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Update -20
Guruji : tumhe rudra se sachche dil se pyaar nhi tha kintu aadha man tumhara uske liye kuch b krne ko tayyar tha ...tum b jao aur rudra khud tumhare pass aa jayega ..jab niyati tay karegi ...Lekin devi tum uski taqat bano kamjori nahi ...abhi bhi isne sirf tumhari vajah se jaan dedi ...anyatha ye khud ko shant krke agar bhakti krta to mahakaal jarur isko vo trishul dete ...
Ab aage --
Ek alag galaxy me ek grah ...jaha mahamanv rehte h ...ye log bahut hi balshali hote h
Yaha jaldi jawan ho jaate h lekin budhe nhi hote ...yaha ka alag hi vatavaran h ...
Yaha rehne wale log apna kamana khana krte h..yaha koi raja nhi h naa yaha kisi tarah ka lobh lalach ...
Sab khus h ...kisi ko sundarta se kuch lena dena nhi ...sab bhagwan ki banai hui vastu sunder hi hoti h aisa manna h inka ...
Yaha ek parivaar me janm hua ajay ka ...iske janm k baad sabhi khus the ki ek din yaha ek baba aaye ..
Unhone un logo se kaha ki aapke ghar me ek divya balak ne janm liya h ...aap ise yaha nhi rakh payenge ...iska janm lok kalyan k liye hua h ...agar aap jidd karenge to shayad aap kabhi apne aap ko muaaf nhi kr payenge ...aapka ek faisla tay karega ki sab jagah jo kaali shaktiyo ka raaj hota jaa rha h vo sirf aapke ek faisle se khatm ya badh skta h ...
In logo ko unhone is tarah samjhaya ki ve apne dil per patthar rakh k raaji ho gaye ...
Baba use prithvi per le aaye ....aur apni patni ko saunp diya ...
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Guruji ne devi aur indu ko aadesh to de diya ...lekin ab unhe apne ek mitra ki sahayta li ...
Use bulwaya ...( Ye vahi mitra h jo gurudev guruma h )
Guruji : suno mujhe tumse ek madad chahiye ..
Gurudev: bolo aap ham tayyar h
Guruji : jao ..aur rudra ka pata lagao ...ki vo kaha h ...aur usko vaha se leke aao ... Lekin jab tak vo insab se ladne k liye tayyar na ho jaye tabtak usko door hi rakhna ...usko prem aur nafrat me bhed ka pata hona chahiye ...usko ye siksha dena tumhara kaam h ...
.gurudev : mujhe bahut prasannta hogi ...aapne hame is layak samjha ...
Guruji ne apni divya drishty se dekh k bataya ki rudra ab kaha h ...aur gurudev ki bata diya ki ab jao .. tumhe vaha jaana h ...
Gurudev ne guruma se kaha ki chalo chalte h ...
Ye sunke gurudev nikal gaye unhone apna bhesh change kiya aur pahuch gaye ajay ko lene ...
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Gurudev aur guruma ajay ko leke aa to gaye kintu ab unhe usko sukh dukh ka ehsaas dilana tha....satya aur asatya me kya antar h ye batana tha ...
Isliye jo shaktiyan ajay ki aatma se judi hui thi unhe alag karna tha ...
Agar ajay ko apni shaktiyo ka aabhash bachpan me ho jaata to vo har kaam shaktiyo se krne lagta aur usme ghamand aa jaata ...
Guruji ne ek kabile me jaake tap krne lage aur guruma ajay ko pyar se paalne lagi ...aise hi jab ajay kuch bada ho gaya ...sawaal jawab krne laga ...tab gurudev ne kaha ki ab samay aa gaya h
Guru maa ne kaha ki is chhoti si jaan k uper itne sankat h mai aisa nhi krne de skti ...bhale hi mai iski maa nhi hu ...kintu maine ise maa ka pyaar diya h...
Gurudev ne phir apni patni ko samajhaya ...aur lag gaye dhoondhne koi aisa parivaar jaha iski jaan ka khatra na ho lekin nafrat aur pyar dono mil sake ...
Ab guruji ne dekha ki ek aadmi h jo apne bachcho se bahut pyaar krta h lekin uski patni confused rehti thi ...jo kabhi nafrat to kabhi pyaar krne lagti ...
Guruji ko yahi parivaar acha laga aur apni havan me kriya krni shuru kr di ...
Gurudev ko jo rasta mila isse gurumaa naakhus thi lekin unhe ye karna pada ... unhone ajay ki shaktiyon ko bandhne k liye bahut bada yagn havan kiya ...aur ajay ko jab havan k pass laya gaya tab ajay se kaha ki beta bolo mai apna kavach aur shaktiyan apni nischit ** aayu tak apne shareer se bahar rakhna chahta hu ...jab tak mai inhe aane na kahu tab tak ye bahar hi rahe ...aur meri aayu *** varsh hone k baad khud b khud mere ander sama jaaye ...vaha bahut hi bada visfot hua jisme gurudev aur guruma apna shareer tyagna pada ..kyonki ve ajay ki shaktiyon ko sambhal na paye ...aur shaktiyan khud hi idhar udhar vilay ho gai ...lekin abhi guru dev aur gurumaa sabko dikhai de rhe the ...per chhuu nhi skte the ...
Ab ajay ki shaktiyan bandh gai thi lekin ajay ka kavach bahar nikal aaya tha ...jise gurumaa ne pranaam krke vaha k logo dwara mandir banwa diya ...usko ajay alawa abhi koi chhu nhi skta tha ...
Ajay behosh ho chuka tha ...guruma ne aadesh diya ki isko sadak per chhod aaye ... gurudev ne ajay k shareer per hamle k nishan bana diye jaise janvar krta h ...
Ramesh ko ajay sadak per mila ...jise vo ghar le aaya ...
Yaha phir se gurudev aa gaye aur unhe bataya ki ye balak ka naam ajay rakhe ...aur ise koi bhi rulayega nhi ....( Jisse isko ghar se naa nikale) nahi to dukh k dwar khul us vyakti k liye khul jayege jisne ise dukh dena ka socha h ...
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TRISHUL KI KAHANI
Trishul k tukde swayam mahakaal ne krke diye jab sab jagah yudh hone laga ...lekin unhone ye b kaha ki ek din ye tumhe vapis krna padega ...jab tak rakh skte ho rakho ...mai ye tumhe is yudh viraam k liye de rha hu ...ye uska vadh kr dega jo galat h ...mere trishul k 2 tukde agar aapas me takraye to vadh uska hoga jisne paap kiya h jo Dharm k viruddh lad rha h ...
Aise hi ek hissa Parilok me ...dusra rakshaso ko diya gaya ...teesra hissa manushyo k liye tha ...lekin manushya lalachi the jo b hasil krta usse duniya per raaj krne ki sochta ...aur paap krta ...lekin ek din ek manushya ne paap ka rasta chhodke use kailaash parvat per ek tilism me kaid krke chhod diya ... jisse koi nek banda hi isko hasil kr paye ...
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HOSPITAL--- Aaj ajay ko yaha pade hue 6 din beet gaye h ... doctor ne jawab de diya h ki hum kuch nhi kr skte ....
Police b apna bayaan leke chali gai ki kya hua tha kyu hua .... goli chalane wali soniya k baap ne kanoon ka muh band kr diya ...
Idhar sabki halat kharaab thi ... lekin dayna gusse ko dabaye hue thi usko poori umeed thi ki ajay jarur jaagega ...ruhi aur suryalekha ghanto ajay k room me baithke roti ...aur prarthna krti ...
Rani to bas sabko sambhalne me lagi hui thi ...chhoti ko ye bata diya tha ...
Neha roj asamanjas me thi ... Apne kamre me baithi ro rhi thi aur usko koi samjha rha tha ki kiske liye ro rhi ho us ajay k liye jiski manhoosiyat ki vajah se tumhari shadi barbaad ho gai ...tunhara dulha mar gaya ...maine pehle hi samjhaya tha ki ajay se doori banake rakho ...agar maine waqt per na samjhaya hota to tum to apna sabkuch ajay ko saunp deti ...
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Nice update bhai...Update -17Gurudev : putra ab apni soch ko viraam do ...jab tumhe sab pata chal jayega tab tum khud jaan jaoge ki kya sahi tha kyu sahi tha ...bas ab tum apne ander jo shaktiyan h unhe bahar nikaalo ...ye heere jo chamak rhe h inme kaafi shaktiya b bas tumhe pehchanne ki jarurat h ...ab tum subah yoga karo aur dhyaan lagao apne man me jhanko ..tab tumhe divya drishty prapt hogi ...sab jaan jaoge .
Ab aage ----
Gurudevman me ) mere bachche jab tumhe sab maloom hoga ..tab kitna dard hoga ye to mai nhi jaan skta lekin ya to tum bikhar jaoge yaa is shrishti ka vinaas kr doge ...mujhe muaf kr dena ...maine jo jhooth bola h ...shayad tum mujhe muaf na karo lekin jis din tumhe ye pata chala ki kyu maine ye sab kaha ...tab tum jarur mujhe muaf kr doge ...
Ajay ne socha filhaal guru ji jo kehte h vahi sahi h ...aage jo hoga dekha jayega ...
Phir gurudev k sath ve sabhi chale gaye aur ab ghar me baaki member bache ...
Ab ajay ne socha ki sabse pehle mujhe apne naam k pita ki company haasil karni h ...chahe kuch b ho jaye mai sab leke rahunga ...iske peeche kaun h sab pata krke rahunga ...
Ajay ne neha se kaha ki tum aaj college nahi jaa rhi kya ...
Neha
Neha ko ye dar tha ki kahin ajay ko kisi ne bata diya to uska kya hoga ...jaane anjane me usse badi bhool ho gai thi ...phir b usne jawab diya darte hue
Ajay ne chhoti ko aawaj lagai ki aaj mai tumhe school chhodne jaunga jisse vo khus ho gai ...
Phir ajay ne neha k sath chhoti ko car me baithaya aur nikal pada ...chhoti ko drop krke jab vo college k gate per pahucha to neha ne kaha ki vo chali jayegi tum jao ...
Neha nhi chahti thi ki ajay k samne koi aaye ...aur ajay uska bura haal krde....lekin uski kismat kharaab thi tabhi gate per varun ki bike aake ruki ...
Aur varun aaj neha ko kisi ki car me dekhke chidh gaya ...
Usne bas neha se hi hello kiya aur chala gaya ajay ki taraf dekhta hua ...
Vo ajay k samne bachcha lag rha tha ...ajay ki body Hollywood k dwayn Johnson jaisi ho gai thi ...
Lekin rang gora ...
Ajay ne neha se kaha ki mai b chalta hua college me ..kabhi gaya nhi to mujhe pata nhi h kaisa hota h ...
Neha k to aaj hosh hi gum the ...vo to kuch bol hi nhi paa rhi thi ...vo ajay ko insab se door rakhna chahti thi ...lekin aaj use surprise milne wale the jab ajay ne gate se entry ki ...
tab ek simple car dekhke logo ne notice nhi kiya ...lekin jab usme se ajay utra ...tab ladke to aankhe faade dekh rhe the ...ladkiya to bas apne wale ko chhod uske pass jane ko tayyar thi ...
Ajay ne neha se kaha ki dekho sabhi kaise dekh rhe h jaise yaha alien aa gaya ho ...
Neha bas chupchap aage chali jaa rhi thi ...tabhi raste me rahul aa gaya ...aur neha k sath kisi ladke ko dekh vo bhi chaunka ...isliye usne pehle jaan lena chaha ki kaun h ...aise hi pass jana theek nahi samjha ...
Jab unka aadha rasta paar ho gaya ..parking gate se college me kaafi faasla tha ...tab vaha kuch ladkiya baithi thi jinme ek 2 ladke b the ...ve ragging le rhi thi aane jane walo ki ...
Usne neha ko roka aur ajay b ruk gaya ...phir usne dono ko ek najar dekha phir apne sath walo se boli ki body me hawa bharke koi bhi muh uthaye chala aata h ... Soniya se koi nhi bach skta ...
Ye soniya varun ki behen h ...bigdi aulaad ...baap k paise ka ghamand aur full ayyash lekin ladko ko gulaam bana k rakhna pasand krti h ...bf nhi chahiye isko ...
Soniya : hey suno tum dono ...chalo idhar aake niche baith jao ...
Neha ye sunke ghabra gai ..vahi khadi reh gai lekin aaj ajay pehli baar aisi jagah aaya to usko maja aa rha tha ...usne aur maje lene k liye niche baith gaya ...
Ajay : haanji ...ab
Soniya : silent ...jo kahungi bas mai kahungi ...is baar bol diya ..varna jabaan katwa dungi ...
Ajay : theek h ji
Soniya: lagta h bahut gym ki h .. chalo idhar aake thoda push ups lagao ..
Ajay shuru ho gaya aur sabhi aankhe faad k dekhne lage ...phir ajay 50 maarke ruk gaya ...use to khud pata nhi chal rha tha ki itni taqat kaise aai ...
Ajay : ho gaya ji ..ab
Soniya : ye tumhari gf h na ... chalo sabke samne isko kiss karo ..
Ajay : ye kya badtameeji h ...meri behen h ye ...aur mai isko kiss nhi karunga
Soniya: Ooo acha ...to ye tumhari behen h ..matlab tumhe bodyguard bana ke laai h ye
Ajay : haan ...jaisa tum samjho ...
Soniya : mujhse jubaan ladate ho ...jante nhi ki mai kaun hu ...mai soniya ... Soniya Dhanraj desai.. daughter of Dhanraj desai ...
Ajay ka ye sunke khoon khaul utha ki iske baap ne hamari company dhokhe se hadap kr li aur mai iske samne aise pesh aa rha hu ...ajay ne sabke saamne usko pakda aur kiss kar diya ..jisse poore College me ye khabar Seconds me fail gai aur sabhi shocked ho gaye ...
Soniya : u bastard ... tumhari himmat kaise hui muje touch krne ki
Ajay : touch nhi kiya ..tunhare hoth choose h janemann
Soniya : abhi dekhna tum apne pairo per vapis nhi jaoge idhar se ...
Usne mobile nikaala aur call krne lagi ...neha ne ajay ko pakda aur boli jao pls yaha se ...lekin ajay ne uski ek na suni aur vahi khada rha ...
Ki tabhi 12-13 ladke hath me hockey dande liye bhagte hue aaye ...
jaise hi soniya ne ishara kiya to ajay ko maarne ko daude ...aur ab ajay b tayyar tha ....jo b pass ko aata ajay usko utha k fenk deta jisko b ajay ka hath padta vo dobara na uthta ...
Is beech varun vaha aa gaya aur usne aate hi neha ki taraf dekha ...jise dekh neha b dar gai lekin use yakeen tha ki ajay k pass power h ... isliye varun nhi jeet payega to use varun ki chinta thi ...
Idhar ajay apni power ka use sabke samne nhi krna chahta tha ... isliye vo bas ek hero ki tarah sabko maar rha tha ...
Ab varun ne aate hi peeche se waar kiya dande ka aur ajay ko mehsoos hote hi jaise ajay ghooma to use varun aur neha ka face ek sath dikha jisme neha k chehre per ab jyada fikra dikh rhi thi ...
Ajay ne apna kavach ko kisi b war ko rokne se mana kr diya ..jise vo control b kr gaya ab ajay ko chot lagne lagi ..aur ab ajay ko neha k chehre k alawa aur kuch nhi dikh rha tha ...vo bas maar kha rha tha ...
Neha jiske man me kabhi ye aaya tha ki vo bhi ajay ki ho jayegi ...lekin jaldi hi behek gai ...aur ajay se feel khatam ho gaya uska aur jagah dar ne leli ...jabse use pata chala ki ajay k pass powers h ...vo sadharan aadmi nhi h ,yahi ek reason use dara rha tha ... kyuki mohabbat aur attraction alag alag h ...
Aaj ajay ko neha ki aankho me phir se vahi sab dikh rha tha jo pehle dikhta tha ...uski aankho me use apne liye koi fikra nhi dikh rhi thi ...
Ab ajay per uski negativity haavi hone lagi thi use gussa aane laga tha ...phir usne vaha jo tandav kiya sabhi ka bura haal kr diya ...koi kahi jaake girta koi kahi .. lekin ek dum dekhte hi dekhte ek goli chali aur ajay ki kamar ki taraf se lag k dil k pass jaake fas gai ...phir dusri chali jo uske hath me lagi ... teesri goli uske pet me lagi ...
Ye goliyan soniya ne chalai thi ...tabhi varun jo langda rha tha usne ek danda uthaya aur poori taqat se ajay k sir me maar diya ....
Ab jaake neha ki cheekh nikli ...ajay ki shakti active hone lagi thi ...lekin sukra rha ki uska kavach sirf uske kehne se active hota varna doctor uska ilaaj nhi kr paate kyuki sui bhi nhi ghusti...
Ab ajay behos ho chuka tha ...varun ne dekha ki ab vo gir gaya h tab bhi vo ajay ko maarta rha ...phir neha ne usko roka ki mere bhai ko chhod do ...pls mai tumhare hath jodti hu ...
Neha ko khud believe nhi ho rha tha ki ye sab kya ho rha h ... ajay to ek mahamanav h to usko goli kaise lag skti h ...ab varun me ajay ko chhod diya aur neha se bola ki meri behen ki taraf koi aankh utha k b dekhega to mai usko jaan se maar dunga ...ye kehke vaha se sab chale gaye
Ab neha ajay k pass baithi ro rhi thi ...aur badbad kr rhi thi ..ye sab kaise hua ... tumhe to kuch nhi hona chahiye tha ...rahul naa jane kaha se aaya aur neha ko sambhala aur bola ki chalo abhi inki sanse chal rhi h ...aap inhe hospital le chalo ...
Neha ab hosh me aai aur jaldi se rani ko call milake bataya sab kuch to ghar me sabhi ko dukh hua ek shakhs ko chhod kr vo abhi soch rhi thi kiska sath de ...
Khair sabhi chal pade ... hospital k liye ...
Suryalekha aur prabha, ruhi ko hospital k baare me jara b pata nhi tha ve bas vaidya k baare me jaanti thi ...ruhi k pass sahi krne ki bahut si vidyaye aur shaktiyan thi ..vo bade se bada jakhm jaldi bhar deti thi ...
Dyan aur ruhi shanti k sath the ... suryalekha aur prabha rani k sath ... sabhi hospital pahuch gaye ...idhar ajay ko leke ve bhi pahuch gaye ...tab ruhi ne bahar hi roka sabko ...rahul bas dekhta reh gaya ki ek se ek apsara h is ghar me to ...
Per abhi uska b dhyan ajay per tha ...dayna ne poocha tab ruhi ne ajay ki goli chhodke baaki jakhm sahi kr diye aur boli ye mujhse nhi hoga ...
Usne Sir k jakhm b bhar diye ...
Doctors ki team aai aur operation shuru hua ...sabhi dukhi the aur dayna to gusse me pagal ho rhi thi lekin neha usko kuch nhi bata rhi thi use pata tha ki ye ajay k liye jaan b de skti h ye jaake unhe maar dalegi vaise b dayna ek rakshas jaati se h ...
Operation successful raha lekin ajay ko hosh nhi aa rha tha ... doctor b confuse the ki sab sahi h(ruhi ne kiya jiska pata sirf gharwalo ko tha) sirf goli lagi h lekin ajay ko hosh kyu nhi aaya
Unhone bahar aake sabhi se kaha ki operation successful raha lekin mareej ko hosh nhi aaya h agar 48 ghante me bhi hosh na aaya to ye COMA
Me chale jaayenge ...
Rani neha aur shanti teeno hi ek dum aise ho gai jaise jaan nikal gai ho ...
Baaki sab unhe jijhod kr poochne lagi ki kya hua ...
Tab rani ne unhe bataya ki doctor ne kaha h ki ab unhe 2din tak hosh na aaya to ve pata nhi kab tak uthenge ..matlab sote hi rahenge ...
Phir sabko pata chal gaya ki ajay murkshit (unconscious) ho chuka h ...pata nhi kab hosh aayega ...
Ajay ko ab apni duniya alag hi dikhai de rhi thi ...use vo sab yaad aane laga jo uske sath ho chuka tha ..
Kaise vo yaha pahucha sab ...use dikhai dene laga ki kaise khus tha vo ...
Use sab ek film ki tarah dikh rha tha ...