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Update 164(b)

agle din baba ne meri aur suman ki shadi kara di humne sab ka aashirwad liya fir unse jane ki baat ki jise sun kr Rambha ko thoda dukh hua kyo ki itne din tak vo humare sath hi thi kuch dino ke liye hi sahi mai us se dur jane vala tha suman ne use gale laga kr apna khayal rakhne ko kaha Maine bhi use apna khayal rakhne aur jaldi aane ka bol kr baki sab se vida le kr suman ke sath vaha se nikal gya aur ek maidani Ariya me aa gaya fir jinn ne jo mujhe ring di thi use ghisne laga aur jinn ko aane ke liye yaad krne laga kuch hi der me humare samne ek Vishal kaay jinn pragat ho gaya jise dekh kr suman bhi dar se mere pichhe aa gyi tabhi vo jinn bola

jinn: aap jinn lok jane ke liye surveer.

mai : ji hum jaane ke liye taiyar hai.

fir jinn ne apna bada sa panja jamin par rakha aur kaha ki aap dono is pe aa jaiye tab maine suman ka hath pakad kar jinn ke hatheli par aa gaya fir jinn ne apna panja upar uthaya aur laga aasmaan mein udne suman ko uchaiyon se bahut dar lag raha tha isliye usne mujhe kas kar pakda hua tha 2 ghante aasmaan mein safar krne ke baad vo hume ek bade se jawlamukhi ke upar le aaya.

suman to niche ka najara dekh kar to bahut hi jayda dar gyi kyo ki neche us bade se jawlamukhi se laga tar garam lava pighal kr bahar aa raha tha.

suman: tiger ye jinn hume is jawala Mukhi me dal kr marna chahta hai kya , mujhe abhi nhi marna a re aaj hi to humari shadi hui hai aur mujhe to tumhare bachche bhi paida krne hai,

MAi : daro mat suman mai baat krta hu jinn se ,
ye tum hume is Jawala mukhi ke paas le kr kyo aaye ho.

jinn: aanka ye jawala Mukhi asli nhi hai ye to mayavi jawlamukhi hai yhi to humare jinn lok jane ka darwaza hai .

mai : kya ye aali nhi hai fir kaise isme garam lava pighal kr bahar nikal raha hai.

jinn : ye sab ek maya hai nhi to har koi jinn lok me parwes kr jaata isliye ye maaya se banaya gya jawlamukhi hai chaliye ab hum chahte hai .

ye bol kr vo hume us bade se jawlamukhi me le jane laga jab hum jawlamukhi ke andar jane pr bhi garmi kr ahsash nhi ho rha tha isi se pata lag raha tha ki ye asli nhi hai mayavi hai Suman ne to kas kar mujhe pakad liya the aur apni aankhe band kr li thi, kafi der tak hum us mayavi jawlamukhi ke andar jate rhe uske baad hum ne jinn lok me dakhil ho gye yha ka mousam bahut hi khusnuma tha.aasman se bahut hi achha najara mai dekh raha tha.

mai : dekho suman hum jinn lok me aa gye dekho yha kitne sundar sundar ped, pakchhi hai.

kuch hi der me jinn hume ek nagar ke bahar utar diya aur vo jinn bhi apne samany roop me aa gaya ,fir vo nagar ke pravesh dwar pr jakar sainiko se baat karne laga vo hava me udte huve pahredari kr rhe the kuch der baad darwaza apne aap khul gaya tab jinn ne hume andar chalne ko kaha.
 

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Update 164(b)

agle din baba ne meri aur suman ki shadi kara di humne sab ka aashirwad liya fir unse jane ki baat ki jise sun kr Rambha ko thoda dukh hua kyo ki itne din tak vo humare sath hi thi kuch dino ke liye hi sahi mai us se dur jane vala tha suman ne use gale laga kr apna khayal rakhne ko kaha Maine bhi use apna khayal rakhne aur jaldi aane ka bol kr baki sab se vida le kr suman ke sath vaha se nikal gya aur ek maidani Ariya me aa gaya fir jinn ne jo mujhe ring di thi use ghisne laga aur jinn ko aane ke liye yaad krne laga kuch hi der me humare samne ek Vishal kaay jinn pragat ho gaya jise dekh kr suman bhi dar se mere pichhe aa gyi tabhi vo jinn bola

jinn: aap jinn lok jane ke liye surveer.

mai : ji hum jaane ke liye taiyar hai.

fir jinn ne apna bada sa panja jamin par rakha aur kaha ki aap dono is pe aa jaiye tab maine suman ka hath pakad kar jinn ke hatheli par aa gaya fir jinn ne apna panja upar uthaya aur laga aasmaan mein udne suman ko uchaiyon se bahut dar lag raha tha isliye usne mujhe kas kar pakda hua tha 2 ghante aasmaan mein safar krne ke baad vo hume ek bade se jawlamukhi ke upar le aaya.

suman to niche ka najara dekh kar to bahut hi jayda dar gyi kyo ki neche us bade se jawlamukhi se laga tar garam lava pighal kr bahar aa raha tha.

suman: tiger ye jinn hume is jawala Mukhi me dal kr marna chahta hai kya , mujhe abhi nhi marna a re aaj hi to humari shadi hui hai aur mujhe to tumhare bachche bhi paida krne hai,

MAi : daro mat suman mai baat krta hu jinn se ,
ye tum hume is Jawala mukhi ke paas le kr kyo aaye ho.

jinn: aanka ye jawala Mukhi asli nhi hai ye to mayavi jawlamukhi hai yhi to humare jinn lok jane ka darwaza hai .

mai : kya ye aali nhi hai fir kaise isme garam lava pighal kr bahar nikal raha hai.

jinn : ye sab ek maya hai nhi to har koi jinn lok me parwes kr jaata isliye ye maaya se banaya gya jawlamukhi hai chaliye ab hum chahte hai .

ye bol kr vo hume us bade se jawlamukhi me le jane laga jab hum jawlamukhi ke andar jane pr bhi garmi kr ahsash nhi ho rha tha isi se pata lag raha tha ki ye asli nhi hai mayavi hai Suman ne to kas kar mujhe pakad liya the aur apni aankhe band kr li thi, kafi der tak hum us mayavi jawlamukhi ke andar jate rhe uske baad hum ne jinn lok me dakhil ho gye yha ka mousam bahut hi khusnuma tha.aasman se bahut hi achha najara mai dekh raha tha.

mai : dekho suman hum jinn lok me aa gye dekho yha kitne sundar sundar ped, pakchhi hai.

kuch hi der me jinn hume ek nagar ke bahar utar diya aur vo jinn bhi apne samany roop me aa gaya ,fir vo nagar ke pravesh dwar pr jakar sainiko se baat karne laga vo hava me udte huve pahredari kr rhe the kuch der baad darwaza apne aap khul gaya tab jinn ne hume andar chalne ko kaha.
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