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Update 166(b)

MAi aur suman visharam gah ko charo taraf se dekh rhe the suman vhi bistar par baith gyi Tabhi neelo darwaze ke bahar se dekhti hai ki ye log sabhi idhar udhar dekh rhe hai to uske maan me sararaat krne ki sujhti .

Fir vo table pr rhe huve sone (gold) ke glass ko apne jaadu se hava me hi utha deti hai fir suman ki taraf badha deti hai , suman apni taraf glass ko hava me hi aate huve dekh kar ghabra jati hai vo jor se tiger ko chillati hai tab tiger ki nigah bhi glass ki taraf jati hai Pahle to tiger ko bhi thoda achambha bhi hota hai fir vo glass ko pakdne ke liye hath ko aage karta hai to glass pichhe ho jata hai fir hath aage badhta hai to upar ho jata hai aise hi glass kabhi aage to kabhi pichhe kabhi upar to kabhi neeche ye sab neelo darwaze ke bahar chup kr apni hasi ko rok kr kr rhi thi.

MEra bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha tab maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya mere hatho me meri talwar aa gayi fir maine furti se us glass ko bhago me chir diya,vo glass do tukdo me kat kr neeche jamin par gir gaya.

tabhi hasti hui neelo darwaze se andar aayi fir apni hasi ko kabu kr ke kaha tum log to ek glass se hi dar gye aur aaye ho hume musibat se nikalne.

mai : dekhiye vo sab achanak hua isliye aisa hua nhi to mai kisi se nhi darta aur aap kon hai?

neelo : mai dusri number ki sahjadi hu mera naam neelofar hai aur pyar se sab mujhe neelo bulate hai.

MAi : mera naam Sher Singh hai pyar se sab mujhe tiger bulate hai aur ye hai suman.


Neelo : aap logo se mil kr achha laga , aur aapki aankhe to bilkul noor aur aur chhoti maa se bilkul milti unki bhi aankhe aapki taraf bilkul Neeli hai.

suman: kya sach mez mujhe bhi milna hai unse.

neelo: ha to chalo aap mere sath mai aapko mahal bhi ghuma deti hu aur un se mila bhi deti hu .

suman: tiger mai aati hu tum yhi rahna .

fir Suman neelo ke sath chali gayi aur mai vhi rah gaya kuch der baad do teen sevika aayi unke hatho me khane pine ka saman tha unhe vo ek table pr rakh kar mujhe khane ko bol kr chali gayi .

mere khane pine ke kuch der baad Baadshah vajir aur kuch mantriyo ke sath mujh se milne aaye aur salam kiya to mai bhi hath jod kar unka abhivadan kiya.

Baadshah: yha aane me kuch kast to nhi hua aap logo ko .

mai : nhi Baadshah ji hume yha aane me koi kast nhi hua aur apne jo hume samman diya uske liye bhi aapko dhanyawad.

baadshah- aapko to pata hi hoga ki aapko yha pr kis liye bulaya gya hai.

mai : Ha mujhe pata hai koi aghori tantrik hai Jisne jinn lok me apne napak mansubo ko anjam dene ke liye tha ke jinn ladkiyo Ki bali de rha hai jinhe aap log Bhi nhi rok pa rhe hai

Baadshah: ha hume to ye bhi pata nahi chala hai abhi tak ki vo jinn lok me kaha hai.


mai: koi baat nahi Baadshah salamat jab us tantrik ka marna mere hatho likha hai to mai use dhundh kr hi rahunga.

Baadshah: hume bhi aapse yahi ummid hai magar hum chah rhe the ki.....

tabhi vajir bola- hum sabhi janna chahta hai ki aap me utna bal hai ki nhi jo aap us tantrik ko maar saki.

mai : to ye sabit krne ke liye mujhe kya krna hoga.

vajir: tumhe yha ke maha surveer yodha se ladna hoga tabhi to hume pata chalega ki tum kitne sakti saali ho
 
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Luffy

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Update 166(b)

MAi aur suman visharam gah ko charo taraf se dekh rhe the suman vhi bistar par baith gyi Tabhi neelo darwaze ke bahar se dekhti hai ki ye log sabhi idhar udhar dekh rhe hai to uske maan me sararaat krne ki sujhti .

Fir vo table pr rhe huve sone (gold) ke glass ko apne jaadu se hava me hi utha deti hai fir suman ki taraf badha deti hai , suman apni taraf glass ko hava me hi aate huve dekh kar ghabra jati hai vo jor se tiger ko chillati hai tab tiger ki nigah bhi glass ki taraf jati hai Pahle to tiger ko bhi thoda achambha bhi hota hai fir vo glass ko pakdne ke liye hath ko aage karta hai to glass pichhe ho jata hai fir hath aage badhta hai to upar ho jata hai aise hi glass kabhi aage to kabhi pichhe kabhi upar to kabhi neeche ye sab neelo darwaze ke bahar chup kr apni hasi ko rok kr kr rhi thi.

MEra bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha tab maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya mere hatho me meri talwar aa gayi fir maine furti se us glass ko bhago me chir diya,vo glass do tukdo me kat kr neeche jamin par gir gaya.

tabhi hasti hui neelo darwaze se andar aayi fir apni hasi ko kabu kr ke kaha tum log to ek glass se hi dar gye aur aaye ho hume musibat se nikalne.

mai : dekhiye vo sab achanak hua isliye aisa hua nhi to mai kisi se nhi darta aur aap kon hai?

neelo : mai dusri number ki sahjadi hu mera naam neelofar hai aur pyar se sab mujhe neelo bulate hai.

MAi : mera naam Sher Singh hai pyar se sab mujhe tiger bulate hai aur ye hai suman.


Neelo : aap logo se mil kr achha laga , aur aapki aankhe to bilkul noor aur aur chhoti maa se bilkul milti unki bhi aankhe aapki taraf bilkul Neeli hai.

suman: kya sach mez mujhe bhi milna hai unse.

neelo: ha to chalo aap mere sath mai aapko mahal bhi ghuma deti hu aur un se mila bhi deti hu .

suman: tiger mai aati hu tum yhi rahna .

fir Suman neelo ke sath chali gayi aur mai vhi rah gaya kuch der baad do teen sevika aayi unke hatho me khane pine ka saman tha unhe vo ek table pr rakh kar mujhe khane ko bol kr chali gayi .

mere khane pine ke kuch der baad Baadshah vajir aur kuch mantriyo ke sath mujh se milne aaye aur salam kiya to mai bhi hath jod kar unka abhivadan kiya.

Baadshah: yha aane me kuch kast to nhi hua aap logo ko .

mai : nhi Baadshah ji hume yha aane me koi kast nhi hua aur apne jo hume samman diya uske liye bhi aapko dhanyawad.

baadshah- aapko to pata hi hoga ki aapko yha pr kis liye bulaya gya hai.

mai : Ha mujhe pata hai koi aghori tantrik hai Jisne jinn lok me apne napak mansubo ko anjam dene ke liye tha ke jinn ladkiyo Ki bali de rha hai jinhe aap log Bhi nhi rok pa rhe hai

Baadshah: ha hume to ye bhi pata nahi chala hai abhi tak ki vo jinn lok me kaha hai.


mai: koi baat nahi Baadshah salamat jab us tantrik ka marna mere hatho likha hai to mai use dhundh kr hi rahunga.

Baadshah: hume bhi aapse yahi ummid hai magar hum chah rhe the ki.....

tabhi vajir bola- hum sabhi janna chahta hai ki aap me utna bal hai ki nhi jo aap us tantrik ko maar saki.

mai : to ye sabit krne ke liye mujhe kya krna hoga.

vajir: tumhe yha ke maha surveer yodha se ladna hoga tabhi to hume pata chalega ki tum kitne sakti saali ho
Awesome update
 

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Update 166(b)

MAi aur suman visharam gah ko charo taraf se dekh rhe the suman vhi bistar par baith gyi Tabhi neelo darwaze ke bahar se dekhti hai ki ye log sabhi idhar udhar dekh rhe hai to uske maan me sararaat krne ki sujhti .

Fir vo table pr rhe huve sone (gold) ke glass ko apne jaadu se hava me hi utha deti hai fir suman ki taraf badha deti hai , suman apni taraf glass ko hava me hi aate huve dekh kar ghabra jati hai vo jor se tiger ko chillati hai tab tiger ki nigah bhi glass ki taraf jati hai Pahle to tiger ko bhi thoda achambha bhi hota hai fir vo glass ko pakdne ke liye hath ko aage karta hai to glass pichhe ho jata hai fir hath aage badhta hai to upar ho jata hai aise hi glass kabhi aage to kabhi pichhe kabhi upar to kabhi neeche ye sab neelo darwaze ke bahar chup kr apni hasi ko rok kr kr rhi thi.

MEra bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha tab maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya mere hatho me meri talwar aa gayi fir maine furti se us glass ko bhago me chir diya,vo glass do tukdo me kat kr neeche jamin par gir gaya.

tabhi hasti hui neelo darwaze se andar aayi fir apni hasi ko kabu kr ke kaha tum log to ek glass se hi dar gye aur aaye ho hume musibat se nikalne.

mai : dekhiye vo sab achanak hua isliye aisa hua nhi to mai kisi se nhi darta aur aap kon hai?

neelo : mai dusri number ki sahjadi hu mera naam neelofar hai aur pyar se sab mujhe neelo bulate hai.

MAi : mera naam Sher Singh hai pyar se sab mujhe tiger bulate hai aur ye hai suman.


Neelo : aap logo se mil kr achha laga , aur aapki aankhe to bilkul noor aur aur chhoti maa se bilkul milti unki bhi aankhe aapki taraf bilkul Neeli hai.

suman: kya sach mez mujhe bhi milna hai unse.

neelo: ha to chalo aap mere sath mai aapko mahal bhi ghuma deti hu aur un se mila bhi deti hu .

suman: tiger mai aati hu tum yhi rahna .

fir Suman neelo ke sath chali gayi aur mai vhi rah gaya kuch der baad do teen sevika aayi unke hatho me khane pine ka saman tha unhe vo ek table pr rakh kar mujhe khane ko bol kr chali gayi .

mere khane pine ke kuch der baad Baadshah vajir aur kuch mantriyo ke sath mujh se milne aaye aur salam kiya to mai bhi hath jod kar unka abhivadan kiya.

Baadshah: yha aane me kuch kast to nhi hua aap logo ko .

mai : nhi Baadshah ji hume yha aane me koi kast nhi hua aur apne jo hume samman diya uske liye bhi aapko dhanyawad.

baadshah- aapko to pata hi hoga ki aapko yha pr kis liye bulaya gya hai.

mai : Ha mujhe pata hai koi aghori tantrik hai Jisne jinn lok me apne napak mansubo ko anjam dene ke liye tha ke jinn ladkiyo Ki bali de rha hai jinhe aap log Bhi nhi rok pa rhe hai

Baadshah: ha hume to ye bhi pata nahi chala hai abhi tak ki vo jinn lok me kaha hai.


mai: koi baat nahi Baadshah salamat jab us tantrik ka marna mere hatho likha hai to mai use dhundh kr hi rahunga.

Baadshah: hume bhi aapse yahi ummid hai magar hum chah rhe the ki.....

tabhi vajir bola- hum sabhi janna chahta hai ki aap me utna bal hai ki nhi jo aap us tantrik ko maar saki.

mai : to ye sabit krne ke liye mujhe kya krna hoga.

vajir: tumhe yha ke maha surveer yodha se ladna hoga tabhi to hume pata chalega ki tum kitne sakti saali ho
Ab neelo sali sahibaa hai to thodi masti thodi srarat to banti hai jija ji se Ya fir ye Kahe bhai se sandar neelo ne to Abhi se hi satana suru kr diya tiger ko Badshah thoda hichkicha rhe the to vajir ne kman samhali or tiger se ek mitravat pratispardha ka prastav rakha sahi hai thoda Bahut to janne ko milega ki akhir yah adamjaat kitna saktishali hai... Superb update bhai sandar
 

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Update 166(b)

MAi aur suman visharam gah ko charo taraf se dekh rhe the suman vhi bistar par baith gyi Tabhi neelo darwaze ke bahar se dekhti hai ki ye log sabhi idhar udhar dekh rhe hai to uske maan me sararaat krne ki sujhti .

Fir vo table pr rhe huve sone (gold) ke glass ko apne jaadu se hava me hi utha deti hai fir suman ki taraf badha deti hai , suman apni taraf glass ko hava me hi aate huve dekh kar ghabra jati hai vo jor se tiger ko chillati hai tab tiger ki nigah bhi glass ki taraf jati hai Pahle to tiger ko bhi thoda achambha bhi hota hai fir vo glass ko pakdne ke liye hath ko aage karta hai to glass pichhe ho jata hai fir hath aage badhta hai to upar ho jata hai aise hi glass kabhi aage to kabhi pichhe kabhi upar to kabhi neeche ye sab neelo darwaze ke bahar chup kr apni hasi ko rok kr kr rhi thi.

MEra bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha tab maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya mere hatho me meri talwar aa gayi fir maine furti se us glass ko bhago me chir diya,vo glass do tukdo me kat kr neeche jamin par gir gaya.

tabhi hasti hui neelo darwaze se andar aayi fir apni hasi ko kabu kr ke kaha tum log to ek glass se hi dar gye aur aaye ho hume musibat se nikalne.

mai : dekhiye vo sab achanak hua isliye aisa hua nhi to mai kisi se nhi darta aur aap kon hai?

neelo : mai dusri number ki sahjadi hu mera naam neelofar hai aur pyar se sab mujhe neelo bulate hai.

MAi : mera naam Sher Singh hai pyar se sab mujhe tiger bulate hai aur ye hai suman.


Neelo : aap logo se mil kr achha laga , aur aapki aankhe to bilkul noor aur aur chhoti maa se bilkul milti unki bhi aankhe aapki taraf bilkul Neeli hai.

suman: kya sach mez mujhe bhi milna hai unse.

neelo: ha to chalo aap mere sath mai aapko mahal bhi ghuma deti hu aur un se mila bhi deti hu .

suman: tiger mai aati hu tum yhi rahna .

fir Suman neelo ke sath chali gayi aur mai vhi rah gaya kuch der baad do teen sevika aayi unke hatho me khane pine ka saman tha unhe vo ek table pr rakh kar mujhe khane ko bol kr chali gayi .

mere khane pine ke kuch der baad Baadshah vajir aur kuch mantriyo ke sath mujh se milne aaye aur salam kiya to mai bhi hath jod kar unka abhivadan kiya.

Baadshah: yha aane me kuch kast to nhi hua aap logo ko .

mai : nhi Baadshah ji hume yha aane me koi kast nhi hua aur apne jo hume samman diya uske liye bhi aapko dhanyawad.

baadshah- aapko to pata hi hoga ki aapko yha pr kis liye bulaya gya hai.

mai : Ha mujhe pata hai koi aghori tantrik hai Jisne jinn lok me apne napak mansubo ko anjam dene ke liye tha ke jinn ladkiyo Ki bali de rha hai jinhe aap log Bhi nhi rok pa rhe hai

Baadshah: ha hume to ye bhi pata nahi chala hai abhi tak ki vo jinn lok me kaha hai.


mai: koi baat nahi Baadshah salamat jab us tantrik ka marna mere hatho likha hai to mai use dhundh kr hi rahunga.

Baadshah: hume bhi aapse yahi ummid hai magar hum chah rhe the ki.....

tabhi vajir bola- hum sabhi janna chahta hai ki aap me utna bal hai ki nhi jo aap us tantrik ko maar saki.

mai : to ye sabit krne ke liye mujhe kya krna hoga.

vajir: tumhe yha ke maha surveer yodha se ladna hoga tabhi to hume pata chalega ki tum kitne sakti saali ho
bhai thoda jaldi jaldi diya karo kam se kam week me 2 hi kyunki thoda bahut character v bhulne lagte hai.
 

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Update 166(b)

MAi aur suman visharam gah ko charo taraf se dekh rhe the suman vhi bistar par baith gyi Tabhi neelo darwaze ke bahar se dekhti hai ki ye log sabhi idhar udhar dekh rhe hai to uske maan me sararaat krne ki sujhti .

Fir vo table pr rhe huve sone (gold) ke glass ko apne jaadu se hava me hi utha deti hai fir suman ki taraf badha deti hai , suman apni taraf glass ko hava me hi aate huve dekh kar ghabra jati hai vo jor se tiger ko chillati hai tab tiger ki nigah bhi glass ki taraf jati hai Pahle to tiger ko bhi thoda achambha bhi hota hai fir vo glass ko pakdne ke liye hath ko aage karta hai to glass pichhe ho jata hai fir hath aage badhta hai to upar ho jata hai aise hi glass kabhi aage to kabhi pichhe kabhi upar to kabhi neeche ye sab neelo darwaze ke bahar chup kr apni hasi ko rok kr kr rhi thi.

MEra bhi dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha tab maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya mere hatho me meri talwar aa gayi fir maine furti se us glass ko bhago me chir diya,vo glass do tukdo me kat kr neeche jamin par gir gaya.

tabhi hasti hui neelo darwaze se andar aayi fir apni hasi ko kabu kr ke kaha tum log to ek glass se hi dar gye aur aaye ho hume musibat se nikalne.

mai : dekhiye vo sab achanak hua isliye aisa hua nhi to mai kisi se nhi darta aur aap kon hai?

neelo : mai dusri number ki sahjadi hu mera naam neelofar hai aur pyar se sab mujhe neelo bulate hai.

MAi : mera naam Sher Singh hai pyar se sab mujhe tiger bulate hai aur ye hai suman.


Neelo : aap logo se mil kr achha laga , aur aapki aankhe to bilkul noor aur aur chhoti maa se bilkul milti unki bhi aankhe aapki taraf bilkul Neeli hai.

suman: kya sach mez mujhe bhi milna hai unse.

neelo: ha to chalo aap mere sath mai aapko mahal bhi ghuma deti hu aur un se mila bhi deti hu .

suman: tiger mai aati hu tum yhi rahna .

fir Suman neelo ke sath chali gayi aur mai vhi rah gaya kuch der baad do teen sevika aayi unke hatho me khane pine ka saman tha unhe vo ek table pr rakh kar mujhe khane ko bol kr chali gayi .

mere khane pine ke kuch der baad Baadshah vajir aur kuch mantriyo ke sath mujh se milne aaye aur salam kiya to mai bhi hath jod kar unka abhivadan kiya.

Baadshah: yha aane me kuch kast to nhi hua aap logo ko .

mai : nhi Baadshah ji hume yha aane me koi kast nhi hua aur apne jo hume samman diya uske liye bhi aapko dhanyawad.

baadshah- aapko to pata hi hoga ki aapko yha pr kis liye bulaya gya hai.

mai : Ha mujhe pata hai koi aghori tantrik hai Jisne jinn lok me apne napak mansubo ko anjam dene ke liye tha ke jinn ladkiyo Ki bali de rha hai jinhe aap log Bhi nhi rok pa rhe hai

Baadshah: ha hume to ye bhi pata nahi chala hai abhi tak ki vo jinn lok me kaha hai.


mai: koi baat nahi Baadshah salamat jab us tantrik ka marna mere hatho likha hai to mai use dhundh kr hi rahunga.

Baadshah: hume bhi aapse yahi ummid hai magar hum chah rhe the ki.....

tabhi vajir bola- hum sabhi janna chahta hai ki aap me utna bal hai ki nhi jo aap us tantrik ko maar saki.

mai : to ye sabit krne ke liye mujhe kya krna hoga.

vajir: tumhe yha ke maha surveer yodha se ladna hoga tabhi to hume pata chalega ki tum kitne sakti saali ho
Behad hi shanadar or dilchasp update bhai.
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