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ThanksAwesome update
Ab tou pratik ke Paisa hi Paisa ho gaya hai but pratik per kya kisi ne nazar rakha hai
Thanks bro for your lovely comments aise hi sath bane raheFantastic story build up. You have showed great knowledge of Antique and it's history. Nice build up of emotions from Shanya and Payal which can develop in great interaction between them. Overall very good going.
Thanks bro for your lovely comments aise hi sath bane raheOne of the best story in this forum fantastic story and yr writing skills are too good and the in which the story is goving very smooth and in story mode which I like more instead of writing porn directly. Mind blowing updatewaiting for amazing update
Thanks bro for your lovely comments aise hi sath bane rahePratik ne Shanaya ke liye Jo murty khareed wayi kia woh uske dada ko Pasand aayegi
Or agar nahi Aayi tow ek Baar fir yeh log Pratik ko poori family ke samne beizzat karenge or Shanaya ki nazer me Jo imagine achchi huwi h fir se kharab ho jayegi
Pratik ne Ratan Mishra ka ghamad tod dia or antique ke baare me Bata ker uska Dil Jeet lia 5 crore me khareed ker uska bhi nuksan nahi hone dia jabki Ratan free me dene ko tayyar tha
Bowl ko tod usme se Heera nikanla kisi ne soch bhi nahi hoga
Pratik ne in heero Ratan ko bech ker seedha 5 crore ka faida hasil kia or saath in antique ko bech 5 crore ka or faida huwa kuch Mila ker seedha seedha 10 crore ka faida sahi
Kamyabi ki pehli seedhi per qadam rakh dia Pratik ne
Ab launda kon Jo Pratik per nazer rakh raha tha or usne kisko kia massage kia
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Or khaas ker party me kia hota h
Behtareen zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai