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Nevil singh

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Update 24

Kavita sarmati huyi good night bol kr nikal gyi

Fir Mai sochne lga samita me mujhe kyo bulaya hai .
Chalo chal kr hi pata krte hai.



Mai samita ke room me gya door khula hi hua tha Mai ander ghus gya.

Samita - door lock kr do.
Maine door lock Kiya or bed ke pass jakar khada ho gya.

Samita- khade kyo ho baith jao.
Mai baith gya or uski taraf dekha to vo koi book padh rhi thi.mai uske chehre ki taraf dekha.
Usne bhi meri taraf dekha or meri aakho me dekhne lagi .
Vo to palke jhapkana bhi bhul gyi thi.


Thodi der bad mere hilane see hos me aayi.

Mai - Kha kho gyi thi madem.
Samita- tumhare in neeli aakho me.
mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tumhare aakho me koi jadu hai Jo bhi tumhari in aakho ko dekh le vo tumhari divani ho jayegi jaise mai ho gyi hu.
Tum ye kisi dusri ladki ko jarur try krna ek bar.

Mai - agar vo ladki bhi meri divani ho gyi to na baba na Mai nhi krunga.

Samita - hamesa paglo jaise hi bate krta hai ladkiya teri divani hongi to teri to aish ho jayegi .

Mai- vo kaise bhala.
Samita - Mai Kya kru is ladke ka kuch bhi nhi smjhta.
Dekh ladkiya teri divani hongi to tu Jo bhi chaye kr sakta hai un ke sath, tu Jo bol vo kregi, tere liye kuch bhi kr degi isi ko to khte hai divani samjha.

Mai - samjh gya krta hu kisi ko try, ye sab chodiye aap ne mujhe rat me kyo bulaya ye batao, mujhe sona bhi hai subah school Jana hai .

Samita - dekho mai tumhare aakho ke chakkar me sab bul hi gyi thi tum ne mujhe bhi divani bana diya hai .
Aaj Mai tumhe kiss krna sikhaungi thik hai.

Mai - (Kavita ko sochte huye Jo abhi those der pahle mujhe kiss krne ko bol rhi thi) ha ha sikhao na.

Samita- pahle Mai tumhe kiss krke bataungi fir tum krna.
Fir vo dhire dhire me pass aayi or mere hotho se hoth Mila kr pahle uper ke hotho ko chusne lgi fir niche vale hotho ko.
Mujhe to bahut hi maja aa rha tha aage or Kya hoga bs yhi soch rha tha.
Thodi der bad vo alag hue.

Samita- kaise laga .
Mai - bahut hi achha LGA.

Samita- ye kiss ki pahli sidhi hai.
Mai - Kya is me bhi sidhi hoti hai .

Samita - ha age age dekhte jao.
Abhi Maine Jo Kiya vo tum kro or kiss ko feel bhi krna.
Mera first time tha to thoda hichkichate huye bhi Mai samita ke hoto ko dekhte huye pas ja hi rha tha ki samita ne mere sir pakda or khich kr mujhe kiss krne lgi.
Mai bhi uske hotho ko chusne lga.
Is bar mujhe or bhi maja aa rha tha.kya naram or mulayam hoth the samita ke , kabhi upar to khabhi niche, hamari sase fulne lagi tab jake humne kiss todo.

Hum gahri sas lene lage, vo fir se mere aakho me dekhne lagi, Mai fir se use hose me laya .
Mai - kha kho jati ho samita .
Samita - tumhare in aakho me. Mai such kahti hu tumhari aakho me jarur kuch jadu hai jisse mai hamesa kho jati hu.

Mai - aapka vaham hoga, aakho me bhi koi jaadu hota hai kya.

Samita - a re meri jaan pyar pahle aakho se hi suru hota hai or dil me utar jata hai.
Aab tu ja nhi to mai aaj hi sab kuch kr baithungi.
Fir Mai bina kuch bole apne room me aa gya or kiss ke bare me sochate huye so gya.

Agli subah mai school ke liye ready hokar dining table pr baith gya .
Kavita or samita mujhe dekh kr muskura rhi thi.
Mai bhi muskura deta tha.
Samita ko dekh kr rat ki bat yad aayi ki mere aakho me jadu hai try to karna hi hai to maine soch is nakchadhi pr try krta hu fir mere aage piche ghume gi .
Ye soch kr mai kavya ki taraf dekha or usne bhi meri taraf dekha abhi mujhe kavya ki taraf dekhte huye 30 sec. Bhi nhi huye ki kisi ne mere jagh pr chimti kati Mai Mai chillaya aauch .

Bua - Kya hua beta.
Samita - sayad chinti hogi .
Mai - ha ha bua chinti hi hai .
Samita mere kan - tum kisi or pr try kro Ghar ki ladkiyo ko to chod do .

Idhar kavya to mere dekhne se hos hi kho baithi thi mere chillane see hos me aayi.

Kavya man me - ye mujhe kya ho gya tha aisa kyo lg RHA tha ki Mai khichi chali ja rhi hu tiger ki taraf lekin ye pagal to kuch samjhta hi nhi.

Fir hum school chalen gye. School me kuch khas nhi hua.
School se ghar aakar dinner kr ke Mai nikal gya apne adde pe

Lekin mujhe nhi pata tha aaj vha kuch ajib hone vala mere sath.....
utsahi update hai bhai
 

Nevil singh

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Update 25

Mai apne aade pr pahuch kr nale ke kinare baith gya or Pani me patathar mar rha tha ki achanak aawaj aayi
Tiger.....
Tiger.....
Tiger......
Kya tum mujhe sun pa rhe ho tiger.

Mai thoda dar gya or idhar udher dekha koi bhi nhi tha, aawaj to mere pass se hi aa rhi thi.

Mai Kon hai samne AA jao nhi to tumhare liye thik nhi hoga.

Fir awaj aayi Mai to tumhare ander hu mujhe idher udher kha dhund rhe ho.
Kya tum mujhse milna chahoge ,daroge to nhi na.

Mai - ha milna chahta hu or mai darunga kyo .
Dar to lg rha tha ki Kon ho sakta hai ,
Dekh leta hu Jo hoga uska bad me sochenge.

Aavaj - haste huye thik hai to apne kamar ke upar se nange ho Matlab kamar ke upar ke jitne bhi kapde pahne hai sab utar do.

Mai - aise kaise utar du tum Kya krne vale to or yha thand bhi hai.

AAwaj - mujhe bahar niklna hai is liye tumhe apne kapde utarne honge .


Fir maine apne kapde utar diye thodi thandi lag rhi thi .
Kuch der bad mujhe mahsus hua ki Meri pith pr kuch ho rha hai .
Mai samjh nhi pa rha tha ki Kya ho rha hai .fir mujhe ek jor ka jhatka lga.
Mai khada tha jhatka lagne ke Karan Mai aage khisak kr jhuk kr khada ho gya.

Achanak mere pichhe se kisi sher ke dahadne ki aawaj aayi Mai palat kr dekha to ek neele rang ka sher mere samne khada tha .

Maine sher to dekhe the vo bhi zoo me magar neele rang ka pahli bar dekh rha hu is liye mujhe dar bhi lag tha itne pas sher Jo tha .

Fir bhi Mai us se pucha kk Kon ho tu or mujhse Kya chahte ho.
Sher - pahle darna band kro or mera Nam hai sher Singh .
Mai - Kya ! Sher singh to mera bhi Nam hai .
Sher- pata hai mujhe sab pata hai or tum mere hi rup ho Jo insani janm liya hai .

Mai - aap Kya bol rhe hai mere to samjh se hi bahar hai or tum to mere samne khada ho to Mai tumhara insani janm kaise hua.

Sher - Mai to ek aans matra hi hu mera astitv tum se hi hai .
Thik hai to mai tumhe pahle apne bare me btata hu fir tumhare bare ke bataunga tab tum samjh jaoge.

Note- yha pr ek chota flash back hoga Jo third person ki jubani hogi.


Yha se hajaro prakash varsh dur ek garh hai jiska Nam Neel garh hai.
(Dosto aap to jante hi hai Neel garh kaisa hai to nhi likhunga.)

Vha ka Mai samrat tha itna saktisali ki koi bhi mujhe se takrane ki kosis nhi krta tha neel garh hi nhi balki aas pas ke jitne bhi garh ke raja the sab meri jay jay kar krte the .
Vhi ek dust raja bhi tha Jo jibran me planet rhta tha Nam bhi jibran hi tha, vo bahut hi khatarnak tha , saitani takto ka swami tha.
Vo kisi ko marta nhi tha balki pura ka pura garh hi nast kr deta tha or kisi vo pata hi nhi chalta ki kaise unka garh nast ho gya kyoki sab kuch prakriyik tarike se hota tha ki is bat pr koi dhayan hi nhi deta tha.
Garho ke nast karne ke badle saitan uski jivan ko badhata tha.

Lekin 4-5 salo me 2-3 garh nast ho gye the jisse aas pas ke garho ke rajao ne samrat sher Singh ko is bat ka pata lagane ko kaha.

Sher Singh- thik hai samrat hone ke nate Mai is bat ki vajah pata karta hu.

Sher Singh ne apni takat ki sahayta se pata lagaya ki ye kam jibran ka hi hai .
Fir usne jibran garh pr hamla kr diya ,
Saitani takto or sachai ki takto me ghamasan yudh hua lekin jeet sachai ki Hui or jibran ko kaid kr liya gya kyoki use mara nhi ja sakta tha ,saitan ne use kai varsh jine ka vardan diya tha is liye sher Singh ne unhe uske hi garh me kaid kr diya.
Pr jyada samay ke liye nhi kyo ki saitan ne use aajad kra diya tha or ye bat sher Singh ko malum nhi hua.

Saitan ne jibran ko bataya ki sher Singh ki takat ke rhte tum uska kuch nhi bigad sakte is liye tumhe sab se pahale uski takat ko hi pana hai or uske liye tumhe kuch bhi karna pde kro,
Usne Kai alag alag jagho se bahut si takat hasil ki hai sabse badi takat hai uski talvar use pane ke bad dhire dhire sabhi takat tum ko hasil ho jayegi.

Sher Singh ko bahut salo bad bad pata chala ki saitan ne jibran ko aajad kra diya hai or vo uski takat ko kisi bhi kimat pr hasil krna chahta hai .
Is bat ki charcha usne apne raj guru se ki or is samsya ka koi samadhan nikalne ko kha.

Bahut hi soch vichar krne ke bad rajguru ne sher Singh ko bataya ki tumhari sari saktiyo ko 9 bhago me bata jayega or tumhe yha murti ke rup me samadhi leni hogi or tumhari aatma is garh ki rakachha kregi jab Tak ke tumhara punrjanm na ho.
Murti yha sachai ka pratik bnegi or yha ke hr logo me chinh ke rup me rhega.
Lekin jaise hi tumhari aatma nye sarir me pravesh kregi is garh ka surkchha kavch tut jayega, is liye tum samay dekh kr hi naya sarir dharan krna.

Fir sher Singh ne apne saktiyo ke 9 hisse kiye, sabhi ko kisi na kisi rup me alag alag jagho par surkchit rakha, or khud murti ke rup me samadhi le li or uski aatma murti me rh kar garh ki rakachha karne lgi .

Idhar jibran ko jab ye bat pata chala ki sher Singh ne apni takat ko khi chhupa diya hai or khud samadhi le li hai to vo uske punrjanm ki rah dekhne lga or jyada se jyada atyachar krne lga taki sher Singh jaldi hi fir se Janm le kyo ki sari saktiyo ke bare me sirf sher Singh hi janta tha

Vo samay bhi AA gha hajaro salo bad jibran ke atyacharo ko dekhte huye Sher Singh ne punrjanm le liya raja xezender ke sasan Kal me

To be continued
wonderful update hai bhai
 
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