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Bhai bohat badhiya update...Update -21Neha in roj asamanjas me thi ... Apne kamre me baithi ro rhi thi aur usko koi samjha rha tha ki kiske liye ro rhi ho us ajay k liye jiski manhoosiyat ki vajah se tumhari shadi barbaad ho gai ...tunhara dulha mar gaya ...maine pehle hi samjhaya tha ki ajay se doori banake rakho ...agar maine waqt per na samjhaya hota to tum to apna sabkuch ajay ko saunp deti ...
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Sabhi apne apne devta ki pooja krne me lagi hui thi ..prabha to mandir se bahar hi nikal rhi thi ... kyuki ajay ne usse shadi ki thi ...uska dharm karm ajay hi tha ....ab chhoti ko bhi pata chal chuka tha ....
Vo bhi ro rhi thi ...
Sab jabardasti krke ek dusre ko khana khila rhe the ...
Ajay ki halat me koi sudhar nhi tha ...indu aur devi b aaj yahin per thi ....unhe b chinta ho rhi thi ...
Soniya k papa dhanraj desai ne ek bada game khela ... usko abhi ye nahi pata tha jinki company ko usne Chheena h ye vahi log h ...use bas apne bete aur beti k liye ye sab kiya ...
Usne apne power ka prayog krke doctor ko khareed liya aur usse ye kehelwaya ki ye ajay naam ka patient ab kabhi nahi jaagega ab to aap ise hamare hawale kar dijiye . Ye hamare students k kaam aa jayenge aur inke body parts b gareeb logo k kaam aa jayenge. ..
Dhanraj ne police ko bhi khareed liya. ..aur case rafa dafa kr diya. ...soniya aur varun ko kuch din k liye underground rehne k liye bol diya. ..
Sabhi ne bahut mana kiya lekin doctors ne apni manmani ki kisi ko bina bataye le jaane lage aur guards bulwake ajay ka postmartem krne ko le jaane lage ..
Doctors ko laga tha ab kisi ko pata nhi chalega aur sab kaam k baad inhe paisa power dikhake mub band kr denge ...
Room k bahar rani aur suryalekha baithi hui thi ...shanti ne kaha use washroom jaana h to usne suryalekha ko sath le jaane k liye kaha to vo dono chali gai ...
Is waqt dayna aur ruhi ghar per thi chhoti ko khana khilane k liye ...neha apne room me hi thi ...
Rani jo kuch aajkal ho rha h uske baare me soch rhi thi ...ki ek nurse ne aake kaha ki madam aapko cabin me bulaya h ...
Rani ye sunke chali gai ...idhar jab bahar koi nahi bacha tab doctors ne apna kaam poora kiya ...ajay ko bahar leke nikal gaye aur postmartem room me le gaye mortuary me...
Shanti aur suryalekha jab yaha aai to rani b aa gai ...ve bahar hi baithi hui thi ..ki dayna ka ne call ki ( ye mat poochna isko kaise pata ..sba seekh liya unhone) dayna ne rani se kaha ki vo khana leke aa rhi h ...iske baad rani ne dono ko bataya ki aapko ghar jaana ho to jao ....shanti ne kaha ki suryalekha aur mai ghar ho aate h ...tum yahi ruko ... phir hum ruhi aur neha ko bhej denge ...
Rani ne kaha theek h ...shanti aur suryalekha jaldi krke ghar ki taraf nikli ...aur ghar jaake dekha abhi sab yahi h tab shanti ne kaha ki dayna tumne bahut kaam kiya h ...thak gai hogi neha aur ruhi chali jayegi hospital . ..
Dayna ne kaha ki neha apne kamre me h pata nhi kya kya krti rehti h. ...mai hi jaati hu ...
Shanti dayna se behes nhi kr skti thi ...isliye usne chup rehna hi behtar samjha ...sab dayna se darte jo the ...dayna aur ruhi nikal pade chhoti ko leke Shanti aur suryalekha ko baaki kaam batake ve teeno chal padi ...aaj dayna bechain si thi use ghabrahat si ho rhi thi. ..
Isliye usne auto wale se kaha ki jaldi chalo...
Dayna shaktiyo ka upyog nhi krna chahti thi ...kyuji phir ruhi aur chhoti ko raste me chhodna padta ...undono ko sath nhi jaa skti thi vo ...
Jab vo hospital pahuchi ...vaha jaake usne ajay k room me jaana chaha to room lock tha ...guards ne aake mana kr diya ki aap nhi jaa skte ...
Dayna ne bahut poocha ki kyu ...rani ne b kaha ki aap hame ander kyo nhi jaane de rhe ....
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Jab ajay ko ve postmartem k liye le gaye ...ab ve relax the ki ise kya hosh aane wala h ...
Mukhya doctor ne kaha ki ek ek ang sahi se nikaalna h ...
Isliye unhone apni tayyari krne k liye ek room me chale gaye jo side me tha ...vaha jaake hatho per aur muh per mask kapde vagairah pehen ke jab tayyar hue ...is beech ajay ki sabhi shaktiyan active ho chuki thi ...uski aankh khul gai ...apne
Aapko ek kamre me band dekhke vo ghabraya
Phir gate kholke bahar chala gaya ...
Idhar doctor jab aaye to ajay ko vaha na dekh k unki b halat kharaab ho gai ...unhe bilkul nhi laga tha ki use hosh aa skta h ...
Ve usko dhoondhne idhar udhar bhaage ...
Ajay aise hi chalte hue dekhte hue udhar hi pahuch gaya jaha dayna aur baaki baithe hue the ...
Ajay apne aapko hospital me dekhke sab yaad aa gaya ki vo kaise yaha pahucha ...
Dayna k pass jaake ajay ne kaha ki chalo ghar chalte h ..
Dayna ajay ko dekhte hi shocked ho gai ..aur uthke uske gale lag gai ...chhoti b bhaagke ajay ki god me chadh gai ..ajay ne usko apni god me liya...
Baaki ka b dhyan jab gaya to ve b peeche se usko lipat gai ...dayna ne ajay ka chehra chumbano se bhar diya ...
Phir ajay ne sabko hataya tab rani ne poocha
Rani : tum to ander the vaha kaise pahuche ...udhar se kaha se aa rhe ho
Ajay : meri ankh jab khuli tab mai murdo k beech tha ...vaha se nikal kar aaya to tum sab mil gai
Rani : lekin doctors ne kaha tha ki tum yaha ander ho ...aur hame kisi ko b dekhne se b mana kr diya
Ajay : mai to mortuary me se nikal kar aa rha hu ...kahin mujhko mara hua to nahi samjha in logo ne ..
Rani : iska matlab ye hame bina bataye hi tumhara postmartem krne le gaye. Jabki unhe ye pata tha ki tum abhi jinda ho ...
Dayna jo kabse baat sun rhi thi ...usne poocha ki postmartem kya hota h .. usko rani ne bataya ki postmartem me shareer k ang nikaal liye jaate h aur dusro k shareer me dal diye h jinke ang kharaab ho jaate h ...
Dayna ne itna sunte hi vaha se gayab ho gai. . ajay ko b gussa aa gaya lekin vo abhi maarna nhi chahta tha . Usne chhoti ko utaar k bola mai abhi aaya ..
Vo b turant speed se dayna k pass pahuch gaya jaha vo ek aadmi k uper baithi thi aur uska gala pakad k pooch rhi thi baaki sab kaha h ...
Ajay ne usko kaha ruko ye aise nahi batayega ...ab batayega ...
Ajay ne ab apne shaitani roop me aake ...aankhe laal aur chehra kathor .. usse poocha ki batao kon kon the jo mujhe maarna chahte the ...
Us aadmi ne kaha ki mujhe chhod do ...uski cheekh nikal gai ajay ka ye roop dekhke ...dayna b dar gayi thi ...ajay ne uski gardan pakdi aur ukhad di uske shareer se ...
Phir vo vaha se nikal dusre room me gaye tab sab vaha mil gaye ...jaise hi ajay ko dekha unki aankhe bahar aane ko ho gai ...
Dayna ne turant vaha maar kaat macha di ...kisi ka hath ukhadti kisi ka sir ...ajay ne jaake mukhya doctor ko pakda aur uski aankho me aankhe daalke bola ..
"""""Maut se darte ho ...kab tak bachoge """""""
Vo doctor ab aur jyada dar gaya aur jubaan se kuch nhi bol paa rha tha . Ajay ne apna roop badla aur vo ek Nar bhediya ban gaya ... doctor ki gardan pakad kar bola ki batao kiske kehne per tumne ye kiya ...
Lekin doctor ki to heart attack se maut ho gai ...kuch batane se pehle hi vo mar gaya ...aajtak usne filmo me hi dekha tha ki aisa b ho skta h ...
Us kamre me sab jagah khoon aur tukde pade the .. dayna apne asli roop me khadi thi ...ajay ne usko dekha ...aur bola chalo ye sab gayab kardo aur inhe dafna do ..
Sabhi vaha se nikal ghar aa gaye. Ghar aate hi ajay ko kuch mehsoos hua .....
Ajay ne shanti se naak se badi lambi saans li ...aur saans kheechke bola ohh to tum b yaha ho ...aaj nahi bachoge ...
Ruhi dayna aur shanti suryalekha ,prabha b bahar thi ...lekin neha apne kamre me thi ...vo bas khana khane aati thi aur kamre me chali jaati thi ...
Ajay ne speed se jaake neha k kamre k darwaje ko khatkhataya....neha ne poocha kaun h ...
Ajay ne smile krte hue kaha darwaja kholo ...mai hu ajay ...
Neha ne kaha tum niche chalo mai aati hu ...
Ajay ne bas smile ki aur aankh band krke teleport hua darwaje k paar ...ajay ko apne samne khada dekhke neha ghabra gai ...aur haklane lagi ...
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Ab vo uthne wali thi ki ajay ne hath pakad liya ...aur bola bahar aa jao ...agar maine nikaala to samajh lena ...bahut bura hoga tumhare sath ...
Itna sunte hi neha ki aawaj badal gai ...
Ajay ne apni shirt khol k heere dikhaye ...
Aur bola jaanti ho na ye kya h ...tum to ek chhoti si mohra ho mai to tumhare aaka ko b maar dalunga...
Ab neha ki aawaj bahut bhari ho gai thi ...usne haste hue kaha ...
Hahahaha....tum vaha tak kaise pahuchoge ...tum use kabhi dhoondh nhi paoge ...uske pass b talwar h ...
Ajay :: janti ho na jab ye talwar aapas me takrayegi tab jo galat hoga vo maara jayega ... talwar hi uski jaan le legi ...
Neha :: nahi ye nahi ho skta ...mai isse pehle tumhe maar dalungi ...apni jaan de dungi lekin tumhare aage nahi jhukungi ...
Ajay : abhi is waqt iske ander se bahar niklo ... Shayad mai tumhe jaane du ...agar maine bahar nikaala to jaanti ho kya anjaam hoga...
Neha : ruko mai aati hu khud bahar aati hu ...
Jaise hi neha k ander se vo shakti bahar nikli dayna ko aabhaas ho gaya aur vo b kamre k ander aa gai ..ajay k kehne per chup khadi ho gai ...ajay ne neha ko chhod usko pakda ...vo ek dhua sa tha lekin chamakta hua ....uski akriti insaan jaisi thi ...
Ajay ne kaha apne asli roop me aao ...
Neha behosh ho chuki thi ...aur jab vo dhua apne asli roop me aaya to vo ek chudail thi ...jiska bahut hi bhayanak chehra tha ...
Ajay ne poocha ki batao ab sab tum kyo aur kaha se aai ho ...
Chudail : mujhe jaane do yaa maar dalo mai apne aaka ki gulaam hu ...unke khilaaf nhi jaa skti ...
Ajay : maine ye nhi kaha ki muje aaka k pass le chalo ..bas ye batado yaha kyu aai
Chudail : mai yaha jab pehli baar aai thi tab tumhari is rakhail ne yaha shield bana diya ...jab iski shakti kamjor hui isne shield ko band kr diya ...
Tab mai chhup k sab dekh rhi thi ... phir mai mauke ki talaash me thi ... mujhe aisa kuch chahiye tha jo mai kisi ko aabhas hue bina ander chali jau ...aur mera ye kaam neha ne kar Diya ...dayna ghar se bahar thi mai neha k ander ghuske ander chali gai ...muje iske ander kaafi time ho gaya tha ...maine ise tumahare khilaaf bhadkaya..
Ajay : to sab karwane me tumhara hath tha ...ab tumne apne aaka ka pata to batana h nahi isliye mai tumhe nahi chhod skta ...
Chudail : mujhe maarna aasaan nhi h ... aur vaise b tumhara hi koi h jo tumhe dhokha de rha h ...mai to bas neha se karwaya jo karwana tha ...
Ajay : ye meri chhaati me jo lage h ye sundarta ki vastu nhi h ..mahakaal k manke h jo unke TRISHUL me lage the ...
Chudail ye sunke ghabra gai aur chillane lagi nahiiii muje jaane do mujhe chhod do aage se kabhi nhi aaungi ...
Ajay : tumhe naa jane kitne pariwaar aur kitne logo ko aise hi maar diya hoga ...aaj tujhe mukti de deta hu ...
Ajay ne apne chest per hath rakha aur uska hath pakad rakha tha ... jisse ajay k shareer me se bijli si nikalne lagi aur vo chudail jalne lagi phir vo bhasm ho gai ...
Dayna : suno ajay ...isne bola koi aur h ...aakhir kaun h jisne hame dhokha diya ...
Ajay : chinta mat karo mai pata laga lunga ...use b nhi chhodunga mai ... aakhir dhokhebaaj ki saja maut hi to hoti h ... chalo neha ko uthao aur niche le chalo ...
Jab ve seedhiyan utar k aaye aur sabhine neha ko dayna ko god (lap) me dekha ...to chaunk gai ..unhe laga ajay ne isko maar daala lekin ve sabhi kuch keh na paai ...
Ajay ne niche aake prabha se kaha ki jaake pani lao aur ise jagaao ..aur khane ka intejaam karo bahut bhookh lagi h yaar...
Jaise hi prabha ne suna sabhi hadbadaye aur lag gai apne apne kaam per ...vahi kisiko bahut paseena aa rha tha ...
Neha ko jab jagaya aur usne apne aapko dekha to uthke ajay ko baho me bhar liya aur rone lagi .. boli mujhe muaf krdo ...mujse sab usne karwaya ...vo mujhe maar deti ...usne muje bhadkaya tha ...
Ajay ne usko chup karwaya aur bola chhoti dekho ye kaise ro rhi h betu neha ko chup karwao ..
Chhoti ne aake neha ko sorry bola aur chup karwaya ...
Phir sabhi ne khana khaya ...aaj sabhi khus the ...
Neha ne ajay se kaha ki soniya aur varun dhanraj k bache h ... Unse hisaab lena h ...
Ajay ne kaha jaake so jao mai apne aap dekh lunga ..aaj ajay ne ruhi ko kaha tum jao so jao ...aaj mai prabha k sath sounga. ..mujhe thoda kaam h usse ...
Ajay ne prabha ki taraf dekhke smile krdi ..jise dekh prabha sharma gai aur apne kamre me bhaag gai ...
Rani ye sab dekhke ander hi ander ghut rhi thi ...use jalan ho rhi thi ...aaj usko phir se ankur ki yaad aa rhi thi ...
Rani chhoti ko leke apne kamre me chali gai ...aaj dayna aur suryalekha ek kamre me the ...aur baate kr rhi thi ...neha apne sath ruhi ko le gai aur uske baare me jaanne lagi ...use yaha k baare me sab batane lagi ...
Dayna : suryalekha tum unse kaho ki hamse shadi kab karenge .. ab raha nahi jaata ...bahut din se keh rhe the ab to unhe ek saal se b jyada beet gaya h unhone vaada kiya tha ki ** varsh poore hote mujhse shadi kr lenge ...
Suryalekha : mai kya bolu ..muje to ve jeet k laaye the lekin mai unke vicharo se prem krne lagi ...mai unke kisi b kaam me dakhal nhi de skti ...ve jaise khus mai b unki khusi me khus hu ...
Dayna : haan ye sahi kaha ...jaise vo h ..un jaisa koi nahi dekha maine bhi ...
Suryalekha : chalo sote h ...aaj prabha didi ki cheekhe nikalne wali h ...
Dayna aur suryalekha dono has padi is baat per ...
Idhar ajay aaj prabha ko uska haq dene k liye kamre me gaya ...aaj ajay ko kamre me jaate hi prabha ne doodh ka glass thama diya ..
Ajay ne aadha piya aur baaki prabha ko pilaya ...
Phir prabha boli
Prabha : bura na maniye ek baat puchu
Ajay : tum meri patni ho ...jo chahe vo poocho ..
Prabha : jabse hospital se aaye ho ...aap badle hue lag rhe ho ..
Ajay : ab mai tumhe kya batau bas itna jaanlo ki mai ab apne ateet k baare me sabkuch jaan chuka hu ..chalo is raat ka aanand uthaye ...bahut mehnat krni h aaj ..mera sath dogi tum..?
Prabha sharmate hue .:: Abhi to bahut time h ... aap shuru kijiye ...mai aapke sath hi hu ...