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UPDATE 1

Ek bara drawing room. Rishtedaar, cousins, aur family ke saare members ek jagah baithe hain. Dev ko sabke beech mein khada kar diya gaya hai, jaise uska court-martial chal raha ho. Uska sir sharam aur bezar se jhuka hua hai, aur har taraf se awaazein uske dil ko chhalkane wali hain.

Badi Behen (tez awaaz mein): "Main toh sochti hoon isko ghar se nikaal do. Har koi apne bache pe fakr karta hai, lekin ispe? Mujhe toh log seedha muh bhi nahi lagate. Pata hai, kal Mrs. Sharma kya bol rahi thi? 'Tumhare bhai ke kaam-dhanday ka kya haal hai?' Kya bolti main? Yeh toh apne ghar ka naam mitti mein mila chuka hai!"

Chhota Cousin Bhai (hassi udate hue): "Didi, iska kya haal hoga? Yeh toh wahi banda hai jo chair ka screw bhi tight nahi kar sakta. Last time yaad hai, jab table theek karne bola tha? Table aur tod di isne!"

Sab log hassne lagte hain, aur Dev ka sir aur jhuk jata hai.

Chacha (taana marte hue): "Mujhe toh sharm aati hai yeh soch ke ki hamare khandan mein aisa koi hai. Har khandan mein ek ladka hota hai jo apne ghar ka sahara banta hai. Aur yeh? Yeh toh poora ghar khali karwa dega."

Cousin Sister (ghinn se): "Isse toh koi shaadi bhi nahi karega. Kis ladki ke ma-baap apni beti ko ek nakara aadmi ke saath shaadi karayenge? Shaadi toh door, isko toh koi apne ghar ka naukar bhi nahi rakhega."

Dev ki maa, jo ek kone mein bethi hain, chup reh nahi pati. "Yeh toh meri zindagi ka sabse bada pachtawa hai. Pata nahi kyu isko janam diya. Arre, koi apne maa-baap ke liye izzat ka karan banta hai, aur yeh? Yeh toh sirf hamare liye sharam ka karan ban gaya hai."

Dev ke papa apne kursi se uthte hain aur thandi si awaaz mein bolte hain, "Tu kisi kaam ka nahi hai, Dev. Main toh yeh sochta hoon ki agar tu ghar chhod de, toh shayad sabke dukh kam ho jayenge."

Dev kuch bolne ki koshish karta hai, lekin uski awaaz dab jaati hai. Uski chhoti behen bolti hai, "Bhai, tumne ek baar bhi kuch prove karne ki koshish kyun nahi ki? Hum sab tumhare liye pareshaan hote hain, lekin tum... tumhare chehre pe bas ek hi cheez dikhai deti hai—haar."

Cousin Brother (aur ek taana maarte hue): "Bhai, ek suggestion doon? Kisi circus mein kaam dhoondh le. Wahan toh tere jaise useless log bhi fit ho jate hain. Kam se kam wahan toh log tere upar hansenge aur tu apni useless life ka kuch kaam kar lega."**

Room ek baar phir se thaakon se gunj uthta hai. Dev ke dil ke tukde ho rahe hain, lekin wo chup-chaap khada hai. Uske aankhon se aansoo girne lagte hain, lekin wo unhe pochne ki bhi himmat nahi kar pata. Wo dheere-dheere andar ki taraf hi ghoom jata hai, jaise uska dard kisi ko samajh nahi aayega.

Dev ke papa ka gussa aur unki beizzati ka silsila ruka nahi tha. "Tu mar kyun nahi jaata? Tere marne se kam se kam humein toh sukoon milega. Ek bekaar insaan ka bojh uthana humare bas ki baat nahi hai," unhone thandi aur tez awaaz mein kaha.

Badi behen: "Pata hai, Papa? Yeh zinda hai toh hamare liye sharam ka karan hai. Ek din koi is ghar ke darwaze pe humein taane dene aa jayega, aur hum sir jhuka ke sun lenge. Isse accha yeh mar hi जाए!"

Chhoti behen, jo ab tak chup thi, apni jagah se khadi ho gayi. "Aap logon ko sharam aani chahiye! Bhai aapka beta hai, aapka khoon hai. Aap sab ne kabhi usse pyar kiya? Kabhi usse kuch sikhaya? Har waqt bas taane marte ho. Aap sab usse maar daloge ek din," uski awaaz gusse aur aansuon se bhar chuki thi.

Papa ne ghusse mein kaha, "Humare ghar ka naam mitti mein mila diya isne. Tu chup reh, uski tarafdari mat kar. Yeh kabhi sudhar nahi sakta."

Cousin ne mazaak udaate hue bola, "Arey, chhoti behen ko toh apne useless bhai pe bada pyar aa raha hai. Kyun? Yeh toh khud bhi apne marne ke laayak hai. Iska kuch nahi ho sakta!"

Dev ne pehli baar apni behen ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein aansoon aur sharm ka samundar tha. "Chhoti, bas kar... mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi hai. Shayad sab log theek hi bolte hain. Main kuch nahi hoon, kisi kaam ka nahi hoon," uski awaaz dard se bhari thi.

Uske papa ne usse dekh kar kaha, "Agar tere mein thodi bhi sharam bachi hai, toh yeh ghar chhod de. Teri wajah se yeh ghar dooba ja raha hai. Ab aur mat rah yahan."

Dev dheere-dheere wahaan se chal diya, bina kuch bole. Chhoti behen uske peeche jaane lagi, lekin badi behen ne use rok diya. "Chhod, uski tarafdari karna bandh kar. Aise log ke liye rona bhi paap hai," usne gusse mein kaha.

Dev ne darwaza band kar liya, aur kamre ke kone mein baith gaya. Uski aankhon se aansoon ruk nahi rahe the. Usne socha, "Shayad yeh log sahi keh rahe hain. Shayad meri zindagi ka kuch matlab nahi hai."

Lekin chhoti behen darwaza khol kar uske paas aayi. "Bhai, kuch mat socho. Main tumhare saath hoon. Tumhe sab prove karne ka mauka milega," usne kaha, lekin Dev kuch nahi bola.

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Baaki log aakar uski chhoti behen ko khich kar lekar chale gaye dheere dheere time gya aur samay hua raat kaa.

Raat ka samay. Ghar mein sab so rahe hain, lekin Dev ke kamre ke bahar kuch saazish chal rahi hai. Uske papa, badi behen, chacha, aur cousin ne milkar ek plan banaya hai.

Papa (dheere awaaz mein): "Aaj raat is chapter ko yahin khatam karte hain. Is ghar ka bojh khatam hona chahiye."

Chacha (raazdaar tone mein): "Usse yahaan nahi maar sakte. Ghar ke peeche ka jungle sahi jagah hai. Subah tak koi uska pata nahi laga payega."

Sab log apne haath mein rassi, danda, aur chhura lekar Dev ke kamre ki taraf badhte hain. Dev neend mein hai, apne sapnon mein khoya hua. Uske sapne bhi dukh bhare hain—aise sapne, jo sirf ek toota hua insaan dekh sakta hai.


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Darwaza dheere se khulta hai, aur wo log uske kareeb aate hain. Ek hi jhatke mein Dev ke munh par rassi baandh di jati hai aur uska haath-pair pakad liya jata hai. Dev aankhein kholta hai, lekin kuch samajhne se pehle uske papa uske sir par danda maarte hain.

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Badi Behen (gusse se): "Zyada shor mat karna! Jaldi se isse gadi mein daalo."

Dev adhoori hosh mein hai, lekin kuch kar nahi paa raha. Usse ghaseet kar ek gaadi ke andar daal diya jata hai. Gaadi andheri raat mein ek sunsaan jungle ki taraf chal padti hai.

Jungle ke beech ek jagah gaadi rukti hai.

Cousin (hassi udate hue): "Yeh jagah perfect hai. Koi idhar nahi aata."

Dev ko gaadi se neeche ghaseet kar nikala jata hai. Uska sharir abhi bhi half-conscious hai. Chacha ek chhura nikal kar uske papa ki taraf deta hai.



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Chacha: "Aap hi khatam kijiye. Aakhir iska bojh sabse zyada aapne uthaya hai."

Papa bina ek shabd bole chhura uthate hain aur Dev ki taraf dekhte hain. "Tune humein sirf dukh aur sharm di hai. Aaj teri kahani khatam hoti hai."

Badi behen aur cousin Dev ko pakad kar rakhte hain. Papa chhura uske peeth mein ghusa dete hain. Dev ki aankhon ke samne andhera chha jata hai, lekin wo poora behosh nahi hota. Uska sharir lagbhag motionless hai, aur wo log samajhte hain ki Dev ab mar chuka hai.

Badi Behen: "Kaam khatam. Chalo yahan se niklo. Koi iski laash tak nahi dhundhega."

Wo log Dev ke sharir ko jungle ke andar ek gehera gaddha dekh kar wahan phenk dete hain aur upar se patthar aur mitti daal kar dhak dete hain. Sab log wapas gaadi mein baith kar ghar laut jate hain, jaise kuch hua hi na ho.



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Raat ke 1 baje


Ananya apne room ki khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi. Ghar mein sab so chuke the, lekin uska mann ab tak Dev ke baare mein pareshan tha. Woh apne phone par ek message type karti hai:

"Priya, Ayush. Main ussi cafe mein tum dono se milna chahti hoon. Abhi."

Priya aur Ayush ne bina kisi deri ke reply kiya: "Okay, wahi milte hain."

Ananya dheere se apne room se bahar nikalti hai, apni car ki chaabi uthati hai aur bina kisi shor ke ghar ke compound se nikal jaati hai. Cafe ek chhoti aur secluded jagah par tha, jo raat ke iss samay aur bhi khaali lag raha tha. Wahan ek dim light glow sign aur ek board tha jisme "Midnight Brew" likha tha.

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Jab Ananya cafe pahunchi, Priya aur Ayush wahan already baithe the, ek kone ki table par. Priya ke haath mein ek cup coffee thi, aur Ayush apne phone par kuch scroll kar raha tha.

Ananya unke paas pahunchi aur bina baithne ke bola, "Mujhe lagta hai Bhai kisi musibat mein hain."

Priya ne apni coffee table par rakhi aur Ananya ke chehre ki taraf dekha. "Ananya, hum tumse already ye baat discuss kar chuke hain. Shayad woh kisi important kaam mein busy hain."

Ayush ne Priya ki baat kaat di, "Nahi, Priya. Agar Dev Bhai itne din se contact mein nahi hain, toh kuch toh galat zaroor hai. Dev Bhai kabhi bina bataye disappear nahi hote. Yeh toh tu bhi jaanti hai."

Ananya ne thodi bechaini ke saath kaha, "Woh mujhe bata kar gaye the ki woh kuch personal kaam ke liye jaa rahe hain, lekin uske baad unka koi message ya call nahi aaya. Papa ne unka phone number try kiya, lekin woh switched off hai."

Priya ne thoda cautious tone mein kaha, "Par Ananya, agar Dev Bhai kisi secret mission par hain? Tumhe pata hai na, unka kaam waise bhi confidential hota hai."

Ayush ne ek sarcastic laugh ke saath bola, "Priya, yeh koi movie ka plot nahi hai. Hum Dev Bhai ke baare mein baat kar rahe hain. Agar unhone Ananya ko contact tak nahi kiya, toh iska matlab kuch serious hai."

Ananya ne unhe interrupt karte hue kaha, "Mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe kuch karna hoga. Hum bas yahan baith kar guess nahi kar sakte. Hume unki location pata lagani hogi."

Ayush ne kuch sochte hue kaha, "Main ek kaam karta hoon. Main apne ek hacker dost ko contact karta hoon. Woh Dev Bhai ke phone ke last location trace kar sakta hai, agar unka phone ab tak chalu hua hoga."

Priya thoda nervous lag rahi thi. "Ayush, yeh illegal ho sakta hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki yeh karna sahi hoga?"

Ananya ne thodi gusse se kaha, "Priya, agar tumhe darr lag raha hai toh tum ja sakti ho. Main apne Bhai ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon."

Priya ne sharmindagi ke saath kaha, "Nahi, Ananya. Main tumhare saath hoon. Ayush, apne hacker dost se baat karo."

Ayush ne apne phone par call milaya aur ek kone mein chala gaya. Priya ne Ananya ke haath ko pakad kar kaha, "Tum tension mat lo. Hum Dev Bhai ko dhoondh lenge."

Ayush kuch der baad wapas aaya aur bola, "Maine apne dost ko bola hai. Woh kal subah tak Dev Bhai ke phone ka trace karke mujhe report de dega."

Ananya ne uski baat sun kar thoda relaxed feel kiya, lekin uska mann ab bhi pareshan tha. "Kal subah tak kaise rukoon? Mujhe darr lag raha hai."

Priya ne usse samjhaya, "Ananya, humne jo karna tha woh kar diya. Ab tum apne Bhai ke liye strong rehna hoga ."

Woh teenon ab ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain, ek unsaid fear ke saath. Yeh baat unke dimaag mein clear thi ki kuch toh galat ho raha tha, aur Dev ki talaash ab unka sabse bada mission ban gaya tha.

Raat ke 1:30 baje – Cafe ke andar

Ananya ka patience ab khatam ho raha tha. Ayush ka hacker dost jo kal subah tak last location trace karne ki baat kar raha tha, uske liye Ananya ke paas itna waqt nahi tha. Woh Ayush ki taraf gusse aur bechaini ke mix emotions ke saath dekhte hue boli:

Ananya: "Ayush, apne dost ko abhi call lagao. Mujhe abhi aur isi waqt Bhai ki last location chahiye!"

Ayush ne casually kaha, "Ananya, maine bola na, kal subah tak ho jayega. Abhi usse disturb karna theek nahi hoga. Hacker log apne time pe kaam karte hain."

Ananya ka gussa ab control ke bahar ho raha tha. Uski aankhon mein aansoon aa gaye, lekin usne apne aap ko sambhalte hue kaha, "Ayush, tum samajh nahi rahe. Mujhe abhi aur isi waqt pata karna hai. Tumhe pata bhi hai main kitni pareshan hoon? Woh mera Bhai hai!"

Ayush thoda irritated lag raha tha. "Ananya, main samajh raha hoon, par woh easy nahi hai. Main usse baar-baar call nahi kar sakta. Uska bhi apna ek schedule hota hai."

Ananya ne ek dum se Ayush ke haath se uska phone kheench liya aur boli, "Agar tum nahi karoge, toh main khud baat kar lungi!"

Ayush ne phone wapas lene ki koshish ki, lekin Priya beech me aayi aur bola, "Ayush, tum Ananya ko ek baar chance de do. Woh kitni pareshan hai, tumhe dikh nahi raha?"

Ayush ne haar maan kar phone Ananya ke haath me de diya. "Theek hai, lekin agar mera dost naraz ho gaya, toh yeh tumhari responsibility hai."

Ananya ne jaldi se hacker ka number dial kiya. Line connect hone me kuch seconds lage.

Dusri taraf se ek thodi neend bhari awaaz aayi:

Hacker: "Kaun hai? Aur is waqt disturb kyun kar rahe ho?"

Ananya ne rone ke kareeb hoti awaaz me bola, "Bhaiya, please meri help kijiye. Mujhe apne Bhai ki location pata karni hai. Woh do din se missing hain, aur mujhe unki safety ki tension hai."

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Hacker ne irritate hoke kaha, "Dekho, is waqt kaam karna mushkil hai. Mere tools ready nahi hain, aur main kal tak kar paunga."

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Ananya ke aansoon ab ruk nahi rahe the. Usne thodi ghuti hui awaaz me bola, "Bhaiya, main aapke saamne haath jodti hoon. Aapko meri help abhi karni hogi. Agar kuch galat ho gaya, toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi!"

Hacker ne thoda soft hote hue kaha, "Theek hai, mujhe 2 ghante ka time do. Main apni taraf se poori koshish karta hoon. Lekin mujhe sab details chahiye – unka phone number, aur agar unka phone kahi trackable hai toh unka pichhla status."

Ayush ne thoda muskurate hue kaha, "Dekha, maine bola tha na ki kal karne de? Lekin tumhari zidd jeet gayi."

Ananya ne uski baat ignore ki aur jaldi se Dev ka phone number hacker ko diya. Hacker ne process start karte hue kaha, "2 ghante me tumhe ek rough location mil jayegi. Mujhe fir disturb mat karna."

Ananya ne phone rakh diya aur apni seat par girte hue bola, "Bas, ab 2 ghante ka wait karna hoga."

Priya ne uska haath pakad kar usse samjhaya, "Sab theek hoga, Ananya. Hum yahan hain na tumhare saath."

Ananya ab bhi thodi pareshan thi, lekin uska mann ab thoda relaxed tha. Sabhi ab wait kar rahe the ki woh location unhe mil jaye, aur unka next step kya hoga.

Raat ke 1:45 baje – Cafe ke andar

Ayush hacker ko details forward kar raha tha, jab usne achanak ruk kar kaha, "Ananya, yeh kaunsa number hai? Mujhe lag raha tha ki tum apne Bhai ke phone ka number trace karwana chahti ho, par yeh kuch aur lag raha hai."

Ananya ne ek pal ke liye chup rehkar apna sir neeche kar liya. Phir usne dheere se kaha, "Ayush, mujhe maaf kar do. Maine tum dono se ek baat chhupai thi."

Priya aur Ayush dono confused ho gaye. Priya ne Ananya ke shoulder par haath rakha aur pucha, "Kya chhupaya tha, Ananya? Hum toh tumhari help karne aaye hain."

Ananya ne thoda hesitation ke baad kaha, "Main yahaan Bhai ke phone ko trace karwane nahi aayi. Mere Bhai ke pair ke andar ek tracker lagwaya gaya tha... Nani ne lagwaya tha."

Ayush aur Priya ekdum se chok gaye. Ayush ne shock ke saath pucha, "Pair ke andar tracker? Yeh kaise aur kyun?"

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Ananya ne aankhon me aansoon liye kaha, "Nani ko hamesha lagta tha ki hamare ghar wale kisi din Bhai ke saath kuch galat karenge. Unhe pata tha ki Bhai aur unke apno ke beech ka rishta achha nahi hai. Isliye unhone unke pair ke andar ek chhota tracker lagwaya tha, bina kisi ko bataye. Nani kehte the ki agar kabhi Bhai ko kuch ho, toh kam se kam unki location trace ki ja sake."

Ayush ka chehra serious ho gaya. "Matlab tumhe yeh pehle se pata tha? Tumne hume bataya kyun nahi?"

Ananya ne guilt ke saath jawab diya, "Mujhe laga tha tum log mujhe judge karoge. Main bas chahti thi ki Bhai safe rahein. Aur ab jab unka kuch pata nahi chal raha, toh mujhe woh tracker yaad aaya."

Priya ne softly kaha, "Ananya, tumne jo kiya woh galat nahi tha. Tum sirf apne Bhai ki safety ke liye pareshan thi. Aur ab yeh tracker hi unhe dhundhne ka ek tarika ban sakta hai."

Ayush ne gusse ko side karte hue kaha, "Thik hai. Ab time waste mat karte hain. Main hacker ko yeh detail forward karta hoon."

Ayush ne tracker number hacker ke paas bhej diya. Dusri taraf se hacker ka response aaya, "Yeh interesting hai. Agar yeh tracker active hai, toh mujhe 2 ghante ke andar accurate location mil jayegi. Par mujhe ek confirm karna hoga ki yeh ab bhi kaam kar raha hai."

Ananya ne bechaini se pucha, "Aur agar tracker active na ho?"

Hacker bola, "Agar tracker off ho chuka hai, toh kuch nahi ho sakta. Lekin agar yeh working hai, toh tumhare Bhai ka exact location trace ho jayega."

Ananya ab thodi relaxed lag rahi thi, lekin uske andar ab bhi tension thi. Usne apne aap se kaha, "Nani ne mujhe kabhi galat advice nahi di. Mujhe bharosa hai ki yeh tracker ab tak kaam kar raha hoga."

Ayush ne uske shoulder ko tap karte hue kaha, "Relax, Ananya. Sab theek hoga. Bas ab hume 2 ghante ka intezaar karna hoga."

Priya ne bhi usse tasalli di, "Ananya, tumhare Bhai safe milenge. Tumhare Nani ne unka tracker lagwa kar sahi kiya."

Cafe ke andar ek uneasy silence chha gaya. Ab sabke dimaag me ek hi sawaal tha –
"Dev kahan hai, aur kya woh safe hai?"

To Be Continued......
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