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Update 165(b)


MAi bajar ke rounak chahal pahal aur Jeaniiyo me itna kho gya tha ki mujhe khud pata nahi chala aur mai ek ladki se takra gya us wakt uska chehra dusri taraf tha, mai use bol rha tha maf karna mera dhayan kahi aur tha abhi mai itna hi bola tha ki usne palat kr meri taraf dekha usne apne chehre par kale rang ka nakab lagaya hua tha jo uske dhudh jaisi safed chehre par char chand laga rha tha pr uski khas chij jise dekh kr mai kho sa gya tha aur vo thi uski aankhe jo bilkul meri tarah hi neeli thi aur ek aakrsan tha .

mai uski aankhon me kho gya aur vo bhi mere hi aankhon ko dekh kr kho gyi thi uske baad hume aas pass kya ho rha hai vo bhi dhayan nhi raha.

idhar jab mai us ladki se takraya tab us ki saheliya mujhe pura suna rhi thi gustakh andhe ho kya jo dikhai nhi deta tum jaise logo ko hum achhi tahar se jante hai khatun dekhi nhi aur aa gye lar tapkate tumhara sir kalam krva denge tum hume jante nhi ho.

Jinn : mafi mohtarma mafi vo kya hai ye log yha pahli baar aaye hai isliye yha ke vatavaran ko dekh kr kho gye the isliye galti ho gyi.


SAheli: galti nhi gunah kiya hai is ne tum jante bhi ho ki ye kon hai shipahiyo se bol kr kalkothri me dalva dungi .

jinn: itni chhoti si baat ke itni badi saja kisliye ye jaan bujh kr thodi hi takraya hai .

saheli: nhi ye Jan bhujh kr hi Takraya hai sundar khatun dekh kr ye janab jaan bhujh kr hi takraya hai.

suman : ye ladki ye mere pati hai aur inhe koi souk nahi hai yha ki ladkiyo se takrane ka samjhi .

saheli: (jinn se) : ye jinn lok ke to nhi lagte kaha se aaye hai ( gandh ko sungh kr) ye to aadam jaat hai .

vo ladki ne aadam jaat kya bola aas pass ke log bhi humari taraf aane lage kuch shipahi bhi aa gye the.

jinn: ha ye aadam jaat hi hai badshah salamat ne hi inhe lane ko kaha tha .

saheli: kya ve vhi aadam jaat hai jise badshah salamat ne lane ko kaha tha .

apni saheli ko bolti hai - suna nur ye vhi aadam jaat hai

pr uski vo saheli ka dhayan to kahi aur tha aur mera bhi.

tab unlogo ka dhayan humari taraf gya jo ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huve the tab uski saheli ne use hilaya aur mujhe suman ne tab jakar humara dhayan vha pr gya to dekha ki yha pr bhid ho chuki thi us ladki ne bina apni saheliyo ki baat sune vha se jane lagi aur unhe bhi chalne ko kaha usne ek do baar palat kr mujhe dekha fir vo bajar ki bhid me lupt ho gyi.


tabhi shipahi ne jinn se kaha ki hum badshah salamat ko khabar dete hai ki vo aadam jaat aa gye hai tum inhe le kr jalhi hi mahal pahucho.

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Nice update aadam jaat khatoon :evillaugh: mast bhai
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Update 165(b)


MAi bajar ke rounak chahal pahal aur Jeaniiyo me itna kho gya tha ki mujhe khud pata nahi chala aur mai ek ladki se takra gya us wakt uska chehra dusri taraf tha, mai use bol rha tha maf karna mera dhayan kahi aur tha abhi mai itna hi bola tha ki usne palat kr meri taraf dekha usne apne chehre par kale rang ka nakab lagaya hua tha jo uske dhudh jaisi safed chehre par char chand laga rha tha pr uski khas chij jise dekh kr mai kho sa gya tha aur vo thi uski aankhe jo bilkul meri tarah hi neeli thi aur ek aakrsan tha .

mai uski aankhon me kho gya aur vo bhi mere hi aankhon ko dekh kr kho gyi thi uske baad hume aas pass kya ho rha hai vo bhi dhayan nhi raha.

idhar jab mai us ladki se takraya tab us ki saheliya mujhe pura suna rhi thi gustakh andhe ho kya jo dikhai nhi deta tum jaise logo ko hum achhi tahar se jante hai khatun dekhi nhi aur aa gye lar tapkate tumhara sir kalam krva denge tum hume jante nhi ho.

Jinn : mafi mohtarma mafi vo kya hai ye log yha pahli baar aaye hai isliye yha ke vatavaran ko dekh kr kho gye the isliye galti ho gyi.


SAheli: galti nhi gunah kiya hai is ne tum jante bhi ho ki ye kon hai shipahiyo se bol kr kalkothri me dalva dungi .

jinn: itni chhoti si baat ke itni badi saja kisliye ye jaan bujh kr thodi hi takraya hai .

saheli: nhi ye Jan bhujh kr hi Takraya hai sundar khatun dekh kr ye janab jaan bhujh kr hi takraya hai.

suman : ye ladki ye mere pati hai aur inhe koi souk nahi hai yha ki ladkiyo se takrane ka samjhi .

saheli: (jinn se) : ye jinn lok ke to nhi lagte kaha se aaye hai ( gandh ko sungh kr) ye to aadam jaat hai .

vo ladki ne aadam jaat kya bola aas pass ke log bhi humari taraf aane lage kuch shipahi bhi aa gye the.

jinn: ha ye aadam jaat hi hai badshah salamat ne hi inhe lane ko kaha tha .

saheli: kya ve vhi aadam jaat hai jise badshah salamat ne lane ko kaha tha .

apni saheli ko bolti hai - suna nur ye vhi aadam jaat hai

pr uski vo saheli ka dhayan to kahi aur tha aur mera bhi.

tab unlogo ka dhayan humari taraf gya jo ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huve the tab uski saheli ne use hilaya aur mujhe suman ne tab jakar humara dhayan vha pr gya to dekha ki yha pr bhid ho chuki thi us ladki ne bina apni saheliyo ki baat sune vha se jane lagi aur unhe bhi chalne ko kaha usne ek do baar palat kr mujhe dekha fir vo bajar ki bhid me lupt ho gyi.


tabhi shipahi ne jinn se kaha ki hum badshah salamat ko khabar dete hai ki vo aadam jaat aa gye hai tum inhe le kr jalhi hi mahal pahucho.
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Update 165(b)


MAi bajar ke rounak chahal pahal aur Jeaniiyo me itna kho gya tha ki mujhe khud pata nahi chala aur mai ek ladki se takra gya us wakt uska chehra dusri taraf tha, mai use bol rha tha maf karna mera dhayan kahi aur tha abhi mai itna hi bola tha ki usne palat kr meri taraf dekha usne apne chehre par kale rang ka nakab lagaya hua tha jo uske dhudh jaisi safed chehre par char chand laga rha tha pr uski khas chij jise dekh kr mai kho sa gya tha aur vo thi uski aankhe jo bilkul meri tarah hi neeli thi aur ek aakrsan tha .

mai uski aankhon me kho gya aur vo bhi mere hi aankhon ko dekh kr kho gyi thi uske baad hume aas pass kya ho rha hai vo bhi dhayan nhi raha.

idhar jab mai us ladki se takraya tab us ki saheliya mujhe pura suna rhi thi gustakh andhe ho kya jo dikhai nhi deta tum jaise logo ko hum achhi tahar se jante hai khatun dekhi nhi aur aa gye lar tapkate tumhara sir kalam krva denge tum hume jante nhi ho.

Jinn : mafi mohtarma mafi vo kya hai ye log yha pahli baar aaye hai isliye yha ke vatavaran ko dekh kr kho gye the isliye galti ho gyi.


SAheli: galti nhi gunah kiya hai is ne tum jante bhi ho ki ye kon hai shipahiyo se bol kr kalkothri me dalva dungi .

jinn: itni chhoti si baat ke itni badi saja kisliye ye jaan bujh kr thodi hi takraya hai .

saheli: nhi ye Jan bhujh kr hi Takraya hai sundar khatun dekh kr ye janab jaan bhujh kr hi takraya hai.

suman : ye ladki ye mere pati hai aur inhe koi souk nahi hai yha ki ladkiyo se takrane ka samjhi .

saheli: (jinn se) : ye jinn lok ke to nhi lagte kaha se aaye hai ( gandh ko sungh kr) ye to aadam jaat hai .

vo ladki ne aadam jaat kya bola aas pass ke log bhi humari taraf aane lage kuch shipahi bhi aa gye the.

jinn: ha ye aadam jaat hi hai badshah salamat ne hi inhe lane ko kaha tha .

saheli: kya ve vhi aadam jaat hai jise badshah salamat ne lane ko kaha tha .

apni saheli ko bolti hai - suna nur ye vhi aadam jaat hai

pr uski vo saheli ka dhayan to kahi aur tha aur mera bhi.

tab unlogo ka dhayan humari taraf gya jo ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huve the tab uski saheli ne use hilaya aur mujhe suman ne tab jakar humara dhayan vha pr gya to dekha ki yha pr bhid ho chuki thi us ladki ne bina apni saheliyo ki baat sune vha se jane lagi aur unhe bhi chalne ko kaha usne ek do baar palat kr mujhe dekha fir vo bajar ki bhid me lupt ho gyi.


tabhi shipahi ne jinn se kaha ki hum badshah salamat ko khabar dete hai ki vo aadam jaat aa gye hai tum inhe le kr jalhi hi mahal pahucho.
Behad hi shanadar or dilchasp update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
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Update 165


kuch hi der me jinn hume ek nagar ke bahar utar diya aur vo jinn bhi apne samany roop me aa gaya ,fir vo nagar ke pravesh dwar pr jakar sainiko se baat karne laga vo hava me udte huve pahredari kr rhe the kuch der baad darwaza apne aap khul gaya tab jinn ne hume andar chalne ko kaha.

JAb hum us bade se darwaze ke andar gye to mujhe aisa lgne lga ki mai koi purani filmo ke set pr aa gaya hu kyonki yha bilkul vaise hi makan bane huve the jaise raja maharaja ke jamane me hote the mai aur suman dono sabhi taraf dhyan se dekh rhe the kuch der aage jane ke baad kuch vha aur bhi jinn aur Jeanie dikhai dene lge sab apne hi kamo me lge huve the yha sabhi log aam insaano jaisa hi dikh rahe the lekin unke pahnava jo tha vo hum insano se thoda alag tha jha jinn upar bina baju ke kurta jo khule hi the aisa lag raha tha ki ye sirf tan ko dhakne ke liye hi pahna gya ho aur niche dhila sa paijama pahne huve the aur vhi Jeanie bina baju ke blouse jaise pahne huve the jisme se unki bade bade chuche aaram se dikhai de rahe the aur niche unhone ne bhi dhila sa paijama pahne huve the lekin unka paijama pardarshi tha pairo se lekar janghon tak pura hissa aaram se dikhai de raha tha lekin baki ka hissa mote kapdo ke karan dikhai nhi de rha tha jo log apne gharo se aas pas the vo Jeanie apne chehre ko nhi dhake huve the lekin Jeanie apne gharo ke bahar the ya khi ja rhe the un jeaniiyo ne apne chehre par resmi kapdo se apna chehra dhaka hua tha.


ek bat maine aur notice ki ye ki sabhi Jeanie ke chuchi aur gand bade bade aur nikle huve the chahe vo orat ho ya ladki sabhi ke chuchi aur gand bade bade hi the main to sabhi Jeanie ko dekh rha tha jisse mera lund khada ho gaya tha jo bhi jinn ya Jeanie hum logo ko dekhte to in sabhi ko aascharya ho rha vo sabhi hume ghur ghur kr dekh rhe the mere maan me ek sawal paida ho raha tha isliye maine us jinn se puchha jo hume yha lekar aaya tha aur humare aage chal raha tha.

mai : yha pr jitne bhi logo ko hum ne dekha vo to humare jaise hi aam insaan lag rhe hai maine to socha tha ki jinno ke paas bahut hi sakti hoti hai vo sabhi bade bade jadu jante hai to jinn lok me hume jadu dekhne ko milega pr abhi tak to aisa kuch bhi dekhne ko nhi mila.

jinn : ha ha ha ....
kyonki is nagri ke andar aam jinno ka jadu krne pr pratibandh hai ya yu samajh lo ki yha ke badshah ne rok laga di hai yha jadu ya sakti ka prayog sirf sainik ya fir shahi pariwar ke log ki kr sakte hai vo bhi jaruri ho tab , isiliye yha ke aam jinn aam insaano ki tarah hi rahte hai.

mai : aur ye hume aise ghur ghur kr kyo dekh rhe hai.

jinn: vo isliye mere aanka ki vo log jan gye hai ki aap log aadam jaat ho aur koi bhi aadam jaat jin lok me dakhil nhi ho sakta.

mai : pr ye log kaise jaan gye ki hum aadam jaat hai .

jinn: aapko yha ke vatavaran me jo gandh aa rahi hai vo kaisa lag raha hai.

mai : aisa lag raha hai ki jaise koi bahut hi khusbudar perfume laga kr humare aas paas hi ghum raha hai.

jinn: ye koi perfume ka kamal nhi hai mere aanka ye hum jinno ki sarir se nikalne vali gandh hai jo aapko perfume jaisi lag rahi hai thik usi prakar hum jinno ko bhi insaano ki gandh se pata chal jata hai aur kapde bhi to aap insano jaise hi ho.
To apna hero jinniyo ki khubsurati dekh kr bada hi sakt launda ban rha hai sandar jabarjast update bhai superb
 

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Update 165(a)

Fir hum kuch dur aage gye tabhi suman ko kuch dikha tab usne mujhe bhi ungli se isara krte hue dikhaya tab mai kya dekhta hu kuch log chatai pr baith kar udte huve kahi ja rhe the,tab maine jinn se fir puchha.
mai : aapne bola tha ki is nagar me jadu nhi hota fir vo kya hai log chatai me baith kr ghum rhe hai.

jinn : ha hahahaha....
mere aanka vo jadui kalin hai log us se hi kahi aane jane ke liye prayog krte hai jaise aap log apni duniya me cycle bike,car, train ,aroplan aadi ka upyog krte hai usi tarha hum jinn nagri me jadui kalin ka upyog krte hai.
ab aage chaliye samne hi humare nagar ka bajar hai .

fir hum kuch dur aur aage aaye tab hume jinn lok ka bajar najar aaya ,bajar me kafi chahal pahal thi yha kahi kalin bik rhi thi to kahi khane pine ki samagri mai aise hi bajar keep rounak dekh hi rha tha ki mai kisi se takra gya
Sandar update bhai jabarjast to transport ke liye jadui kaleen ka prayog kiya jata hai or ab Kisse takra gya apna hero...
 

Xabhi

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Update 165(b)


MAi bajar ke rounak chahal pahal aur Jeaniiyo me itna kho gya tha ki mujhe khud pata nahi chala aur mai ek ladki se takra gya us wakt uska chehra dusri taraf tha, mai use bol rha tha maf karna mera dhayan kahi aur tha abhi mai itna hi bola tha ki usne palat kr meri taraf dekha usne apne chehre par kale rang ka nakab lagaya hua tha jo uske dhudh jaisi safed chehre par char chand laga rha tha pr uski khas chij jise dekh kr mai kho sa gya tha aur vo thi uski aankhe jo bilkul meri tarah hi neeli thi aur ek aakrsan tha .

mai uski aankhon me kho gya aur vo bhi mere hi aankhon ko dekh kr kho gyi thi uske baad hume aas pass kya ho rha hai vo bhi dhayan nhi raha.

idhar jab mai us ladki se takraya tab us ki saheliya mujhe pura suna rhi thi gustakh andhe ho kya jo dikhai nhi deta tum jaise logo ko hum achhi tahar se jante hai khatun dekhi nhi aur aa gye lar tapkate tumhara sir kalam krva denge tum hume jante nhi ho.

Jinn : mafi mohtarma mafi vo kya hai ye log yha pahli baar aaye hai isliye yha ke vatavaran ko dekh kr kho gye the isliye galti ho gyi.


SAheli: galti nhi gunah kiya hai is ne tum jante bhi ho ki ye kon hai shipahiyo se bol kr kalkothri me dalva dungi .

jinn: itni chhoti si baat ke itni badi saja kisliye ye jaan bujh kr thodi hi takraya hai .

saheli: nhi ye Jan bhujh kr hi Takraya hai sundar khatun dekh kr ye janab jaan bhujh kr hi takraya hai.

suman : ye ladki ye mere pati hai aur inhe koi souk nahi hai yha ki ladkiyo se takrane ka samjhi .

saheli: (jinn se) : ye jinn lok ke to nhi lagte kaha se aaye hai ( gandh ko sungh kr) ye to aadam jaat hai .

vo ladki ne aadam jaat kya bola aas pass ke log bhi humari taraf aane lage kuch shipahi bhi aa gye the.

jinn: ha ye aadam jaat hi hai badshah salamat ne hi inhe lane ko kaha tha .

saheli: kya ve vhi aadam jaat hai jise badshah salamat ne lane ko kaha tha .

apni saheli ko bolti hai - suna nur ye vhi aadam jaat hai

pr uski vo saheli ka dhayan to kahi aur tha aur mera bhi.

tab unlogo ka dhayan humari taraf gya jo ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huve the tab uski saheli ne use hilaya aur mujhe suman ne tab jakar humara dhayan vha pr gya to dekha ki yha pr bhid ho chuki thi us ladki ne bina apni saheliyo ki baat sune vha se jane lagi aur unhe bhi chalne ko kaha usne ek do baar palat kr mujhe dekha fir vo bajar ki bhid me lupt ho gyi.


tabhi shipahi ne jinn se kaha ki hum badshah salamat ko khabar dete hai ki vo aadam jaat aa gye hai tum inhe le kr jalhi hi mahal pahucho.
To us nili ankho vali ka naam noor hai or vah Apne hero ki ankho me dekh kr hi madhosh ho gyi or apna hero bhi Dekhte hai kyo bulaya hai Badshah ne apne hero ko... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

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Update 165(b)


MAi bajar ke rounak chahal pahal aur Jeaniiyo me itna kho gya tha ki mujhe khud pata nahi chala aur mai ek ladki se takra gya us wakt uska chehra dusri taraf tha, mai use bol rha tha maf karna mera dhayan kahi aur tha abhi mai itna hi bola tha ki usne palat kr meri taraf dekha usne apne chehre par kale rang ka nakab lagaya hua tha jo uske dhudh jaisi safed chehre par char chand laga rha tha pr uski khas chij jise dekh kr mai kho sa gya tha aur vo thi uski aankhe jo bilkul meri tarah hi neeli thi aur ek aakrsan tha .

mai uski aankhon me kho gya aur vo bhi mere hi aankhon ko dekh kr kho gyi thi uske baad hume aas pass kya ho rha hai vo bhi dhayan nhi raha.

idhar jab mai us ladki se takraya tab us ki saheliya mujhe pura suna rhi thi gustakh andhe ho kya jo dikhai nhi deta tum jaise logo ko hum achhi tahar se jante hai khatun dekhi nhi aur aa gye lar tapkate tumhara sir kalam krva denge tum hume jante nhi ho.

Jinn : mafi mohtarma mafi vo kya hai ye log yha pahli baar aaye hai isliye yha ke vatavaran ko dekh kr kho gye the isliye galti ho gyi.


SAheli: galti nhi gunah kiya hai is ne tum jante bhi ho ki ye kon hai shipahiyo se bol kr kalkothri me dalva dungi .

jinn: itni chhoti si baat ke itni badi saja kisliye ye jaan bujh kr thodi hi takraya hai .

saheli: nhi ye Jan bhujh kr hi Takraya hai sundar khatun dekh kr ye janab jaan bhujh kr hi takraya hai.

suman : ye ladki ye mere pati hai aur inhe koi souk nahi hai yha ki ladkiyo se takrane ka samjhi .

saheli: (jinn se) : ye jinn lok ke to nhi lagte kaha se aaye hai ( gandh ko sungh kr) ye to aadam jaat hai .

vo ladki ne aadam jaat kya bola aas pass ke log bhi humari taraf aane lage kuch shipahi bhi aa gye the.

jinn: ha ye aadam jaat hi hai badshah salamat ne hi inhe lane ko kaha tha .

saheli: kya ve vhi aadam jaat hai jise badshah salamat ne lane ko kaha tha .

apni saheli ko bolti hai - suna nur ye vhi aadam jaat hai

pr uski vo saheli ka dhayan to kahi aur tha aur mera bhi.

tab unlogo ka dhayan humari taraf gya jo ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huve the tab uski saheli ne use hilaya aur mujhe suman ne tab jakar humara dhayan vha pr gya to dekha ki yha pr bhid ho chuki thi us ladki ne bina apni saheliyo ki baat sune vha se jane lagi aur unhe bhi chalne ko kaha usne ek do baar palat kr mujhe dekha fir vo bajar ki bhid me lupt ho gyi.


tabhi shipahi ne jinn se kaha ki hum badshah salamat ko khabar dete hai ki vo aadam jaat aa gye hai tum inhe le kr jalhi hi mahal pahucho.
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
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