Fantasy The unexpected journey- thriller, adventure, magic, incest, romantic ( COMPLETED)

[The Thinker]

Thanks to all of my friends ​

 

[Vickey1211]

Nice update bhai
Next part ki pratiksha besabri se
Bas next part m hero ko chutiya nhi bnana

 

[The king]

Nice ending bhai

 

[Vk248517]

Nice ending bro

 

[krish1152]

Mast update & congratulations for complete this story

 

[ragish7357]

nice update bro
wese aapne acchanak se story ko nhi khm kr diya
aap chahte to or bhi likh skte the isme

 

[Shanu]

Awsum Mindblowing ending update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?

 

[The Thinker]

nice update bro
wese aapne acchanak se story ko nhi khm kr diya
aap chahte to or bhi likh skte the isme

Bhai story jaisi sochi thi vaisi hi likhi h. End bhi vaisa hi kiya h .. lekin ye keh skte ho ki jaldi kr diya. Lambi kr skta tha main isko ...
Koi nahi yaar

Khatam to usi tarah hui ...chhod k nahi gaya yaar vo main .. ..sach batau to aisa hua ki beech me main itna busy ho gaya tha ki main khud ki story bhool gaya tha ...mujhe dobara padhke update likhne pad rhe the ...

Suspence jyada daal diye the ... maine journey sochi thi devi aur indu k baaki hisse dhoodhna ki jaise harry potter movie me hota h ab suspense itne ho gaye the ki reveal krne k liye bahut gehra sochna padta ... isliye jaldi jaldi khatam kar di.
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Lekin yaar thik h ...iska agla part likhne ka maine socha nahi h

 

[The Thinker]

Awsum Mindblowing ending update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?

Har jagah yahi cmnt ... copy paste krte ho kya ..kahani khatm hui dost

 

[Bilal jan]

Zabardast story kamal ki update the.
Waiting for next story

 

[Xabhi]

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast & lajvab story aapne Deva ko us modh pr la kr chhoda hai ki Uski ek nyi style me story bn sakti hai...