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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

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Siraa

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Update 10:


Tridev: hum apki taajposhi main hi aae sirf apke khatan ko sahi karne aae hai aur apko Inderpur ke sabse bade khtre se avgat karwane aae h jaisa ki humne apke pita ko vachan diya tha ki jab bhi Inderpur par sabse bada Khatra aaega hum uhne avgat karwaege.


Rudra: hum kuch samje nahi Tridev? Kharta aur kaisa khtra.


Tridev......

ab aage:

Back to present:


Vihaan gayab hokar bhar gadi ke paas punchta aur car ko hospital ki tarf baga deta hai aur Hospital mai jata hai h waha Aditi, Neha, Priya baithe hote hai.


Aditi ne Riya aur Ruhani ko ghar bejti hai aur unke sath Mansi ko bhi bej deti h unka khyaal rkhne ke liye.


Vihaan ko dkh Aditi bhag kar jake uske gale lag jati hai aur Vihaan ko apni dono baho mai kas kar jakd leti h. Vihaan kuch karta ya kuch bolta usse phle he doctor ki awaj aati hai.


Doctor: aap logo mai se Vihaan kon h?


Aditi: ye h Vihaan. Kyu kya hua?


Doctor: Ander jo h wo inko bula rahi hai.


Doctor ke itna bolne ke chala jata hai aur Aditi, Neha aur Priya Vihaan ki traf dkhne lagti hai. Vihaan bhi kuch samj nhi pata kyu “Aishani ne usse kyu bualaya hai. Par wo kuch nhi bolta aur ander chala jata hai.


Aditi man me: khi usse kuch yaad tho nahi aa gaya? Par Vachan ke anusar tho jab tak inka phala kiss nhi hota jab tak tho usse kuch yaad nhi aana chaie.


Vihaan Ander jake dkhta hai Aishani bed par leti hui hai aur uske hath mai glucose laga hua h. Vihaan abhi bhi gate ke paas khada tha aur Aishani apne aankhe kolti hai aur Vihaan ko dkhkr ander aane ka ishara karti hai.


Vihaan ander aake bed ke paas kahada ho jata hai. Aishani Vihaan ki Ankho mai he dkh rahi thi. Inko ek dusre ko dkhte hue kuch der hui thi. Tabhi Aditi Neha aur Priya ke sath ander aa jati hai.


Aditi: tu thik tho h na Aishani?


Aishani: ha mai thik hu.


Vihaan: mai jak kar Doctor se mil ke aata hu aur inko kab tak discharge kar denge?


Vihaan itna kha kar chala jata hai. Ander Aditi Aishani ko gur rhi thi?


Aishani: kya hua ese kyu gur rahi hai?


Aditi: Tune Vihaan ko akele kyu ander bulaya tha?


Aishani: kyu jalan ho rahi h?


Aditi: mujhe kyu jalan hogi?


Aishani: tujhe jalan ho rahi hai?!!!


Aditi: ha ho rahi hai. Ab tu bataegi ki tune usse kyu bualaya tha?


Aishani: taki tu usse apne man ki baat kh sake.


Aditi: man ki baat!! Mai kuch samji nahi?


Aishani: rhne de tu hum sab jante hai kit u usse pasand karti hai.


Aditi: esi koi baat nhi hai.


Aishani: pakka na?


Aditi: ha pakka...


Aishani: thik h fir mai purpose kar deti hu?


Aditi: (jaldi se) nahi mai aaj he usse purpose kar dungi.


Uski se baat sunke sunke sab hasne lagte h aur Aditi blush karne lagti hai.


Aishani: phle kyu mana kar rahi thi? Bol


Sab Aditi ko pareshan karne lagte hai..


Bhar Vihaan bhi sochne lagta h ki kya baat karni thi Aishani khi usse kuch yaad? Nhi nhi esa nahi ho skta. Par fir usne mujhe akele kyu bulya. Ye sab sochte hue Vihaan doctor ke cabin ke paas punch jata hai. Aur doctor se sab baat krke wapis Aishani ke room mai jata hai aur dkhta hai sab Aditi ko tang karne mail age hue h par sab Vihaan ko dkh kar chup ho jate h.


Vihaan sabko batata h ki doctor ne Aishani ko discharge kar diya h aur sab Hospitalk se bhar aa jate h aur Vihaan ke sath car mai baith kar ghar ki tarf chale jate h.


Car mai Aishani aage baithti h aur baki piche baithte hai. Aishaniaur Vihaan baar baar Vihaan ko dkh rahi thi aur unko Aditi dkh rahi thi kisi mai koi bhi baat nahi ho rahi thi.


Vihaan bhar gate pe punch kar horn bajata h, Watchman aake gate kholta hai Vihaan car ko ander le jata hai aur gate se samne rota h sab niche utarte aur Vihaan door bell bajat hai. Gate Ruhani kholti hai aur Vihaan ke gale lag jati hai.


Vihaan: sab thik h betu.


Ruhani Vihaan se alag hoti h aur Aisahni aur sab se milti hai. Riya aur Mansi bhi sabse milte hai.


Vihaan un sabko hall mai chor kar apne room mai chala jata hai aur use piche Ruhani bhi aa jati hai.


Vihaan apni shirt utarta h aur dkhta hai ki uski left arm pe jalne ka nichan h wo door band karna bhul jata h aur Ruhani bhi uske jale hui arm dkh kar dar jati hai aur Vihaan ke samne aake kadhi ho jati hai.


Vihaan Ruhani ko dkh kar hadbda jata hai.


Ruhani: Ye kaise hua bhai?


Vihaan: phale se h ye tho.


Ruhani: Nahi bhai aap juth bol rahe ho.


Vihaan: nhi betu ye phle se hai.


Ruhani: paka nab hi aap mujhe juth thon hi bol rhe?


Vihaan: ha betu kya mai bache se juth boluga. Chalo ab jao mai fresh hoke aat ahu fir dinner karege.


Ruhani bina kuch bole chali jati h aur Vihaan bhi fresh hoke niche aa jata hai. Aur sab bhar aake dinner karne lagte hai.


Neha: (Vihaan ki traf dkh kar) kya mai se puch sakti hu?


Vihaan: Hanji puchie?


Neha: aap kisi se pyaar krte h?


Vihaan: (hadbda kar) : nhi kyu kya hua?


Ruhani: (bich ma) bhai juth kyu bol rhe ho aap mujhe hamesha khte tho ho ki aap kisi se pyar krte ho.


Aditi: kon h wo? Aur tum juth kyu bol rhe ho.


Vihaan: ( Aishani ki trf dkhte hue) h koi jisse mai bhut pyaar krta hu par shyd wo ye baat nhi janti.


Riya: Matlab bhaiya aapka one side love h.


Vihaan: nhi beta wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti h bas wo ye baat janti nhi.


Riya: ye kaise ho sakta h?


Neha: tujhe bad mai pata chalega.


Vihaan ki baat sunke Aditi ka dil tut jata hai wo apne room mai chali jati h aur Aishani bhi uske piche jati h.


Riya: are didi ko kya hua.


Priya: Kuch nhi hua tu khana kha.


Sab dinner karke apne apne rrom mai chale jate h. Vihaan apne room mai punch kar rone lagta h. Tabhi waha roshni hoti h aur Vihaan ko ek Aag ka gola aake lagta hai.

(kon h jisne Vihaan par hamla kiya hai. kon h wo jisse Vihaan pyar karta hai.jaane ke liye sath bane rahie. bhaiyon agar story pasand nahi aa rhi tho jarur batae)
 

Abhimanyhu

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Happy Diwali
 

John Cena

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Zabardast update bhai next update ka intzar rahega
 

Avir

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Waiting next
 

Shainky

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Story bahut mast hai bhai bas update juldi de diya kro nhi to story se intrest khatm ho jata hai..
Aaj ka hi update lelo padhna shuru kiya to samajh nhi aaya ki kaha se shuru kiye ho aap aadha padhne ke bad yaad aaya.. So update regular or juldi diya kro plz.. To readers comment v karenge or sabko maza v aayega..
 

Radhe

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Mast update Bhai par aap ko nhi lagta itne din baad update de rahe hai update chota hai koi baat nhi bro
 

Badshah Khan

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Awesome update bhai
Keep posting
 
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