisi apki aagya gurudev.
Gurudev- Thik hai tum jaa sakte ho aur ha jane se pahle ye kuchh chije hai jo tumhari hai jab tum mile the to ye chije tumhare sath hi thi.
Iske bad gurudev ne mujhe ek locket aur ek diamond diya jise lekar mai waha se apne dosto ke pass chala aaya.
Mai us locket ko apne gale me pahan liya aur us diamond ko apne saman ke sath rakh liya idhar mere sare dost bhi waha se nikalne ke liye apna apna taiyari kar liye the ye dekh kar maine bola.
Mai- Dosto ham mumbai to ja rahe hai lekin waha par hame apne shaktiyon ko sabse chhupa kar rakhna hoga agar waha hame kisi muskil se samna ho gaya aur wo koi mamuli insan ho to ham sirf apna sharirik shakti ka hi use karenge ham apne divya shaktiyo ka use sirf kali shaktiyon se ladne ke liye hi karna hoga.
Karan- Thik hai bhai tum jaisa bol rahe ho ham waisa hi karenge.
Mai- Aur ha hamlog waha par anjan ki tarah rahenge waha par jane ke bad na mai tumhe janta hu aur na tum log mujhe ham log waha jane ke bad char gut me bat jayenge
Aur jab jarurat hogi to ham aapas me telepathy se bat kar lenge.
Mai aur deepak akele akele rahenge karan aur sandhya ek sath aur rohan aur dipti ek sath rahenge.
Ham sab ko ek alag alag business taiyar karna hoga aur ye tum kaise karte ho ye tumpar hai.
Pancho ek sath- ham samajh gaye bhai ham Aisa hi karenge.
Mai- To thik hai ab ham chalte hai.
Mumbai India ka ek sundar sa sahar jise log dilwalo ka sahar bhi kahte hai isi sahar me ek bangla hai jiska name hai malhotra house usi malhotra house ke ek room me ek ladki soyi huyi thi tabhi waha par ek aurat aati hai aur bolti hai.
Aurat- Dekho is maharani ko ye abhi tak so rahi hai pata nhi kya hoga is ladki ka.
(Us ladki ko uthate huye bolti hai)
Shanaya beta wo Shanaya beta chalo jaldi se uto dekho tumhare collage jane ka samay ho gaya hai.
Ye hai Shanaya malhotra apne kahani ka nayika aur ye aurat jo unko utha rahi hai ye hai Shanaya ka mom puspa malhotra.
Bar bar puspa apni beti Shanaya ko hila kar jagati hai jisse pareshan ho kar Shanaya bolti hai.
Shanaya- Kya hai mom aap chain se sone bhi nhi dete please mom thoda sa aur sone dijiye na.
Puspa- nhi bilkul nhi ab tum nhi so sakti hai kyuki tumhare collage ka samay ho gaya hai.
Shanaya collage ke name sun ka turant apne bed se uth jati hai aur apne mom se puchhti hai.
Shanaya- Time kya hua hai mom.
Pushpa- Abhi jyada samay nhi huya hai bas 9 hi baje hai.
Shanaya- Kya 9 baj gaye mom apne mujhe pahle kyu nhi jagaya ab to mai late ho jaungi.
Pushpa- mai tumko kab se jaga rahi hu lekin tumhari ye nind hai jo tutegi tab na.
Iske bad Shanaya jaldi se bathroom jakar fresh hoti hai aur jaldi jaldi se taiyar hokar bina kuchh khaye hi collage ke liye nikal jati hai.
Idhar mai bhi apne dosto ke sath mumbai pahuch gaya tha mumbai pahuchne ke bad hamlog alag alag ho gaye fir mai waha se paidal hi nikal gaya mai waha charo taraf dekhte huye jaa raha tha kyuki mai bhid bhad wale ilake me pahli bar aaya tha mere sare dost sahar me aate jate rahte the lekin mai sirf apne traning par hi dhyan deta tha isliye mai kabhi ashram se bahar nhi nikla.
Jab mai mumbai aaya to yaha ke chakachaundh aur bhid bhad ko dekh kar chauk gaya mujhe yaha ke imarte dekh kar ascharya ho raha tha.
Idhar jab mai waha par sare chijo ko ghum ghum kar dekh raha tha to wahi sare log mujhe ghum ghum kar dekh rahe the kyuki mere pahnava hi aisa tha mai ek dhoti aur kurta pahna huya tha mere aurto ke jaise bade bade bal the jo mai choti banaye huye the.
jab wo log mujhe is tarah se gur kar dekh rahe the to mai sochne laga ki ye log mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai kya ye log mere pahnave se mujhe jaj kar rahe hai fir kuchh soch kar usne un par dhyan dena chhod diya aur waha se aage badh gaye wo abhi sadak ke kinare kinare chal raha tha tabhi waha se ek gadi bahut hi speed me nikla aur aage jakar divider se takra gaya accident bahut tagda huya tha us gadi me jo bhi hoga uska bachna asambhav tha.
Us gadi ke pass logo ke bhid jama hone laga to maine bhi waha ja kar dekhne ka man banaya jab mai waha pahucha to dekha ki us gadi ka driver wahi mar gaya tha aur uske pichhle seat par ek adhed umra ka adami baitha huya tha wo kafi ghayal ho gaya tha aur wo behosh tha.
Waha par jitne bhi adami the sab khada ho kar sirf tamasha dekha rahe the us adhed umra ke adami ko koi aage badh kar nikalne nhi gaya ye dekh kar mujhe bahut dukh huya ki ye duniya kitna aphswarthi hai yaha kisi ko kisi se koi matlab nhi hai yaha bas sab dusro ko dekh kar unka mazak banate hai.
Fir mai aage badh kar us adhed umra ke adami ko bahar nikala aur fir us driver ko bhi gadi se bahar nikala us adhed umra ke adami ko bahut jyada chote aayi thi is liye uska khoon bhi bahut badh raha tha is liye mai uske kuchh nasho ko dabaya to us adami ka khoon bahana band ho gaya.
idhar un sab me se koi ambulance ko call kar diya tha is liye waha turant hi ek ambulance pahuch gaya fir maine un dono adami ko ambulance chadhane me madad ki waha par police bhu pahuch gayi thi jab police walo ne mujhe us adami ke itna madat karte huye dekha to ek police wale ne mujhse bola.
Police- Bhai aaj ke jamane me koi kisi ka madat nhi karta fir bhi tum inka madat kar rahe ho ye tumhra koi ristedar hai kya.
Mai- Nhi ye mera koi ristedar nhi hai bas mai inka madat insaniyat ke nate kar raha tha.
Police- Aaj ke jamane me tum jaisa adami milna bahut muskil hai jo dusro ki madat bina koi swarth ke kare.
Abhi hamlog aapas ne bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi ambulance ke sath me aaya ek doctor bola.
Doctor- Ye adami itna ghayal hai fir bhi iska khoon kyu nhi bah raha hai.
Doctor ke bat sun kar us bhid me se hi ek adami ne bola.
Adami- Maine dekha ki ye gawar jaise dikhne wala adami ne us adami ko gadi se nikalne ke bad us adami ke sath kuchh kiya tha tabhi uska khoon bahana band ho gaya tha jarur ye us adami ko marna chah raha hoga.
Mai us adami ke bat sun kar chauk gaya aur use ghur kar dekhne laga mera man kar raha tha ki abhi mai us adami ko achha sabak sikhayu lekin kamjoro par hath uthana ye mere usool ke khilaf tha is liye mai usko ignore kar ke us doctor se bola.
Mai- Doctor sahab maine hi us adami ke kuchh nasho ko daba kar uska khoon roka hai.
Doctor- ( Chaukte huye) Kya sach me lekin tum aise kaise kar paye kahi tum Acupuncture bidhi to nhi jante.
Mai- Apne thik socha doctor mujhe thoda bahut acupuncture bidhi ka gyan hai.
Doctor- well done young boy mujhe tumse mill kar khusi huyi mera name Dr. Amit hai aur city hospital me kam karta hu kabhi meri jarurat ho to mujhe yad jarur karna.
Mai- Dhanyabad doctor Amit mujhe aapse mil kar Kushi huyi waise mera name Pratik hai.
Fir doctor Us adami ko ambulance me dalte hai aur fir mujhse puchhte hai.
Dr. Amit- Kya is marij ke sath koi aur bhi hai.
Mai- Nhi dr. Amit is gadi me sirf ye driver aur ye admi hi the.
Dr. Amit- Woh To jabtak is marij ke gharwale nhi aa jate apko mere sath hospital chalna hoga.
Mai- Thik hai dr. Amit chaliye mai chalne ke liye taiyar hu.
Iske bad mai bhi us ambulance me baith kar us marij ke sath hospital aa jata hu hospital aane ke bad doctor ne us adami ke mobile se hi uske ghar par inform kar dete hai aur fir us adami ka ilaz suru kar dete hai Thodi der bad ek adami aata hai jo us adhed umra ke adami ka beta tha jab wo waha aa jata hai to mai dr. Ko bol kar waha se jane lagta hu abhi mai us hospital se bahar hi nikalne wala tha ki tabhi kuchh wardboy ek strecher par ek 10 sal ke bache ko lekar aa rahe the aur us bache ke sath ek adami aur ek aurat bhi thi us aurat ke ro ro kar bura hal tha wo aurat aur admi bar bar doctor doctor chila rahe the.
Mai jab us ladke ko dekha to chauk gaya kyuki us ladke ki aankh uper ki or uthi huyi thi aur wo ladka behosh tha jab maine us ladke ko apne Divya dristhi se dekha to mujhe pata chal gaya use kya bimari hai darasal us ladke ko ek gambhir bimari thi jise sayad hi koi doctor thik kar sakta tha.
Mai ye dekh kar waha par ruk gaya aur dekhne laga ki doctor is bimari ka ilaz kaise karte hai kuchh der bad us ladke ko operation theater me leke Jaya gaya aur doctor log jaldi jaldi se us bache ki ilaz karne lage kuchh der tak ilaz karne ke bad doctor nirash ho kar bahar aa gaye aur us adami se bole.
Doctor- Sir mujhe ye samajh me nhi aa raha ki apke ladke ko huya kya hai mai uske bimari ko pakad hi nhi paa raha hu.
Doctor ke bat sun kar wo adami bhadak gaya aur guse me bola.
Adami- Jab tumlog ek bimari ka pata hi nhi kar paa rahe to tum logo ko Doctor kisne bana diya agar mere bete ko kuchh bhi huya na to na tum rahoge aur na hi tumhara ye hospital.
Doctor- Dekhiye sir mai kosish kar raha hu aur maine apke ladke ka blood sample bhi diagnosis ke liye bhej diya hai ab report aane ke bad hi pata chalega ki apke ladke ko kya huya hai.
Adami- mujhe kuchh nhi sunna hai doctor mujhe bas mere bete ko thik kar do nhi to tum nhi jante ki tum logo ke sath kya hoga.
Mai waha khada ho kar unlogo ke bat ko kabse sun raha tha jab mujhse bardast nhi huya to maine bola.
Mai- Apke ladke ko ye log kabhi bhi bata nhi sakte kyuki uski bimari ko ye log pakad hi nhi sakte.
Doctor- Ye ladke tum ye kya bole jaa rahe ho
(Mujhe uper ne niche tak dekhte huye) Tum to dekhne me ekdam gao dehat ka gawar lagte ho tumhe kaise pata ki ham uska bimari ko pakad nhi sakte tum chup chap jao aur hame apna kam karne do.
Mai- Mai bhale hi gao dehat se aaya hu lekin mujhe pata hai ki us ladke ko kon si bimari hai aur use kaise thik kiya jaa sakta hai aap log use yaha rakh kar sirf janch hi karte rah jayenge lekin us ladke ko bacha nhi payenge.
Mere bat ko sun kar us adami ko gusa aa gaya aur wo guse me bola.
Adami- Tum ye kya bakwas lagaye huye ye log itne bade bade doctor hai aur ye log hi mere bete ko bacha nhi sakenge.
Agar tum ek shabd aur bole to mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.
Mai- Mera kam tha apko batana aap mane ya na mane lekin is ladke ko mere shiva koi aur nhi thik kar sakta hai.
Adami- Bahut ho gaya tera bakwas tumhe yaha aane kisne diya(fir doctor ko) Doctor apne gaurd ko bulao aur is ladke ko dhake mar kar bahar nikalo.
Is admi ke sath jo aurat thi wo kabse chup chap roye jaa rahi thi wo mere pas aakar boli.
Aurat- Kya aap sach bol rahe ho kya aap mere bete ko bacha sakte ho.
Mai- Ha mai apke bete ko bacha sakta hu.
Doctor- Madam aap kaha is gawar ka bat sun rahi ho ye aise hi bol raha hai jarur ye koi thag hoga aajkal log aise hi logo ko lutna start kar diye hai.
Aurat- Tum chup raho tumse to kuchh ho nhi Raha hai aur jo mere bete ko bachane aaya hai use bhi tum yaha se bhagana chahte ho.
Doctor- Madam mere bat ko maniye ye ek thag hi hai achha chaliye mante hai ye ek doctor hai aur apke bete ko bacha lega to isse puchhiye ki ye doctor ki digree kaha se liya hai ye padha bhi hai ya sachmuch ka gawar hi hai.
Us doctor ke bat sun kar wo aurat soch me pad jati hai aur fir mujhse puchhti hai.
Aurat- Kya tumhare pass doctor ka digree hai tum kaha se padhayi kiye ho.
Mai- Nhi madam mere pass koi digree nhi hai lekin mere gurudev ne mujhe ayurvedic ka bahut Sara gyan diya hai mai sach bol raha hu mai apke bete ko bacha lunga.
Doctor- Dekha na madam iske pass koi digree nhi hai ye jhuth bol raha hai ye apko lutne aaya hai.
Doctor ke bat sun kar us aurat ko doctor par biswas hone laga aur wo mujhe guse se ghurte huye boli.
Aurat- chhi hai tum jaise insan par tum is waqt bhi mujhe lutne aaye ho tum chup chap yaha se chale jao nhi to mai police ko bula lungi.
Mai- Thik hai madam mai jata hu lekin meri ek bat yad rakhiyega apke ladke ke pass jyada samay nhi hai abhi kuchh der me hi apke ladke ka halat aur kharab ho jayega use khoon ka ulti hoga.
Agar apka man badal jaye aur mujhse apne bete ka ilaz karwane ke liye taiyar ho jaye to mai bahar hi rahunga aap mere pass aa jana.
Itna bol kar mai waha se bahar nikal gaya
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Super... Pratik ki new journey start Ho gai hai.. Iss bachhe ka ilaaz krke shayad yahi se pratik apne kaam ko start krega