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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

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Update 6:

Sab ready hoke niche aate hai aur Vihaan sabko coffee deta hai


Mansi: wow maine aaj tak esi coffee kabhi nhi pi.


Sab uski ha mai ha milate hai.


Coffee pine ke bad sab shopping ke liye nikal jate hai.


Vihaan sabko ek mall mai leke jata hai jiska naam RV hai.par inko pata nahi nhi hota ki koi inka picha kar raha hota hai. Vihaan parking mai car park karta hai aur sab mall mai enter hote hai.


Ruhani: di aap sab kop ta hai RV ka kya matlb hai.


Mansi: nhi tho. Batao kya matlab hua?


Ruhani: Ruhani and Vihaan.


Ruhani ki ye baat sunke sab shock ho jate hai.


Aditi: aur kya kya kaam khol rkha h isne?


Ruhani: di aap bhai ko kab se janti hai? (sab log Aidit ki trf dkhte h aur Aishani bhi Aditi ke answer ka wait karti h)


Aditi: bachpan se. kyu kya hua?


Ruhani: par bhai ne tho kabhi nhi bataya aapke bare mai. Wo tho hamesha ek ladki ke bare m bolte h wo bhi nind mai.


Aditi: (excited hoke) kiske bare mai bolta h wo?


Ruhani: pata nhi di shyd unke sapno ki rajkumari h koi.(hehe)


Ruhani ki baat sunke sab hasne lagte hai. Jab taki Vihaan car park aa jata hai aur sabko ander janne ke liye bolta hai.


Sabhi girls tho gus jati hai shooping mai aur Vihaan café chala jata hai, par koi hai jo inpe najar rakhe hue hai.


Shopping khtam kar sabhi café mai aate hai sabke hath mai bhut se bag the.


Vihaan: Kya baat pura mall karid liya kya?


Ruhani: nhi bhai abhi tho thodi si shopping hui h baki fir karege.


Vihaan: tum logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta.


Sab log halka fulkan nasta krke niklte hai. Jaise he sab bhar aate hai tho ek sniper upper baith hota hai Vihaan ka wait kar raha hota hai.


Vihaan ko dkh kar wo fire kar deta hai par ussi time Vihaan waha se hat jata h aur bullet Aishani ko lagti hai. Aishani jor se chilati h aur Vihaan ka dhyan uski aur chala jata hai .


Vihaan ka dil gabra jata h aur sabhi girls chillane lagti hai Vihaan jaldi se Aishani ko apni god mai utha leta hai aur car ki trf bhagne lagta h sab uske piche bagte h aur car mai baith kar car ko hospital ki traf bhaga deta hai aur sabhi girls ko dusri car mai aane ke liye kh deta hai.


In car:


Vihaan ki akhoon mai ansu the aur Aishani sath wali seat pe leti hui thi.


Vihaan: tume kuch nhi hoga mai tume kuch nhi hone dunga. Agr thume kuch ho gaya tho puri duniya barbad kar dunga mai.


Aishani hosh mai thi kyuki bullet usko chu ke nikli thi aur usne Vihaan ki sari baate sun li thi aur apne maan me:


Kya rista h humara jab bhi ye samne aata h mujhe pyaar aur gussa dono aate hai. Jab se mila h kuch samj nahi aa rha ki ho kya raha mere sath.


Vihaan hospital aage car rokta hai aur Aishani ko god mai utha ke siddha Doctor ke room mai chala jata hai. Doctor Vihaan ko dkh kar dar jata hai.


Vihaan: Dr inko bullet lagi hai jaldi kuch karo.


Dr: Wardboy ko bulata h aur Aishani ko OT mai le jata h par waha jake dkhta hai ki goli sirf chuke nikli hai.


Aishani apni ankhe kholti hai aur dr ko kuch bolti hai


Idhar sari girls hospital aa jati hai aur unko Vihaan dikhta hai.


Aditi: Vihaan kya hua Aishani ko?


Vihaan: (rote hue) usse OT mail eke gaye h aur jor se rone lagta hai.


Vihaan ko dkh ke Ruhani kuch shock ho jati hai.


Riya: Hume Uncle logo ko bata dena chaie. Aditi apna phone nikalti aur apne papa ko call krke sab bata deti hai.


Malik: Beta Vihaan se meri karwana aur tum koi tension mat lo Vihaan ke hote hue wo tum logo mai se kisi ko kuch nahi hone dega.


Aditi: okay papa. Aur phone Vihaan ki trf bada deti hai.


Vihaan uski traf dkhta jaise puch raha ho kon h.


Aditi: papa… Vihaan phone le leta h aur un sabse dur hoke baat karne lagta hai.


Vihaan: ji uncle.


Malik: tum jante he hoge ki ye iske kiya?


Vihaan: ha mai janta hu aur iski saja usko milke rahegi.


Malik: thik h mai tumhe uska address bejta hu aur Vihaan jo bhi karo sach samj kar karna.


Vihaan: isliye mai Mumbai nhi aana chata tha. Wohi hua na jiska mujhe dar tha.


Malik: tum apni niyati se nahi bhag skate Vihaan.


Call cut krke Vihaan Aditi ko bhula hai.


Vihaan: Aditi sabka khyaal rkhna mujhe khi jana hai.


Aditi: tume kaha jana hai.


Vihaan: mai tumhe aake batata hu.


Aditi: okay.


Vihaan se nikal ke full spead mai gadi bagha deta h kisi aur.


Dusri tarf:


Sniper: (on call) sir wo mere samne tha par goli kisi aur ko lagi hai.


Unknown: kisko lagi hai(gabra kar)


Sniper: kisi ladki ko lagi hai.


Unknown ye sunke gabra jata h aur sniper ko underground hone ke liye kh deta hai aur wo bhi waha se nikal jata hai.


Hero side:


Vihaan jldi se ek godown ke samne gadi rokta h aur utar jata h godown ke gate ke samne do log kade the.


Vihaan jldi se unki tarf jata hai ek face pe punch marta hai aur dusre ki garden pakad kar guma deta hai. Punch lagte he uski chikh nikal jati aur under uski awaj sunke sath shock ho jate h aur wo unknown bhi ghabra jata hai aur apne sath baithe shaks ko dkhta h par bolta kuch nahi.


Bahar Vihaan dusre ke sath bhi yahi karta hai. Under se bhut se log bhar aate hai aur Vihaan ke upper fire krne lagte hai par kisi ki bhi goli Vihaan ko chu nhi pati kyu ki Vihaan k eek shukarsha kawaj aa jata hai.


Vihaan ki akhne gusse mail al ho jati hai aur wo aknhe band karke kuch padta hai aur uske hath mai ek sword aa jati hai aur wo full speed mai aage badta hua sab ko katne lagta hai kisi ka gala kata kisi ka hath aur kisi koi bich mai se kat deta hai.


Har tarf khun he khun gir jata hai. Ek admi under ki trf bagta hai jor se chilata h bhai Devil. Uski baat sunke ander baithe sabhi log shock ho jate h jada tar wo Unknown aur uske sath baitha insan.


Vihaan ander jata hai jor se door ko laat marta h aur darwaja toot jata h aur ander baithe sab log khade ho jate h.


Rudra: tumari yaha anne ki himmat kaise hue.


Vihaan apni sword ko Rudra kea age jor se jamin mai gaad deta hai aur bolta hai.


Vihaan: lagta h tum log uss shandi ko bhul gaye.


Rudra: hum kuch nhi bule lagta h tum bhul gaye ta hi tho yaha apni maut ko dundte hue aa gaye.


Vihaan: mai apna Vachan kabhi nhi todta aur puch apne bhai se usne aaj kya kiya?


Rudra: Kya kiya Ragav ne?


(ji haa wo unknown aur koi nhi Ragav h aur uske sath baith hua shaks Rudra h)


Vihaan: isne meri jaan pe hamla kiya h.


Rudra: nahi ye nahi ho skta koi…………… pe hamla nhi kar sakta.


Vihaan: puch apne bhai se( iske sath he Vihaan ki ankhe gusse se lala hone lagti hai)


Rudra: (gusse se) Ragav kya ye sach h?


Ragav: (gabra kar) bhai maine uske nahi ispe fire karwaya tha.


Vihaan: (gusse se) Tum agar yudh chate ho tho abhi ho jaega. Aur agar uski tarf dubara dkha tho mai Vachan todne mai aur vapis se Devil banne mai ek shan bhi nhi lagauga.


Rudra: hume tum se jada uski chinta h aur ha tum dobara yaha aae tho tum nhi tumari lash yaha se jaegi.




Vihaan kuch nhi bolta aur mud jata h aur wapis jane lagta h aur ussi time Ragav ek aag ka gola uspe chor deta hai par wo gola Vihaan se kuch duri pe he kata mho jata hai.


Vihaan: (plate hue) Rudra samjao apne bhai ko kahi yhi uski maritu nah o jae.


Rudra kuch bolta usse phle he Vihaan waha se gayab ho jata hai aur samya chakar ruk jata hai aur waha koi prakat hota hai. Jisse dkh kar Rudra aur Ragav ek baar gabra jate hai aur apne ghunto pae baith jate h…..

( ab ese kon aa gya inke samne jisse dkh kar dono gabra gaye aur Aishani ne doctor se esa kya kaha. janne ke liye sath bane rahie next update mai flash back start hoga)
 

Siraa

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Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Thanks bhai
Update posted...
 

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Boht khoob yar hero ka gussa to boht teez ha itna to pta chal gya ha ka hero ka pass black powers han kya white powers bhi han?
 

Last benchers

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Update 6:

Sab ready hoke niche aate hai aur Vihaan sabko coffee deta hai


Mansi: wow maine aaj tak esi coffee kabhi nhi pi.


Sab uski ha mai ha milate hai.


Coffee pine ke bad sab shopping ke liye nikal jate hai.


Vihaan sabko ek mall mai leke jata hai jiska naam RV hai.par inko pata nahi nhi hota ki koi inka picha kar raha hota hai. Vihaan parking mai car park karta hai aur sab mall mai enter hote hai.


Ruhani: di aap sab kop ta hai RV ka kya matlb hai.


Mansi: nhi tho. Batao kya matlab hua?


Ruhani: Ruhani and Vihaan.


Ruhani ki ye baat sunke sab shock ho jate hai.


Aditi: aur kya kya kaam khol rkha h isne?


Ruhani: di aap bhai ko kab se janti hai? (sab log Aidit ki trf dkhte h aur Aishani bhi Aditi ke answer ka wait karti h)


Aditi: bachpan se. kyu kya hua?


Ruhani: par bhai ne tho kabhi nhi bataya aapke bare mai. Wo tho hamesha ek ladki ke bare m bolte h wo bhi nind mai.


Aditi: (excited hoke) kiske bare mai bolta h wo?


Ruhani: pata nhi di shyd unke sapno ki rajkumari h koi.(hehe)


Ruhani ki baat sunke sab hasne lagte hai. Jab taki Vihaan car park aa jata hai aur sabko ander janne ke liye bolta hai.


Sabhi girls tho gus jati hai shooping mai aur Vihaan café chala jata hai, par koi hai jo inpe najar rakhe hue hai.


Shopping khtam kar sabhi café mai aate hai sabke hath mai bhut se bag the.


Vihaan: Kya baat pura mall karid liya kya?


Ruhani: nhi bhai abhi tho thodi si shopping hui h baki fir karege.


Vihaan: tum logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta.


Sab log halka fulkan nasta krke niklte hai. Jaise he sab bhar aate hai tho ek sniper upper baith hota hai Vihaan ka wait kar raha hota hai.


Vihaan ko dkh kar wo fire kar deta hai par ussi time Vihaan waha se hat jata h aur bullet Aishani ko lagti hai. Aishani jor se chilati h aur Vihaan ka dhyan uski aur chala jata hai .


Vihaan ka dil gabra jata h aur sabhi girls chillane lagti hai Vihaan jaldi se Aishani ko apni god mai utha leta hai aur car ki trf bhagne lagta h sab uske piche bagte h aur car mai baith kar car ko hospital ki traf bhaga deta hai aur sabhi girls ko dusri car mai aane ke liye kh deta hai.


In car:


Vihaan ki akhoon mai ansu the aur Aishani sath wali seat pe leti hui thi.


Vihaan: tume kuch nhi hoga mai tume kuch nhi hone dunga. Agr thume kuch ho gaya tho puri duniya barbad kar dunga mai.


Aishani hosh mai thi kyuki bullet usko chu ke nikli thi aur usne Vihaan ki sari baate sun li thi aur apne maan me:


Kya rista h humara jab bhi ye samne aata h mujhe pyaar aur gussa dono aate hai. Jab se mila h kuch samj nahi aa rha ki ho kya raha mere sath.


Vihaan hospital aage car rokta hai aur Aishani ko god mai utha ke siddha Doctor ke room mai chala jata hai. Doctor Vihaan ko dkh kar dar jata hai.


Vihaan: Dr inko bullet lagi hai jaldi kuch karo.


Dr: Wardboy ko bulata h aur Aishani ko OT mai le jata h par waha jake dkhta hai ki goli sirf chuke nikli hai.


Aishani apni ankhe kholti hai aur dr ko kuch bolti hai


Idhar sari girls hospital aa jati hai aur unko Vihaan dikhta hai.


Aditi: Vihaan kya hua Aishani ko?


Vihaan: (rote hue) usse OT mail eke gaye h aur jor se rone lagta hai.


Vihaan ko dkh ke Ruhani kuch shock ho jati hai.


Riya: Hume Uncle logo ko bata dena chaie. Aditi apna phone nikalti aur apne papa ko call krke sab bata deti hai.


Malik: Beta Vihaan se meri karwana aur tum koi tension mat lo Vihaan ke hote hue wo tum logo mai se kisi ko kuch nahi hone dega.


Aditi: okay papa. Aur phone Vihaan ki trf bada deti hai.


Vihaan uski traf dkhta jaise puch raha ho kon h.


Aditi: papa… Vihaan phone le leta h aur un sabse dur hoke baat karne lagta hai.


Vihaan: ji uncle.


Malik: tum jante he hoge ki ye iske kiya?


Vihaan: ha mai janta hu aur iski saja usko milke rahegi.


Malik: thik h mai tumhe uska address bejta hu aur Vihaan jo bhi karo sach samj kar karna.


Vihaan: isliye mai Mumbai nhi aana chata tha. Wohi hua na jiska mujhe dar tha.


Malik: tum apni niyati se nahi bhag skate Vihaan.


Call cut krke Vihaan Aditi ko bhula hai.


Vihaan: Aditi sabka khyaal rkhna mujhe khi jana hai.


Aditi: tume kaha jana hai.


Vihaan: mai tumhe aake batata hu.


Aditi: okay.


Vihaan se nikal ke full spead mai gadi bagha deta h kisi aur.


Dusri tarf:


Sniper: (on call) sir wo mere samne tha par goli kisi aur ko lagi hai.


Unknown: kisko lagi hai(gabra kar)


Sniper: kisi ladki ko lagi hai.


Unknown ye sunke gabra jata h aur sniper ko underground hone ke liye kh deta hai aur wo bhi waha se nikal jata hai.


Hero side:


Vihaan jldi se ek godown ke samne gadi rokta h aur utar jata h godown ke gate ke samne do log kade the.


Vihaan jldi se unki tarf jata hai ek face pe punch marta hai aur dusre ki garden pakad kar guma deta hai. Punch lagte he uski chikh nikal jati aur under uski awaj sunke sath shock ho jate h aur wo unknown bhi ghabra jata hai aur apne sath baithe shaks ko dkhta h par bolta kuch nahi.


Bahar Vihaan dusre ke sath bhi yahi karta hai. Under se bhut se log bhar aate hai aur Vihaan ke upper fire krne lagte hai par kisi ki bhi goli Vihaan ko chu nhi pati kyu ki Vihaan k eek shukarsha kawaj aa jata hai.


Vihaan ki akhne gusse mail al ho jati hai aur wo aknhe band karke kuch padta hai aur uske hath mai ek sword aa jati hai aur wo full speed mai aage badta hua sab ko katne lagta hai kisi ka gala kata kisi ka hath aur kisi koi bich mai se kat deta hai.


Har tarf khun he khun gir jata hai. Ek admi under ki trf bagta hai jor se chilata h bhai Devil. Uski baat sunke ander baithe sabhi log shock ho jate h jada tar wo Unknown aur uske sath baitha insan.


Vihaan ander jata hai jor se door ko laat marta h aur darwaja toot jata h aur ander baithe sab log khade ho jate h.


Rudra: tumari yaha anne ki himmat kaise hue.


Vihaan apni sword ko Rudra kea age jor se jamin mai gaad deta hai aur bolta hai.


Vihaan: lagta h tum log uss shandi ko bhul gaye.


Rudra: hum kuch nhi bule lagta h tum bhul gaye ta hi tho yaha apni maut ko dundte hue aa gaye.


Vihaan: mai apna Vachan kabhi nhi todta aur puch apne bhai se usne aaj kya kiya?


Rudra: Kya kiya Ragav ne?


(ji haa wo unknown aur koi nhi Ragav h aur uske sath baith hua shaks Rudra h)


Vihaan: isne meri jaan pe hamla kiya h.


Rudra: nahi ye nahi ho skta koi…………… pe hamla nhi kar sakta.


Vihaan: puch apne bhai se( iske sath he Vihaan ki ankhe gusse se lala hone lagti hai)


Rudra: (gusse se) Ragav kya ye sach h?


Ragav: (gabra kar) bhai maine uske nahi ispe fire karwaya tha.


Vihaan: (gusse se) Tum agar yudh chate ho tho abhi ho jaega. Aur agar uski tarf dubara dkha tho mai Vachan todne mai aur vapis se Devil banne mai ek shan bhi nhi lagauga.


Rudra: hume tum se jada uski chinta h aur ha tum dobara yaha aae tho tum nhi tumari lash yaha se jaegi.




Vihaan kuch nhi bolta aur mud jata h aur wapis jane lagta h aur ussi time Ragav ek aag ka gola uspe chor deta hai par wo gola Vihaan se kuch duri pe he kata mho jata hai.


Vihaan: (plate hue) Rudra samjao apne bhai ko kahi yhi uski maritu nah o jae.


Rudra kuch bolta usse phle he Vihaan waha se gayab ho jata hai aur samya chakar ruk jata hai aur waha koi prakat hota hai. Jisse dkh kar Rudra aur Ragav ek baar gabra jate hai aur apne ghunto pae baith jate h…..

( ab ese kon aa gya inke samne jisse dkh kar dono gabra gaye aur Aishani ne doctor se esa kya kaha. janne ke liye sath bane rahie next update mai flash back start hoga)
Plzzz flach back koshish krna ek update Mai khtm KRne ka Bhai .
Update fabulous Bhai
 

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Mind blowing update
 

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Mind blowing update
 
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