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Siraj Patel

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:applause:wow Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab Brilliant update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind blowing,
Aapne sari baton ko bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya hai.
Ek ek baat Itni detail Mein likhi Gayi Hai Jaise Kahani na hokar sab kuch asliyat mein ghatit ho raha ho,
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Keep going
We will wait for next update

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Shandar update bhai

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It's good to see that the story is getting back on track.
 
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Oh to Deepika or Neelam mere kans mama ki beti hai or Neelam meri sagi bahan bhi hai tabhi Mai sochu ki itni takat kha se aayi us ke pass.

Sher Singh - ha uska bhi rista neel se hai to sharirik bl to hona lajmi hai or rhi tumhari miss ki bat to unka bhi rista neel garh se hai lekin vo Kon hai ye umhe sahi samay aane ke bad pata chal jayega, or kuch puchhna hai tumhe.

Mai - nhi bs itna hi janna tha dhanyvad !

Fir mere ander se Sher Singh ki aawaj aani band ho gyi , mai vha pr baith kr sochne lga ki usi kans mama ke karan Mai itne sal se apne pariwar se dur hu iska badla to mai le kr rahunga.
Mai apne man me kha - Mama tumhara bura wakt suru ho gya hai or tum Tak pahuchne ki meri sidhi hogi Deepika.

Fir Mai ghar aa gya or dinner karne le bad pahle bua ke room me gya unke ubhre huye pet ko sahlate huye bat kiya or ek chota sa kiss de kr mai samita ke pass gya or room ka gate band kr sidha uske upar kud gya vo bistar pr leti hui thi or mai us ke upar tha mai uske boobs ko dabate huye kiss karne laga samita bhi mera pura sath de rhi thi fir jab hamari sans fulne ko hui tab jake hum ne kiss toda.
Samita - aisa bhi koi karta hai kya ji.
Mai - Maine Kya kiya mai to apne biwi se pyar kr rha tha.

Samita - bde aaye biwi se pyar karne vale, biwi se koi chhup chhup ke pyar nhi krte.
Mai - lekin chhup chhup ke milne se milne ka maja to aayega.....

Samita - ab ye song gana band kro or ye batao ki aise kab tak hum duniya valo se chupate rhenge.


Mai - iska sahi samay nhi aaya hai samita samjha kro kya tumhe mujh pr bharosa nhi hai.

Samita- tumhare upar to apne aap se bhi jayada bharosa karti hu or mai to aise hi bol rhi thi mujhe koi jaldi nhi hai .
Mai - chalo thik hai ab mai chalta hu nhi to vo dono bhi mujhe room me na pakar dhudhna suru na kr de .
Fir mai ek chota sa kiss dekr or good night bol kr nikal gya.
Fir pahucha Kavita ke pas jo pata nhi kya soch rhi thi.

Mai - Kya soch rhi ho janeman.

Kavita - kuch nhi bs tumhare bare me hi soch rhi thi ki hum ne santi se akele me kitne pal bitaye hai .

Mai - ye bat to hai Mai tumhare sath akele me wakt hi kha bitaye hai, thik hai Mai promise krta hu ki ek din college na jake hum dono khi ghumne chalenge .
Kavita - mai us din ka be sabri se intjar karungi.
Fir Mai us ko bhi kiss kr ke or good night bol kr nikal gya meri chulbul baby doll ke pas jab Mai us ke room me gya to dekha ki vo pet ke bal let kr kuch padh rhi thi usko mere aane ki aahat bhi nhi hui, Mai chup chap dhire dhire kr ke uske pas gya or uski gand me chikoti kat di .

Kavya- aaaauchhh kamine aisa bhi koi karta hai mai tumhe nhi chodungi.

Ye bol kr just vo palti hi thi ki mai uske upar chad gya or uske dono hatho ko pakad kr daba diya vo hil bhi nhi pa rhi thi bs chatpta rhi thi.

Kavya - aaahhh kamine chhod mera hath fir tumhe batati hu.

Mai - chhodne ke liye to nhi pakda hai tumhara hath .
Fir vo kuch or bol hi nhi pai kyo ki maine uske hotho ko hi band kr diya the Matlab kiss krna suru kr diya pahle to nhi magar bad me vo bhi mere pura sath dene lagi or hum kissing me kho se gye.

Jab dono ki sans fulne lagi tab jakar kiss toda kavya jab tak apni sans normal kr pati tab tak mai kavya ke room se nikal kr apne room me aa gya.

Fir kuch der tak lete huye sochta rha ki kya kru fir mobile se sneha didi ko call kiya bahut din ho gye the unse bat kiye huye, do teen ring ke bad call pick kiya udhar se didi ki aawaj aayi

Sneha - kyo bhai ab aayi apni bahan ki yad, itne dino se ek call bhi nhi Kiya or na hume krne ko bola hai ek louta tu hi to bhai hai hamara or tu hai ki bat bhi nhi krta.

Mai - bs bs didi kya bachche ki jaan hi let logi kya thoda sans bhi le lo kitna datogi.
Sneha - ha ha mai to datati hu na isi karan tu ek phone bhi nhi karta .

Ye bol kr didi rone lgi ,sach hi to tha ki Mai hi kisi ko phone pr bat krne se mna kiya tha , Maine saf kah diya tha ki phone mai hi karunga aap log koi mujhe phone mat krna, iska bhi ek karan tha ki mujhe bhi un logo ki yad aati thi or mai kamjor nhi padna chahta tha .
Mai - sorry didi pahle aap ye rona band kro nhi to mai phone rakh dunga.
Sneha - ha ha cut kr de call jab bat hi nhi karni hoti to lagata kyo hai.

Mai - Nhi didi aisi koi bat nhi hai pahle aap rona band kro please aapko meri kasam.

Didi ne rona to band kr diya pr siskne ki aawaje aa rhi thi.
Sneha - chal suna tu vha thik to hai or baki sab kaise hai.
Mai - mai bhi thik hu or baki sab bhi thik hai or ghar pr sab kaise hai or meri baki ki dono bahne kha hai.
Sneha - ghar me sab thik hai bs dadi ji thoda bimar hai ab bistar se uth nhi pati or vo dono bhi honge apne room me kyo bat karau kya unlogo se .

Mai - nhi didi un logo se kabhi or bat kr lunga aap sunao aap kya kr rhi ho.

Sneha - Mai college nhi jati bs exam ke din hi jana hoga or abhi Mai papa ke sath office jati hu .
Mai - kyo college regular kyo nhi jati .
Sneha - bs aise hi .
Mai - aise hi ya koi karan hai.


Sneha- ............
Mai - baton didi chup kyo ho gyi.

Thode udasi si aawaj me

Sneha - nhi bhai aisi koi bat nhi hai tu jayada socha mt kr, chal ab so ja raat bahut ho gyi hai.

Mai - thik hai didi good night bye.
Maine call cut Kiya or sochne lga jarur didi ko kuch pareshani hai or mujhe vo batana nhi chahti Chalo bad me jakar dekh lunga fir Mai so gya kal ke bare me anjan ki mere sath kya hoga.



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Agli subah 5 baje utha or ready ho kr bahar aaya to dekha kavya bhi ready ho kr mera hi wait kr rhi thi.

Kavya - aaj to is shut me kamal lg rhe ho tumhari body bhi is kapde me jach rhi hai ladkiya to aaj aahe bharengi lekin dhayan rhe tum un pr jara bhi dhayan nhi doge.

Kavya ne sach hi kha tha dhire dhire mere body me cuts aane suru ho gye the or mera face bhi or thoda glow krne lga tha.

Fir hum dono nikal gya running ke liye kavya hamesha hi ghar se park tak running krte huye thak jati thi or park me pahuch kr sidhe bench pr baith jati hai lekin mai nhi rukta or fast running karte huye 6-7 round ground ke jarur lagata aaj bhi Mai vaise hi running kr rha tha ki vha pr aayi hui ladkio mujhe dekh kr aahe bhar rhi thi ye kavya bench pr baith kr ye sab dekh kr khus ho rhi thi ki kyo ki mai un pr dhayan nhi de rha tha pr kuch ladkiyo ne jab mujhe good morning wish kiya tab Maine bhi unhe isks javab diya jise dekh kavya mujhe gusse se ghurne lagti or aakhir me jab Mai kavya ke pass baith gya to kavya mere pith me do mukke mar kr bolti


Kavya- Kya jarurat thi un se bat krne ki maine tumhe pahle ki kah diya tha na ki dusri ladkiyo pr dhayan mat dena.

Mai - a re mai kaha un se pahle bat ki vo to mujhe good morning wiss kiya tabhi maine un ko reply diya or agar mai aisa nhi karta to unhe lagta ki Mai attitude dikha rha hu jo mujhe achchha nhi lagta .

Kavya- chalo thik hai lekin aage se dhayan dena ki jayada bat mat karna vo ladki chalu kism ki hongi jo handsome ladko ko dekh kr lar tapkati rahti hai.

Mai - chalo baba college bhi jana hai aaj se ek mission ko bhi suru karna hai.
Kavya- mission kaisa mission.

Mai - tum janti ho na ki Mai apne pariwar walo ko chhod kr tum logo ke sath kyo rahta hu.

Kavya - ha mom ne bataya tha ki tumhare mama ji tumhe marna chahte hai kyo ki tumhari maa ke kahne pr unhone bhi na chahte huye bhi ek bete ki chahat ke karan tumhari mami ko fir se ek beti hi hui, is liye vo tumhe bhi mar kr pure khandan ke Deepak ko bujha dena chahte the.

Mai - ha vhi mama jo apne pariwar sahit bhag gya tha lekin vo ab mujhe mil chuka hai Mai un tak pahuch kr pahle un ko samjhauga fir bhi vo baaj nhi aaye to Mai bhi badla lunga.

Kavya - is Kam me meri jo bhi madad chahiye Mai karne ko taiyar hu.

Mai - thik hai lekin abhi Meri madad sirf Kavita hi kr sakti hai, lekin use samjhana hoga.

Kavya- Chalo ghar chalte hai college jate huye raste me use bhi samjha dena.
Fir hum Ghar AA gye or fresh and clean ho kr breakfast kr ke nikal gye college ki taraf raste me maine Kavita ko bhi mama vali bat batai or kaha ki mujhe tumhari madad chahiye .

Kavita- bolo Mai tumhari hr tarah se madad karne ko taiyar hu.

Mai - to suno Mai Deepika ke jariye mama or unke family tak pahuchna chahta hu ,Mai bhi to janu ki mujhe marne ke piche sirf mama hi hai ya unki family ke logo ne bhi unka sath diya hai is liye sabse pahle mujhe Deepika ko jhuthe pyar ke jal me fasa kr Mai un tak pahuch jauga.

Kavita - Deepika ko fasana to chutkiyo ka kam hai vo to pahle se hi tum pr fida hai .

Mai - wow mere pahla kam to aasani se ho jayega dekhta hu jitni jaldi ho sake Mai mama or unke family valo se bhi mill lunga.
Hum aise hi ja rhe the bate karte huye apne hi dhun me vhi sadak ke kina neelam ki car or gundo ki gadi khadi thi vo meri taraf isara krte huye

Neelam- vo dekho vo ladka hai jise marna hai jaan se nhi balki us ke sirf hath pair hi todne hai or ha unke sath ja rhi un ladkiyo ko kuch nhi hona chahiye samjh gye.

Gunda- ha ha samjh gya apka kam ho jayega.


Fir neelam or uski gang nikal gye college ki taraf or vo gunda apne aadmiyo ko lekar meri taraf badhne laga un gundo ke pas hockey to kisi ke pas rod to koi lakdi ka mota danda rakha hai to koi chain chaku , talwar.

Vo sabhi humari taraf teji se badh rhe the lekin hamara dhayan us taraf nhi gya .
Jab sabhi gunde pass aakar hamara rasta roka tab hame pata chala .

Gundo ko dekh kr Kavita or kavya dono mere pichhe aa kr khada ho gyi.

Mai - kya chahiye tum logo ko hamara rasta kyo roka hai.

Gundo ka leader- hum logo ko to tum se how Matlab hai or agar tum chahte ho ki hum in ladkiyo ko kuch na kre to bhej do inhe.

Mai - Kavita or kavya ko jane ke liye bola lekin vo mujhe akela thodne ko taiyar hi nhi thi tab maine kha

Mai - dekho tum dono college jao mai tumhe vhi milunga or tum dono to janti hi ho ki ye log mera kuch bigad nhi sakte.

Dono- fir bhi hum tumhe akela chhod kr Nhi jayenge.
Mai - tum dono ko meri kasam tum dono yha se chali jao.

Fir na chahte huye bhi undono ko mujhe chhod kr jana pada jab vo log jayda aage nikal gyi tab Mai apne kadam piche karte huye pichhe hatne lga kyo ki mai nhi chahta tha ki koi mujhe in logo ko marte huye dekhe.

Mai - ab bolo kya karna hai.

Gundo ka leader - karna kya hai maro sale ko .
Us gunde ke itna bolte hi mai piche palat or teji se bhaga vo log mere se pichhe ho jate the is liye mai bich bich me ruk ruk kr unhe chidhata tha .

Mai ek maidani ilake me pahucha vha jakar Mai khada ho gya gunde log bhi mujhe doudate huye vha pr pahuch gye sab gunde bhi ruk kr normal hone ke liye jor jor se sans lene lge .

Mai - kyo bhai log thak gye thoda rest kr lo fir Mar lena.

Unme se ek gunda teri to bolte huye mujhe marne ke liye hath me hockey le kr ba badha .

Jab vo mujhe marne ke liye hockey ko meri taraf kiya to mai uske hatho ko pakad kr jhul gya or jab vo niche gira tab Mai uske hatho ko pakad kr mod diya or uske hath ko tod diye .

Kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aaya ki kya hua vo gunda jo mujhe marne aaya tha vo jamin me tadap rha tha or chilla ke krah rha tha uski karahne ki aawaj ko sun kr ek pal ke liye to sabhi gunde bhi dar gye.

Gundo ka leader- abe dekhte kya to sab ke sab jao or maro sale ko.

Sabhi gunde meri taraf badne lge Maine Jo gunda jamin me pada karah rha tha uski tango ko pakad kr ghumate huye sabhi gundo pr uchal kr fek diya .
Or jamin pr padi hui hockey utai or suru ho gya kisi ke pith ko to kisi ke hatho ko to kisi ke tango ko marta gya or jis ke bhi sir ko marta vo dubara uth hi nhi pata tha .Maine un gundo ko itna mara ki vha sirf dard se chillane ki aawaje hi aa rhi thi .
Vha pr her gundo ka kuch na kuch tuta futa tha kisi ki hath tuti thi to kisi ka pair ko tod diye tha or jis ko bhi sir me mara tha uska to sir hi phat gya tha lekin gundo ka leader vaha se bhag gya tha.

Fir Mai bhi apne kapde me lge dhul ko jhad kr nikal gya college ki taraf .







 
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