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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

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John Cena

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Update 13:

Wo chalti hui Vihaan ki tarf jati hai aur usko uthati hai. Vihaan usko dkhta h aur wo ladki Vihaan ko apne gale laga leti h aur Vihaan bhi usko apne aagosh mai le leta hai aur bolta hai.

ab aage:


Vihaan: tum yaha kyu aai?


Ladki Vihaan se piche hoti hai jor se Vihaan ko ek chata marti hai aur dobara Vihaan ke gale lag jati hai aur jor jor se rone lagti hai. Ek pal ke liye tho Vihaan bhi shock ho jata hai par fir apni garden ko hila kar usko fir se gale laga leta hai. Thodi der bad ladki alag hoti hai aur bolti hai.


Ladki: kyu kiya aapne esa?


Vihaan: mai apni jaan se milna chata tha.


Ladki: mai kuch der late ho jati aur agar aapko kuchho jata tho?


Vihaan: tumare hote hue mujhe kuch nhi ho sakta.


Ladki: agar didi mujhe yaad na karti tho?


Vihaan: mujhe tum dono pe apni jaan se jada barosa hai.


Ladki Vihaan ke gaal ko hath lagati hai aur bolti hai.


Ladki: mujhe maaf kar dijiye maine aape hath uthaya.


Vihaan: acha ji ab marne ke baad mafi mangi ja rahi hai. Aur muh dusri trf kar leta hai(jaise naraj ho gya ho).


Ladki: (muskara kar)aap abhi bhi nhi badle.


Aur Vihaan ke face ko apni traf ghuma kar uske hootton aur kiss karne lagti hai. Phale tho Vihaan reponse nhi karta par jaise jiase kiss bad rai thi Vihaan ki reposne karne lagta hai dono ki kiss dhre dhre wild hone lagti hai, jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagti h tab dono dur hote hai aur apni sanso ko control karne late hai.


Vihaan vhi niche baith jata hai aur wo ladki uski goud mai baith jati hai dono kuch hi bo rhe the bas ek dusre ki sanse sun rahe the. Thodi der bad fir se wo ladki bolti hai.


Ladki: aap mujhe lene kab aaege.


Vihaan: bhut jaldi aauga.


Ladki: ab mjhe jana hoga.


Vihaan khada hota hai usko jor se gale laga leta hai aur rone lagta hai.


Vihaan: please mat jao?


Ladki: aap jante h na mai kha hu.


Vihaan: apni garden ha mai hilata hai par kuch bolta nahi.


Ladki: ab mujhe jana hoga mai aapka intzar karugi aur haa aap aur nhi ronege aapko meri kasam.


Vihaan rona band kar deta hain aur vo Ladki Vihaan ko ek aur kiss karke gayab ho jati hai. Vihaan thodi der whi rhata h aur fir car ko start karke gharki tarf nikal jata hai aur man mai sochta hai.


Vihaan: kyu tum dono mujhe uksa rahe ho. Tum ono jitna usko mujhse dur karna chate ho utna he o mere karib aa rhi hai aur mujhe pyaar karne lagi hai.mai chachu tho usko sab yaad dila du parntu mai esa nahi kruga agar mera pyaar sacha hai tho usse sab kud yaad aaega.


Vihaan ye sab sochte hue ghar aa jata hai aur car ko park karke ander jata hai. Hall mai Ruhani, Aditi aur Aishani baithe hui thi aur baki sab apne apne room mai the.


Vihaan ko dkh kar Aishani khadi ho jati hai bhag kar Vihaan ke gale lag jati hai. Ruhani aur Aditi ki nazar uss tarf jati h tho dono shockho jati h Vihaan bhi shock ho jata hai par jaise he Aishani ko kuch samj aat h tho woe k dum se piche ho jati hai


Par Vihaan kuch nhi bolta aur apne room mai chala jata hai. Vihaan ke room mai jane ek bad:


Aditi: tujhe kya hua Aishani?


Aishani: mai kud nahi janti?


Ruhani: khi aapko bhai se pyaar thon hi ho gya. Hehe


Aishani kuch nhi bolti aur Sharma jati hai aurapne room mai bhag jati hai piche usko Aditi aur Ruhani ke hasne ki awaj aati hai.


Aishani in room:


Aishani: kahi mujhe usse sach mai pyaar tho nhi ho gya. Par mai tho usse nafart karti hut ho mai usse kaise pyar kar skti hu.


Piche se Aditi usko awaj deti hai:


Aditi: kya hu kya soch rhi hai?


Aishani: kuch nahi bas ese he.


Aditi ke man bhi bhut se swala hote hai par wo pucti nahi hai.


Aditi: cha lab jldi se tyar ho ja ghumne bhi jana hai.


Aishani kuch nahi bolti aur bathroom mai chali jati hai.


Back to Vihaan:


Vihaan apne room baitha soch raha tha ki aaj isse kya hua aur jo hua kya wo sahi tha.


Tabhi waha ka samya chakar ruk jata hai aur ek roshni hoti hai aur Tridev parkat hote hai.


Tridev: kya soch rahe ho Vihaan?


Vihaan: (apne hath jodte hue)aap tho sab jante hai parabu.


Tridev: parntu hum fir bhi tumse janna chate hai.


Vihaan: parabu Rudra aur Ragav nhi jante wo kya kar rahe hai aur dono mujhe majboor kar rahe h apna vachaan todne par.


Tridev: tho tod do apna vachan.


Vihaan: parbu aap jante h agar maine apna vachan toda tho kya hoga?


Tridev: hum sab jante hai Vihaan.


Vihaan: tho parbu aap kyu kah rahe h mujhe vachan todne ke liye?


Tridev: Ye tumari pariksha h Vihaan isse tumhe par karna hai.


Vihaan: parbu kya mai kuch puch sakta hu?


Tridev: hum jante tum kya puchna chate h Devil king!!!!

(kya puchna chata tha Vihaan aur kyu Tridev ne usse Devil king kaha, jaane ke liye sath banne rahie. bhaiyon aap log interest nhi le rhe story mai agar esa h tho bata dijiye mai story ko band kar dunga.)

Boht khoob yar ya kya talvar wapis chli gai chalo koi na wapis a jayegi
 

Akil

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Update 13:

Wo chalti hui Vihaan ki tarf jati hai aur usko uthati hai. Vihaan usko dkhta h aur wo ladki Vihaan ko apne gale laga leti h aur Vihaan bhi usko apne aagosh mai le leta hai aur bolta hai.

ab aage:


Vihaan: tum yaha kyu aai?


Ladki Vihaan se piche hoti hai jor se Vihaan ko ek chata marti hai aur dobara Vihaan ke gale lag jati hai aur jor jor se rone lagti hai. Ek pal ke liye tho Vihaan bhi shock ho jata hai par fir apni garden ko hila kar usko fir se gale laga leta hai. Thodi der bad ladki alag hoti hai aur bolti hai.


Ladki: kyu kiya aapne esa?


Vihaan: mai apni jaan se milna chata tha.


Ladki: mai kuch der late ho jati aur agar aapko kuchho jata tho?


Vihaan: tumare hote hue mujhe kuch nhi ho sakta.


Ladki: agar didi mujhe yaad na karti tho?


Vihaan: mujhe tum dono pe apni jaan se jada barosa hai.


Ladki Vihaan ke gaal ko hath lagati hai aur bolti hai.


Ladki: mujhe maaf kar dijiye maine aape hath uthaya.


Vihaan: acha ji ab marne ke baad mafi mangi ja rahi hai. Aur muh dusri trf kar leta hai(jaise naraj ho gya ho).


Ladki: (muskara kar)aap abhi bhi nhi badle.


Aur Vihaan ke face ko apni traf ghuma kar uske hootton aur kiss karne lagti hai. Phale tho Vihaan reponse nhi karta par jaise jiase kiss bad rai thi Vihaan ki reposne karne lagta hai dono ki kiss dhre dhre wild hone lagti hai, jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagti h tab dono dur hote hai aur apni sanso ko control karne late hai.


Vihaan vhi niche baith jata hai aur wo ladki uski goud mai baith jati hai dono kuch hi bo rhe the bas ek dusre ki sanse sun rahe the. Thodi der bad fir se wo ladki bolti hai.


Ladki: aap mujhe lene kab aaege.


Vihaan: bhut jaldi aauga.


Ladki: ab mjhe jana hoga.


Vihaan khada hota hai usko jor se gale laga leta hai aur rone lagta hai.


Vihaan: please mat jao?


Ladki: aap jante h na mai kha hu.


Vihaan: apni garden ha mai hilata hai par kuch bolta nahi.


Ladki: ab mujhe jana hoga mai aapka intzar karugi aur haa aap aur nhi ronege aapko meri kasam.


Vihaan rona band kar deta hain aur vo Ladki Vihaan ko ek aur kiss karke gayab ho jati hai. Vihaan thodi der whi rhata h aur fir car ko start karke gharki tarf nikal jata hai aur man mai sochta hai.


Vihaan: kyu tum dono mujhe uksa rahe ho. Tum ono jitna usko mujhse dur karna chate ho utna he o mere karib aa rhi hai aur mujhe pyaar karne lagi hai.mai chachu tho usko sab yaad dila du parntu mai esa nahi kruga agar mera pyaar sacha hai tho usse sab kud yaad aaega.


Vihaan ye sab sochte hue ghar aa jata hai aur car ko park karke ander jata hai. Hall mai Ruhani, Aditi aur Aishani baithe hui thi aur baki sab apne apne room mai the.


Vihaan ko dkh kar Aishani khadi ho jati hai bhag kar Vihaan ke gale lag jati hai. Ruhani aur Aditi ki nazar uss tarf jati h tho dono shockho jati h Vihaan bhi shock ho jata hai par jaise he Aishani ko kuch samj aat h tho woe k dum se piche ho jati hai


Par Vihaan kuch nhi bolta aur apne room mai chala jata hai. Vihaan ke room mai jane ek bad:


Aditi: tujhe kya hua Aishani?


Aishani: mai kud nahi janti?


Ruhani: khi aapko bhai se pyaar thon hi ho gya. Hehe


Aishani kuch nhi bolti aur Sharma jati hai aurapne room mai bhag jati hai piche usko Aditi aur Ruhani ke hasne ki awaj aati hai.


Aishani in room:


Aishani: kahi mujhe usse sach mai pyaar tho nhi ho gya. Par mai tho usse nafart karti hut ho mai usse kaise pyar kar skti hu.


Piche se Aditi usko awaj deti hai:


Aditi: kya hu kya soch rhi hai?


Aishani: kuch nahi bas ese he.


Aditi ke man bhi bhut se swala hote hai par wo pucti nahi hai.


Aditi: cha lab jldi se tyar ho ja ghumne bhi jana hai.


Aishani kuch nahi bolti aur bathroom mai chali jati hai.


Back to Vihaan:


Vihaan apne room baitha soch raha tha ki aaj isse kya hua aur jo hua kya wo sahi tha.


Tabhi waha ka samya chakar ruk jata hai aur ek roshni hoti hai aur Tridev parkat hote hai.


Tridev: kya soch rahe ho Vihaan?


Vihaan: (apne hath jodte hue)aap tho sab jante hai parabu.


Tridev: parntu hum fir bhi tumse janna chate hai.


Vihaan: parabu Rudra aur Ragav nhi jante wo kya kar rahe hai aur dono mujhe majboor kar rahe h apna vachaan todne par.


Tridev: tho tod do apna vachan.


Vihaan: parbu aap jante h agar maine apna vachan toda tho kya hoga?


Tridev: hum sab jante hai Vihaan.


Vihaan: tho parbu aap kyu kah rahe h mujhe vachan todne ke liye?


Tridev: Ye tumari pariksha h Vihaan isse tumhe par karna hai.


Vihaan: parbu kya mai kuch puch sakta hu?


Tridev: hum jante tum kya puchna chate h Devil king!!!!

(kya puchna chata tha Vihaan aur kyu Tridev ne usse Devil king kaha, jaane ke liye sath banne rahie. bhaiyon aap log interest nhi le rhe story mai agar esa h tho bata dijiye mai story ko band kar dunga.)

Woh ladki kaun hai bhai aur kahan hai woh
Uski didi kaun hai kahin aishani toh nahin
Aur vihaan kis vachan ki baat kar raha hai kahin uska vachan aishani ko sab yaad dilaane se toh nahin juda na?
 
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Bhai story jaburjust hai yeh wali ladki toh sayad(talwar wali hai),Aditi,ashini 3 toh hero ki gf lg rhi hai aur ekk ladki jb hero Apne room mai hota hai tbb usse portal ke through Milne aati hai isko bhi Kuch locha hai apne hero se Bhai story toh mst hai suspance se bhara hua romance ki kami hai Jo sayad aage jaake Pura Hoga bye the way waiting for next update
 

Last benchers

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai story Mai interest kiw nhj lunga itni achi story hai...
 
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