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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

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Siraa

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Superb update....
Dekhte he kya kaha gurudev ne
Thanks bhai agla update kal aaega
 

Siraa

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Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Thanks bro
agla update kal aaega
 

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Update 9:


Rajguru: Maharaj apki purti bhut he bagya shali h ye vishv vijeta ki sangni bnaegi aur iska naam “Aishani” hoga.


Rajdeep aur Avanti ye suneke kush ho jate hai. Parntu uske bad jo Rjguru khte h usse sunkar dono Pareshan ho jate hai.

ab aage:



Rajguru: Rajdeep tumari putri ka vivah kisi angel se nhi Devil se hoga.


Rajdeep: ye nhi ho sakta gurudev.


Rajguru: ye he satya h aur tum dono ye satya jitni jaldi ho sake manlo.


Itna kha kar rajguru chale jate aur piche dono preshan aur heraan hote hai. Unko dkh kar Rudra apne pitah ke pass jake unke pareshan hone ka karan puchta h aur Rajdeep usko sab bata deta h.


Rudra: (gusse mai) esa nahi ho sakta?


Rajdeep: hum kuch nahi kar skate putar.


Rudra: aap nhi kar skate par mai tho kar skata hu.


Rajdeep: kya karoge tum?


Rudra: aap bhul rahe h pita ji mujhe kya vardaan prapt hai.


Rajdeep:: hum jante h putar. Parntu hum maha shukar gran se phlae yudh nahi kar sakte aur maha shukar ghran mai abhi 3 saal h.


Rudra: parntu pitaji tab tak hum yudh ki tyari tho kar skate hai.


Rajdeep: thik h Rudra yudh ki tyari karo.


Hero side:


Isis tarh 3 saal bit jate hai aur Vihaan ke vaan mai jane ka samya aa jata h .


Andhka: aaj humare putar ko vaan mai jaana hoga.


Mantha: nahi mai apne putar ko kahi nhi jane dungi.


Andhka: jane tho hum bhi nahi dena chate parntu uske jivan ke liye yeh avashak hai.


Iske bad Mantha kuch nhi bolti aur Andhka Rajguru ko bula kar Vihaan ko unko soump dete hai aur Unko har samyah Vihaan ke sath rhne ke liye khte hai.


Rajguru Vihaan ko lekar vaan mai chale jate hai aur piche Mantha ro-ro kar apna bura haal kar leti hai.


Dusri tarf:


Aishani aaj 3 saal ki ho gayi h Rudra aur Ragav usko ek shank e liye bhi nhi chote uske sath khelna usko apne hatho se bojan karwana sab dono bhai he karte hai.


Aishani in dono ko he apna maa – baap samjti thi aur kisi ke paas nhi jati thai. Parntu aaj Vihaan aur Aishani ke liye bhut bada din tha. Aishani ko bojan karwa ke Rudra apne pita ke kaksh mai jata hai jaha unke sath Rajguru bhi the.


Rudra: Pitaji aaj Shukar gran samapt ho chukka hai aura b hume jld se jld akraman karna chaie.


Rajguru: nahi Rudra hum abhi akarman nhi kar sakte.


Rajdeep: kyu nhi kar sakte gurudev?


Rajguru: kyuki samyah humare anukul nhi h aur jo tumari isha h ki sabhi Devil ko katam krne ka kahi ye mumkin na ho pae.


Rudra: gurudev aap meri shakti h parshan kar rhe hai.


Rajguru: nhi putar esa nahi h. Parntu....


Rajdeep: (bich mai katte hue) agar esa nhi h gurudev tho hum kal he akarman karege.


Rajguru: thik h Rudra jaise tum chao.


Itna kah kar Rajguru chale jate hai aur piche Rudra aur Rajdeep yudh ki taryi karti hai.


Iss traf:


Andkha apne sihasan pe baitha Vihaan ko yaad kar raha tha ki tabhi senapati bagte hue aata h aur bolta hai.


Senapati: maharaj Angels ne akraman kar diya h.


Andkha: kya?


Senapati: ji maharaj aur iss bar kud Lord of Angels aur Prince aae h.


Andhka: aap jldi se sabko satrak karde aur hum kud yudh mai jage.


Senapati: ji maharaj. Khke chale jate hai.


Andkha( maan me) iss sayah uh akarman karna kuch samj nahi aaya. Tabhi Manhta aati hai aur bolti h.


Mantha: kya hua maharaj?


Andhka: Angels ne akarman kar diya hai.


Mantha: Hum bhi apke sath chalege.


Andhka: nhi maharani aap iss baar nhi jaegi.


Mantha: aapne vachan diya tha ki hum har yudh mai apke sath jaege.


Andhka: parntu iss baar ya yudh kisi ki maritu se he sampat hoga.


Mantha: chae kuch bhi hum apke sath jaege.


Yeh keh kar Mantha chali jati hai aur Andhka iss samachar ko apne Rajguru ke paas puncha dete h aur sath mai Vihaan ko shurakshit rkhne ke liye kh dete hai.


Dono senaye aamne samne thi


Rajdeep: aaj thume aur thumare rajya ko koi nhi bacha sakta.


Andhkasur: ye veham apne dil se nikla do aaj tumse se koi jnda bachke nahi jaega.


Dono ke itna khte he shank ki davni hoti h yudh aarambh ho jata hai. Dono senaye ek dusre pe tut parti hai.


Rudra aur Ragav apni shatiyon se Devil sena ko ktam kar rhe the aur whi Rajdeep aur Andhkasur ek dusre pe apne shaktiyon par hamla kar rhe the.


Yudh koi abhi shuru hue kuch der he hui thi ki Rudra par ek aag ke gole ka parhar hota h jo Mantha ne kiya tha, jisse dkh Rudra gusse mai aa jata h aur apni sabse badi shakti se Mantha par humla karta h jisse takrate he Mantha niche gir jati h. Jise Andhkasur dkh leta h aur bokla jata hai Mantha ki tarf jane lagta h par usse Ragav aur Rajdeep rok dete hai apni shaktiyon se.


Andhkasur puri kosish karta h par nhi ja pata aur idhar Mnatha dard se tadpti hui mar jati h jisse dkh kar Andhkasur pagal ho jata h aur apni puri shakti se Rajdeep par prahar karta h jisse Rajddep murshit ho jata hai Andhkasur bhi niche gir jata h par jab tak wo uthta Ragav apni talwar uske dil mai utar deta hai.


Ragav aur Rudra bhag kar Rajdeep ke paas jate h jaha dkhte h Rajdeep bhi mar jata hai jisse dkh kar Rudra apna aapa kho deta h aur sabhi Devils ko marne lagta h Yumpuri mai parvesh karke bache budhe aur Autro ko marne lagta h.


Wo ek ek karke sabhi ko mar deta hai jab wo antim Devil ko mar deta hai tho uske chre par ek muskan aa jati hai aur wo wapis ran bhumi ki aur jata h aur apni sena aur pita ki laash leke wapis chala jata h. Jab wo Inderpur punchta h tho sab ko kushi aur dukh dono hote h.


Essse he kuch smya nikal jata h aur aaj Rudra ka Rajya abhishek tha. Rajguru Rudra ka tilak krte hai aur Avanti Rudra ko raajmukat phnati hai. Rudra apni jagh se uthta h aur bolta hai.


Rudra: Inderpur ke wasio aaj ke bad iss darti pe koi devil nhi hai.


Rudra kuch bolta usse phle wha roshni hoti h Tridev prakat hote hai. Unne dkh ke sab jukh jate h. Tridev sabko uthne ke liye khte h.


Rudra: mai dhnya ho gaya ki tridev meri taaj poshi mai aae.


Tridev: hum apki taajposhi main hi aae sirf apke khatan ko sahi karne aae hai aur apko Inderpur ke sabse bade khtre se avgat karwane aae h jaisa ki humne apke pita ko vachan diya tha ki jab bhi Inderpur par sabse bada Khatra aaega hum uhne avgat karwaege.


Rudra: hum kuch samje nahi Tridev? Kharta aur kaisa khtra.


Tridev......

(bhaiyon kal dena tha update but aaj he de raha hu aur kis ki baat kar rhe h Tridev kon h Devil king Andhkasur se bhi bada khtra janne ke liye sath bane rahie)


 
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