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sukriya ?Nice
sukriya sir ?Mast story hai bhai excellent update
Keep writing keep posting
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thnks bro ?Nice update bhai jaldi se naya update de do
thank u bhai... ?? abhi to bahut kuch baaki h mere dostBehtareen update,
Maza aa gaya.
3 update me hi itane twist.
sukriya bhai ?Great update bhai
Nice update bhaiUpdate -04ajay ne dekha vaha ek maina(parrot) h jo pinjre me h... budha ajay ko chhodke chala gaya tab maina ne bola ki bhaag jao khatra, bhaag jao khatra...
ajay ne socha ye aise kyu chillane laga.. Lekin ab kuch nhi ho skta tha kyuki jaise hi AJAY ne bahar nikalne ka socha uske aage ek adrishya deewaar aa gai... ajay ne Bahut jor lagaya lekin vo vapis na jaa saka...
ab ajay fas gaya tha... aur uska dimaag kharab ho rha tha ki yaha se kaise nikle ??
Ab aage -
ajay soch rha tha ki kya kiya jaye tab usne tote se baat krni shuru kar di lekin vo tota nhi vo maina thi usne apna naam Dayna bataya... (female) usne poocha ki bahar kaise niklu tab usne kaha ki nahi nikal skte ye ek mayajaal h...
usne kaha ki aur kya koi rasta nhi h yaha se nikalne ka...
tab maina ne bataya ki ise vohi tod skta h jo yaha laaya h tumhe...
ajay bola mai usko maar dalunga...
dayna ne kaha ki nahi maar skte use sirf usi k hathiyaar se maara jaa skta h ye usko vardaan h... lekin aajtak koi usse hathiyar nhi le paaya.. na kisi ko pata h vo kaha rakhta h..
ajay ne ab dimaag lagaya ki bahar jo sir latke hue h ve sab asli h ye bali deta h logo ki... aur mere sath bhi yahi karega... muje tabhi kuch krna padega nahi to mai gaya...
aise hi ajay ko kaafi time ho gaya tha... sab planning krli thi usne...
jab us tantrik ne us darwaje ko paar kiya tab tilism toota aur vo ajay ko le gaya.. ajay ne mauke ki najakat ko samajhte hue koi gadbad nhi ki...
usne jaha aag lagai hui thi poora setup tayyar kiya hua tha vaha ajay ko baithaya aur tilak lagaya... vo abbi bhi budhe k bhesh me tha...
ajay bas chupchap usko dekh rha tha...
kab uski kriya khatam hui tab usne dekhte hi dekhte ek dum apna roop badal liya vo ek rakshas me badal gaya...
aur ab uske hath me ek farsha(kulhadi) type ka hathiyaar tha...
vo ajay ki taraf badh rha tha.. ab ajay ko dar lagne laga tha... phir jaise us tantrik ne war kiya ajay vaha se palat gaya.. jisse vo bach gaya...
ab tantrik ko gussa aa gaya aur usne dobara prhar kiya lekin is baar ajay deewaar ki side fas gaya tha.. jab tantrik ne war kiya tab ajay thoda jhuk ker side hua... uski farse ka waar ajay ko kandhe me laga...
lekin ye kya ajay per uska koi asar na hua... bas lohe ki aawaj aai... tannnnnnnnn...
ajay ne ab hosh sambhalaa aur uske aage khada ho gaya... jaise hi usne waar kiya ajay knada hoke hasta rha jab tantrik dar gaya tab ajay ne usko laat maari jisse uska hathiyaar uske hath se niche gir gaya.. bas yahi ek mauka tha jab vo hathiyaar liya jaa skta tha ... maina ne shor macha diya ki hathiyaar uthao... uski gardan kaat do...
ajay ne turant kood ker us farse ko utha liya ... aur ab tantrik ghabraya ajay ne kaha lo apna hathiyaar... aur war karlo chahe lekin ye sirf ek bahana tha us tantrik ko rijhane ka... jaise hi tantrik ajay k kareeb aaya hath badhakar... ajay ne uska hath kaat diya... hath katke niche gira... aur tantrik chillaya...
Lekin ye kya uska hath thodi der me. khud b khud jud gaya... tantrik ab has rha tha jor jor se phir ajay ko us maina ki baat yaad aa gai .. ki iski gardan kaatni h..
ajay ko bas ek mauka chahiye tha... tantrik el jagah khada dekh rha tha aur apne hath ko aage kr rha tha... ki aao kaato kaato hahahahhahahaha....
ajay uske pass gaya aur seedha tantrik ki gardan uske dhad se alag kar di...
tantrik mar gaya aur ajay ne dekha uske hath me farsa garam ho chuka h usne use chhod diya...
phir vo maina k pass gaya aur use aajad karwaya tab gufa se bahar aaya aur maina ko chhodke bola ki jao ab tum aajad ho... lekin vo udke vahi baith k boli mai abhi aajad nhi hui...
ajay ne kaha aur kaise aajad hogi tum... usne kaha agar koi apni keemati cheej tyaag kare tab mai aazad ho skti hu... ye is tantrik ne kiya tha jisse koi mujhe aajad na krwa sake... kyuki koi bhi apni keemti cheej tyaag nhi skta...
ye baat dayna ne udaas hoke boli... ajay ne kaha mere pass aisa kuch nhi h jise mai keemti manta hu haa ek cheej h mera kavach... lekin mai ise kaise tyaag karunga... ye to batao...
dayna : tumhe sirf itna krna h ye mujhe dena h... ye bhi ek shart h jisse samne wala soche ki mai lalach k liye mang rhi hu... lekin mujje galat mat samjhna...
ajay : mai kr bhi kya skta hu... tum chahe muje maar dalna baad me... vaise b mai jindagi me ab insaaf k raste per chalunga...
dayna : mujhpe bharosa rakho...
ajay ne aankh band krke kaha mai apna kavach dayna ko dena chahta hu apni ichcha se... isme meri koi majboori nhi h
ek dum se vaha tej roshni fail gai aur ajay k shareer per kavach aa gaya... ajay ne usko utaar kar niche rakh k alag khada ho gaya.. phir dayna jo ek maina thi... vo usme ghus gai aur ek dum vaha phir se roshni fail gai... jab roshni kam hui tab ajay ne dekha ki vaha ek 8 feet lambi hatti katti ladki khadi h jo sanwli h lekin sunder lagti h... usse dar nhi lagta...
ajay ne kaha tum kon ho.. vo maina kaha gai...
tab dayna boli ki mai hi dayna hu.... ab mai aajad ho gai hu ... mai tumhari karjdaar ho gai hu... ab aap mere aaka h.. aap hukm kijiye mai aapke liye kya kar skti hu...
ajay : maine tumhe aapni daasi banane k liye ye sab nhi kiya... maine tumhari bas madad ki h tum bhi meri madad kar dena... agar tum ise ek ehsaan manti ho to... sab barabar ho jayega
dayna : maine aajtak koi tum jaisa manushya nhi dekha... sab lalach me rehte h lekin tum sabse alag ho is duniya me... jab muje yaha laaya gaya tha tab tantrik se chhupke kai logo ne mujhse poocha maine jab kaha to unhone mana kr diya... aur maut ko gale laga baithe... mai ek rakshas putri hu... muje is tantrik ne dhokhe se kaid kar liya... aur mai yaha aa gai... hamare kabile k log nirdayi jarur h lekin kisi ka ehsaan chukana nhi bhoolte... per tum sabse alag ho mujhe tumse prem ho gaya h... mujje apnalo.. hey manav mujje apni dasi bana lo... ab mai khus nhi reh sakungi tumhare bina...
ajay ne jab ye sab suna to usne kaha
ajay : mai khud nhi janta mai manushya hu ya nhi lekin dharti lok ka nhi hu ye janta hu... baaki kuch nhi pata mujhe ab batao abhi bhi mere sath rehna chahogi...
dayna : hey mere malik... aap chahe jis bhi stithi me ho mai har waqt aapke sath rahungi... aapka saya banke... duniya ka koi bhi tilism koi bhi jagah jaha mai nhi jaa skti kahi nahi h aisi jagah.... is tantrik ne bhi mujhe dhokhe se kaid kiya kyuki mai pakshiyon k sath khel rhi thi us time mai pakshi bani hui thi.. us waqt meri taqat meri kamjor thi... isne mujhe pakad liya...
mai aapki seva krne k liye tayyar hu kripya mujhe apna lijiye...
ajay : tumhe apnane se pehle meri kuch sharte h... agar maano to mai apna lunga tumhe...
dayna : aapka hukm mere sir aankho per malik..
ajay : tum mujhe naa malik bulaogi... naa apne aap ko dasi samjhogi. tum mere sath meri biwi banke rahogi ... bolo manjur h kya
dayna : (khusi se rote hue) aap kitne ache h.. mai tayyar hu.. aapne muje apnaya mere liye bahut khusi ki baat h...
ajay : agar bhavishya me meri aur bhi patniya ho to tum koi aitraaj nhi karogi...
dayna : mujhe kya aapatti hogi... bas aap apna pyaar dete rehna...
ajay : phir theek h jab mai 18 varsh ka ho jaaunga.. tab tum mujhse vivaah kr lena...
dayna : ji jaisi aapki marji... dayna ne kaha ki mai apna kavach apni man ki iccha se apne premi ajay ko de rhi hu...
Phir vahi sab hua aur ajay b apni cheej vapis paake khus hua.. kyuki vo bas ek shart thi... use sirf aisa koi aajad krwa skta tha jo nek dil ho lalach na kare.. phir ajay ne usko kaha...
ajay : chalo ab vaise tumko dekh k sab dar jayenge... tum mujhse 2 feet badi ho... aur umra me bhi shayad... iska kuch karo...
dayna : aap chinta na kijiye mai gayab ho skti hu... mai aapke alawa kisi aur ko nhi dikhungi agar aap kisi ko dikhana b chahe to mai roop badal sakti hu...
ajay khus hua ye sunke aur usko gale lag k bola ki is height ka kuch karo pehle... tab dayna ne apni height kam ki aur phir ajay ne usko choom liya jisse dayna sharma gai...
ab ajay bola chalo mujhe mere truck k pass le chalo...
ajay ko dayna jaadu se truck k pass le aai... jaha vo palta pada tha.. saaman sahi tha tootne layak nhi tha isliye ajay ne kaha isko sadak pahucha do aur sahi kardo sab...
dayna ne bas hath ghumaya aur sab set kar diya... ajay ne truck me baithke uski jagah pahuch gaya... aur maal utaarke vapis chal pada... vo chahta to jaadu se ek minute me pahuch skta tha lekin usko dayna k sath maja aa rha tha... uski baate sun rha tha vo... bachpan ki...
phir vo raat ko pahuch gaya... apne yaha ab uski poochtaach me usne kaha ki truck per bandaro ne hamla kiya aur jab ve utre to sher kha gaya... mai truck me tha isliye bacha aur maal utaarke aa gaya...
phir ajay ghar aaya to dayna se bola ki tum adrishy ho jao sirf mai dekh saku...
dayna ne vahi kiya .. phir jab ajay ander pahucha tab sab khus hue lekin shanti abhi bhi dari hui thi... ajay ne b dekh liya tha lekin is baat ko 3 din beet gaye the... isliye ajay ne pehel krne ka socha... to bahar jaake usne dayna se kuch tohfe mangwaye aur dayna se bola ki mere liye ek ghar ka intejaam kar skti ho...
tab dayna ne kaha haa jarur... aap tayyar rahiye...
dayna ne jungle k pass jaha log kam hi rehte the jisse kisi ko shaq na ho vaha ek mahal jaisa ghar bana diya... aake ajay ko ishare me bata diya...
ajay ne yaha sabko gift diye aab khus hue lekin is baar neha ne ajay ko kaha ki maine tumhe itna sab kaha tum hamare liye ye sab kr rhe ho... tumhe bura nhi lagta kya.... tum itne acche kaise ho...
ajay neha ki baat sunke bola aap chahe mujje kuch bhi samjhe... aapke vaha se aane k baad mai bahut roya... mere man me aapki baate chalti rehti thi lekin kisine mera saara gussa khatam ker diya ki insaan gusse me vo bhi bol. jaata h jiska usko baad me dukh hota h... aap to meri didi ho... aapka bura b nhi manna chahiye tha... mujhe pata nhi tha us din kuch bhi...
ab emotional scene ho gaya tha... phir sabko ajay ne kaha ki chalo sab tayyar ho jao hame kahi chalna h...
sabne kaha ki kaha.. tab ajay ne dekh ker batana...
jaise hi ajay sabko bahar laaya tab vaha dekha ki ek gaadi khadi h shandaar... ajay ne dayna ki taraf dekha to usne muskurate hue bas aankh maar di...
ajay ne sukriya kaha aur gaadi me baitha... tab shanti se rha na gaya to usne poocha ki ye sab kya h kiski gaadi h... aur sukriya kisko bola tumne... vaha koi nhi tha...
ajay ne baat ko sambhalte hue kaha ki maine bhagwan ka sukriya kiya... jo mujhe aap jaise log sath rehne ko mile...
chhoti to ajay ki god me baithi thi... jo bahut jyada khus thi aur uski vajah se neha... neha ko badal diya tha chhoti ne...
jab ajay ne dayna poocha tab dayna ne ishara kiya ki bas chalte raho... vo bahut chhoti ho gai thi aur ajay k samne baithi thi jaha AC hota h...
thodi door chalne k baad dekha ek shandaar Haweli unke samne h tab ajay b shocked hua dekhke... ki ye kya h ghar ko bola tha haweli bana di... ??
dayna bas dant dikha rhi thi... ??
phir ajay ne kaha abse hum yaha rahenge...
sab sunke behosh hone ko hue ki ye kahi pagal to nhi ho gaya... jabki rani ne kaha ki ajay tumhari Tabiyat to theek h na... ajay ne kaha ki bhabhi aap chinta na karo... sab sahi h bas aap dekhte jao...
shanti aur neha ne mana kr diya ki pehle batao ye sab kaha se aaya kya krte ho tum... tab rani ne kaha ki muje ajay se akele me baat krni h...
ajay aur raani ek side aa gaye... vaha per rani ne kaha ki ajay ye sab kya h agar tumhare pass ye tha to vaha kyu le gaye... ye sab kaha se aaya ek saal me itna sab kaise hua...
ajay ne kaha ki bhabhi mai sab bata dunga lekin abhi aap bas chalo ander koi lafda nhi h bas ander chaliye aap...
rani ne kaha ab bas tum hi ham sabka sahara ho... kuch galat mat krna dekho... nahi to is baar hum sab mar jayenge...
aur rani ne ajay ko gale laga liya aur rone lagi...
raani rote hue bol rhi thi ki tumne aake hame ek nayi jindagi di h... hum us din sab marne jaa rhe the... phir tum aa gaye aur aur aur.... phir vo jor se rone lagi.. ajay ki bhi aankh me aansu aa gaye ye sunke... use aaj phir se shivani ki yaad aa gai thi... sab door se dekh rhe the... phir ajay ne rani ko chup karwaya...
aur poocha ki bas aap sab sambhal lena bhabhi...
rani ne kaha ab bas dekhte jao tum... phir usne aake neha aur shanti se kaha ki chalo abse yahi hamara ghar h...
sab uski baat maan gaye aur rani ne smile ki ajay ki taraf. .. ajay ko rani se sach me pyaar ho gaya tha...